Rib - DONUT HOLE [Osu|OsuMania|Taiko]

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CyberX
Please map the break, kinda end the fun
00:04:128 (2) - shorten by 1 tick
00:34:486 (8) - Ctrl+g and move it like this https://puu.sh/wwr6c/6a62052eeb.jpg
00:46:152 (9) - make it curve
00:50:676 (3,4,5,6) - spacing quiet evil, nerft a bit
00:57:819 (1,2,3) - they should have an equal spacing, noticeable at game play
01:06:628 (1,2) - scale by selection center by 1.15, so there is actual difference between the first (1,2)
01:07:105 (1) - remove nc
01:26:033 (8) - use different direction to emphasize the guitar sound http://puu.sh/wwrys/2a2d60450f.jpg
Topic Starter
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CyberX wrote:

Please map the break, kinda end the fun I will think about it
00:04:128 (2) - shorten by 1 tick Sure
00:34:486 (8) - Ctrl+g and move it like this https://puu.sh/wwr6c/6a62052eeb.jpg Both sliders imitate same sound and between them, there is a rly short pause in music so I wanted for them to be in almost same place with the same direction.
00:46:152 (9) - make it curve Done (not sure if its in the way u wanted)
00:50:676 (3,4,5,6) - spacing quiet evil, nerft a bit Hmm, not sure about it. I am singletapping it so I wasnt cosidering it as a spaced stream. Also this song section is pretty intense so I wanted to match it. I like how it goes now but I will think about it.
00:57:819 (1,2,3) - they should have an equal spacing, noticeable at game play I was trying to change it I think the way it was it felt the best.
I will still be looking at it later but for now I leave it like it is

01:06:628 (1,2) - scale by selection center by 1.15, so there is actual difference between the first (1,2) I nerfed 01:06:272 (1,2) - by 0.975 and buffed 01:06:628 (1,2) - by 1.075
01:07:105 (1) - remove nc It has new sv, it doesnt belong to previous pattern and symbolize big change in song pace. So nope.
01:26:033 (8) - use different direction to emphasize the guitar sound http://puu.sh/wwrys/2a2d60450f.jpg Its alomost the same as for 00:34:486 (8) but sound are diffrient thats why 2nd has higher sv and curved shape
Thanks! :)
Topic Starter
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CyberX wrote:

Please map the break, kinda end the fun
As you asked
Kuro Fuyusaki
Heya~ From my modQ

[General]
  1. Find nothing so far, and the break have been mentioned already, lol.


[Easy]
  1. 00:14:009 (3) - Avoid overlap, the approach circle is hindered by the slider path of 00:12:105 (1) - .This may confuse newer player
  2. 00:25:438 (3) - I don't think this stack is acceptable because the interval time is too close (and the approach circle is appeared before the previous slider is yet to be finished).
  3. 00:34:962 (1) - Don't bend too much. At least, make the slider wall more visible
    Before *Excuse my bad handwriting*
    My suggestion
  4. 00:38:771 (1) - ^ same case
  5. 01:16:866 (3) - Move it a bit higher so it won't overlap with 01:15:914 (2) - . Not really a problem but, just in case
  6. 01:20:676 (4) - Same case as stated at point No. 2 of my mod. If you really want to stack at least make an interval distance time 6 beat after (safely at 8 beat)
  7. 01:24:485 (4) - ^


[Normal]
  1. 00:05:438 (3) - Rather stack the slider tail rather than the head tail as you do like 00:07:343 (3) - ....of course there's also reading problem
  2. 00:07:819 (4) - Avoid overlapping the slider wall of 00:08:295 (1) - . I think you already know the reason. I suggest move 00:08:295 (1) - to the left....like this
  3. 00:13:057 (4,5) - ^ same case
  4. 00:14:962 (4,5) - ^
  5. 00:19:724 (1) - ^
  6. 00:26:390 (4,5) - You would want to make the same pattern as 00:24:485 (4,5) - for emphasizing the vocal?
  7. 00:32:105 (4,5) - Set the flows as straightforwardly as possible, I suggest move the latter slider to the upper-right, something like this
  8. 00:47:343 (4,5) - ^ same case. It may looks the flow is linear. But in lower diff, not at all. Player at this level fully follows the slider path. I suggest something like this
  9. 01:07:343 (1,2) - same case as what I stated in point mod No. 2
  10. 01:11:628 (3,4) - .....You already know what i will try to say, right? If not. see point 2 or 7
  11. 01:13:890 (3) - Move it to the upper right, something like x:196 y:23 (you could move it with the DS on). Adjust the latter hit circle
  12. 01:21:152 (2,3,4) - This is hard to follow cause the flow is drop-off after the hit circle. something like this might be better


[Akareh's Insane]
  1. I feel the first-half of kiai sect seems sparse than the chorus...tho im not really complaining. Suggesting make it more dense
  2. To be honest, I don't know what I should mod at this point, it looks good already. Perhaps i will only mention HS error so far so the rest most likely only suggestion, feel free to ignore
  3. 00:04:366 - delete finish as it doesn't fit the song at all, should probably went with low volume instead. Finish at this point 00:04:486 - is enough.
  4. 00:07:700 (6) - reduce slider length to white tick and add reverse slider by 1 so it went like this
  5. 00:12:343 - add clap
  6. 00:19:605 (8) - move it to x:61 y:308 so it could blanket with 00:19:128 (6) - and put some distance from 00:19:724 (1) - to make a smoother flow. Tho i know your reason is to emphasize the distance between this 00:19:605 (8,1,2) - . Oh and while you're at it, you could stack 00:19:485 (7) - to 00:20:200 (3) - head slider.
  7. 00:43:414 - add clap
  8. 00:50:200 - till 01:05:319 - I don't if I should mention this, but you seems rarely put double clap at this section...dunno if you do it on purpose
  9. 01:10:438 (5,6,7) - I'm taking note from the previous mod. You don't have to move 01:10:438 (5) - and 01:10:914 (7) - . Only rotate 01:10:676 (6) - 25 degrees anti-clockwise and adjust it. The magic happen. If you still considering this.
  10. 01:23:176 - Add whistle
  11. 01:23:890 - Delete whistle
  12. 01:24:009 - You could add whistle...or not
  13. 01:24:247 - Add clap
  14. 01:25:081 - Add whistle


[Lost Memories]
I will mod it later if i have a chance.

You could point it out if i have any error in my mod....I'm doing it when i feel so tired ;w;
Hope it helps~
Akareh

Kuro Fuyusaki wrote:

Heya~ From my modQ

[Akareh's Insane]
  1. I feel the first-half of kiai sect seems sparse than the chorus...tho im not really complaining. Suggesting make it more dense Well, the drums go wild from 01:18:771 (1) - to the end, that's why the second half of the chorus is more dense. It also seemed cool to me since we're approaching the end we can have some more dense rhythms and create a nice progression of difficulty in the map :D
  2. To be honest, I don't know what I should mod at this point, it looks good already. Perhaps i will only mention HS error so far so the rest most likely only suggestion, feel free to ignore
  3. 00:04:366 - delete finish as it doesn't fit the song at all, should probably went with low volume instead. Finish at this point 00:04:486 - is enough. reduced volume a bit and changed this to a whistle
  4. 00:07:700 (6) - reduce slider length to white tick and add reverse slider by 1 so it went like this I know I'm skipping a beat at 00:21:152 but I really think this plays better with this kind of slider
  5. 00:12:343 - add clap yes
  6. 00:19:605 (8) - move it to x:61 y:308 so it could blanket with 00:19:128 (6) - and put some distance from 00:19:724 (1) - to make a smoother flow. Tho i know your reason is to emphasize the distance between this 00:19:605 (8,1,2) - . Oh and while you're at it, you could stack 00:19:485 (7) - to 00:20:200 (3) - head slider. yes to moving 00:19:605 (8) no to stacking 00:19:485 (7) because I think the jump between 00:19:485 (7,8,1) - wouldn't work as well if we have to make a sharp turn between 00:19:128 (6,7) -
  7. 00:43:414 - add clap yes
  8. 00:50:200 - till 01:05:319 - I don't if I should mention this, but you seems rarely put double clap at this section...dunno if you do it on purpose yes, it's on purpose. Drums gain more presence here than in the previous part, so I placed more finishes and less claps
  9. 01:10:438 (5,6,7) - I'm taking note from the previous mod. You don't have to move 01:10:438 (5) - and 01:10:914 (7) - . Only rotate 01:10:676 (6) - 25 degrees anti-clockwise and adjust it. The magic happen. If you still considering this. sure,
    I'll do that
  10. 01:23:176 - Add whistle yes
  11. 01:23:890 - Delete whistle yes
  12. 01:24:009 - You could add whistle...or not yes
  13. 01:24:247 - Add clap yes
  14. 01:25:081 - Add whistleyes
Thank you ~ :D
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Topic Starter
_FlameL

Kuro Fuyusaki wrote:

Heya~ From my modQ

[General]
  1. Find nothing so far, and the break have been mentioned already, lol.


[Easy]
  1. 00:14:009 (3) - Avoid overlap, the approach circle is hindered by the slider path of 00:12:105 (1) - .This may confuse newer player Fixed
  2. 00:25:438 (3) - I don't think this stack is acceptable because the interval time is too close (and the approach circle is appeared before the previous slider is yet to be finished). Hmm. I'm not rly sure about it. In ranking criteria they say that it needs to stack (not fully overlap) at 1/1 distance. It's 4/1 in this case. Also, first slider disappears before you even hit circle between them. Still I will keep that in mind.
  3. 00:34:962 (1) - Don't bend too much. At least, make the slider wall more visible Fixed a bit
  4. 00:38:771 (1) - ^ same case same
  5. 01:16:866 (3) - Move it a bit higher so it won't overlap with 01:15:914 (2) -. Not really a problem but, just in case Fixed
  6. 01:20:676 (4) - Same case as stated at point No. 2 of my mod. If you really want to stack at least make an interval distance time 6 beat after (safely at 8 beat) Same as earlier
  7. 01:24:485 (4) - ^ ^


[Normal]
  1. 00:05:438 (3) - Rather stack the slider tail rather than the head tail as you do like 00:07:343 (3) - ....of course there's also reading problem Personaly I dont feel difference but new players might, Sooo Changed
  2. 00:07:819 (4) - Avoid overlapping the slider wall of 00:08:295 (1) - . I think you already know the reason. I suggest move 00:08:295 (1) - to the left...Thats sad... But I think you are right about it. Changed
  3. 00:13:057 (4,5) - ^ same case Fixed for all
  4. 00:14:962 (4,5) - ^
  5. 00:19:724 (1) - ^
  6. 00:26:390 (4,5) - You would want to make the same pattern as 00:24:485 (4,5) - for emphasizing the vocal? Sure
  7. 00:32:105 (4,5) - Set the flows as straightforwardly as possible, I suggest move the latter slider to the upper-right Done
  8. 00:47:343 (4,5) - ^ same case. It may looks the flow is linear. But in lower diff, not at all. Player at this level fully follows the slider path. Changed
  9. 01:07:343 (1,2) - same case as what I stated in point mod No. 2 Fixed
  10. 01:11:628 (3,4) - .....You already know what i will try to say, right? If not. see point 2 or 7 ok
  11. 01:13:890 (3) - Move it to the upper right, something like x:196 y:23 (you could move it with the DS on). Adjust the latter hit circle :cry:ok
  12. 01:21:152 (2,3,4) - This is hard to follow cause the flow is drop-off after the hit circle. Changed a bit


[Lost Memories]
I will mod it later if i have a chance.

You could point it out if i have any error in my mod....I'm doing it when i feel so tired ;w;
Hope it helps~
Thanks!
Saika0k1
hi M4M from my queue!

Lost Memories

00:07:343 (5,7) - blanket this ? 00:06:866 (3,5) - wont look bad after blanket either
00:14:485 (3) - why is this longer than 00:14:009 (1) - ?
00:15:914 (9,1) - swap NC
00:18:295 (3) - same question
00:22:581 (6,7) - this overlap looks bad but idk
00:31:867 (4,5) - should have same spacing as 00:33:772 (4,5) - since it represent the same sound
00:35:438 (3,4) - shouldnt this have the same pattern as ^ as it reprensent same sound ?
00:37:581 (4,5) - same as point 6
00:39:485 (4,5) - ^
00:41:390 (4,5) - ^
00:43:057 (3,4) - again
00:44:962 (4,5) - yea..
00:49:009 (5,6) - same as point 6
00:49:724 (9) - NC SV change
01:13:057 (1) - emphasize this because of a strong sound that exist there
01:13:890 (4) - ^
01:14:247 (5,6,7) - equal spacing
01:24:009 (2,3) - should have same spacing as 01:23:890 (1,3) -
01:24:962 (3,5,6) - looks wierd, maybe form then in a triangle
01:26:033 (8) - NC (the end is soooo unsatisfying xd)

tbh i think it should stay with 126 becuase it also works just fine but thats up to you to decide

best of luck!
Shunao
hi! short mod o/

  • easy
  1. 00:49:247 (4) - should be 2 circle like you did at 00:37:819 (4,5)
  2. 01:03:533 (1) - remove nc for consistence with 00:55:914 (4) - and add nc here 01:04:485 (3)
  3. 01:05:438 (4) - this moment should be mapped because there are strong guitar so i suggest to try something like this http://i.imgur.com/GjdLrMM.jpg?1
  • normal
  1. 00:04:962 (2) - and 00:06:866 (2) - it's not 2 circles like you did at 00:08:771 (2,3) - it's inconsistent
  2. 00:30:438 (4,2) - this overlap doesn't look beautiful
    00:24:485 (4,5) - nice overlap but why you don't make this here too? 00:20:676 (3,4) - and 00:22:581 (3,4) - it's the same density on the vocals it's inconsistent tbh
  3. 00:37:819 (3,4) - should be overlap like this 00:24:485 (4,5) - here 00:37:819 (3,4) - and 00:41:628 (4,5) - for consistency
  4. 00:54:485 (2) - on the tail is should be a sldier renverse for emphasis the drums
  5. 01:02:343 (3) - should be a slider renverse for consistence
  • akareh's insane
  1. cs is more high that the last diff may decreased it
  2. remove widescreen
    can't find important problem, good diff!


good luck for your mapset!
Akareh

ShogunMoon wrote:

hi! short mod o/

  • akareh's insane
  1. cs is more high that the last diff may decreased it
  2. remove widescreen
    can't find important problem, good diff!


good luck for your mapset!
CS shouldn't be an issue, and I think it fits as it is.
Can you remove widescreen support Flame? I don't think I need to pass you the code just to remove that :D

Also, regarding Saika-'s mod, I'm fairly sure this is supposed to be 252 bpm, I'd keep it as that.
Topic Starter
_FlameL

ShogunMoon wrote:

hi! short mod o/

  • easy
  1. 00:49:247 (4) - should be 2 circle like you did at 00:37:819 (4,5) ? But those are different from each other ? 00:49:247 (4) - is more like 00:34:009 (4)
  2. 01:03:533 (1) - remove nc for consistence with 00:55:914 (4) - and add nc here 01:04:485 (3) Ok but I added it at 01:05:438 (1)
  3. 01:05:438 (4) - this moment should be mapped because there are strong guitar so i suggest to try something like this http://i.imgur.com/GjdLrMM.jpg?1
    I know that there are some strong sound here but bcs its Easy I want for it to be a little break before the most 'intense' (at least for a song) part of a map.
  • normal
  1. 00:04:962 (2) - and 00:06:866 (2) - it's not 2 circles like you did at 00:08:771 (2,3) - it's inconsistent 00:08:295 (1,2,3) - 00:10:200 (1,2,3) - it's consistent, also pattern and rhythm variety
  2. 00:30:438 (4,2) - this overlap doesn't look beautiful Fixed
    00:24:485 (4,5) - nice overlap but why you don't make this here too? 00:20:676 (3,4) - and 00:22:581 (3,4) - it's the same density on the vocals it's inconsistent tbh Same as for 00:08:295 (1,2,3) - 00:10:200 (1,2,3) - but here it is 00:20:676 (3,4) - 00:22:581 (3,4) - and 00:24:485 (4,5) - 00:26:390 (4,5) - .
  3. 00:37:819 (3,4) - should be overlap like this 00:24:485 (4,5) - here 00:37:819 (3,4) - and 00:41:628 (4,5) - for consistency I will only change 00:41:628 (4,5)
  4. 00:54:485 (2) - on the tail is should be a sldier renverse for emphasis the drums pattern and rhythm variety, It would be boring doing the same thing over and over
  5. 01:02:343 (3) - should be a slider renverse for consistence ^


good luck for your mapset!
Thanks!

Saika- wrote:

hi M4M from my queue!

Lost Memories

00:07:343 (5,7) - blanket this ? 00:06:866 (3,5) - wont look bad after blanket either Nah it looks good, and I think it would destroy flow in this pattern
00:14:485 (3) - why is this longer than 00:14:009 (1) - ? For pattern variety. This whole section is similar (- 00:04:486 - 00:19:485 -) so I needed to change something for it be enjoyable.
00:15:914 (9,1) - swap NC Done
00:18:295 (3) - same question
00:22:581 (6,7) - this overlap looks bad but idk I fixed it a bit but I will not change it as it appears several times
00:31:867 (4,5) - should have same spacing as 00:33:772 (4,5) - since it represent the same sound As long as its jumps its ok. They dont need to be exaclty the same.
00:35:438 (3,4) - shouldnt this have the same pattern as ^ as it reprensent same sound ? Its more like 00:20:200 (3,4,5) - And its different bcs pattern and rhythm variety
00:37:581 (4,5) - same as point 6
00:39:485 (4,5) - ^
00:41:390 (4,5) - ^
00:43:057 (3,4) - again 00:27:343 (1,2,3,4) - It repeats
00:44:962 (4,5) - yea.. 00:29:724 (4,5) - ^ It doesnt needs to be exaclty the same
00:49:009 (5,6) - same as point 6
00:49:724 (9) - NC SV change Sure
01:13:057 (1) - emphasize this because of a strong sound that exist there ? To me its emphasized pretty well. Will change a shape of it a bit
01:13:890 (4) - ^^
01:14:247 (5,6,7) - equal spacing O^O no
01:24:009 (2,3) - should have same spacing as 01:23:890 (1,3) - Why? Look at it like that 01:23:890 (1,2,3,4) - (4 as circle)
01:24:962 (3,5,6) - looks wierd, maybe form then in a triangle Changed something but its still the same
01:26:033 (8) - NC (the end is soooo unsatisfying xd) Sure (And I think It should (I want for it to) be unsatisfying and confusing)

tbh i think it should stay with 126 becuase it also works just fine but thats up to you to decide

best of luck!
Thanks!

Akareh wrote:

Can you remove widescreen support Flame? I don't think I need to pass you the code just to remove that :DSure :D

Also, regarding Saika-'s mod, I'm fairly sure this is supposed to be 252 bpm, I'd keep it as that. I think so too
CucumberCuc
Hi

[Easy]
00:04:009 maybe put circle?
00:37:819 (4,5) maybe remove circles and put slider like you do on prev and next times
00:55:438 (3,4) IMO 4 circles is too long for beginners, it can remove the circles and insert the slider? for example can do this:
00:58:771 (2) move slightly right for distance
01:03:533 (4) like for 00:55:438 (3,4), for example can do this:
01:22:581 (1) move to x:71 y:303 for distance

[Normal]
00:08:771 (2,3) - 00:10:676 (2,3) - 00:12:581 (2,3) - 00:14:485 (2,3) - 00:16:390 (2,3) - 00:18:295 (2,3) I think you can make a "mix" if one time will be circles, and the next time slider, and so over time (circles,slider,circles,slider,circles,slider)
00:33:295 (2,3) far, do are close
00:54:485 (2,3) it seems to me that this is done is not as good as you think and you can sometimes replace the timing slider and circle

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
_FlameL

CucumberCuc wrote:

Hi

[Easy]
00:04:009 maybe put circle? Sure
00:37:819 (4,5) maybe remove circles and put slider like you do on prev and next times Sure
00:55:438 (3,4) IMO 4 circles is too long for beginners, it can remove the circles and insert the slider? for example can do this: I wasn't sure about it when I was mapping it. Changed
00:58:771 (2) move slightly right for distance ???
01:03:533 (4) like for 00:55:438 (3,4), for example can do this: Sure
01:22:581 (1) move to x:71 y:303 for distance Done

[Normal]
00:08:771 (2,3) - 00:10:676 (2,3) - 00:12:581 (2,3) - 00:14:485 (2,3) - 00:16:390 (2,3) - 00:18:295 (2,3) I think you can make a "mix" if one time will be circles, and the next time slider, and so over time (circles,slider,circles,slider,circles,slider) I think I will stay with this. In the first section (look at bookmarks), there are reverse sliders that combine with sliders. Those circles ( - 00:08:771 (2,3) - 00:10:676 (2,3) - ) are for better transition to another section without reverse sliders. And I think there would be too many sliders In 2nd section if I would do that.
00:33:295 (2,3) far, do are close Fixed
00:54:485 (2,3) it seems to me that this is done is not as good as you think and you can sometimes replace the timing slider and circle I not exactly sure what you want me to do? I changed something tho

Good luck :)
Thanks! :D
lit120
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Ohwow
from q

Should be 126 bpm

[Lost Memories]
00:43:771 (6,7) - Not liking the super slight overlap
01:11:629 (3,4) - Should ctrl+g to follow vocal like how you did at 01:12:581 (7,8) -
01:11:867 (4,5) - really big spacing
01:13:772 (3,4) - ^
01:19:724 (6) - imo these 1/1 sliders should be placed on the red ticks before to emphasize the voice. sure youi'll be missing the drum beat on the white tick, but the voice is the highlight of the song and should be focused on the most. Most of the sliders you used are mapped to the voice, so it's weird to have some sliders not mapped to the voice.
01:20:200 (2) - Keep follow vocals here, should be a slider.
01:23:057 (3) - Why is this the only slider like this in the kiai? There literally no reason to do so. just put a circle there.
Other than the two huge spacing i mentioned, I feel like the kiai should have bigger spacing overall cause it's more intense than the non kiai. Right now, the spacing looks too similar to the spacing of the non-kiai.

[Akareh's Insane]
00:11:747 (8,9) - Kinda weird to have this big spacing here and not so big spacing in the kiais like 01:11:747 (3,4) - 01:12:819 (7,1) - or 01:13:652 (4,5) -
00:22:343 (4) - 00:23:295 (7) - 00:27:105 (9) - 00:32:819 (7) - 00:47:105 (4) - what are these special 1/4 repeating slider mapped to? the last one is literally the only one in that section
I feel like the kiai should have bigger spacing overall cause it's more intense than the non kiai. Right now, the spacing looks too similar to the spacing of the non-kiai.

[lit120's Hard]
00:29:009 (4,1,2) - 1/1 and 1/2 beat in the same stack, peeps gonna misread that.
00:44:247 (4,1,2) - ^
00:47:343 (1,2) - rotate like 11 degrees counter-clockwise so you can have better symmetry with these sliders: https://i.gyazo.com/5bdde228ee4fe1d921a ... 114e30.jpg

gl
Topic Starter
_FlameL

Ohwow wrote:

from q

Should be 126 bpm When I mapped it I thought the same (No sounds at blue tick for 252). But after someone mentioned that this should be 252 I noticed that sounds change every big white tick on 252. Its like 1 2 3 4 change 1 2 3 4 change. In this section 00:04:486 - 00:19:724 Its vocals , this 00:19:724 - 00:50:200 its bass guitar, there is strong sound ever big white tick here 00:50:200 - 01:05:438 ,and here 01:07:343 - 01:26:152
xylophone/piano (not sure) repeats every big white tick.


[Lost Memories]
00:43:771 (6,7) - Not liking the super slight overlap Fixed
01:11:629 (3,4) - Should ctrl+g to follow vocal like how you did at 01:12:581 (7,8) - Nah I want to focus here on most important sounds (cymbal and clap) 01:12:581 (7,8)
01:11:867 (4,5) - really big spacing I know but I think it perfectly expresses the intensity of this part
01:13:772 (3,4) - ^ ^
01:19:724 (6) - imo these 1/1 sliders should be placed on the red ticks before to emphasize the voice. sure youi'll be missing the drum beat on the white tick, but the voice is the highlight of the song and should be focused on the most. Most of the sliders you used are mapped to the voice, so it's weird to have some sliders not mapped to the voice. 01:19:605 (5) - There a vocal that sounds like "su" 01:19:605 (5) - and extension to it "-uu" 01:19:724 (6) -. They are sung as two syllables. Its like 01:21:509 (4,5) - but the difference is smaller because "su" and "-uu" sound similar to each other.
01:20:200 (2) - Keep follow vocals here, should be a slider. Not sure about this. I think I'll stay with this.
01:23:057 (3) - Why is this the only slider like this in the kiai? There literally no reason to do so. just put a circle there. I want keep that slider so I added another 2 of them
Other than the two huge spacing i mentioned, I feel like the kiai should have bigger spacing overall cause it's more intense than the non kiai. Right now, the spacing looks too similar to the spacing of the non-kiai. Made some minor changes (you might not even notice)

gl
Thanks!
Akareh

Ohwow wrote:

[Akareh's Insane]
00:11:747 (8,9) - Kinda weird to have this big spacing here and not so big spacing in the kiais like 01:11:747 (3,4) - 01:12:819 (7,1) - or 01:13:652 (4,5) - 00:11:747 (8,9) - has a circular flow even if it has big spacing, but at 01:11:747 (3,4) - I'm breaking flow completely for the player, and that's a more taxing move so that's why that has a not so big spacing. 01:12:819 (7,1) - and 01:13:652 (4,5) - don't seem that intense to me tbh.
00:22:343 (4) - 00:23:295 (7) - 00:27:105 (9) - 00:32:819 (7) - 00:47:105 (4) - what are these special 1/4 repeating slider mapped to? the last one is literally the only one in that section drums. These are technically two drum kicks and not three, but hachi uses weird drum rhythms so they fit anyway with all the background noise here, these sound completely different from the rest of double drum kicks, so I went with repeating sliders. Drum patterns change at 00:34:962, lots more of emphasis on double drum kicks so instead of repeating sliders I went for spaced circles where intensity allowed me to,
but 00:47:105 (4) - didn't really play well with that since the vocals here hold instead of following the drums like in the rest of the section I went back to the repeating slider for this. It played better for me IMO.

I feel like the kiai should have bigger spacing overall cause it's more intense than the non kiai. Right now, the spacing looks too similar to the spacing of the non-kiai. Well, SV is higher so I feel like it fits as is tbh. I've change some spacings around, but like Flame's they're practically unnoticeable.


gl
Thanks :)
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120,232,84366,6,0,B|88:300|144:352,1,126.500003860474,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,368,84724,2,0,P|276:352|312:356,1,63.2500019302369,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,364,84962,1,2,0:0:0:0:
488,368,85081,2,0,P|472:316|452:296,1,63.2500019302369,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,268,85319,2,0,P|420:224|492:220,1,126.500003860474,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,85676,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,85795,2,0,P|284:212|260:212,1,63.2500019302369,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,128,86033,6,0,L|184:128,1,28.75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Agatsu
i couldn't see any major problems

so have a star~
and good luck! :)
Topic Starter
_FlameL

Agatsu wrote:

i couldn't see any major problems

so have a star~
and good luck! :)
Thanks! :)
Chalwa
Siema.
Modne dwa diffy bo ta nutka jest meh troche xD.
[Easy]
  1. Mógłbyś dać AR2 i OD2 moim zdaniem, bo to wysokie BPM jest.
  2. 00:19:724 (1) - Preferuję w takin sliderze na Easy diffach zrobić ten zakręt w drugą stronę tak jak w 00:23:533 (1), ponieważ Easy diff powinien być intuicyjny i jak dasz ten zakręt w drugą stronę to kursor będzie szedł po owalu co jest wygodniejsze. Mam nadzieję, że nadążasz za moim tokiem rozumowania.
  3. 00:28:295 (2,3) - Te dwa slidery wyglądają razem tak sobie pod względem estetycznym, tak na odpierdol troche. Jak już to mógłbyś dać zakręty na 00:27:343 (1,2) sliderach i by to jako tako wyglądało imo.
  4. 00:34:962 (1) - Daj pierwszy zakręt w prawo, żeby było lepiej widać że potem jest zmiana kierunku coś jak tutaj:
  5. 00:38:771 (1) - To samo, tylko że z drugiej strony tak jakby. Mam nadzieję, że wiesz o co mi chodzi xD.
  6. 00:43:533 (2,3) - To samo co w 00:28:295 (2,3).
  7. 00:54:009 (1) - Zrób w tym sliderze coś w tym stylu co ja, żeby wizualnie było to łatwiejsze do zagrania, bo teraz to wygląda jak szybka zmiana kierunku, a z moim czymś, to nie wygląda jak szybka zmiana :D.
  8. 01:14:962 (1,2) - Jeżeli chciałeś to zblanketować to powinieneś naprawić koniec drugiego slidera, bo jest dalej drogi pierwszego slidera niż początek c:.
  9. 01:23:057 (2,3,4) - Takie coś nie jest wygodne to zagrania, wolę, żebyś odstackował te dwa slidery, przesunął kółko w prawo i potem też przesunął wszystko w prawo. Podeślę krótki filmik jak to u mnie wygląda. 01:19:247 (2,3,4) - tutaj zrób to samo, bo taki sam pattern.
    Video: https://chalwa.s-ul.eu/7CPTpp0O
  10. 01:25:438 (5) - Ten slider powinien mieć NC dla consistency oraz jest niegrywalny dla początkujących, ja bym zrobił najzwyklejszy zakrzywiony slider tutaj.
[Normal]
  1. Daj większy DS, jak 1.1 albo nawet 1.2, bo te obiekty leżą zbyt blisko siebie i to wygląda dziwnie :/
  2. 00:13:057 (4) - Skopiuj 00:13:533 (5) slider i po skopiowaniu daj go na miejsce poprzedniego z odpowiednim DSem klikając Ctrl+G. Teraz jest to o wiele bardziej estetyczne i wygląda lepiej moim zdaniem.
  3. 00:26:747 (5,1) - Overlapy kiedy dwa kółka ze sliderów pokrywają się nie są zbytnio ładne. Wiem, że to jest ciężko zmienić, bo masz wszystko "w kupie" ale jak zwiększysz DSy to będziesz miał większe pole manewru. Zaś 00:41:985 (5,2) overlap jest do przeczytania i jest dobry.
  4. 01:03:057 (5,1) - To co wyżej.
  5. 01:04:247 (3,5) - W tym diffie prawie wszystkie proste slidery zrobiłeś równolegle, więc czemu te dwa nie są takie same? Dla lepszego wyglądu ogólnego mapki zrób je takie same c:
  6. 01:25:914 (4) - NC jak w Easy diffie.

Masz potencjał tylko nie rób tego co ja i myśl jak mappujesz!
Powodzenia C:!
Topic Starter
_FlameL

Chalwa wrote:

Siema.
Modne dwa diffy bo ta nutka jest meh troche xD.
[Easy]
  1. Mógłbyś dać AR2 i OD2 moim zdaniem, bo to wysokie BPM jest. Zmienie je na 2.5
  2. 00:19:724 (1) - Preferuję w takin sliderze na Easy diffach zrobić ten zakręt w drugą stronę tak jak w 00:23:533 (1), ponieważ Easy diff powinien być intuicyjny i jak dasz ten zakręt w drugą stronę to kursor będzie szedł po owalu co jest wygodniejsze. Mam nadzieję, że nadążasz za moim tokiem rozumowania. Rozumiem ale moim zdaniem ten zakręt nie jest na tyle ostry żebym musiał go zmieniać
  3. 00:28:295 (2,3) - Te dwa slidery wyglądają razem tak sobie pod względem estetycznym, tak na odpierdol troche. xD Jak już to mógłbyś dać zakręty na 00:27:343 (1,2) sliderach i by to jako tako wyglądało imo. Wole to jak jest teraz. Chcialem tu zrobić trzy pary sliderów 00:25:438 (3,4) - 00:27:343 (1,2) - 00:29:247 (3,4) - które zmieniają kształt (zakrzywione do wewn. -> proste -> zakrzywione na zewn.)
  4. 00:34:962 (1) - Daj pierwszy zakręt w prawo, żeby było lepiej widać że potem jest zmiana kierunku coś jak tutaj: ok
  5. 00:38:771 (1) - To samo, tylko że z drugiej strony tak jakby. Mam nadzieję, że wiesz o co mi chodzi xD. ok
  6. 00:43:533 (2,3) - To samo co w 00:28:295 (2,3). Podobny powód
  7. 00:54:009 (1) - Zrób w tym sliderze coś w tym stylu co ja, żeby wizualnie było to łatwiejsze do zagrania, bo teraz to wygląda jak szybka zmiana kierunku, a z moim czymś, to nie wygląda jak szybka zmiana :D. ok? xD
  8. 01:14:962 (1,2) - Jeżeli chciałeś to zblanketować to powinieneś naprawić koniec drugiego slidera, bo jest dalej drogi pierwszego slidera niż początek c:. Chyba naprawiłem? Albo nie rozumiem o co ci chodzi... :?
  9. 01:23:057 (2,3,4) - Takie coś nie jest wygodne to zagrania, wolę, żebyś odstackował te dwa slidery, przesunął kółko w prawo i potem też przesunął wszystko w prawo. Podeślę krótki filmik jak to u mnie wygląda. 01:19:247 (2,3,4) - tutaj zrób to samo, bo taki sam pattern. Zmieniłem położenie kołka.
    Video: https://chalwa.s-ul.eu/7CPTpp0O
  10. 01:25:438 (5) - Ten slider powinien mieć NC dla consistency oraz jest niegrywalny dla początkujących, ja bym zrobił najzwyklejszy zakrzywiony slider tutaj. ok Moim zdaniem początkujacy nie poczuje różnicy jeśli chodzi o gameplay, a zakrzywienie na końcu podkreśla ważny dzwięk.
[Normal]
  1. Daj większy DS, jak 1.1 albo nawet 1.2, bo te obiekty leżą zbyt blisko siebie i to wygląda dziwnie :/ Zmieniłem CS na 3.3 bo jak bym zmienił DS to diff bylby powyzej 2.25 (czyli juz hard)
  2. 00:13:057 (4) - Skopiuj 00:13:533 (5) slider i po skopiowaniu daj go na miejsce poprzedniego z odpowiednim DSem klikając Ctrl+G. Teraz jest to o wiele bardziej estetyczne i wygląda lepiej moim zdaniem. ok
  3. 00:26:747 (5,1) - Overlapy kiedy dwa kółka ze sliderów pokrywają się nie są zbytnio ładne. Wiem, że to jest ciężko zmienić, bo masz wszystko "w kupie" ale jak zwiększysz DSy to będziesz miał większe pole manewru. Zaś 00:41:985 (5,2) overlap jest do przeczytania i jest dobry. Naprawione
  4. 01:03:057 (5,1) - To co wyżej. Naprawione
  5. 01:04:247 (3,5) - W tym diffie prawie wszystkie proste slidery zrobiłeś równolegle, więc czemu te dwa nie są takie same? Dla lepszego wyglądu ogólnego mapki zrób je takie same c: Zrobiłem to ten sposób żeby lepiej odwzorować zmiany jakie zachodzą w muzyce w danej cześci piosenki wiec chce przy tym zostać
  6. 01:25:914 (4) - NC jak w Easy diffie. Ok

Masz potencjał tylko nie rób tego co ja i myśl jak mappujesz!
Powodzenia C:!
Dzięki~!
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