[Hard]
Fine

[Insane]
Fine, but kind of repetitive.

Can't find anything wrong.

hi-

All suggestions

[General]

●Song Setup > Audio > Music Track > Lead-in 2 → 3

[Easy]

●00:10:502 (5) - ctrl+J

●00:22:690 (3) - new combo add
●00:23:627 (1) - new combo remove
●00:53:627 (3) - 1 grid upper left

[Normal]

●AR+1. CS+1. OD+1

[Hard]

●HP+1

[Insane]

●fine~


Good map!!!!!!!

尼桑~

As requested

[General]

Don't see a problem

[Easy]

00:03:940 (1.2) - Slider work much better http://puu.sh/66nG
00:06:752 (2) - Remove this, isn't really follow anything and the stacking with (1) in next combo doesn't feel that nice. If you don't want to remove it, place it somewhere else.
00:11:440 (1.2) - Why stack this? So much nicer if you space it out http://puu.sh/66o7.

Pretty solid.

[Normal]

00:04:877 (2.3.4) - Repeating slider instead. Sliders work better for this part than hit circle.

Couldn't find much.

[Hard]

00:06:283 (2.3.4) - http://puu.sh/66pI I like this much more, don't worry about the slight jump, this is a Hard and you can have jumps.
00:37:924 (1.2.3.4) - Can you make this smoother? This pattern feel a bit "rough" and doesn't flow very well.

I feel the note placement isn't very smooth, but map is technically fine.

[Insane]

00:09:799 (1.2.3 1.2.3) - Would be nice if you curve this two patterns a bit. Flow better than straight streams.
00:12:260 (6.7) - Similarly here, curve it a bit.
00:26:205 (1,2,3 1,2,3) - Same as 00:09:799
00:30:893 (4,5,6 1,2,3) - ^ New combo (4)?
00:33:236 (6,7,8) - Curve this pattern or try zig zaging it.
00:34:877 (1.2.3 1,2,3) - Same as 00:09:799
00:35:815 (1,2 1,2 1,2,3) - Make this accelerated spacing more gradual, you suddenly increase space by 2x then 1.5x. Doesn't flow well. Also try to not stack (3) with (1). Hard to read.

As some people had mentioned, a bit repetitive since you reused patterns, try to be a bit more creative. This difficulty would be a whole better if you curve your patterns rather than leaving it straight. This song doesn't feel "straight" at all to me.

No star since your map has quite a few stars already. Hard feel a bit jerky for me and Insane feel a bit repetitive. Your map is rankable quality through.

Good luck!

here's my mod

general;
- nothing

easy;
- 00:37:690 >> start kiai here
- 00:40:502 >> just put notes here and at 00:40:971
- 01:17:065 >> remove combo
- you have quite a few stacks...not sure, this is an easy and so using stacks isn't recommended

normal;
- 00:04:643 >> move (2) here and move (3) to 00:04:877

hard;
- 00:16:830 >> add a note
- 00:18:705 >> delete
- 00:21:986 >> add a note

insane;
- 00:03:354 (7,8) >> not well stacked
- 00:02:650 (4,5) >> move (4) here and (5) to 00:02:768
- 00:07:338 (7,8) >> move (7) here and (8) to 00:07:455
- 00:22:338 >> add a note

* star

So.....I thought I'll try my best to improve modding: These are all suggestions. If you don't want to use them, please explain why instead of just no

General:
Perhaps preview time would be a lot better at 01:07:690 instead.
I don't think the first kiai is needed. To me, I don't think that's the epic part of the song, the ending is :3 BUT if you want to keep it, please make kiai start at 00:37:690 instead because right now the kiai starts on red tick. The downbeat is where kiai should start. This is for all diffs

Easy:
00:05:815 (4) - NC here for consistency with your NC pattern.
00:22:690 (3) - NC here.
00:23:627 (1) - Remove NC
00:50:815 (1) - Remove NC
00:54:096 (1) - A bad slider unfortuantely. The slider ends where NC would fit. Perhaps put 1/2 slider then add a note? Add NC like the image.
01:06:752 (2) - Same suggestion. Perhaps remove repeat on slider and add a note?

Normal:
00:23:158 (2) - Perhaps unstack 2? I think flow would be better since you have that same moving feeling after this slider 00:20:815 (4).
00:44:721 (6) - Take out one reverse and add note and NC on note?
00:50:580 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
01:07:690 (1) - Forgot finish at the slider start?
01:10:502 (3) - Minus one reverse and add note at 01:11:440? NC on note too and remove NC on 01:11:908 (1)
01:21:518 (2) - Slider plays weird to me because there is no vocal on red tick. Perhaps delete slider and add note at 01:21:752?

Hard:
00:03:002 (2) - Minus 1 reverse and add note at 00:03:940 (x) and NC for consistency.
00:07:221 (1) - Remove this NC please.
00:07:690 (3) - Add NC here instead.
00:08:158 (1) - And remove this NC
00:18:471 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
00:18:940 (3) - Add NC here instead.
00:20:815 (1) - Remove this NC
00:22:690 (8) - Add NC here.
00:23:158 (1) - And remove this NC
00:29:252 (1) - Unfortunate slider as it ends where NC should take place. Minus one reverse and add note at 00:30:190 (x) with NC?
00:37:221 (3) - Ahh same slider :/ Perhaps remove one reverse and add note at 00:37:690 (x) and NC?
00:37:924 (1) - Remove NC
00:39:096 (1) - Remove NC as this is the same verse.
00:40:971 (1) - Remove NC
00:41:440 (3) - And NC here instead?
00:45:190 (x) - Add note? I'm surprised you didn't put a note here o.o
00:54:330 (5) - Bad slider Remove and add note here and 00:54:565 (x) then NC 00:54:565 (x)
00:55:033 (1) - Remove this NC
00:58:315 (5) - NC here
01:20:346 (5) - Remove one reverse and add a note at 01:20:815 (x). Add NC
01:21:283 (1) - Remove NC

Insane:
00:07:690 (9) - NC this.
00:08:158 (1) - And remove NC on this.
00:10:268 (1) - Remove NC
00:10:971 (1) - Remove NC
00:11:440 (9) - NC here.
00:13:080 (1) - Remove NC
00:13:315 (10) - NC here.
00:16:830 (1) - Remove NC
00:17:065 (3) - NC here
00:20:580 (1) - Remove NC
00:20:815 (2) - NC here.
00:22:221 (1) - Remove NC
00:22:690 (4) - NC here.
00:23:393 (1) - Remove NC. I think it's better to NC at every stanza to keep it the same in all diffs. You are currently NCing every triple instead
00:24:330 (1) - Remove NC
00:24:565 (3) - NC here.
00:25:268 (1) - Remove NC
00:26:205 (1) - Remove NC
00:26:440 (3) - NC
00:26:674 (1) - Remove NC
00:27:143 (1) - Remove NC
00:28:080 (1) - Remove NC
00:28:315 (9) - NC
00:29:018 (1) - Remove NC
00:29:955 (1) - Remove NC
00:30:190 (6) - NC

orz too much for me. Your NC pattern in insane is different from hard/normal/easy. I think I'll stop here ._. You can pm me in game if you want some NC help. I don't do NC often but I like to try and improve on it.

Edit: I tried taiko, I suck at it orz. Perhaps you should remove the speed up in taiko and only speed up at the last kiai?

Raging Bull wrote:

So.....I thought I'll try my best to improve modding: These are all suggestions. If you don't want to use them, please explain why instead of just no

General:
Perhaps preview time would be a lot better at 01:07:690 instead.
I don't think the first kiai is needed. To me, I don't think that's the epic part of the song, the ending is :3 BUT if you want to keep it, please make kiai start at 00:37:690 instead because right now the kiai starts on red tick. The downbeat is where kiai should start. This is for all diffs

Easy:
00:05:815 (4) - NC here for consistency with your NC pattern.
00:22:690 (3) - NC here.
00:23:627 (1) - Remove NC
00:50:815 (1) - Remove NC
00:54:096 (1) - A bad slider unfortuantely. The slider ends where NC would fit. Perhaps put 1/2 slider then add a note? Add NC like the image.maybe too hard in easy ~
01:06:752 (2) - Same suggestion. Perhaps remove repeat on slider and add a note?

Normal:
00:23:158 (2) - Perhaps unstack 2? I think flow would be better since you have that same moving feeling after this slider 00:20:815 (4).
00:44:721 (6) - Take out one reverse and add note and NC on note? maybe too hard in normal ~
00:50:580 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
01:07:690 (1) - Forgot finish at the slider start?
01:10:502 (3) - Minus one reverse and add note at 01:11:440? NC on note too and remove NC on 01:11:908 (1)
01:21:518 (2) - Slider plays weird to me because there is no vocal on red tick. Perhaps delete slider and add note at 01:21:752?

Hard:
00:03:002 (2) - Minus 1 reverse and add note at 00:03:940 (x) and NC for consistency.
00:07:221 (1) - Remove this NC please.
00:07:690 (3) - Add NC here instead.
00:08:158 (1) - And remove this NC
00:18:471 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
00:18:940 (3) - Add NC here instead.
00:20:815 (1) - Remove this NC
00:22:690 (8) - Add NC here.
00:23:158 (1) - And remove this NC
00:29:252 (1) - Unfortunate slider as it ends where NC should take place. Minus one reverse and add note at 00:30:190 (x) with NC?
00:37:221 (3) - Ahh same slider :/ Perhaps remove one reverse and add note at 00:37:690 (x) and NC?
00:37:924 (1) - Remove NC
00:39:096 (1) - Remove NC as this is the same verse.
00:40:971 (1) - Remove NC
00:41:440 (3) - And NC here instead?
00:45:190 (x) - Add note? I'm surprised you didn't put a note here o.o
00:54:330 (5) - Bad slider Remove and add note here and 00:54:565 (x) then NC 00:54:565 (x)
00:55:033 (1) - Remove this NC
00:58:315 (5) - NC here
01:20:346 (5) - Remove one reverse and add a note at 01:20:815 (x). Add NC
01:21:283 (1) - Remove NC

Insane:
00:07:690 (9) - NC this.
00:08:158 (1) - And remove NC on this.
00:10:268 (1) - Remove NC
00:10:971 (1) - Remove NC
00:11:440 (9) - NC here.
00:13:080 (1) - Remove NC
00:13:315 (10) - NC here.
00:16:830 (1) - Remove NC
00:17:065 (3) - NC here
00:20:580 (1) - Remove NC
00:20:815 (2) - NC here.
00:22:221 (1) - Remove NC
00:22:690 (4) - NC here.
00:23:393 (1) - Remove NC. I think it's better to NC at every stanza to keep it the same in all diffs. You are currently NCing every triple instead
00:24:330 (1) - Remove NC
00:24:565 (3) - NC here.
00:25:268 (1) - Remove NC
00:26:205 (1) - Remove NC
00:26:440 (3) - NC
00:26:674 (1) - Remove NC
00:27:143 (1) - Remove NC
00:28:080 (1) - Remove NC
00:28:315 (9) - NC
00:29:018 (1) - Remove NC
00:29:955 (1) - Remove NC
00:30:190 (6) - NC
cool...........

orz too much for me. Your NC pattern in insane is different from hard/normal/easy. I think I'll stop here ._. You can pm me in game if you want some NC help. I don't do NC often but I like to try and improve on it.

Edit: I tried taiko, I suck at it orz. Perhaps you should remove the speed up in taiko and only speed up at the last kiai?

something change like KIAI time or......many many NC OTL..I don't really like one NC number more than 9 so just change something..But i change XD！(slap),very thank you for you help XD！

Wow you understand orz. It was so confusing with so many NC ._.

Easy:
00:36:752 (3) - Forgot finish at slider end?

Taiko:
Kiai still starts on red tick! Move it to 00:37:690 (153). I would say you don't have to ask the guest mapper because Kiai affects score in taiko. But up to you to change it or not without his permission

Insane:
00:37:455 (1) - Slider end not snapped!

Edit:
Since you have to study.
Hard:
00:45:190 (1) - Add a note here with finish. It seems empty

Raging Bull wrote:

Wow you understand orz. It was so confusing with so many NC ._.

Easy:
00:36:752 (3) - Forgot finish at slider end?

Taiko:
Kiai still starts on red tick! Move it to 00:37:690 (153). I would say you don't have to ask the guest mapper because Kiai affects score in taiko. But up to you to change it or not without his permission

Insane:
00:37:455 (1) - Slider end not snapped!

I！FORGET！TO！CHANGE！IT！
OMG！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！
Thank you for you recheck！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！
>口<///////////////

General
ok

Easy
00:05:815 (1) - whistle?
Your combos tended to be very short. You can get rid of every other new combo and have a very clear map.

Normal
Nada

Hard
nada

Insane
00:03:705 (9) - Spaced awkwardly, suggest moving it so that the jump is cleaner (more even distance)
00:21:752 (6,1) - You tend to use unneeded 1/4 streams all over and then ignore one of the few actual 1/4 sections? Put a stream here.
the entire thing was disappointingly overmapped, but that's your decision as a mapper.

Shiirn wrote:

General
ok

Easy
00:05:815 (1) - whistle?
Your combos tended to be very short. You can get rid of every other new combo and have a very clear map.

Normal
Nada

Hard
nada

Insane
00:03:705 (9) - Spaced awkwardly, suggest moving it so that the jump is cleaner (more even distance)
00:21:752 (6,1) - You tend to use unneeded 1/4 streams all over and then ignore one of the few actual 1/4 sections? Put a stream here.
the entire thing was disappointingly overmapped, but that's your decision as a mapper.

my friend have a suggestion for me is easy and normal NC no more than 5 so ╮(╯_╰)╭...........but i change some, thank you for you mod XD!

都三个月了怎么还没泡TOT

Megurine Luka wrote:

都三个月了怎么还没泡TOT

你这个问题简直太好了OTL........

hello~

folder and map setting are fine

[Easy]
00:33:940 (1) - looks a bit untidy,as it's supposed to be symmetrical,fix the shape please - the middle tick should cross the "y" axis line perfectly
00:36:752 (3) - ^
01:23:158 (1) - a bit short for the easiest difficulty,honestly..try to avoid it in your future maps

[Normal]
I had some symmetry issues,but they're really minor,so just fine

[Hard]
00:02:065 (1) - just a suggestion,you don't have to follow it,but I'd remove this repeat and make a slider: (00:02:533 - 00:02:768) instead
just sounds/plays more catchy to me
00:35:580 (4,1,2) - spacing looks a little wrong,could you place (1) somewhere between (4) and (2)? :/ it'd be better

[Insane]
00:14:486 (7,8,1) - in case of previous jump,distance between them looks similar..even though the last note marked with new combo,it's not right,so..at the very least,reduce (7) & (8) jump or clear up the distance between (8) & (1) to show the correct 1/1 spacing,please
00:36:752 (1,2,3) - a bit odd as the previous jumps were (1,2,1,2)..but I'm fine with them,if you don't want to change these jumps in the different way

this is a really good mapset,I didn't find much problems here,so I have intention to bubble it
call me back if you want to change anything

IceBeam wrote:

hello~

folder and map setting are fine

[Easy]
00:33:940 (1) - looks a bit untidy,as it's supposed to be symmetrical,fix the shape please - the middle tick should cross the "y" axis line perfectly I try to do my best XD
00:36:752 (3) - ^
01:23:158 (1) - a bit short for the easiest difficulty,honestly..try to avoid it in your future maps

[Normal]
I had some symmetry issues,but they're really minor,so just fine

[Hard]
00:02:065 (1) - just a suggestion,you don't have to follow it,but I'd remove this repeat and make a slider: (00:02:533 - 00:02:768) instead
just sounds/plays more catchy to me
00:35:580 (4,1,2) - spacing looks a little wrong,could you place (1) somewhere between (4) and (2)? :/ it'd be better

[Insane]
00:14:486 (7,8,1) - in case of previous jump,distance between them looks similar..even though the last note marked with new combo,it's not right,so..at the very least,reduce (7) & (8) jump or clear up the distance between (8) & (1) to show the correct 1/1 spacing,please
00:36:752 (1,2,3) - a bit odd as the previous jumps were (1,2,1,2)..but I'm fine with them,if you don't want to change these jumps in the different wayXD i find some player and they said this jump is fun XD~

this is a really good mapset,I didn't find much problems here,so I have intention to bubble it
call me back if you want to change anything

FIXIFIXFIX！！
Thank you XD！

alright,as all spacing issues were fixed,it shoud be fine for ranking then

bubbled

Thank you very much !!!!!
XD

Hmm...... loooking good with nothing broken or needs to be fixed. Good job and i'll go ahead with ranking this map then.

恭喜，幸福的孩子。。。神mapper求rank鬼图

what the!!!
求MAT阿...

尼桑~!!!!!

兔兔 恭喜Rank ~

gz tutuhaha

cmn_891127 wrote:

恭喜，幸福的孩子。。。神mapper求rank鬼图

你们都是幸福的孩子

苦比的孩子在这里

Holy crap, someone actually found a MP3 for this song.

Nice map, grat tutu

Megurine Luka wrote:

cmn_891127 wrote:

恭喜，幸福的孩子。。。神mapper求rank鬼图

你们都是幸福的孩子

苦比的孩子在这里

在这里在这里

娘的又是我最后一个知道orz.........
my map go rank and i'm a last one know it orz...............
whymeman thank you ！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！
IceBeam thank you thank you thank you！！！！！！！！！！！

Ao no Exorcist *-*

graaatz

^w^ nice map

Last edited by Garven on over 3 months ago, edited 1 time in total.
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but ranked....baka Garven

哎哟rank了 恭喜

Song is good and mapping is excellent. Nice job