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Ashton
third
Seijiro
minor stuff

Insane:
00:29:586 (3,4) - this can be Ctrl G'd to keep the usual back and forth movement on this sort of pattern (00:17:489 (1,2,1,2) - 00:33:940 (5,6,7,8) - 00:47:973 (5,6,1,2) - etc...)
01:43:618 (1) - I mentioned this on your marathon mapset too, but spinning on calm parts feels really meh to me. Just a circle would be better imo (all diffs I guess)

Hard:
01:12:650 (3,4,1) - might become a bit confusing so what about this instead? Just to make it even more clear

is black.png used?
Dashyy-
theePish

normal:

00:38:779 (1) - slider end here should be emphasized, could make it a two circle stack or smth
01:12:650 (5) - end this on 01:13:134 - cuz bass kick and vocals end there aswell
01:28:134 (6,7) - feel like these could be a slider instead to differentiate sounds z
tbh could've mapped ending

insane:
00:38:779 (1,2,3) - shouldn't this be like 00:23:295 (1,2) - ?

darn it couldn't find anything else >:/
Topic Starter
pishifat
Insane:
00:29:586 (3,4) - this can be Ctrl G'd to keep the usual back and forth movement on this sort of pattern (00:17:489 (1,2,1,2) - 00:33:940 (5,6,7,8) - 00:47:973 (5,6,1,2) - etc...)wavy motion feels cool here. rather not go in circles 100% of the time
01:43:618 (1) - I mentioned this on your marathon mapset too, but spinning on calm parts feels really meh to me. Just a circle would be better imo (all diffs I guess)dont feel like it's that bad:(

Hard:
01:12:650 (3,4,1) - might become a bit confusing so what about this instead? Just to make it even more clear did

is black.png used? removed

normal:

00:38:779 (1) - slider end here should be emphasized, could make it a two circle stack or smth changed
01:12:650 (5) - end this on 01:13:134 - cuz bass kick and vocals end there aswell melody more important here imo
01:28:134 (6,7) - feel like these could be a slider instead to differentiate sounds z
tbh could've mapped ending did

insane:
00:38:779 (1,2,3) - shouldn't this be like 00:23:295 (1,2) - ? low sv is the equivilent to circle only in higher denisty section
Pho
00:42:529 (4) - on hard, not sure why this is here since it seems overmapped and insane doesnt have it either

00:08:295 (1) - on insane, don't think this nc is necessary
00:44:586 (1,2,3) - uneven stack

not sure how i got here tbh
coco
wow v1

normal
00:08:295 (2,3) - 1/4 on normal prety SUSPecT +it's the only blue tick ur choosing not to ignore which is :thinking:
00:29:102 (4) - 00:44:586 (4) - could use different rhythm to capture vocals more since just following stuff in back is kinda stale imo aa
00:40:715 (3,4) - etc might be unintuitive but idk probably not lo

insane
00:44:949 (2,3) - 00:46:884 (2,3) - pls move 1 coordinate up and left
01:07:328 (3) - 01:18:940 (3) - lot less stressing to play vs 00:59:586 (3) - 01:03:457 (3) - 01:15:070 (3) - cuz the angle and spacing
probably wanna make it consistent for consistent emphasis
Topic Starter
pishifat
i dont get cocos last thing. the compared things feel pretty samey

fixed everything else
timemon
This song hurts my ears but I can't stop listening to it, help
Why is this so addicting

General
-Maybe wanna try to silence the spinner at 01:46:521 - ?

Do you have metadata? I did some google search and got this thing https://baq5.bandcamp.com/album/android ... new-galaxy
Maybe should add the album name to the tags? PS. I'm not an expert on metadata

Everything else looks good to me
Ataraxia
hellooooo

[General]

nothing to say xp

[Normal]

01:32:973 - in the others diff u put something here, just normal u stop the map here, u should put something here.

[Hard]

01:08:295 (2,3) - u use DS in all moments, but here u put a 1.7 ? Look here 01:04:424 (3,4) - , the same rhythm with the DS, here too 01:00:553 (2,3) - . u should let them 1.2 or make something like 1.4~5 (i use 1.4 here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10215273)

[Insane]

01:13:013 (2,3,4) - you should do a different patten, but not a stack. u have done this 00:59:102 (1,2,3,4) - a lot of time, u just put a double with slider in 00:58:134 (1,2,3) - , 01:02:005 (1,2,3) - ... you can confuse the players even more its a 3.3. i recommend something like https://puu.sh/zkf44/c4a1150e9b.jpg.

i like the map, star for you. (sorry for late)
Topic Starter
pishifat
SPOILER

Ataraxia wrote:

hellooooo

[General]

nothing to say xp

[Normal]

01:32:973 - in the others diff u put something here, just normal u stop the map here, u should put something here. would be super long sliders in this diff which would kinda suck

[Hard]

01:08:295 (2,3) - u use DS in all moments, but here u put a 1.7 ? Look here 01:04:424 (3,4) - , the same rhythm with the DS, here too 01:00:553 (2,3) - . u should let them 1.2 or make something like 1.4~5 (i use 1.4 here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10215273) adjusted

[Insane]

01:13:013 (2,3,4) - you should do a different patten, but not a stack. u have done this 00:59:102 (1,2,3,4) - a lot of time, u just put a double with slider in 00:58:134 (1,2,3) - , 01:02:005 (1,2,3) - ... you can confuse the players even more its a 3.3. i recommend something like https://puu.sh/zkf44/c4a1150e9b.jpg. dont think reading would be a problem here if the rest of the map is played

i like the map, star for you. (sorry for late)


@timemon
did spinner thing
added tags
Nozhomi
[Easy :]
  1. 00:07:811 (1) - I don't think whistle is intended.
  2. 01:06:602 (2) - This circle feels misplaced for the rhythm because you have a stronger beat at 01:07:569 - who is totally ignored with vocal on it. Same for 01:14:344 (2) - / 01:18:215 (2) - .
[Insane :]
  1. 00:34:182 (6,7,8) - So hmm I understand why you emphasis 00:34:182 (6,7) - but then why killing it on 00:34:424 (7,8) - when it's the same drumhit who follow ? That make no sense.

Mukyu~
Topic Starter
pishifat
whistle is supposed to be there for the beepy sound thing idk what it is

did the rest
timemon
As requested
Nozhomi
Mukyu~
Topic Starter
pishifat
muk yu
Lanturn
This should really use Nisekoi for the source. "ニセコイ" as the song is a full remix of the original.

Taisetsu no Tsukuri-kata is the song being remixed here

http://web.archive.org/web/201506121659 ... dlfgq.webm

Some tags. Unicode Title one should at least be added.

大切の作り方
Taisetsu no Tsukuri-kata
Taisetsu no Tsukurikata
桐崎千棘 小野寺小咲 東山奈央 花澤香菜
Kirisaki Chitoge Touyama Nao Onodera Kosaki Hanazawa Kana

ps, this is an ending, so opening isn't needed.
Fycho
hmm :(
Topic Starter
pishifat
mukyu
Fycho
ok
Lanturn
pishifat is just too kyuute

<3
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