xtrem3x wrote:

Yunomi map ... 1 star (-w-)/

Arrival wrote:

SPOILER

Muzukashii :

00:13:876 - to 00:24:376 - this part is overall too dense, consider deleting notes such as 00:18:751 (45) - 00:20:063 (50) - or 00:21:563 (56) - so you keep the same rhythm while making it easier
-02:30:376 - same here
deleted these

00:24:657 (72,73,74) - Id also suggest removing these 3 notes so you can have a 2/1 break before the next part
If I delete that 3notes, the difference with Oni becomes strict, so I changed "_kk_d_d_d_K" to "__kkk_d_d_K".

00:49:501 (172) - As for this one
I keep it because the audible sound is ringing.

01:07:876 (231) - I think something like this will provide a good gameplay based on vocals while also being easier
- If you do so move 01:10:407 (242) - to 01:10:501 -
-01:55:876 (424) - same thing here
Because the rhythm of a unique drum which is only in several places is ringing, I want to follow as much as possible...

01:12:751 (255,256) - Remove these two notes and put this 01:13:126 (257) - as don so you have a 2/1 break and a good emphasis on 01:13:501 (258) -
If I changed it, the difference with Oni becomes strict. I changed "kdk" to "kdd"

Inner Oni :

00:36:657 - I think adding a note here and removing 00:37:219 (203) - would suit a bit better
I also thought it was nice, but since ddk is continuous, I changed the last part to kdk.

01:12:938 (41,42) - ctrl+g these two notes so you can further emphasize 01:13:501 (44) -
fixed

02:54:938 - what about
It is interesting

call me back

Arrival wrote:

Set looks fine i think we can give it a shot

Surono wrote:

Futsuu
suggestion about sliders, feel free to not applied if you dont like it ( but seems taiko needs more slider lul )
00:22:876 - ~ 00:23:626 - change it into slider
01:10:876 - ~ 01:11:626 - ^
02:34:876 - ~ 02:35:626 - and 02:35:813 - delete
I think that it can express intuitively the vocal and distinctive drum sound, so keep it all.

03:04:501 - 03:10:501 - delete these to avoid a bit close with muzu
deleted some notes


Muzukashii
02:53:719 - delete it to keep consistent with emphasizes more on 02:53:251 (70,71,72,74,75,76,77) - 1/2 sounds, 3plet 02:54:563 - enouhg in here.
I think I should follow up actively as this phrase is only in this one measure.
02:55:688 - delete, seems overdone if you did this.

call me back when its already 24h

Surono wrote:

Nominated

tasuke912 wrote:

Congratz!

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

toara_fict wrote:

gj

Akemi_Homura wrote:

gratz~~

spboxer3 wrote:

02:43:126 (36,37,38,39,40) - just kinda curious, 02:43:251 (37) - intentional 1/6 beat or just missed snap to 1/6 cuz it's not start at downbeat. x.x