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Feels like puxtu are trying to make HD that are easy to play while Ayyri are pushing the NM to the limit.
Adding more of my words based on how you layer the map. No kudosu.

[Ayyri's NM]
  • Well, as an NM this is pretty hard for novices. Rhythm-wise I mean, not density-wise.
  1. 00:18:179 - are too right-handed. Right-handed Novices may find it easy to play but I don't think left-handed ones can manage this fluently. You can do something like http://puu.sh/yJnmM/41283a9cf7.png for a balanced pattern.
  2. 00:31:513 - Wait, are you simplifying the 1/3 bass sounds here or following that bell in the back? LN at 00:31:846 (31846|0) - made me think you're simplifying the 1/3 bass sequence.
  3. 00:54:513 - I asked one of the QAT about this pattern here and his reply says that 1/3 BPM180 are pretty fast for an NM
  4. 01:32:624 - Uh, you sure you're not mistaking the bass as the lead like 01:32:402 - ? The sound you provided as the reference are different instrument. I mean, you've been constantly mapping the swingy melodies until this point and then this note for the bass came. This sound here is the same sound as 01:21:957 - tho.


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Round 2

NM

Megative is right, no notes on column 1 for ages, move 00:19:179 (19179|2) - to 1.
00:53:291 (53291|1) - Remove this, and the rest of the notes in the same rhythm onwards to reduce the density of this section. Something like: https://puu.sh/yK9l1/14533f18e5.png Repeat for the other sections that adhere to this.
01:27:179 (87179|2) - Move to 2 for better balance.
01:32:624 (92624|0) - Remove this note.

Also went through and fixed some other things in discord PM like removing various filler bell notes at 00:13:846 - 00:15:179 - etc that take away from the main synth, shortening this LN 00:36:846 (36846|0), Adjusting the rhythm at 00:52:846 - to make it more appropriate for a 180bpm NM, as well as changing the LN usage at 00:31:513 - to, again, make it more appropriate.

Puxtu's diff also looks fine, update so I can do final check.
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1 l 2 l 3 l 4

Tbh i don't have much to say, there's no major mistakes or errors that i can see (or it might just be me being lazy) anyway i got some suggestions
00:26:179 - could map this part as https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9823099
00:29:846 - You could map it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9823067 cause your original pattern is quite plain and imo does not support the hype the build up brings. Second suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9823067
00:37:846 (37846|2) - could move this to 1 for better balance
00:38:846 (38846|3) - could also move this to 2 ^

Otherwise pretty cool song : ok_hand :
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Hey, Remember me xD

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no. I don't really remember you and most importantly asking you a gd xDD
wtf this is like the second time someone did this
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thx comet
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Oooookay, nominated! Merry Christmas!
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tbh I kind of dislike how low res the bg is. Could try using smth like this https://puu.sh/ySrfp.jpg https://puu.sh/ySrfo.jpg

[NM]
00:12:846 (12846|0) - 00:16:846 (16846|2) - These should be extended 1/3 past where they end for consistency with the LNs preceding them, and also cause the sound doesn't stop shorter than before.

00:18:179 (18179|1) - Should end 1/3 before where it currently does since there's a quick cut off between the synth and snare.

00:20:846 (20846|2,21513|2,22179|3,22846|3,23513|2,24179|2,24846|3,25513|3) - Since the kick seems to have a heavier weight, I'd suggest removing the whistles and letting the soft-hitnormal play instead to better match the weight of the percussion.
00:28:846 (28846|3,29179|3,29513|3,29846|3,30179|3) - ^

00:27:513 - I think you could vary the jumps here a bit since a 1/1 jumptrill is kind of boring and far too easy for a normal diff imo. Might try to stack one of the notes from each jump on each other like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9910610

00:31:513 - There seems to be a disproportionate amount of LNs in every column but col 2. There's only 5 ish LNs in col 2 as opposed to 10-12 ish in all other columns. I'd try to rearrange some of the notes to avoid this uneven hand balance.

01:15:846 (75846|3,76068|0) - Might consider putting these in the same column cause they're the same pitch.

01:31:402 (91402|2) - Should be extended an extra third of a beat to 01:31:846 - as the sound is continuous. You've also connected every single LN to the note following it in this section so it's inconsistent to suddenly leave a disconnect.


[HD]
00:28:846 (28846|2,28846|3,29179|2,29179|3) - 00:29:846 (29846|0,29846|1,30179|0,30179|1) - More of a nitpick, but you haven't repeated the same 2 jumps here yet so I would change the placements of these jumps to avoid having a repeating, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9910672

00:51:513 (51513|2,51846|3,52179|3,52513|2) - Add drum-hitfinishes here to match the NM diff.

01:21:846 (81846|0) - I mean, it's fine to leave this as a 2/3 LN, but the sound is only 1/3 long with a short cut off on the next note at 01:21:957 (81957|3) - . Since it seems like you're going for musical accuracy on the LN lengths here, I would arrange this using capped LNs like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9910701

01:27:179 (87179|0) - Similar to the above, it should be 1/3 long only.

01:28:179 (88179|2) - Make into a 2/3 long LN? Same goes for 01:30:846 (90846|0) - to act as a connect between both jumps.


Otherwise seems fine.
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Prot wrote:

tbh I kind of dislike how low res the bg is
thats my boy
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I agree with ayyri about the bg, we want to keep the similarity with the original set
00:28:846 - imo current pattern is much more easier to read
01:21:846 - technically yes, they are 1/3 long but it's not really notice-able in normal speed (100% playback rate). it sounds more like 2/3 to me so I made them like that to simplify the pattern

applied anything else thx!
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Litharrale wrote:

Prot wrote:

tbh I kind of dislike how low res the bg is
thats my boy
girl*
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Litharrale wrote:

boy
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hi i cant mod but im here to say that map is good

is good map

:)
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aytoms29 wrote:

hi i cant mod but im here to say that map is good

is good map

:)
Well thx, atleast you didn't drop a random gd or somethin lol
posted
Alrighty, fixed a double hitsound at 00:52:513 - , it's good to go now =w=)b

I didn't forget the heart this time!
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Of all things, why the hell is 西む-42ab in tags... do you realise how general this is and how far from this song that tag is? That is a location. Furthermore you have 3 different sets of circles taking those 2 spots (booth location) every single biannual event
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That's where the official cd was sold. I think it doesn't hurt to have more tags related to the album.
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