Doing this mod as a M4M requested through discord.Sacred Faith:00:16:799 (16799|0) - would recommend deleting this note 00:15:911 (15911|2,15911|3,15911|0) - since it basically sounds like this part yet is emphasized heavier with a 3 note chord.
00:18:577 (18577|1,18577|0,18633|2,18688|3,18688|0,18744|1,18744|2,18799|3,18799|0,18855|1,18855|2,18911|0,18911|3,18966|1,18966|2,19022|3,19022|0) - this is extremely uncomfortable, I would recommend changing this to:
https://i.imgur.com/8N0mWSt.png makes both the transition in the middle and into the burst at the end a lot more comfortable.
00:22:466 (22466|0) - would delete since the sound doesn't really call for it to match a heavy snare the next note later
00:22:688 (22688|3) - ^
00:23:022 (23022|3) - delete
00:24:022 (24022|1) - add a note to column 4
00:35:244 (35244|1,35244|3,35244|0,35355|2,35466|1,35466|3,35466|0,35688|1,35688|3,35688|0) - I'm sure you can be a little more inventive with the patterning here.
00:40:022 (40022|3,40022|2,40133|0,40133|1,40244|3,40244|2,40355|1,40355|0,40466|3,40466|2,40577|0,40577|1,40688|2,40688|3) - make this not just be a stale jumptrill, make them jumpjacks
00:41:022 (41022|0,41244|0,41466|0,41688|0) - and 00:41:022 (41022|3,41244|3,41466|3,41688|3) - I'd rearrange it to avoid a stack like that, it looks visually unappealing
00:44:577 (44577|0,44577|3,44577|2,44799|3,44799|0) - same sound, yet two different type of chords?
00:48:688 (48688|2,48688|3,48799|1,48799|2) - explanation for why these are chords?
00:51:466 (51466|2,51577|1,51688|0,51799|1,51911|2,52022|1,52133|0,52244|1,52355|2,52466|1,52577|0,52688|1,52799|2,52911|1,53022|0,53133|1) - I think the sound changes in this little segment call for more variety in patterning and not just the same thing all over again.
01:02:884 (62884|2,62884|3,62953|1,63022|3,63022|0,63090|1,63159|2,63159|0,63228|3,63297|0,63297|1,63297|2,63401|3) - would recommend charting it this way:
https://i.imgur.com/cqcYA5L.png01:08:780 (68780|1,68780|0,68884|2,68884|3,68987|1,68987|0,69090|2,69090|3,69194|1,69194|0,69297|2,69297|3,69401|1,69401|0,69504|2,69504|3,69642|0,69642|1,69780|2,69780|3) - this all starts to slow down and also starts to lower in tone, use a variety of chords to make a jumpjack at this section not just a constant running 12/34 jumptrill
01:11:918 (71918|3) - delete..
01:11:987 (71987|0,71987|3) - would do something to make the vocal cut in the background stand out more, maybe some SVs?
01:21:504 (81504|3,81504|2,81504|0,81615|1,81615|0,81726|3,81726|2,81837|2,81837|1,81948|3,81948|0,82059|3,82059|2,82170|1,82170|0,82281|2,82281|1,82392|3,82392|0,82504|1,82504|0,82615|3,82615|2,82726|2,82726|1) - i would make these all triple chords to add the much needed intensity to this build up
01:23:392 (83392|3,83392|1,83504|2,83504|0,83615|3,83615|2,83726|1,83726|0,83837|2,83837|0,83948|3,83948|1,84059|3,84059|2,84170|1,84170|0,84281|3,84281|1,84392|2,84392|0,84504|1,84504|0) - ^
01:25:170 (85170|2,85170|0,85281|3,85281|1,85392|1,85392|0,85504|3,85504|2,85615|3,85615|1,85726|2,85726|0,85837|1,85837|0,85948|3,85948|2,86059|2,86059|0,86170|3,86170|1,86281|2,86281|1) - ^
01:26:948 (86948|3,86948|1,87059|0,87059|2,87170|3,87170|2,87281|1,87281|0,87392|3,87392|1,87504|0,87504|2,87615|2,87615|3) - ^
01:33:948 (93948|3,93948|2,95726|0,95800|3,95874|0,95948|3,96022|0,96096|3,96170|0,96244|3,96318|0,96392|3,96466|0,96541|3) - i feel this part needs a little more intensity than it is given, so id make it jumpjacks like so:
https://i.imgur.com/dRHZFbY.png01:39:615 (99615|3,99726|2,99837|1,99948|2,99948|3,100059|1,100170|3,100170|2) - rearrange this to be a little more fun please
01:42:170 (102170|0,102392|0,102615|0,102837|0,103059|0,103281|0,103503|0) - awkward stack, try avoiding it to the best of your ability
01:49:837 (109837|1,109948|3,109948|0,110059|2,110059|1,110170|3,110170|0,110281|1,110281|2,110392|0,110392|3,110503|1,110503|2,110615|3,110615|0,110726|1,110726|2) -
https://i.imgur.com/VlNQii5.png Would make the pattern have more variety instead of a repetitive 23/14 chord
01:50:170 (110170|3) - add note
All I have to say about the jumptrills is keep them if you want, but they are all replaceable with dense jumpstreams.
Do what you see fit with them, given the sound and style of song they are appropriate and there is not much else to do with the pattern tbh. Good luck with rank!Big fan of the song and artist so take some stars owo