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outer
00:00:890 (9) - mapping this as one long stream takes away so much from the melody and also makes melody spam on 00:04:307 - stand out less, would add least have one more 1/2 gap here, like by removing 9 or 00:01:057 (11) - though removing the overmapped things entirely would reflect song better and make a nice contrast to 00:04:307 - which is way more intense
00:05:307 (53,54,55) - might be nice to introduce 1/6 here since you are using them a lot on similar stuff later
00:36:807 (352,353,354,355) - 00:39:474 (384,385,386,387) - might be nice to use 1/6 here too, similar to 00:34:140 (318,319,320,321,322) - (just with only one 1/6 pattern each instead of 2)

00:52:807 (495,496,497,498,499) - not sure why you decided to map this full 1/4 when you used 1/6 kinda liberally before and they are really clear in the song here. current 1/4 only, together with such a simple patter feels really underwhelming
01:40:057 (963) - could actually remove to make the next stream feel more seperated cause there is such a major change in music at 01:40:140 - (gap used on inner might also be a nice alternative to this suggestion)


inner
00:52:807 (451,452,453,454,455,456,457) - would be reasnobale to tone this down a bit since it's way harder than top diff currently


oni
00:52:974 (367,368) - think it would be nicer to change this into some triple instead with how intense song is this felt way too underwhelming
00:57:474 (1) - spinner feels a bit unfitting since it makes you skip over the really outstanding 1/4 at 00:58:140 -, either removing or shortening it would be nicer imo
01:41:140 (315) - finisher on this would work well since it stands out so much more than the things before


muzu
01:22:807 (412,413,414) - bit underhwelming with how you handled rhythm in this part overall, some 1/2 at 01:23:307 - or 01:23:640 - would be nice


futsuu
01:20:140 - part could at least use a few 1/2 rhythms since song is still quite intense and muzu uses a decent amount of 1/4 here
01:41:140 (170) - same as oni


kantan looks fine
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Raphalge wrote:

my heart goes Thaehan - Doki-Doki

[Ayyri's Outer Oni (patent pending)]
00:38:807 (376) - to 00:39:807 (388) - feels a bit out of place with the rest of the stream patterns, especially the 4 dons in a row which from what I could see only occur here. Maybe change it to something like kdkkdkkdkk starting from 00:38:974 (378) - ?

that's all, very nice and polished diff

[Ayyri's Outer Muzukashii]
00:13:807 - having the break point here makes the section feel incredibly short imo, maybe add a k, move 00:15:474 (79,80) - to 00:15:307 - , delete 00:15:807 (81) - and have the break point there instead? idk, it feels more natural to me that way.

very nice muzu


Lasse wrote:

set a preview point oopsies

oni
00:52:974 (367,368) - think it would be nicer to change this into some triple instead with how intense song is this felt way too underwhelming considering the 1/6 in the inner, ye this makes sense
00:57:474 (1) - spinner feels a bit unfitting since it makes you skip over the really outstanding 1/4 at 00:58:140 -, either removing or shortening it would be nicer imo yeah the sound ends earlier than i have the spinner finishing, so i shortened it and added a triplet
01:41:140 (315) - finisher on this would work well since it stands out so much more than the things before ye ok


futsuu
01:20:140 - part could at least use a few 1/2 rhythms since song is still quite intense and muzu uses a decent amount of 1/4 here eh, but then that would take contrast away from 01:30:807 (135) - ,
so no change

01:41:140 (170) - same as oni ok


kantan looks fine neat
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Lasse wrote:

inner
00:52:807 (451,452,453,454,455,456,457) - would be reasnobale to tone this down a bit since it's way harder than top diff currently

:arrow:Current is reasonable as single diff.
Thanks for mod(¦3[___]
posted
ayyri is feeling sick so i'll temporarily handle this mod

Lasse wrote:

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outer
00:00:890 (9) - mapping this as one long stream takes away so much from the melody and also makes melody spam on 00:04:307 - stand out less, would add least have one more 1/2 gap here, like by removing 9 or 00:01:057 (11) - though removing the overmapped things entirely would reflect song better and make a nice contrast to 00:04:307 - which is way more intense
00:05:307 (53,54,55) - might be nice to introduce 1/6 here since you are using them a lot on similar stuff later
00:36:807 (352,353,354,355) - 00:39:474 (384,385,386,387) - might be nice to use 1/6 here too, similar to 00:34:140 (318,319,320,321,322) - (just with only one 1/6 pattern each instead of 2)

00:52:807 (495,496,497,498,499) - not sure why you decided to map this full 1/4 when you used 1/6 kinda liberally before and they are really clear in the song here. current 1/4 only, together with such a simple patter feels really underwhelming
01:40:057 (963) - could actually remove to make the next stream feel more seperated cause there is such a major change in music at 01:40:140 - (gap used on inner might also be a nice alternative to this suggestion)

i applied everything but the 00:52:807 - as that's up to mapper preference imo

muzu
01:22:807 (412,413,414) - bit underhwelming with how you handled rhythm in this part overall, some 1/2 at 01:23:307 - or 01:23:640 - would be nice underwhelming i think is the wrong word, i think this change in patterning is more for the sake of variation than repeating that over and over again, so i won't change it
posted
Poor formatting because /shrug

Kantan:
Remove 00:46:140, no note at 00:51:474 (which is kinda the same)

Futsuu:
00:31:807 Make d as it's lower than previous note, or just remove it

Ayyri's Muzukashii:
00:36:474 - triplet can be deleted for consistency
00:42:640 - can delete?
00:42:807 - change to k

Oni:
00:08:557 - could change to d
00:47:974 - could remove to add a break, since it's pretty dense

JuDa's Inner Oni:
00:05:224 - could change to d
00:10:474 - music appears to decline so perhaps kkkd
00:34:140 - as the music dips, could change to kddk. I know it's done later but this would still be more correct
01:24:807 - change to k

Ayyri's Outer Oni:
00:00:640 (6,7) - sounds more correct when swapped
The stream with 1/6 feels weird to play but I guess it sounds like it's mapped correctly

Good song, enjoy.
posted

Jaye wrote:

Poor formatting because /shrug

Kantan:
Remove 00:46:140, no note at 00:51:474 (which is kinda the same) makes sense

Futsuu:
00:31:807 Make d as it's lower than previous note, or just remove it ok

Oni:
00:08:557 - could change to d nah, don't see the need for that
00:47:974 - could remove to add a break, since it's pretty dense but one at 00:48:140 - instead

Good song, enjoy.
posted

Jaye wrote:

Poor formatting because /shrug

Ayyri's Muzukashii:
00:36:474 - triplet can be deleted for consistency
00:42:640 - can delete?
00:42:807 - change to k

Ayyri's Outer Oni:
00:00:640 (6,7) - sounds more correct when swapped
The stream with 1/6 feels weird to play but I guess it sounds like it's mapped correctly

Good song, enjoy.
From Ayyri:

Muzukashii:
00:36:474 - I wanted some variation, since this sound is repeating all throughout this section.
00:42:640 - I get what you're saying, but I think leaving the start of the next section ( 00:42:807 - ) all by itself is a little odd. (It would have1/1 breaks before and after it. Neither section is dense enough to really warrant that.)
00:42:807 - d sounds better here. There's no kicks, and it differentiates it from the note before it, 00:42:640 - .

Outer:
00:00:640 - Sounds good, I'll change that.
posted
JuDa's Inner Oni:
00:05:224 - could change to d
:arrow:applied.
00:10:474 - music appears to decline so perhaps kkkd
:arrow:sounds not weel with bass. no change.
00:34:140 - as the music dips, could change to kddk. I know it's done later but this would still be more correct
:arrow:sounds not clear low pitch, no change.
01:24:807 - change to k
:arrow:to avoid the same flow with 01:28:640 (771,772,773,774,775,776,777,778) - . Its not same variation.

Thanks for mod(¦3[___]

update: http://puu.sh/yCxN7/833f70f27e.zip
posted
hello :3
M4M
00:30:140 change to kdk?
perfact
it's fine...or not?
00:30:557 may add k here? it's look match with song
01:40:724 move to 01:40:390 it's better :\
00:05:140 1/6 start here ..and it's should same as 00:15:807
oh good good
00:00:307 I think kdkkdkkdk it look match with song and look better. maybe change?
00:03:807 change to dkd or kkd cause I think 00:03:974 it's low pitch.it's good idea if use dkd or kkd
00:04:307 same as 00:00:307
00:14:390 add d I think it look fine
00:16:057 this point and this point 00:05:390 .change it?
00:34:474 you can add 1/6 note here.sound same 00:34:140
00:37:140 look like ^
00:39:807 ^
00:43:640 I can hear 1/6 here
00:48:974 ^

haha I looked overall it's look fine and I love your long stream <3

good song.hope it helpful:)
good luck~~~ ;)
posted

Cocoaaa wrote:

hello :3
M4M
00:30:140 change to kdk? nah, i don't see the need for it right here
00:30:557 may add k here? it's look match with song nah there's no really prominent sound there
01:40:724 move to 01:40:390 it's better :\ ok

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good song.hope it helpful:)
good luck~~~ ;)
posted
posted
[JuDa's Inner Oni]00:05:140 1/6 start here ..and it's should same as 00:15:807
oh good good

fixed kkddkddkkd https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9783405
Thanks for mod(¦3[___]
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Taikocracy - Today at 2:44 PM
hello friends
ei - Today at 2:45 PM
!
frukoyurdakul - Today at 2:45 PM
hmm since ayyri is here, I wanna say I didn't like the patterns starting from 00:28:140 - this spot
ei - Today at 2:45 PM
dude CALM
what DIFF
Taikocracy - Today at 2:45 PM
outer
frukoyurdakul - Today at 2:45 PM
yours :smile:
Taikocracy - Today at 2:45 PM
she has two
a muzu and an outer
ei - Today at 2:45 PM
I HAVE TWO
frukoyurdakul - Today at 2:45 PM
ah sorry
ei - Today at 2:45 PM
LOL
frukoyurdakul - Today at 2:45 PM
yeah I played outer oni only
ei - Today at 2:46 PM
ok but why no like
frukoyurdakul - Today at 2:46 PM
dkkddkkddkkkk
first note is d, which makes the stream harder to read and play because they come reversed
Taikocracy - Today at 2:46 PM
so how would you change that then
ei - Today at 2:47 PM
almost like its supposed to be a hard map :thinking:
frukoyurdakul - Today at 2:47 PM
kdkkdkkd and something would be better considering the structure of the stream
Taikocracy - Today at 2:47 PM
yeah that pattern is a tiny bit out of place
not weird or anything
but then again i suck at streams
s o o o o o o o . . . .
frukoyurdakul - Today at 2:48 PM
2nd reason: 00:34:140 - there occurs a hand-swap here due to 1/6
and 00:36:140 (342,343,344,345) - patterns like these and hitting 00:36:640 (348,349,350,351,352,353) - this especially is really hard
Taikocracy - Today at 2:48 PM
okay but serious question, are the hand-swaps really that big of a deal? i see your point, but is this smth that needs to be changed(edited)
kdkkdkkd <- where does this start btw?
frukoyurdakul - Today at 2:49 PM
00:36:640 (348,349,350,351,352,353) -
wait
00:28:140 - this
Taikocracy - Today at 2:49 PM
so :140 is a k?(edited)
and so on?(edited)
frukoyurdakul - Today at 2:50 PM
the keyboards don't really support the dkkddkk variation
if you want to make the map hard, do it on 1/6 bursts, not putting with unreadable streams :smile:
such as
00:34:140 - this can be 7-note 1/6(edited)
and most of them can be converted that way
ei - Today at 2:52 PM
00:28:390 - this shouldn't be k
Taikocracy - Today at 2:53 PM
kddkdkkd
i like that a little bit better
frukoyurdakul - Today at 2:53 PM
yeah was about to say that
ei - Today at 2:54 PM
starting from 00:28:140 - ???
Taikocracy - Today at 2:54 PM
kddkdkkd
ye
ei - Today at 2:54 PM
that would make it k.
Taikocracy - Today at 2:54 PM
https://puu.sh/yIvGT/e5ebb595f1.png

frukoyurdakul - Today at 2:54 PM
then make it kdkdkkd
Taikocracy - Today at 2:54 PM
we're talking about 255 right
ei - Today at 2:54 PM
256
frukoyurdakul - Today at 2:54 PM
nah 256 i suppose
Taikocracy - Today at 2:54 PM
o shoot
i can't read(edited)
sorry
kdkddkkd
is that good
ei - Today at 2:55 PM
not rlly
too much kdkd
bc pattern right before has it twice
dkkdkdk
Taikocracy - Today at 2:55 PM
yeah i just noticed that when i played it
ei - Today at 2:56 PM
last k is where the part we are talking about starts
https://i.imgur.com/m8QlQWj.png

frukoyurdakul - Today at 2:56 PM
00:27:974 - you can change this one tho
Taikocracy - Today at 2:56 PM
https://puu.sh/yIvMN/12197a2947.png

frukoyurdakul - Today at 2:56 PM
to don
Taikocracy - Today at 2:57 PM
either one works i suppose
right fruko?
ei - Today at 2:57 PM
https://puu.sh/yIvMN/12197a2947.png

this one is fine
Taikocracy - Today at 2:57 PM
:ok_hand:
alright, what's next
frukoyurdakul - Today at 2:57 PM
yeah I guess so too
well
general opinion about something
Taikocracy - Today at 2:58 PM
hm?
frukoyurdakul - Today at 2:58 PM
00:36:724 (349,350) - these two should be different
Taikocracy - Today at 2:58 PM
349 could be a don(edited)
frukoyurdakul - Today at 2:58 PM
kk(kddk) is not really playable especially the hand swap occured after 00:34:140 - this
mhm
ei - Today at 2:58 PM
were you serious about making things 1/6 btw
like, from earlier
"00:34:140 - this can be 7-note 1/6"
Taikocracy - Today at 2:59 PM
woah
no 7 note 1/6 please
;w;
frukoyurdakul - Today at 2:59 PM
that'll make the map non-DTable only
but the song supports it
and tbh I don't care about DT
ei - Today at 2:59 PM
me neither
Taikocracy - Today at 2:59 PM
i'd rather keep the 4 note 1/6s
but not my diff so :o(edited)
ei - Today at 2:59 PM
idrc
ei - Today at 3:00 PM
lowkey overmapping is dumb
Taikocracy - Today at 3:00 PM
lowkey
lmao
ei - Today at 3:00 PM
arguably half the sounds here could he 1/6
like in the later streams
:zzz:
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:00 PM
actually the 1/6 sound goes on for 2 beats
but that'd be unneccessary to put
so one beat, 7 1/6 is fine for me
Taikocracy - Today at 3:00 PM
see but the way i saw it is the beginning sounds like 1/6 stronger
then it like it "disperses" into less obvious 1/6(edited)
which is why i'd rather keep as is
ei - Today at 3:01 PM
yeah
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:01 PM
your choice, but my general thought about the usages of 1/6 is
kk(kddk)
ei - Today at 3:01 PM
that's why i didn't really wanna use 1/6 a whole lot
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:01 PM
that 2nd note should be different like kd(kddk)
ei - Today at 3:02 PM
since it's on and off in terms of sound
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:02 PM
for readability
Taikocracy - Today at 3:02 PM
original had no 1/6 :^)
ei - Today at 3:02 PM
ya, I changed that
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:02 PM
and playability, both
ei - Today at 3:02 PM
yeye
dw
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:02 PM
this has multiple occurences though
Taikocracy - Today at 3:02 PM
00:39:390 (382,383,384,385,386) - this included?
i think that's fine but eh
ei - Today at 3:03 PM
imo that one is okay
bc doubles
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:03 PM
that one is even harder for me :smile:
ei - Today at 3:03 PM
lmao
Taikocracy - Today at 3:03 PM
:thinking:
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:04 PM
kddd(kddk) feels better due to keyboard pitch
it'll emphasize something sudden
instead of kddk(kddk)
Taikocracy - Today at 3:04 PM
00:39:224 (380,381,382) - these three sounds are very similar, so i'm okay with that
ei - Today at 3:05 PM
oka
wb stuff like 00:43:640 -
it's not mid-stream
Taikocracy - Today at 3:05 PM
now that, i personally don't like the use of 1/6 there
i hear it but it sounds weird
ei - Today at 3:06 PM
the colours or wot
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:06 PM
dddk start is better there
instead of kddk
ei - Today at 3:07 PM
bc i don't rlly like using 1/6 there
someone suggested it
zzzzzzzzzzz(edited)
lemme see
Taikocracy - Today at 3:07 PM
1/6 or 1/4, both work
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:07 PM
yeah, I'd say 1/6 is okay
ei - Today at 3:07 PM
dddk is ok
Taikocracy - Today at 3:07 PM
change the second one too then?
ei - Today at 3:07 PM
ye
already did
i'm not too picky on 1/6 colours
unless it's like, not even
ie kkkdddk
kinda gross lol
Taikocracy - Today at 3:08 PM
what's next :o
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:09 PM
00:08:557 (71) - this can be kat
Taikocracy - Today at 3:09 PM
tru
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:09 PM
I assume you follow the foreground drum, so kkk should be better since they're the same sound
ei - Today at 3:09 PM
ya
i usually hate 3 note patterns tho
but w/e
idrc here
Taikocracy - Today at 3:10 PM
at least it's not dddkk
ei - Today at 3:10 PM
GROSS
Taikocracy - Today at 3:10 PM
agree
:nauseated_face:
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:10 PM
the rest is fine for me
ei - Today at 3:10 PM
ale
00:39:474 - was this that 1/6 you changed awhile ago
idr
bc sound somewhat repeats a measure later ( 00:39:807 - )
just curious
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:11 PM
well that sound repeats for 2 measures everywhere on that stream
but they all mapped as 1/6 4 notes so
Taikocracy - Today at 3:11 PM
i think i changed that to kkkd 1/6
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:12 PM
so it's kddk(kkkd) now?
Taikocracy - Today at 3:12 PM
bc it's higher in pitch than 00:36:807 (350,351,352,353) - these
ei - Today at 3:12 PM
normally can just break up long 1/6 tho
Thaehan_-_Doki-Doki_Taikocracy_Ayyris_Outer_Oni.osu
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take
Taikocracy - Today at 3:13 PM
fruko it's still kddk 1/6
dw
ei - Today at 3:13 PM
god kddk(kkkd)
how about no
Taikocracy - Today at 3:13 PM
LOL
should we go to the oni or the muzu
:thinking:
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:14 PM
so, kddd(kddk) ?
Taikocracy - Today at 3:14 PM
yes
ei - Today at 3:14 PM
do it in order
easier imo
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:14 PM
good then
Taikocracy - Today at 3:15 PM
i advise you fruko to be really nice on juda's oni, bc i love the guy but he's so busy it'll take him a while to get back to it
ei - Today at 3:15 PM
stop gay
lmao
Taikocracy - Today at 3:15 PM
stop gay
what
i can't stop gay
ei - Today at 3:15 PM
:rofl:
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:17 PM
his diff seems fine for me
Taikocracy - Today at 3:17 PM
WOO
to the oni
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:17 PM
00:10:474 - considering there is no usage of 1/4 finisher on juda's inner
I think you shouldn't use some on oni too
ddd K works fine here as well
Taikocracy - Today at 3:18 PM
i can agree
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:18 PM
this can be general though
Taikocracy - Today at 3:18 PM
00:20:807 (145,146,147,148,149) - same probably, right?
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:18 PM
so if there will be any occurence like this I'll skip
Taikocracy - Today at 3:18 PM
ah
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:21 PM
rest seems fine
muzukashii: 00:34:140 - I think the gap between the diffs is huge on spots like that
which means I recommend deleting 00:32:890 - this triplet and adding a note at 00:34:224 - this spot
ei - Today at 3:24 PM
o that's me
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:24 PM
yeah
ei - Today at 3:24 PM
hold, i look
ok sure
i'll do that
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:25 PM
multiple occurences will be there, so I'll skip all of them for now
same applies for Futsuu (haven't looked at it yet but it should have 1/2)
ei - Today at 3:26 PM
just do them after you're done w/ the rest
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:27 PM
00:33:807 - considering this has a break there, 00:36:474 - this suppose to have one
Taikocracy - Today at 3:27 PM
for muzu right
not futsuu
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:28 PM
yeah
I still continue looking to muzukashii
00:57:474 - considering the outer oni, this should be DON
to create a better flow, 00:57:307 (289) - this can be changed to kat(edited)
ei - Today at 3:29 PM
o i already did that
lol
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:30 PM
okay
01:19:474 - instead of k d, this should be ddd
gap between oni and muzu is big on 4 beat comparison(edited)
and muzu is the part of the spread
or, oni can be decreased a bit, your choice
ei - Today at 3:33 PM
idm adding a note
Taikocracy - Today at 3:33 PM
i was gonna make that ddddK -> ddd K like fruko suggested earlier
if i don't need to do that lmk so i can keep the ddddK c:
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:34 PM
if you removed the others that will be the only occurence though
which would be inconsistent
Taikocracy - Today at 3:34 PM
i can change the others back to ddddK though
i like it better that way, i'm just wondering which is better
ei - Today at 3:35 PM
but didn't judan not use that
lol
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:35 PM
yeah
Taikocracy - Today at 3:35 PM
:c
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:35 PM
juda's diff doesn't have one
Taikocracy - Today at 3:35 PM
ddd K it is
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:35 PM
so I don't recommend on using oni too
I wonder why taikocracy's diffs don't have a kiai on 01:30:807 - that
Taikocracy - Today at 3:36 PM
i don't think that should be a kiai tbh
but they do
i'll add the kiai if i should though
ei - Today at 3:37 PM
kiais don't need to be consistent
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:37 PM
nah since they're guest diffs I think it'll be fine
Taikocracy - Today at 3:37 PM
yeah that's why i left mine alone
woo
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:37 PM
01:39:140 - adding a note here will be good
ei - Today at 3:37 PM
who
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:37 PM
no breaks required since that spot is the outro
your diff, muzu
and it looks like kinda forced
ei - Today at 3:38 PM
oka
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:38 PM
muzu is okay above these
Taikocracy - Today at 3:38 PM
so on to futsuu?(edited)
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:39 PM
00:34:140 - yeah
as I said, due to difficulty change these should have 1/2
ei - Today at 3:40 PM
ayydoki.rar
5.14 KB
take
Taikocracy - Today at 3:40 PM
00:36:807 (110,111,1) - same for this stuff right?(edited)
and so on and so forth
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:41 PM
yeah
Taikocracy - Today at 3:41 PM
okay fixed those
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:41 PM
00:35:307 (105) - also this can deleted since it got deleted on muzu
well not deleted but reduced
Taikocracy - Today at 3:42 PM
i'd rather keep it there
following the concrete keyboard sound in the background(edited)
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:43 PM
your choice
00:57:474 - finisher here?
or spinner, like you did on oni
Taikocracy - Today at 3:43 PM
finisher
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:43 PM
mhm
I forgot to tell you
ayyri's muzukashii: 01:20:141 (399) - I don't think this should have finisher
ei - Today at 3:44 PM
kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:45 PM
futsuu is fine above these
Taikocracy - Today at 3:45 PM
alrighty
ei - Today at 3:46 PM
ayydoki_pt2.rar
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Taikocracy - Today at 3:46 PM
did you change smth else
or can i just unfinish that note
ei - Today at 3:46 PM
unfin
just don't fuck up the bookmarks :pensive:
Taikocracy - Today at 3:46 PM
LOL
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:47 PM
kantan: 00:47:474 - I think you can add a note here due to the music
and you already put a break before so
ei - Today at 3:48 PM
that explanation
is funny
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:48 PM
I meant the snapping change
Taikocracy - Today at 3:48 PM
should i add one on 00:51:474 too then
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:48 PM
1/4 keyboard can be supported
ei - Today at 3:48 PM
"due to the music"
lmao
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:48 PM
ehh
I think he got the point
Taikocracy - Today at 3:48 PM
no bully fruko's english
ei - Today at 3:48 PM
ok but
ignoring doesn't help him improve
Taikocracy - Today at 3:48 PM
due to the music is smth stefan would say
:eyes:
ei - Today at 3:49 PM
but i'd bully fan
Taikocracy - Today at 3:49 PM
true'
ei - Today at 3:49 PM
^:
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:49 PM
yeah you should add a note there too
Taikocracy - Today at 3:49 PM
done-zo
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:49 PM
00:57:474 - finisher for the same reason as futsuu
Taikocracy - Today at 3:50 PM
yes(edited)
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:50 PM
01:09:140 - I think you can add a note here too, due to the 1/6 keyboards
there will be already a 3/1 break so it won't cause problems
Taikocracy - Today at 3:50 PM
same thing for 01:19:807 - ?
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:51 PM
yeah
Taikocracy - Today at 3:51 PM
:thumbsup:
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:52 PM
01:25:140 - here as well, to balance the spread between kantan and futsuu
since the section on futsuu has 1/2 notes more than kantan has 1/1(edited)
Taikocracy - Today at 3:52 PM
:oko_hand:
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:53 PM
01:30:807 - starting from here, dkd seems repetitive to me
maybe you can change the middle one to kdk
a.k.a 01:32:140 -
and 01:37:474 -
Taikocracy - Today at 3:54 PM
yeah i can agree
those sounds are higher in pitch anyways
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:54 PM
yeah, supports the music better that way
above these I think kantan is fine too
Taikocracy - Today at 3:54 PM
alrighty, let me update
then you can make sure everything :oko_hand:
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:54 PM
yup
Taikocracy - Today at 3:54 PM
god i wish i could access that hand
quality emote
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:54 PM
use this :ok_hand:
Taikocracy - Today at 3:55 PM
i know but oko hand is better :^)
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:55 PM
:v
Taikocracy - Today at 3:55 PM
updated
frukoyurdakul - Today at 3:55 PM
yeah I'll come back in 2 mins
Taikocracy - Today at 3:55 PM
:ok_hand:
frukoyurdakul - Today at 4:00 PM
ok ayyri's outer oni is fixed
Taikocracy - Today at 4:00 PM
:tada:
frukoyurdakul - Today at 4:01 PM
on oni: 00:34:140 - places like this can have 3-plet 5-plet
ei - Today at 4:01 PM
that's why i sent them here
lol
Taikocracy - Today at 4:01 PM
it can, but i'd rather keep it as is as well
matches the synth in the background more clearly that way
frukoyurdakul - Today at 4:02 PM
then I should say 00:33:890 - removing this note and converting the 2nd to a 5-plet
because the 5-plet is neccessary to balance the spread between the diffs
juda's inner has two 1/6 4-plets there
on that spot, kdkkd seems fine to me
Taikocracy - Today at 4:03 PM
okay i'm okay with that
00:36:807 (250,251,252,253,254) - for this one i have kddkd
frukoyurdakul - Today at 4:04 PM
00:35:140 - I recommend kkd or kdd due to the snare sound on it
00:35:807 - same as above
yeah kddkd is fine
Taikocracy - Today at 4:04 PM
yeah but i'm not following the snare there,,,
frukoyurdakul - Today at 4:05 PM
I can't really say ddd ddd emphasizes the keyboard either
because the pitch of it is increasing
Taikocracy - Today at 4:06 PM
okay
so
let's do
ddd ddd
then kdd kdd
and lastly kkd kkd
frukoyurdakul - Today at 4:06 PM
that can be a nice progression yeah
00:53:140 - you have a finisher on this
Taikocracy - Today at 4:07 PM
i also added the last two notes here https://puu.sh/yIyAv/9b7e03f7e3.png for each time this occurs

i don't like just ending a phrase on a 5plet
frukoyurdakul - Today at 4:07 PM
if it has a 1/1 break after 239th note for example, it's fine(edited)
Taikocracy - Today at 4:08 PM
:D
finisher removed
frukoyurdakul - Today at 4:10 PM
oni is fine besides these
Taikocracy - Today at 4:10 PM
anything else you need to look at ? :eyes:
frukoyurdakul - Today at 4:11 PM
checking ayyri's muzu
00:36:807 - 00:39:474 - those two spots should have a triplet since we discussed
ei - Today at 4:11 PM
ale wyd
Taikocracy - Today at 4:11 PM
maybe i should download the rar
ei - Today at 4:12 PM
i'll redO
Taikocracy - Today at 4:13 PM
;w;
frukoyurdakul - Today at 4:14 PM
what happened now? will you add?
ei - Today at 4:14 PM
they were there
but
ya,
Taikocracy - Today at 4:15 PM
i must've messed it up or smth
idk
sorry
ei - Today at 4:15 PM
dw !!
is that it
so i can send it
frukoyurdakul - Today at 4:15 PM
yeah
ei - Today at 4:16 PM
ayymuzu_pt3.rar
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Taikocracy - Today at 4:17 PM
confirmed fixed(edited)
frukoyurdakul - Today at 4:18 PM
kantan: you can add a note here to keep the structure
00:51:807 -
Taikocracy - Today at 4:19 PM
okay
:ok_hand:


Bubbled!
posted
yeah should be ok :c
I really like Judy's diff
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Kin wrote:

yeah should be ok :c
I really like Judy's diff
peep the sad face
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