This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on samedi 2 juin 2018 at 16:57:42

Artist: Denpa-fu
Title: Renge Danced Like A Butterfly
Tags: non non biyori renge renchon renchan
BPM: 170
Filesize: 13631kb
Play Time: 01:42
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy - 4Key (1,32 stars, 244 notes)
2. Hard - 4Key (2,58 stars, 653 notes)

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4K only
Nyanpassu !

I'm not a pro moder so I try to keep it simple as possible

[Ultra easy - 4Key]

- Put the offset to 3523 (00:03:523 - )

- Try to vary a bit more , it's pretty boring if there are only (i call them stacks) stacks like from 00:06:347 - to 00:07:405 - or from 00:43:758 - to 00:52:935 -

-It feels like here should be a note 00:53:288 -

- This slider has no beat 01:19:758 - put it on 01:19:935 -

- Shorten the slider at 01:21:170 - ( from 01:21:170 - to 01:21:347 - )

-01:21:699 - remove the slider and put notes on 01:21:699 - and 01:21:876 -

-01:26:817 - same as befor shorter the slider to 01:26:994 -

- 01:27:347 - remove the slider and put a note

- 01:27:523 - i would put the slider here (from 01:27:523 - to 01:27:788 - )

The rest is good but like i sayed try to vary more


[Ayato_k's Insane - 4Key]

I don't think that this is a Insane map you maybe should change it to Hard
Put the Offset to 2994 (00:02:994 - )

-00:22:582 - I would Shorten the slider to 00:22:758 - and add another slider on 00:22:935 - to 00:23:111 -

-01:00:699 - to 01:01:758 - these are some evil slider you should propably remove some of them

-01:27:876 - remove at least one note

I would say to vary a bit but there are not many possibilities to vary the "streams".



The rest of the map is awsome dude , keep up mapping.

I hope I could help you , message me if you need some help

Totorial03 wrote:

I'm not a pro moder so I try to keep it simple as possible

[Ultra easy - 4Key]

- Put the offset to 3523 (00:03:523 - ) Since offset is a real pain to change, i'll see if it's reported twice

- Try to vary a bit more , it's pretty boring if there are only (i call them stacks) stacks like from 00:06:347 - to 00:07:405 - or from 00:43:758 - to 00:52:935 - Changed the placement of those stacks

-It feels like here should be a note 00:53:288 - Yup ! totally !

- This slider has no beat 01:19:758 - put it on 01:19:935 - Ye ! didn't saw

- Shorten the slider at 01:21:170 - ( from 01:21:170 - to 01:21:347 - ) v

-01:21:699 - remove the slider and put notes on 01:21:699 - and 01:21:876 - v

-01:26:817 - same as befor shorter the slider to 01:26:994 - [color=#00FF00v][/color]

- 01:27:347 - remove the slider and put a note v

- 01:27:523 - i would put the slider here (from 01:27:523 - to 01:27:788 - ) Fixed ! thanks !

The rest is good but like i sayed try to vary more Yeah, this map could feel boring, but i wanted to map someting suitable for a very first mania play


[Ayato_k's Insane - 4Key]

I don't think that this is a Insane map you maybe should change it to Hard - Fixed to Hard,renamed Hyper, changed HP / OD, added kiai
Put the Offset to 2994 (00:02:994 - )

-00:22:582 - I would Shorten the slider to 00:22:758 - and add another slider on 00:22:935 - to 00:23:111 - Fixed

-01:00:699 - to 01:01:758 - these are some evil slider you should propably remove some of them definitely evil, fixed

-01:27:876 - remove at least one note kept only two, extremity

I would say to vary a bit but there are not many possibilities to vary the "streams". Yeah i tried many different things but i always end up blacing the loudest note on an extremity, and that's all i found that feels normal to play, except the transition between stream 2 and 3



The rest of the map is awsome dude , keep up mapping.Thank you very much dude !!

I hope I could help you , message me if you need some help

Thank you for your time and help !

The OD of the easy should be higher, at least 7. The HP drain might also be a little too low, maybe 7.5 would be fine.
You should probably make a Normal difficulty, right now there is only a easy and hard.
You need to remove the audio from the video file. You might want to get a higher resolution video file.. its very pixelated.
Don't forget to add the guest difficulty mapper's name into the tags.
The author should probably be 電波風 from what I've gather.
Don't forget to include the romanized author's name too in its field.
Title should probably be にゃんぱすのように舞いーニョ
Same as the author, don't forget to include the romanized title in its field.
(I got this information from http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm26730029)
Easy:
00:03:523 (3523|0,3876|0,4229|1,4582|1) - these should all be on the same line, they are the same pitch. (Unless you're mapping a different instrument than I think)
00:04:935 (4935|2,5288|2,5641|3,5994|3) - same as above
00:19:052 - Remove mini-jacks here, they are too hard for an easy difficulty.

tatatat wrote:

The OD of the easy should be higher, at least 7. The HP drain might also be a little too low, maybe 7.5 would be fine.
You should probably make a Normal difficulty, right now there is only a easy and hard.
You need to remove the audio from the video file. You might want to get a higher resolution video file.. its very pixelated.
Don't forget to add the guest difficulty mapper's name into the tags.
The author should probably be 電波風 from what I've gather.
Don't forget to include the romanized author's name too in its field.
Title should probably be にゃんぱすのように舞いーニョ
Same as the author, don't forget to include the romanized title in its field.
(I got this information from http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm26730029)
Thanks you for those informations, gonna fix all metadata / Diff / video soon
Easy:
00:03:523 (3523|0,3876|0,4229|1,4582|1) - these should all be on the same line, they are the same pitch. (Unless you're mapping a different instrument than I think) V
00:04:935 (4935|2,5288|2,5641|3,5994|3) - same as above i'll try to see what pattern i can do to match the song the most and still not have a linear clic, i did this in the first version and found it too boring
00:19:052 - Remove mini-jacks here, they are too hard for an easy difficulty. Fixed !

[EDIT]

tatatat wrote:

You need to remove the audio from the video file Fixed !
You might want to get a higher resolution video file.. its very pixelated. It's the original :/
Don't forget to add the guest difficulty mapper's name into the tags Sorry there is no GD, i just put my name in the Hyper difficulty idk why.. fixed
The author should probably be 電波風 from what I've gather.
Don't forget to include the romanized author's name too in its field.
Title should probably be にゃんぱすのように舞いーニョ
Same as the author, don't forget to include the romanized title in its field.
(I got this information from http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm26730029) Fixed !

Thank you for you time and your help dude !

Remove [4K) - from the diff titles, since there's only one keymode it's not needed
just remove source for now, it's only used for titles of series or movies, best to just leave blank for now

It seems like you're using the end of a LN to map a sound. Unlike standard mode, in mania the ends of LNs do not map anything, and would need another note on the end to map a sound.
That + Don't copy paste sections, even though the song is the same, it's really boring to play the same thing two or more times. It's really not suggested to use the copy paste tool like this, be more creative with different kinds of patterns.

Hyper
00:03:523 (3523|0) - It's the same four notes, but using the exact same pattern is a bit repetitive. Use variations to keep it interesting
00:04:935 (4935|0) - 00:06:347 (6347|3) - same thing
00:06:258 (6258|3,6347|3) - Placing a note 1/4 after another is way too hard, should not be used ever
00:07:758 (7758|3) - Extend these LNs by 1/2, sounds don't stop halfway through.
+ The LNs should still have the 1/4s going during them, since they haven't stopped.
It'd probably be better to choose a different song to map to fix this, as they're less repetitive and easier to express ideas. + Niconicodouga songs aren't that popular on osu these days
00:28:935 (28935|2) - Because you're mapping a repetitive song, you need to have similar patterns with small variations for each time it repeats, that way it will be consistent with the song. If you compare 00:34:582 (34582|1) - they're completely different, but the song is pretty much the same.
00:40:670 (40670|3) - The vocals started on the previous tick, move this pattern back
00:54:347 (54347|1) - All lanes should be used equally or else it's uncomfortable

These are general issues that appear often throughout the map. You will need to go through what I wrote, then try and find similar parts that would fall under what I said before

Sinnoh wrote:

Remove [4K) - from the diff titles, since there's only one keymode it's not needed Yes i'll remove it when the map is ready for a BN call, for now it helps me for visibility
just remove source for now, it's only used for titles of series or movies, best to just leave blank for now Fixed

It seems like you're using the end of a LN to map a sound. Unlike standard mode, in mania the ends of LNs do not map anything, and would need another note on the end to map a sound. I try to it as much as i can without getting the difficulty too high
That + Don't copy paste sections, even though the song is the same, it's really boring to play the same thing two or more times. It's really not suggested to use the copy paste tool like this, be more creative with different kinds of patterns.

Hyper
00:03:523 (3523|0) - It's the same four notes, but using the exact same pattern is a bit repetitive. Use variations to keep it interesting
00:04:935 (4935|0) - 00:06:347 (6347|3) - same thing
00:06:258 (6258|3,6347|3) - Placing a note 1/4 after another is way too hard, should not be used ever
This is the most tricky part of the song, i had a lot of trouble finding how to map it.
Thing is, the sound is as you can hear, a stream of four notes, then it loops, so i have to make a 4 object strem looping, ok.
BUT, the first note of the stream has to be on the far right or far left column, if i put hte first note elswere, while looping, it becomes a mess , and it's really difficult to find where is the loop starting.
So with that in mind i haven't got much possibility to map this.
I'm ok changing it, but i need someone to make a proposal, bc i dont see any other way to map it at now

00:07:758 (7758|3) - Extend these LNs by 1/2, sounds don't stop halfway through.
+ The LNs should still have the 1/4s going during them, since they haven't stopped.
It'd probably be better to choose a different song to map to fix this, as they're less repetitive and easier to express ideas. + Niconicodouga songs aren't that popular on osu these days Honestly i dont map for popularity, i choose this song because it makes me laugh and i enjoy it, it would be a pain for me to map out something i dont really want to just bc it may be popular

00:28:935 (28935|2) - Because you're mapping a repetitive song, you need to have similar patterns with small variations for each time it repeats, that way it will be consistent with the song. If you compare 00:34:582 (34582|1) - they're completely different, but the song is pretty much the same. Fixed

00:40:670 (40670|3) - The vocals started on the previous tick, move this pattern back You should listen at 25% or 50% it's actually on the right time

00:54:347 (54347|1) - All lanes should be used equally or else it's uncomfortable I did this on purpose since it's Renge voice part and pink / purple is her color. it's the matter of 5 notes so i'll change it if it gets pointed ou again, but yeah kinda feels wierd

These are general issues that appear often throughout the map. You will need to go through what I wrote, then try and find similar parts that would fall under what I said before

Thanks o/

Hi from my mod queue


1|2|3|4



Overall this map needs a lot of improvement until it can be ranked, so good luck

TheNewBungping wrote:

Hi from my mod queue

General

If you're gonna do only 4K diffs, don't need to put 4K on the diff name

fixed

1|2|3|4

Ultra Easy

00:06:347 - 00:07:405 like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8472935 Changed the pattern a bit

00:08:464 move to 4 Fixed !
01:33:170 ^ Fixed !
00:09:170 add a note on 1 Fixed !
01:33:876 ^ Fixed !

00:11:994 - 00:13:052 like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8472941 Fixed !
01:36:699 - 01:37:758 ^ Fixed !

00:25:052 move to 3 Fixed !
00:30:699 ^ Fixed !
00:58:935 ^ Fixed !

00:25:229 move to 4 Fixed !
00:30:876 ^ Fixed !
00:59:111 ^ Fixed !

00:39:170 remove note on 3 Fixed !
01:13:052 ^ Fixed !

00:43:052 add note on 1 Fixed !

00:51:523 - 00:52:582 like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8472946 Fixed !
01:31:052 - 01:32:111 ^ Fixed !

01:04:229 - 01:05:641 like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8472951 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8472954

01:40:935 - 01:41:641 like this 01:41:641

I dont really get the last part ><

Hyper

sorry for short mod on this diff

00:03:170 remove note on 1 Fixed !

some notes doesn't need to be double, try find it and fix it yourself (cuz there's so many I can't point all the timing stamp :v)

Overall this map needs a lot of improvement until it can be ranked, so good luck

Thanks you very much for the mod on Ultra easy, The placement feels way better now !

Hyper 4k:

- Atm the difficulty of this map is not Hyper: it's an Advanced because it's a 2.61 stars that mix Normal parts (with the long sliders and the 1/2 times parts) and Hard parts (with the streams)

As well you can keep the difficulty as an Advanced difficulty but you'll have some importants things to do

Hi, thanks for the mods guys, it has been a long time now, but i'm back at it, I fixed the main concern about jacks there's no more jacks in middle of stream now and fixed other things so i can go for ranking now, thanks !

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