ROBLOX - Outrun the Nightmare

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Topic Starter
jwun
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, August 08, 2018 at 10:25:20 PM

Artist: ROBLOX
Title: Outrun the Nightmare
Source: Rōblox
Tags: Roblox Piano Nightmare 2011 short Pwned Incrypt ninja
BPM: 100
Filesize: 6895kb
Play Time: 01:17
Difficulties Available:
  1. - Squishi's BL0xx3D!!!11 (5.38 stars, 252 notes)
  2. a (5.4 stars, 254 notes)
  3. Easy (1.39 stars, 51 notes)
  4. ex (4.68 stars, 122 notes)
  5. Hard (3.23 stars, 212 notes)
  6. Normal (2 stars, 114 notes)
  7. old hard (2.8 stars, 202 notes)
  8. Penguiness's Insane (4.91 stars, 265 notes)
  9. squishi's Easy (1.08 stars, 41 notes)


Download: ROBLOX - Outrun the Nightmare
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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osu! need more Roblox!

-get better BG
-remap everything somehow
-make sure mapping isn't dumb
-hitsounds


Im just kidding theres no way this ancient song of a now shitty game is gonna get ranked

Roblox Soundtrack heard primarily in"Temple of the Ninja Masters!" and InCrypt.

"Alone at the edge of the world sits a sacred temple, guarded by 4 powerful Ninja Masters, each given control of one of the elements. Many brave and powerful warriors have attempted to plunder the treasures of this temple, but all who have attempted it have failed. Until nao. Can you and your crew of the world's circle—clicking pirates stand against the might of the Ninja Masters? Only time will tell."
QiiXshinez
Timing:
The offset is actually 112.
Hard:
00:00:163 (1) - This is offsync.
00:00:564 (2) - No noise here.
00:00:764 (3) - This should be on the white tick.
00:01:316 (5) - Slider ends should be on a less important beat than the slider head.
00:03:723 (11) - New combo.
00:03:873 (12) - No noise here.
00:04:024 (13) - Same thing with the fifth object.
00:04:525 (14) - No noise.
00:06:330 (18) - ^
00:06:431 (19) - Slider end is not snapped to anything in song.
00:07:333 (20) - ^
00:08:336 (21,23,2) - No noise.
00:09:740 (25) - New combo.
00:15:708 (10,11) - Not snapped to music.
00:16:961 (14,15,16,17,18,19) - Overmapped.
00:16:961 (14) - New combo.
I give up, this map sucks, half the notes aren't even TO MUSIC. Good luck getting rank with that, because that isn't rankable.
Topic Starter
jwun
Woah woah on the description I was going to tweak it and its wip, and I apologize; I should have updated it earlier, since it was a rushed draft and I had classes—don't ask why.
Pok0555
Hi, from my NM q
The offset is actually 116 (trust me), your second offset should be on 38702
First of all, don't use 1/8, none of the beats in this song actually lands on any 1/8, most of them are on 1/1 or 1/2 beats so change any objects in your map that is on any 1/8 snap like this object in Normal 00:00:112 (1) - suppose to be on the white tick, same here 00:19:837 (3) all your notes suppose to be either on the white or red tick (like 95% of the time) , and sometime on the blue tick, but NEVER the yellow ticks
Secondly, make sure all your kiais are consistent throung your diffs, you don't have any kiais in easy, yet you have a bunch of them in hard, make sure all diff have the same kiai time with the same offset
Thirdly, try to get a hd background cuz it looks better
Finally, disable countdown by going to song_setup/design in Easy, your map starts too early to use countdowns
k, I'll mod easyfirst
00:23:737 (4,5) - These two are quite close together, either move them further away or stack them
00:24:037 (5) - NC (new combo)
00:33:637 (6) - ^
00:46:985 (6) - ^
00:54:485 (7) - ^
01:07:235 (6) - ^
00:38:512 (1) - Don't make your sliders go throungh uninherited timing point, sliders doesn't work like that

Alright, Normal
Um... why isn't the background fullscreen? fix this
00:02:512 (6) - NC
00:05:212 (10) - ^
00:07:312 (1) - ^
00:12:187 (5) - ^
00:21:712 (6) - ^
00:24:112 (11) - ^
00:26:587 (15) - ^
00:53:098 (6) - ^
00:59:098 (5) - ^
01:08:998 (5) - ^
01:07:348 (4) - Try to make super long sliders like this more creative like dis

That's all for normal
K, Battle Royale!!!
00:01:912 (4) - NC
00:06:412 (5) - ^
00:08:512 (13) - ^
00:16:987 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This suppose to be hard, don't make streams with over 5 circles in hard
01:00:410 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - ^ (and new combo at 7th circle)
01:07:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:21:112 (5,6,7,8) - Stack all dis and make 00:21:337 (8) - Into a straight slider
00:22:837 (3,4) - You shouldn't stack a slider on top of another slider's end, it's quite hard to read
00:22:837 (3,4) - Also these are long sliders, make them creative
00:24:712 (6,7,8) - Stack all this
00:57:935 (1,2,3) - ^
01:14:360 (1,1,2,3) - This is VERY hard to read, 01:14:735 (1,2,3) - put some more distant between these and the sliders, and stack them
That's all, Good luck! ;)
Topic Starter
jwun
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squishi
delete the exclamation marks on the battle royale diff because they don't fit at all and look nicer too without them
ill mod later cus why not :v im bored














edit: this is hard as hell nvm
QiiXshinez
This map seems better now, so...
Swordphin:
00:08:516 (1) - End this on the red tick, there's not a sound on the blue one.
00:15:866 (5) - This is too long to really sync. Try adding something else.
00:20:816 (4,6) - Hitsound these in a way that makes it so 00:20:966 (5,7) - don't sound as important.
00:21:716 (1) - End this on the red tick.
00:22:916 (3,4) - Make these the same size as 00:24:116 (5) - . They're the same sound.
00:33:116 (10) - End this on the blue tick.
00:35:216 (7) - Why is this a kick slider
00:43:502 (1) - Spinner doesn't fit here.
00:44:552 (1) - The noise this is meant to be on is the red tick.
00:45:152 (2) - Put this on the white tick.
01:10:952 (3) - Put the slider head on the white tick.
01:15:002 (2,3) - Remove these.
01:15:302 (1) - End this on the white tick.
Normal:
00:02:516 (1) - End this on the white tick.
00:10:916 (3) - Move this to make it readable.
00:30:116 (1,2) - Avoid making these sliders, unless you're emphasizing music.
00:39:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Offset these like this: 00:39:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
Easy:
00:11:516 (3) - Lengthen this to the white tick.
00:14:516 (6) - Move this, it'll help readability.
00:23:666 (4,5) - Offset these like this: 00:23:816 (4,5) -
00:26:516 (2) - End this on the white tick.
00:45:752 (5) - Move this to the white tick.
00:46:952 (1) - ^
00:47:852 (2) - ^ but move it back a tick instead
Other than that and a few other controversial things I most likely fixed, this seems pretty fine. Fix this up and it'll be great.
SnivehNDraegonz
q

don't see a way of this getting ranked, so i'll give you some things you can look out for on your future maps using examples from this map (also, you should check out pishifat's mapping tutorials)

Metadata
I guarantee you Roblox is not the author of the song. this is sadly a common problem where people put the name of the game they heard it from as the author, when, in fact, it's totally different. an example is UNDERTALE songs. the mapper should put "toby fox" as the author instead of UNDERTALE. The game the song is from would go into the source part of metadata. (on another note, roblox would fit better into tags instead of the source, as the song might be in another game, though I could be heavily wrong.)

A e s t h e t i c
Aesthetic is one of the parts of mapping where there isn't one right or wrong way to do things, all of these come down to preference.. There are inconstant overlaps like 00:22:316 (5,6,7,8,10). every overlap is at a different spacing, which kinda overwhelms the brain, having to process different spacing constantly; try to use some consistent spacing as much as possible. a personal opinion of mine, is objects that are really close, but don't overlap look kinda bad. ex: 00:24:716 (7,9). This also goes back to the keep as much consistent spacing as possible. Another thing that overwhelms the brain, is having to comprehend a lot of similar slider shapes in a small segment. It looks pretty weird having 00:31:916 (6,8) be totally different, but yet both visible. Best way to solve this is using copy + paste as much as possible

Rhythm
This is a big one. as you know, this is a rhythm game. if the map doesn't follow the song, then the map is bad. it feels really weird when you click on a note that's weaker, then one where you click on a stronger sound. ex. 00:32:366 (8). Overmapping, man is there a lot in the hardest diff. overmapping is bad and unrankable most of the time. I say most of the time, because overmapping can be used to prioritize sounds, but when it's not prioritizing sounds, it is almost always unrankable. ex. 00:11:516 (3,4). as you can tell, there is no sounds on the repeats, so why bother having them repeat?

Last but not least, Hitsounds!
don't forget them, makes everything not so monotone. needs more than just 1 cymbal, it needs to liven up everything. Don't see why fort maps are looked down apon because of the large amounts of hitsounds, they are supposed to create a better and less monotone atmosphere.

and that's all I got. as I said before, check out pishifat's tutorials for everything else I missed on mapping. good luck ranking future maps!
squishi
hi
TheBlackMirage
Hi Mirage here
Didn't find much in hardest difficulty so decided to take a look at Easy difficulties as well

- Squishi's Easy

  • I don't think this difficulty isn't finished or not so I won't really go in depth

    The audio is too loud, especially from the start when the Hit Sounds should be softer to match the song
  1. Change audio volume of Uninherited Timing Point 00:00:116 to 50%
  2. Add Inherited Timing Point here 00:09:716 with audio at 70%
  3. Add Inherited Timing Point here 00:19:316 with audio at 90%


- Squishi's Easy
  1. 00:28:916 (1) - Move Slider so that it doesn't overlap - Aesthetically speaking, pretty random for the Slider to just be overlapping another Slider
  2. 00:33:416 - Add a Hit Circle here and make it a New Combo instead of 00:33:716 (1)
  3. 00:35:516 (2) - Move this Slider back to 00:36:116 and shorten it till 00:37:316
  4. 00:35:516 - Add a Hit Circle here

  5. 00:37:916 (5) - Shorten Slider to here 00:38:216
    -I feel that this would match the song's beat better

  6. 00:50:702 (5) - Shorten Slider till 00:51:302 - Slider would be missing out on the beat, however if you intend to have the variation in rhythm then maybe
    you can add a Hit Circle at 00:51:602

  7. 00:53:102 - Add a Hit Circle here
  8. 00:56:702 - Add Hit Circle here
    -Missing out on beats

  9. 00:57:602 (4) - Change to a Hit Circle instead
    00:57:902 - Add a Slider here till 00:58:202 and make it a New combo
    00:58:502 - Add another Slider here till 00:58:802
    -I feel that this would match the beat better

  10. 00:59:702 (1) - Lengthen Slider till 01:00:002
  11. 01:01:502 - Add Hit Circle here
  12. 01:05:702 (7) - Lengthen Slider to 01:06:302
  13. 01:11:102 - Add Hit Circle here
  14. 01:12:002 - Add Hit Circle here and make it a New Combo instead of 01:12:302 (1)
  15. 01:16:802 - Add Hit Circle here with "Finish" sound


- Squishi's BL0xx3D!!!11
  1. 00:30:716 (1) - Replace with Hit Circle here 00:30:716 and a Flow here 00:30:866 to 00:31:241 and make 00:31:316 (8) a New Combo - Repeating slider here does not really fit in with beat so changing to this is better and can add variation to rhythm as well
  2. 00:33:566 (5) - Replace with a Hit Circle with "Finish" sound. Make it a New Combo and shift it away from the other notes - Repeating slider here does not match the beat well too and a single Hit Circle with "Finish" here that is isolated from the other notes and is a New Combo itself would emphasise on Piano

Hope my 2 cents are useful :)
Penguiness
Hallo can I make an extra/insane difficulty(you decide)?
Topic Starter
jwun
LOL! Affirmative, do insane difficulty!












WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Penguiness
Here's my GD!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 0
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Outrun the Nightmare
TitleUnicode:Outrun the Nightmare
Artist:ROBLOX
ArtistUnicode:ROBLOX
Creator:jwun
Version:Penguiness' Insane
Source:Rōblox
Tags:Old Roblox Piano Nightmare 2011 short Pwned Incrypt ninja Oh Noes Classic nostalgia memories recollection
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
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SliderTickRate:2

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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W_Takemikazuchi
Penguiness' Insane
00:00:716 (2) - Curve this more
00:02:516 (1,2) - Ugly overlap
00:03:116 (2) - Curve this more
00:06:416 (3) - Highlight this and press Ctrl + G
00:04:916 (1,2) - Curve these the other way (no flow) and curve them more
00:08:516 (4,5) - Curve these more
00:09:716 (1) - Curve this more
00:09:716 (1,2,3) - Very slightly off from a perfect triangle
00:10:916 (1) - Curve this more
00:13:166 (4) - Ugly overlap
00:13:916 (4,5) - Curve these more
00:15:116 (3,4) - Curve these more, and curve 4 the other way
00:17:216 (3) - Curve this more
00:18:116 (1,2) - Curve these more
00:19:316 (1) - Curve this more
00:20:516 (1) - ^^
00:23:216 (3) - Take out the middle anchor point
From here on I'm going to stop pointing out the slightly curved sliders that need more curve because I think you can see them now
00:30:716 (3) - Curve this the other way
00:32:966 (2) - Ugly overlap
00:39:602 (3,4) - Ugly overlap
00:45:002 (3,1) - Spaced to far
3rd Kiai: there are some notes here that are really close to each other and I think you should just put these at the same point like here as an example
01:00:452 (2) - Ugly overlap

Best wishes, [Miko] (From my NM Queue)
Penguiness

[Miko] wrote:

Penguiness' Insane
00:00:716 (2) - Curve this more Done
00:02:516 (1,2) - Ugly overlap Done
00:03:116 (2) - Curve this more Just went ahead and made it a straight slider. Usually I like to curve my sliders a bit which is suppose to be a replacement for straight sliders.
00:06:416 (3) - Highlight this and press Ctrl + G I made it like that so that the spacing is correct.
00:04:916 (1,2) - Curve these the other way (no flow) and curve them more Like I said, when I curve my sliders a bit, it's just a replacement for straight sliders. I know that you might be thinking "Why not just use straight sliders?" To me. Curving straight sliders a bit looks better.
00:08:516 (4,5) - Curve these more ^
00:09:716 (1) - Curve this more ^
00:09:716 (1,2,3) - Very slightly off from a perfect triangle Fixed.
00:10:916 (1) - Curve this more Ish a replacement for straight sliders. I think I'm just not gonna put a reply for when you tell me to curve more cuz I'm too lazy to type up the same thing a bunch of times.
00:13:166 (4) - Ugly overlap Blanked the circle with 00:12:716 (3) - .
00:13:916 (4,5) - Curve these more
00:15:116 (3,4) - Curve these more, and curve 4 the other way
00:17:216 (3) - Curve this more
00:18:116 (1,2) - Curve these more
00:19:316 (1) - Curve this more
00:20:516 (1) - ^^
00:23:216 (3) - Take out the middle anchor point Didn't see why I had to do that, but did it anyway.
From here on I'm going to stop pointing out the slightly curved sliders that need more curve because I think you can see them now
00:30:716 (3) - Curve this the other way Left it as is because it sorta looks bad because it looks like a horrible blanket around 00:31:316 (1) - when curved the other way.
00:32:966 (2) - Ugly overlap Moved 00:32:966 (2) - so it's not overlapping.
00:39:602 (3,4) - Ugly overlap Moved so it doesn't overlap.
00:45:002 (3,1) - Spaced to far Fixed.
3rd Kiai: there are some notes here that are really close to each other and I think you should just put these at the same point like here as an example Fixed most of the overlaps. I might have missed some though, but I'm not sure.
01:00:452 (2) - Ugly overlap Fixed.

Best wishes, [Miko] (From my NM Queue)
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304,264,27416,2,0,P|284:272|180:220,1,116.999992137909
376,320,27716,5,0,0:0:0:0:
180,344,27866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,136,28016,2,0,P|296:216|292:280,1,116.999992137909
64,232,28316,2,0,P|68:152|72:88,1,116.999992137909
268,44,28616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,220,28766,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,160,28916,6,0,P|448:232|328:316,1,233.999984275819
348,96,29366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,200,29516,2,0,P|324:224|376:236,1,116.999992137909
152,360,29816,2,0,P|176:300|148:232,1,116.999992137909
64,64,30116,6,0,P|72:148|88:304,1,233.999984275819
160,120,30566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,30716,2,0,P|280:84|224:68,1,116.999992137909
392,272,31016,2,0,P|416:208|400:148,1,116.999992137909
144,244,31316,6,0,P|184:176|324:220,1,233.999984275819
172,72,31766,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,252,31916,2,0,P|248:332|256:380,1,116.999992137909
48,316,32216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,156,32366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,32516,6,0,P|344:160|512:200,1,233.999984275819
280,224,32966,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,368,33116,2,0,P|372:296|352:240,1,116.999992137909
160,292,33416,2,0,P|224:300|308:300,1,116.999992137909
88,220,33716,6,0,P|148:148|76:32,1,233.999984275819
248,192,34166,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,128,34316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,64,34466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,268,34616,2,0,P|348:204|352:116,1,116.999992137909
432,304,34916,6,0,P|396:344|328:356,1,116.999992137909
436,188,35216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,248,35366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,24,35516,2,0,P|264:108|276:184,1,116.999992137909
164,316,35816,2,0,P|140:260|152:196,1,116.999992137909
324,312,36116,6,0,P|336:244|368:76,1,233.999984275819
432,264,36566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,204,36716,2,0,P|276:200|344:204,1,116.999992137909
192,12,37016,2,0,P|216:76|196:132,1,116.999992137909
252,304,37316,5,0,0:0:0:0:
48,224,37466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,72,37616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,304,37766,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,204,37916,2,0,P|268:188|204:176,1,116.999992137909
416,268,38216,2,0,P|440:204|400:132,1,116.999992137909
144,92,38702,6,0,P|112:168|144:232,1,129.999995231629
44,56,39302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,164,39602,2,0,P|288:176|464:204,1,259.999990463257
288,384,40502,2,0,P|296:316|300:240,1,129.999995231629
88,232,41102,6,0,P|168:244|224:200,1,129.999995231629
288,32,41702,2,0,P|292:120|296:316,1,259.999990463257
140,152,42602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,360,42902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,208,43202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,256,43502,6,0,P|140:268|192:272,1,129.999995231629
344,148,44102,2,0,P|288:116|208:132,1,129.999995231629
392,352,45002,2,0,P|392:276|384:196,2,129.999995231629
452,148,45902,6,0,P|376:124|312:164,1,129.999995231629
332,336,46502,2,0,P|408:360|472:320,1,129.999995231629
248,256,47102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,192,47402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,344,47702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,136,48002,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,88,48302,6,0,P|356:72|296:56,1,97.5000001430512
124,100,48602,2,0,P|168:60|232:56,1,97.5000001430512
64,168,48902,2,0,P|72:244|88:372,1,195.000000286102
160,208,49352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,276,49502,6,0,P|256:284|184:292,1,97.5000001430512
392,324,49802,2,0,P|408:268|376:208,1,97.5000001430512
264,184,50102,2,0,P|348:188|488:192,1,195.000000286102
344,100,50552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,88,50702,6,0,P|192:112|260:88,1,97.5000001430512
48,96,51002,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,20,51152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,192,51302,2,0,P|72:244|156:352,1,195.000000286102
304,336,51752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,268,51902,6,0,P|232:264|276:260,1,97.5000001430512
284,88,52202,2,0,P|264:144|296:204,1,97.5000001430512
184,56,52502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,140,52652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,328,52802,2,0,P|388:260|388:208,1,97.5000001430512
456,108,53102,6,0,P|420:152|496:272,1,195.000000286102
336,144,53552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,88,53702,2,0,P|240:100|300:100,1,97.5000001430512
68,124,54002,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,256,54152,6,0,P|124:200|28:240,1,195.000000286102
100,380,54602,2,0,P|104:320|104:244,1,97.5000001430512
256,156,54902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,344,55052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,216,55202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,216,55352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,188,55502,6,0,P|180:116|308:84,1,195.000000286102
120,48,55952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,200,56102,2,0,P|72:264|72:324,1,97.5000001430512
256,364,56402,2,0,P|260:300|260:240,1,97.5000001430512
140,360,56702,5,0,0:0:0:0:
336,352,56852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,200,57002,2,0,P|256:176|324:200,1,97.5000001430512
108,112,57302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,60,57452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,272,57602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,144,57752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,216,57902,6,0,P|268:216|340:208,1,116.999992137909
128,144,58202,2,0,P|96:204|120:284,1,116.999992137909
112,32,58502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,116,58652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,332,58802,2,0,P|240:240|232:184,1,116.999992137909
448,284,59102,6,0,P|384:256|328:276,1,116.999992137909
492,148,59402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,344,59552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,144,59702,2,0,P|280:136|220:140,1,116.999992137909
20,224,60002,2,0,P|96:232|156:228,1,116.999992137909
244,40,60302,5,0,0:0:0:0:
276,248,60452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,84,60602,2,0,P|448:156|428:204,1,116.999992137909
304,360,60902,2,0,P|304:292|296:112,1,233.999984275819
184,264,61352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,164,61502,6,0,P|92:172|168:172,1,116.999992137909
356,64,61802,2,0,P|284:40|224:80,1,116.999992137909
448,128,62102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,304,62252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,196,62402,2,0,P|268:204|344:208,1,116.999992137909
136,336,62702,6,0,P|144:260|156:64,1,233.999984275819
44,248,63152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,312,63302,2,0,P|292:284|360:304,1,116.999992137909
140,268,63602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,372,63752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,168,63902,6,0,P|264:92|272:52,1,116.999992137909
492,72,64202,2,0,P|492:148|484:188,1,116.999992137909
212,244,64502,2,0,P|280:260|344:220,1,116.999992137909
120,192,64802,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,360,64952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,248,65102,6,0,P|420:148|424:0,1,233.999984275819
316,184,65552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,84,65702,2,0,P|200:72|264:100,1,116.999992137909
240,296,66002,2,0,P|176:308|112:280,1,116.999992137909
336,300,66302,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,164,66452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,16,66602,2,0,P|328:88|328:176,1,116.999992137909
416,340,66902,2,0,P|424:272|376:220,1,116.999992137909
136,276,67202,2,0,P|220:280|280:280,1,116.999992137909
80,196,67502,6,0,P|44:256|144:372,1,233.999984275819
172,176,67952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,100,68102,2,0,P|312:88|252:80,1,116.999992137909
232,296,68402,2,0,P|299:308|359:316,1,116.999992137909
488,168,68702,5,0,0:0:0:0:
296,224,68852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,8,69002,2,0,P|388:72|428:128,1,116.999992137909
232,296,69302,2,0,P|296:320|384:184,1,233.999984275819
196,168,69752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,356,69902,6,0,P|92:272|88:192,1,116.999992137909
264,112,70202,2,0,P|200:80|144:96,1,116.999992137909
272,284,70502,2,0,P|352:292|512:312,1,233.999984275819
304,368,70952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,188,71102,6,0,P|424:120|416:48,1,116.999992137909
196,104,71402,2,0,P|268:124|332:80,1,116.999992137909
116,208,71702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,32,71852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,224,72002,2,0,P|208:292|208:360,1,116.999992137909
304,109,72302,6,0,P|360:61|484:157,1,233.999984275819
456,352,72752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,152,72902,2,0,P|388:244|384:304,1,116.999992137909
128,280,73202,2,0,P|128:212|132:152,1,116.999992137909
248,328,73502,5,0,0:0:0:0:
40,312,73652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,256,73802,2,0,P|276:248|320:284,1,116.999992137909
130,163,74102,2,0,P|130:83|126:31,1,116.999992137909
100,244,74402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,112,74552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,324,74702,6,0,P|292:308|448:280,1,233.999984275819
232,236,75152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,376,75302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,152,75452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,176,75602,2,0,P|232:144|304:184,1,116.999992137909
72,332,75902,6,0,P|72:256|68:176,1,116.999992137909
232,236,76202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,104,76352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,144,76502,2,0,P|224:144|156:156,1,116.999992137909
392,208,76802,2,0,P|368:280|404:336,1,116.999992137909
Cheri
From my q


  • Penguiness' Insane

  1. 00:00:116 - this is quite a slow sections that I believe that 1x SV is just too fast being that the Slider velocity is 2.60
    I believe it is better to have it lower to .5x - .8x SV
  2. 00:09:716 (1,2) - a bit uncomfortable but not much - Change it too something like this to flow better https://imgur.com/a/svSAb
  3. 00:09:716 - to here 00:19:166 - should simply have lower spacing overall too give more emphasis to the kiai (this is just my opinon)
  4. 00:10:766 (4) - there is no sound and if it is, it not that noticeable to high such a high jump - If ya keeping it - please reduce a lot of this spacing
  5. 00:13:766 (3) - has no noticable sound while 00:13:916 (4) - does and it kind of strong so these shouldn't have the same spacing
    (I advised paying attention to this because these aren't the only ones I notice)
  6. 00:15:716 (1) - clearly a pause here after 00:15:566 - so remove it and while we at it - this too 00:15:866 (2) -


K I just got done with another new mappers map and don't think I can do another new mappers mapset today so this is all I am doing...

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