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Blowsight - Toxic

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-Ploy-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on středa 11. března 2020 at 13:48:02

Artist: Blowsight
Title: Toxic
Tags: Blowsight Toxic Remastered deathstream stream Metal
BPM: 176
Filesize: 6553kb
Play Time: 02:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. No Escape (2017) (5,61 stars, 834 notes)
  2. Pleasure (2020) (6,19 stars, 776 notes)
  3. Poison paradise (2018) (6,19 stars, 814 notes)
Download: Blowsight - Toxic
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No Escape by Me

Poison paradise by Me

Well this is my pretty much first official map.

hi 2020
CucumberCuc
Hi

[General]
add kiai time: 00:39:992 to 00:47:833 - 00:50:560 to 01:01:128 - 01:05:219 to 01:14:083 - 01:37:265 to 01:45:105 - 01:48:174 to 01:58:401 - 02:37:265 to 02:42:378 - 02:45:446 to 02:53:628
do the sounds below
you have a bitrate higher than 192, fix it
you have <05:00 lenght, so add more diffs
add custom hitsounds on objects
fix timing from green TP's

[No Escape]
map pls break time
00:07:265 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 00:10:333 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 00:13:060 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) Can do for each circle (I now take only the first 3 circles of red, for other colors differently) the same distance between them?
00:09:651 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:12:378 (1,2,3,4,5) I think that Clap sounds can removed
00:15:446 (1,2) not good blanket and overlap slider 1 with circle 3
00:16:810 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) i think can be better if you do this
00:18:685 (2,3,4,5,2) these overlap and also include worth to fix if you didn't intend them to do so, but rather to do such as a ladder
00:22:265 (4,2,3,1) ^
00:23:628 (5) move right for better flow
00:26:355 (5) - 02:00:617 (7,8) - 02:04:708 (1,3) - 02:22:265 (3) not good blankets
00:27:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) not good flow for stream
00:33:515 (3) move up
00:39:992 (1,3) overlap
00:41:696 (5,1) fix stack
00:42:037 (6,3) overlap
00:42:378 (1,2,3,4) be better if you do this
01:01:810 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) not good stream
01:04:537 (9) move down for better flow
Things that you have more or less turned this on: 00:23:287 (1,2,3,4,5) slider 5 move right + 00:32:833 (1,2,3) slider 3 move up + 00:34:537 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) + 00:43:060 (1,2,3,4) + 00:46:128 (2,3) + 01:03:855 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) move circle 9 down + 01:25:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) but fix the distance between the circles + 01:35:219 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) prev 01:34:878 (1,2) not the same distance so fix this + 01:39:310 (1,2,3,4,5) + 01:39:992 (1,2,1,2,1,2) but fix stacks pls + 01:50:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) but slider move left I recommend using more like these objects for your complexity on the map
I have little time so I will say this, you want to check the map for distance between objects, their flow and how they look(you can take the good examples your map a little higher, they are more or less playable), so you should consider the arrangement of sliders

I would write a little more about the map, as the song I liked it, but sorry was not enough time :(
and Yes, the music I really liked, I hope you will continue the moderation on this map :)
Topic Starter
-Ploy-

CucumberCuc wrote:

Hi

[General]
add kiai time: 00:39:992 to 00:47:833 - 00:50:560 to 01:01:128 - 01:05:219 to 01:14:083 - 01:37:265 to 01:45:105 - 01:48:174 to 01:58:401 - 02:37:265 to 02:42:378 - 02:45:446 to 02:53:628
do the sounds below
you have a bitrate higher than 192, fix it
you have <05:00 lenght, so add more diffs
add custom hitsounds on objects
fix timing from green TP's

[No Escape]
map pls break time
00:07:265 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 00:10:333 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 00:13:060 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) Can do for each circle (I now take only the first 3 circles of red, for other colors differently) the same distance between them?
00:09:651 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:12:378 (1,2,3,4,5) I think that Clap sounds can removed
00:15:446 (1,2) not good blanket and overlap slider 1 with circle 3
00:16:810 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) i think can be better if you do this
00:18:685 (2,3,4,5,2) these overlap and also include worth to fix if you didn't intend them to do so, but rather to do such as a ladder
00:22:265 (4,2,3,1) ^
00:23:628 (5) move right for better flow
00:26:355 (5) - 02:00:617 (7,8) - 02:04:708 (1,3) - 02:22:265 (3) not good blankets
00:27:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) not good flow for stream
00:33:515 (3) move up
00:39:992 (1,3) overlap
00:41:696 (5,1) fix stack
00:42:037 (6,3) overlap
00:42:378 (1,2,3,4) be better if you do this
01:01:810 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) not good stream
01:04:537 (9) move down for better flow
Things that you have more or less turned this on: 00:23:287 (1,2,3,4,5) slider 5 move right + 00:32:833 (1,2,3) slider 3 move up + 00:34:537 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) + 00:43:060 (1,2,3,4) + 00:46:128 (2,3) + 01:03:855 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) move circle 9 down + 01:25:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) but fix the distance between the circles + 01:35:219 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) prev 01:34:878 (1,2) not the same distance so fix this + 01:39:310 (1,2,3,4,5) + 01:39:992 (1,2,1,2,1,2) but fix stacks pls + 01:50:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) but slider move left I recommend using more like these objects for your complexity on the map
I have little time so I will say this, you want to check the map for distance between objects, their flow and how they look(you can take the good examples your map a little higher, they are more or less playable), so you should consider the arrangement of sliders

I would write a little more about the map, as the song I liked it, but sorry was not enough time :(
and Yes, the music I really liked, I hope you will continue the moderation on this map :)
Thank you very much! I love this song so i want to make map as good as the song is. I deffinitely will try to fix all the mentioned things and make map better.
arrivalNA
Heyo, I wanted to try modding but I'm new so take my advice with a pinch of salt
[General]
Try to use sound samples to make hit sounds less bland
Use larger spacing on stronger beats
Timing points can be used on the downbeats of circles and not just slightly before them

[No Escape]
00:07:265 (1,2,3) - Try to use different hitsounds for different types of noises in the actual song
00:08:287 (1,2,3,4) - Look above ^^^
00:10:333 (1,2,3) - Same
00:11:355 (1,2,3) - Same
00:46:128 (2) - The slider is elongated and doesn't need to end on a blue tick, a 1/2 beat slider would work just fine
00:53:287 (7) - The slider timing is a bit awkward when playing, try to make it end on downbeats or make the slider velocity a bit slower and curved
01:03:174 (1) - Jumps in a stream like this are generally uncomfortable with a little time interval between the stream and the repeating slider
01:05:219 - Kiai time on break isn't a thing I've seen but it's your choice
01:20:730 (4,6) - These circles are on offbeats and don't need to have a finish hitsound on them
02:09:992 (5,6) - There is an extra note here, the stream only needs 5 notes and not 6
02:10:077 (6) - The slider is longer than it needs to be
02:14:765 - Same as 01:03:174
02:17:667 (1) - When a guitar slows down like that you should just use a low velocity slider instead of a repeating slider
02:58::401 - The spinner should end on a white tick and not after it

Other than that it's a good map. I hope my modding was decent, I don't have much to offer but good luck in the future
zhu
HELLO (╯°□°)╯︵( .o.) ノ( ゜-゜ノ)

No Escape
Maybe change all soundings into soft for better fitting and disable countdown if it wasn't intentional cause it was used by old mappers long time ago and looks kinda meh.
00:15:787 (2) - remove one point and make it blanket with 00:15:446 (1) -
00:29:424 (1,3) - ^
00:30:446 (1,2) - weird stack
00:39:310 (4,5) - blanket
00:40:333 (2) - these sliders looks out of place
00:49:537 (2,4) - ugly stack
Also missing hitsoundings on every 1/2 tick clap. Nice flow and rythm choice btw since it was said light mod thats allgoodluck ranking! (⌐■_■)
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