Hello o/
Unrequested mod, because I want to improve my modding skills
Please give me afterwards a short feedback if it was helpful *and kudosu cough*
- 1. Preview Point
All maps must have a preview point, I recommend to put it at 01:13:986 - 1
2. New Combos
In general: I wouldn't make the combos up to 10+ (for the streams it's ok). It's easier to read and looks better. NCs also give some additional HP bonus, which is important to make the map playable if played with Hard Rock.
Here a list for recommended NCs:
[list:1337]00:29:597 (6) - strong beat
00:49:916 (6) -
00:51:660 (7,9) -
00:54:451 (7,9) - same
01:11:544 (7) - strong beat
01:15:730 (8) - same
01:25:497 (7) - same again
01:28:288 (7) - same again
01:52:009 (7) -
01:58:288 (7) -
02:14:335 (8) -
02:19:916 (1,2,3,4) - Here is so much space I would definitely make the 2 (02:21:311 (2) - this one) to NC
02:25:497 (8) - NC because of new pattern
02:43:637 (5) - Here also NC to indicate a larger time space
02:46:428 (5) - same here
02:50:614 (7) -
02:53:404 (6) - strong beat
03:08:404 (4) -
03:16:602 (5,7,9) - those 3 circles to NC (I think it looks better, it's up to you)
03:21:311 (3,11) - strong beat (and combo is so long)
03:36:660 (3) -
03:45:032 (6) -
03:53:404 (8) -
03:58:986 (8) -
04:54:800 (1,2,3) - After this triple, I would make every first circle of each triple to NC. And if not then, change put NC from this one 04:58:637 (1) - away
05:03:346 (1) - NC to the previous circle (05:03:172 (9) - this one) it fits to the pattern better
05:13:986 (13) -
05:16:776 (13) - same
05:19:567 (13) - same
05:29:683 (6) - strong beat and also because
05:32:474 (7) - and
05:35:265 (6) - have the same pattern (timewise)
3. Some other things00:08:003 (7) - do a blanket to the previous slider
00:31:516 (3) - Here I would make the part more smooth like
this for example (first slider has SV 1,25x and the next slider 1,5x).
00:32:911 (7) - and this one also fitting to part before (more winding)
00:40:323 - put a circle here
01:09:451 (4,5,1) - this part in a simliar way (SV change for more smoothment(?))
01:12:939 (13) - this should also have another SV due to the circle part before (has more distance which causes faster movement of the player)
01:25:497 (7,8) - turn those circles into a slider
01:31:079 (7,8) - these sliders should also be a little bit changed for better flow
01:43:550 (1) - I am not really sure, but is the spinner timewise correct?
02:24:451 (4,5,6) - I would place them somewhere else (or in another way)
02:25:497 (8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this could be a little bit more creative
(maybe first the reverse sliders, then sliders only and then something with circles (something like that)
02:41:370 (8) - needs more flow
02:52:532 (4) - there is this strong sound, I would adjust the slider to this sound
03:04:916 (2) - this one should be clickable at the end (something like
this)
03:06:312 (5) - also here
03:07:794 (3) - and here
03:25:497 (1) - it's timewise ok but I think it would be better if the notes are on beat only
03:42:765 (4,5) - from here on and the following pattern I would make SV from low to high (to create a climax effect)
04:15:730 (1) - turn the volume from begin (low) to end (high)
04:29:858 (1) - SV change starting with low SV and increasing SV with time (and also the hitsound volume)
04:32:823 (3,4,5) - change this pattern to the following two or the following patterns to this one
05:00:381 (1,2,3,4,5) - After this one there are more patterns like this. With each pattern more and more space between circles would be nice
05:11:544 - this should be clickable
05:39:842 (1) - impressiveAnd also make sure to put some hitsounding because with skins that have strong click sounds are much louder than the song itself (and it's a very calm song therefore some soft hitsounds are needed). The mp3 might also be to quiet, I'm not sure.
I like this map (and Animenz
), though it needs a little bit more flow. Is this going for rank? If yes, then I wish you good luck (I would really like to see this ranked)^^ *added to favourites* (I hope I could help)