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-Nitrous wrote:

Heya! From my Modding Queue
[General]
  1. Remove "(TV size)" from title and place it in tags instead. fixed
    Source: http://recreators.tv/music/#op
  2. Re-encode your Audio File to 192kbps. This is for keeping your file size small.
    Noticing your reply to a mod above, you can use Audacity to reduce the bit rate of the mp3. Just use Google to find downloads and tutorials on this topic. done, ty!
  3. An Easy difficulty might be nice. Only having Normal to Insane is fine but kinda lacking with spread. If it's a huge issue i'll consider it

[Normal]
  1. OD 4 and HP 4 is more appropriate for this diff. Changed
  2. 00:02:436 - to 00:06:538 - I get it that you're after the synth noise(?) but missing the downbeats (large white ticks) is kinda lacking. Hmmm, i had it like that orignally and changed it due to a mod, but i do like how it was before, so i guess i'll change it back for now
  3. 00:05:513 (2,1) - Flow is forced here. (2) is pointing upwards but you force players to go down because of (1)'s position.
  4. 00:15:769 (3) - Weird and unbalanced Z slider. Wasn't meant to be a Z slider, adjusted it so it's clear
  5. 00:19:615 (2,3) - Another case of forced flow. Same case, (2) is pointing downwards but you force players to go up just to hit (3).
  6. 00:08:590 - to 00:24:487 - It's pretty unclear on what you're trying to follow in this section. Your rhythm isn't solid here. Since this is a normal diff, try to keep it simple with 1/1 sliders. Changed a few of the sliders in the beginning of the section so it's clearly following vocals
  7. 01:01:410 (4,1) - Obligatory Blanket Mod xd
  8. 01:08:077 (1,2,3) - Flow is very much forced and weird here.
  9. 01:15:769 - Add circle here. added
  10. 01:20:128 (1,2,3) - Another case of forced flow.
  11. 01:22:179 (1) - Replacing this spinner with other objects is more appropriate. Changed
    This difficulty needs a bit more work on flow and rhythm in general. Went through and changed as many awkward flow movements as i could, but if there are any other off rhythms i can't find them

[Hard]
  1. Distance Snap is everywhere in this difficulty. In Hard difficulties, try to keep DS simple but not as simple as consistent DS in Normals. I kept the spacing mostly consistent throughout the beginning parts since there's no real change in intensity, I do change spacing to emphasize certain notes though, so I'm kinda confused about your problem with it
    For instance: 00:01:410 (3,4,5) - vs 00:03:461 (4,5,6) - (this one is really insane to be honest) I don't see the issue here?
  2. Feels overmapped.
    For instance: 00:02:692 (1,2,3) - This is too overmapped for a Hard. Slider ends point to no sound at all. You can keep it simple by using a slider similar to 00:00:641 (2) - The sounds are completely different, 00:00:641 (2) is 3 simple notes, while the other has pitch changes on the blue ticks
  3. Rhythm is not again solid and inconsistent.
    00:00:641 (2) - vs 00:02:692 (1,2,3) - Same reasons above. If there are rhythm issues i'm not seeing them
    To be fair, this goes on for the rest on the map, I did check it but I'm sorry but this is far from being rank-able as far as I can see. Please fix this as the my explanation shows the biggest concerns your diff.

[Insane]
  1. This feels like your Hard difficulty too but very much overmapped. Refer to my mods in Hard difficulty. :/

I hope this helps and thank you for using my Modding Queue! Good luck! Thank you!
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HELLO from my queue!!!
maybe it's surprising because u request a NM about 3 weeks ago xD I am a bit lazy u know
IDK is my laptop's problem, it doesn't show up an video when I play your map ( I downloaded the map with video )
It will be better if the name Is Sawano Hiroyuki instead of sticking them together but nah that doesn't really matters XD
too many return slides, easy and normal are for the beginners and it will be uncomfortable for them
00:06:827 (2) - 00:07:596 (3) - end in the white tick, there is a strong beat there
00:32:468 (1) - it will be good to put kiai on it till 00:49:134 (4) - (also for other difficulties)
basically....yea :)
maybe is too low for a hard? (doesn't matter)
00:12:724 (1,2) - stack them like 00:13:622 (5,6) -
00:47:340 (8) - is a bit uncomfortable for me.. u can either put (8) more near to (1) or end in the white tick

insane I don't really have any advice :/ (i'm just a noob) :(
thank you for requesting in my queue, good luck !!! :)
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tiffany yu tyu wrote:

HELLO from my queue!!!
maybe it's surprising because u request a NM about 3 weeks ago xD I am a bit lazy u know
IDK is my laptop's problem, it doesn't show up an video when I play your map ( I downloaded the map with video ) Oh woops only added it on the insane diff fixed
It will be better if the name Is Sawano Hiroyuki instead of sticking them together but nah that doesn't really matters XD Took the metadata from MAL :P
too many return slides, easy and normal are for the beginners and it will be uncomfortable for them Not fully sure how to change it, but if it's really a problem i'll try to fix it
00:06:827 (2) - 00:07:596 (3) - end in the white tick, there is a strong beat there For the first one im not really sure what to do with it,
cause everything i try feels awkward, ending it on the white tick would ignore the synth sound of the blue tick, which is what i'm following, but ending it on the blue tick is also awkward, so i'll need another opionion on that.
For the second one i'm keeping it as it is since I'm following the synth and not the drums
00:32:468 (1) - it will be good to put kiai on it till 00:49:134 (4) - (also for other difficulties) Leaving as is since the current kiai time has a higher intensity
basically....yea :)
maybe is too low for a hard? (doesn't matter)
00:12:724 (1,2) - stack them like 00:13:622 (5,6) - Changed
00:47:340 (8) - is a bit uncomfortable for me.. u can either put (8) more near to (1) or end in the white tick Changed the order of the triangle so it flows better

insane I don't really have any advice :/ (i'm just a noob) :(
thank you for requesting in my queue, good luck !!! :)Thank you!
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Hello there~ random normal mod here cus I love this anime !

Normal


  • didn't really find anything here.. great job on this diff ;)

Hard

  1. 00:22:468 (1,2) - i feel like u should ctrl g the slider and put the circle to its front cus it gives better flow imo
  2. 01:20:929 (3) - i suggest u ctrl g here cus it follows the pattern you've done in the previous notes so might as well give this too, as a challenge ending c;
  3. 01:21:955 (3) - ^
  4. 01:22:211 (1) - same here ctrl g this slider pls

Insane

  1. 00:15:801 (1) - NC here perhaps?
  2. 01:01:443 (6) - ctrl g here? and then overlap it to 01:00:674 (4) -
  3. 01:03:494 (4) - this beat has strong sound so better crl g this
  4. 01:05:546 (5) - same here as the song intensifies before the kiai, it's better to make this a jump so i suggest u to ctrl g this
  5. 01:14:007 (1) - maybe ctrl g here
  6. 01:14:520 (2) - ^
  7. 01:14:776 (3) - ^


hope my mod helps! atleast some small things ;w;
hope this will get ranked~ also why not add Easy diff cus it kinda lacks the spread
welp, good luck!!
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AJamez wrote:

Hello there~ random normal mod here cus I love this anime !

Normal


  • didn't really find anything here.. great job on this diff ;)ty! :D

Hard

  1. 00:22:468 (1,2) - i feel like u should ctrl g the slider and put the circle to its front cus it gives better flow imo I prefer how it is now since it competes the pattern properly, and i feel like the flow is better like this
  2. 01:20:929 (3) - i suggest u ctrl g here cus it follows the pattern you've done in the previous notes so might as well give this too, as a challenge ending c;
  3. 01:21:955 (3) - ^
  4. 01:22:211 (1) - same here ctrl g this slider pls
    changed all the sliders, i agree the ending should be harder

Insane

  1. 00:15:801 (1) - NC here perhaps? Naw, i'm doing them every bar + important emphasis stuff, i dont find that very important
  2. 01:01:443 (6) - ctrl g here? and then overlap it to 01:00:674 (4) - Not gonna ctrl + g it, i like the up and down pattern, but i will overlap it
  3. 01:03:494 (4) - this beat has strong sound so better crl g this It would ruin the movement into the slider, and i'd have to do it for the rest of the section too
  4. 01:05:546 (5) - same here as the song intensifies before the kiai, it's better to make this a jump so i suggest u to ctrl g this I like how that plays, changed
  5. 01:14:007 (1) - maybe ctrl g here Oh wow the movement into that slider was awful, changed the slider entirely
  6. 01:14:520 (2) - ^ I like how it is, ctrl + g would break the flow
  7. 01:14:776 (3) - ^ ^


hope my mod helps! atleast some small things ;w;
hope this will get ranked~ also why not add Easy diff cus it kinda lacks the spread Multiple mentions so i'm gonna try to map one, if its bad ill remove it :P
welp, good luck!!TY!
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q
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[Insane]
I understand your prioritising the melody in the intro, but the truly interesting stuff happens with the drums imo so undermapping 00:04:006 - 00:04:391 - etc is a bit of a shame
00:29:134 (3) - 00:30:417 - end slider here
00:34:007 (4,5) - i would extend the slider to 5 and map the blue tick, the sound on 5 isnt that noticeable when your following the vocal melody same here 00:36:059 (4,5) - etc
00:37:341 (1,3) - move 3 a bit so it lines up with 1 http://puu.sh/xIhNW/673b268bf3.png
01:09:135 (3,4,5) - not really a fan of how this is patterned since in comparison to the rest of your arrangement, these are noticeably a lot less grouped together. Its like arranged in a way that its supposed to represent 3 distinctly different sounds.
01:18:110 (1,3) - try and open this up a bit so the blanket isnt so close together
[Hard]
00:02:981 (2,3) - note and then a 1/1 slider instead on the blue tick? it'll follow the melody more accurately
rest of the rhythm seems ok

[Normal]
try to keep your dsing the same throughout the map, time distance equality is an important thing in lower diffs since it varies a lot from 1.0x to 1.2x

~
i think your patterning could improve a bit more still but it seems ok
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kwk wrote:

q
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[Insane]
I understand your prioritising the melody in the intro, but the truly interesting stuff happens with the drums imo so undermapping 00:04:006 - 00:04:391 - etc is a bit of a shame Added drum emphasis
00:29:134 (3) - 00:30:417 - end slider here Changed
00:34:007 (4,5) - i would extend the slider to 5 and map the blue tick, the sound on 5 isnt that noticeable when your following the vocal melody same here 00:36:059 (4,5) - etc Having the slider go to the blue tick feels weird to me since the vocal ends before them, and making them end on the white tick feels off aswell, gonna keep it how it is
00:37:341 (1,3) - move 3 a bit so it lines up with 1 http://puu.sh/xIhNW/673b268bf3.png Changed
01:09:135 (3,4,5) - not really a fan of how this is patterned since in comparison to the rest of your arrangement, these are noticeably a lot less grouped together. Its like arranged in a way that its supposed to represent 3 distinctly different sounds. Rearanged
01:18:110 (1,3) - try and open this up a bit so the blanket isnt so close together Changed
[Hard]
00:02:981 (2,3) - note and then a 1/1 slider instead on the blue tick? it'll follow the melody more accurately
rest of the rhythm seems ok With how it is now it follows the drums and the melody

[Normal]
try to keep your dsing the same throughout the map, time distance equality is an important thing in lower diffs since it varies a lot from 1.0x to 1.2x Went through and fixed DS

~
i think your patterning could improve a bit more still but it seems ok
TY for the mod :D
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Hi Hi! Here from My Modding Queue :)
00:02:981 (2) - stack this with Stacking this with the end of the slider would not be better?

00:33:237 - should not Kiai go there? XDD (nothing important)
01:15:545 (1,2) - improves blanket (Optional)
00:54:519 (2,3) - Isn't that better? xd

00:06:570 (1,2) - it sounds better this way :)

01:04:519 (5) - NC?¿
01:15:032 (3) - it looks weird, you can make it better, I think
01:24:496 - Kiai not adjusted
Should not be the normal slider speed be 1.2? :thinking:
I had not seen an AR 7.9 lol
00:45:545 (5) - NC?
Insane=Hard? Kappa
00:15:929 (7) - NC?
nothing else to say, excellent

I think your map is very good, I have nothing more to say about it, sorry that it was so brief :(
GL :3
I hope I have helped you :cry::cry:
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OsuDans wrote:

Hi Hi! Here from My Modding Queue :)
00:02:981 (2) - stack this with Stacking this with the end of the slider would not be better?
I'm trying to avoid stacks so ill keep it how it is
00:33:237 - should not Kiai go there? XDD (nothing important) If i put kiai there it would span over half the song xd
01:15:545 (1,2) - improves blanket (Optional) fixed
00:54:519 (2,3) - Isn't that better? xd
Same as above

00:06:570 (1,2) - it sounds better this way :)
Changed to that
01:04:519 (5) - NC?¿ added
01:15:032 (3) - it looks weird, you can make it better, I think changed it slightly, hopefully it looks better
01:24:496 - Kiai not adjusted oops xd
Should not be the normal slider speed be 1.2? :thinking:idk :thinking:
I had not seen an AR 7.9 lol xd
00:45:545 (5) - NC? oops x2
Insane=Hard? Kappa kappa
00:15:929 (7) - NC? Naw, i prefer to keep the combos to each measure
nothing else to say, excellent

I think your map is very good, I have nothing more to say about it, sorry that it was so brief :(
GL :3
I hope I have helped you :cry::cry:You did well :cry :cry:
Thank you for the mod!
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short mod incoming

  • General
  1. hard and insane have really high OD's (8.5 is overkill for 3.7 star map imo) and should be lowered to compromise for the low bpm. i suggest you drop them by 0.4-0.5 each
  2. Normal, hard, insane diff all share the same SV; SV should increase in small increments for each diff
  3. i'm pretty sure recommended video container should be .avi, but i don't see any relevant info in the ranking criteria so idk.
  4. it's required that you remove the audio from video file to save as much space as possible

    Normal
    00:08:622 (1) - check DS
    01:24:006 - avoid using fast reverse slider for normal diff, so make this 3/4 long slider instead

    Easy
  5. AR is way too high especially for a song this slow, lower it to 3
  6. how come this diff has SV changes and normal diff doesn't? and for Easy SV should stay at x1.00 to avoid confusing newer players anyway
  7. mapping isnt consistent at all here; starting from 00:49:647 you're introducing 1/2 rhythms and toward the end you've abandoned the drum patterns in favor of mapping the vocals. you might get away with this if its an advanced diff, but this is Easy; you can't throw curveballs at the player, you have to build your entire map around what you've started with.


i have no idea how to mod hard and insane, i have almost no experience with low bpm maps so i'll have to leave those two alone :(
good luck!
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terratropic wrote:

short mod incoming

  • General
  1. hard and insane have really high OD's (8.5 is overkill for 3.7 star map imo) and should be lowered to compromise for the low bpm. i suggest you drop them by 0.4-0.5 each Hard is now 6.4, insane is now 8
  2. Normal, hard, insane diff all share the same SV; SV should increase in small increments for each diff Remapped Normal with lower SV,
    gonna keep hard and insane the same
  3. i'm pretty sure recommended video container should be .avi, but i don't see any relevant info in the ranking criteria so idk.
  4. it's required that you remove the audio from video file to save as much space as possible

    Normal
    00:08:622 (1) - check DS remapped with new sv so it should be fixed anyways
    01:24:006 - avoid using fast reverse slider for normal diff, so make this 3/4 long slider instead changed

    Easy
  5. AR is way too high especially for a song this slow, lower it to 3 Changed
  6. how come this diff has SV changes and normal diff doesn't? and for Easy SV should stay at x1.00 to avoid confusing newer players anyway Oh woops that was unintentional, forgot to change when i created new diff
  7. mapping isnt consistent at all here; starting from 00:49:647 you're introducing 1/2 rhythms and toward the end you've abandoned the drum patterns in favor of mapping the vocals. you might get away with this if its an advanced diff, but this is Easy; you can't throw curveballs at the player, you have to build your entire map around what you've started with. RE:mapped the ending, kept some of the vocal parts, and ditched the weird reverse slider stuff


i have no idea how to mod hard and insane, i have almost no experience with low bpm maps so i'll have to leave those two alone :(
good luck! ty!
Also fixed some combo colour issues and changed the white to a gray, will try to figure out the video stuff in a bit
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00:02:981 (2,3) - if u listen to the song there's a melody on the blue ticks, which you actually followed with 00:03:493 (4) - . i suggest you follow it fully

00:40:160 (4,5) - i dont get these.. like the emphasis is on the vocal so why is there a giant jump on the one thing that isn't a vocal...

01:11:699 (6) - to make it more varied you could put 2 clicks on the vocals with 2 syllables like this or 01:12:982 (3) -

not bad

other diffs look ok

set non default combo colors for green and blue plz they dont look good at all
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Naotoshi wrote:

00:02:981 (2,3) - if u listen to the song there's a melody on the blue ticks, which you actually followed with 00:03:493 (4) - . i suggest you follow it fully Changed

00:40:160 (4,5) - i dont get these.. like the emphasis is on the vocal so why is there a giant jump on the one thing that isn't a vocal... Lowered spacing leading into them

01:11:699 (6) - to make it more varied you could put 2 clicks on the vocals with 2 syllables like this or 01:12:982 (3) - Im gonna keep it how it is since the white tick has more emphasis than the blue tick, and i think a 10 second section should be fine without the variation

not bad

other diffs look ok

set non default combo colors for green and blue plz they dont look good at all Darkened the green blue and grey colours
ty! :)

also fixed the video so it shouldnt have audio anymore
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rank hype
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hype

now i just need to find a second bn :^)
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[insane]
00:02:981 (2,3) - sounds like u should ctrl g the rhythm then stack 2 on 3 head. fits better wwith the low instrument imo

00:48:109 (3,4,5) - this looks a bit cramped, can you spaced 5 a bit more out? and maybe move 3-4 a bit apart too

01:03:751 (1,2,3,4,5) - these sliders don't really match together too well. can you try to make a more cohesive pattern? try to keep the visual spacings equal so it looks more organized.

01:15:546 (5) - again i suggest a click on the white tick here, the sound is pretty noticeable imo. and could be nice way to break up the drop in rhythm density caused by all the 1/1 sliders xd

01:24:391 (5) - maybe you could separate this note a bit more? like a small angle change + jump or something

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9354057

[hard]
00:20:929 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is a bit long of a string of 1/4, can you try and add a 1/2 gap or two in there. maybe on the less important vocals

00:36:570 (4) - a triple into 1/2 slider makes sense here with the vocals, could be cool.

00:40:673 (1,2,3,1) - visual spacing plz..

actually all around the diff, there's like random tiny visual spacings after normally spaced patterns. try and find some and make them more equal, it'll make the map as a whole look a bit nicer.

01:22:724 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - a bit too hard imo. try to simplify the first few sliders

[normal]
00:31:186 - custom break snapping mod

00:57:852 (1,2,1,3) - visual spacing plz

01:12:724 (2,3,4) - pretty noticeable ds change.
[easy]
00:39:391 (3,1) - try to avoid having reverses covered up even for a bit like this. turn 1 to go the other way

00:57:340 (3) - make it a circle. this many sliders in a row is pretty hard for a noob.

[hitsounds]
overall your hitsounding could be a lot more interesting than it is right now. i know you're a bit inexperienced so i'm not asking for complex multiple sample kalibe pho pkk style hitsounding but try to use some soft whistles to highlight the melodies you're following, maybe drum claps /finishes on the louder deep drums, etc etc. atm it's just normal clap and finish which is extremely lackluster. let me know if you want some help with this.

also i recommend using soft sampleset for the entire map, normal is so freaking loud and intrusive lol

also sry for super late
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Naotoshi wrote:

[insane]
00:02:981 (2,3) - sounds like u should ctrl g the rhythm then stack 2 on 3 head. fits better wwith the low instrument imo ctrl-g would put weird emphasis on the blue tick, and i think the white tick is more important, i changed it so that the 00:03:237 (3,4) are more prominent though

00:48:109 (3,4,5) - this looks a bit cramped, can you spaced 5 a bit more out? and maybe move 3-4 a bit apart too fixed

01:03:751 (1,2,3,4,5) - these sliders don't really match together too well. can you try to make a more cohesive pattern? try to keep the visual spacings equal so it looks more organized. changed, hopefully they look better now

01:15:546 (5) - again i suggest a click on the white tick here, the sound is pretty noticeable imo. and could be nice way to break up the drop in rhythm density caused by all the 1/1 sliders xd changed and added a triple leading into 01:16:315 (1) for more emphasis

01:24:391 (5) - maybe you could separate this note a bit more? like a small angle change + jump or something oo i like that

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9354057

[hard]
00:20:929 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is a bit long of a string of 1/4, can you try and add a 1/2 gap or two in there. maybe on the less important vocals changed

00:36:570 (4) - a triple into 1/2 slider makes sense here with the vocals, could be cool. changed

00:40:673 (1,2,3,1) - visual spacing plz.. i want to murder me from 5 months ago hoyl
actually all around the diff, there's like random tiny visual spacings after normally spaced patterns. try and find some and make them more equal, it'll make the map as a whole look a bit nicer. aaaaaaa i think i got it all

01:22:724 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - a bit too hard imo. try to simplify the first few sliders nerfed the last few sliders, hope that works as well

[normal]
00:31:186 - custom break snapping mod i dont even remember putting that there, but now its on all diffs xd

00:57:852 (1,2,1,3) - visual spacing plz kms

01:12:724 (2,3,4) - pretty noticeable ds change. fixed
[easy]
00:39:391 (3,1) - try to avoid having reverses covered up even for a bit like this. turn 1 to go the other way fixed

00:57:340 (3) - make it a circle. this many sliders in a row is pretty hard for a noob. changed

[hitsounds]
overall your hitsounding could be a lot more interesting than it is right now. i know you're a bit inexperienced so i'm not asking for complex multiple sample kalibe pho pkk style hitsounding teach me to hitsound like fort plz but try to use some soft whistles to highlight the melodies you're following, maybe drum claps /finishes on the louder deep drums, etc etc. atm it's just normal clap and finish which is extremely lackluster. let me know if you want some help with this. i finished hitsounding on insane but its currently 136am and im tired so ill finish the rest in the morning, hopefully its good enough now EDIT: finished hitsounds on all diffs

also i recommend using soft sampleset for the entire map, normal is so freaking loud and intrusive lol changed

also sry for super late meh, i waited 5 months i can wait a few more weeks
Ty!
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Little yeast of the world
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yeast
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Your map is not timed correctly
Adding 8 to the offset, 425 sounds much better to me

General
The default hitclap really does not suit at all. Add this hitsounds to your beatmap folder, then change all of your map's timing points to use soft-custom1 (SC1) https://puu.sh/ybiIM/b14782eee4.wav
It will take 5 minutes, and improve your map dramatically. Hitsounds will be a bit broken in some places on the lower diffs, but that's fixable. I'd suggest removing claps where there are no snares, and adding more whistles to follow the main synth melody


01:23:751 (1,2,3,4,5) - Add claps around this area after you add the sample
00:32:468 (1,2,3) - delete claps from existence here

Top diff
01:00:418 (3,4) - 4 is under emphasised, no angle/spacing emphasis was used compared to others.
01:21:187 (4) - Moving the tail downwards will make it so there's equal distance between 01:20:674 (2) - and 01:20:930 (3) -

Hard
00:34:263 (3) - 00:36:314 (3) - 00:38:365 (3) - etc. dude why is there a finish
Can you make sure that all diffs hitsounds are consistent / the same
01:19:391 (4,5,1) - Compare distance spacing here. 5 has large spacing, 1 has small, but emphasis should be swapped so 5 is small 1 is big.

Easy
I'd suggest to use the sample set I linked above and make it a slider tick, it will map many of the unmapped snares well.
01:11:955 (1) - Avoid using complicated slider shapes on an easy
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