1. 01:22:645 (1,2,3) - this section can put as streams for some consistency with 01:17:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - as it's same non-vocal
2. 01:27:020 (3) - NC for indicating circles?
3. 02:20:457 (2) - kinda personal tho, try ctrl + h for the smoother flow with 02:20:145 (1) - and try put the 02:20:926 (3) - to 339|322 for creating anti-flow emphasis on clap at 02:21:082 (4) -
4. 02:23:895 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - I get what you wanted to do on 02:23:895 (1,2,3) - but it would be great if it's combo is both four 1/2 as it's just repeating bass aka swap NC for rhythm consistency on 02:24:832 (1,2) - in sacrifice of aesthetics
5. 02:27:957 (1,2,3,4) - rounded stream pattern works better than zigzags as it's not that getting intense from 02:27:645 (1,2,3,4) - and also it's harder to hit than 02:28:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - for some people tbh w
6. 03:35:145 (1) - my ocd telling me it can be more symmetrical lol
7. 04:33:895 (1) - minor stuff but try moving the red anchor to 212|252 for better overlap from the streams
8. 05:23:270 (3,4) - using 1/4 rhythm wouldn't hurt here tbh

Akitoshi wrote:

from q

Heaven

1. 01:22:645 (1,2,3) - this section can put as streams for some consistency with 01:17:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - as it's same non-vocal
2. 01:27:020 (3) - NC for indicating circles? I don't intended this stream patterns consistency. Because the part is heard to another sounds here.
3. 02:20:457 (2) - kinda personal tho, try ctrl + h for the smoother flow with 02:20:145 (1) - and try put the 02:20:926 (3) - to 339|322 for creating anti-flow emphasis on clap at 02:21:082 (4) - I think it's not good flow and patterns. Because the slider flow changes in the opposite direction. btw I don't like it
4. 02:23:895 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - I get what you wanted to do on 02:23:895 (1,2,3) - but it would be great if it's combo is both four 1/2 as it's just repeating bass aka swap NC for rhythm consistency on 02:24:832 (1,2) - in sacrifice of aesthetics Good I will changed NCs issue
5. 02:27:957 (1,2,3,4) - rounded stream pattern works better than zigzags as it's not that getting intense from 02:27:645 (1,2,3,4) - and also it's harder to hit than 02:28:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - for some people tbh w Well, it's not big spacing zigzag streams. also zigzag stream is intended to botoom straight flow
6. 03:35:145 (1) - my ocd telling me it can be more symmetrical lol lol yeah I already know this slider is bad shape but i don't changed before. because it's so lazy zz, anyways I will try to more improve slider shape !
7. 04:33:895 (1) - minor stuff but try moving the red anchor to 212|252 for better overlap from the streams Keep, this suggestion. I don't like stack stream patterns also If you move this slider, it will confuse the player.
8. 05:23:270 (3,4) - using 1/4 rhythm wouldn't hurt here tbh Oh nice catch, I will change 1/4 repeat this sliders X3

ye this will be all from me as the map is already solid ww
this gonna be fun challenging map for me, goodluck!

Manteith wrote:

Hello , mod from my queue.

Heaven
01:22:488 (4) - Why you put here a circle if here is not any sound? I intended stop moving this circle
01:27:020 (3) - NC? Yeah I already to changed the suggestion before zz
01:32:645 (1) - This slider is weird tbh. Okay changed
03:35:145 (1) - Idk why this shape is weird for me. Yeah I agree, Changed
05:23:270 (3,4) - Maybe 1/4 repeat sliders Okay ~

Actually that's all.
Solid map.
Get kudosu star from me.

Good Luck!

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[응 세줄모딩]
00:10:145 (1) - 대가리 블랭킷 똑바로 해주셈 ㅇㅇ 다른모양으로 바꿔보겠음
00:47:645 (3) - 꺾인거 안보이게 만들어봐요 지금도 괜찮음
00:50:770 (1,2) - 제가 볼때는 절대로 1/4가 들어갈 자리가 아님 제가 볼때는 1/4가 들어가도 문제 없음, 무슨 이유로 1/4가 안되는지 모르겠는데 중간음이 비는듯 하지만 미세하게 들리는게 있음 그리고 1/4 리핏으로 인해서 허전한 리듬을 덮어주는 게 더 좋은 거 같음
세줄 끝

ㅈㅅ 더할게요
01:17:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 앞뒤 상황을 봐서 갑자기 강조될 파트는 아닌듯? 강조되는 피아노 리듬이 있음 여기
02:28:582 (5,6,7,8) - 여기도 간격 넓혀보셈 굳이 넓힐 필요가 없어보임, 늘어나는 구간이 이 스트림 이전 구간뿐이라
03:20:770 (3,4,5) - 간격 비슷하게 맞춰봐요 ㅇㅇ
03:59:363 (2,3) - 블랭킷
04:09:129 - 비트 여기있는것 같은데 04:08:895 (1) - 좀 늘여주세요 3/4 안어울림 여기 1/2로 박자 맞춰주는게 나음
04:13:270 (6,7) - 간격 갑자기 너무 넓어진 느낌이 듭니당 1/1 띄엄 띄엄 음이라서 무난합니당
04:31:082 (7,2) - 스택에러 ㅅㄱ ㅋㅋ 이런건 스택 할 필요가 없음 잔상이 심하게 나지않는 이상
04:37:801 (2) - 갑자기 굴곡이 너무 굽어있는데 이렇게까지 굽힐 필요는 없을듯요 어찌보면 하나의 노트로 처리가 될 수 있게끔 의도한 바가 있는데 이정도 굽는다고해서 플레이에 지장을 준다는건 좀 이상한듯?
04:39:520 (4,3) - 스택? ^ 위에 쓴것과 같은 의견
05:03:270 (1,2,3,1) - 여기랑 04:43:270 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 여기랑 같은 리듬을 맞춰주시는게 좋을듯. 사운드가 너무 비어있어서 저렇게 스트림 안에다가 같은 사운드를 넣었을 뿐이고 눈에 보이는 것은 스트림이기 때문에 괜찮다고 생각함, 아니면 아예 넣었던 힛사 빼면 되니까

굳럭

Sidetail wrote:

00:10:145 (1) - perhaps fix slider head above mod yeah lol
01:05:613 (1) - would look nicer if this was more symmetric I don't intended this slider symmetry :O
01:08:113 (3) - lower curve more rounder like top curve? I understand the slider balance for symmetry, but the same resson this slider too :O
01:15:145 (2) - NC? Nope, This isn't another section.
02:09:363 (3,4) - larger distance idk, why this patterns to need large ds
02:18:270 (3) - stack under the slider properly? Fixed
02:31:082 (4) - would be better if this one was placed with 2.0x ~ 2.5x ds range with previous note A little increase slider end.
02:32:020 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - increase distance as music hints upcoming kiai Hmm, I think the sound of this part is more emphasized. 02:33:270 (1,2,3,4) here. if the need increase spacing
02:35:145 (1) - i like this with clap Added
03:14:207 (2) - use hitsound from 03:09:207 (2) - ^
03:22:332 (6) - i really dont think this hs fits there.. idk, but it's okay, i thinking zz
03:27:332 (6) - ^ (etc) 6
04:22:645 (1) - for me it plays nicer if it was curved other way I will consider this slider.

originally i was left with 2 points of mod and thats pathetic, so i nitpicked. gl

• 
  00:38:895 (4) - NC?
  00:50:770 (1) - Error? slider should be stopping at red tick, and spacing of circle should be similar to 00:55:770 (1,2) -
  01:05:613 (1) - slider could be done better imo? up to u xd https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8361625
  02:02:957 (3) - could move to x325 y285, would play better imo
  01:57:332 (8) - maybe blanket with 01:57:645 (1) - ?
  02:18:270 (3,4,5,6) - awkward to hit, and also spacing is slightly off on 02:18:270 (3,4) -
  02:39:520 (5,6) - i feel like these kind of small circlular sliders really does not fit in the way ur mapping. maybe just strighten them out a bit?
  02:52:957 (2,3) - ^
  03:48:895 (1) - nitpicking, move them a bit left https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8361710
  03:56:395 (4) - NC?
  03:55:145 (2,3) - spacing seemed too big, i would put them somewhere in the middle between 03:55:145 (2,4) -
  03:56:395 (4) - blanket with03:57:020 (6) -
  04:07:020 (2,3) - inconsistent slider
  04:07:957 (1,2,3,4) - can I know the reason behind this change of spacing? there seems no reason to change it. same with the streams in the beginning of the map.
  04:13:270 (6,7) - spacing a bit too large again, it really seemed out of place, as the song is so calm.
  04:58:895 (1) - do this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8361755
  05:00:145 (1,2) - does not seem visually appealing. something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8361770

LimePixel wrote:

NM from queue.

[Heaven]
-01:05:145 (3) - NC?
-01:47:488 (1) - Rotate -60 degrees and move into place
-01:55:301 (2) - Replace with circle
-03:58:895 (1,2) - Move closer, maybe overlap a bit

Can't mod anything more because I can't really pass the song... Sorry for short mod

MujouSekai wrote:

NM from queue
Heaven

• 
  00:38:895 (4) - NC? Don't need NC here.
  00:50:770 (1) - Error? slider should be stopping at red tick, and spacing of circle should be similar to 00:55:770 (1,2) - Changed
  01:05:613 (1) - slider could be done better imo? up to u xd https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8361625 I think the slider shape it's okay.
  02:02:957 (3) - could move to x325 y285, would play better imo I intended another flow. also the moved to note is spacing a little small.
  01:57:332 (8) - maybe blanket with 01:57:645 (1) - ?
  02:18:270 (3,4,5,6) - awkward to hit, and also spacing is slightly off on 02:18:270 (3,4) - Okay
  02:39:520 (5,6) - i feel like these kind of small circlular sliders really does not fit in the way ur mapping. maybe just strighten them out a bit? Well, The players isn't click this slider all body, the bpm is fast also there is less time to process it.
  02:52:957 (2,3) - ^ ^
  03:48:895 (1) - nitpicking, move them a bit left https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8361710 it's fine
  03:56:395 (4) - NC? Don't need NCs. I have a consistent NCs.
  03:55:145 (2,3) - spacing seemed too big, i would put them somewhere in the middle between 03:55:145 (2,4) - Not big spacing here, There is a gap between the beats.
  03:56:395 (4) - blanket with03:57:020 (6) -
  04:07:020 (2,3) - inconsistent slider I intended the other slider patterns shape
  04:07:957 (1,2,3,4) - can I know the reason behind this change of spacing? there seems no reason to change it. same with the streams in the beginning of the map. I put this stream according to the sound of the music.
  04:13:270 (6,7) - spacing a bit too large again, it really seemed out of place, as the song is so calm. The same reason this suggestion,
  it's not big. the player is enough to reading and clear this.
  04:58:895 (1) - do this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8361755 it's already to fine slider shape.
  05:00:145 (1,2) - does not seem visually appealing. something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8361770 The suggestion is good, but I don't like straight visually flow. also this slider visually and flow is already good.

General
I think the hitsounding is a bit weird, espicially the pattern here 01:42:176 (3,1) - Well, If you said the stream sounds, I will changed the other sound.
Cool map! Good luck!

FruityEnLoops wrote:

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Hello!
M4M from your queue.
Reminder : my map
Really, really, really, really sorry for being late!
I had no PC for 5 days, and I had 2 mods on my own queue to do so I did your one at the end, sorry!

[General]
Your background is blurry. I used my secret professional methods (also known as Waifu2X) and here's a better version : https://puu.sh/wiJx8/acc1d29ccd.jpg
Changed
[Heaven]
00:10:145 (1) - missed instrument variations that you actually map later :thinking: 00:13:895 (1,1,2,3,1,2) - I don't know, what's mean your suggestion

00:33:582 (3) - ctrl+g The suggestion flow is good. but (1) and (2) slider spacing a little big so i made the another spacing this 1/4 slider.

00:37:645 (3,4) - would be awesome if these two were fast reversing sliders (to emphasize the "double" note of the piano) like 00:18:738 (2) - but faster
I wil consider it
01:17:957 (2,3,4,5,6) - either the slider is not aligned either the stream is not vertical it's enough good stream shape.

01:38:816 (6) - that circle is off the slider body, maybe move the slider or rotate to fix? Okay

02:13:270 (1,2,1) - sad overlap it/s 3/4 rhythm but if the slider end overlap this stream. player is reading so confuse this stream rhythm and 3/4 rhythm :thinking:

02:14:520 (2,1,2,3,4) - why does this part is slow I don't think this part slow. the bpm is 192 and i used 0.75x slider speed is general i think.
02:16:395 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - but this part is fast? the bass is coming back to slowly tbh, give the player a break! ^ same

02:27:957 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - mmmh that's weird Well I think it's fine

02:32:801 (2,3) - STACK Okay

02:42:566 (6) - again, i would suggest moving the slider body Okay

02:47:410 (4,4) - could be cool if they stacked nope, if the patterns slider head stack to before note, move to other patterns, it's really weird

overall there's not much to say, in my opinion take 1/2 mods from more advanced modders (i'm bad lul) and you're ready for BN!
really cool technical map!