wops im late... im not the only tho
[Inner Oni]
* - 00:03:140 (10) – i think it plays cooler if you remove thise and change - 00:03:233 (11) – to k, emphasizes more the melody.
* - 00:12:890 – what about a slider from here to - 00:13:640 -? that would support well the sound starting at - 00:12:327 (21) -, also idk I just like how it would play again.
* - 00:29:483 (30) – d instead of k? just another option, both ways play alright to me.
* - 00:33:140 (11,12) – swap colors? k k k D easier to handle but the other big note also sounds good as K tbh.
* - 00:40:452 (57) – k instead of d? k sounds alright and at the end u got one less ddk in a row. Then the following part until the long stream seems kinda lame tbh, many copy pasted patterns while the song provides actual interesting melodies. Just an example, - 00:42:608 - / - 00:45:608 - / - 00:48:608 – you miss those beats that are very noticeable in the song.So yeah i think you could proly do something a bit interesting there (and just by following more the song’s melody and not only using 3-plets/5-plets).
* - 01:08:202 (126) – feels kinda weird to not use a finisher there since you don’t hold back that much on that. So to cover this another way, what about removing - 01:07:733 (121) -, adding k at - 01:08:296 – and swaping - 01:08:108 (125,126) – ‘s colors? The result plays good imo.
* - 01:13:827 – k? or maybe remove some notes on the previous pattern? I see what you’r following there but the kddkd kinda loses it.
* - 02:19:452 (14,15,16) – might be better as kddk 1/6? that would be the correct snapping regarding how you use 1/6 there (also this is easier to play kek), as you pref tho.
* - 02:38:858 (140,141) – swap colors? sounds more like it.
* - 02:41:952 (18) – k instead of d? ^, also for varation, there’s been many dkddk on that part.
* - 03:00:515 - / - 03:01:452 – no d at those spots? I guess you wanna make it not too dense since it’s the beginning of the part but eh idk, looks kinda weird.
* - 03:23:483 (30) - / 03:27:140 (11,12) – same thing i said about those spots at around 30sec.
* - 03:39:327 (114,115,116,117) – maybe make this a full 1/8? => kkkkd instead of kkk d, the sounds it follows last until the d so yeah... also it’s easier to play for me kek.
* - 03:58:171 – pretty sad to always miss that beat, id have reworked a bit the patterns around to not miss those.
* - 04:11:483 – add k? same reason as above, sounds sad to break there as this is clearly different from another spot like - 04:12:702 (111,112,113,114) – which is mapped the same way.
* - 04:19:358 (37) – d instead of k? => dd dk dd dk, plays better to me.
* - 04:38:202 (44) – same thing I said about a similar spot at the beginning.
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aight thats it, awesome map man gl