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Zexous

713 posts

Joined July 2012

Zexous 2017-07-05T23:30:43+00:00

rushing out all the mods I need to do before I get busy again

[General]

tbh I don't know if the video is worth it...most people have them off by default in their settings and its 20 mb...imo you should just link it in the description
The gap between Advanced and Hyper is waaay too big, both settings-wise and actual map difficulty-wise...like, this NEEDS an in-between
OD on Hyper is higher than Another

[Dream Fragments]

holy you are way too fond of overlaps

00:02:184 (2,1) - they're touchin tips and it's kinda gay
00:10:184 (2,3,1) - 0.40x 00:11:184 (2,3) - 0.25x 00:12:722 (3,1) - 0.20x 00:16:107 (2,3) - 0.32x...literally the whole section you refuse to be consistent with your 1/4 spacing. what is this lmao it makes no sense
00:17:722 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - hella hard to read, especially 00:18:184 (3,4,5) - this part
00:34:645 (3,4,1) - I realize you've structured around this so it might not be easy to change but this is an awkward jerk to play

I think in general a lot of these overlaps esp in the fast parts aren't that merited and just make things a lot harder to read but for obvious reasons I won't list them

[Mir's Extra]

I don't really see any complex patterns that need stack leniency to be so low so I think you should raise it to make those 1/2 stacks more readable
00:11:876 (2,6) - Why is one of those ever so slightly tilted and the other isn't, I'm so tilted (ha), I think you should point this one 00:12:645 (6) - more towards the next object so it plays and looks less awkward
00:17:722 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Not really important but why all these right angles, it feels so 2009 lol
00:22:953 (3,4) - fix blanket xd
00:24:722 (6,7) - Space these closer? It's the first such pattern so would probably be played as 1/2 gap
00:26:953 (5) - What the hell is this sliderend snapped to? There's literally no sound there??? Plz snap properly
00:27:261 (6) - This spacing makes me think the previous slider was supposed to be 1/4 snap and you just somehow fucked it up but anyway yeah with the current snap of the previous slider this spacing is unaccceptable
00:31:568 (3,4) - These two sliders are shaped differently, pls make them the same
00:52:184 (1) - This buzz is kinda ugly xd
00:54:645 (1,1) - Why are these both NC? Nothing in song or even map to suggest NC, same with 00:57:107 (1,1) - 00:59:568 (1,1) - 01:02:030 (1,2,3,1,2) -
00:55:107 (1,2) - fix blanket xd
00:57:107 (1,1) - fix blanket xd
00:59:415 (8,1) - fix blanket xd
01:00:030 (1,2) - fix blanket xd
01:02:030 (1,2,3,1,2) - Plays kinda weirdly
01:24:184 (1) - Kinda confused me a little my first play
01:26:953 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Not really feeling like this 1-2-1-2 grouping makes sense with the song here and it kinda throws me off
01:34:338 (3) - pls move 5 pixels left thx
01:34:799 (5) - pls move 2 pixels left thx
01:43:261 (5) - NC should be based on song first and foremost, going off your NC scheme this should be NC too

[Ongaku's Another]

00:00:492 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - tbh this is really ugly, can you make it look less 2008
00:04:646 (1) - If your whole shtick in that section is quiet sliderends, then this one breaks the pattern and it's super awkward and you should probably not force this slider here for the sake of your pattern
00:07:261 (5) - nazi: blanket needs a little work
00:12:645 (1,1,1) - Spread issue: questionable that you have 1/8 here even though Mir did not
00:13:030 (2,3) - Based on the spacing so far one might read this as 1/4
00:22:184 (1) - There is no distinct sound here that you mapped to, this is basically a useless slider and you should get rid of it
00:26:568 (2,3) - Not sure if this is meant to be slightly offstacked
00:38:030 (1,1) - They're 1 pixel off on x and y
00:54:645 (1) - blanket needs a little work
00:59:568 (1) - I think you wanted to place this a little bit more to the right

[Shiirngaku's Hyper]

I was willing to forgive a little more in the higher diffs but the sheer amount of overlaps in this diff is not at all appropriate for a Hyper and makes it excessively hard to read
Raise stack leniency so the Hyper players don't get fucked on those 1/2 stacks xd
00:00:492 - to 00:10:338 - literally this ENTIRE first section is WAY too unreadable for a Hyper, ex. patterns like 00:02:953 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
00:26:876 (2,3) - Questionable spacing, not sure on first glance if this is 1/4 or 1/2 gap
00:30:645 (4,5) - Questionable overlap, same here 00:40:491 (4,5) - (I allowed the previous one because both sliderheads were near each other)
00:46:645 (3,4,1) - bad form to have same spacing but 1/1 here instead of 1/2 right before
00:55:415 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - holy unreadable and confusing to play, batman (same here 01:00:338 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - )
00:58:030 (2,1,2,3) - not smart choice of spacing
01:02:030 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - holy fuck this is even worse what were you guys thinking look at this, esp the 3-4
01:32:722 (7,1) - again questionable spacing, but since this isn't the first time I guess it's a little more forgivable

imo this needs a whole lot of work

[Ambient's Advanced]

Hitsound it xd
00:01:415 (4,5) - Not entirely sure where Advanced falls on the "don't break DS, ever" type of deal but I don't really see you do this kind of DS break again in that section so you might as well just make it DS legal
00:10:030 (8,1) - Blanket needs a little work
00:15:261 (1,2) - It's a little ugly
00:23:568 (4,5) - blanket fix
00:36:184 (5,6) - not really curved enough for a full blanket but move it a little so it looks neater
00:58:492 (4,6) - You should rotate either 4 or 6 so they're more parallel
01:16:338 (6,1) - curve just a bit more for good blanket <3
01:34:030 (1) - again, not sure if this DS break is kosher or not lol
01:36:184 (8,1,2,3,4) - this many short repeats might be a little overwhelming for Advanced players, same with 01:41:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -

[Anxient's Easy]

00:03:876 (2,3) - blanket fix xd
00:06:645 (2,3) - blanket fix xd
00:17:722 (3,4) - this overlap? in an easy? sketchy as hell
01:29:415 (1) - Not entirely sure how ok this is, but that's sus

ez only took me like 4 hrs

MaridiuS

878 posts

Joined June 2014

MaridiuS 2017-07-05T23:36:26+00:00

Zexous wrote:
00:02:184 (2,1) - they're touchin tips and it's kinda gay

top kek out of 10, would do anything to get your mod, just no balls touching.

Ongaku

607 posts

Joined January 2014

Ongaku 2017-07-05T23:50:49+00:00

Zexous wrote:
[Ongaku's Another]
00:00:492 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - tbh this is really ugly, can you make it look less 2008 looks fine to me, stuck with the gimmick until 00:04:953 - , so I think its fine.
00:04:646 (1) - If your whole shtick in that section is quiet sliderends, then this one breaks the pattern and it's super awkward and you should probably not force this slider here for the sake of your pattern oops, missed one
00:07:261 (5) - nazi: blanket needs a little work w/e
00:12:645 (1,1,1) - Spread issue: questionable that you have 1/8 here even though Mir did not we're not the same person, I think this is fine, But ill think about it.
00:13:030 (2,3) - Based on the spacing so far one might read this as 1/4 removed the slider, added circles
00:22:184 (1) - There is no distinct sound here that you mapped to, this is basically a useless slider and you should get rid of it the small woosh sound. It's pretty distinct since its the only sound right before the next section
00:26:568 (2,3) - Not sure if this is meant to be slightly offstacked intended, I get triggered by the default stacking
00:38:030 (1,1) - They're 1 pixel off on x and y blame the editor stacking, not me
00:54:645 (1) - blanket needs a little work w/e
00:59:568 (1) - I think you wanted to place this a little bit more to the right looks fine to me

MaridiuS wrote:
[ongaku's another]
00:02:799 (2) - I strongly suggest making this a slider, the following 2 notes are a chore to play, and it fits the structure imo. keeping, otherwise 00:02:953 - will just sound weirder
00:10:338 (1,2,3) - can you make em be visually spaced identically? http://i.imgur.com/WFJOt2U.jpg just move (2) a bit to the left. k
00:14:953 (3,4,5,6) - 00:19:261 (1,2,3,4) - - I suggest making em reversed 1/4 sliders, don't really approve them, the structure is really varied, and this is unneeded imo. they're fine as they are, 1/4 reverse would actually just make it even weirder.
00:25:261 (2) - wish that you put it x:131: y:1 or something, to make it a bit away from the slider. fine as it is, otherwise I'll have to change the whole DS of that specific pattern
00:30:030 (1,2,3,4) - idk but this seems a bit hard to read comapred to rhythmically same patterns. Think you should tone down the overlaps the bit, and if you could make the flow a bit more easier to grasp. The flow is no different than a back and forth. I played it quite fine when i tested it.
00:31:261 (1) - think this needs more emphasis as much emphasis it'll get without breaking aesthetics
00:35:107 (2,4) - mentioned this kind of pattern before. same comment
00:52:184 (1) - why does this look so trippy wew dunno, its distinct so
01:00:645 (3) - wow nice wave slider riding it
mm this difficulty too complicated for me. gitgud

ty <3

http://puu.sh/wCACy/a76fa436be.txt

Shiirn

2,896 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Shiirn 2017-07-06T03:05:22+00:00

Zexous wrote:

rushing out all the mods I need to do before I get busy again

[General]
tbh I don't know if the video is worth it...most people have them off by default in their settings and its 20 mb...imo you should just link it in the description fuck you
The gap between Advanced and Hyper is waaay too big, both settings-wise and actual map difficulty-wise...like, this NEEDS an in-between fuck you
OD on Hyper is higher than Another fuck you wait shit ur right
[Dream Fragments]

holy you are way too fond of overlaps fuck you
00:02:184 (2,1) - they're touchin tips and it's kinda gay you'r gay
00:10:184 (2,3,1) - 0.40x 00:11:184 (2,3) - 0.25x 00:12:722 (3,1) - 0.20x 00:16:107 (2,3) - 0.32x...literally the whole section you refuse to be consistent with your 1/4 spacing. what is this lmao it makes no sense variations this small hardly make any difference to readability, do they?
00:17:722 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - hella hard to read, especially 00:18:184 (3,4,5) - this part by this time the player realizes what kind of patterns and structure are being used
00:34:645 (3,4,1) - I realize you've structured around this so it might not be easy to change but this is an awkward jerk to play i can actually fix this one up

I think in general a lot of these overlaps esp in the fast parts aren't that merited and just make things a lot harder to read but for obvious reasons I won't list them it's good to get a different perspective sometimes, even if that perspective is a nonsensical "i hate overlaps they raped my sister and cucked my father" kinda thing
[Mir's Extra]
00:26:953 (5) - What the hell is this sliderend snapped to? There's literally no sound there??? Plz snap properly This was my fault.
00:54:645 (1,1) - Why are these both NC? Nothing in song or even map to suggest NC, same with 00:57:107 (1,1) - 00:59:568 (1,1) - 01:02:030 (1,2,3,1,2) - These are new combos for the video and fit the pulses in the metronome anyway
01:43:261 (5) - NC should be based on song first and foremost, going off your NC scheme this should be NC too Fixed, this was my error.
[Shiirngaku's Hyper]
I was willing to forgive a little more in the higher diffs but the sheer amount of overlaps in this diff is not at all appropriate for a Hyper and makes it excessively hard to read as mentioned before, I'm mapping for people who can play this game, not people who play whack-an-approach-circle.
Raise stack leniency so the Hyper players don't get fucked on those 1/2 stacks xd
00:00:492 - to 00:10:338 - literally this ENTIRE first section is WAY too unreadable for a Hyper, ex. patterns like 00:02:953 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - As i told you, i've had many playtests, and a mere minor portion of the playerbase just seems incapable of reading overlaps and that's, well, unfortunate for them.
00:26:876 (2,3) - Questionable spacing, not sure on first glance if this is 1/4 or 1/2 gap I suppose so, but I tend to feel like people overstate reading issues like this because they're not actually listening to the music
00:30:645 (4,5) - Questionable overlap, same here 00:40:491 (4,5) - (I allowed the previous one because both sliderheads were near each other) i literally do not understand how this is questionable, do you think it's impossible to see partially obscured objects, or something?
00:46:645 (3,4,1) - bad form to have same spacing but 1/1 here instead of 1/2 right before agree entirely
00:55:415 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - holy unreadable and confusing to play, batman (same here 01:00:338 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - ) again, stacking sometimes confuses some players, i can't work around that minority
00:58:030 (2,1,2,3) - not smart choice of spacing agree
01:02:030 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - holy fuck this is even worse what were you guys thinking look at this, esp the 3-4 shhhhh this was just me
01:32:722 (7,1) - again questionable spacing, but since this isn't the first time I guess it's a little more forgivable

imo this needs a whole lot of work literally the only parts u had issue with were overlaps being hard to read (I really don't think they are) and a few questionalbe spacings which i fixed (the only thing ongaku mapped that u had issue with was 1:32, we swapped at break and that's it)
[Ambient's Advanced]
Hitsound it xd SHIT MY BAD
00:01:415 (4,5) - Not entirely sure where Advanced falls on the "don't break DS, ever" type of deal but I don't really see you do this kind of DS break again in that section so you might as well just make it DS legal fixed
00:10:030 (8,1) - Blanket needs a little work fixed
00:15:261 (1,2) - It's a little ugly not a blanket so uhhh meh
00:23:568 (4,5) - blanket fix fixed
00:36:184 (5,6) - not really curved enough for a full blanket but move it a little so it looks neater fixed
00:58:492 (4,6) - You should rotate either 4 or 6 so they're more parallel looks fine to me
01:16:338 (6,1) - curve just a bit more for good blanket <3 fixed
01:34:030 (1) - again, not sure if this DS break is kosher or not lol I think it's kosher
01:36:184 (8,1,2,3,4) - this many short repeats might be a little overwhelming for Advanced players, same with 01:41:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - well said hypothetical advanced players will get to learn fast or fail
[Anxient's Easy]
00:03:876 (2,3) - blanket fix xd not a blanket
00:06:645 (2,3) - blanket fix xd not a blanket
00:17:722 (3,4) - this overlap? in an easy? sketchy as hell i'll... have anxient do this
01:29:415 (1) - Not entirely sure how ok this is, but that's sus
ez only took me like 4 hrs

Zexous

713 posts

Joined July 2012

Zexous 2017-07-06T03:30:24+00:00

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Ambient

579 posts

Joined August 2013

Ambient 2017-07-06T08:57:58+00:00

Zexous wrote:
[Ambient's Advanced]
Hitsound it xd
00:01:415 (4,5) - Not entirely sure where Advanced falls on the "don't break DS, ever" type of deal but I don't really see you do this kind of DS break again in that section so you might as well just make it DS legal - should be good now ^^
00:10:030 (8,1) - Blanket needs a little work - Fixed!
00:15:261 (1,2) - It's a little ugly - ur ugly. Fixed!
00:23:568 (4,5) - blanket fix - Fixed!
00:36:184 (5,6) - not really curved enough for a full blanket but move it a little so it looks neater - uwu fixed!
00:58:492 (4,6) - You should rotate either 4 or 6 so they're more parallel - Fixed!
01:16:338 (6,1) - curve just a bit more for good blanket <3 - Fixed! <3
01:34:030 (1) - again, not sure if this DS break is kosher or not lol - fixed with the rest
01:36:184 (8,1,2,3,4) - this many short repeats might be a little overwhelming for Advanced players, same with 01:41:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - know what you mean and it is pretty tough to read, but it should be fine, if someone else brings it up i'll probs change.

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MaridiuS

878 posts

Joined June 2014

MaridiuS 2017-07-06T09:22:54+00:00

oh btw shiirn recheck my post on mir's mod, i've shot some shots at yo side

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-07-06T09:48:07+00:00

MaridiuS wrote:
[mir's extra]
00:01:568 (6,6) - These two are similar and in my opinion should both be sliders and also adjust the pauses to make em identical patterns - first one is a bit more held, second one feels more stopped
00:11:722 - shiirn im calling you for NC's, shouldn't the combo color be the same as the background?
00:11:568 - ugh i don't think that pauses really acomplish much in terms of structure, since you have 2 randomly used ones. One happens after a rather weak sound, while the other happens after a strong kick. I suggest filling the rhythm to fit the rest of the section. - disagreed, i'm following the piano thingy exclusively with these pauses
Also shiirn calling you again, but what the heck was done here, many times when i used my left arrow key the editor stopped on its own, while the music was going, therefore needed to press space twice to fix, what the fuck
00:15:568 (2) - you usually tilt the reverse 1/4 sliders to be visually angled differently than other sliders, here its paralel to 00:16:030 (4) - or at least seems to.
00:24:953 (7,1) - 3.27x 00:27:415 (7,1) - 2.13x (if you click on 1 you can see the distance). Think the difference is a tad bit too huge, so i suggest nerfin the 3.27x jump. whats more, 00:27:568 (1) - sounds even more intense as it has a whoosh sound added to it.
00:29:876 (1) - feels weird that you're ignoring the downbeat, the whoosh sound starts on it. - rather piano
00:32:492 (1,2) - on the half of the section, you've put (2) a bit next to (1), and i though you're going to switch some patterning, but no 00:34:953 (1,2) - here its stacked, therefore i suggest stacking the first one too. - do you want a 1/4 stream into 1/2 stack cuz that's how you get a 1/4 stream into 1/2 stack... with perfect stacks.. i'd say borderline unreadable, so I didn't stack them
00:29:568 (1,2,3) - since you decided to add huge spacing to high pitched piano sounds, 00:31:876 (1,2,3) - its a bit troublesome to tone it down when a stream comes for better playability, so i suggest nerfin the 3stack. - I honestly think it's fine, they're there to stand out
00:57:107 (1,1) - obligatory blanket fix to have one green. - not noticeable enough for me to care
01:19:261 (1,2,1,2,1) - mm must you really fill out the whole bottom of the grid, i personally hate playing when stuff is on the bottom ;d - eh, it just happened that way
01:31:107 (6) - uhm not sure why is this slider included, it has a decently clickable slider end. I don't think its necessary to include it for easier gameplay. - for a small respite and a little emphasis on the snare
01:34:492 (4,5) - your usual structuring is either no touching or full overlap, so i suggest to chose one for this too. - 00:29:876 (1,2) - and similar do it as well

Thanks~!

Zexous wrote:
[Mir's Extra]
I don't really see any complex patterns that need stack leniency to be so low so I think you should raise it to make those 1/2 stacks more readable - that's the whole gimmick tho
00:11:876 (2,6) - Why is one of those ever so slightly tilted and the other isn't, I'm so tilted (ha), I think you should point this one 00:12:645 (6) - more towards the next object so it plays and looks less awkward
00:17:722 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Not really important but why all these right angles, it feels so 2009 lol - its my style
00:22:953 (3,4) - fix blanket xd - no xd
00:24:722 (6,7) - Space these closer? It's the first such pattern so would probably be played as 1/2 gap
00:26:953 (5) - What the hell is this sliderend snapped to? There's literally no sound there??? Plz snap properly
00:27:261 (6) - This spacing makes me think the previous slider was supposed to be 1/4 snap and you just somehow fucked it up but anyway yeah with the current snap of the previous slider this spacing is unaccceptable - i don't get it but it was 1.0x like the rest so fixed
00:31:568 (3,4) - These two sliders are shaped differently, pls make them the same
00:52:184 (1) - This buzz is kinda ugly xd - no xd
00:54:645 (1,1) - Why are these both NC? Nothing in song or even map to suggest NC, same with 00:57:107 (1,1) - 00:59:568 (1,1) - 01:02:030 (1,2,3,1,2) -
00:55:107 (1,2) - fix blanket xd - no xd
00:57:107 (1,1) - fix blanket xd - no xd
00:59:415 (8,1) - fix blanket xd - no xd
01:00:030 (1,2) - fix blanket xd - no xd
01:02:030 (1,2,3,1,2) - Plays kinda weirdly - it's just stacked and plays like normal circles for the most part so i'd like to keep this
01:24:184 (1) - Kinda confused me a little my first play - it's a common emphasis tool
01:26:953 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Not really feeling like this 1-2-1-2 grouping makes sense with the song here and it kinda throws me off - I think it does make sense, the song is like that so I mapped it like that o.o
01:34:338 (3) - pls move 5 pixels left thx - no xd
01:34:799 (5) - pls move 2 pixels left thx - no xd
01:43:261 (5) - NC should be based on song first and foremost, going off your NC scheme this should be NC too

Thanks!

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Anxient

1,568 posts

Joined June 2014

Anxient 2017-07-07T04:21:16+00:00

Zexous wrote:
[Anxient's Easy]
00:03:876 (2,3) - blanket fix xd
00:06:645 (2,3) - blanket fix xd
00:17:722 (3,4) - this overlap? in an easy? sketchy as hell - allfix
01:29:415 (1) - Not entirely sure how ok this is, but that's sus - i want to shoot this song in the foot
ez only took me like 4 hrs

Shiirn

2,896 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Shiirn 2017-07-07T22:11:26+00:00

updults

beaw

632 posts

Joined July 2015

beaw 2017-07-07T23:24:14+00:00

[Anxient's Easy]
00:08:799 (2,1) - They're touching wyd :E
00:31:261 (2,1) - These curves don't complement each other at all and it looks really unflattering. You don't have to fix it though. I'm just picky about aesthetics lmao.

[Ambient's Advanced]
00:08:030 (1,4) - I really think you should uncover these just to stay consistent with the no-overlap theme of this diff.
00:10:030 (8,1,3) - wtf lmao blanket 3?
00:20:184 - Why is the break edited?

just wondering
I'm not good at this so I'm done

[Ongaku's Another]
00:00:799 (1) - Cue my OCD because these aren't 100% horizontal xd
[]
k

Anxient

1,568 posts

Joined June 2014

Anxient 2017-07-08T10:47:17+00:00

Stingy wrote:
[Anxient's Easy]
00:08:799 (2,1) - They're touching wyd :E - o
00:31:261 (2,1) - These curves don't complement each other at all and it looks really unflattering. You don't have to fix it though. I'm just picky about aesthetics lmao. - k

http://puu.sh/wExFS/3c168460ca.osu

Ambient

579 posts

Joined August 2013

Ambient 2017-07-09T09:11:29+00:00

Stingy wrote:
[Ambient's Advanced]
00:08:030 (1,4) - I really think you should uncover these just to stay consistent with the no-overlap theme of this diff. fixed!
00:10:030 (8,1,3) - wtf lmao blanket 3? fixed!
00:20:184 - Why is the break edited? just wondering dunno actually, fixed!

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Cherry Blossom

3,185 posts

Joined October 2011

Cherry Blossom 2017-07-30T00:04:55+00:00

It's time to mod.
Oh it's inukoro-san

Anxient's Easy

00:00:492 (1,2) - this is a little wrong, the most audible sounds are snapped on 1/2 but that doesn't mean you can't follow them without creating a polarity issue, try this :
SPOILER
00:02:953 (1,2) - same as ^
SPOILER
00:12:799 (3,1) - could be nice if you avoid this overlap which makes the whole pattern a little ugly.
00:56:338 (3,1) - and 00:57:876 (2,3) - these polarity issues may be unavoidable but if you extend 00:56:338 (3) - and 00:57:876 (2) - to the next white tick, it works and doesn't really sound wrong. Avoiding polarity issues makes lower diff better to read. You avoided polarity issues here 00:59:568 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) -
01:14:338 - to 01:21:722 - so much polarity issues but unavoidable due to the nature of the song maybe...

In case if you don't really know what polarity means watch this video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws

Half's Normal

00:03:722 (3,4) - this sounds a little wrong because you have this beat 00:04:030 - skipped, and this is actually audible. Two 1/2 sliders with a 1/2 gap here is more suitable.
00:08:030 (8) - Make this tick played because there is an audible sound on it and because it will avoid the polarity issue.
00:09:261 (3) - same as ^, make it played or followed by a sliderend to avoid that polarity issue.
00:19:261 (6) - This beat must be played or followed to avoid the polarity issue and to emphasize the white tick where there is a strong beat on it. This pattern is different from the previous ones, so you can make an exception, and it gives a better impression if you do it.
00:41:261 (4,5,6,7,1) - this stream is really difficult to play for a Normal/beginner player, playing 1/2 sliders is a little difficult and adding a circle at the middle of it 00:41:876 (6) - does not really help him. Doing this instead if more suitable
SPOILER
01:36:645 (1,2) - This does not sound correct because the strong beat here 01:36:799 - is only followed by a sliderend and this kind of tick could be played if you swap 01:36:645 (1,2) - , which i find more suitable.

Ambient's Advanced

00:26:338 (5,6,7) - imo, this motion could be improved if you move this circle 00:26:799 (6) - at the left of this slider 00:26:338 (5) - instead of making a "blanket", this would be more linear and comfortable to play. If you don't see what i mean, i suggest you to make something like that
SPOILER
01:40:338 (5) - This was really unexpected that you skipped this beat. I leave a 1/1 gap and it looks a little weird because it is a kind of slowdown in the most intense part of the song. Consider using a 1/2 slider here.

Shiirngaku's Hyper

00:27:261 (6,7,1) - this is a little broken here, i mean it's better to play something super linear than playing something which as a angle of 170°. But it would be difficult to arrange this pattern to make 00:27:261 (6,7,1) - really straight with an angle of 180°. But at least, fix the distance between 00:27:261 (6,7) - and 00:27:415 (7,1) - which is not the same.
01:16:492 (2,1) - compared to what there are before, this plays really forced in a section which is more calm. It woud be better if you reduce the distance between these objects, because the transition between 01:16:492 (2,1) - is really difficult to handle for a Hard player, a lower distance will help him to handle this properly.

Ongaku's Another

00:23:876 (1,2,3) - this current motion is not really comfortable to play, if you move this circle 00:24:184 (2) - upward to make an angle under 90° it will make it more comfortable to play. (stacking with 00:24:799 (4) - 's end is not really a good idea here)

Mir's Extra

00:07:415 (5) - I suggest you to use circles instead of this 1/2 slider to make these 3 notes you can hear emphasized better. You dit it here 00:09:876 (4,5,6) - . Same for 00:08:645 (4) -
00:27:184 - I don't really get why you skipped one of the most important beat of this pattern, and just followed it with a 3/4 slider's end. It would give better feelings and impression if you make this beat 00:27:184 - played with a circle. Same for 00:36:799 (5,6) -
00:44:799 (1) - / 00:52:184 (1) - / Using red anchors to change slider's speed like this is now allowed in 2017 ? I remember ppy said something like "let's throw this shit out" in 2012 o.o (just asking becore i'm a before-2015-mapper and modder)
01:25:876 (4,5) - You should not really stack these circles which follows really strong notes in the music, to make them emphasized better. Stacking them would make them appear like 01:27:107 (3,4) - which is not the same sound and intensity. At least, make this 01:25:876 (4,5) - different from 01:35:722 (4,5) - . They are at the same place (but in different section), they are done same, but that's not the same sound's intensity that they follow.

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01:36:492 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Improve this shape, this is a little ugly, use this code :

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Good luck ~
(edit : i didn't copy/paste the right code)

Last edited by Cherry Blossom 2017-07-31T15:05:09+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Mir

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2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-07-30T00:10:25+00:00

Cherry Blossom wrote:
Mir's Extra
00:07:415 (5) - I suggest you to use circles instead of this 1/2 slider to make these 3 notes you can hear emphasized better. You dit it here 00:09:876 (4,5,6) - . Same for 00:08:645 (4) -
00:27:184 - I don't really get why you skipped one of the most important beat of this pattern, and just followed it with a 3/4 slider's end. It would give better feelings and impression if you make this beat 00:27:184 - played with a circle. Same for 00:36:799 (5,6) -
00:44:799 (1) - / 00:52:184 (1) - / Using red anchors to change slider's speed like this is now allowed in 2017 ? I remember ppy said something like "let's throw this shit out" in 2012 o.o (just asking becore i'm a before-2015-mapper and modder) - these are now allowed with the revision to the rc so i decided to use them
01:25:876 (4,5) - You should not really stack these circles which follows really strong notes in the music, to make them emphasized better. Stacking them would make them appear like 01:27:107 (3,4) - which is not the same sound and intensity. At least, make this 01:25:876 (4,5) - different from 01:35:722 (4,5) - . They are at the same place (but in different section), they are done same, but that's not the same sound's intensity that they follow. - while i understand where you're coming from just spacing it more actually reduces the emphasis imo since everything else is spaced out, i also did this kinda with drums in mind since there's two beats instead of the usual one

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Thanks Cherry Blossom!

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Halfslashed

Global Moderator

425 posts

Joined July 2014

Halfslashed 2017-07-30T00:41:13+00:00

Cherry Blossom wrote:
It's time to mod.
Oh it's inukoro-san

Half's Normal
00:03:722 (3,4) - this sounds a little wrong because you have this beat 00:04:030 - skipped, and this is actually audible. Two 1/2 sliders with a 1/2 gap here is more suitable.
I'd prefer more opinions on this, since i'm following the higher pitch synth rather than the background.
00:08:030 (8) - Make this tick played because there is an audible sound on it and because it will avoid the polarity issue.
Read below.
00:09:261 (3) - same as ^, make it played or followed by a sliderend to avoid that polarity issue.
3/2 gaps are not a gameplay issue at the normal difficulty, since normal difficulties are intended to get the player used to more intricate rhythms (such as 1/2) and should have an idea of how to read rhythm by distance. At this base SV, the distance difference between 3/2 and 1/1 is also large enough to be clearly recognizable. Mapping the beats you linked also detracts from the focus on the melody beats i'm doing here.
00:19:261 (6) - This beat must be played or followed to avoid the polarity issue and to emphasize the white tick where there is a strong beat on it. This pattern is different from the previous ones, so you can make an exception, and it gives a better impression if you do it.
I like your suggestion here since I think it fits the chimes or whatever better.
00:41:261 (4,5,6,7,1) - this stream is really difficult to play for a Normal/beginner player, playing 1/2 sliders is a little difficult and adding a circle at the middle of it 00:41:876 (6) - does not really help him. Doing this instead if more suitable
SPOILER
Circles actually serve as breaks of long chains of sliders, and each component of this end-of-kiai pattern has already been introduced: 00:01:876 (4,5) - 00:02:799 (6,1) - 00:02:953 (1,2) - 00:06:799 (5,6,7) - 00:26:953 (6,1,2) - 00:31:415 (4,5,6,7) - all sequentially prepare the player to hit a pattern like this, and since it is the climax for one of the most intense parts of the song, I don't plan on changing this.
01:36:645 (1,2) - This does not sound correct because the strong beat here 01:36:799 - is only followed by a sliderend and this kind of tick could be played if you swap 01:36:645 (1,2) - , which i find more suitable.
I disagree - this entire map i've been prioritizing the kicks over the snares, while your suggested rhythm does the opposite of that.
Good luck ~

Thanks!

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Ambient

579 posts

Joined August 2013

Ambient 2017-07-30T02:11:34+00:00

Cherry Blossom wrote:
Ambient's Advanced
00:26:338 (5,6,7) - imo, this motion could be improved if you move this circle 00:26:799 (6) - at the left of this slider 00:26:338 (5) - instead of making a "blanket", this would be more linear and comfortable to play. If you don't see what i mean, i suggest you to make something like that - gotchya, fixed!
SPOILER
01:40:338 (5) - This was really unexpected that you skipped this beat. I leave a 1/1 gap and it looks a little weird because it is a kind of slowdown in the most intense part of the song. Consider using a 1/2 slider here. - sure thang

Thanks for the mod CB !

Update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54645
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 5415,10338,20184,22645,32492,42338,44799,54645,64492,74338,84184,94030,103876,113568
DistanceSpacing: 2.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:Altros
TitleUnicode:Altros
Artist:ARForest
ArtistUnicode:ARForest
Creator:Shiirn
Version:Ambient's Advanced
Source:BMS
Tags:PABAT! 2017 k-bms inukoro artcore Ambient Halfslashed Anxient Mir Ongaku
BeatmapID:1330147
BeatmapSetID:625822

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:0.849999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"abstract-futuristic.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,20384,21445
2,42538,43749
2,64691,73288
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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22645,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
42338,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
84184,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
103876,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 232,197,89
Combo2 : 0,202,0
Combo3 : 18,124,255
Combo4 : 242,24,57
Combo5 : 255,192,0
Combo6 : 142,237,80
Combo7 : 92,73,224
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Shiirn

2,896 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Shiirn 2017-08-01T15:39:12+00:00

I compared and contrasted the streams and although the original is indeed slightly awkward, I feel that it fits the cascade better. Will update the rest when ongaku and anxient are done.

Anxient

1,568 posts

Joined June 2014

Anxient 2017-08-03T15:16:46+00:00

Cherry Blossom wrote:
It's time to mod.
Oh it's inukoro-san

Anxient's Easy
00:00:492 (1,2) - this is a little wrong, the most audible sounds are snapped on 1/2 but that doesn't mean you can't follow them without creating a polarity issue, try this :
SPOILER
00:02:953 (1,2) - same as ^
SPOILER

==for both of the above: sure they might be the most audible, but those notes you told me to follow are beats i wouldnt classify as main beats. theyre loud, sure but i think following them would make the rhythm too abstract for low-level players. the lower pitched is more easier to follow, albeit a little softer.
00:12:799 (3,1) - could be nice if you avoid this overlap which makes the whole pattern a little ugly. - gotcha
00:56:338 (3,1) - and 00:57:876 (2,3) - these polarity issues may be unavoidable but if you extend 00:56:338 (3) - and 00:57:876 (2) - to the next white tick, it works and doesn't really sound wrong. Avoiding polarity issues makes lower diff better to read. You avoided polarity issues here 00:59:568 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - crisis averted
01:14:338 - to 01:21:722 - so much polarity issues but unavoidable due to the nature of the song maybe... - cries

In case if you don't really know what polarity means watch this video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws - mm..

http://puu.sh/x0Bdk/694d9bd25d.osu

Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2017-08-11T20:36:59+00:00

why

[Anxient's Easy :]

AR2 is a bit weak for that BPM, also making the gap with Normal quite huge (2 -> 5,5). AR3 fits more (also having AR<OD is retarded for low diffs).
Also wtf HP4 ? No pls HP2 or 3 max.
01:15:722 - Skiping that is just not possible, since it sounds really weird to not clic it when you do for other and for making 01:16:184 - this played when there's nothing interesting here. Also you don't skip that beat at 01:18:184 - / 01:20:338 - so do the same here.

[Half's Normal :]

00:02:799 (6,1) - Swap them, having 00:03:107 - not clicked is nonsense since 00:02:953 - is more weak. Just try you'll see.
00:04:030 - Obvious strong beat ignored and sounds terrible. Do smth like https://puu.sh/x7Dpb/d347ddd097.png (you can change 00:04:338 (4,5) - for a slider ofc).
00:08:184 (1) - This one should be a reverse starting at 00:08:030 - who would make sense with 00:08:645 (2) - .
00:47:876 - Should be silenced (or smth around 10% volume). Same for 00:52:799 - .
01:02:030 - I would rather not skip that one instead of 01:02:184 - . Something like https://puu.sh/x7DLc/b97a5e240b.png would fit more the song than your reverse slider who start in the middle of a drum section who feels off.
01:27:568 (4,5) - I would do it like you did for 01:41:261 (7,1) - (or the opposite but something similar for both would have more sense).

[Ambient's Advanced :]

OD5 maybe ? Having same one than Normal seems odd.
00:29:722 - This beat is 1000x stronger and interesting to play than doing that extended slider. Also inconsistent with rest of your rhythm here. Same for 00:39:261 (7) - .
00:58:030 (3,5) - Really ? You was obligated to do that bad looking overlap ? :c
01:02:492 (2,6) - Was intended to not stack ? Because looks meh.
01:15:261 (3) - / 01:20:184 (3) - I think you should remove it, the beat is too weak to be clicked, also you skip them with some sliders like 01:19:722 (2) - so that would make sense, and having small breaks on that calm section would be more coherent.

[Shiirngaku's Hyper :]

Sorry but stack leniency 2 is but a big no. If you want to make that kind of pattern unreadable and frustrating as possible yes maybe; but that's not what we expect from that kind of diff. 4 is a better value.
01:02:799 (3) - If I follow the logic of putting NC on 01:02:492 (1) - , this one or 01:02:953 (4) - should be too no ?
01:16:492 (2,1) - This gap is just a massive diffspike on a slow section and also the only one. Do as other you did here like 01:18:953 (2,1) - .
01:23:876 (2) - Clearly useless NC here, they're both the same and don't need specific emphasis through a NC. Same for 01:42:953 (1) - .

[Ongaku's Another :]

00:12:645 (1,1) - I understand why you did that, but that's totally overdone for a calm section, simple triplet works much better here.
00:17:415 (1,1,1,1) - Same
01:13:722 (1) -
Buzz sliders should have appropriate delay before the next note. 1/8 and 1/16 sliders should be followed by a 1/4 gap, whereas 1/12 sliders should be followed by a 1/6 gap. This ensures that the hit-window between hit objects is playable.
01:36:799 (1) - Why a NC ? That's totally unnecessary. Same for 01:43:568 (1) - .

[Mir's Extra :]

00:29:568 (1,2,3) - I don't really understand why you did spaced triplet when you didn't for the 2nd kiai who is a bit more intense. It doesn't make sense as a whole.
01:14:030 (2) - Should end on 01:14:184 - to follow correctly that sound. Also reduce volume at the end of it.

[Dream Fragments :]

Why this diffname ?
00:05:415 (1) - / 00:07:876 (1) - No, skipping 00:05:568 - / 00:08:030 - after you map all the similar beat is inconsistent, end on nothing, and looks like a mistake.
00:50:184 (1) - This reverse don't fit the song in any way. The peace is too fast to call a simple 1/8 reverse here. I would rather see a distorded slider or a faster reverse here. Also the shape is kinda meh and a clear straight one would looks better for a reverse.

Shiirn

2,896 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Shiirn 2017-08-11T21:46:48+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
why

[img]img] fixed

[Anxient's Easy :]
fixed all

[Ambient's Advanced :]
OD5 maybe ? Having same one than Normal seems odd. fix
00:29:722 - This beat is 1000x stronger and interesting to play than doing that extended slider. Also inconsistent with rest of your rhythm here. Same for 00:39:261 (7) - . it's consistent, the streams are bad with a click and the slider works fine
00:58:030 (3,5) - Really ? You was obligated to do that bad looking overlap ? :c deal with it
01:02:492 (2,6) - Was intended to not stack ? Because looks meh. fix
01:15:261 (3) - / 01:20:184 (3) - I think you should remove it, the beat is too weak to be clicked, also you skip them with some sliders like 01:19:722 (2) - so that would make sense, and having small breaks on that calm section would be more coherent. fix
[Shiirngaku's Hyper :]
Sorry but stack leniency 2 is but a big no. If you want to make that kind of pattern unreadable and frustrating as possible yes maybe; but that's not what we expect from that kind of diff. 4 is a better value. Cleaned up the 1/2 stacks outside of the middle sequence at 00:47:541 - . There, they are fine, if not absolutely fitting.
01:02:799 (3) - If I follow the logic of putting NC on 01:02:492 (1) - , this one or 01:02:953 (4) - should be too no ? actually on 6 but yeah yeah
01:16:492 (2,1) - This gap is just a massive diffspike on a slow section and also the only one. Do as other you did here like 01:18:953 (2,1) - . fuck symmetry right, modified
01:23:876 (2) - Clearly useless NC here, they're both the same and don't need specific emphasis through a NC. Same for 01:42:953 (1) - . these are staying though, they're fine and fit the pattern aesthetic
[Dream Fragments :]
Why this diffname ?
00:05:415 (1) - / 00:07:876 (1) - No, skipping 00:05:568 - / 00:08:030 - after you map all the similar beat is inconsistent, end on nothing, and looks like a mistake. This is going to come down to mapping choice. 00:05:415 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - The entire pattern setup here and combos are designed to tell the player "okay, we're done following the tones, there's involvement from the kicks and the like here. This is why the angle and style of back-and-forth changes as well, it's following the introduction of another instrument. It's changing because the music is changing, and having a 3/4 slider lead it off into a bunch of circles is about as unsubtle as you can get to tell the player "hey, new instruments up". This is fundamentally, how I map. I go from section to section and pattern to pattern designing ways to represent them and their changes.
00:50:184 (1) - This reverse don't fit the song in any way. The peace is too fast to call a simple 1/8 reverse here. I would rather see a distorded slider or a faster reverse here. Also the shape is kinda meh and a clear straight one would looks better for a reverse. This is like a 3/8 repeat hold slider so it ends up being like 3/4 in functionality and it's designed to "feel weird" because that static is interjecting, I don't see much issue with this choice

Everyone: UPDATE THE MAP BEFORE FURTHER APPLYING YOUR OWN CHANGES.

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-08-11T23:30:11+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
[Mir's Extra :]
00:29:568 (1,2,3) - I don't really understand why you did spaced triplet when you didn't for the 2nd kiai who is a bit more intense. It doesn't make sense as a whole. - it's a more staccato sound for the first kiai and it doesn't repeat in the second kiai
01:14:030 (2) - Should end on 01:14:184 - to follow correctly that sound. Also reduce volume at the end of it.

Fixed the other thing.~

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Halfslashed

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Joined July 2014

Halfslashed 2017-08-12T18:43:08+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
why

[Half's Normal :]
00:02:799 (6,1) - Swap them, having 00:03:107 - not clicked is nonsense since 00:02:953 - is more weak. Just try you'll see.
You're right, fixed.
00:04:030 - Obvious strong beat ignored and sounds terrible. Do smth like https://puu.sh/x7Dpb/d347ddd097.png (you can change 00:04:338 (4,5) - for a slider ofc).
Used a 1/2 reverse here instead. I still want to prioritize 00:03:876 - here.
00:08:184 (1) - This one should be a reverse starting at 00:08:030 - who would make sense with 00:08:645 (2) - .
Would prefer to keep what I have since both of these sliders only map the melody sounds. The first slider not being a reverse since that is only a pair of melody beats, while the second mapping three melody beats.
00:47:876 - Should be silenced (or smth around 10% volume). Same for 00:52:799 - .
Ok.
01:02:030 - I would rather not skip that one instead of 01:02:184 - . Something like https://puu.sh/x7DLc/b97a5e240b.png would fit more the song than your reverse slider who start in the middle of a drum section who feels off.
Problem with the rhythm you provided is that it would create a really long chain of 1/2 beats, which I'd prefer to avoid for a normal difficulty. Additionally, I'd rather have as many kicks clickable as I can - but use 1/2 repeats for the constant kick-kick-snare patterns since it just isn't practical to use circle+1/2 slider in cases like this.
01:27:568 (4,5) - I would do it like you did for 01:41:261 (7,1) - (or the opposite but something similar for both would have more sense).
Well here i'm just making the kicks clickable like i usually try to do - I do understand that what I do for 01:41:261 (7,1) - is inconsistent with what I usually do for these cases (normally that would just be a 1/2 slider) but I would prefer to lead into the spinner with a clickable beat rather than a slider tail for a strong finish.

Thanks!

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215,281,60953,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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24,244,61876,1,0,3:0:0:0:
24,244,62030,5,0,3:0:0:0:
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365,75,74338,118,0,B|310:79|310:79|248:69,1,110
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512,203,77261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2017-08-12T22:18:03+00:00

K Shiirn actually fixed Ongaku diff and is k (blame him to forget in first place).

Seems fine to me

Bub~

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pishifat 2017-08-17T05:46:01+00:00

mir
00:11:415 (5) - 00:16:338 (6) - 00:16:492 (1) - 35% volume
00:29:568 (1,2,3) - so easy to see inconsistent spacing when 1,2 overlap and 2,3 don't

shiirngaku
aimod buddy

ambient
shoudl go with ar7/od6 tbh. ar6 is kinda too slow for ur spacing n rhyhtm stuff
also silly that normal is only .5 lower lol

anxient
00:03:876 (2) - 01:22:953 (2) - 35% volume

call someone back!!
then call me back!!!!!

Shiirn

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Shiirn 2017-08-17T06:15:07+00:00

pishifat wrote:
mir
00:11:415 (5) - 00:16:338 (6) - 00:16:492 (1) - 35% volume i just delete 15% volume lines o theres lots of 35% lines but nobody cares about excess green lines banzai
00:29:568 (1,2,3) - so easy to see inconsistent spacing when 1,2 overlap and 2,3 don't moving 1 pixel left makes perfect, if only life was that easy

shiirngaku
aimod buddy motherfucker how

ambient
shoudl go with ar7/od6 tbh. ar6 is kinda too slow for ur spacing n rhyhtm stuff smh i remember the days when people thought AR9 was too high AR for anything other than super insane and now people are like TOO MANY OBJECTS ON SCREEN MY WEE BRAIN CANT KEEP TRACK and now we have people playing Easy and getting called reading gods
also silly that normal is only .5 lower lol

anxient
00:03:876 (2) - 01:22:953 (2) - 35% volume i delet 15%s

call someone back!!
then call me back!!!!!

hi i'd like to place a collect call

Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2017-08-25T21:09:17+00:00

K seems kool now

Shiirn

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Shiirn 2017-08-25T21:09:59+00:00

fuck the police

pishifat

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pishifat 2017-08-27T05:22:59+00:00

ok!

Shinsekai-

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Shinsekai- 2017-08-27T16:58:56+00:00

gratz :^)

Pachiru

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Pachiru 2017-08-27T19:51:50+00:00

I really like the last diff, cause it's pretty original, and it's challenging by its overlaps, congratz Shiirn.

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