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00:52:807 (451,452,453,454,455,456,457) - would be reasnobale to tone this down a bit since it's way harder than top diff currently
Current is reasonable as single diff.
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00:00:890 (9) - mapping this as one long stream takes away so much from the melody and also makes melody spam on 00:04:307 - stand out less, would add least have one more 1/2 gap here, like by removing 9 or 00:01:057 (11) - though removing the overmapped things entirely would reflect song better and make a nice contrast to 00:04:307 - which is way more intense
00:05:307 (53,54,55) - might be nice to introduce 1/6 here since you are using them a lot on similar stuff later
00:36:807 (352,353,354,355) - 00:39:474 (384,385,386,387) - might be nice to use 1/6 here too, similar to 00:34:140 (318,319,320,321,322) - (just with only one 1/6 pattern each instead of 2)
00:52:807 (495,496,497,498,499) - not sure why you decided to map this full 1/4 when you used 1/6 kinda liberally before and they are really clear in the song here. current 1/4 only, together with such a simple patter feels really underwhelming
01:40:057 (963) - could actually remove to make the next stream feel more seperated cause there is such a major change in music at 01:40:140 - (gap used on inner might also be a nice alternative to this suggestion)
i applied everything but the 00:52:807 - as that's up to mapper preference imo
01:22:807 (412,413,414) - bit underhwelming with how you handled rhythm in this part overall, some 1/2 at 01:23:307 - or 01:23:640 - would be nice underwhelming i think is the wrong word, i think this change in patterning is more for the sake of variation than repeating that over and over again, so i won't change it
Poor formatting because /shrug
Remove 00:46:140, no note at 00:51:474 (which is kinda the same) makes sense
00:31:807 Make d as it's lower than previous note, or just remove it ok
00:08:557 - could change to d nah, don't see the need for that
00:47:974 - could remove to add a break, since it's pretty dense but one at 00:48:140 - instead
Good song, enjoy.
From Ayyri:Poor formatting because /shrug
00:36:474 - triplet can be deleted for consistency
00:42:640 - can delete?
00:42:807 - change to k
Ayyri's Outer Oni:
00:00:640 (6,7) - sounds more correct when swapped
The stream with 1/6 feels weird to play but I guess it sounds like it's mapped correctly
Good song, enjoy.
M4M00:30:140 change to kdk? nah, i don't see the need for it right here00:30:557 may add k here? it's look match with song nah there's no really prominent sound there
01:40:724 move to 01:40:390 it's better :\ ok
good song.hope it helpful:)