yoshiki*lisa - Destin Histoire -TV size-

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Firebool
Hello from modding room, thanks for your mod btw... again
General
"ll those timing points are actually needed if I want to accuratly represent the song" - but most of them are incorrect, try to time it good, cauze ~30 tp is not a bisnes. Upper mod with timing was pretty good. Or mb there are troubles mith mp3 file, cauze mostly tv-sizes have 1 or 2 timing sections

00:25:775 (4,2) - bad overlap
00:48:719 - lost strong beat here
mostly its a nice diff but I do not agree with the idea that you need to allocate strong beats to the beginning of the slider
00:26:678 (2,3,4,5,1) - nice form but not a good flow
01:17:300 (2) - there is no 1/3. Listen on 50%. First shot here 01:17:300 - , second here 01:17:477 - so there is no 1/3, just 1/4
very nice diff
00:04:290 (1) - It is not necessary to put a spinner here
00:22:362 (2,3) - stack it plz, everewhere u stacked
00:57:930 (1,2,3) - Are not located on a straight line
01:00:127 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Thats cauze of timing, different speed of the stream. It's not good enough
01:18:015 - lost beat
I can not find the mistakes that strike me in the eyes
godd playable diff

GL with your good set, try to time it good and it will be the BOMB
Topic Starter
Stack

DarkFire wrote:

Hello from modding room, thanks for your mod btw... again
General
"ll those timing points are actually needed if I want to accuratly represent the song" - but most of them are incorrect, try to time it good, cauze ~30 tp is not a bisnes. Upper mod with timing was pretty good. Or mb there are troubles mith mp3 file, cauze mostly tv-sizes have 1 or 2 timing sections I've actually been trying to find an expert timer so I can be sure of the timing but it's no that easy to find one, I'll keep searching but for now, I'll keep it like this

00:04:290 (1) - It is not necessary to put a spinner here I'll think about it but it's weird just to ignore the increasing sound
00:22:362 (2,3) - stack it plz, everewhere u stacked isn't it stacked already
00:57:930 (1,2,3) - Are not located on a straight line ~fixed~
01:00:127 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Thats cauze of timing, different speed of the stream. It's not good enough I'll look for a good timing check
01:18:015 - lost beat I did not map it beacause I get a ton more emphasis on 01:18:193 (1,1,1) - this way
I can not find the mistakes that strike me in the eyes
godd playable diff

GL with your good set, try to time it good and it will be the BOMB
Thanks for the mod :)
Ward74
Normal

00:28:678 (4,1) - Not exactly blanked

Hard

00:04:471 (1,2) - Blanke if you want
00:38:820 (3) - Me i change this because we hear the nc a the end of the slider https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8503148
00:53:615 (1,2) - Blanked ?
00:55:413 (2,3) - ^
01:00:131 (8,1) - Stack ?
01:11:703 (7,1) - ^

Insane

00:13:326 (2) - Better ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8503182
00:49:096 (3,1) - I think it's the same combo
01:06:457 (6,1) - ^

Good luck for the ranking it's a funny map ! 8-)
aigoh

Einja wrote:

00:27:405 (5,1) - you could space these away from each other for downbeat emphasis, like you did with 00:28:678 (4,1) - and 00:31:739 (6,1) - I am adding jumps every other white big ticks, so change here doesn't seem necessary.

00:34:821 (1) - lol this felt weird to play, flip this by 180 degrees and ctrl g it for better flow aaa Sure!

01:19:471 (2,3,1) - overmapped triple, no 1/4 sound there. if you removed it, it wouldn't be overmap and it would also emphasize lyrics more Kay

01:20:914 (2,3,1) - ^

this diff was really nice, good job! Thanks :D

DarkFire wrote:

00:26:678 (2,3,4,5,1) - nice form but not a good flow Ctrl+ G'd 00:27:223 (4,5) - for better flow
01:17:300 (2) - there is no 1/3. Listen on 50%. First shot here 01:17:300 - , second here 01:17:477 - so there is no 1/3, just 1/4 I changed the rhythm so that the 1/3 reverse starts at 01:17:477 -
very nice diff ty!

Ward74 wrote:

00:04:471 (1,2) - Blanke if you want It's fine, sorry
00:38:820 (3) - Me i change this because we hear the nc a the end of the slider https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8503148 I'll keep this in mind
00:53:615 (1,2) - Blanked ? I think it's fine
00:55:413 (2,3) - ^
01:00:131 (8,1) - Stack ? Keeping this way to show the change in rhythm!
01:11:703 (7,1) - ^

Thanks for mods!
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Topic Starter
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-Nitrous wrote:

Hi! From my Modding Queue
fixing for crimmi
[General]
  1. Fix your BPM, its inconsistent across difficulties will be fixed soontm


[Crimmi's Normal]
  1. This difficulty doesn't end the exact time as the other difficulties. ~fixed~
  2. 00:08:078 (4,5,6) - Use a 1/2 repeat slider instead to keep it simple. ok, will do this for now
  3. 00:21:813 (3) - CTRL + G this for better flow yup
  4. 00:26:151 (1) - CTRL + G for better flow too also nice
  5. 00:51:452 (5,1) - This would've flowed better if (5) actually pointed to (1) not that big a problem as you want (1) to stand out beacause it's a loud sound
  6. 01:05:187 (5) - Would make this a 1/1 repeat instead. yup, works alot better
  7. 01:16:934 (2) - The repeat shouldn't be on the blue tick. Make it a 1/1 repeat instead and add a circle where the original slider ended. yup
  8. 01:23:982 (1) - End it on 01:29:408 - instead and fixed
    Although the beat is on 01:29:404 - the BPM is inconsistent. Take this as a note.

That's all I can give. Thanks for using my queue!

Ward74 wrote:

Normal

00:28:678 (4,1) - Not exactly blanked fixed now

Insane

00:13:326 (2) - Better ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8503182 sure
00:49:096 (3,1) - I think it's the same combo I want the start of the kiai to really stand out so I nc'ed
01:06:457 (6,1) - ^ There is a pretty obvious downbeat there so I nc'ed

Good luck for the ranking it's a funny map ! 8-)
Thanks for the mods :)
also changed combo colors ot the new ones for this bg
@aigoh you might want to do the same, also updated the diff
aigoh

gottagof4ast wrote:

@aigoh you might want to do the same, also updated the diff
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Destin Histoire (TV Size)
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Vanillas
General
  1. I don't know why using so many timing Points. I tried to delete all except bpm166 offset 130 and find it ok. Besides, the ranked version also didn't use so many timing points according to https://osu.ppy.sh/s/121120.
Crimmi's Normal
  1. 00:30:314 (3) - for this part you're following drums but suddently turn to vocal at this point. remove the circle maybe better imo.
  2. 00:46:381 (1,2) - missing note at 00:46:765. try this rhythm: https://puu.sh/wDDY9/2e11e650c0.png
  3. 00:52:190 (1) - I'm not sure what the repeat is following. If you want to follow vocal it should ends at 00:53:076. And if follow drum there shouldn't be a note at 00:52:717.
  4. there is a finish at 01:05:017 (4) - but also at 01:07:905. make them same.
aigoh's Hard
  1. Sample normal maybe a little noisy as there is not so strong sound at ends of sliders such as 00:07:724 (2,5) -
  2. it seems you use same DS in kiai time which make kiai time easier. try to make it harder.
  3. 00:47:657 (1,2,3) - you even didn't use so large distance in kiai time. decrease distance between 1 and 2 to give emphasis to jump between 2 and 3.
  4. 01:12:051 (1) - use the same rhythm as 01:11:703 (7) - to follow drums.
  5. 01:13:890 (1,2,3,4) - overlap the start of sliders to make it easier. seperate them is too hard as for this diff.
Insane
  1. 00:21:640 (4,1) - did not feel flow when test play. move 1 to right side of 4 to make a better flow.
  2. 01:23:624 normal and hard diff mapped this part with notes, so map this part is better than just a spinner imo.
  3. 00:52:190 (1) - the slider should finish at 00:52:364.
  4. 00:48:549 (1,2) - move 2 downside 1 for a better flow
GL~
Topic Starter
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Hikawa Hina wrote:

General
  1. I don't know why using so many timing Points. I tried to delete all except bpm166 offset 130 and find it ok. Besides, the ranked version also didn't use so many timing points according to https://osu.ppy.sh/s/121120. I am waiting for the timing check I requested to be 100% sure as I don't trust the 2014 timing, cause that one also sounds off
Insane
  1. 00:21:640 (4,1) - did not feel flow when test play. move 1 to right side of 4 to make a better flow. ~fixed~
  2. 01:23:624 normal and hard diff mapped this part with notes, so map this part is better than just a spinner imo. It's more up to what the mapper wants, and I really did not feel like notes are good here but if more people complain I'll change it
  3. 00:52:190 (1) - the slider should finish at 00:52:364. I chose for an extended slider as the vocal stops on the blue tick and this was imo a better representation of it, also there is no sound on the red tick so there is no problem using an extended slider
  4. 00:48:549 (1,2) - move 2 downside 1 for a better flow This flowbreak is meant to be here to emphasize the huge diffrence between these notes and the ones from the stream right before this
GL~
Thanks alot for the mod :)
Dashyy-
m4m!!!!!!!

g:

pretty dumb suggestion but it sounds better if u move kiai to 01:18:193 - idk
ur offset also sounds 30 ms too late, might wanna confirm with someone who is better at timing tho lol

crim:

00:21:459 (2,4) - in normal diffs, overlaps are looked down upon since they could mess up a new player's reading abilities. i would suggest making 3 a nc so it can be read appropriately (like u did here 00:25:775 (4,2) - )
00:30:133 (2,3,4) - tbh this kinda derails from the rhythm you had. would suggest using just one circle
00:51:470 (5) - slider should be pointing towards 00:52:190 (1) - 's slider head. the direction it's in now can mess up a new player
00:55:053 (1,2) - sounds better rhythmically if you flipped these to slider-circle
01:02:114 - missing a pretty important sound here. put a circle here like you did previously
01:07:905 - ^

aigoh:

00:25:605 (2) - forgot clap :(

golden:

00:26:133 - this section's jumps seem too intense compared to the song's intensity. since they are about the same distance as the jumps in the kiai. would suggest lowering them by a bit

no huge complaints about the higher diffs tbh
Topic Starter
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Dashyy- wrote:

m4m!!!!!!!

g:

pretty dumb suggestion but it sounds better if u move kiai to 01:18:193 - idk The song gets really quiet and slow comared to the chorus so I think I chose a decent cutoff point
ur offset also sounds 30 ms too late, might wanna confirm with someone who is better at timing tho lol There is a timing check on it's way

crim:

00:21:459 (2,4) - in normal diffs, overlaps are looked down upon since they could mess up a new player's reading abilities. i would suggest making 3 a nc so it can be read appropriately (like u did here 00:25:775 (4,2) - ) I would like to keep the nc consistently on every 2 downbeats
00:30:133 (2,3,4) - tbh this kinda derails from the rhythm you had. would suggest using just one circle k, applied
00:51:470 (5) - slider should be pointing towards 00:52:190 (1) - 's slider head. the direction it's in now can mess up a new player I'll think about it
00:55:053 (1,2) - sounds better rhythmically if you flipped these to slider-circle The vocals land on the clickable parts the way it's mapped now and that feels better
01:02:114 - missing a pretty important sound here. put a circle here like you did previously would rather not do that
01:07:905 - ^

golden:

00:26:133 - this section's jumps seem too intense compared to the song's intensity. since they are about the same distance as the jumps in the kiai. would suggest lowering them by a bit nerfed first and third measures' jumps a bit

no huge complaints about the higher diffs tbh
Thanks for the mod :)
Antlia-
NM from my queue <3


ahsoka08 wrote:

Crimmi's Normal

check aimod with distance snap on
some of the sliders are noticeably faster than others bc of the weird timing make sure all of the velocities are equal (00:56:314 (4) is faster than 00:57:211 (5))
Aigoh's hard

00:07:182 (1) I don't like the sharp angles in a song like this, it doesn't express it well( this goes for every other sharp slider)
00:46:034 (4) This should be a stream
01:24:076 (1) why does this spinner have so many green lines, they make no difference

Insane

Make all of the jumps in this diff similar, they all look completely different
00:40:606 (1) sharp angles again
01:13:890 (1,2,3,1) make this a stream

Insane

00:48:018 (2,3,4) make this a stream
01:00:131 (4,5,6)^
I really like this mapset :3, GL on pushing it to rank
aigoh
Thanks for mods!

Hikawa Hina wrote:

  1. Sample normal maybe a little noisy as there is not so strong sound at ends of sliders such as 00:07:724 (2,5) - I changed the base volume to 35% instead!
  2. it seems you use same DS in kiai time which make kiai time easier. try to make it harder. I think it is hard enough, as the jumps are more frequent and higher DS. Plus, I don't want to mess with the difficulty spread.
  3. 00:47:657 (1,2,3) - you even didn't use so large distance in kiai time. decrease distance between 1 and 2 to give emphasis to jump between 2 and 3.I think the strong claps here is enough reason to add a jump at (2)
  4. 01:12:051 (1) - use the same rhythm as 01:11:703 (7) - to follow drums. Leaving like this, since I wanted to simplify the rhythm here. Mainly, the vocal is very strong at 01:12:051 -
  5. 01:13:890 (1,2,3,4) - overlap the start of sliders to make it easier. seperate them is too hard as for this diff.Gotcha

Dashyy- wrote:

00:25:605 (2) - forgot clap :(Oh yeah XD fixed!

ahsoka08 wrote:

00:07:182 (1) I don't like the sharp angles in a song like this, it doesn't express it well( this goes for every other sharp slider)My opinion is different--players don't actually follow the slider path, and it doesn't affect the playability so much. I also used sharp sliders to represent electric guitar.
00:46:034 (4) This should be a stream Didn't do so because of difficulty spread.
01:24:076 (1) why does this spinner have so many green lines, they make no difference Slight difference, actually XD the volume changes
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Yahuri
m4m return from my queue

Crimmi's Normal
-is slidertick rate 2 really necessary? this is the only diff without tickrate 1.
00:08:808 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:18:929 (3,1) - the blanket doesnt look good here because the visual spacing is less than 1.00x DS. the tail of 1 is also closer to 3 than the head of 1 is to 3. personally i would just not use a blanket here
00:25:775 (4,2) - this is the only place with a regular stack, so i would just decrease the stack leniency so that all of the stacks are the same.
00:51:470 (5,1) - flow doesnt look good here, i would curve 5 into 1 more.
01:06:275 (6,1) - fix blanket
01:07:724 (3,4) - ^
01:10:792 (3,2) - overlap doesnt look good
01:16:920 (2,1) - blanket?

aigoh's Hard
-its not quite clear to me when you have jumps and when you dont. for example this 00:52:014 (5,1) - has no jump and this 01:01:941 (4,1) does (both have the same hitsounding)
00:32:643 (3,5) - stack makes this pattern look messy imo
00:42:782 (3,1) - blanket?
00:53:615 (1,2,3) - flow looks a bit weird because of the wide angle and the jump from 2-3
01:00:506 (1) - NC not necessary imo
01:00:506 (1,1) - could add in a jump
01:21:094 (1,2) - fix stack

Insane
00:04:290 (1) - this would be better if you mapped it like the rest of the intro. it feels out of place because the same melody repeats here, but you changed it into a spinner instead (its also short so i got caught off guard).
00:06:820 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:15:314 (3,1) - ^
00:19:652 (3,4) - doesnt need a jump imo
00:20:013 (4,5) - DS here feels out of place with what youve been doing until now like here 00:18:206 (3,4) and here 00:15:314 (3,4)
00:24:531 - this would be better as a click imo because of the held out vocals (so turn this 00:24:170 (4) into 1/2 slider + circle)
00:25:254 (2,3,1,2,3) - shape looks messy, try using a star or hexagon
00:31:206 (3,4) - i dont think this needs a large jump because it sounds like the guitar sound that starts on 3 is cutting off at 4
00:53:436 (1,3) - not too fond of the overlap with the head of 3, but its acceptable i guess
00:55:413 (2,4) - this is the first time theres a stack that looks like this (back and forth) so it looks out of place. this particular section of music doesnt really seem all that special either.
01:07:362 (3,5) - ^
01:04:118 (2,3) - fix blanket
01:12:976 (2,3) - ^
01:15:857 (3,1) - ^
01:09:162 (6,7,1) - DS of 6-7 should be smaller than 7-1 because 1 has more stress on the vocals, as well as a cymbal crash
01:09:872 (2,1) - 01:10:405 (2,1) - these could use a little more spacing too
01:22:540 (1) - spinner start feels weird because nothing significant happens. how about starting it here 01:22:359?

Golden Fairy
00:04:290 (1) - same thing as Insane
00:08:808 (1,2) - sounds pretty much the same as 00:05:917 (1,2) - so i think you should follow the same rhythm. also mapping the 3/4 slider misses a small thing here 00:08:989
00:09:893 (4,1) - 00:10:615 (3,4) - really large DS changes, i think they should be more similar.
00:11:338 (6,1) - 00:12:061 (2,1) - ^
00:11:158 (5,6) - reduce the jump, 6 isnt that strong
00:19:652 (3,4,5) - same as Insane
00:24:531 - same as Insane
00:30:314 (4,1) - DS looks kinda small compared to what youve been using in this section, like here 00:28:860 (6,1)
00:33:187 (4,1) - ^
01:05:017 - finishes sound excessive in this section. i would at least get rid of this one 01:05:375 (1) because theres nothing in the background to support it
01:11:537 (3,4,5) - really pushing the limits of slider leniency imo, you can reduce spacing here
01:16:378 (1,2,3,4) - isnt a straight line (i removed 01:16:920 (2) and tested it) it would look better if it was a straight line
01:22:540 (1) - same as Insane

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Stack

ahsoka08 wrote:

NM from my queue <3


ahsoka08 wrote:

Insane

Make all of the jumps in this diff similar, they all look completely different don't want them to be too similar
00:40:606 (1) sharp angles again nah, want some variation
01:13:890 (1,2,3,1) make this a stream long streams of 1/3 rhythm are really annoying to play

Insane

00:48:018 (2,3,4) make this a stream 1/4 sliders also show the 1/4 rhythm well
01:00:131 (4,5,6)^ ^
I really like this mapset :3, GL on pushing it to rank
Thanks for taking a look

Yahuri wrote:

m4m return from my queue
Insane
00:04:290 (1) - this would be better if you mapped it like the rest of the intro. it feels out of place because the same melody repeats here, but you changed it into a spinner instead (its also short so i got caught off guard). fixed after multiple times thhis got pointed out
00:06:820 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:15:314 (3,1) - ^
00:19:652 (3,4) - doesnt need a jump imo want a jump to show the change into following the piano instead of the vocals
00:20:013 (4,5) - DS here feels out of place with what youve been doing until now like here 00:18:206 (3,4) and here 00:15:314 (3,4) still following the piano which increases in intensity
00:24:531 - this would be better as a click imo because of the held out vocals (so turn this 00:24:170 (4) into 1/2 slider + circle) applied
00:25:254 (2,3,1,2,3) - shape looks messy, try using a star or hexagon want 00:25:605 (1,2,3) - to stand out more so I increased spacing on 2 more, should be better now
00:31:206 (3,4) - i dont think this needs a large jump because it sounds like the guitar sound that starts on 3 is cutting off at 4 yup, I'll look for something different, can't see anyhting good immediatly
00:53:436 (1,3) - not too fond of the overlap with the head of 3, but its acceptable i guess If only I had like .1 more sv then it would have been nicer :(
00:55:413 (2,4) - this is the first time theres a stack that looks like this (back and forth) so it looks out of place. this particular section of music doesnt really seem all that special either. did something different
01:07:362 (3,5) - ^ 01:07:905 (5) - This one was really loud so I wanted somthgn different but if more people tell me the same I'll change it
01:04:118 (2,3) - fix blanket
01:12:976 (2,3) - ^ was not supposed to be a blanket but ok fixed
01:15:857 (3,1) - ^
01:09:162 (6,7,1) - DS of 6-7 should be smaller than 7-1 because 1 has more stress on the vocals, as well as a cymbal crash increased spacing to 01:09:517 (1) -
01:09:872 (2,1) - 01:10:405 (2,1) - these could use a little more spacing too
01:22:540 (1) - spinner start feels weird because nothing significant happens. how about starting it here 01:22:359?

Golden Fairy
00:04:290 (1) - same thing as Insane yup
00:08:808 (1,2) - sounds pretty much the same as 00:05:917 (1,2) - so i think you should follow the same rhythm. also mapping the 3/4 slider misses a small thing here 00:08:989 rather let them both ahve the 3/4 pattern then
00:09:893 (4,1) - 00:10:615 (3,4) - really large DS changes, i think they should be more similar.
00:11:338 (6,1) - 00:12:061 (2,1) - ^
00:11:158 (5,6) - reduce the jump, 6 isnt that strong
00:19:652 (3,4,5) - same as Insane also same thing as the insane
00:24:531 - same as Insane It's ok here as I follow up by emphasizing instruments with circles, so the vocals don't really need a clickable object here
00:30:314 (4,1) - DS looks kinda small compared to what youve been using in this section, like here 00:28:860 (6,1) upped spacing
00:33:187 (4,1) - ^ ^
01:05:017 - finishes sound excessive in this section. i would at least get rid of this one 01:05:375 (1) because theres nothing in the background to support it
01:11:537 (3,4,5) - really pushing the limits of slider leniency imo, you can reduce spacing here same spacing as previous 1/4 sliders so it should be fine
01:16:378 (1,2,3,4) - isnt a straight line (i removed 01:16:920 (2) and tested it) it would look better if it was a straight line ok, I guess, never meant to put it in a straight line but it should look better now
01:22:540 (1) - same as Insane

Good luck!
no reply means fixed
Will finish later

Thanks alot for the mod, this is what I was looking for :)
Lokidoki
queue modding

[Crimmi's Normal]
00:12:603 (2,3) - make that a bit more linear by moving the slider to x:296 y:276 and fix the blanket with 00:13:868 (4) -
00:50:379 (3,4) - this rhythm and object placing seems unfitting for the map as a whole
01:23:444 (4) - unneeded slider
start the spinner at 01:23:805 (1) -
[aigoh's Hard]
01:03:755 (1,2,3) - why is the first slider curved and others are not, the flow here should be more curved, rather than strict and linear
01:22:359 (1) - tbh, kinda ugly
[Insane]
00:04:290 (1) - 1/2 recovery after that spinner may not be enough if you're posing this as a LI. also, it is a bit too short imo, so i suggest you remove it.
00:25:775 (2) - why is that one so far away?
00:29:587 (2,3) - this is not a good flow, make (3) curved a bit
00:49:096 (3) - i'd rather not follow the vocals.
01:12:976 (2) - from curved to linear to curved, that slider is flowing very strangely.
01:22:540 - that spinner is unneded here, make a circle there if you want, but all it does is just ruin the HP.
[Golden Fairy]
00:04:290 (1) - same as before
00:49:096 (3) - ^
00:51:103 (2,3,4,5) - tbh this is too edgy and too awkward of a flow, make it softer.
01:05:017 (1,2,1,2,1) - why NCs?
01:05:910 (2,3,4,1) - again more strange flows, make them slower as well, make (2) a curved slider so it would play nicer.
01:22:540 (1) - same as stated before in the mod.
aigoh
Thanks for mods!

Yahuri wrote:

aigoh's Hard
-its not quite clear to me when you have jumps and when you dont. for example this 00:52:014 (5,1) - has no jump and this 01:01:941 (4,1) does (both have the same hitsounding) Yeah, I agree--I was confused because the drum finishes there are not logical. I'll try to fix these parts
00:32:643 (3,5) - stack makes this pattern look messy imo fixed
00:42:782 (3,1) - blanket? keeping
00:53:615 (1,2,3) - flow looks a bit weird because of the wide angle and the jump from 2-3
01:00:506 (1) - NC not necessary imo fixed
01:00:506 (1,1) - could add in a jump fixed
01:21:094 (1,2) - fix stack fixed

Lokidoki wrote:

01:03:755 (1,2,3) - why is the first slider curved and others are not, the flow here should be more curved, rather than strict and linear I am following the drum here, where it is hitting on something real solid.
01:22:359 (1) - tbh, kinda ugly Changed XD
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Topic Starter
Stack

Lokidoki wrote:

queue modding
[Insane]
00:04:290 (1) - 1/2 recovery after that spinner may not be enough if you're posing this as a LI. also, it is a bit too short imo, so i suggest you remove it. removed after previuous mod
00:25:775 (2) - why is that one so far away? The sound gets a ton louder
00:29:587 (2,3) - this is not a good flow, make (3) curved a bit okay I guess
00:49:096 (3) - i'd rather not follow the vocals.not mapping this jsut felt weird
01:12:976 (2) - from curved to linear to curved, that slider is flowing very strangely.They are all curved in some way so it should be fine
01:22:540 - that spinner is unneded here, make a circle there if you want, but all it does is just ruin the HP. I'll see what I can do about this, but the ending time needs to be consistent wiith the gd's
[Golden Fairy]
00:04:290 (1) - same as before ^
00:49:096 (3) - ^ ^
00:51:103 (2,3,4,5) - tbh this is too edgy and too awkward of a flow, make it softer.meh, flow looks good
01:05:017 (1,2,1,2,1) - why NCs? oops, this was from when I was copypasting the pattern
01:05:910 (2,3,4,1) - again more strange flows, make them slower as well, make (2) a curved slider so it would play nicer.flow changes beacause I follow vocals for a while
01:22:540 (1) - same as stated before in the mod.^
Thanks for the mod :)
Xiaolin
M4M

[Crimmi's Normal]

  1. Why 2 ticks?
  2. 00:25:775 (4,2) - These two could be stacked properly.
  3. 01:04:839 (3,4,5) - Move (5) a bit to the right to make a linear flow with (3) and (4).
  4. 01:17:838 (3) - Almost touching the HP bar. It may not touch the HP bar, but would be better to move it a bit down since it could confuse players.


[aigoh's Hard]

  1. 00:12:242 (2,3,4) - Personally, stacking (3) and (4) would visualy look better.
  2. 00:20:374 (1) - This not spaced out yet 00:23:266 (1) - has the same finish sound, and both of them start with strong vocals, but the first timing swap I mentioned isn't spaced out unlike this.


[Insane]

  1. 00:20:013 (4,5) - I don't really see why these two are spaced out. Looking at this section, notes with this sound all have the same distance, there really isn't any jump or anything, but these two are, which is questionable to me. Consider using DS on these two since there really isn't any special sound or strong vocals, so there's no reason to space them out.
  2. 00:28:133 (2,3,4,5,6) - I also pretty much don't see a reason for adding a jump here. This part, there isn't really any strong sounds or vocals, they don't sound too low either, I think you should reduce the jump here because like I said, there isn't any strong vocals or sound. Same goes for 00:31:029 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:33:913 (2,3,4,5,6) -


[Golden Fairy]

  1. 00:24:350 - In insane this sound is emphasised with a slider end, but here it's different.. suggest making this a slider end so you can add a hitsound here.


Good luck!
aigoh
Thank you for mod!

Xiaolin wrote:

  1. 00:12:242 (2,3,4) - Personally, stacking (3) and (4) would visualy look better. I don't think so...I also don't think that would be appropriate for a hard or be consistent with the rest of the map '-'
  2. 00:20:374 (1) - This not spaced out yet 00:23:266 (1) - has the same finish sound, and both of them start with strong vocals, but the first timing swap I mentioned isn't spaced out unlike this. DS-wise, it is a 1.65x jump vs. the normal 1.4x. But I changed something
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timemon
NM, Sorry I'm late.

[aigoh's Hard]
00:21:820 (1,2) - why suddenly switch focus from vocal to instrument? should be one long slider like you did previously.
00:58:484 (3) - the red anchor is positioned at almost at the end of the slider move in back toward the middle a bit.
01:05:910 (4) - bad angle I suggest this: http://i.imgur.com/L62fymD.png
01:07:001 (2) - should be 2 clickable objects the vocal is active on both the head and tail.
01:22:359 (1) - I think wave slider looks better when they're either 180/90 degree. This one is not vertical and is a bit tilted so it looks weird.

[Insane]
00:20:374 (1) - slider is a bit too close to other slider
00:24:712 (1) - bad angle imo, either reduce the angle to 5-10 degree or make it a curve slider.
00:53:436 (1) - should follow the vocal and make it all circles, turn it into a jump.
00:57:930 (1) - angle is a bit extreme here, reduce it a bit it's like 45 degree.
01:02:662 (3) - change to circle and then a 1/2 slider at 01:02:843 -

Good luck!
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