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Nikakis wrote:

Akareh's Insane:
  1. 00:30:676 (9,10) - Since your focusing intention is the vocal rhythm, it would be better if you ctrl + g these 00:30:676 (9,10,1) - for the vocals. changed those a bit, but my way
  2. 00:39:247 (3,4,5,6) - These repeatable stackings can lead to missreads for the player. If you want to make it less complicated visually, you can stack (5) on the slidertail of (3). I specifically want the jump with those two for drum emphasis tho.
  3. 00:40:676 (1) - The vocal here isn't actually that held but it sounds pretty much like as 00:41:033 (2,3) - so consider making something similar. ye
  4. 00:53:533 (7) - You miss out such an important vocal there 00:53:771 - which doesn't deserve to be a slider end, this 1/1 slider just sounds off speaking of rhythm, the vocal syllables are 1/2 as 00:53:057 (5,6) - so consider splitting this 1/1 slider into 2 1/2s. 1/4 instead for the held vocals
  5. 00:59:009 (6) - 01:01:152 (7) - Same thing. ^
  6. 01:08:533 - I don't know what happened here and you ignored this loud vocal, like in the whole Kiai you make it clickable 01:09:962 (4) - , 01:16:152 (6) - etc. I would recommend you making a 1/2 slider + 1/1 slider in order to follow the vocals properly. yeah, made something
  7. 01:17:581 (4,5) - This is too dense when the song gives you the opportunity to map a 1/1 slider like you do for 01:09:962 (4) - , 01:16:152 (6) - so I would recommend you mapping a 1/1 slider + circle for the calmility of the vocals. nope, drums become more dense on the second half of the chorus, so my rhythm also becomes a bit denser.
Thanks!
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Without going into unnecessary detail, the patterning is very high-quality and I didn't catch any mistakes. As expected from you two :P That being said, it's a very conventional mapset -- one of many jpop/rock songs mapped to the drumline -- and somewhat forgettable. If you wanted to make it more unique you could try following the vocals instead of the drums during the verse -- they're very rhythmic and fun. The guitar is also doing something funky in 00:50:200 - which could make interesting patterns. Just throwing some ideas out there

Note that 01:06:271 - is probably too difficult for EZ. [12][34] would make more sense I think

Good work anyway 8-)
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thanks nivrad ur da man ;)
osu file format v14

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Title:DONUT HOLE
TitleUnicode:ドーナツホール
Artist:Rib
ArtistUnicode:りぶ
Creator:_FlameL
Version:puxtu's NM
Source:jubeat Qubell
Tags:Ayyri gumi utaite cover vocaloid puxtu short ver cut Akareh lit120 Kenshi Yonezu 米津玄師 Hachi ハチ -Hakurei- crossbeats REV. SUNSHINE MÚSECA 1+1/2 MUSECA pop'n music うさぎと猫と少年の夢 CAPCOM KONAMI BEMANI
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448,192,46628,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,46628,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,46866,1,4,3:0:0:0:
192,192,47105,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,47105,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,47224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,47224,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,47343,1,4,3:0:0:0:
64,192,47581,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,47581,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,47700,1,4,3:0:0:0:
320,192,47938,1,4,3:0:0:0:
192,192,48057,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,48057,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,48295,1,4,3:0:0:0:
448,192,48533,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,48533,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,48771,1,4,3:0:0:0:
320,192,49009,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,49009,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,49128,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,49128,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,49247,1,4,3:0:0:0:
320,192,49485,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,49485,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,49605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,49724,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,49724,128,8,50200:0:0:0:0:
64,192,50200,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,50200,1,4,3:0:0:0:
448,192,50438,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,50438,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,50676,1,4,3:0:0:0:
320,192,50914,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,50914,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,51033,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,51033,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,51152,1,4,3:0:0:0:
320,192,51390,1,10,0:0:0:0:
192,192,51509,1,4,3:0:0:0:
448,192,51628,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,51747,1,4,3:0:0:0:
64,192,51866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,51866,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,52105,1,4,3:0:0:0:
320,192,52343,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,52343,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,52581,1,4,3:0:0:0:
320,192,52819,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,52819,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,52938,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,52938,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,53057,1,4,3:0:0:0:
64,192,53295,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,192,53414,1,4,3:0:0:0:
192,192,53533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,53652,1,4,3:0:0:0:
64,192,53771,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,53771,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,54009,1,4,3:0:0:0:
320,192,54247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,54247,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,54485,1,4,3:0:0:0:
192,192,54724,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,54724,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,54843,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,54843,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,54962,1,4,3:0:0:0:
192,192,55200,1,10,0:0:0:0:
64,192,55319,1,4,3:0:0:0:
320,192,55438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,55557,1,4,3:0:0:0:
192,192,55676,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,55676,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,55914,1,4,3:0:0:0:
448,192,56152,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,56152,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,56390,1,4,3:0:0:0:
64,192,56628,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,56628,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,56747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,56747,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,56866,1,4,3:0:0:0:
192,192,57105,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,192,57224,1,4,3:0:0:0:
64,192,57343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,57462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,57581,1,4,3:0:0:0:
320,192,57581,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,57819,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,57819,1,4,3:0:0:0:
320,192,58057,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,58057,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,58295,1,4,3:0:0:0:
192,192,58533,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,58533,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,58652,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,58652,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,58771,1,4,3:0:0:0:
448,192,59009,1,10,0:0:0:0:
64,192,59128,1,4,3:0:0:0:
320,192,59247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,59366,1,4,3:0:0:0:
448,192,59485,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,59485,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,59724,1,4,3:0:0:0:
448,192,59962,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,59962,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,60200,1,4,3:0:0:0:
64,192,60438,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,60438,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,60557,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,60557,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,60676,1,4,3:0:0:0:
192,192,60914,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,192,61033,1,4,3:0:0:0:
192,192,61152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61271,1,4,3:0:0:0:
320,192,61390,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,61390,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,61628,1,4,3:0:0:0:
448,192,61866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,61866,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,62105,1,4,3:0:0:0:
192,192,62343,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,62343,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,62462,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,62462,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,62581,1,4,3:0:0:0:
448,192,62819,1,10,0:0:0:0:
192,192,62938,1,4,3:0:0:0:
64,192,63057,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,63176,1,4,3:0:0:0:
320,192,63295,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,63295,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,63533,1,4,3:0:0:0:
64,192,63771,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,63771,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,64009,1,4,3:0:0:0:
64,192,64247,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,64247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,64366,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,64366,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,64485,1,4,3:0:0:0:
320,192,64724,1,10,0:0:0:0:
192,192,64843,1,4,3:0:0:0:
64,192,64962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,65081,1,4,3:0:0:0:
448,192,65200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,65200,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,65438,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,65438,1,4,3:0:0:0:
192,192,65795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,65795,1,4,3:0:0:0:
64,192,66033,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,66033,1,4,3:0:0:0:
64,192,66271,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,66271,1,4,3:0:0:0:
448,192,66390,1,4,3:0:0:0:
320,192,66390,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,66628,1,4,3:0:0:0:
448,192,66628,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,66866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,66866,1,4,3:0:0:0:
64,192,67343,128,4,68295:0:0:0:0:
448,192,67343,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,67581,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,67581,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,67819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,68057,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,68057,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,68295,128,0,69247:0:0:0:0:
64,192,68533,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,68533,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,68771,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,69009,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,69009,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,69247,128,0,70200:0:0:0:0:
448,192,69485,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,69485,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,69724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,69962,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,69962,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,70200,128,0,71152:0:0:0:0:
64,192,70438,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,70438,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,70676,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,70914,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,70914,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,71152,128,0,71628:0:0:0:0:
320,192,71390,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,71390,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,71628,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,71866,1,10,0:0:0:0:
448,192,71985,128,0,72581:0:0:0:0:
320,192,71985,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,72224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,72343,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,192,72581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,72819,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,72819,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,73057,128,0,73533:0:0:0:0:
448,192,73295,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,73295,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,73533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,73771,1,10,0:0:0:0:
64,192,73890,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,73890,128,0,74485:0:0:0:0:
320,192,74128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,74247,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,192,74485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,74724,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,74724,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,74962,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,74962,128,0,75914:0:0:0:0:
64,192,75200,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,75200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,75438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,75676,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,75676,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,75914,128,0,76866:0:0:0:0:
448,192,76152,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,76152,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,76390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,76628,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,76628,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,76866,128,0,77819:0:0:0:0:
64,192,77105,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,77105,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,77343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,77581,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,77581,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,77819,128,0,78771:0:0:0:0:
448,192,78057,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,78057,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,78295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,78533,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,78533,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,78771,128,0,79724:0:0:0:0:
320,192,79009,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,79009,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,79247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,79485,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,79485,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,79724,128,0,80676:0:0:0:0:
64,192,79962,1,10,0:0:0:0:
192,192,80081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,80319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,80438,1,10,0:0:0:0:
64,192,80676,128,0,81628:0:0:0:0:
448,192,80914,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,80914,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,81152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,81390,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,81390,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,81628,128,0,82581:0:0:0:0:
64,192,81866,1,10,0:0:0:0:
192,192,81985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,82224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,82343,1,10,0:0:0:0:
192,192,82581,128,0,83533:0:0:0:0:
448,192,82819,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,82819,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,83057,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,83295,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,83295,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,83533,128,0,84485:0:0:0:0:
448,192,83771,1,10,0:0:0:0:
64,192,83890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,84128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,84247,1,10,0:0:0:0:
448,192,84485,128,0,85438:0:0:0:0:
64,192,84724,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,84724,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,84962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,85200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,85200,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,85438,128,0,85914:0:0:0:0:
448,192,85676,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,85676,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,85914,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,86033,1,2,3:0:0:0:
448,192,86033,1,8,0:0:0:0:
posted

Nivrad00 wrote:

mania mod here

Without going into unnecessary detail, the patterning is very high-quality and I didn't catch any mistakes. As expected from you two :P That being said, it's a very conventional mapset -- one of many jpop/rock songs mapped to the drumline -- and somewhat forgettable. If you wanted to make it more unique you could try following the vocals instead of the drums during the verse -- they're very rhythmic and fun. The guitar is also doing something funky in 00:50:200 - which could make interesting patterns. Just throwing some ideas out there

Note that 01:06:271 - is probably too difficult for EZ. [12][34] would make more sense I think

Good work anyway 8-)
posted
top diff only
Broken Memories
  1. 00:05:438 (4,5) - 00:09:247 (4,5) - These are the same rhythms and a big distance difference
    Players will get confused if they do not keep consistency
    00:14:962 (4,5) - I think that this gap is okay
  2. 00:10:676 (1,1) - Why did you add NC?
    00:06:866 (2,4) - NC has no meaning as it has not changed anything here
  3. 00:18:295 (1,1) - 00:19:605 (1) - 00:46:271 (1) - ^
  4. 00:19:247 (3,1) - There is no such sound that leaves distance here
    A sudden jump is uncomfortable as the vocal starts
    00:19:247 (3) - Ctrl+G is better
  5. 00:21:628 (1,2,3) - Because they are all different in rhythm and distance, players can not understand
    00:21:628 (1,2) - I understand this distance because it is used by others
    00:21:866 (2,3) - However, since this distance is the same distance as other rhythms it makes misunderstanding
  6. 00:30:200 (6,7) - I think that the distance is close.
    I think that the distance is 1/4 rhythm
    00:30:438 (7) - How about doing this by pressing Ctrl+G
  7. 00:31:033 (1) - 00:34:843 (1) - NC has no meaning
  8. 00:31:985 (5,6,7) - The previous arrangement is better
    00:20:200 (3,4,5) - just like here
  9. 00:34:009 (6,7) - Why did you arrange this?
    Slider end is completely hidden and difficult to understand
  10. 00:34:605 - Because there is no sound here, I think that it is good with one circle
  11. 00:36:509 (7) - 00:34:843 (1) - I think that it is better to stack here
  12. 00:36:866 (1,2,3) - It's the same distance but the rhythm is different
    Even if the player can handle it, it will be confused by how to pick up the rhythm


hmm...I saw the rest but there is only the same thing so if you modify my mod it is better to modify the similar placement and rhythm of the rest
Good luck!
posted
FlyingSlowpoke - Today at 3:39 AM
Oni:
00:05:795 (11,13) - for variety swap them so you have kddkk which even sounds better imo.
00:09:604 (34,36) - ^
or maybe only (36) so it is kkdkk
Just to vary a bit more
00:54:843 (322) - would prefer to have the note on 00:55:081 - instead. the sound here would be more supportive for 00:54:962 (323,324) - .
01:13:057 (425) - imo not necessary to keep, the halt on 01:12:938 - is obvious and should be the stop from the chain (havin a little break)
01:19:724 (462) - same issue with 01:19:605 - .
Muzukashii;
00:18:533 (72) - suggesting to remove to provide a better rest time ratio
Kiai is a bit hard imo but gonna leave it unchanged for now.
generally not the big deal here with the map.
Looks okay to me, people may complain it's not Muzukashii/Oni because no 1/4 spam eksdeh

ei - Today at 3:52 AM
if i don't respond to it, that means i did it

FlyingSlowpoke - Today at 3:52 AM
ok

ei - Today at 3:52 AM
00:54:843 - i think leaving this here would be good for the kicks
00:55:081 - seems weird to have a note here if there's just the guitar being held(edited)
applied everything else on oni

FlyingSlowpoke - Today at 3:57 AM
:okspin:

ei - Today at 3:57 AM
applied muzu too

FlyingSlowpoke - Today at 3:57 AM
neat
posted

Yasaija 714 wrote:

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Broken Memories
  1. 00:05:438 (4,5) - 00:09:247 (4,5) - These are the same rhythms and a big distance difference
    Players will get confused if they do not keep consistency Changed
    00:14:962 (4,5) - I think that this gap is okay
  2. 00:10:676 (1,1) - Why did you add NC?For a following point aesthetics. (as a 1 2 jumps)
    00:06:866 (2,4) - NC has no meaning as it has not changed anything here ^
  3. 00:18:295 (1,1) - 00:19:605 (1) - 00:46:271 (1) - ^ Deleted those
  4. 00:19:247 (3,1) - There is no such sound that leaves distance here
    A sudden jump is uncomfortable as the vocal starts Changed
    00:19:247 (3) - Ctrl+G is better
  5. 00:21:628 (1,2,3) - Because they are all different in rhythm and distance, players can not understand
    00:21:628 (1,2) - I understand this distance because it is used by others
    00:21:866 (2,3) - However, since this distance is the same distance as other rhythms it makes misunderstanding
  6. 00:30:200 (6,7) - I think that the distance is close.
    I think that the distance is 1/4 rhythm
    00:30:438 (7) - How about doing this by pressing Ctrl+G
  7. 00:31:033 (1) - 00:34:843 (1) - NC has no meaning
  8. 00:31:985 (5,6,7) - The previous arrangement is better
    00:20:200 (3,4,5) - just like here
  9. 00:34:009 (6,7) - Why did you arrange this?
    Slider end is completely hidden and difficult to understand
  10. 00:34:605 - Because there is no sound here, I think that it is good with one circle
  11. 00:36:509 (7) - 00:34:843 (1) - I think that it is better to stack here
  12. 00:36:866 (1,2,3) - It's the same distance but the rhythm is different
    Even if the player can handle it, it will be confused by how to pick up the rhythm


I remaped some stuff from 00:19:724 (1) - to 00:36:866 (1) - looking at your mod. Aldo some things may still be hard to read but that's what I was going for.

hmm...I saw the rest but there is only the same thing so if you modify my mod it is better to modify the similar placement and rhythm of the rest
Good luck!
Thanks!
posted
Ayyri's Oni
00:05:676 (10,11,12,13,14) - kdkkd? fits better imo
00:09:485 (33,34,35,36,37) - kkdkd? d at the end to make it more consistent with the previous quintiple which ends with d(if you apply the previous suggestion) and to emphasize the next k
00:28:057 (147,148,149) - dkd to make it like k k d d 00:27:343 (144,145,146,147) - ?
Ayyri's Muzu
01:14:724 (324) - d? there isnt really a reason to make it k - the voice isnt present, and there arent any other prominent sounds
01:18:295 (338,339,340) - kdd? in comparison to 01:16:866 (332,333,334) - kdk which is way higher?
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Bowashe wrote:

Ayyri's Oni
00:05:676 (10,11,12,13,14) - kdkkd? fits better imo think the current pattern works fine for the "vocals" herre.
00:09:485 (33,34,35,36,37) - kkdkd? d at the end to make it more consistent with the previous quintiple which ends with d(if you apply the previous suggestion) and to emphasize the next k disagree like before.
00:28:057 (147,148,149) - dkd to make it like k k d d 00:27:343 (144,145,146,147) - ? don't wanna ignore the 1/2 kicks here.
Ayyri's Muzu
01:14:724 (324) - d? there isnt really a reason to make it k - the voice isnt present, and there arent any other prominent sounds there's a clap here.
01:18:295 (338,339,340) - kdd? in comparison to 01:16:866 (332,333,334) - kdk which is way higher? clap is present at both times.
thanks, no change though.
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Heyo mod as requested

[Puxtu's Hard]
00:13:057 (13057|0,13057|2,13176|1,13295|0,13295|2,13414|3,13414|1) - this one comes as a little weird to me compared with the other patterns in the section
00:36:390 - in this section it would be cool if you added in this sound to make it a little different from the part before since it becomes a bit much of the same (this goes for the whole section)
00:35:676 - another thing you could do is with the claps make them triples maybe (that might be too hard though)
00:52:105 - in this section you could add some LN's for the guitar sounds like the one here
01:12:700 - could add a note here for the vocal
01:12:938 - ^
01:19:366 - ^and so on
01:25:914 (85914|2) - remove this one its a ghost note

[Puxtu's Normal]
01:11:747 - focus on this vocal instead of this note 01:11:866 (71866|0) - it feels a lot more natural
01:12:700 - ^and so on
01:25:914 (85914|2) - also a ghost note


That was all the issues i could find good luck with the map
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tailsdk wrote:

Heyo mod as requested

[Puxtu's Hard]
00:13:057 (13057|0,13057|2,13176|1,13295|0,13295|2,13414|3,13414|1) - this one comes as a little weird to me compared with the other patterns in the section ye
00:36:390 - in this section it would be cool if you added in this sound to make it a little different from the part before since it becomes a bit much of the same (this goes for the whole section) made it cooler
00:35:676 - another thing you could do is with the claps make them triples maybe (that might be too hard though) that'd be gross
00:52:105 - in this section you could add some LN's for the guitar sounds like the one here ln? ln.
01:12:700 - could add a note here for the vocal i dont do vocal that much
01:12:938 - ^
01:19:366 - ^and so on
01:25:914 (85914|2) - remove this one its a ghost note guitar

[Puxtu's Normal]
01:11:747 - focus on this vocal instead of this note 01:11:866 (71866|0) - it feels a lot more natural done
01:12:700 - ^and so on do
01:25:914 (85914|2) - also a ghost note d


That was all the issues i could find good luck with the map
thx http://puu.sh/A3rZp/76e46a46c7.rar
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so...

when?
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I don't know man, waiting for mod from Regraz
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