Rib - DONUT HOLE [OsuMania|Taiko|Osu]

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a q p w wrote:

Easy
  1. 00:54:962 (2,3) - seems to fit rhythm better if it's slider then circle here
  2. 01:14:962 (1) - finish at slider head


Normal
  1. 00:06:390 (1) - remove finish at slider head? no cymbal sound in music
  2. 00:12:105 (1) - add finish at slider head, cymbal present in music. same at 00:15:914 (1) -
  3. 01:10:200 (3,4,5) - sugestion. current pattern puts emphasis on 01:10:676 (5) - but should really be on 01:10:438 (4) -
  4. 01:23:295 (3) - somewhere like x:182 y:4 would flow better (i know it touches the hp bar, but that's more of a guideline which i think can be overlooked here if it improves flow)


Lost Memories
  1. 00:14:485 (3) - doesn't really make much sense to extend this slider imo, clear beat on the red tick. make it into a 1/2 slider? not to mention that the spacing here is similar to the 1/2 one just before it so it could lead to some confusion. same at 00:18:295 (3,4) -
    i'm verrry bad with playing high bpm maps so I can't really mod this.. sorry :(


Yes to everything I guess?

glgl
Thanks!
Akareh

a q p w wrote:

Akareh's Insane
  1. 00:04:128 (2) - finish on slider tail not very fitting imo ye
  2. 00:21:509 - add circle here or change 00:21:390 (8) - to a 1/2 slider? you don't ususally leave any 1/1 gaps during the verse nope, it deserves the stop imho
  3. 00:22:343 (4) - I don't really agree with the usage of these 1/4 repeat sliders cos there isn't really a sound on that 1/4 blue tick. If you disagree, try adding more of these at section 00:34:962 (1) - cos you only used it once here. I already answered this in a previous mod so I'll copy paste: drums. These are technically two drum kicks and not three, but hachi uses weird drum rhythms so they fit anyway with all the background noise, these sound completely different from the rest of double drum kicks, so I went with repeating sliders. Drum patterns change at 00:34:962, lots more of emphasis on double drum kicks so instead of repeating sliders I went for spaced circles where intensity allowed me to,
    but 00:47:105 (4) - didn't really play well with that since the vocals here hold instead of following the drums like in the rest of the section I went back to the repeating slider for this. It played better for me IMO.
  4. 00:19:485 (7,8,1) - not very strong but spaced so far apart ;_; feels strong enough for me and it also simbolizes the end of the section?


glgl
thx ~
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Title:Donut Hole
TitleUnicode:ドーナツホール
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ArtistUnicode:りぶ
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lit120
both of your points seems ok for me as the rhythm may be different, that will be fine imo. any points like that means a change for me then! although i had to agree on it

thanks!

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445,332,57819,5,6,0:0:0:0:
295,297,58057,2,0,P|240:290|186:298,2,109.5,8|2|8,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
342,237,58652,1,0,1:0:0:0:
313,166,58771,1,2,0:0:0:0:
313,166,59009,2,0,P|259:174|204:167,2,109.5,8|0|8,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
406,44,59724,5,2,0:0:0:0:
466,186,59962,2,0,L|466:320,2,109.5,8|2|8,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
437,115,60557,1,0,1:0:0:0:
361,104,60676,6,0,P|307:95|252:102,2,109.5,2|8|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
437,115,61271,1,2,0:0:0:0:
390,175,61390,1,8,1:0:0:0:
390,175,61628,5,2,0:0:0:0:
253,102,61866,2,0,P|199:93|144:100,2,109.5,8|2|8,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
302,161,62462,1,0,1:0:0:0:
275,232,62581,6,0,P|220:238|166:230,2,109.5,2|8|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,161,63176,1,2,0:0:0:0:
349,219,63295,1,8,1:0:0:0:
349,219,63533,6,0,L|352:356,1,109.5,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
465,225,64009,2,0,L|462:88,1,109.5,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
407,62,64366,1,0,1:0:0:0:
353,117,64485,6,0,P|292:125|241:117,1,109.5,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
182,68,64843,1,2,0:0:0:0:
182,68,64962,2,0,P|169:92|165:118,1,54.75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,187,65200,1,8,1:0:0:0:
207,187,65438,6,0,L|211:317,1,109.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,370,65795,1,0,1:0:0:0:
303,240,66033,1,0,1:0:0:0:
383,373,66271,1,0,1:0:0:0:
383,373,66390,5,0,1:0:0:0:
303,240,66628,1,0,1:0:0:0:
377,110,66866,2,0,P|304:125|247:116,1,109.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,77,67343,6,0,P|155:107|166:129,1,54.75,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,183,67581,2,0,P|151:196|126:195,1,54.75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
66,192,67819,2,0,P|75:148|89:127,1,54.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,77,68057,6,0,P|164:63|189:64,1,54.75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
249,67,68295,2,0,P|282:97|293:118,1,54.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,171,68533,2,0,P|311:214|297:235,1,54.75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,285,68771,1,2,0:0:0:0:
142,197,69009,1,8,1:0:0:0:
128,349,69247,6,0,P|153:318|161:286,1,54.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,269,69485,2,0,P|70:234|68:201,1,54.75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,197,69724,2,0,P|167:166|175:134,1,54.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
103,116,69962,6,0,P|158:111|205:84,1,109.5,8|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,27,70438,2,0,P|324:76|324:131,2,109.5,8|2|8,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
465,125,71152,5,2,0:0:0:0:
367,243,71390,1,8,1:0:0:0:
249,145,71628,1,2,0:0:0:0:
249,145,71747,2,0,L|246:223,1,54.75,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
282,267,71985,6,0,P|225:246|142:260,1,109.5,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,282,72343,2,0,P|128:225|114:142,1,109.5,8|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,107,72700,2,0,P|56:104|26:112,1,54.75,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
12,179,72938,6,0,L|12:295,1,109.5
8,365,73295,2,0,P|63:354|121:363,1,109.5,8|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,376,73652,2,0,P|217:377|242:368,1,54.75,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
282,302,73890,6,0,L|283:167,1,109.5,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,126,74247,1,8,1:0:0:0:
95,87,74485,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,236,74724,1,8,1:0:0:0:
205,275,74962,6,0,L|198:204,1,54.75,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,256,75200,2,0,L|89:312,1,54.75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,236,75438,2,0,L|49:165,1,54.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,174,75676,6,0,L|119:103,1,54.75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,112,75914,2,0,L|189:41,1,54.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,49,76152,2,0,P|317:66|372:64,1,109.5,8|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,192,76628,1,8,1:0:0:0:
372,319,76866,6,0,P|345:315|318:316,1,54.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,340,77105,2,0,P|234:314|218:291,1,54.75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,239,77343,2,0,P|178:217|190:193,1,54.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,117,77581,2,0,P|233:121|261:119,1,54.75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,95,77819,5,2,0:0:0:0:
483,135,78057,1,8,1:0:0:0:
443,283,78295,1,2,0:0:0:0:
295,243,78533,1,8,1:0:0:0:
335,95,78771,5,2,0:0:0:0:
295,243,79009,1,8,1:0:0:0:
443,283,79247,1,2,0:0:0:0:
443,283,79366,2,0,L|446:218,1,54.75,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
492,166,79605,6,0,P|439:182|385:178,1,109.5
310,164,79962,2,0,P|266:159|245:161,1,54.75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,116,80200,2,0,P|207:168|203:222,1,109.5,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
127,233,80557,6,0,P|111:180|115:126,1,109.5
144,54,80914,2,0,P|91:69|37:65,1,109.5,8|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,132,81271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
2,209,81390,1,8,1:0:0:0:
2,209,81509,6,0,P|28:258|37:311,1,109.5
111,323,81866,2,0,P|139:276|182:242,1,109.5,8|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,219,82224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,242,82343,1,8,1:0:0:0:
329,242,82581,5,2,0:0:0:0:
216,346,82819,1,8,1:0:0:0:
112,235,83057,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,235,83176,2,0,L|112:168,1,54.75,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
82,109,83414,6,0,P|145:127|190:112,1,109.5
250,75,83771,2,0,P|277:70|305:72,1,54.75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,33,84009,2,0,P|353:96|368:141,1,109.5,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
411,197,84366,6,0,P|348:179|303:194,1,109.5
247,237,84724,2,0,P|194:249|143:231,1,109.5,8|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,168,85081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
67,240,85200,1,8,1:0:0:0:
67,240,85319,6,0,P|28:202|21:149,1,109.5
75,92,85676,1,8,1:0:0:0:
98,168,85795,1,2,0:0:0:0:
37,313,86033,1,0,1:0:0:0:

i might adding my own custom hitsounds there later, but idk
Shunao
im back lol

  • Easy
  1. 00:04:009 (1) - clap?
  2. 00:14:009 (3) - I see it better straight for a better transition with 00:14:962 (4) - like you make before
  3. 00:41:628 (4,1) - the flow is broken maybe it's better for a easy to follow the flow without break so maybe i suggest to raise 00:41:628 (4) - at x:486 y:198. Then move 00:42:581 (1) - to x:310 y:263.
  4. 01:05:438 (1,1) - the spacing between these note isn't x0.90 it's x0.26 fix it, please
  5. Why in the kiai part there are any hitsounds? it's so empty lul
  6. oh and also on the kiai part there are too much 1/1 sliders its really oversimplify the song imo. maybe map on the vocals a little for example here 01:09:247 (3,4) - you can try something like this https://puu.sh/xcPub/b0d8421bd2.png
  7. 01:10:200 (4,1) - They are too close imo there is almost a contact and it's doesn't look nice imo
  • Normal
  1. 00:28:771 - you need to map this vocal because this long slider sound off tbh
  2. 00:30:676 - same thing here ^
  3. 00:44:009 - ^
  4. 00:45:914 - ^
  5. 00:44:962 (2,3,4) - this flow doesn't work because the slider are not similar the 4 is more long and more curved that the 2 but if you fix the thing before ^ i think there is no problem
  6. 00:48:295 (1,2,3,4) - should be like this https://puu.sh/xcQ78/7714f3a2a1.png as you did before lol
  7. 01:12:581 (5,6) - make like you did here 01:11:628 (3,4) - this is similar vocals https://puu.sh/xcQij/3848011ffc.png
  8. 01:24:962 (2) - why a slider renverse you don't put slider renverse from here 01:18:771 - and it's sound a bit off tbh


gl!~
Topic Starter
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ShogunMoon wrote:

im back lol Hi again :)

  • Easy
  1. 00:04:009 (1) - clap? Sure
  2. 00:14:009 (3) - I see it better straight for a better transition with 00:14:962 (4) - like you make before Sure
  3. 00:41:628 (4,1) - the flow is broken maybe it's better for a easy to follow the flow without break so maybe i suggest to raise 00:41:628 (4) - at x:486 y:198. Then move 00:42:581 (1) - to x:310 y:263. I made some changes
  4. 01:05:438 (1,1) - the spacing between these note isn't x0.90 it's x0.26 fix it, please They are 8 bits apart. They dont rly need to be x0.90
  5. Why in the kiai part there are any hitsounds? it's so empty lul Claps are every two white ticks lul so there mostly whistles and finishes on easy diff
  6. oh and also on the kiai part there are too much 1/1 sliders its really oversimplify the song imo. maybe map on the vocals a little for example here 01:09:247 (3,4) - you can try something like this https://puu.sh/xcPub/b0d8421bd2.png It should be better now
  7. 01:10:200 (4,1) - They are too close imo there is almost a contact and it's doesn't look nice imo ^
  • Normal
  1. 00:28:771 - you need to map this vocal because this long slider sound off tbh I will stay with those long sliders.
  2. 00:30:676 - same thing here ^
  3. 00:44:009 - ^
  4. 00:45:914 - ^
  5. 00:44:962 (2,3,4) - this flow doesn't work because the slider are not similar the 4 is more long and more curved that the 2 but if you fix the thing before ^ i think there is no problem Flow is good here imo
  6. 00:48:295 (1,2,3,4) - should be like this https://puu.sh/xcQ78/7714f3a2a1.png as you did before lol to me its better like this. And I made it like this before 00:33:057 (1,2,3,4,5) -
  7. 01:12:581 (5,6) - make like you did here 01:11:628 (3,4) - this is similar vocals https://puu.sh/xcQij/3848011ffc.png Ok but will do it in the other way.
  8. 01:24:962 (2) - why a slider renverse you don't put slider renverse from here 01:18:771 - and it's sound a bit off tbh I will leave it like that. Also I remapped kiai part a bit so It should be funnier to play now


gl!~
Thanks! again xD
Nikakis
The audio bitrate is kinda low under standard common requirements and im not sure if it's allowed to have a 128 kbps bitrate.192 kbps is always the best option.I would recommend to contact some ppl who associate with mp3s and stuff and give you a better mp3.
Topic Starter
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Nikakis wrote:

The audio bitrate is kinda low under standard common requirements and im not sure if it's allowed to have a 128 kbps bitrate.192 kbps is always the best option.I would recommend to contact some ppl who associate with mp3s and stuff and give you a better mp3.
https://osu.ppy.sh/help/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
The song's audio file must be of reasonable quality. Try and source .mp3 files yourself; ripping them from a streaming video site often results in low quality audio with high file sizes. The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps. If you are having trouble acquiring an appropriate audio file, contact one of the more audio-savvy BN; they will be more than happy to help find an .mp3 for you.

I understand your concern so I will keep that in mind (Bcs better audio quality is a good thing to have) but by the ranking criteria rules, 192kbps is not required.
lit120

FlameLancer wrote:

Nikakis wrote:

The audio bitrate is kinda low under standard common requirements and im not sure if it's allowed to have a 128 kbps bitrate.192 kbps is always the best option.I would recommend to contact some ppl who associate with mp3s and stuff and give you a better mp3.
https://osu.ppy.sh/help/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
The song's audio file must be of reasonable quality. Try and source .mp3 files yourself; ripping them from a streaming video site often results in low quality audio with high file sizes. The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps. If you are having trouble acquiring an appropriate audio file, contact one of the more audio-savvy BN; they will be more than happy to help find an .mp3 for you.

I understand your concern so I will keep that in mind (Bcs better audio quality is a good thing to have) but by the ranking criteria rules, 192kbps is not required.
Depends on its mp3 quality there if you don't want to have a fucked up quality :(
Senery
hi! nm from my queue

[General]
  1. Looks like "Partners in crime.png" is unused so you can delete it


[Easy]
  1. 01:04:485 (5) - you can blanket this
  2. 01:05:438 (1) - better align this with (5)


[Normal]
  1. 00:13:533 (5) - you should use the same reverse slider here, aswell as later after this point
  2. 00:13:057 (4,5) - overlap
  3. 01:25:914 (1) - only the reverse has a sound maybe just use a circle there?


[lit120's Hard]
  1. 00:06:152 (3,1) - i think you should have these separate, it looks like its a 1/2 gab because of the beginning same for after this so to avoid confusion i suggest separeting them(especially this 00:07:700 (2,3,4,1) - )
  2. 00:29:009 (4,1,2) - separate these having them in the same stack is hard to read for new players, you have more of these later on


[Lost Memories]
  1. 00:51:152 (6,1) - space these a bit, it looks like a 1/2 gab
  2. 00:53:771 (9,1) - ^ (or stack them)
  3. 00:57:581 (3,1) - same for this, there are others after this


Thats it, insane seems fine, good luck
Topic Starter
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Senery wrote:

hi! nm from my queue

[General]
  1. Looks like "Partners in crime.png" is unused so you can delete it I forgot to delete it again(it's easier to map with darker background).


[Easy]
  1. 01:04:485 (5) - you can blanket this I dont really want to.
  2. 01:05:438 (1) - better align this with (5) It's better like this.


[Normal]
  1. 00:13:533 (5) - you should use the same reverse slider here, aswell as later after this point I want some rhythm variety so I will keep it like this.
  2. 00:13:057 (4,5) - overlap Fixed
  3. 01:25:914 (1) - only the reverse has a sound maybe just use a circle there? changed


[Lost Memories]
  1. 00:51:152 (6,1) - space these a bit, it looks like a 1/2 gab
  2. 00:53:771 (9,1) - ^ (or stack them)
  3. 00:57:581 (3,1) - same for this, there are others after this The small spacing(slow movement), symbolize a small pause in the song(end/start of the vocal/drum) that occurs every couple of seconds. It may look like 1/2 gap but if you listen to the song when play you should easily read that.


Thats it, insane seems fine, good luck
Hi I'm on a trip with my family right now so I can't check your mod.
I will answer it on Sunday with this post. ;)

Thanks!
lit120

Senery wrote:

hi! nm from my queue

[lit120's Hard]
  1. 00:06:152 (3,1) - i think you should have these separate, it looks like its a 1/2 gab because of the beginning same for after this so to avoid confusion i suggest separeting them(especially this 00:07:700 (2,3,4,1) - ) not rly a problem, but they can notice the timing there to hit a note there, since pausing it from the drum/that vocal one about to stop at the white tick there
  2. 00:29:009 (4,1,2) - separate these having them in the same stack is hard to read for new players, you have more of these later on i'll see about this later


Thats it, insane seems fine, good luck
thanks!
Nikakis
btw take some kudos cause i love Rib, thanks for making it
Topic Starter
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Nikakis wrote:

btw take some kudos cause i love Rib, thanks for making it
Thanks, I will probably keep on doing that :D

Zyl wrote:

200 hundred posts and that kind of experience?


Amazing job!, keep at it.


+1
Thanks! :)
Zyl
200 hundred posts and that kind of experience?


Amazing job!, keep at it.


+1
Underforest
mod as promised

[easy]
00:25:438 (3) - unstack for consistency with 00:32:581 (2) -
00:49:247 (4) - ctrl+h to correct the flow here
00:55:914 (3,5) - can't you avoid this? this results tricky and unfriendly for beginners
01:09:247 (3,4) - this can be 3/1, no need for this
01:16:866 (3,4) - ^

[normal]
00:04:009 (1) - remove the last reverse, it kinda feels weird plus there's no beat in 00:04:247 - and cymbal fade out does not count as beat
00:20:676 (3,4) - this is inconsistent with patterns of this kind of rhythm, check your diff for details
00:35:914 (3,4) - ^
01:01:628 (1) - similar as 3rd point in easy
01:25:795 (9,1) - this can be a single 1/2 slider cause the rhythm

[lit120's hard]
cool

[akareh's insane]
00:11:628 (7,8) - results challenging for an easy insane, why not stack them?
00:19:605 (8) - ^

[lost memories]
i'm currently not agree with the structure of this diff, but that's just my point of view, looks fine

gl
Topic Starter
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Underforest wrote:

mod as promised

[easy]
00:25:438 (3) - unstack for consistency with 00:32:581 (2) - I will stay with this
00:49:247 (4) - ctrl+h to correct the flow here sure
00:55:914 (3,5) - can't you avoid this? this results tricky and unfriendly for beginners It can also become something that they will like if they give it a try or two. I will leave it like that.
01:09:247 (3,4) - this can be 3/1, no need for this ok
01:16:866 (3,4) - ^^

[normal]
00:04:009 (1) - remove the last reverse, it kinda feels weird plus there's no beat in 00:04:247 - and cymbal fade out does not count as beat It feels perfectly fine for me, btw whats wrong with representing fading cymbal with reverse part of a slider?
00:20:676 (3,4) - this is inconsistent with patterns of this kind of rhythm, check your diff for details Changed
00:35:914 (3,4) - ^ Changed
01:01:628 (1) - similar as 3rd point in easy Same
01:25:795 (9,1) - this can be a single 1/2 slider cause the rhythm I will stay with that

[lost memories]
i'm currently not agree with the structure of this diff, but that's just my point of view, looks fine

gl
Ignoring my PM, Modding back 40 days after you get a mod while asking others for another M4M. That's really respectful way to go xD.

Thanks for mod I guess.
Akareh

Underforest wrote:

[akareh's insane]
00:11:628 (7,8) - results challenging for an easy insane, why not stack them? because it's boring to do so and since it's the end before the section loops I wanted to give it emphasis
00:19:605 (8) - ^ ^
No changes from me, sorry I took so long to reply, life got in the way :o
Thanks!
lit120
when ranked?
Topic Starter
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lit120 wrote:

when ranked?
I dunno. :? I will try to snipe some BN's. :roll:
Akareh
BN pls notice

also shouldn't you move this from wip to pending? it's finished
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