hai
really good song choice ^
u hardest diff
lulafic
really good song choice ^
u hardest diff
SPOILER
00:59:643 (1,2,3) - weird looking how 1 overlaps with 3 in the middle of the slider
01:18:943 (1) - don't think need NC here
01:19:150 (2) - Instead NC here
01:19:771 (1) - NC next circle
01:43:046 (1) - idk if u should NC here , it is a blue tick and the white tick after has a stronger beat
02:37:004 - there is a sound here u ignored , 02:35:176 (6,7,8,9) - here you didn't
03:08:761 - here the sound starts on the blue tick instead of white , 03:08:761 - here as well
I would do this instead
or this
03:19:154 (1,2,3,1,2) - maybe place like this
everything else looks fine and good , good luck!!!~~
01:18:943 (1) - don't think need NC here
01:19:150 (2) - Instead NC here
01:19:771 (1) - NC next circle
01:43:046 (1) - idk if u should NC here , it is a blue tick and the white tick after has a stronger beat
02:37:004 - there is a sound here u ignored , 02:35:176 (6,7,8,9) - here you didn't
03:08:761 - here the sound starts on the blue tick instead of white , 03:08:761 - here as well
I would do this instead
or this
03:19:154 (1,2,3,1,2) - maybe place like this
everything else looks fine and good , good luck!!!~~
lulafic
SPOILER
00:00:626 (1,1) - maybe first 2 object don't overlap
put one lower than the other imo
00:31:867 (4) - try to make it 20 more degrees to make the flow better
00:37:867 (1,2) - here I would put 1 more slider instead of the 2 circles then NC this 00:38:074 (3) -
00:46:763 (2,3,4) - here you used 3 sliders to reflect the sound of the women in the background , 00:53:384 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - but here you use circle instead
maybe want to fix that.
01:18:322 (3) - imo NC here not 01:18:115 (1) -
01:37:770 (4,1,2) - again here I would use 1 more slider and NC this 01:38:184 (3) -
02:38:590 (6) - here you used a slider to reflect the small sound played , but here u forgot 02:36:935 -
02:51:004 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - here again you used circles to blanket it to the women's voice but here u used sliders 02:43:970 (1,2,3,4) -
that's all
put one lower than the other imo
00:31:867 (4) - try to make it 20 more degrees to make the flow better
00:37:867 (1,2) - here I would put 1 more slider instead of the 2 circles then NC this 00:38:074 (3) -
00:46:763 (2,3,4) - here you used 3 sliders to reflect the sound of the women in the background , 00:53:384 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - but here you use circle instead
maybe want to fix that.
01:18:322 (3) - imo NC here not 01:18:115 (1) -
01:37:770 (4,1,2) - again here I would use 1 more slider and NC this 01:38:184 (3) -
02:38:590 (6) - here you used a slider to reflect the small sound played , but here u forgot 02:36:935 -
02:51:004 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - here again you used circles to blanket it to the women's voice but here u used sliders 02:43:970 (1,2,3,4) -
that's all