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Modders
Thank you everyone for modding. Rhythm has improved a lot and aesthetic was set accordingly to avoid the cramped overlaps. Very very Thanks! \w/
Update
https://pastebin.com/fzyxdRbK
- asdf fixed
- asdf not fixed + explanation
Modders
- bite your deathUta2017-12-24 05:48 bite you death: ACTION is editing 96neko - Uso no Hibana [Rocket's Hard]
2017-12-24 05:48 bite you death: 00:01:979 (4) - imo this should be 1/1 ✓
2017-12-24 05:48 bite you death: cause 1 theres a sound at 00:02:298 - and 2 consistency
2017-12-24 05:48 bite you death: 00:02:617 (5,1) - this gap is huuuuuuuuge ✓
2017-12-24 05:49 bite you death: 00:03:574 (2,3,1) - this looks ugly and messy tbh ✓
2017-12-24 05:49 bite you death: move 00:04:372 (1) - to the left a bit to fix ✓
2017-12-24 05:49 bite you death: 00:05:808 - there's a sound here I know but to set up some variation, I decided to skip those so it doesn't look i'm following the same 1/2 rhythm over and over
2017-12-24 05:50 bite you death: 00:10:915 - here too ^
2017-12-24 05:50 bite you death: 00:18:255 (4,1) - some of these gaps are just so huge ✓
2017-12-24 05:50 bite you death: like
2017-12-24 05:50 bite you death: thats bigger than on top diff
2017-12-24 05:51 bite you death: 00:20:968 (1,1,1) - this feels super cramped compared to everything before ✓
2017-12-24 05:52 bite you death: 00:27:351 (1) - here you emphasize this sound with spacing and 00:28:628 (1) - here you dont Variation wise
2017-12-24 05:52 bite you death: 00:29:904 (1,2) - can improve this parallel ✓
2017-12-24 05:52 bite you death: 00:31:660 - there's a sound here for sure ✓
2017-12-24 05:52 bite you death: 00:29:106 - too ✓
2017-12-24 05:52 bite you death: 00:30:383 - to ✓
2017-12-24 05:53 bite you death: o
2017-12-24 05:53 bite you death: 00:33:415 (7) - shorten to 1/2 as there is a sound at 00:33:576 - ✓
2017-12-24 05:53 bite you death: 00:35:649 - perhaps make this clickable? Hmmmm that would make a lot circles to click after the slider ;w;
2017-12-24 05:53 bite you death: 00:35:968 (3,2,3) - bad stack ✓
2017-12-24 05:54 bite you death: 00:41:872 (3,1) - this rhythm can be improved a lot ✓
2017-12-24 05:55 bite you death: https://puu.sh/yMQtP.png
2017-12-24 05:55 bite you death: 00:41:234 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - use that rhythm here ✓
2017-12-24 05:55 bite you death: 00:48:096 (2) - no reason for this spacing ✓
2017-12-24 05:55 bite you death: 00:48:894 - make this clickable ✓
2017-12-24 05:56 bite you death: 00:51:128 (5) - shorten to 1/2 and then move 00:51:606 (1) - back to red tick before it ✓
2017-12-24 05:57 bite you death: actually move 00:51:606 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - back 1/2 beat ✓
2017-12-24 05:57 bite you death: and add circle at 00:53:840 - ✓
2017-12-24 05:57 bite you death: 00:55:755 (3,4) - replace with 1/4 repeat maybe? the 1/4 sound starts here Questionable, I kinda agree but that would increase the momentum I gave to the upcoming 1/2 sliders so it's better to sooth out a little.
2017-12-24 05:58 bite you death: 01:06:287 (7) - change to 1/2 repeat? there's a sound at 01:06:447 - so ye ✓
2017-12-24 05:58 bite you death: 01:07:085 - 01:17:138 (1,2,3,4,5) - this
2017-12-24 05:58 bite you death: is
2017-12-24 05:58 bite you death: oops
2017-12-24 05:58 bite you death: 01:17:138 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is not good
2017-12-24 05:59 bite you death: this seems like a stream
2017-12-24 05:59 bite you death: there's nothing that really indicates that its not
2017-12-24 05:59 bite you death: please change that
2017-12-24 05:59 bite you death: its also very dense
2017-12-24 05:59 bite you death: i'd suggest sliders
2017-12-24 05:59 bite you death: and replace the repeat sliders with circles Hmm not sure. I barely managed triplets with such as spacing here so I don't think it looks like a stream since even the rhythm comes quite 1/2 rhythmical here.[[Pika]][Rocket's Hard]
00:28:947 (3) - this slider is covering up a lot of important sounds ✓
00:28:628 - from that point. I dont really know what you followed here, map vocals like https://i.imgur.com/2zdFPzU.png seems more rhythm wise ✓
00:31:500 (1,2) - ctrl g rhythm? Nuuuu! That would make the main spot being a offbeat hence would player more weird. /w\
00:42:511 - make that 1/1 slider instead ✓
the aesthetic and flow is awesome but the rhythm choice is a bit.. yeaWakurocket - 00:02:617 (5) - repos as shown, flows better & isnt as cramped https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9843292 ✓ Did something similar!
- 00:15:862 (1,2) - blanket? ✓
- 00:29:585 (5,1,2,3) - vocal emphasis is where ✓
- 00:29:904 (1,2) - fix curves ✓
- 00:35:011 (1) - spagoot ✓
- 01:17:138 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - theres no reason to increase ds on second set, fix
- 01:19:691 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ye Yes there is! In order to put up some variation I decided managing a lower Ds in the first five circles so to avoid any confusion with the next stanza I increased the DS to make them slightly different.
Rocket
[notice]Why did you continue to follow ds and not emphasize 00:02:617 (5) - ?
Compare 00:06:925 (1,2) - to 00:08:681 (2,3) - to 00:11:234 (2,3) - Yeah, this is something I should get consistent in order to avoid any confusion but for now I'll leave it as is.
00:22:245 (1) - Nc here isn't really needed. ✓
To be honest, this difficulty is really nice, but emphasizing is quite weird, although I only mentioned one thing, I would look through the map slowly if I were you.
Update
https://pastebin.com/fzyxdRbK