Rib - DONUT HOLE [Osu|OsuMania|Taiko] · forum

FL37

420 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

FL37 2017-06-28T19:20:17+00:00

CyberX wrote:
Please map the break, kinda end the fun

As you asked

Kuro Fuyusaki

593 posts

Joined May 2013

Kuro Fuyusaki 2017-06-29T18:58:22+00:00

Heya~ From my modQ

Mod

[General]

Find nothing so far, and the break have been mentioned already, lol.

[Easy]

00:14:009 (3) - Avoid overlap, the approach circle is hindered by the slider path of 00:12:105 (1) - .This may confuse newer player
00:25:438 (3) - I don't think this stack is acceptable because the interval time is too close (and the approach circle is appeared before the previous slider is yet to be finished).
00:34:962 (1) - Don't bend too much. At least, make the slider wall more visible
Before *Excuse my bad handwriting*
My suggestion
00:38:771 (1) - ^ same case
01:16:866 (3) - Move it a bit higher so it won't overlap with 01:15:914 (2) - . Not really a problem but, just in case
01:20:676 (4) - Same case as stated at point No. 2 of my mod. If you really want to stack at least make an interval distance time 6 beat after (safely at 8 beat)
01:24:485 (4) - ^

[Normal]

00:05:438 (3) - Rather stack the slider tail rather than the head tail as you do like 00:07:343 (3) - ....of course there's also reading problem
00:07:819 (4) - Avoid overlapping the slider wall of 00:08:295 (1) - . I think you already know the reason. I suggest move 00:08:295 (1) - to the left....like this
00:13:057 (4,5) - ^ same case
00:14:962 (4,5) - ^
00:19:724 (1) - ^
00:26:390 (4,5) - You would want to make the same pattern as 00:24:485 (4,5) - for emphasizing the vocal?
00:32:105 (4,5) - Set the flows as straightforwardly as possible, I suggest move the latter slider to the upper-right, something like this
00:47:343 (4,5) - ^ same case. It may looks the flow is linear. But in lower diff, not at all. Player at this level fully follows the slider path. I suggest something like this
01:07:343 (1,2) - same case as what I stated in point mod No. 2
01:11:628 (3,4) - .....You already know what i will try to say, right? If not. see point 2 or 7
01:13:890 (3) - Move it to the upper right, something like x:196 y:23 (you could move it with the DS on). Adjust the latter hit circle
01:21:152 (2,3,4) - This is hard to follow cause the flow is drop-off after the hit circle. something like this might be better

[Akareh's Insane]

I feel the first-half of kiai sect seems sparse than the chorus...tho im not really complaining. Suggesting make it more dense
To be honest, I don't know what I should mod at this point, it looks good already. Perhaps i will only mention HS error so far so the rest most likely only suggestion, feel free to ignore
00:04:366 - delete finish as it doesn't fit the song at all, should probably went with low volume instead. Finish at this point 00:04:486 - is enough.
00:07:700 (6) - reduce slider length to white tick and add reverse slider by 1 so it went like this
00:12:343 - add clap
00:19:605 (8) - move it to x:61 y:308 so it could blanket with 00:19:128 (6) - and put some distance from 00:19:724 (1) - to make a smoother flow. Tho i know your reason is to emphasize the distance between this 00:19:605 (8,1,2) - . Oh and while you're at it, you could stack 00:19:485 (7) - to 00:20:200 (3) - head slider.
00:43:414 - add clap
00:50:200 - till 01:05:319 - I don't if I should mention this, but you seems rarely put double clap at this section...dunno if you do it on purpose
01:10:438 (5,6,7) - I'm taking note from the previous mod. You don't have to move 01:10:438 (5) - and 01:10:914 (7) - . Only rotate 01:10:676 (6) - 25 degrees anti-clockwise and adjust it. The magic happen. If you still considering this.
01:23:176 - Add whistle
01:23:890 - Delete whistle
01:24:009 - You could add whistle...or not
01:24:247 - Add clap
01:25:081 - Add whistle

[Lost Memories]
I will mod it later if i have a chance.

You could point it out if i have any error in my mod....I'm doing it when i feel so tired ;w;
Hope it helps~

Akareh

771 posts

Joined February 2010

Akareh 2017-06-29T19:26:15+00:00

Kuro Fuyusaki wrote:
Heya~ From my modQ

[Akareh's Insane]
I feel the first-half of kiai sect seems sparse than the chorus...tho im not really complaining. Suggesting make it more dense Well, the drums go wild from 01:18:771 (1) - to the end, that's why the second half of the chorus is more dense. It also seemed cool to me since we're approaching the end we can have some more dense rhythms and create a nice progression of difficulty in the map
To be honest, I don't know what I should mod at this point, it looks good already. Perhaps i will only mention HS error so far so the rest most likely only suggestion, feel free to ignore
00:04:366 - delete finish as it doesn't fit the song at all, should probably went with low volume instead. Finish at this point 00:04:486 - is enough. reduced volume a bit and changed this to a whistle
00:07:700 (6) - reduce slider length to white tick and add reverse slider by 1 so it went like this I know I'm skipping a beat at 00:21:152 but I really think this plays better with this kind of slider
00:12:343 - add clap yes
00:19:605 (8) - move it to x:61 y:308 so it could blanket with 00:19:128 (6) - and put some distance from 00:19:724 (1) - to make a smoother flow. Tho i know your reason is to emphasize the distance between this 00:19:605 (8,1,2) - . Oh and while you're at it, you could stack 00:19:485 (7) - to 00:20:200 (3) - head slider. yes to moving 00:19:605 (8) no to stacking 00:19:485 (7) because I think the jump between 00:19:485 (7,8,1) - wouldn't work as well if we have to make a sharp turn between 00:19:128 (6,7) -
00:43:414 - add clap yes
00:50:200 - till 01:05:319 - I don't if I should mention this, but you seems rarely put double clap at this section...dunno if you do it on purpose yes, it's on purpose. Drums gain more presence here than in the previous part, so I placed more finishes and less claps
01:10:438 (5,6,7) - I'm taking note from the previous mod. You don't have to move 01:10:438 (5) - and 01:10:914 (7) - . Only rotate 01:10:676 (6) - 25 degrees anti-clockwise and adjust it. The magic happen. If you still considering this. sure,
I'll do that
01:23:176 - Add whistle yes
01:23:890 - Delete whistle yes
01:24:009 - You could add whistle...or not yes
01:24:247 - Add clap yes
01:25:081 - Add whistleyes

Thank you ~

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FL37

420 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

FL37 2017-06-29T21:05:27+00:00

Kuro Fuyusaki wrote:
Heya~ From my modQ

Mod
[General]
Find nothing so far, and the break have been mentioned already, lol.
[Easy]
00:14:009 (3) - Avoid overlap, the approach circle is hindered by the slider path of 00:12:105 (1) - .This may confuse newer player Fixed
00:25:438 (3) - I don't think this stack is acceptable because the interval time is too close (and the approach circle is appeared before the previous slider is yet to be finished). Hmm. I'm not rly sure about it. In ranking criteria they say that it needs to stack (not fully overlap) at 1/1 distance. It's 4/1 in this case. Also, first slider disappears before you even hit circle between them. Still I will keep that in mind.
00:34:962 (1) - Don't bend too much. At least, make the slider wall more visible Fixed a bit
00:38:771 (1) - ^ same case same
01:16:866 (3) - Move it a bit higher so it won't overlap with 01:15:914 (2) -. Not really a problem but, just in case Fixed
01:20:676 (4) - Same case as stated at point No. 2 of my mod. If you really want to stack at least make an interval distance time 6 beat after (safely at 8 beat) Same as earlier
01:24:485 (4) - ^ ^
[Normal]
00:05:438 (3) - Rather stack the slider tail rather than the head tail as you do like 00:07:343 (3) - ....of course there's also reading problem Personaly I dont feel difference but new players might, Sooo Changed
00:07:819 (4) - Avoid overlapping the slider wall of 00:08:295 (1) - . I think you already know the reason. I suggest move 00:08:295 (1) - to the left...Thats sad... But I think you are right about it. Changed
00:13:057 (4,5) - ^ same case Fixed for all
00:14:962 (4,5) - ^
00:19:724 (1) - ^
00:26:390 (4,5) - You would want to make the same pattern as 00:24:485 (4,5) - for emphasizing the vocal? Sure
00:32:105 (4,5) - Set the flows as straightforwardly as possible, I suggest move the latter slider to the upper-right Done
00:47:343 (4,5) - ^ same case. It may looks the flow is linear. But in lower diff, not at all. Player at this level fully follows the slider path. Changed
01:07:343 (1,2) - same case as what I stated in point mod No. 2 Fixed
01:11:628 (3,4) - .....You already know what i will try to say, right? If not. see point 2 or 7 ok
01:13:890 (3) - Move it to the upper right, something like x:196 y:23 (you could move it with the DS on). Adjust the latter hit circle ok
01:21:152 (2,3,4) - This is hard to follow cause the flow is drop-off after the hit circle. Changed a bit
[Lost Memories]
I will mod it later if i have a chance.

You could point it out if i have any error in my mod....I'm doing it when i feel so tired ;w;
Hope it helps~

Thanks!

Saika0k1

346 posts

Joined April 2014

Saika0k1 2017-07-03T16:43:50+00:00

hi M4M from my queue!

Lost Memories

00:07:343 (5,7) - blanket this ? 00:06:866 (3,5) - wont look bad after blanket either
00:14:485 (3) - why is this longer than 00:14:009 (1) - ?
00:15:914 (9,1) - swap NC
00:18:295 (3) - same question
00:22:581 (6,7) - this overlap looks bad but idk
00:31:867 (4,5) - should have same spacing as 00:33:772 (4,5) - since it represent the same sound
00:35:438 (3,4) - shouldnt this have the same pattern as ^ as it reprensent same sound ?
00:37:581 (4,5) - same as point 6
00:39:485 (4,5) - ^
00:41:390 (4,5) - ^
00:43:057 (3,4) - again
00:44:962 (4,5) - yea..
00:49:009 (5,6) - same as point 6
00:49:724 (9) - NC SV change
01:13:057 (1) - emphasize this because of a strong sound that exist there
01:13:890 (4) - ^
01:14:247 (5,6,7) - equal spacing
01:24:009 (2,3) - should have same spacing as 01:23:890 (1,3) -
01:24:962 (3,5,6) - looks wierd, maybe form then in a triangle
01:26:033 (8) - NC (the end is soooo unsatisfying xd)

tbh i think it should stay with 126 becuase it also works just fine but thats up to you to decide

best of luck!

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-07-03T17:14:24+00:00

hi! short mod o/

easy

00:49:247 (4) - should be 2 circle like you did at 00:37:819 (4,5)
01:03:533 (1) - remove nc for consistence with 00:55:914 (4) - and add nc here 01:04:485 (3)
01:05:438 (4) - this moment should be mapped because there are strong guitar so i suggest to try something like this http://i.imgur.com/GjdLrMM.jpg?1

normal

00:04:962 (2) - and 00:06:866 (2) - it's not 2 circles like you did at 00:08:771 (2,3) - it's inconsistent
00:30:438 (4,2) - this overlap doesn't look beautiful
00:24:485 (4,5) - nice overlap but why you don't make this here too? 00:20:676 (3,4) - and 00:22:581 (3,4) - it's the same density on the vocals it's inconsistent tbh
00:37:819 (3,4) - should be overlap like this 00:24:485 (4,5) - here 00:37:819 (3,4) - and 00:41:628 (4,5) - for consistency
00:54:485 (2) - on the tail is should be a sldier renverse for emphasis the drums
01:02:343 (3) - should be a slider renverse for consistence

akareh's insane

cs is more high that the last diff may decreased it
remove widescreen
can't find important problem, good diff!

good luck for your mapset!

Akareh

771 posts

Joined February 2010

Akareh 2017-07-03T19:31:30+00:00

ShogunMoon wrote:
hi! short mod o/

akareh's insane
cs is more high that the last diff may decreased it
remove widescreen
can't find important problem, good diff!
good luck for your mapset!

CS shouldn't be an issue, and I think it fits as it is.
Can you remove widescreen support Flame? I don't think I need to pass you the code just to remove that

Also, regarding Saika-'s mod, I'm fairly sure this is supposed to be 252 bpm, I'd keep it as that.

FL37

420 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

FL37 2017-07-03T20:03:52+00:00

ShogunMoon wrote:
hi! short mod o/

easy
00:49:247 (4) - should be 2 circle like you did at 00:37:819 (4,5) ? But those are different from each other ? 00:49:247 (4) - is more like 00:34:009 (4)
01:03:533 (1) - remove nc for consistence with 00:55:914 (4) - and add nc here 01:04:485 (3) Ok but I added it at 01:05:438 (1)
01:05:438 (4) - this moment should be mapped because there are strong guitar so i suggest to try something like this http://i.imgur.com/GjdLrMM.jpg?1
I know that there are some strong sound here but bcs its Easy I want for it to be a little break before the most 'intense' (at least for a song) part of a map.
normal
00:04:962 (2) - and 00:06:866 (2) - it's not 2 circles like you did at 00:08:771 (2,3) - it's inconsistent 00:08:295 (1,2,3) - 00:10:200 (1,2,3) - it's consistent, also pattern and rhythm variety
00:30:438 (4,2) - this overlap doesn't look beautiful Fixed
00:24:485 (4,5) - nice overlap but why you don't make this here too? 00:20:676 (3,4) - and 00:22:581 (3,4) - it's the same density on the vocals it's inconsistent tbh Same as for 00:08:295 (1,2,3) - 00:10:200 (1,2,3) - but here it is 00:20:676 (3,4) - 00:22:581 (3,4) - and 00:24:485 (4,5) - 00:26:390 (4,5) - .
00:37:819 (3,4) - should be overlap like this 00:24:485 (4,5) - here 00:37:819 (3,4) - and 00:41:628 (4,5) - for consistency I will only change 00:41:628 (4,5)
00:54:485 (2) - on the tail is should be a sldier renverse for emphasis the drums pattern and rhythm variety, It would be boring doing the same thing over and over
01:02:343 (3) - should be a slider renverse for consistence ^

good luck for your mapset!

Thanks!

Saika- wrote:
hi M4M from my queue!

Lost Memories

00:07:343 (5,7) - blanket this ? 00:06:866 (3,5) - wont look bad after blanket either Nah it looks good, and I think it would destroy flow in this pattern
00:14:485 (3) - why is this longer than 00:14:009 (1) - ? For pattern variety. This whole section is similar (- 00:04:486 - 00:19:485 -) so I needed to change something for it be enjoyable.
00:15:914 (9,1) - swap NC Done
00:18:295 (3) - same question
00:22:581 (6,7) - this overlap looks bad but idk I fixed it a bit but I will not change it as it appears several times
00:31:867 (4,5) - should have same spacing as 00:33:772 (4,5) - since it represent the same sound As long as its jumps its ok. They dont need to be exaclty the same.
00:35:438 (3,4) - shouldnt this have the same pattern as ^ as it reprensent same sound ? Its more like 00:20:200 (3,4,5) - And its different bcs pattern and rhythm variety
00:37:581 (4,5) - same as point 6
00:39:485 (4,5) - ^
00:41:390 (4,5) - ^
00:43:057 (3,4) - again 00:27:343 (1,2,3,4) - It repeats
00:44:962 (4,5) - yea.. 00:29:724 (4,5) - ^ It doesnt needs to be exaclty the same
00:49:009 (5,6) - same as point 6
00:49:724 (9) - NC SV change Sure
01:13:057 (1) - emphasize this because of a strong sound that exist there ? To me its emphasized pretty well. Will change a shape of it a bit
01:13:890 (4) - ^^
01:14:247 (5,6,7) - equal spacing O^O no
01:24:009 (2,3) - should have same spacing as 01:23:890 (1,3) - Why? Look at it like that 01:23:890 (1,2,3,4) - (4 as circle)
01:24:962 (3,5,6) - looks wierd, maybe form then in a triangle Changed something but its still the same
01:26:033 (8) - NC (the end is soooo unsatisfying xd) Sure (And I think It should (I want for it to) be unsatisfying and confusing)

tbh i think it should stay with 126 becuase it also works just fine but thats up to you to decide

best of luck!

Thanks!

Akareh wrote:
Can you remove widescreen support Flame? I don't think I need to pass you the code just to remove that Sure

Also, regarding Saika-'s mod, I'm fairly sure this is supposed to be 252 bpm, I'd keep it as that. I think so too

CucumberCuc

1,316 posts

Joined January 2016

CucumberCuc 2017-07-07T16:40:35+00:00

Hi

[Easy]
00:04:009 maybe put circle?
00:37:819 (4,5) maybe remove circles and put slider like you do on prev and next times
00:55:438 (3,4) IMO 4 circles is too long for beginners, it can remove the circles and insert the slider? for example can do this:

00:58:771 (2) move slightly right for distance
01:03:533 (4) like for 00:55:438 (3,4), for example can do this:

01:22:581 (1) move to x:71 y:303 for distance

[Normal]
00:08:771 (2,3) - 00:10:676 (2,3) - 00:12:581 (2,3) - 00:14:485 (2,3) - 00:16:390 (2,3) - 00:18:295 (2,3) I think you can make a "mix" if one time will be circles, and the next time slider, and so over time (circles,slider,circles,slider,circles,slider)
00:33:295 (2,3) far, do are close
00:54:485 (2,3) it seems to me that this is done is not as good as you think and you can sometimes replace the timing slider and circle

Good luck

FL37

420 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

FL37 2017-07-07T18:24:25+00:00

CucumberCuc wrote:
Hi

[Easy]
00:04:009 maybe put circle? Sure
00:37:819 (4,5) maybe remove circles and put slider like you do on prev and next times Sure
00:55:438 (3,4) IMO 4 circles is too long for beginners, it can remove the circles and insert the slider? for example can do this: I wasn't sure about it when I was mapping it. Changed
00:58:771 (2) move slightly right for distance ???
01:03:533 (4) like for 00:55:438 (3,4), for example can do this: Sure
01:22:581 (1) move to x:71 y:303 for distance Done

[Normal]
00:08:771 (2,3) - 00:10:676 (2,3) - 00:12:581 (2,3) - 00:14:485 (2,3) - 00:16:390 (2,3) - 00:18:295 (2,3) I think you can make a "mix" if one time will be circles, and the next time slider, and so over time (circles,slider,circles,slider,circles,slider) I think I will stay with this. In the first section (look at bookmarks), there are reverse sliders that combine with sliders. Those circles ( - 00:08:771 (2,3) - 00:10:676 (2,3) - ) are for better transition to another section without reverse sliders. And I think there would be too many sliders In 2nd section if I would do that.
00:33:295 (2,3) far, do are close Fixed
00:54:485 (2,3) it seems to me that this is done is not as good as you think and you can sometimes replace the timing slider and circle I not exactly sure what you want me to do? I changed something tho

Good luck

Thanks!

lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2017-07-13T10:54:23+00:00

the first >240 bpm ever mapped in Hard diff

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 65438
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 4009,4485,19724,27343,34962,42581,50200,57819,65438,67343,74962,86033
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2.35

[Metadata]
Title:Donut Hole
TitleUnicode:Donut Hole
Artist:Rib
ArtistUnicode:りぶ
Creator:FlameLancer
Version:lit120's Hard
Source:
Tags:gumi vocaloid short ver cut Akareh lit120 Kenshi Yonezu 米津玄師 Hachi ハチ
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6.5
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.095
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Donut Hole.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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4486,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
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Ohwow

1,193 posts

Joined July 2013

Ohwow 2017-07-18T02:10:46+00:00

from q

Should be 126 bpm

[Lost Memories]
00:43:771 (6,7) - Not liking the super slight overlap
01:11:629 (3,4) - Should ctrl+g to follow vocal like how you did at 01:12:581 (7,8) -
01:11:867 (4,5) - really big spacing
01:13:772 (3,4) - ^
01:19:724 (6) - imo these 1/1 sliders should be placed on the red ticks before to emphasize the voice. sure youi'll be missing the drum beat on the white tick, but the voice is the highlight of the song and should be focused on the most. Most of the sliders you used are mapped to the voice, so it's weird to have some sliders not mapped to the voice.
01:20:200 (2) - Keep follow vocals here, should be a slider.
01:23:057 (3) - Why is this the only slider like this in the kiai? There literally no reason to do so. just put a circle there.
Other than the two huge spacing i mentioned, I feel like the kiai should have bigger spacing overall cause it's more intense than the non kiai. Right now, the spacing looks too similar to the spacing of the non-kiai.

[Akareh's Insane]
00:11:747 (8,9) - Kinda weird to have this big spacing here and not so big spacing in the kiais like 01:11:747 (3,4) - 01:12:819 (7,1) - or 01:13:652 (4,5) -
00:22:343 (4) - 00:23:295 (7) - 00:27:105 (9) - 00:32:819 (7) - 00:47:105 (4) - what are these special 1/4 repeating slider mapped to? the last one is literally the only one in that section
I feel like the kiai should have bigger spacing overall cause it's more intense than the non kiai. Right now, the spacing looks too similar to the spacing of the non-kiai.

[lit120's Hard]
00:29:009 (4,1,2) - 1/1 and 1/2 beat in the same stack, peeps gonna misread that.
00:44:247 (4,1,2) - ^
00:47:343 (1,2) - rotate like 11 degrees counter-clockwise so you can have better symmetry with these sliders: https://i.gyazo.com/5bdde228ee4fe1d921a ... 114e30.jpg

gl

FL37

420 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

FL37 2017-07-18T08:25:26+00:00

Ohwow wrote:
from q

Should be 126 bpm When I mapped it I thought the same (No sounds at blue tick for 252). But after someone mentioned that this should be 252 I noticed that sounds change every big white tick on 252. Its like 1 2 3 4 change 1 2 3 4 change. In this section 00:04:486 - 00:19:724 Its vocals , this 00:19:724 - 00:50:200 its bass guitar, there is strong sound ever big white tick here 00:50:200 - 01:05:438 ,and here 01:07:343 - 01:26:152
xylophone/piano (not sure) repeats every big white tick.

[Lost Memories]
00:43:771 (6,7) - Not liking the super slight overlap Fixed
01:11:629 (3,4) - Should ctrl+g to follow vocal like how you did at 01:12:581 (7,8) - Nah I want to focus here on most important sounds (cymbal and clap) 01:12:581 (7,8)
01:11:867 (4,5) - really big spacing I know but I think it perfectly expresses the intensity of this part
01:13:772 (3,4) - ^ ^
01:19:724 (6) - imo these 1/1 sliders should be placed on the red ticks before to emphasize the voice. sure youi'll be missing the drum beat on the white tick, but the voice is the highlight of the song and should be focused on the most. Most of the sliders you used are mapped to the voice, so it's weird to have some sliders not mapped to the voice. 01:19:605 (5) - There a vocal that sounds like "su" 01:19:605 (5) - and extension to it "-uu" 01:19:724 (6) -. They are sung as two syllables. Its like 01:21:509 (4,5) - but the difference is smaller because "su" and "-uu" sound similar to each other.
01:20:200 (2) - Keep follow vocals here, should be a slider. Not sure about this. I think I'll stay with this.
01:23:057 (3) - Why is this the only slider like this in the kiai? There literally no reason to do so. just put a circle there. I want keep that slider so I added another 2 of them
Other than the two huge spacing i mentioned, I feel like the kiai should have bigger spacing overall cause it's more intense than the non kiai. Right now, the spacing looks too similar to the spacing of the non-kiai. Made some minor changes (you might not even notice)

gl

Thanks!

Last edited by FL37 2017-07-19T06:21:05+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Akareh

771 posts

Joined February 2010

Akareh 2017-07-18T13:00:07+00:00

Ohwow wrote:
[Akareh's Insane]
00:11:747 (8,9) - Kinda weird to have this big spacing here and not so big spacing in the kiais like 01:11:747 (3,4) - 01:12:819 (7,1) - or 01:13:652 (4,5) - 00:11:747 (8,9) - has a circular flow even if it has big spacing, but at 01:11:747 (3,4) - I'm breaking flow completely for the player, and that's a more taxing move so that's why that has a not so big spacing. 01:12:819 (7,1) - and 01:13:652 (4,5) - don't seem that intense to me tbh.
00:22:343 (4) - 00:23:295 (7) - 00:27:105 (9) - 00:32:819 (7) - 00:47:105 (4) - what are these special 1/4 repeating slider mapped to? the last one is literally the only one in that section drums. These are technically two drum kicks and not three, but hachi uses weird drum rhythms so they fit anyway with all the background noise here, these sound completely different from the rest of double drum kicks, so I went with repeating sliders. Drum patterns change at 00:34:962, lots more of emphasis on double drum kicks so instead of repeating sliders I went for spaced circles where intensity allowed me to,
but 00:47:105 (4) - didn't really play well with that since the vocals here hold instead of following the drums like in the rest of the section I went back to the repeating slider for this. It played better for me IMO.
I feel like the kiai should have bigger spacing overall cause it's more intense than the non kiai. Right now, the spacing looks too similar to the spacing of the non-kiai. Well, SV is higher so I feel like it fits as is tbh. I've change some spacings around, but like Flame's they're practically unnoticeable.

gl

Thanks

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OverallDifficulty:7.2
ApproachRate:8.8
SliderMultiplier:1.15
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Donut Hole.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo2 : 240,231,51
Combo3 : 55,232,156
Combo4 : 111,230,77
SliderBorder : 240,231,51
SliderTrackOverride : 18,35,45

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Agatsu

Beatmap Nominator

1,145 posts

Joined January 2015

Agatsu 2017-07-18T20:14:39+00:00

i couldn't see any major problems

so have a star~
and good luck!

FL37

420 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

FL37 2017-07-18T20:16:52+00:00

Agatsu wrote:
i couldn't see any major problems

so have a star~
and good luck!

Thanks!

Chalwa

1,105 posts

Joined August 2014

Chalwa 2017-07-19T12:44:21+00:00

Siema.
Modne dwa diffy bo ta nutka jest meh troche xD.

[Easy]

Mógłbyś dać AR2 i OD2 moim zdaniem, bo to wysokie BPM jest.
00:19:724 (1) - Preferuję w takin sliderze na Easy diffach zrobić ten zakręt w drugą stronę tak jak w 00:23:533 (1), ponieważ Easy diff powinien być intuicyjny i jak dasz ten zakręt w drugą stronę to kursor będzie szedł po owalu co jest wygodniejsze. Mam nadzieję, że nadążasz za moim tokiem rozumowania.
00:28:295 (2,3) - Te dwa slidery wyglądają razem tak sobie pod względem estetycznym, tak na odpierdol troche. Jak już to mógłbyś dać zakręty na 00:27:343 (1,2) sliderach i by to jako tako wyglądało imo.
00:34:962 (1) - Daj pierwszy zakręt w prawo, żeby było lepiej widać że potem jest zmiana kierunku coś jak tutaj:
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00:38:771 (1) - To samo, tylko że z drugiej strony tak jakby. Mam nadzieję, że wiesz o co mi chodzi xD.
00:43:533 (2,3) - To samo co w 00:28:295 (2,3).
00:54:009 (1) - Zrób w tym sliderze coś w tym stylu co ja, żeby wizualnie było to łatwiejsze do zagrania, bo teraz to wygląda jak szybka zmiana kierunku, a z moim czymś, to nie wygląda jak szybka zmiana .
img2
01:14:962 (1,2) - Jeżeli chciałeś to zblanketować to powinieneś naprawić koniec drugiego slidera, bo jest dalej drogi pierwszego slidera niż początek c:.
01:23:057 (2,3,4) - Takie coś nie jest wygodne to zagrania, wolę, żebyś odstackował te dwa slidery, przesunął kółko w prawo i potem też przesunął wszystko w prawo. Podeślę krótki filmik jak to u mnie wygląda. 01:19:247 (2,3,4) - tutaj zrób to samo, bo taki sam pattern.
Video: https://chalwa.s-ul.eu/7CPTpp0O
01:25:438 (5) - Ten slider powinien mieć NC dla consistency oraz jest niegrywalny dla początkujących, ja bym zrobił najzwyklejszy zakrzywiony slider tutaj.

[Normal]

Daj większy DS, jak 1.1 albo nawet 1.2, bo te obiekty leżą zbyt blisko siebie i to wygląda dziwnie :/
00:13:057 (4) - Skopiuj 00:13:533 (5) slider i po skopiowaniu daj go na miejsce poprzedniego z odpowiednim DSem klikając Ctrl+G. Teraz jest to o wiele bardziej estetyczne i wygląda lepiej moim zdaniem.
00:26:747 (5,1) - Overlapy kiedy dwa kółka ze sliderów pokrywają się nie są zbytnio ładne. Wiem, że to jest ciężko zmienić, bo masz wszystko "w kupie" ale jak zwiększysz DSy to będziesz miał większe pole manewru. Zaś 00:41:985 (5,2) overlap jest do przeczytania i jest dobry.
01:03:057 (5,1) - To co wyżej.
01:04:247 (3,5) - W tym diffie prawie wszystkie proste slidery zrobiłeś równolegle, więc czemu te dwa nie są takie same? Dla lepszego wyglądu ogólnego mapki zrób je takie same c:
01:25:914 (4) - NC jak w Easy diffie.

Masz potencjał tylko nie rób tego co ja i myśl jak mappujesz!
Powodzenia C:!

FL37

420 posts

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Topic Starter

FL37 2017-07-19T14:42:22+00:00

Chalwa wrote:
Siema.
Modne dwa diffy bo ta nutka jest meh troche xD.
[Easy]
Mógłbyś dać AR2 i OD2 moim zdaniem, bo to wysokie BPM jest. Zmienie je na 2.5
00:19:724 (1) - Preferuję w takin sliderze na Easy diffach zrobić ten zakręt w drugą stronę tak jak w 00:23:533 (1), ponieważ Easy diff powinien być intuicyjny i jak dasz ten zakręt w drugą stronę to kursor będzie szedł po owalu co jest wygodniejsze. Mam nadzieję, że nadążasz za moim tokiem rozumowania. Rozumiem ale moim zdaniem ten zakręt nie jest na tyle ostry żebym musiał go zmieniać
00:28:295 (2,3) - Te dwa slidery wyglądają razem tak sobie pod względem estetycznym, tak na odpierdol troche. xD Jak już to mógłbyś dać zakręty na 00:27:343 (1,2) sliderach i by to jako tako wyglądało imo. Wole to jak jest teraz. Chcialem tu zrobić trzy pary sliderów 00:25:438 (3,4) - 00:27:343 (1,2) - 00:29:247 (3,4) - które zmieniają kształt (zakrzywione do wewn. -> proste -> zakrzywione na zewn.)
00:34:962 (1) - Daj pierwszy zakręt w prawo, żeby było lepiej widać że potem jest zmiana kierunku coś jak tutaj: ok
img
00:38:771 (1) - To samo, tylko że z drugiej strony tak jakby. Mam nadzieję, że wiesz o co mi chodzi xD. ok
00:43:533 (2,3) - To samo co w 00:28:295 (2,3). Podobny powód
00:54:009 (1) - Zrób w tym sliderze coś w tym stylu co ja, żeby wizualnie było to łatwiejsze do zagrania, bo teraz to wygląda jak szybka zmiana kierunku, a z moim czymś, to nie wygląda jak szybka zmiana . ok? xD
img2
01:14:962 (1,2) - Jeżeli chciałeś to zblanketować to powinieneś naprawić koniec drugiego slidera, bo jest dalej drogi pierwszego slidera niż początek c:. Chyba naprawiłem? Albo nie rozumiem o co ci chodzi...
01:23:057 (2,3,4) - Takie coś nie jest wygodne to zagrania, wolę, żebyś odstackował te dwa slidery, przesunął kółko w prawo i potem też przesunął wszystko w prawo. Podeślę krótki filmik jak to u mnie wygląda. 01:19:247 (2,3,4) - tutaj zrób to samo, bo taki sam pattern. Zmieniłem położenie kołka.
Video: https://chalwa.s-ul.eu/7CPTpp0O
01:25:438 (5) - Ten slider powinien mieć NC dla consistency oraz jest niegrywalny dla początkujących, ja bym zrobił najzwyklejszy zakrzywiony slider tutaj. ok Moim zdaniem początkujacy nie poczuje różnicy jeśli chodzi o gameplay, a zakrzywienie na końcu podkreśla ważny dzwięk.
[Normal]
Daj większy DS, jak 1.1 albo nawet 1.2, bo te obiekty leżą zbyt blisko siebie i to wygląda dziwnie :/ Zmieniłem CS na 3.3 bo jak bym zmienił DS to diff bylby powyzej 2.25 (czyli juz hard)
00:13:057 (4) - Skopiuj 00:13:533 (5) slider i po skopiowaniu daj go na miejsce poprzedniego z odpowiednim DSem klikając Ctrl+G. Teraz jest to o wiele bardziej estetyczne i wygląda lepiej moim zdaniem. ok
00:26:747 (5,1) - Overlapy kiedy dwa kółka ze sliderów pokrywają się nie są zbytnio ładne. Wiem, że to jest ciężko zmienić, bo masz wszystko "w kupie" ale jak zwiększysz DSy to będziesz miał większe pole manewru. Zaś 00:41:985 (5,2) overlap jest do przeczytania i jest dobry. Naprawione
01:03:057 (5,1) - To co wyżej. Naprawione
01:04:247 (3,5) - W tym diffie prawie wszystkie proste slidery zrobiłeś równolegle, więc czemu te dwa nie są takie same? Dla lepszego wyglądu ogólnego mapki zrób je takie same c: Zrobiłem to ten sposób żeby lepiej odwzorować zmiany jakie zachodzą w muzyce w danej cześci piosenki wiec chce przy tym zostać
01:25:914 (4) - NC jak w Easy diffie. Ok

Masz potencjał tylko nie rób tego co ja i myśl jak mappujesz!
Powodzenia C:!

Dzięki~!

Asserin

332 posts

Joined August 2013

Asserin 2017-07-20T19:59:50+00:00

Easy

00:23:533 (1,3) - Dla nowych graczy takie coś może być lekko za trudne. Nie mają na tyle refleksu żeby zauważyć, że jest to ukryte pod ogonem slidera.
00:27:343 (1,3) - ^
Może inaczej. Postaraj się zredukować te stacki ponieważ one nie powinny występować w easy bo są po prostu za trudne.

Normal

00:04:485 (1,2,3,4) - Nerf na overlapy i będzie piękniutki diff. Szanuje

lit120's Hard

00:30:914 (5,1) - correct stack
01:21:390 (4,1) - ^

Akareh's Insane

00:06:866 (3,4) - There is a problem with spacing becouse you used DS 1.6x and you switched it for this where you used 00:14:724 (4,5) - here correctly (its the same part)
00:15:676 (7) - Switch it for circle like 00:08:057 (7) - becouse if you started make gap like that you have to keep it. Anyway it will be fix you spacing too
Well... Mostly you have problem with spacing but it will be stupid said about it all time so check it and fix it pls

Lost Memories

Szczerze strasznie ciężko mi się tu czegoś dopatrzeć ale odnoszę wrażenie przy graniu, że jest lekki problem z kółkami 1/2, a dokładnie tymi skokami, które robisz wraz z wokalem. Myślę, że możesz je lekko znerfić.

Bardzo fajna mapka :3

FL37

420 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

FL37 2017-07-20T20:36:13+00:00

Asserin wrote:
Easy
00:23:533 (1,3) - Dla nowych graczy takie coś może być lekko za trudne. Nie mają na tyle refleksu żeby zauważyć, że jest to ukryte pod ogonem slidera. Mam nadzieje, że teraz bedzie dobrze.
00:27:343 (1,3) - ^ Jeśli chodzi o to, to wydaje mi sie, że jest ok (dystans 8 beatów).
Może inaczej. Postaraj się zredukować te stacki ponieważ one nie powinny występować w easy bo są po prostu za trudne. Ok.

Normal
00:04:485 (1,2,3,4) - Nerf na overlapy i będzie piękniutki diff. Szanuje Znerfione.

Lost Memories
Szczerze strasznie ciężko mi się tu czegoś dopatrzeć ale odnoszę wrażenie przy graniu, że jest lekki problem z kółkami 1/2, a dokładnie tymi skokami, które robisz wraz z wokalem. Myślę, że możesz je lekko znerfić. Narazie zostawie jak jest, a jutro zobacze co mogłbym zmienić/znerfić.

Bardzo fajna mapka :3

Bardzo dziękuję

h1b1k11

261 posts

Joined April 2014

h1b1k11 2017-07-21T00:08:51+00:00

Came from my queue.

lit120's Hard

00:46:390 (1) - This slider should start here - 00:46:271
01:08:533 (3) - I don't understand why this short slider is here if you're following vocals. Change this slider into a long one and remove 01:08:771 (4) (like 01:09:962 (1) )

Lost Memories

00:23:414 - A long slider starting from that point til 00:23:652 since you're following and mapping to the vocals
00:45:914 - 00:46:152 - ^
00:18:295 (3) - Don't know if this slider was intentional or not, but it should end at 00:18:414 like 00:17:819 (1)
01:13:057 (1) - This slider should start here on the red tick - 01:12:938 - like the others ( 01:11:985 (5) / 01:13:890 (5) )
01:07:105 (1) - Just a suggestion but since Rib slows his note here, this slider could also be slowed down to .75 (the slider may need to be stretched out a bit more)
01:15:438 (3,4) - I find this overlapping quite awkward. Point slider 4 downwards https://puu.sh/wOUnG/a2834629cc.jpg

FL37

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Topic Starter

FL37 2017-07-21T08:22:07+00:00

imaikiseta wrote:
Came from my queue.

Lost Memories
00:23:414 - A long slider starting from that point til 00:23:652 since you're following and mapping to the vocals (Do- -Oo).
00:45:914 - 00:46:152 - ^ In both cases there is one syllable on red tick and another on white tick so I think it's mapped corectly (Ma- -Aa).
00:18:295 (3) - Don't know if this slider was intentional or not, but it should end at 00:18:414 like 00:17:819 (1) It's intentional, like this one 00:14:485 (3) - for pattern variations and aesthetics.
01:13:057 (1) - This slider should start here on the red tick - 01:12:938 - like the others ( 01:11:985 (5) / 01:13:890 (5) ) Dude those sliders follow cymbal sound/and vocal since 01:12:938 was sung as one syllable (Wa-) and this one 01:13:057 as another (-Aa). They are separate sounds.
01:07:105 (1) - Just a suggestion but since Rib slows his note here, this slider could also be slowed down to .75 (the slider may need to be stretched out a bit more) ??? Can you explain? This slider was already slowed (0.73). I'm not sure but I think you want me to slow it even more and I do agree with it. I'll change it to 0.55 and 3/4.
01:15:438 (3,4) - I find this overlapping quite awkward. Point slider 4 downwards https://puu.sh/wOUnG/a2834629cc.jpg If look at pattern in this section (combo) it should be obvious why it's like this. I move it a bit but I will not change it.

Ty

Akareh

771 posts

Joined February 2010

Akareh 2017-07-21T08:33:41+00:00

Asserin wrote:
Akareh's Insane
00:06:866 (3,4) - There is a problem with spacing becouse you used DS 1.6x and you switched it for this where you used 00:14:724 (4,5) - here correctly (its the same part) yes
00:15:676 (7) - Switch it for circle like 00:08:057 (7) - becouse if you started make gap like that you have to keep it. Anyway it will be fix you spacing too yes
Well... Mostly you have problem with spacing but it will be stupid said about it all time so check it and fix it pls
I've fixed some spacings, mostly in regards to 1/4 rhythms, but you have to understand that I normally break DS for visuals and differences of x0,1 or x0,2 shouldn't really be an issue if you have a reason for them. I mean they're practically unnoticeable in gameplay.

Thanks!

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lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2017-07-21T12:56:58+00:00

Ohwow wrote:
from q

[lit120's Hard]
00:29:009 (4,1,2) - 1/1 and 1/2 beat in the same stack, peeps gonna misread that. we'll see about that
00:44:247 (4,1,2) - ^ aa
00:47:343 (1,2) - rotate like 11 degrees counter-clockwise so you can have better symmetry with these sliders: i don't think it's needed tbh https://i.gyazo.com/5bdde228ee4fe1d921a ... 114e30.jpg

gl

imaikiseta wrote:
Came from my queue.

lit120's Hard
00:46:390 (1) - This slider should start here - 00:46:271 rather not, since i prefer to start the slider on such emphasize cymbal note
01:08:533 (3) - I don't understand why this short slider is here if you're following vocals. Change this slider into a long one and remove 01:08:771 (4) (like 01:09:962 (1) ) i won't called that as a hard diff if i make that part too simple to play there on such vocal's timing there

Asserin wrote:
lit120's Hard
00:30:914 (5,1) - correct stack yeeee
01:21:390 (4,1) - ^ yeee

Bardzo fajna mapka :3

thanks!

not updated yet for a while

Venix

Global Moderator

1,927 posts

Joined February 2015

Venix 2017-07-22T11:12:08+00:00

Cześć, z kolejki modowania

[General]

Co powiesz o wyłączeniu na wszystkich diffach opcji "widescreen support", która znajduje się w zakładce "Design" w opcjach. Nie ma to znaczenia na dłuższą metę, ale moim zdaniem warto to zrobić, żeby inni modderzy się nie czepiali. (Aktualnie widescreen support jest włączony tylko na diffie lita).

[Easy]

00:04:009 (1,1) - Co myślisz o rozdzieleniu tych dwóch obiektów ze stacka? Stacki nie są zbyt komfortowe do gry dla nowych graczy, a szczególnie na tak wysokim BPM więc radziłbym odsunąć kółko od tego slidera, żeby grało się to przyjemnie.
00:55:438 (3,4,5,1) - Tutaj podobna sprawa. Wygląda to bardzo estetycznie ale z takim AR jest bardzo trudne do wyczytania przez początkujących graczy. Proponuję to jakoś odstackować, żeby było łatwiejsze do wyczytania. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8653993 Nie stracisz dużo na wyglądzie, ale za to będzie się grało lepiej.
01:01:628 (1,4) - Nie sądzisz, że ta zmiana shape nie wygląda bardzo estetycznie? Proponuję zastąpić 01:03:533 (4,5) - te slidery 01:01:628 (1) - takimi, żeby utrzymać fajną estetykę jak w innych momentach mapy.
01:25:438 (1) - Ten slider raczej powinien kończyć sie o jeden 1/2 tick wcześniej, żeby utrzymać logiczny rytm. W tym miejscu masz zdecydowanie mocniejszy dźwięk niż 01:26:152 - tutaj, gdzie dźwięk jest dość mało istotny, więc zakończenie tego slidera ten jeden tick wcześniej jest dobrym pomysłem.

[Normal]

00:08:771 (2,3,4) - Myślę, że flow mogło by tutaj działać lepiej gdybyś 00:09:247 (4) - ten slider obrócił w pionie, ponieważ jak narazie to antyflow nie należy do przyjemnych, bo 00:08:771 (2,3) - te dwa kółka stwarzają ruch, który jest później przerywany przez 00:09:247 (4) - tego slidera. Dla przydładu, 00:38:771 (1,2,3) - takie flow jest lepsze na podobnych patternach.
Używanie przerw o 1/2 beatu pomiędzy obiektami na normalu, który ma 256BPM nie należy do najlepszych pomysłów, szczególnie gdy easy nie używał nawet przerw o 1/1. Dla lepszego spreadu i grywalności powinieneś zwiększyć odstęp pomiędzy 00:24:485 (4,5) - tymi obiektami do 1/1. W tym przypadku poprzez skrócenie 00:24:843 (5) - tego slidera o 1/2 i przesunięcie go o jeden 1/2 tick w prawo na osi czasu. // 00:26:390 (4,5) - To samo tutaj. // 00:32:105 (4,5) - I tutaj, ogólnie - w podobnych do tego miejsca proponowałbym zwiększyć odległość na osi czasu pomiędzy obiektami. // 01:05:438 (1,2,3) - Szczególnie tutaj jest to dość trudne dla graczy, którzy grają normal diffy, chociaż 01:05:795 (2,3) - to jest dobre to proponowałbym zamiast 01:05:438 (1) - tego slidera dać kółko 01:05:438 - tutaj.
00:29:724 (2,3,4) - Uważam, że nie gra się tego zbyt komfortowo. Flow tutaj jest nastawione pod bardzo ostrym kątem i jest to mniej wygodne do zagrania niż reszta mapy. Co byś powiedział np. o czymś takim? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8654171 Gra się o wiele lepiej moim zdaniem.
01:21:152 (2,3,4) - A propos jednego z wyższych punktów. Moim zdaniem powinieneś usunąć z tego patterna to środkowe kółko, ponieważ moim zdaniem jest to zdecydowanie zbyt trudne jeśli chodzi o normala.

[To Akareh]

Since I'm modding FlameLancer's Easy and Normal oncy I've to tell you about fact you've unrankable issue on your difficulty. 00:04:486 - Here you've two stacked timing points with different volume. To make it rankable you should keep consistent volume on both of points.

Red - Unrankable issue.

Fajna mapka, powodzenia!

Akareh

771 posts

Joined February 2010

Akareh 2017-07-22T11:35:06+00:00

Venix wrote:
Cześć, z kolejki modowania

[To Akareh]
Since I'm modding FlameLancer's Easy and Normal oncy I've to tell you about fact you've unrankable issue on your difficulty. 00:04:486 - Here you've two stacked timing points with different volume. To make it rankable you should keep consistent volume on both of points.
Red - Unrankable issue.

Fajna mapka, powodzenia!

I'm not sure if that's unrankable, since we can not have two inherited or two uninherited at the same spot, but guidelines do say that it's fine to place an uninherited and an inherited at the same place. Anyway, I'll change it to avoid the potential issue. I placed it so 00:04:009 (1,2) - had a different volume than the rest since those two notes aren't as powerful, but oh welp.

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FL37

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FL37 2017-07-22T13:46:58+00:00

Venix wrote:
Cześć, z kolejki modowania

[General]
Co powiesz o wyłączeniu na wszystkich diffach opcji "widescreen support", która znajduje się w zakładce "Design" w opcjach. Nie ma to znaczenia na dłuższą metę, ale moim zdaniem warto to zrobić, żeby inni modderzy się nie czepiali. (Aktualnie widescreen support jest włączony tylko na diffie lita). Ok.
[Easy]
00:04:009 (1,1) - Co myślisz o rozdzieleniu tych dwóch obiektów ze stacka? Stacki nie są zbyt komfortowe do gry dla nowych graczy, a szczególnie na tak wysokim BPM więc radziłbym odsunąć kółko od tego slidera, żeby grało się to przyjemnie. Stack, muzycznie pasuje lepiej więc przy nim zostane.
00:55:438 (3,4,5,1) - Tutaj podobna sprawa. Wygląda to bardzo estetycznie ale z takim AR jest bardzo trudne do wyczytania przez początkujących graczy. Proponuję to jakoś odstackować, żeby było łatwiejsze do wyczytania. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8653993 Nie stracisz dużo na wyglądzie, ale za to będzie się grało lepiej. Zostane przy tym. Twoje rozwiązanie mogłoby prowadzić do kolejnych overlappów i ma gorszy flow. Po za tym 00:55:438 (3) - całkowicie znika zanim klikniemy jeszcze 00:56:390 (4)
01:01:628 (1,4) - Nie sądzisz, że ta zmiana shape nie wygląda bardzo estetycznie? Proponuję zastąpić 01:03:533 (4,5) - te slidery 01:01:628 (1) - takimi, żeby utrzymać fajną estetykę jak w innych momentach mapy. Ok.
01:25:438 (1) - Ten slider raczej powinien kończyć sie o jeden 1/2 tick wcześniej, żeby utrzymać logiczny rytm. W tym miejscu masz zdecydowanie mocniejszy dźwięk niż 01:26:152 - tutaj, gdzie dźwięk jest dość mało istotny, więc zakończenie tego slidera ten jeden tick wcześniej jest dobrym pomysłem.
Zrobiłem tak ponieważ każdy diff musi się kończyć w tym samym punkcię (A przynajmniej każdy tak mówi). A tak poza tym to 01:26:152 muzyka kończy się tym miejscy więc powinno być ok.
[Normal]
00:08:771 (2,3,4) - Myślę, że flow mogło by tutaj działać lepiej gdybyś 00:09:247 (4) - ten slider obrócił w pionie, ponieważ jak narazie to antyflow nie należy do przyjemnych, bo 00:08:771 (2,3) - te dwa kółka stwarzają ruch, który jest później przerywany przez 00:09:247 (4) - tego slidera. Dla przydładu, 00:38:771 (1,2,3) - takie flow jest lepsze na podobnych patternach. Ok.
Używanie przerw o 1/2 beatu pomiędzy obiektami na normalu, który ma 256BPM 252* nie należy do najlepszych pomysłów, szczególnie gdy easy nie używał nawet przerw o 1/1. Dla lepszego spreadu i grywalności powinieneś zwiększyć odstęp pomiędzy 00:24:485 (4,5) - tymi obiektami do 1/1. W tym przypadku poprzez skrócenie 00:24:843 (5) - tego slidera o 1/2 i przesunięcie go o jeden 1/2 tick w prawo na osi czasu. // 00:26:390 (4,5) - To samo tutaj. // 00:32:105 (4,5) - I tutaj, ogólnie - w podobnych do tego miejsca proponowałbym zwiększyć odległość na osi czasu pomiędzy obiektami. // 01:05:438 (1,2,3) - Szczególnie tutaj jest to dość trudne dla graczy, którzy grają normal diffy, chociaż 01:05:795 (2,3) - to jest dobre to proponowałbym zamiast 01:05:438 (1) - tego slidera dać kółko 01:05:438 - tutaj. Co do 01:05:438 (1,2,3) moge się zgodzić. Ale jeśli chodzi o reszte to myśle,
że sposób w jaki zostały przedstawione patterny 1/2 jest na tyle łatwy do zrozumienia (przeczytania) że nie powinny być one problemem.
00:29:724 (2,3,4) - Uważam, że nie gra się tego zbyt komfortowo. Flow tutaj jest nastawione pod bardzo ostrym kątem i jest to mniej wygodne do zagrania niż reszta mapy. Co byś powiedział np. o czymś takim? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8654171 Gra się o wiele lepiej moim zdaniem. Coś zmieniłem.
01:21:152 (2,3,4) - A propos jednego z wyższych punktów. Moim zdaniem powinieneś usunąć z tego patterna to środkowe kółko, ponieważ moim zdaniem jest to zdecydowanie zbyt trudne jeśli chodzi o normala. Ok.
Fajna mapka, powodzenia!

Dzięki!

Venix

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Venix 2017-07-22T13:48:41+00:00

Nie żeby coś, ale diff lita i tak się kończy w innym momencie. To nie jest problem i jest w pełni rankable

FL37

420 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

FL37 2017-07-22T14:06:26+00:00

Venix wrote:
Nie żeby coś, ale diff lita i tak się kończy w innym momencie. To nie jest problem i jest w pełni rankable

Aha, więc jeśli jest tak jak mówisz to zmienie ten ostatni slider, jeśli nie to pewnie BN o tym wspomni.

Venix

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Venix 2017-07-22T15:20:36+00:00

FlameLancer wrote:
Venix wrote:
Nie żeby coś, ale diff lita i tak się kończy w innym momencie. To nie jest problem i jest w pełni rankable
Aha, więc jeśli jest tak jak mówisz to zmienie ten ostatni slider, jeśli nie to pewnie BN o tym wspomni.

To już zależy od BNa. Chodziło mi o to, że diffy nie muszą się kończyć w tym samym momencie.

lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2017-07-23T13:02:56+00:00

have this wip hitsound for a while

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 65438
Countdown: 0
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BeatDivisor: 2
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ArtistUnicode:りぶ
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Tags:gumi vocaloid short ver cut Akareh lit120 Kenshi Yonezu 米津玄師 Hachi ハチ
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FL37

420 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

FL37 2017-07-23T17:28:22+00:00

Updated lit's diff (I turned off widescreen support on your diff)

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2017-08-05T11:10:14+00:00

Easy

00:54:962 (2,3) - seems to fit rhythm better if it's slider then circle here
01:14:962 (1) - finish at slider head

Normal

00:06:390 (1) - remove finish at slider head? no cymbal sound in music
00:12:105 (1) - add finish at slider head, cymbal present in music. same at 00:15:914 (1) -
01:10:200 (3,4,5) - sugestion. current pattern puts emphasis on 01:10:676 (5) - but should really be on 01:10:438 (4) -
01:23:295 (3) - somewhere like x:182 y:4 would flow better (i know it touches the hp bar, but that's more of a guideline which i think can be overlooked here if it improves flow)

lit120's Hard

hitsounding???
00:27:343 (1) - perhaps an angle slider here would be best. this is the start of a new measure so it's different to the rhythm at 00:26:033 (4,1,2) - . A different slider shape would indicate this and would be more fitting imo
seemsgood

Akareh's Insane

00:04:128 (2) - finish on slider tail not very fitting imo
00:21:509 - add circle here or change 00:21:390 (8) - to a 1/2 slider? you don't ususally leave any 1/1 gaps during the verse
00:22:343 (4) - I don't really agree with the usage of these 1/4 repeat sliders cos there isn't really a sound on that 1/4 blue tick. If you disagree, try adding more of these at section 00:34:962 (1) - cos you only used it once here.
00:19:485 (7,8,1) - not very strong but spaced so far apart ;_;

Lost Memories

00:14:485 (3) - doesn't really make much sense to extend this slider imo, clear beat on the red tick. make it into a 1/2 slider? not to mention that the spacing here is similar to the 1/2 one just before it so it could lead to some confusion. same at 00:18:295 (3,4) -
i'm verrry bad with playing high bpm maps so I can't really mod this.. sorry

glgl

FL37

420 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

FL37 2017-08-05T11:40:53+00:00

a q p w wrote:
Easy
00:54:962 (2,3) - seems to fit rhythm better if it's slider then circle here
01:14:962 (1) - finish at slider head
Normal
00:06:390 (1) - remove finish at slider head? no cymbal sound in music
00:12:105 (1) - add finish at slider head, cymbal present in music. same at 00:15:914 (1) -
01:10:200 (3,4,5) - sugestion. current pattern puts emphasis on 01:10:676 (5) - but should really be on 01:10:438 (4) -
01:23:295 (3) - somewhere like x:182 y:4 would flow better (i know it touches the hp bar, but that's more of a guideline which i think can be overlooked here if it improves flow)
Lost Memories
00:14:485 (3) - doesn't really make much sense to extend this slider imo, clear beat on the red tick. make it into a 1/2 slider? not to mention that the spacing here is similar to the 1/2 one just before it so it could lead to some confusion. same at 00:18:295 (3,4) -
i'm verrry bad with playing high bpm maps so I can't really mod this.. sorry
Yes to everything I guess?

glgl

Thanks!

Akareh

771 posts

Joined February 2010

Akareh 2017-08-05T18:27:29+00:00

a q p w wrote:
Akareh's Insane
00:04:128 (2) - finish on slider tail not very fitting imo ye
00:21:509 - add circle here or change 00:21:390 (8) - to a 1/2 slider? you don't ususally leave any 1/1 gaps during the verse nope, it deserves the stop imho
00:22:343 (4) - I don't really agree with the usage of these 1/4 repeat sliders cos there isn't really a sound on that 1/4 blue tick. If you disagree, try adding more of these at section 00:34:962 (1) - cos you only used it once here. I already answered this in a previous mod so I'll copy paste: drums. These are technically two drum kicks and not three, but hachi uses weird drum rhythms so they fit anyway with all the background noise, these sound completely different from the rest of double drum kicks, so I went with repeating sliders. Drum patterns change at 00:34:962, lots more of emphasis on double drum kicks so instead of repeating sliders I went for spaced circles where intensity allowed me to,
but 00:47:105 (4) - didn't really play well with that since the vocals here hold instead of following the drums like in the rest of the section I went back to the repeating slider for this. It played better for me IMO.
00:19:485 (7,8,1) - not very strong but spaced so far apart ;_; feels strong enough for me and it also simbolizes the end of the section?
glgl

thx ~

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lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2017-08-13T08:34:04+00:00

both of your points seems ok for me as the rhythm may be different, that will be fine imo. any points like that means a change for me then! although i had to agree on it

thanks!

guess im done with the hitsounds

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:ドーナツホール
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Tags:gumi vocaloid short ver cut Akareh lit120 Kenshi Yonezu 米津玄師 Hachi ハチ
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57,166,52343,2,0,L|54:299,2,109.5,8|2|8,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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315,283,55676,1,8,1:0:0:0:
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313,166,58771,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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275,232,62581,6,0,P|220:238|166:230,2,109.5,2|8|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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407,62,64366,1,0,1:0:0:0:
353,117,64485,6,0,P|292:125|241:117,1,109.5,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
182,68,64843,1,2,0:0:0:0:
182,68,64962,2,0,P|169:92|165:118,1,54.75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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372,319,76866,6,0,P|345:315|318:316,1,54.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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207,117,77581,2,0,P|233:121|261:119,1,54.75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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127,233,80557,6,0,P|111:180|115:126,1,109.5
144,54,80914,2,0,P|91:69|37:65,1,109.5,8|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,132,81271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
2,209,81390,1,8,1:0:0:0:
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216,346,82819,1,8,1:0:0:0:
112,235,83057,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,235,83176,2,0,L|112:168,1,54.75,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
82,109,83414,6,0,P|145:127|190:112,1,109.5
250,75,83771,2,0,P|277:70|305:72,1,54.75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,33,84009,2,0,P|353:96|368:141,1,109.5,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
411,197,84366,6,0,P|348:179|303:194,1,109.5
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98,168,85081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
67,240,85200,1,8,1:0:0:0:
67,240,85319,6,0,P|28:202|21:149,1,109.5
75,92,85676,1,8,1:0:0:0:
98,168,85795,1,2,0:0:0:0:
37,313,86033,1,0,1:0:0:0:

i might adding my own custom hitsounds there later, but idk

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-08-18T00:44:05+00:00

im back lol

Easy

00:04:009 (1) - clap?
00:14:009 (3) - I see it better straight for a better transition with 00:14:962 (4) - like you make before
00:41:628 (4,1) - the flow is broken maybe it's better for a easy to follow the flow without break so maybe i suggest to raise 00:41:628 (4) - at x:486 y:198. Then move 00:42:581 (1) - to x:310 y:263.
01:05:438 (1,1) - the spacing between these note isn't x0.90 it's x0.26 fix it, please
Why in the kiai part there are any hitsounds? it's so empty lul
oh and also on the kiai part there are too much 1/1 sliders its really oversimplify the song imo. maybe map on the vocals a little for example here 01:09:247 (3,4) - you can try something like this https://puu.sh/xcPub/b0d8421bd2.png
01:10:200 (4,1) - They are too close imo there is almost a contact and it's doesn't look nice imo

Normal

00:28:771 - you need to map this vocal because this long slider sound off tbh
00:30:676 - same thing here ^
00:44:009 - ^
00:45:914 - ^
00:44:962 (2,3,4) - this flow doesn't work because the slider are not similar the 4 is more long and more curved that the 2 but if you fix the thing before ^ i think there is no problem
00:48:295 (1,2,3,4) - should be like this https://puu.sh/xcQ78/7714f3a2a1.png as you did before lol
01:12:581 (5,6) - make like you did here 01:11:628 (3,4) - this is similar vocals https://puu.sh/xcQij/3848011ffc.png
01:24:962 (2) - why a slider renverse you don't put slider renverse from here 01:18:771 - and it's sound a bit off tbh

gl!~

FL37

420 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

FL37 2017-08-18T10:32:10+00:00

ShogunMoon wrote:
im back lol Hi again

Easy
00:04:009 (1) - clap? Sure
00:14:009 (3) - I see it better straight for a better transition with 00:14:962 (4) - like you make before Sure
00:41:628 (4,1) - the flow is broken maybe it's better for a easy to follow the flow without break so maybe i suggest to raise 00:41:628 (4) - at x:486 y:198. Then move 00:42:581 (1) - to x:310 y:263. I made some changes
01:05:438 (1,1) - the spacing between these note isn't x0.90 it's x0.26 fix it, please They are 8 bits apart. They dont rly need to be x0.90
Why in the kiai part there are any hitsounds? it's so empty lul Claps are every two white ticks lul so there mostly whistles and finishes on easy diff
oh and also on the kiai part there are too much 1/1 sliders its really oversimplify the song imo. maybe map on the vocals a little for example here 01:09:247 (3,4) - you can try something like this https://puu.sh/xcPub/b0d8421bd2.png It should be better now
01:10:200 (4,1) - They are too close imo there is almost a contact and it's doesn't look nice imo ^
Normal
00:28:771 - you need to map this vocal because this long slider sound off tbh I will stay with those long sliders.
00:30:676 - same thing here ^
00:44:009 - ^
00:45:914 - ^
00:44:962 (2,3,4) - this flow doesn't work because the slider are not similar the 4 is more long and more curved that the 2 but if you fix the thing before ^ i think there is no problem Flow is good here imo
00:48:295 (1,2,3,4) - should be like this https://puu.sh/xcQ78/7714f3a2a1.png as you did before lol to me its better like this. And I made it like this before 00:33:057 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:12:581 (5,6) - make like you did here 01:11:628 (3,4) - this is similar vocals https://puu.sh/xcQij/3848011ffc.png Ok but will do it in the other way.
01:24:962 (2) - why a slider renverse you don't put slider renverse from here 01:18:771 - and it's sound a bit off tbh I will leave it like that. Also I remapped kiai part a bit so It should be funnier to play now
gl!~

Thanks! again xD

Nikakis

769 posts

Joined May 2014

Nikakis 2017-08-28T17:50:00+00:00

The audio bitrate is kinda low under standard common requirements and im not sure if it's allowed to have a 128 kbps bitrate.192 kbps is always the best option.I would recommend to contact some ppl who associate with mp3s and stuff and give you a better mp3.

FL37

420 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

FL37 2017-08-28T18:23:43+00:00

Nikakis wrote:
The audio bitrate is kinda low under standard common requirements and im not sure if it's allowed to have a 128 kbps bitrate.192 kbps is always the best option.I would recommend to contact some ppl who associate with mp3s and stuff and give you a better mp3.

https://osu.ppy.sh/help/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
The song's audio file must be of reasonable quality. Try and source .mp3 files yourself; ripping them from a streaming video site often results in low quality audio with high file sizes. The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps. If you are having trouble acquiring an appropriate audio file, contact one of the more audio-savvy BN; they will be more than happy to help find an .mp3 for you.

I understand your concern so I will keep that in mind (Bcs better audio quality is a good thing to have) but by the ranking criteria rules, 192kbps is not required.

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