Rib - DONUT HOLE [OsuMania|Taiko|Osu]

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lit120

Ohwow wrote:

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[lit120's Hard]
00:29:009 (4,1,2) - 1/1 and 1/2 beat in the same stack, peeps gonna misread that. we'll see about that
00:44:247 (4,1,2) - ^ aa
00:47:343 (1,2) - rotate like 11 degrees counter-clockwise so you can have better symmetry with these sliders: i don't think it's needed tbh https://i.gyazo.com/5bdde228ee4fe1d921a ... 114e30.jpg

gl

imaikiseta wrote:

Came from my queue.


lit120's Hard
  • 00:46:390 (1) - This slider should start here - 00:46:271 rather not, since i prefer to start the slider on such emphasize cymbal note
    01:08:533 (3) - I don't understand why this short slider is here if you're following vocals. Change this slider into a long one and remove 01:08:771 (4) (like 01:09:962 (1) ) i won't called that as a hard diff if i make that part too simple to play there on such vocal's timing there

Asserin wrote:

  1. 00:30:914 (5,1) - correct stack yeeee
  2. 01:21:390 (4,1) - ^ yeee

Bardzo fajna mapka :3
thanks!

not updated yet for a while
Venix
Cześć, z kolejki modowania

[General]
  1. Co powiesz o wyłączeniu na wszystkich diffach opcji "widescreen support", która znajduje się w zakładce "Design" w opcjach. Nie ma to znaczenia na dłuższą metę, ale moim zdaniem warto to zrobić, żeby inni modderzy się nie czepiali. (Aktualnie widescreen support jest włączony tylko na diffie lita).


[Easy]
  1. 00:04:009 (1,1) - Co myślisz o rozdzieleniu tych dwóch obiektów ze stacka? Stacki nie są zbyt komfortowe do gry dla nowych graczy, a szczególnie na tak wysokim BPM więc radziłbym odsunąć kółko od tego slidera, żeby grało się to przyjemnie.
  2. 00:55:438 (3,4,5,1) - Tutaj podobna sprawa. Wygląda to bardzo estetycznie ale z takim AR jest bardzo trudne do wyczytania przez początkujących graczy. Proponuję to jakoś odstackować, żeby było łatwiejsze do wyczytania. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8653993 Nie stracisz dużo na wyglądzie, ale za to będzie się grało lepiej.
  3. 01:01:628 (1,4) - Nie sądzisz, że ta zmiana shape nie wygląda bardzo estetycznie? Proponuję zastąpić 01:03:533 (4,5) - te slidery 01:01:628 (1) - takimi, żeby utrzymać fajną estetykę jak w innych momentach mapy.
  4. 01:25:438 (1) - Ten slider raczej powinien kończyć sie o jeden 1/2 tick wcześniej, żeby utrzymać logiczny rytm. W tym miejscu masz zdecydowanie mocniejszy dźwięk niż 01:26:152 - tutaj, gdzie dźwięk jest dość mało istotny, więc zakończenie tego slidera ten jeden tick wcześniej jest dobrym pomysłem.


[Normal]
  1. 00:08:771 (2,3,4) - Myślę, że flow mogło by tutaj działać lepiej gdybyś 00:09:247 (4) - ten slider obrócił w pionie, ponieważ jak narazie to antyflow nie należy do przyjemnych, bo 00:08:771 (2,3) - te dwa kółka stwarzają ruch, który jest później przerywany przez 00:09:247 (4) - tego slidera. Dla przydładu, 00:38:771 (1,2,3) - takie flow jest lepsze na podobnych patternach.
  2. Używanie przerw o 1/2 beatu pomiędzy obiektami na normalu, który ma 256BPM nie należy do najlepszych pomysłów, szczególnie gdy easy nie używał nawet przerw o 1/1. Dla lepszego spreadu i grywalności powinieneś zwiększyć odstęp pomiędzy 00:24:485 (4,5) - tymi obiektami do 1/1. W tym przypadku poprzez skrócenie 00:24:843 (5) - tego slidera o 1/2 i przesunięcie go o jeden 1/2 tick w prawo na osi czasu. // 00:26:390 (4,5) - To samo tutaj. // 00:32:105 (4,5) - I tutaj, ogólnie - w podobnych do tego miejsca proponowałbym zwiększyć odległość na osi czasu pomiędzy obiektami. // 01:05:438 (1,2,3) - Szczególnie tutaj jest to dość trudne dla graczy, którzy grają normal diffy, chociaż 01:05:795 (2,3) - to jest dobre to proponowałbym zamiast 01:05:438 (1) - tego slidera dać kółko 01:05:438 - tutaj.
  3. 00:29:724 (2,3,4) - Uważam, że nie gra się tego zbyt komfortowo. Flow tutaj jest nastawione pod bardzo ostrym kątem i jest to mniej wygodne do zagrania niż reszta mapy. Co byś powiedział np. o czymś takim? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8654171 Gra się o wiele lepiej moim zdaniem.
  4. 01:21:152 (2,3,4) - A propos jednego z wyższych punktów. Moim zdaniem powinieneś usunąć z tego patterna to środkowe kółko, ponieważ moim zdaniem jest to zdecydowanie zbyt trudne jeśli chodzi o normala.


[To Akareh]
  1. Since I'm modding FlameLancer's Easy and Normal oncy I've to tell you about fact you've unrankable issue on your difficulty. 00:04:486 - Here you've two stacked timing points with different volume. To make it rankable you should keep consistent volume on both of points.


Red - Unrankable issue.

Fajna mapka, powodzenia!
Akareh

Venix wrote:

Cześć, z kolejki modowania

[To Akareh]
  1. Since I'm modding FlameLancer's Easy and Normal oncy I've to tell you about fact you've unrankable issue on your difficulty. 00:04:486 - Here you've two stacked timing points with different volume. To make it rankable you should keep consistent volume on both of points.


Red - Unrankable issue.

Fajna mapka, powodzenia!
I'm not sure if that's unrankable, since we can not have two inherited or two uninherited at the same spot, but guidelines do say that it's fine to place an uninherited and an inherited at the same place. Anyway, I'll change it to avoid the potential issue. I placed it so 00:04:009 (1,2) - had a different volume than the rest since those two notes aren't as powerful, but oh welp.

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Topic Starter
_FlameL

Venix wrote:

Cześć, z kolejki modowania

[General]
  1. Co powiesz o wyłączeniu na wszystkich diffach opcji "widescreen support", która znajduje się w zakładce "Design" w opcjach. Nie ma to znaczenia na dłuższą metę, ale moim zdaniem warto to zrobić, żeby inni modderzy się nie czepiali. (Aktualnie widescreen support jest włączony tylko na diffie lita). Ok.


[Easy]
  1. 00:04:009 (1,1) - Co myślisz o rozdzieleniu tych dwóch obiektów ze stacka? Stacki nie są zbyt komfortowe do gry dla nowych graczy, a szczególnie na tak wysokim BPM więc radziłbym odsunąć kółko od tego slidera, żeby grało się to przyjemnie. Stack, muzycznie pasuje lepiej więc przy nim zostane.
  2. 00:55:438 (3,4,5,1) - Tutaj podobna sprawa. Wygląda to bardzo estetycznie ale z takim AR jest bardzo trudne do wyczytania przez początkujących graczy. Proponuję to jakoś odstackować, żeby było łatwiejsze do wyczytania. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8653993 Nie stracisz dużo na wyglądzie, ale za to będzie się grało lepiej. Zostane przy tym. Twoje rozwiązanie mogłoby prowadzić do kolejnych overlappów i ma gorszy flow. Po za tym 00:55:438 (3) - całkowicie znika zanim klikniemy jeszcze 00:56:390 (4)
  3. 01:01:628 (1,4) - Nie sądzisz, że ta zmiana shape nie wygląda bardzo estetycznie? Proponuję zastąpić 01:03:533 (4,5) - te slidery 01:01:628 (1) - takimi, żeby utrzymać fajną estetykę jak w innych momentach mapy. Ok.
  4. 01:25:438 (1) - Ten slider raczej powinien kończyć sie o jeden 1/2 tick wcześniej, żeby utrzymać logiczny rytm. W tym miejscu masz zdecydowanie mocniejszy dźwięk niż 01:26:152 - tutaj, gdzie dźwięk jest dość mało istotny, więc zakończenie tego slidera ten jeden tick wcześniej jest dobrym pomysłem.
    Zrobiłem tak ponieważ każdy diff musi się kończyć w tym samym punkcię (A przynajmniej każdy tak mówi). A tak poza tym to 01:26:152 muzyka kończy się tym miejscy więc powinno być ok.


[Normal]
  1. 00:08:771 (2,3,4) - Myślę, że flow mogło by tutaj działać lepiej gdybyś 00:09:247 (4) - ten slider obrócił w pionie, ponieważ jak narazie to antyflow nie należy do przyjemnych, bo 00:08:771 (2,3) - te dwa kółka stwarzają ruch, który jest później przerywany przez 00:09:247 (4) - tego slidera. Dla przydładu, 00:38:771 (1,2,3) - takie flow jest lepsze na podobnych patternach. Ok.
  2. Używanie przerw o 1/2 beatu pomiędzy obiektami na normalu, który ma 256BPM 252* nie należy do najlepszych pomysłów, szczególnie gdy easy nie używał nawet przerw o 1/1. Dla lepszego spreadu i grywalności powinieneś zwiększyć odstęp pomiędzy 00:24:485 (4,5) - tymi obiektami do 1/1. W tym przypadku poprzez skrócenie 00:24:843 (5) - tego slidera o 1/2 i przesunięcie go o jeden 1/2 tick w prawo na osi czasu. // 00:26:390 (4,5) - To samo tutaj. // 00:32:105 (4,5) - I tutaj, ogólnie - w podobnych do tego miejsca proponowałbym zwiększyć odległość na osi czasu pomiędzy obiektami. // 01:05:438 (1,2,3) - Szczególnie tutaj jest to dość trudne dla graczy, którzy grają normal diffy, chociaż 01:05:795 (2,3) - to jest dobre to proponowałbym zamiast 01:05:438 (1) - tego slidera dać kółko 01:05:438 - tutaj. Co do 01:05:438 (1,2,3) moge się zgodzić. Ale jeśli chodzi o reszte to myśle,
    że sposób w jaki zostały przedstawione patterny 1/2 jest na tyle łatwy do zrozumienia (przeczytania) że nie powinny być one problemem.
  3. 00:29:724 (2,3,4) - Uważam, że nie gra się tego zbyt komfortowo. Flow tutaj jest nastawione pod bardzo ostrym kątem i jest to mniej wygodne do zagrania niż reszta mapy. Co byś powiedział np. o czymś takim? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8654171 Gra się o wiele lepiej moim zdaniem. Coś zmieniłem.
  4. 01:21:152 (2,3,4) - A propos jednego z wyższych punktów. Moim zdaniem powinieneś usunąć z tego patterna to środkowe kółko, ponieważ moim zdaniem jest to zdecydowanie zbyt trudne jeśli chodzi o normala. Ok.


Fajna mapka, powodzenia!
Dzięki!
Venix
Nie żeby coś, ale diff lita i tak się kończy w innym momencie. To nie jest problem i jest w pełni rankable
Topic Starter
_FlameL

Venix wrote:

Nie żeby coś, ale diff lita i tak się kończy w innym momencie. To nie jest problem i jest w pełni rankable
Aha, więc jeśli jest tak jak mówisz to zmienie ten ostatni slider, jeśli nie to pewnie BN o tym wspomni.
Venix

FlameLancer wrote:

Venix wrote:

Nie żeby coś, ale diff lita i tak się kończy w innym momencie. To nie jest problem i jest w pełni rankable
Aha, więc jeśli jest tak jak mówisz to zmienie ten ostatni slider, jeśli nie to pewnie BN o tym wspomni.
To już zależy od BNa. Chodziło mi o to, że diffy nie muszą się kończyć w tym samym momencie.
lit120
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Topic Starter
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Updated lit's diff (I turned off widescreen support on your diff)
Rizen
Easy
  1. 00:54:962 (2,3) - seems to fit rhythm better if it's slider then circle here
  2. 01:14:962 (1) - finish at slider head


Normal
  1. 00:06:390 (1) - remove finish at slider head? no cymbal sound in music
  2. 00:12:105 (1) - add finish at slider head, cymbal present in music. same at 00:15:914 (1) -
  3. 01:10:200 (3,4,5) - sugestion. current pattern puts emphasis on 01:10:676 (5) - but should really be on 01:10:438 (4) -
  4. 01:23:295 (3) - somewhere like x:182 y:4 would flow better (i know it touches the hp bar, but that's more of a guideline which i think can be overlooked here if it improves flow)


lit120's Hard
  1. hitsounding???
  2. 00:27:343 (1) - perhaps an angle slider here would be best. this is the start of a new measure so it's different to the rhythm at 00:26:033 (4,1,2) - . A different slider shape would indicate this and would be more fitting imo
  3. seemsgood


Akareh's Insane
  1. 00:04:128 (2) - finish on slider tail not very fitting imo
  2. 00:21:509 - add circle here or change 00:21:390 (8) - to a 1/2 slider? you don't ususally leave any 1/1 gaps during the verse
  3. 00:22:343 (4) - I don't really agree with the usage of these 1/4 repeat sliders cos there isn't really a sound on that 1/4 blue tick. If you disagree, try adding more of these at section 00:34:962 (1) - cos you only used it once here.
  4. 00:19:485 (7,8,1) - not very strong but spaced so far apart ;_;


Lost Memories
  1. 00:14:485 (3) - doesn't really make much sense to extend this slider imo, clear beat on the red tick. make it into a 1/2 slider? not to mention that the spacing here is similar to the 1/2 one just before it so it could lead to some confusion. same at 00:18:295 (3,4) -
    i'm verrry bad with playing high bpm maps so I can't really mod this.. sorry :(


glgl
Topic Starter
_FlameL

a q p w wrote:

Easy
  1. 00:54:962 (2,3) - seems to fit rhythm better if it's slider then circle here
  2. 01:14:962 (1) - finish at slider head


Normal
  1. 00:06:390 (1) - remove finish at slider head? no cymbal sound in music
  2. 00:12:105 (1) - add finish at slider head, cymbal present in music. same at 00:15:914 (1) -
  3. 01:10:200 (3,4,5) - sugestion. current pattern puts emphasis on 01:10:676 (5) - but should really be on 01:10:438 (4) -
  4. 01:23:295 (3) - somewhere like x:182 y:4 would flow better (i know it touches the hp bar, but that's more of a guideline which i think can be overlooked here if it improves flow)


Lost Memories
  1. 00:14:485 (3) - doesn't really make much sense to extend this slider imo, clear beat on the red tick. make it into a 1/2 slider? not to mention that the spacing here is similar to the 1/2 one just before it so it could lead to some confusion. same at 00:18:295 (3,4) -
    i'm verrry bad with playing high bpm maps so I can't really mod this.. sorry :(


Yes to everything I guess?

glgl
Thanks!
Akareh

a q p w wrote:

Akareh's Insane
  1. 00:04:128 (2) - finish on slider tail not very fitting imo ye
  2. 00:21:509 - add circle here or change 00:21:390 (8) - to a 1/2 slider? you don't ususally leave any 1/1 gaps during the verse nope, it deserves the stop imho
  3. 00:22:343 (4) - I don't really agree with the usage of these 1/4 repeat sliders cos there isn't really a sound on that 1/4 blue tick. If you disagree, try adding more of these at section 00:34:962 (1) - cos you only used it once here. I already answered this in a previous mod so I'll copy paste: drums. These are technically two drum kicks and not three, but hachi uses weird drum rhythms so they fit anyway with all the background noise, these sound completely different from the rest of double drum kicks, so I went with repeating sliders. Drum patterns change at 00:34:962, lots more of emphasis on double drum kicks so instead of repeating sliders I went for spaced circles where intensity allowed me to,
    but 00:47:105 (4) - didn't really play well with that since the vocals here hold instead of following the drums like in the rest of the section I went back to the repeating slider for this. It played better for me IMO.
  4. 00:19:485 (7,8,1) - not very strong but spaced so far apart ;_; feels strong enough for me and it also simbolizes the end of the section?


glgl
thx ~
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lit120
both of your points seems ok for me as the rhythm may be different, that will be fine imo. any points like that means a change for me then! although i had to agree on it

thanks!

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144,54,80914,2,0,P|91:69|37:65,1,109.5,8|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,132,81271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
2,209,81390,1,8,1:0:0:0:
2,209,81509,6,0,P|28:258|37:311,1,109.5
111,323,81866,2,0,P|139:276|182:242,1,109.5,8|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,219,82224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,242,82343,1,8,1:0:0:0:
329,242,82581,5,2,0:0:0:0:
216,346,82819,1,8,1:0:0:0:
112,235,83057,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,235,83176,2,0,L|112:168,1,54.75,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
82,109,83414,6,0,P|145:127|190:112,1,109.5
250,75,83771,2,0,P|277:70|305:72,1,54.75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,33,84009,2,0,P|353:96|368:141,1,109.5,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
411,197,84366,6,0,P|348:179|303:194,1,109.5
247,237,84724,2,0,P|194:249|143:231,1,109.5,8|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,168,85081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
67,240,85200,1,8,1:0:0:0:
67,240,85319,6,0,P|28:202|21:149,1,109.5
75,92,85676,1,8,1:0:0:0:
98,168,85795,1,2,0:0:0:0:
37,313,86033,1,0,1:0:0:0:

i might adding my own custom hitsounds there later, but idk
Shunao
im back lol

  • Easy
  1. 00:04:009 (1) - clap?
  2. 00:14:009 (3) - I see it better straight for a better transition with 00:14:962 (4) - like you make before
  3. 00:41:628 (4,1) - the flow is broken maybe it's better for a easy to follow the flow without break so maybe i suggest to raise 00:41:628 (4) - at x:486 y:198. Then move 00:42:581 (1) - to x:310 y:263.
  4. 01:05:438 (1,1) - the spacing between these note isn't x0.90 it's x0.26 fix it, please
  5. Why in the kiai part there are any hitsounds? it's so empty lul
  6. oh and also on the kiai part there are too much 1/1 sliders its really oversimplify the song imo. maybe map on the vocals a little for example here 01:09:247 (3,4) - you can try something like this https://puu.sh/xcPub/b0d8421bd2.png
  7. 01:10:200 (4,1) - They are too close imo there is almost a contact and it's doesn't look nice imo
  • Normal
  1. 00:28:771 - you need to map this vocal because this long slider sound off tbh
  2. 00:30:676 - same thing here ^
  3. 00:44:009 - ^
  4. 00:45:914 - ^
  5. 00:44:962 (2,3,4) - this flow doesn't work because the slider are not similar the 4 is more long and more curved that the 2 but if you fix the thing before ^ i think there is no problem
  6. 00:48:295 (1,2,3,4) - should be like this https://puu.sh/xcQ78/7714f3a2a1.png as you did before lol
  7. 01:12:581 (5,6) - make like you did here 01:11:628 (3,4) - this is similar vocals https://puu.sh/xcQij/3848011ffc.png
  8. 01:24:962 (2) - why a slider renverse you don't put slider renverse from here 01:18:771 - and it's sound a bit off tbh


gl!~
Topic Starter
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ShogunMoon wrote:

im back lol Hi again :)

  • Easy
  1. 00:04:009 (1) - clap? Sure
  2. 00:14:009 (3) - I see it better straight for a better transition with 00:14:962 (4) - like you make before Sure
  3. 00:41:628 (4,1) - the flow is broken maybe it's better for a easy to follow the flow without break so maybe i suggest to raise 00:41:628 (4) - at x:486 y:198. Then move 00:42:581 (1) - to x:310 y:263. I made some changes
  4. 01:05:438 (1,1) - the spacing between these note isn't x0.90 it's x0.26 fix it, please They are 8 bits apart. They dont rly need to be x0.90
  5. Why in the kiai part there are any hitsounds? it's so empty lul Claps are every two white ticks lul so there mostly whistles and finishes on easy diff
  6. oh and also on the kiai part there are too much 1/1 sliders its really oversimplify the song imo. maybe map on the vocals a little for example here 01:09:247 (3,4) - you can try something like this https://puu.sh/xcPub/b0d8421bd2.png It should be better now
  7. 01:10:200 (4,1) - They are too close imo there is almost a contact and it's doesn't look nice imo ^
  • Normal
  1. 00:28:771 - you need to map this vocal because this long slider sound off tbh I will stay with those long sliders.
  2. 00:30:676 - same thing here ^
  3. 00:44:009 - ^
  4. 00:45:914 - ^
  5. 00:44:962 (2,3,4) - this flow doesn't work because the slider are not similar the 4 is more long and more curved that the 2 but if you fix the thing before ^ i think there is no problem Flow is good here imo
  6. 00:48:295 (1,2,3,4) - should be like this https://puu.sh/xcQ78/7714f3a2a1.png as you did before lol to me its better like this. And I made it like this before 00:33:057 (1,2,3,4,5) -
  7. 01:12:581 (5,6) - make like you did here 01:11:628 (3,4) - this is similar vocals https://puu.sh/xcQij/3848011ffc.png Ok but will do it in the other way.
  8. 01:24:962 (2) - why a slider renverse you don't put slider renverse from here 01:18:771 - and it's sound a bit off tbh I will leave it like that. Also I remapped kiai part a bit so It should be funnier to play now


gl!~
Thanks! again xD
Nikakis
The audio bitrate is kinda low under standard common requirements and im not sure if it's allowed to have a 128 kbps bitrate.192 kbps is always the best option.I would recommend to contact some ppl who associate with mp3s and stuff and give you a better mp3.
Topic Starter
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Nikakis wrote:

The audio bitrate is kinda low under standard common requirements and im not sure if it's allowed to have a 128 kbps bitrate.192 kbps is always the best option.I would recommend to contact some ppl who associate with mp3s and stuff and give you a better mp3.
https://osu.ppy.sh/help/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
The song's audio file must be of reasonable quality. Try and source .mp3 files yourself; ripping them from a streaming video site often results in low quality audio with high file sizes. The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps. If you are having trouble acquiring an appropriate audio file, contact one of the more audio-savvy BN; they will be more than happy to help find an .mp3 for you.

I understand your concern so I will keep that in mind (Bcs better audio quality is a good thing to have) but by the ranking criteria rules, 192kbps is not required.
lit120

FlameLancer wrote:

Nikakis wrote:

The audio bitrate is kinda low under standard common requirements and im not sure if it's allowed to have a 128 kbps bitrate.192 kbps is always the best option.I would recommend to contact some ppl who associate with mp3s and stuff and give you a better mp3.
https://osu.ppy.sh/help/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
The song's audio file must be of reasonable quality. Try and source .mp3 files yourself; ripping them from a streaming video site often results in low quality audio with high file sizes. The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps. If you are having trouble acquiring an appropriate audio file, contact one of the more audio-savvy BN; they will be more than happy to help find an .mp3 for you.

I understand your concern so I will keep that in mind (Bcs better audio quality is a good thing to have) but by the ranking criteria rules, 192kbps is not required.
Depends on its mp3 quality there if you don't want to have a fucked up quality :(
Senery
hi! nm from my queue

[General]
  1. Looks like "Partners in crime.png" is unused so you can delete it


[Easy]
  1. 01:04:485 (5) - you can blanket this
  2. 01:05:438 (1) - better align this with (5)


[Normal]
  1. 00:13:533 (5) - you should use the same reverse slider here, aswell as later after this point
  2. 00:13:057 (4,5) - overlap
  3. 01:25:914 (1) - only the reverse has a sound maybe just use a circle there?


[lit120's Hard]
  1. 00:06:152 (3,1) - i think you should have these separate, it looks like its a 1/2 gab because of the beginning same for after this so to avoid confusion i suggest separeting them(especially this 00:07:700 (2,3,4,1) - )
  2. 00:29:009 (4,1,2) - separate these having them in the same stack is hard to read for new players, you have more of these later on


[Lost Memories]
  1. 00:51:152 (6,1) - space these a bit, it looks like a 1/2 gab
  2. 00:53:771 (9,1) - ^ (or stack them)
  3. 00:57:581 (3,1) - same for this, there are others after this


Thats it, insane seems fine, good luck
Topic Starter
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Senery wrote:

hi! nm from my queue

[General]
  1. Looks like "Partners in crime.png" is unused so you can delete it I forgot to delete it again(it's easier to map with darker background).


[Easy]
  1. 01:04:485 (5) - you can blanket this I dont really want to.
  2. 01:05:438 (1) - better align this with (5) It's better like this.


[Normal]
  1. 00:13:533 (5) - you should use the same reverse slider here, aswell as later after this point I want some rhythm variety so I will keep it like this.
  2. 00:13:057 (4,5) - overlap Fixed
  3. 01:25:914 (1) - only the reverse has a sound maybe just use a circle there? changed


[Lost Memories]
  1. 00:51:152 (6,1) - space these a bit, it looks like a 1/2 gab
  2. 00:53:771 (9,1) - ^ (or stack them)
  3. 00:57:581 (3,1) - same for this, there are others after this The small spacing(slow movement), symbolize a small pause in the song(end/start of the vocal/drum) that occurs every couple of seconds. It may look like 1/2 gap but if you listen to the song when play you should easily read that.


Thats it, insane seems fine, good luck
Hi I'm on a trip with my family right now so I can't check your mod.
I will answer it on Sunday with this post. ;)

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