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SevenFrenzy wrote:

I'm also gonna mod this map ;)
Insane
00:36:667 (6) - Probably just me but that sounds out of beat. It's following the background instrument since i thought the vocals would be awkward to map/play
00:44:872 (6) - Same here.
00:48:974 (6) - Same here.

AND THAT WAS ALL I FOUND. Nice!

Hard
00:09:487 (4) - I feel like that reverse ruins the flow. :?:Flipped it
00:24:231 (5) - Make the note longer. Up to 00:25:000 Changed
01:22:179 (1) - Make the spinner end at 01:24:3359. I like how it ends at the same time as the drums

Not bad!

Normal

Ooooooh no issues from what I can see. :O ty :O

Not a bad map at all. Hope this helped. Good luck! Thank you!
Also sorry but im probably not gonna accept GD's, i wanna see if i can get a set ranked with just my own diffs :)
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Q

[Insane]
00:01:410 (3,4,5) - This makes difficult reading since this part has same DS with 00:00:641 (2,3) -
00:18:846 (1,2,3) - ^
00:38:590 - 00:38:846 - should be clickable since this part has voval beat.

GL
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Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[Insane]
00:01:410 (3,4,5) - This makes difficult reading since this part has same DS with 00:00:641 (2,3) - Increased spacing on 00:00:641 (2,3)
00:18:846 (1,2,3) - ^ Fixed
00:38:590 - 00:38:846 - should be clickable since this part has voval beat. Remapped cause of multiple mentions

GL
Ty!
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Hey there! M4M from



[Insane]
00:04:231 (7) - CTRL+G would make this slider less awkward to play~
00:23:718 (3) - CTRL+G for a better flow?
00:47:820 (2,3,4) - This pattern could look nicer~

01:03:205 (3,4,5,6) - This doesn't play so well imo. How about arranging them like this?

01:03:718 (7) - NC
01:15:000 (4) - Slider end isn't stacked properly :x

[Hard]
00:06:282 (5,1) - Not sure about this jump. Seems a bit harsh for a hard. Maybe decrase the spacing just a little bit?
00:08:333 (6,1) - ^
00:40:641 (5) - NC... after that remove the NC here 00:41:410 (1) - add a new one here 00:42:436 (6) - and then remove the NC here 00:43:461 (1) ... fits the Vocals better imo.
01:22:179 (1) - A Drum finish here would be quite nice!

[Normal]
00:06:795 (2) - I know that the slider end follows the electric guitar sound-thingy. However, since it ends on a blue tick it makes the following slider a bit awkward to hit. How about something like this?


Well, that's all.
Keep in mind that these are just suggestions!

Good luck!
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Smoothie wrote:

Hey there! M4M from



[Insane]
00:04:231 (7) - CTRL+G would make this slider less awkward to play~ CTRL + G'd 00:03:846 (6) instead
00:23:718 (3) - CTRL+G for a better flow? Gonna keep it how it is cause of slider leniency and i like the little back and forth
00:47:820 (2,3,4) - This pattern could look nicer~ Hmm it was supposed to be a climbing ladder thing but i like what you have there better

01:03:205 (3,4,5,6) - This doesn't play so well imo. How about arranging them like this? Changed

01:03:718 (7) - NC Crap
01:15:000 (4) - Slider end isn't stacked properly :xChanged :x

[Hard]
00:06:282 (5,1) - Not sure about this jump. Seems a bit harsh for a hard. Maybe decrase the spacing just a little bit? Nerfed
00:08:333 (6,1) - ^ ^
00:40:641 (5) - NC... after that remove the NC here 00:41:410 (1) - add a new one here 00:42:436 (6) - and then remove the NC here 00:43:461 (1) ... fits the Vocals better imo. Gonna keep it how it is since i've just been doing NC every bar, except i added NC at 00:40:641 (1) to emphasize it
01:22:179 (1) - A Drum finish here would be quite nice! I suck at hitsounding xd

[Normal]
00:06:795 (2) - I know that the slider end follows the electric guitar sound-thingy. However, since it ends on a blue tick it makes the following slider a bit awkward to hit. How about something like this? Changed


Well, that's all.
Keep in mind that these are just suggestions!

Good luck! TY! I'll get on your mod as soon as i can
posted
Hello you asking me to do a HM (hitsound modding) from my queue for your beatmap right ?
ofc I already check it. and i dont see any problem with your hitsound tho. everything is fine except for me is too loud . i guess you have to lower the volume.

so......no Kudos please :)
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-Aerith- wrote:

Hello you asking me to do a HM (hitsound modding) from my queue for your beatmap right ?
ofc I already check it. and i dont see any problem with your hitsound tho. everything is fine except for me is too loud . i guess you have to lower the volume.

so......no Kudos please :)
Thanks for checking it over for me! I'll lower it a bit
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Short NM.

[Hard]
-00:01:410 (3,4) - Make the spacing between extended sliders smaller. Currently the spacing between this and a normal 1/2 gap is the same. This happens multiple times in the map
-01:10:641 (5,6,7,8,9) - Clean out this shape so it looks like a perfect star. Use the Polygon Creation tool if you have to
-01:12:692 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same as above

[Insane]
-Again, spacing is very high and time between them is very low here: 00:42:436 (3,4).

Sorry for the length of this mod. Ignore the kudosu, please.
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LimePixel wrote:

Short NM.

[Hard]
-00:01:410 (3,4) - Make the spacing between extended sliders smaller. Currently the spacing between this and a normal 1/2 gap is the same. This happens multiple times in the map Made the 1/2 beat gaps bigger
-01:10:641 (5,6,7,8,9) - Clean out this shape so it looks like a perfect star. Use the Polygon Creation tool if you have to
-01:12:692 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same as above I prefer how they look now, and they are perfectly symmetrical anyways

[Insane]
-Again, spacing is very high and time between them is very low here: 00:42:436 (3,4). The slider leniency let's them play as smaller jumps

Sorry for the length of this mod. Ignore the kudosu, please. No problem! Everything helps!
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hello!

[insane]
00:10:897 -
01:11:410 -

your rhythm density is completely backwards lol

anyway

the rhythm in the intro is okay, i think would be better to go all in on following the 00:05:513 (3,4) - this instrument. a lot of the 1/4 feels unneeded to me cuz of how calm the song is

00:12:179 (7,8,9,10) - something something you are not hanzer
there isnt really a reason to use something this uncomfortable here imo.

00:12:820 (2,3,4,5,6) - on patterns like these, using a more consistent visual spacing helps it look more organized

00:33:461 (2) - this rhythm feels really lame to play. considering that this is a pretty intense part in the song, having a long held out slider lowering the density this much is kinda lame imo.

and then 00:34:231 (3) - here you're following the vocals with the previous slider but then 00:34:231 (3,4) - go off of the vocals randomly

00:35:256 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:33:205 (1,2) - are a call-and-response structure in the song, so it should probably be mapped more similarly since theyre so related by the song.

00:36:282 (5) - this type of note really detracts from the rhythm of the map since you're using sliders for vocals and suddenly its a slider not on a vocal

00:37:308 (1,2) - these sliders don't really relate to each other too well. considering that they are so prominent in the song, you'd want to make them look nice together

the same rhythm issues kinda repeat through this entire section

01:04:743 (3) - o.0
shouldnt there be an object at 01:05:769 -

01:08:590 (2,3) - this is really bad cuz its the first time 3/4 jump out of a slider to a circle is ever used and its literally the biggest jump in the map so far
also i really don't think the 3/4s with jumps fit here at all. it puts a lot of emphasis on notes like 01:12:436 (2) - which are totally not important in the song

speaking of 1/4 jumps shouldnt there be one here 01:15:000 (4,5) - lol

idk the entire kiai feels reaaaaaaaaally forced and overspaced to me. this song is 117 bpm. there's no reason to be forcing massive fullscreen jumps on it.
since you did, there isnt any emphasis other than the extended sliders; stuff like 01:19:359 (5,6,7,1) - which has a clear up and down in intensity is completely and utterly ignored since it all plays exactly the same.

01:22:692 (2,3,4,5,6) - these are also kinda weird, i mean you're following an ostinato that's been going on for the entire song, but its the only time you ever really follow it in the kiai. and then you ignore the very clear drum rhythm as well by just putting a 1/4 burst

[]
yea, all in all your mapping still needs work before going for ranked; pm me in game if you have questions about this mod
posted

Naotoshi wrote:

hello!

[insane]
00:10:897 -
01:11:410 -

your rhythm density is completely backwards lol :x

anyway

the rhythm in the intro is okay, i think would be better to go all in on following the 00:05:513 (3,4) - this instrument. a lot of the 1/4 feels unneeded to me cuz of how calm the song is Changed, but now the verse feels even more overmapped than it did before, not sure how to change it

00:12:179 (7,8,9,10) - something something you are not hanzer It's not a phase DAD
there isnt really a reason to use something this uncomfortable here imo. Changed into regular ol' streams

00:12:820 (2,3,4,5,6) - on patterns like these, using a more consistent visual spacing helps it look more organized fixed

00:33:461 (2) - this rhythm feels really lame to play. considering that this is a pretty intense part in the song, having a long held out slider lowering the density this much is kinda lame imo. Replaced with sliders

and then 00:34:231 (3) - here you're following the vocals with the previous slider but then 00:34:231 (3,4) - go off of the vocals randomly Remapped

00:35:256 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:33:205 (1,2) - are a call-and-response structure in the song, so it should probably be mapped more similarly since theyre so related by the song. Both now follow the same rhythm choice

00:36:282 (5) - this type of note really detracts from the rhythm of the map since you're using sliders for vocals and suddenly its a slider not on a vocal Changed to a circle

00:37:308 (1,2) - these sliders don't really relate to each other too well. considering that they are so prominent in the song, you'd want to make them look nice together They should be more aesthetically pleasing now

the same rhythm issues kinda repeat through this entire section Basically remapped the whole section to fit with the vocals

01:04:743 (3) - o.0
shouldnt there be an object at 01:05:769 - oh shit i didnt think the change in pitch was so distinct

01:08:590 (2,3) - this is really bad cuz its the first time 3/4 jump out of a slider to a circle is ever used and its literally the biggest jump in the map so far OH that was completely unintentional
also i really don't think the 3/4s with jumps fit here at all. it puts a lot of emphasis on notes like 01:12:436 (2) - which are totally not important in the song Gonna keep the ones that emphasize certain notes

speaking of 1/4 jumps shouldnt there be one here 01:15:000 (4,5) - lol I'm bad lol

idk the entire kiai feels reaaaaaaaaally forced and overspaced to me. this song is 117 bpm. there's no reason to be forcing massive fullscreen jumps on it.
since you did, there isnt any emphasis other than the extended sliders; stuff like 01:19:359 (5,6,7,1) - which has a clear up and down in intensity is completely and utterly ignored since it all plays exactly the same. No excuse for the up and downs, I'm looking back at that and wondering why i mapped it like that, but for the actual spacing, I was hoping to space it out in order to make up for the lack of rhythm density compared to the other parts

01:22:692 (2,3,4,5,6) - these are also kinda weird, i mean you're following an ostinato that's been going on for the entire song, but its the only time you ever really follow it in the kiai. and then you ignore the very clear drum rhythm as well by just putting a 1/4 burst I'm a little confused by this,
since the 1/4 burst is supposed to be representing the drum rhythm


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yea, all in all your mapping still needs work before going for ranked; pm me in game if you have questions about this mod I was waiting for someone to tell me that
Now THIS is the mod I was waiting for, thank you!
I've attempted to apply everything, and I ended up basically remapping the entire end and middle section, will upload the remapped version tomorrow when i feel happy with the end section.
Not sure if I should continue trying to rank this or if i should jump ship :thinking:
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Well, in order to rank this you'll need a lot of remapping lol which it seems like you got started on. Personally, I'd decide based on how much you like the song; if you really like it, I suggest practicing with other maps so that you don't get sick of the song or tunnel vision on one mapping concept for it. There's no problem with "jumping ship" to practice mapping and improving with many different songs and then returning once you can rank stuff.
posted
well so do i still need to mod this or should i wait till u remapped
posted

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

well so do i still need to mod this or should i wait till u remapped
hmm i remapped the insane but im gonna say wait to mod it, since im still not happy with the hard difficulty. I'll forum pm you once I'm done with remapping the hard if that's alright

edit: well i remapped everything so mod away!
posted
I am back again! (For some reason)

I like your map so much that I kept playing it a few times. DO YOU WANT THE VIDEO FOR YOUR BACKGROUND? Just asking. :)

THX!
posted
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:12:692 - undermapped, this should be mapped since its a strong sound
  2. 00:33:205 - 00:35:256 (1) - 00:43:461 (1) - this should be a kick slider either to stay consistent with 00:33:461 (2,3,4) - since ur all following the vocal
  3. 00:36:795 (7,1) - overlap, avoid it
  4. 00:55:513 (1) - make the sliderbody stack with 00:55:256 (4) - sliderend would be better
  5. 01:00:385 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8433098, this would be better imo since it dont overlap with the slider 00:59:615 (1) -
  6. 01:05:128 - make this clickable since yea ur following the vocal at this part so this should be a sliderhead or sth
  7. 01:17:564 (4) - i would prefer stack with sldierend instead since it cleaner to look
  8. 01:23:974 - u could make the spacing bigger here since the snare is quite intense, make the spacing bigger make more sense here
  • [Hard]
  1. 00:07:949 (4,5) - the spacing change to intense here, since it a hard diff, move to stack with 00:07:179 (2) - sliderend
  2. 00:11:154 (3,4) - inconsistent spacing
  3. 00:12:692 - 00:16:795 - 00:20:897 - 00:25:000 - same again u miss a strong sound here
  4. 00:47:308 (8,3) - 00:45:000 (4,6) - 00:51:410 (1,3) - 00:57:820 (1) - avoid overlap
  5. well avoid overlaps in hard diff, since its ar isnt high, so overlaps sometimes might cause misread and hard to read, so u better avoid those
  6. 00:08:590 - i dont agree u use the same concept as insane diff, since there are differnet difficulties, i suggest u can stack all of the 1/4 like 00:09:487 (4,5) - , 00:10:128 (7,8) - etc
posted
lol you need combo colors xd
[Insane]
  1. 00:12:692 - sounds odd when you just skip only the strong beat
  2. 00:33:205 (1) - 00:35:256 (1) - 00:43:461 (1) - you follow all the vocals with kicksliders but dont have a kicksliders on these because theyre the big beats?
    i think thats why but thats not a very good reason to just not follow the precedent you set.
  3. 00:36:538 (6,7,8,1,2) - the aesthetics here are very messy because of the 00:36:795 (7,1) - irregular spacing between these two objects.
  4. 00:46:026 (2,4) - avoid the overlap here
  5. 01:03:718 (1,2,3) - even though these vocals are two different rhythms theyre mapped the same way, completely skipping big beats in the first two on the white ticks.

[Hard]
  1. 00:08:333 (5,1) - more spacing between these two since a very big transition here with a cymbal emphasis on 1.
  2. 00:12:692 - 00:16:795 - 00:20:897 - 00:25:000 - adding a hit circle here would not skip a big white beat for basically no reason imo, even if your solely following vocals, if you can get a big beat in while still keeping focus on the main instrument it would be good.
  3. 00:47:308 (8,3) - ruins the precedent in aesthetics as before you kept them orderly but here its messy with both the slider start and end overlapping the other slider, why not just stack the start of 3 to the end of 8.
  4. 00:57:308 (4,1) - same here, why not stack either the start of 1 to the start of 4 or end of 1 to the start of 4 and blanket slider 1 to the end of 3.
  5. 01:05:128 - you have been faithfully following vocals for the entire song but then skip one here? i think it would be fine like insane difficulty to have a 3/4 slider repeat. (have it end on the next blue tick with the vocal then have a repeat)
  6. 01:22:179 (1) - dont really agree with just completely skipping all of the drum beats and everything else in the background to just have a spinner for the vocal. id suggest following that.
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SevenFrenzy wrote:

I am back again! (For some reason)

I like your map so much that I kept playing it a few times.Thank you! Hopefully I can improve enough to where this is rankable. DO YOU WANT THE VIDEO FOR YOUR BACKGROUND? Just asking. :)YES PLEASE I DONT KNOW HOW TO GET THE VIDEO lol ty

THX!

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

  • [Insane]
  1. 00:12:692 - undermapped, this should be mapped since its a strong sound Added a note to lead into the slider
  2. 00:33:205 - 00:35:256 (1) - 00:43:461 (1) - this should be a kick slider either to stay consistent with 00:33:461 (2,3,4) - since ur all following the vocal Changed
  3. 00:36:795 (7,1) - overlap, avoid it Fixed
  4. 00:55:513 (1) - make the sliderbody stack with 00:55:256 (4) - sliderend would be better Fixed
  5. 01:00:385 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8433098, this would be better imo since it dont overlap with the slider 00:59:615 (1) - I agree
  6. 01:05:128 - make this clickable since yea ur following the vocal at this part so this should be a sliderhead or sth Changed
  7. 01:17:564 (4) - i would prefer stack with sldierend instead since it cleaner to look Changed
  8. 01:23:974 - u could make the spacing bigger here since the snare is quite intense, make the spacing bigger make more sense here Increased the spacing leading into it and the burst itself
  • [Hard]
  1. 00:07:949 (4,5) - the spacing change to intense here, since it a hard diff, move to stack with 00:07:179 (2) - sliderend changed
  2. 00:11:154 (3,4) - inconsistent spacing Changed it to a stack anyways
  3. 00:12:692 - 00:16:795 - 00:20:897 - 00:25:000 - same again u miss a strong sound here Added lead ins for all of them, extended the last slider
  4. 00:47:308 (8,3) - 00:45:000 (4,6) - 00:51:410 (1,3) - 00:57:820 (1) - avoid overlap Changed as many overlaps as i could find
  5. well avoid overlaps in hard diff, since its ar isnt high, so overlaps sometimes might cause misread and hard to read, so u better avoid those
  6. 00:08:590 - i dont agree u use the same concept as insane diff, since there are differnet difficulties, i suggest u can stack all of the 1/4 like 00:09:487 (4,5) - , 00:10:128 (7,8) - etc Changed them into stacks

Aeril wrote:

lol you need combo colors xd o crud added on the hard dff, will add on the others later but i'm out of time for now
[Insane]
  1. 00:12:692 - sounds odd when you just skip only the strong beat The original intent was to just go ham following the vocals, but I agree it's really awkward not having something there. Fixed
  2. 00:33:205 (1) - 00:35:256 (1) - 00:43:461 (1) - you follow all the vocals with kicksliders but dont have a kicksliders on these because theyre the big beats?
    i think thats why but thats not a very good reason to just not follow the precedent you set. Ya that was the original idea, I've changed them to kicksliders with different slider shapes from the rest of the pattern
  3. 00:36:538 (6,7,8,1,2) - the aesthetics here are very messy because of the 00:36:795 (7,1) - irregular spacing between these two objects. Fixed
  4. 00:46:026 (2,4) - avoid the overlap here Rotated the pattern
  5. 01:03:718 (1,2,3) - even though these vocals are two different rhythms theyre mapped the same way, completely skipping big beats in the first two on the white ticks. Changed

[Hard]
  1. 00:08:333 (5,1) - more spacing between these two since a very big transition here with a cymbal emphasis on 1. Increased spacing,
    not sure if it's ok that the 1/2 gap and 1/4 gap are basically the same size now though
  2. 00:12:692 - 00:16:795 - 00:20:897 - 00:25:000 - adding a hit circle here would not skip a big white beat for basically no reason imo, even if your solely following vocals, if you can get a big beat in while still keeping focus on the main instrument it would be good. Added
  3. 00:47:308 (8,3) - ruins the precedent in aesthetics as before you kept them orderly but here its messy with both the slider start and end overlapping the other slider, why not just stack the start of 3 to the end of 8. Stacked, may change it to the end of 3 stacking the end of 8 if the gap between 8 and 1 is too big
  4. 00:57:308 (4,1) - same here, why not stack either the start of 1 to the start of 4 or end of 1 to the start of 4 and blanket slider 1 to the end of 3.
  5. 01:05:128 - you have been faithfully following vocals for the entire song but then skip one here? i think it would be fine like insane difficulty to have a 3/4 slider repeat. (have it end on the next blue tick with the vocal then have a repeat) Oh crap i missed that when remapping most of it, changed
  6. 01:22:179 (1) - dont really agree with just completely skipping all of the drum beats and everything else in the background to just have a spinner for the vocal. id suggest following that. Mapped it
Thanks everyone for the feedback!
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Good anime.

General

- The song name is actually "gravityWall" according to the MAL page , kinda surprised previous modders didn't notice.

- Audio bitrate is too high according to AiMod. I still think its BS but you need to lower the audio bitrate to 192kbps. I'd tell you how but I evidently still haven't figured it out.

- The Hard diff has a different Red Line timing point than the other two diffs.

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- I noticed while playing through, you have multiple gaps that are mapped the same visually but have different timing between the notes

- The rhythm density is off in this map too. The rather calm first part is mapped a lot more dense than the second half and Kiai

- -Speaking on the Kiai, its entirely 1/1 slider, note, 1/1 slider, note repeated. The slider art is neat but is there any way you could put a little variance in here?

00:21:923 (3,1,2) - The stacking here is a little ugly. 1 Isn't quite stacked on the start of 3 and 2 is overlapping kinda ugly (and also the blanket is a bit off at the bottom)

00:43:461 (1,1) - Even with the NC, this being mapped almost the same visually as 00:41:410 (1,2) - threw me off while playtesting. Mind you this isn't a difficult map by any means, but sightreading I could see how people could misinterpret that.

01:22:179 (1) - Think this should end on the blue tic. The white tic seems off.

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Hard & Insane

01:06:026 - I'd suggest putting a spinner here just so theres one in the diff. Kinda fits imo. Can't do this on the normal though due to recovery time needed.


Map is pretty interesting overall. GL going forward with this.
posted
o/ quick check from #modreqs
00:10:385 (6,1,4) - a very obvious overlap
00:25:000 - a rather important sound, you should add a circle
00:32:436 (1) - I think ctrl+G is better for the flow
00:39:359 - missed sound there (I mean you put a sound there 00:40:385 (2) - so you should put one here too 00:39:359 - )
01:01:410 (4,1) - fix blanket
01:03:718 (4,1) - make a bigger gap between these objects so it can be better in a visual way
BTW I think you use too many NCs, consider lowering the amount of them

Good luck :)!
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