Using 0|1|2|3|4|5|6 to describe the columns.
Atmosphere
- 00:33:034 (33034|0) - This note, I can't hear anything that could justify it. And if there is a sound, you should delete it anyway, because I played it on 25% playback rate with the music very loud and I couldn't hear anything.
- 00:38:528 (38528|5) - If you put that note for the guitar, it should be at 00:38:557.
- 00:38:615 (38615|6) - Can't hear anything loud enough. Delete it.
- 00:40:360 (40360|2) - Wouldn't it be better to put it in col 1? Since it's the same sound as 00:40:185 (40185|5,40185|1) -
- 00:41:755 (41755|0) - If that Ln does follow the sound I think it follows, it should end at 00:42:104 (42104|6) -
- 00:41:232 (41232|6) - Feels weird in this column. Move it to col 0 or 1.
- 00:42:627 (42627|5,42627|2) - I think it should only be a single note, since there's only the guitar.
- 00:43:194 (43194|2) - I'm not sure what this note is for, but if my thoughts are right, it should be a Ln that goes from 00:43:150 to 00:43:325
- 00:43:499 (43499|4) - You should replace that note by a Ln.
- 00:48:775 (48775|4) - Same as 00:43:194 (43194|2) -
- 00:53:629 (53629|3,53686|2) - Delete those notes and add one at 00:53:658
- 00:57:787 This sound is much softer than the previous notes. You could make it a double or at least a triple.
- 01:00:483 (60483|2) - Move it to another column. This maybe?
- 01:06:214 Make a double here. I think it's ok to have doubles on the drum AND the voice.
- 01:06:382 (66382|3,66382|6,66719|3,66719|6,67056|3,67056|4) - I know you are putting doubles for the voice, but I'd suggest to make this 01:06:382 (66382|3,66382|6) - a single note.
- 01:08:910 (68910|4) - Double here too.
- 01:13:040 Missing a note here.
- 01:20:624 (80624|4) - Delete that note.
- 01:22:309 Missing a note.
- 01:22:478 ^
- 01:23:152 - Missing a note.
- 01:25:090 to 01:30:146 I guess you voluntarily left col 0 and 6 empty, but it feels weird to me. Like, it feels to tight (sorry I can't find another word). You could remap this section. With the col 0 and 6.
- 01:30:146 6 notes? I don't know about that. Maybe just put four or five notes. Just like that 01:35:540 (95540|0,95540|6,95540|2,95540|3,95540|5) -
- 01:30:652 (90652|2) - This note is for the voice, right? Well it shouldn't be there, if you want something there, you should instead replace one of those three notes 01:30:483 (90483|4,90483|6,90483|1) - by a Ln, but be consistent, you would have to do this after too, so I just recommand you to delete that note.
- 01:35:118 Missing a note here. This could be nice. (green bar is at 01:34:528)
- 01:39:922 to 01:40:764 I'm pretty sure (and by pretty sure, I mean sure at 99,99%) that this part is all in 1/4, but because of the sv, I guess you won't do that,uh?
- 01:40:933 (100933|6,100954|5,100975|4) - 01:42:281 (102281|4,102302|5,102323|6) - and 01:43:629 (103629|4,103651|5,103672|6) - I'm not saying it's bad like it is, but when I was testing it, I preferred when it was like this
- 01:54:500 (114500|5) - Delete that note.
- 01:56:270 Add a note for the guitar?
- 01:59:809 Same as the other pattern like this.
- 02:01:031 Missing a note or two for the same sound as 02:00:989 (120989|1,120989|4) -
- 02:01:242 Isn't the guitar sound's here? You should add a note here and delete 02:01:214 (121214|1,121270|2) -
- 02:01:663 Again a note for the guitar?
- You could end with Lns instead of just simple notes, but really is just a question of preferences.