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mod mod mod mod mod mod mod mod mod :D

Folda:
Clean!

Easy:
01:16:369 (3,4) - oh noooo. slider 3's middle tick is symmetrical but slider 4's isnt. D: is there a way to fix this?
01:24:645 (3) - move this 1 grid point to the right so the beginning lands on the y-axis?
01:26:300 (2,1) - I personally like this pattern but I'm also not sure if easy players would be able to read this.
01:42:852 (4) - this slider isnt like the rest of your symmetrical arch sliders, make like so?
01:55:266 (3,5) - same situation as the above statement.
02:50:714 (2) - ^^^^
03:22:990 (2,3,4,5,6) - crud I like this pattern but note 5 is touching the HP bar ;_;
03:38:714 (5) - this number 5 is also touching the HP bar.

Normal:
01:16:576 (5,6) - come on you have such epic patterns but number 6 ended up touching HP bar ;-;
01:39:335 (6) - move this to the right 1 to keep consistent spacing?
02:12:645 (2) - you are a HP bar rapist.
02:27:542 (3,4) - not that anyone would notice while playing but the ends are slightly unstacked, stack them?

Hard:
01:00:024 (9) - move this to the right 1 so its vertical with previous note and creates a triangle shape with the 2 previous objects.
02:05:818 (3) - to the right 1 grid point pleasee.

Insane:
01:14:714 (1,3) - you should stack the ending of slider 1 and the beginning of slider 3 just a teeny bit better.
01:48:852 (8,9,10,11) - something about this pattern is screaming unsymmetrical a bit, try to fix that?
01:54:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - 20 combo u mad? you should shorten that :o
03:37:887 (6,7) - stack these a bit better please.
03:46:783 (3,6) - stack these a bit better too please.

All done.
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General
  1. What about change your tags? :)
  2. Your mp3 has variated bitrate changes, then I re-enconded it to 192kbps and it become shorter, so you can download the re-encoded mp3 here if you want to change.
  3. No guest diffs and a complete mapset? Larto, you are my hero.


Easy
  1. 00:46:576 (5) - Why this Ohverlap? I suggest you to change it, It looks ugly and I know you can do better :)
  2. 01:05:611 (4) - Nothing better than a good nazi mod right? Can you please remove this overlap sir?
  3. 01:13:059 (2) - Ohoverlap here sir?
  4. 01:27:955 (1) - The worst overlap that Marina saw on her life.
  5. 03:05:611 (1) - Sir, here I suggest you to finish your slider on 03:08:507 and grab the start of the break to 03:08:921
  6. 03:28:783 (2) - Nice Slider, ugly overlap :(
  7. 02:39:128 (1) - Listen to the vocals, the "Haaaands!" starts on 02:39:542, what about to move the start of the slider?
  8. You are good with hitsounds but I have some Hitsounds to point out here:
    1. 03:28:783 (2) - Here, listen the drums, there is no claps! I suggest you to remove the clap here and keep the whistle on the next slider start:)
    2. 02:22:576 (4) - What about to add a clap on the start?
    3. 03:24:645 (6) - Nothing here? Add a clap for the drums sake.


Normal
  1. The overlaps are gone, I don't have what suggest here, just the grap break on 03:05:611 (1) - and some hitsounds:
    1. 01:08:921 (1) - Oh, a clap on the start fits perfectly, Will make a good "fill in" here.
    2. 02:11:818 (8) - I don't think Finish firs here, I suggest a clap.
    3. 02:31:680 (6) - There is no Hitsounds on the end of this slider? Add a clap or whistle to make the pattern more consistent.
    4. 03:00:232 (4) - This clap has no sense.


Hard

  1. Since, I have nothing to say about this diff. I have to give you some hitsounds suggestions:
    1. 00:46:576 (6) - Clap on the end looks better than Nothing.
    2. 02:02:507 (3) - To improve this fill-in I suggest add a clap here.
    3. 02:59:818 (3) - The clap on the end looks a bit random.
    4. 03:22:990 (2) - Maybe add clap to follow the drums better?
    5. 03:24:231 (4) - And the same to the end of this slider.
    6. 03:29:611 (4) - And the same here.
    7. 03:30:852 (6) - And the same to the end of this slider.[not copy/paste]


Insane

  1. I don't like that much of this difficulty because you use a mapping style with fast 1/2 snapped notes moving like a circle, amd for me it's bad because I can't heat them 1 per 1, My cursor moves like a cirlcle and I hit randomic. It's me, not you, good job!
  2. Your hitsounds and stuff are all perfect!


Can you avaliate my mod with a note by 1 to 10?
The points:
  1. Post Design
  2. English
  3. Useful suggestions
  4. Other("Feel free to comment suggestions and stuff here.")
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Post Design: 10/10. Very readable and pretty.
English: 6.5/10. You do have some heavy grammar errors ("I don't like that much of this difficulty", "I don't have what suggest here"), but it is generally very understandable, and can be ignored.
Useful suggestions: 8/10. Your hitsounds suggestions were very useful, your overlap ones, meh, maybe not so much. I personally do not think that some of these overlaps were that ugly. That's probably subjective though! For "What about change your tags? :)" you could have pointed out why to change the tags, and what to. But often enough, you gave good suggestions and good reasons.
Other("Feel free to comment suggestions and stuff here."): Not much to point out, actually. Your Marina pictures made me chuckle :P

Overall: 24.5/30 = 8.16/10 = 8/10
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03:55 <LunaticMara> : I'm going to leave notes in here, this will take a moment though.
03:55 <Larto> : kay kay
03:55 <LunaticMara> : Please notice that all statements are my opinions and they can be ignored if needed.
03:55 <Larto> : Yup yup
03:56 <LunaticMara> : I'll start with Easy
03:57 <LunaticMara> : Circle Size +1 (this and harder diff has the same CS)
03:57 <Larto> : But it's already at the largest circle size :<
03:57 <LunaticMara> : wat
03:57 <Larto> : lol
03:57 <LunaticMara> : holy shit
03:58 <LunaticMara> : then uhh... make harder diff CS smaller?
03:58 <Larto> : But then Normal and Hard would have the same circle size
03:58 <Larto> : and I'd have to make Hard smaller
03:58 <Larto> : And Insane too
03:58 <Larto> : And that'd become messy
03:58 <LunaticMara> : Then Insane is.... SUPER INSANE
03:58 <Larto> : D:
03:58 <LunaticMara> : Okay, let's forget that one then
03:58 <LunaticMara> : Anyways
03:58 <Larto> : I suggest ignoring it when two difficulties have the same circle size
03:58 <Larto> : lol
03:58 <LunaticMara> : 01:05:197 (3) - I think spacing is fucked
03:59 <Larto> : oh, yep, a bit
03:59 <LunaticMara> : 01:15:955 (2) - Same thing, though this looks like you did it on purpose
04:01 <LunaticMara> : 01:59:818 (6) - ^
04:01 <LunaticMara> : Though, that doesn't like.. whatever, I would just say "spacing"
04:01 <Larto> : 01:15:955 (2) - Actually has very consistent spacing
04:02 <Larto> : 01:59:818 (6) - I can fix that one
04:02 <LunaticMara> : alright
04:02 <LunaticMara> : also
04:02 <LunaticMara> : are you using 1.0X
04:03 <Larto> : As distance spacing?
04:03 <LunaticMara> : yeah
04:03 <Larto> : Uuuh, I never really check
04:03 <Larto> : I just use what feels right, lol
04:03 <Larto> : But yeah, on Easy it usually stays around ~1.0
04:03 <LunaticMara> : 02:12:231 (1) - SPACE SPACE SPACE SPACE
04:04 <LunaticMara> : Though... that doesn't look bad currently either..
04:05 <LunaticMara> : 03:15:542 (1,2,3,4) - lolwat
04:06 <LunaticMara> : Alright, enough with that Easy
04:08 <LunaticMara> : Normal looks cool to me
04:08 <Larto> : =]
04:08 <LunaticMara> : About Hard
04:09 <LunaticMara> : 00:50:093 (4 or 5) - new combo
04:09 <LunaticMara> : 00:59:818 (8) - ^
04:09 <Larto> : I actually tried to keep the combos consistent throughout the 4 difficulties
04:09 <Larto> : Not suuure
04:10 <LunaticMara> : But these combos looks quite big
04:10 <Larto> : I knoooooow
04:10 <Larto> : D:
04:10 <Larto> : I'm not sure
04:10 <LunaticMara> : 01:06:438 (7) - This one too.
04:11 <Larto> : On Insane there will even be 10-20 combos all the time
04:11 <Larto> : lol
04:11 <LunaticMara> : fuck yes
04:12 <LunaticMara> : 01:32:507 (4,5) - Looks weird to me, maybe one grid down... and one grid right?
04:12 <Larto> : oh
04:12 <Larto> : yup, fixing
04:13 <LunaticMara> : 01:57:749 (7) - COMBO OVER, YEAHHHHHH
04:15 <LunaticMara> : 03:18:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Too big combo IMO, but I don't have suggestions for this one :|
04:16 <LunaticMara> : And then... Insane.
04:16 <Larto> : Yeah I'll sadly keep the combos the way they are I guess
04:16 <Larto> : I'm sorry, sir!
04:16 <LunaticMara> : I'm ok with this
04:16 <LunaticMara> : I warned ya
04:16 <Larto> : Yup yup it's fine
04:17 <LunaticMara> : I'll ignore those huge combos in this one then
04:17 <LunaticMara> : 01:18:852 (8) - Not quite sure, but... spacing?
04:18 <Larto> : Oh yeah that's guly
04:18 <Larto> : ugly
04:18 <Larto> : fixing
04:19 <LunaticMara> : 02:43:473 (7) - How about this one?
04:20 <Larto> : Fixed also
04:21 <LunaticMara> : Nothing else
04:22 <Larto> : Yai
04:22 <LunaticMara> : also there's .osb in the folder
04:22 <Larto> : Thank you, I appreciated your mod
04:22 <Larto> : We already clarified that empty osbs are fine :P
04:22 <Larto> : Removing them is way too much of a hassle
04:22 <LunaticMara> : Ah, alright
04:22 <LunaticMara> : I'll post in the thread
04:22 <Larto> : Not worth the effort, they just appear because of some silly bug, too
04:22 <Larto> : Yup, do that
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Rechecked

Oh, when I was rechecking I found the why of the claps on 02:59:818 (3), good job.

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Too many Meg & Dia maps, why don't u map songs from here:

http://hiphopisdream.com/kesha-i-am-the-dance-commander-the-remix-album-2011/
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raimoncortese wrote:

Too many Meg & Dia maps, why don't u map songs from here:

http://hiphopisdream.com/kesha-i-am-the-dance-commander-the-remix-album-2011/
huh
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Hello good mister, I come here to do the promised modpost. This is my way to say "thanks" for that tip on mapping "that" the other day, it made me finish that map in time.

General.-
- It's Jarby's birthday. Uguu
- I seriously dobut you need all those "here"s in the tags, also "meg dia", that's on the artist alredy. The "and" can stay though.
- I saw what you did with the volume. I saw it very well.
- 03:05:714 (1) - What's the purpose of this spinner not ending 1/1 later? That small adjustment on the break seems almost un-noticeable compared to the spinner ending there.
Ok, this is clean, who I'm I kidding. Just check the tags again.

Easy.-
00:43:266 (1,2,3) - You could probably place (2) a tad closer to (3), right now the spacing looks a tad uneven.
00:56:507 (3,4) - Pointed weird flow on IRC
03:58:576 (1) - This slider could be a less pointy? It's the ending slider and all so it must be as perfect as possible. Oh, and the middle control point of the slider is not on the Y-axis uguu
It's ok

Normal.-
00:50:093 (4,5,6) - This pattern confused me twice rythmically. I missed on either (5) or (6). I'd suggest something but the vocals here go too odd to follow something...
01:18:852 (7,1) - Why not switch the new combo to (7)? The phrase is alredy over, and the blue combo is kinda very short compared to the rest.
02:12:645 (2,3) - Space the end of (2) and the start of (3) closer to each other please.
It's ok

Hard.-
00:46:369 (5) - /nazi/ Space (5) father away from (4) and (6).
03:26:300 (2,3) - Huh? Is this on purpose? This was of stacking looks very odd on 1/1 notes if you ask me, specially considering it's the only one you do on the whole mapset...
It's ok

Insane.-

It is my duty as a MAT to remember you that you're not supposed to use combos that are very long unless you have a special reson for it. If you do, please specify on the thread so that the next modder who sees this (possibly a BAT) will know that those must not be pointed out. Ok, let's continue with the modpost ...

... I can't point anything here, though I dislike those sliderstacks on the last chosurs.

I am ok with this mapset.
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Krisom wrote:

Hello good mister, I come here to do the promised modpost. This is my way to say "thanks" for that tip on mapping "that" the other day, it made me finish that map in time. No problem, sir!

General.-
- It's Jarby's birthday. Uguu Did you say happy birthday yet?!
- I seriously dobut you need all those "here"s in the tags, also "meg dia", that's on the artist alredy. The "and" can stay though. It needs them exactlyl like that so you can find the maps under "meg and dia", "here, here and here" and "here here and here" within osu!. If I removed ANYTHING, it would not work.
- I saw what you did with the volume. I saw it very well. ...Oops.
- 03:05:714 (1) - What's the purpose of this spinner not ending 1/1 later? That small adjustment on the break seems almost un-noticeable compared to the spinner ending there. You see, when that spinner ends like it does, and the rhythmic break just suddenly HITS the map exactly at that spot, I think it suits the song at that point terribly much. Because there is this "DUNNNNN" at that point and that fits the appearance of the letterboxing. :3
Ok, this is clean, who I'm I kidding. Just check the tags again.

Easy.-
00:43:266 (1,2,3) - You could probably place (2) a tad closer to (3), right now the spacing looks a tad uneven. Yessir!
00:56:507 (3,4) - Pointed weird flow on IRCYessir!
03:58:576 (1) - This slider could be a less pointy? It's the ending slider and all so it must be as perfect as possible. Oh, and the middle control point of the slider is not on the Y-axis uguuYessir!
It's ok

Normal.-
00:50:093 (4,5,6) - This pattern confused me twice rythmically. I missed on either (5) or (6). I'd suggest something but the vocals here go too odd to follow something...Yessir!
01:18:852 (7,1) - Why not switch the new combo to (7)? The phrase is alredy over, and the blue combo is kinda very short compared to the rest.Yessir!
02:12:645 (2,3) - Space the end of (2) and the start of (3) closer to each other please.Yessir!
It's ok

Hard.-
00:46:369 (5) - /nazi/ Space (5) father away from (4) and (6).Yessir!
03:26:300 (2,3) - Huh? Is this on purpose? This was of stacking looks very odd on 1/1 notes if you ask me, specially considering it's the only one you do on the whole mapset...Yessir!
It's ok

Insane.-

It is my duty as a MAT to remember you that you're not supposed to use combos that are very long unless you have a special reson for it. If you do, please specify on the thread so that the next modder who sees this (possibly a BAT) will know that those must not be pointed out. No sir! The phrases in the song which the long combos fall on have an "unnecessarily long" feeling, like it was just someone normally talking to someone. Saying stuff like "or something" or "and your lover and your mother and your father you never really had to teach you fishing" just sounds like casual talking to me and makes the long combos kind of appropriate imho.Ok, let's continue with the modpost ...

... I can't point anything here, though I dislike those sliderstacks on the last chosurs. Yessir!

I am ok with this mapset.
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*poof*

Your message is too short.
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It seems that I’m late o.o

have my star here :3

ah too short?
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Thanks for stoppng by anyways! ;3
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Just had the bubble pop to be safe and re snap everything seeing as it gave a save map changes after re snapping with that fixed ranked great job larto.
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grats :)
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omahgod omahgod omahgod omahgod omahgod omahgod omahgod omahgod omahgod

its about friggin time
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no you can't rank this I didn't mod it
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