m4m from my queue
General
ending time is not consistent across diffs
also combo colors
You really don't need 2 timing points, using 1 on 00:04:541 is good enough (also fixes your nc's not being on the downbeat)
Normal
01:01:718 (6,7) - don't make these look similar, they are totally different
The first one is 1/4 and the second one has only 1/2sounds
aimod complains about ds so take a look at that
really don't have much too say, it's consistent in its patterning and looks okay
Hard
00:07:718 (7,8) - 7 is only curved so little that you should just copy 8 and flip it so it looks a bit better
00:14:071 (9,1) - stack this more like 00:08:424 (9,1) - as the first type of stacking looks way better
00:46:895 (11) - you messed up your nc'ing here
00:55:012 (3,6) - would look way better if they were actually stacked nicely
The biggest thing that bugs me on this diff is the intesity decrease at spots like 00:30:306 (6,7,8) -, Beacause following instruments and then decreasing the object density based on the vocals while the instrumentals keep going feels wrong
Insane
In this diff nc'ing every downbeat would be better to make sure the combo doesn't go above 10 every time
00:11:424 (11) - even though the sound is alot more quiet, decreasing the sapcing by this much doesn't fit, it's also not like you did the same thing at similar spots liek 00:14:071 (10,11) -
On an insane and up map this part, as it's perfectly mappable with some lower sv and object density
00:33:836 (5,6,1) - choose 1 type of mapping triples and don't mix it up (if the sections sound similar ofcourse)
00:36:659 (5,1,2) - would making for some better visible spacing distance to make sure that 12 doesn't look the same as 51 as the gap is 1/1
00:58:189 (1) - feels pretty out of place being the only really curved slider in the kiai
01:06:306 (5,1) - oh man, this overlap tilts me
01:10:895 (1,2,3) - would space these differently as placing these in the same stack with any nc to differentiate timing gaps is quite misleading
link to my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/623776
Gl with the map
ending time is not consistent across diffs
also combo colors
You really don't need 2 timing points, using 1 on 00:04:541 is good enough (also fixes your nc's not being on the downbeat)
01:01:718 (6,7) - don't make these look similar, they are totally different
The first one is 1/4 and the second one has only 1/2sounds
aimod complains about ds so take a look at that
really don't have much too say, it's consistent in its patterning and looks okay
00:07:718 (7,8) - 7 is only curved so little that you should just copy 8 and flip it so it looks a bit better
00:14:071 (9,1) - stack this more like 00:08:424 (9,1) - as the first type of stacking looks way better
00:46:895 (11) - you messed up your nc'ing here
00:55:012 (3,6) - would look way better if they were actually stacked nicely
The biggest thing that bugs me on this diff is the intesity decrease at spots like 00:30:306 (6,7,8) -, Beacause following instruments and then decreasing the object density based on the vocals while the instrumentals keep going feels wrong
In this diff nc'ing every downbeat would be better to make sure the combo doesn't go above 10 every time
00:11:424 (11) - even though the sound is alot more quiet, decreasing the sapcing by this much doesn't fit, it's also not like you did the same thing at similar spots liek 00:14:071 (10,11) -
On an insane and up map this part, as it's perfectly mappable with some lower sv and object density
00:33:836 (5,6,1) - choose 1 type of mapping triples and don't mix it up (if the sections sound similar ofcourse)
00:36:659 (5,1,2) - would making for some better visible spacing distance to make sure that 12 doesn't look the same as 51 as the gap is 1/1
00:58:189 (1) - feels pretty out of place being the only really curved slider in the kiai
01:06:306 (5,1) - oh man, this overlap tilts me
01:10:895 (1,2,3) - would space these differently as placing these in the same stack with any nc to differentiate timing gaps is quite misleading
link to my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/623776
Gl with the map