HoneyWorks meets TrySail - Senpai. [MOVIE Ver.] · forum

Underforest

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2017-07-05T04:21:47+00:00

completing an m4m req you did time ago, modding back~
short mod

[General]
BPM is not 161.95, correct is 162 plus offset +10

[Easy]
00:10:993 (1) - why map with a reverse? besides drums, there's no notable beat
00:47:300 (1) - there's absolutely no need for NC
01:03:786 (1) - clap?

[Astarte's Normal]
leaving behind the high spacing, the diff is pretty good, good job

[Collab Hard]
00:24:886 (6,7,8,9) - can't you just do a reversing slider? an stream is pretty intense for a hard nor needed
00:31:091 - skipping this beat is not a good idea
01:25:830 (1,3) - 01:26:942 (4,1) - try to avoid overlaps like this

[Insane]
00:13:771 (2,3) - this has no emphasis and its flow is pretty bad

[Notice me!]
00:36:185 (3,5) - no emphasis, might confuse players
01:38:427 - 01:39:353 - between these parts are beats that you can convert them to stream, not mapping them would be a waste

this map still needs stuff to be polished before it can be ranked, but is not that bad
good luck~

0109-

337 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

0109- 2017-07-07T02:41:35+00:00

holy shit i got the blue screen error after replying to all of these oh gosh

im so sorry if you really need my explanation i'll try to do it again

((

Thanks for modding

Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2017-07-07T22:45:09+00:00

Q

[Notice me]
00:00:815 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - set consistent DS
00:11:555 (2) - 00:13:037 (3) - I suggest you add NC for divide 00:11:555 (2,3,1,2,1,2) -
00:47:299 (1,2,3,4,5) - why don't you make a star(pentagon) pattern for better structure?
00:51:559 (4) - I don't know why you added SV here, you didn't added at other parts.
01:15:633 (1,2) - because of this pattern, 01:16:188 (1,2) - can be hard to read, my suggestion is adding NC on 01:16:559 (2) -

GL

0109-

337 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

0109- 2017-07-08T02:35:54+00:00

Neoskylove wrote:
Q

[Notice me]
00:00:815 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - set consistent DS they are different
00:11:555 (2) - 00:13:037 (3) - I suggest you add NC for divide 00:11:555 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - ok
00:47:299 (1,2,3,4,5) - why don't you make a star(pentagon) pattern for better structure? adjusted a bit
00:51:559 (4) - I don't know why you added SV here, you didn't added at other parts. removed
01:15:633 (1,2) - because of this pattern, 01:16:188 (1,2) - can be hard to read, my suggestion is adding NC on 01:16:559 (2) - ok

GL

thank you

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2017-07-08T03:19:04+00:00

Sempoi
[Insane]
• 00:01:370 (2,3,1) - intensity bằng nhau mà, spacing lại khác thì hơi kì nhỉ?
• 00:02:666 (2,3,4) - Pattern hơi dị

) kiểu piano đang đi ngang ngang như kia, thì 00:03:037 (3,4) - trông đẹp rồi mà tự nhiên 00:02:666 (2) - lại nằm lỗi như thế :v
• 00:05:629 (2,3,4) - đây cũng cần chỉnh nè
• 00:06:740 (1,2) - spacing hơi lỗi tí xíu, cho tụi nó gần lại là đc
• 00:11:000 (1) - fck blanket
• 00:19:151 (8,9,1) - đặt cái 8 đẹp á, nhưng để spacing cho triple thì coi bộ hơi khó nhìn. Stack luôn được không nhỉ?
• 00:21:373 (8,1) - Spacing vầy sợ người ta nhìn lộn là 1/4 gap...
• 00:23:966 (1,2,3) - cái jump pattern cứ mỗi 3 cục là ông đổi chiều 1 lần, mà cái này đi tiếp chiều của 00:23:411 (1,2,3) - à? Kì vậy
• 00:36:559 (5,6,7) - stack luôn nhỉ? 2 cái triple thể hiện cùng loại drum mà khác spacing thì kh ổn
• 00:38:596 (1,2,3) - hmm, vocal đang 1/1, cái cuối cùng cao độ lại đi xuống, mà dùng tới 1 circle ở red tick và 1/2 slider? Thái thấy vậy hợp lý không?
• 00:43:040 (1,2) - spacing hơi nhỏ
• 01:13:225 (1) - không nhất thiết phải NC ở đây đâu
[Noticed]
• 00:11:555 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Jump pattern có vẻ không ổn... Nên dùng cái nào mà thấy rõ được cái intensity đi lên ấy, kiểu tăng spacing chẳng hạn, mà theo 1 concept nhất định, chứ đừng nhảy tròn tròn như này :v 00:12:296 (1) - giống như chỗ này thì spacing tự nhiên nhỏ lại tí này, nó không rõ ràng.
• 01:39:336 (1) - không cần spinner luôn hử

Ok diff cuối ổn, có insane cần chăm chút thêm thôi :3

0109-

337 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

0109- 2017-07-08T03:55:40+00:00

Yamicchi wrote:
Sempoi
[Insane]
• 00:01:370 (2,3,1) - intensity bằng nhau mà, spacing lại khác thì hơi kì nhỉ? dạ
• 00:02:666 (2,3,4) - Pattern hơi dị ) kiểu piano đang đi ngang ngang như kia, thì 00:03:037 (3,4) - trông đẹp rồi mà tự nhiên 00:02:666 (2) - lại nằm lỗi như thế :v oki
• 00:05:629 (2,3,4) - đây cũng cần chỉnh nè ^
• 00:06:740 (1,2) - spacing hơi lỗi tí xíu, cho tụi nó gần lại là đc ok
• 00:11:000 (1) - fck blanket ko định đặt blanket lắm nhưng đã fix ạ
• 00:19:151 (8,9,1) - đặt cái 8 đẹp á, nhưng để spacing cho triple thì coi bộ hơi khó nhìn. Stack luôn được không nhỉ? stack nhìn trông tệ lắm, với cả gameplay bấm cái biến mất luôn mà ko ảnh hưởng đâu
• 00:21:373 (8,1) - Spacing vầy sợ người ta nhìn lộn là 1/4 gap... insane ko ai nghĩ 1/4 lại xa thế đâu.. với cả (1) là slider nên dù bấm sớm chút cũng ko ảnh hưởng xd
• 00:23:966 (1,2,3) - cái jump pattern cứ mỗi 3 cục là ông đổi chiều 1 lần, mà cái này đi tiếp chiều của 00:23:411 (1,2,3) - à? Kì vậy jump thuận tay là đc rồi mà, đi xin testplay các thứ xem cũng ko vấn đề gì lắm
• 00:36:559 (5,6,7) - stack luôn nhỉ? 2 cái triple thể hiện cùng loại drum mà khác spacing thì kh ổn 1 cái có vocal 1 cái không có là khác nhau rồi, để 2 cái triple stack chơi cảm giác awkward thế nào ấy
• 00:38:596 (1,2,3) - hmm, vocal đang 1/1, cái cuối cùng cao độ lại đi xuống, mà dùng tới 1 circle ở red tick và 1/2 slider? Thái thấy vậy hợp lý không? tức là đang muốn thế nào , vậy trông ổn mà .. ở 00:39:522 (2) - cũng có tiếng drum nhẹ đồng thời emphasize cái (3) có tiếng gõ với vocal
• 00:43:040 (1,2) - spacing hơi nhỏ đã chỉnh lại chút
• 01:13:225 (1) - không nhất thiết phải NC ở đây đâu ây
[Noticed]
• 00:11:555 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Jump pattern có vẻ không ổn... Nên dùng cái nào mà thấy rõ được cái intensity đi lên ấy, kiểu tăng spacing chẳng hạn, mà theo 1 concept nhất định, chứ đừng nhảy tròn tròn như này :v 00:12:296 (1) - giống như chỗ này thì spacing tự nhiên nhỏ lại tí này, nó không rõ ràng. để xem thêm ý kiến đã, vì đoạn này cũng có đặt NC để chia intensity của từng đoạn rồi, với cả có movement cũng ko làm nó nổi bật quá
• 01:39:336 (1) - không cần spinner luôn hử ừ có khi để spinner trông cho đỡ ngu

Ok diff cuối ổn, có insane cần chăm chút thêm thôi :3

Cảm ơn ạ <3

YukiZura-

762 posts

Joined October 2015

YukiZura- 2017-07-08T05:52:51+00:00

M4M

Hi~~ xD

Notice me!

00:02:666 (2,3) - better the blanket please
00:06:000 (3,4) - just a suggestion .. i think better do it like this

-because the map change from voice to intrument .. it fit perfectly in my opinion

00:13:037 (3) - idk what this slider represent .. if you follow the voice, you should start from here 00:12:852 - my suggestion i think you should delete that slider .. no need to be there
00:09:333 (4,2,4) - better balnket this all
00:48:410 - nc here?
01:05:077 (1,2) - blanket this would be nice
01:18:040 - nc here

Insane

00:13:037 (1) - same as i mention above
00:40:633 - feel like missing something.. yeah i know there is no voice but consistency must have.. this is just a suggestion .. why dont you turn this slider 00:40:077 (1) - into reverse slider and delete this one 00:40:077 (1) - ..

00:42:670 (4,1) - can be better blanket
00:43:040 (1,2) - same as i mention on this 00:40:077 (1) -
00:48:225 (4,3) - might wanna fix this
00:51:188 (1,2) - move this two a bit up ...

image

my map for m4m : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/627863

that all from me

actually what a coincidence .. i also been working on the same song but the longer one

this one https://osu.ppy.sh/s/634082 xD bit it still WIP
btw goodluck with your map

0109-

337 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

0109- 2017-07-08T11:00:50+00:00

YukiZura- wrote:
M4M

Hi~~ xD

Notice me!

00:02:666 (2,3) - better the blanket please why i have to blanket? i didnt intend to make them blanket
00:06:000 (3,4) - just a suggestion .. i think better do it like this

-because the map change from voice to intrument .. it fit perfectly in my opinion i don't think so , 1/2 sliders would reflect both the vocal and the piano sounds better imo
00:13:037 (3) - idk what this slider represent .. if you follow the voice, you should start from here 00:12:852 - my suggestion i think you should delete that slider .. no need to be there first point that you said it should start from 00:12:852 - , well just test the map and you'll feel how awkward it is. And the second one, deleting the slider and replace with a note instead would feel somehow really empty, just by placing a slider, 00:13:411 (1) - can also be emphasized a lot
00:09:333 (4,2,4) - better balnket this all this completely fine
00:48:410 - nc here? ok
01:05:077 (1,2) - blanket this would be nice i don't think so, need some spacing for the build-up jumps
01:18:040 - nc here unnecessary

Insane

00:13:037 (1) - same as i mention above same
00:40:633 - feel like missing something.. yeah i know there is no voice but consistency must have.. this is just a suggestion .. why dont you turn this slider 00:40:077 (1) - into reverse slider and delete this one 00:40:077 (1) - .. skipping vocal at 00:40:818 (2) - is not a good idea

00:42:670 (4,1) - can be better blanket i didn't intend to make a blanket, that flows fine
00:43:040 (1,2) - same as i mention on this 00:40:077 (1) - same
00:48:225 (4,3) - might wanna fix this ??
00:51:188 (1,2) - move this two a bit up ... why?
image

my map for m4m : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/627863

that all from me
actually what a coincidence .. i also been working on the same song but the longer one
this one https://osu.ppy.sh/s/634082 xD bit it still WIP
btw goodluck with your map

Thanks for modding

i'll try to deliver u a mod soon

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2017-07-10T15:09:57+00:00

Easy

00:13:037 (2) - Being such a minor vocal I feel it would play better if you delete this circle. It would also put more emphasis on 00:13:411 (1)
00:03:777 (1) - because of the low object density it would be perfectly ok to delete the NC here
00:09:703 (1) - ^
00:34:151 (1) - I think it would be good to add a whistle on the slider end with it being part of the vocal pattern you're following. It would provide a bit more feedback and make the rhythm a bit more natural. Same with this circle 00:35:077 (2)
00:46:003 (1,2) - ^
00:48:966 (1) to 01:00:818 (3) - In this section I feel it would be more appropriate to follow the vocals like you have done for the rest of the map. A lot of places you can turn them into 3/2 reverse sliders to do this. example 00:54:892 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/wGcLc/291ea99e5d.jpg
00:59:151 (1) - This NC isn't needed
01:33:411 (3,1) - Maybe swap NCs for the sake of combo length?
01:39:336 (1) - imo it would play better if you deleted this circle and had the spinner start here. Having objects right before spinners can put you off a bit which is want you to avoid in the lowest diff

Normal

00:08:222 (2) - I would start this at 00:08:037 to map the vocals and the melody. If you do this make sure to add a whistle too
00:29:522 (3) - I feel it would be much more natural to end this on 00:30:077 where the drum beat is. Creating a 1/2 beat between 00:29:522 (3,4) feels rather forced
00:32:670 (3,4) - suggestion ~ http://puu.sh/wGdmC/6d741e5e9d.jpg
My only real problem with this is that places like 01:05:077 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - you have a massive train of objects with no 1/1 gaps. This can be quite overwhelming. I would suggest turning some 1/2 sldiers into circles. for example 01:09:336 (6) and 01:12:299 (6) . The same also occurs at 01:17:670 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2)
OD 4 would be better with the object density this diff has

Hard

00:12:481 (5) - It would flow better if you moved it the left https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8556807
00:24:892 (6,7,8,9) - I strongly recommend not doing a stream here. It makes for a bad spread between normal and hard and streams like this are really hard when grouped up with other objects. You can map 00:24:522 (5,6,7,8,9) - as 2 reverse sliders
00:34:151 (1,2,3) - This would follow the vocals better http://puu.sh/wGdyX/32fa1f0c35.png . There aren't any vocals at 00:34:892 so mapping it as a clickable object would lead you to mapping something else
00:50:818 (2,3,4) - This is a bit weird because this kind of pattern only happens here and no where else in the map; because of this I would recommend against it
00:37:114 (1) to 00:48:966 (1) - I would appreciate some some whistles on vocal sounds in this section like the rest of the map has.

[]Well that's all from me. Some nice clean mapping ~

I hope this mod was useful, GL!

Astarte

303 posts

Joined December 2014

Astarte 2017-07-10T18:24:30+00:00

Kisses wrote:
Normal
00:08:222 (2) - I would start this at 00:08:037 to map the vocals and the melody. If you do this make sure to add a whistle too I'd prefer to leave 1/1 gaps for the intro
00:29:522 (3) - I feel it would be much more natural to end this on 00:30:077 where the drum beat is. Creating a 1/2 beat between 00:29:522 (3,4) feels rather forced I feel like the guitar note is more interesting to map, which is what the next slider is trying to follow
00:32:670 (3,4) - suggestion ~ http://puu.sh/wGdmC/6d741e5e9d.jpg sounds good
My only real problem with this is that places like 01:05:077 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - you have a massive train of objects with no 1/1 gaps. This can be quite overwhelming. I would suggest turning some 1/2 sldiers into circles. for example 01:09:336 (6) and 01:12:299 (6) . The same also occurs at 01:17:670 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) alright heard this many times now, tried making 1/1 gaps here and there
OD 4 would be better with the object density this diff has lets give it a try then
[]Well that's all from me. Some nice clean mapping ~

I hope this mod was useful, GL!

Thanks. not sure why sr went up after reducing density tho

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Senpai. [MOVIE Ver.]
Artist:HoneyWorks meets TrySail
ArtistUnicode:HoneyWorks meets TrySail
Creator:0109-
Version:Astarte's Normal
Source:好きになるその瞬間を。～告白実行委員会～
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0109-

337 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

0109- 2017-07-11T03:31:49+00:00

Kisses wrote:
Easy
00:13:037 (2) - Being such a minor vocal I feel it would play better if you delete this circle. It would also put more emphasis on 00:13:411 (1) it feels somehow really empty imo, also placing that (2) makes new players easy to catch the white lines as the previous one ended at the red
00:03:777 (1) - because of the low object density it would be perfectly ok to delete the NC here ok
00:09:703 (1) - ^ ^
00:34:151 (1) - I think it would be good to add a whistle on the slider end with it being part of the vocal pattern you're following. It would provide a bit more feedback and make the rhythm a bit more natural. Same with this circle 00:35:077 (2) yeah ...
00:46:003 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:48:966 (1) to 01:00:818 (3) - In this section I feel it would be more appropriate to follow the vocals like you have done for the rest of the map. A lot of places you can turn them into 3/2 reverse sliders to do this. example 00:54:892 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/wGcLc/291ea99e5d.jpg remapped
00:59:151 (1) - This NC isn't needed ok
01:33:411 (3,1) - Maybe swap NCs for the sake of combo length? ok
01:39:336 (1) - imo it would play better if you deleted this circle and had the spinner start here. Having objects right before spinners can put you off a bit which is want you to avoid in the lowest diff fixed

I hope this mod was useful, GL!

Thank you

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2017-07-11T03:34:40+00:00

I'll leave the hitsound mods to whoever hitsounded this diff

ty4 mods

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Kurai

osu! Alumni

7,734 posts

Joined March 2009

Kurai 2017-07-13T16:03:45+00:00

[General]

The title of the song should be "センパイ。 [MOVIE Ver.]", then you can add "Senpai. [MOVIE Ver.]" as the romanised title.

[Easy]

00:13:037 (2) - Since the rhythm here is not that obvious, you should consider starting the combo here to help the player notice that it does not follow the logical pattern of the song.
00:13:037 (2) - Why didn't you map this part?

[Collab Hard]

00:13:407 (1) - This slider is not properly snapped on the new red line.
00:58:596 (3) - This jump does not make any sense and seems out of place. You should use the normal spacing here.
01:11:744 (3) - This jump might be a bit too huge considering you barely use them in this difficulty. However having a jump here fits perfectly the song and it would help the player getting used to playing jumps. I would advise you to keep it but please, reduce the jump a little bit.

[Notice me.]

00:36:559 (5,6) - This jump is a no go, even if I can understand why you did this, it still isn't intuitive to play and is even quite confusing. Please change this.

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2017-07-13T19:03:19+00:00

fixed both points for my part, thx for modding ^^

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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Title:Senpai. [MOVIE Ver.]
TitleUnicode:Senpai. [MOVIE Ver.]
Artist:HoneyWorks meets TrySail
ArtistUnicode:HoneyWorks meets TrySail
Creator:0109-
Version:Collab Hard
Source:好きになるその瞬間を。～告白実行委員会～
Tags:suki ni naru sono shunkan wo kokuhaku jikkou iinkai natsukawa shiina asakura momo amamiya sora
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0109-

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0109- 2017-07-15T01:48:04+00:00

Oh gosh im on vacation gonna reply when im back uwu

0109-

337 posts

Joined June 2013

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0109- 2017-07-17T05:22:17+00:00

Kurai wrote:
[General]
The title of the song should be "センパイ。 [MOVIE Ver.]", then you can add "Senpai. [MOVIE Ver.]" as the romanised title. Ok
[Easy]
00:13:037 (2) - Since the rhythm here is not that obvious, you should consider starting the combo here to help the player notice that it does not follow the logical pattern of the song.Ok
00:13:037 (2) - Why didn't you map this part? What do you mean? I already placed a note there

[Notice me.]
00:36:559 (5,6) - This jump is a no go, even if I can understand why you did this, it still isn't intuitive to play and is even quite confusing. Please change this.Ok

Thx

Hokichi

825 posts

Joined June 2015

Hokichi 2017-07-19T02:28:38+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
m4m i guess

hard
00:11:549 (2,3) - the flow is kinda rough for me,cuz the movement isnt represent the drum well.im prefer you follow ds here and make a small jump at 00:11:919 (3,4) - cuz i feel the drum and guitar quite strong here.example : https://prnt.sc/fpzpqc // Something like this may work.
00:21:366 (2) - it looks like you tried emphasised the drum here but at the same it feels odd if you didnt emphasised the guitar here cuz the guitar's sound more stronger here.so my suggestion is put 2 circles here 00:21:366 - and then a 1/1 slider on the white tick 00:21:551 - // Hmm, how about 2 kicksliders at 00:21:366 - then a circle at 00:21:736 - ?
00:24:515 (5,6,7,8,9) - the issue same as above,its about the way you emphasis the music.so maybe 1/2 slider here 00:24:515 - for guitar and then 1/4 reverse slider at 00:24:793 - for the drum? // No thanks, I don't wanna add too much stuff to a Hard diff
00:46:559 (2,1) - ugly overlap actually :/.the overlap is not structured well.just stack the tail on both of that slider instead // Fixed

Underforest wrote:
[Collab Hard]
00:24:886 (6,7,8,9) - can't you just do a reversing slider? an stream is pretty intense for a hard nor needed // Yes
00:31:091 - skipping this beat is not a good idea // Added a kickslider

this map still needs stuff to be polished before it can be ranked, but is not that bad
good luck~

Kisses wrote:
Hard
00:12:481 (5) - It would flow better if you moved it the left https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8556807 // I changed due to previous mod
00:24:892 (6,7,8,9) - I strongly recommend not doing a stream here. It makes for a bad spread between normal and hard and streams like this are really hard when grouped up with other objects. You can map 00:24:522 (5,6,7,8,9) - as 2 reverse sliders // Changed due to Underforest's mod
00:34:151 (1,2,3) - This would follow the vocals better http://puu.sh/wGdyX/32fa1f0c35.png . There aren't any vocals at 00:34:892 so mapping it as a clickable object would lead you to mapping something else // Fixed
[]Well that's all from me. Some nice clean mapping ~

I hope this mod was useful, GL!

Kurai wrote:
[Collab Hard]
00:13:407 (1) - This slider is not properly snapped on the new red line. // Fixed

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Storyboard stuff

https://puu.sh/wNfcm/275dfe2470.rar

[centre][heading][color=#02ff85]Hokichi's Special Thanks[/color][/heading][/centre]
[list]
[*]ezek for editing the bg for me
[*]GhostFY for the help with the wave script
[*]Damnae for storybrew[/list]

Kurai

osu! Alumni

7,734 posts

Joined March 2009

Kurai 2017-07-19T15:03:11+00:00

Bubbled!

0109-

337 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

0109- 2017-07-19T17:03:58+00:00

Thank you <3 <3

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2017-07-25T17:04:29+00:00

heyo
[General]
offset sounds too early, most noticeable in the kiai. i'd add like +15 ms to ur timing points

hitsounding feels really bare too, since you dont have anything representing the kick drums. it makes sections like 00:37:114 - feel really empty since you only use claps throughout while there is a lot more going on instrumentally that could have feedback. i'd recommend getting a normal-hitclap and using that for any kick drums you hear, and if u do you'll need a copy of a soft whistle so you can have the kick drum + whistle together in places like 00:25:262

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[Notice me!]

00:13:966 (3) - 00:16:929 (3) - strong offbeats like these deserve to have whistles
00:17:485 (4,5,1) - flow gets pretty uncomfortable here cos of right angles, i'd try have this slightly higher and to the left https://puu.sh/wSJPX/656ea9a499.png
00:19:151 (7,8) - 00:21:373 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:24:707 (2,3,4,5,6) - should look to hitsound 1/4s appropriately too. double snare at 00:19:151 (7,8) - so claps would work, snares on 00:21:466 (2,3,4) - etc.
00:42:299 (3,4,5) - would look neater if u spaced these evenly
01:07:670 (6,7,1,2) - movement ends up being really sharp here making the jump to 01:08:411 (3) - feel really out of place because of the wider angle. try sticking to similar movement by having 3 somewhere like https://puu.sh/wSLud/f46a27bf1e.png that keeps it sharp
01:08:040 (1,2) - also should prob swap the nc here for downbeat
01:12:855 - 01:24:707 - sections like these are missing claps completely on slider ends, the snares still exist 01:13:410 - 01:13:781 - and should be hitsounded with claps
01:31:929 (5) - should be nced?
01:38:781 (1) - surprising that you end on the blue tick here and skip the downbeat, while the insane has it ending on the downbeat :d

[Insane]

00:21:373 (8) - 00:24:707 (2) - etc. 1/4s dont need to be simplified this much in an insane, especially cos the hard uses denser rhythm. mapping out the quintuplet is fine, just dont have it too spaced
00:19:151 (8,9,1) - spacing seems kinda uneven
00:24:336 (3,1,2) - using the wider angles when previous stuff was much sharper makes for really uncomfortable movement
01:07:670 (6) - try keep ur comboing strategies consistent, compared to 01:10:633 (1)
01:20:633 (3,4,5) - spacing on this stuff feels so big and make stronger beats 01:18:966 (2) - feel weaker in comparison
01:29:151 (1,2,3) - 01:34:151 (3,4,5) - eek with the angles again

you have patterns that would look so much more structured if you used the same sliders, things like 00:05:629 (2,3,4) - 00:34:707 (2,3) - look visually inconsistent because you recreate the slider each time instead of just using flipped copies. also noticed this in the top diff 00:26:744 (1,2) - 00:30:448 (3,4)

[Collab Hard]

00:00:815 - sv is rly low but spacing seems to be that of a more intense section? should probably use similar spacing to 00:25:262 - imo
00:24:336 (4,5,6,7) - 1/4s start from 00:24:707 - and end at 00:25:077 - the overmapping seems pretty unnecessary in a hard
00:29:151 (2,3,4) - problem with mapping vocals is that it doesnt represent intensity too well, the circles here make this part feel more intense compared to 00:26:744 (1,2) - cause of density, but in fact theyre the same. should try to balance out the density and simplify the vocals
00:31:003 (4) - kickslider is rly short in physical length here and can be misleading, id just stick to triplets lol
00:37:114 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - spacing on this stuff seems a bit ridiculous when compared to latter parts of the same section 00:40:077 (1,2,3)
01:33:410 (1) - unsnapped rip

[]
biggest room for improvement would definitely be the hitsounding, try adding on the additional layer of hitsounds that follow kick drums and also listening more closely for whenever snares are present in the music

popping for now cos unrankable stuff, poke me again whenever youve made progress and we'll see how it goes from there

Astarte

303 posts

Joined December 2014

Astarte 2017-07-25T17:35:59+00:00

oh boy

if you decide to change hitsounding pls copy it to my diff thankss o/

0109-

337 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

0109- 2017-07-25T23:46:36+00:00

~~Oh boi im on vacation again gonna back on sunday (~~

all fixed

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2017-07-26T16:03:46+00:00

fffffff plz fix that unsnap for me if u haven't already :SS ;;

edit: if you need hitsound help i can just do it and you can copy them lololol, the current soft-hitwhistle doesnt fit imo :/

Hokichi

825 posts

Joined June 2015

Hokichi 2017-07-27T01:39:55+00:00

Pentori wrote:
heyo

[Collab Hard]
00:00:815 - sv is rly low but spacing seems to be that of a more intense section? should probably use similar spacing to 00:25:262 - imo
00:24:336 (4,5,6,7) - 1/4s start from 00:24:707 - and end at 00:25:077 - the overmapping seems pretty unnecessary in a hard
00:29:151 (2,3,4) - problem with mapping vocals is that it doesnt represent intensity too well, the circles here make this part feel more intense compared to 00:26:744 (1,2) - cause of density, but in fact theyre the same. should try to balance out the density and simplify the vocals
00:31:003 (4) - kickslider is rly short in physical length here and can be misleading, id just stick to triplets lol
00:37:114 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - spacing on this stuff seems a bit ridiculous when compared to latter parts of the same section 00:40:077 (1,2,3)
[]

popping for now cos unrankable stuff, poke me again whenever youve made progress and we'll see how it goes from there

All fixed. Thanks for the mod.

Fixed Gaia's unsnap object as well

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:センパイ。 [MOVIE Ver.]
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lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2017-07-29T09:19:07+00:00

is it just me or the sb fucked up after the update?

there's a problem with the lyrics there

0109-

337 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

0109- 2017-07-30T08:18:40+00:00

lit120 wrote:
is it just me or the sb fucked up after the update?

there's a problem with the lyrics there

redownload?

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2017-07-30T23:03:27+00:00

2 things:
- u didnt use my hitsounds? that's fine if u dun wanna use them but can u copy them onto my diff instead then, dont really want my work to be wasted (though i highly suggest u remove the soft-hitnormal cuz its kinda loud)

- slidertick and sliderslide can't both be silenced, that's unrankable

0109-

337 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

0109- 2017-07-31T00:34:17+00:00

did some in-game pm with gaia and changed some hitsounding things and changed the offset slightly...

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2017-08-01T08:44:52+00:00

sb\highlight.png
sb\tag.png
both still unused

00:00:830 - 00:11:015 - should just set the timing point samplesets to default to prevent ur custom hitnormal from being played. just sounds so awkward to have that much feedback
00:13:052 - here too

notice me!
01:38:792 (1,1) - try something like https://puu.sh/wYyrK/b973ed3135.png or at least have a circle on the downbeat, since the entire time you follow vocals until then

insane
00:24:718 (2) - 01:34:162 (3,4,5) - both dont seem fixed?
01:38:792 (1,1) - same as top diff

collab hard
00:26:755 (1,2,1,2) - should honestly just avoid using the consecutive 1/1 repeats, makes this part so much easier to play than 00:25:273 (1,2,3,4) - 00:29:718 (1,2,3,4,5,1)

get ur bubble back after any changes then poke me

0109-

337 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

0109- 2017-08-01T11:33:55+00:00

Pentori wrote:
sb\highlight.png
sb\tag.png
both still unused

00:00:830 - 00:11:015 - should just set the timing point samplesets to default to prevent ur custom hitnormal from being played. just sounds so awkward to have that much feedback
00:13:052 - here too

notice me!
01:38:792 (1,1) - try something like https://puu.sh/wYyrK/b973ed3135.png or at least have a circle on the downbeat, since the entire time you follow vocals until then

insane
00:24:718 (2) - 01:34:162 (3,4,5) - both dont seem fixed? the after one fixed. I did move the 00:24:718 (2) - to the left , and it seems fine imo, the angle is not that noticeable when you do the jumps
01:38:792 (1,1) - same as top diff

collab hard
00:26:755 (1,2,1,2) - should honestly just avoid using the consecutive 1/1 repeats, makes this part so much easier to play than 00:25:273 (1,2,3,4) - 00:29:718 (1,2,3,4,5,1)

get ur bubble back after any changes then poke me

others fixed
also updated for hokichi

(the collab hard)

Kurai

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Kurai 2017-08-08T14:05:34+00:00

I redownloaded the mapset and somehow a difficulty called "hitsounds" was in the set even though it is not listed on the website. Try reuploading the map again please.

0109-

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0109- 2017-08-08T14:51:28+00:00

Don't really understand why but yeah reuploaded

Yamicchi

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Yamicchi 2017-08-09T13:34:35+00:00

Kurai wrote:
I redownloaded the mapset and somehow a difficulty called "hitsounds" was in the set even though it is not listed on the website. Try reuploading the map again please.

~~actually got the same issues too. No idea why that happened. Lemme try again, see if it's still there~~ it's gone

Kurai

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Kurai 2017-08-09T13:49:05+00:00

Here's your rebub

Pentori

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Pentori 2017-08-11T04:02:49+00:00

do u have a source for current title? honeyworks website has it listed using dashes http://honeyworks.jp/discography/