Mirash wrote:

lud

[Extreme]
00:48:013 (2) - feels too close with reverse, try http://i.imgur.com/HmVsbAk.png also movement will relate to this 00:48:662 (5,1,2) - ok dad
02:17:040 (2) - same, too close, feels uncomfortable, could increase spacing to 1,2-1,3 maybe i think its fine

[Extra]
<3

[Insane]
00:31:148 (5) - hs it
00:33:418 (4,5,6,7) - overlaps alittle with stacks on, looks not that good for me
02:18:662 (3,1,2,3) - ^ they are visible at the same time also
02:35:851 (6,1,2) - ^ changing this didn't affect much, changed everything else

[Hard]
02:42:175 (5) - soft sampleset on white tick because of 02:39:581 (4) - it seems wrong clap

fun map

Joe Castle wrote:

Hi Delis! you requested a mod in a pm you sent me in the game, so im here to see if i can help you!
lets see what you have

General

1. 00:42:013 - 01:02:770 - you should put kiai in this part, since thats the intense part of the song

2. 01:33:905 - 01:54:662 - add kiai in this part too, same reason as #1

3. 02:25:797 - 02:47:527 - addd kiai in this part too, same reason as #1 also i don't like kiais

Extreme

Note:

1. 00:05:689 (1,2) - move this part to x:180-y:144, it will flow a bit better this way http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8388339 mine feels more symmetrical

2. 00:17:364 (1,2,3,4) - it could flow a bit better this way https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8388339 i think the link is wrong

3. 00:34:067 (7) - move this circle to the same place where 00:33:418 (2) is, because it kinda looks out of position http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8388842 i found current pattern flows much better

4. 00:36:662 (4,5,6) - you should move this part to the same place where 00:35:689 (1) is, since it looks kinda boring in the way it is right now i don't like it lol

5. 01:34:229 (2) - make this slider go up instead of going down, it will add a spicy little jump didn't really feel like it, increased spacing a bit tho

6. 02:36:337 (1,2,3,4,5) - a straight line is kinda boring in my opinion, why not doing something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8388933 changed

7. 02:42:013 (3,4) - put the circle a bit down, or to x:256-y:196, so it will add a fun jump fine as is imo

8. 02:52:716 (1,2,3) - this objects should have some space between them, in my opinion doesnt look that good like that ok

Extra

1. 00:10:554 - 00:10:797: this whole part should be a stream, because the drums make enough sounds to make the stream http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8389027 (just an example of the stream, it doesnt need to look like that) ok

2. 00:57:581 (1,2,3,4) - make this part kinda look like 00:10:878 (5,6,7,8), or separate the slider "1" and "2" a bit more agree

3. 01:22:229 (1,2) - in my opinion, you should make this sliders end in the red line, they will fit better in that way i prefer this way

4. 02:20:932(2,3,4) - you should give this sliders a bit of spacing, so it doesnt look kinda boring nah something new gameplay is always nice

5. 02:27:418 (6) - maybe moving this circle to where the slider at 02:26:932 (5) begins? no?

Insane

1. 00:12:662 (8) - move this slider to x:216-y:204, this way it will flow a bit better (in my opinion) and it will also have the same spacing between the objects i don't want them to have a equal spacing

2. 01:44:932 (4) - move this circle to x:304-y:152, it will flow with the curve of the slider at 01:45:094 (5) but it overlaps to 01:44:283 (1) - : (

3. 02:15:581 (1,2,3,4) - this part is kinda confusing, maybe doing something else? i dont think it is

Hard

1. 00:46:878 (11,12) - move this part to x:216-y:116, it will flow with the curve of the slider at 00:46:878 (11,12) ive made a different spacing on purpose

2. 01:54:662 (8) - add new combo here, as you did in 01:02:770 (1) oops

3. 02:29:527 (8,9,10) - this objects should have the same spacing between them eh it's really slight difference

4. 02:59:527 (4,5,6) - do something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8389249 ok

Normal

1. 02:46:391 - you should put a spinner here, and end it in 02:47:527 (this could cause that the circle at 02:47:527 (1) could be deleted that doesn't really work :/

Easy

1. 00:05:202 (3) - you should move this slider a bit down, so it can look better uh it's fine imo

2. 02:10:229 - why not adding a spinner here, as you did in the other diffs? it could fit perfectly i didn't want to undermapping the first section until next measure nor ending spinner at 02:14:121

i hope this mod works! :S

Trynna wrote:

easy

1. your choice of not NCing 00:05:202 (3) - made your initial NC system be somehow different and you got 4 consecutive downbeats without NC 00:06:986 (1,2,3,4) - lmao tehepelo
2. 01:02:445 - would be nice to cover this sound with something non-sliderbody as you did on the other chorus '-'
3. 01:44:932 (2,3,4) - hm flow is a bit lol, noobs might go to the slidertail instead thx

normal

1. 00:44:283 (1,2,3) - maybe you can set a similar system as used on 01:36:175 (1,2,3) - (just noticed that there are many more that you didn't use it, maybe 01:36:175 (1,2) - is the wrong one lol) o fuk
2. 01:18:337 - normal whistles here felt really overdone since the normal hs is pretty louder than the soft one. I mean, you avoided spamming it on other sections of the song, and sounds really weird to have a bunch here blame top diffs

pretty good, also not repetitive as most normal diffs inconsistent



hard

1. 00:19:310 (3) - not a nice place to put a reverse at all, 00:19:959 - on a slider tail is lol when u consider u were followin' vocal it's my style well actually I like doing this for no reason : (
2. 00:40:391 (4,5) - maybe increase a bit the spacing between these two? looks like the same patterning but still has a damn strong sound ok dad
3. mayb ar7 would create a more consistent mapset since it has no real jumpy stuff and easy is 3 normal is 5 and insane is 9 but meh ok dud

it felt like you didn't use many jumpy patterns in transitions and stuff, maybe people won't be prepared to jump the insane diff patterns after playing it. I may be wrong tho, but the change is notable cs3 is enough to make the diff pretty easy to play smoothly, there's jumps in the insane but easy to hit all of them because of the reason



insane

that's pretty safe and neat, i doubt ur gonna change it more than 3 times, but as you said it's fun af anyway "as you said" what do you mean ecsdee

extra

1. 00:30:824 (4,5) - feels empty with nothing on 00:30:905 - and 00:31:472 (8,9,10) - following drums perfectly my style u kno didn't want a triplet
2. 00:32:445 (4) - pattern isn't bad but feedback didn't reach my expectations its my style variation is nic
3. 00:51:418 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - hmm any objective behind spacing here? the first pattern is notable bigger than the others, the second one is smaller but the last one isn't the smallest so i get a bit tilted adjusted spacing the each pattern but i don't get what you meant
4. 01:17:040 - this section is lol cuz u made it streammy but.. a really long streammy section with rest time only at the end. Kinda weird cuz streams aren't really a thing on the diff, so making it that heavy is unexpected gonna remake imo
5. 01:39:013 (1,2) - hm you always use 1/2 rhythm on that part and it still exists, why u just ignored it and followed a random sound on the blue tick? looks like choke material same tbh
   
   rest lookin' badass

last

1. 00:10:878 (5,6) - aw i expected u to fit the vocal better as you did on 00:16:067 (1) - 02:47:851 (1) - 02:53:040 (3) - etc. Anyway, even if you follow the instrumental or something is pretty z to have 00:11:202 - as a slider tail if on most parts it is clickable. (I know you hate clickable mod tho, sorry ) ur rite
2. 00:32:445 (5,1) - i'd swap NCing here so the pattern could be more effective visually ok and made changes on patterns too
3. 00:59:445 - undermap this when u did a bunch of triplets before is sortak no jutsu sry but my style consistency with 00:54:013 (2,1) - etc
4. 01:33:905 (1,2) - not a big fan of spacing here since it's one of the strongest parts of the section, but nothing extremely retard tho z
5. 02:04:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - MyAngelDelisha thx
6. 02:36:337 (1,2,3,4,5) - aw no feedback at all? maybe you can ctrl g 02:36:662 (3,4) - to match with your previous 90º patterns and make things nic made something nic
7. 02:52:716 (1,2,3) - kinda weird to read cuz slider + circle underlap and circle + slider overlap, that's gonna make ur aesthetic and reading be z, maybe manual stack and gg thx
8. 02:58:229 - a bit disappointed on jump spacing here, it is literally small than the previous section when you consider parts as 02:50:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - or something, but since it's getting bigger i think it's not a problem at all so ya my style otherwise i cant handle the star pattern

pp map sotarks sex

LimePixel wrote:

Mod request.

[Easy]
-00:24:175 (2) - I suggest making the slider body lead into and from the 2 circles 00:23:851 (1,3) so it isn't angled (example of this 01:20:608 (4,1) ) i don't get what you mean here
-00:26:770 (2,3) - Add a blanket not intended to be a blanket
-02:37:472 (3) - Make this a curved slider like the rest, for consistency? uh no

I also suggest using more varied hitsounds. can i have an example how to -_-

[Normal]
Use DS for Easy and Normal diffs. New players need to get accustomed to basic spacing rules. I've been doing this recently to have some variations in normal diffs, at least this is not even unrankable so i'd like to go as it is

-00:11:527 (2,3) - Angle #3 the same as you did with 00:11:527 (2) from 00:10:878 (1) i don't see the difference at all

[Hard]
-00:50:608 (1,2,3) - Fix blanket i don't care blankets once it's a slider with 4 anchors
-01:36:013 (1,2,3) - Before this section, you used this layout of objects like this 01:25:310 (6,7,8). So using this here might make the player to see it as a burst of notes instead of notes that are 1/2 of a beat apart. I don't think it's a problem though
-03:08:932 (4,6) - Ctrl + G each of them? i prefer them as is

/////I'll continue the mod after this for the other diffs in a few hours//////

[Insane]
-00:27:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You suddenly change the pattern from a triangle to a repeating triangle, with no change in the music that warrants it would be nice to listen to the music carefully
-00:29:689 (3,4,5,6,7) - Why is the spacing variable here? I found an equal spacing for them brings a boring play
-01:19:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - If you're going with a back and forth pattern, stick with it until you break out of that section of the song. Don't change it to normal jumps for no reason that's too repetitive for no reason as well lol
-01:27:094 (5,6,7,8) - Not really readable at this fast pace. Separate #5 prob
-01:40:067 (4,1) - Fix blanket i don't care lol
-02:16:067 (3,4) - Why are you overlapping this much? Unless you plan on using it more throughout the map, separate them. uh why am I not even allowed to use a variation here when I don't use it anywhere else? also the answer of this section is, because it's nice.

Honestly in the Extra and Extreme notes I was just repeating all the points that are above. So take that into consideration.
Hopefully this is helpful.

den0saur wrote:

[Extreme]

1. 00:15:256 (6,7,8) - i dont quite understand why there is triple. judging from what i've seen previously in a map you do stream only when there is a drum support for this sound, right? I dont hear any drum on a blue tick. because the vocals kinda represent for a triplet
2. 00:19:797 (4,5,6) - i dont understand this too. well this is completely overmapping but what's wrong with it because it's 2017 im mapping sr 6* map
3. 00:40:391 (1,2,3,4) - this trick is not used anywhere else in the map except this time. what's so special about this case? why not putting something like this somewhere else on the map too, or maybe just get rid of it at all? nah when I have a plenty of patterns in my mind why not trying all of them out? it's not a bad idea even if the pattern is only used once in a whole map unless the pattern doesn't fit to the song at all.
4. 00:45:743 (3,4,5) - why triple here? i dont hear any significant sound on the blue tick. is it to keep the circle-circle-triple pattern for that phrase? ya you guessed it right
5. 00:54:256 - , 00:59:445 - , 01:46:148 - this skipped intentionally? You may have done something interesting with a big larger rhythm variety than just 1/2 stuff. the point of the difficulty is, usually inspired to Furawa's mapset so rhythm in general is based on his map.
6. 01:22:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - maybe you would like to do this as a little wave? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8411154 imo it will be better visually and because of that will cause i little less pressure on a player because this thingie will look more player-friendly. i map to make players rage
7. 01:37:797 (5,6) - i think if you keep here the 1x distance, but 01:38:445 (3,4) - make here ~1.15x and 01:38:770 (1,2) - around 1.30x. yes i understand you have some kind of a grid for certain parts of a song, but why not developing the idea for something better? Or maybe even reverse the idea with spacing if you want to have more pressure on a player at that moment?
   i doubt someone would care it but changed
8. 02:01:148 (1) - you forgot to put soft sampleset on the sliderend
9. 02:25:472 (1,2,3,4) - awesome example of overmapping, i like it this is not even overmapping i just undermapped the rest but here to make it different lol

imo the spaced triples are to sudden to do like this. what i suggest is to increase the spacing between its' circles with each time those triples appear, from smaller to bigger. i don't see anything wrong with them, at least plays ok to me

i am unsure about all of my suggestions, but i hope you will find useful at least something.

[Extra]

1. 02:20:770 (1,2,3,4) - i'd like to see this pattern at least once more in this difficulty, in the same instance or something similar kinda hard to handle this pattern zz

Other than that, excellent difficulty, very nice structure.

[Insane]

1. 02:36:986 (5) - ctrl+g it twice to fix the shape, i think it looks better after such procedure. omg

cant find any more problems, really nice!

[Hard]

1. 00:58:229 (3) - I feel like this might be questionable for a difficulty of this level. If you stack it on 00:58:391 (4) - it might be better. uh this is ok i think?
2. 00:46:554 (9,10,11,12) - I find more sense in doing this moment with sliders and this one 00:59:527 (7,8) - with circles to better emphasize the climax of the chorus. it's because the rhythm 00:57:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is more complicated, it will be a lot harder when 4 circles appeared after this rhythm
3. 01:49:148 (8) - Stack it under 01:48:824 (7) - this slider's end? because thats what you were doing all the time in this map when there is 1 tick gap after it. ok
4. 03:02:121 (4,5,6,7) - maybe increase spacing between left and right sides of this pattern? it's a personal preference, but i think it will look better without those small overlaps. k

cute diff

[Normal]
Just a general suggestion: why not using successive 0.6x distance spacing between circles more times on choruses? Like how you did here 02:21:581 (2,3,4) - . And do less stacking on choruses. Also more stacking on verses and less on choruses. imo pretty simple yet logical concept. Everything else is fine! wanted to have this at least one, but not spam it

[Easy]
May sound like nitpicking, but i find this rhythm questionable, though i see the logic 01:37:635 (2) - . I suggest doing more distance between bodies, like you did it here 01:41:689 (1,2) - . k

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I noticed that you tried to make the highest difficulties different in their own way. Extreme is more aim oriented (right?), Extra is more of a rhythm gimmicks, and Insane is more flowy. But i think you could have expressed those things a little bit better at some cases. yknow, another double here and there in the Extra; few times the same gimmick repeated in a difficulty (00:40:391 (1,2,3,4) - thing like this); so such things will be more representative for each difficulty, i think you understand what i mean. Good mapset, wish luck in ranking this!!