Thanks for the mod ~DendyMudak wrote:
Hi
Mod requested by Loreley(зачем)00:01:050 (1) - most of your sliders are connected to each other which making it very good aesthetics, but the beginning of the map seems for little bit out of the place, I can suggest you make connection between first slider and this 00:01:459 (2) slider for better looking well the blanket connects them - not really less than lots of other patterns tho^^
00:02:140 (4,1) - ugly overlap, you can try to make the 1/2 slider go inside of the 1/1, it will have a better look and also will have a change to this
00:01:868 (3,4,5) boring-shape 1/2 slidersnice idea
00:28:868 (1,3) - you have very low amount of overlaps which can make them attractive to look, most of them are connections between 1/2 to emphasis vocal or chorus. Try to make blanket to not breaking this concept i get your concerns but i already kinda blanket this slider this putting it exat in the middle of 00:28:050 (1,2,3) - . there isnt really a way to blanket this without ruining flow imo
00:30:231 (5,6) - seems random for me, any explanation why it has such a large spacing? uhhhh - the 6 slipped i guess
00:40:731 (1) - shape seems messy for me, I can see that it's trying to express the chorus, but can u at least change a shape? looks nicer now
00:41:140 (1,2) - better to make them the same, will have a better look at the map couldnt made that b4 cause of space problems - now the problems are gone tho so fixed^^
01:53:686 (6) - maybe NC? Vocal changed i only use NC's for the loud drums - would be inconsistend when i would use it for the vocal ~
02:03:640 (1,1) - while playing this stand out as a spike for me, it's very unusual when the map gets first 1/4 which can be expected as a 1/2 slider, player might drop the combo or just lose concentration. I suggest its just better to make it as a triple to make it more appropriate i think its ok here - a triple would just stand out here (expecially cause i dont really express intense vocals as circles)
02:27:504 (1,2,3) - this slider have connections between each other, this one, not 02:28:322 (1,2,3,1,2), try to make them stand out, as they important too uhhmm - see them as 2 groups (with each 2 measures) 1st group (stacked): 02:26:686 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - - 2nd group (unstacked): 02:28:322 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - (like this there is structure)
02:38:140 (1) - perfect thanks^^
03:17:959 (2,3) - there is no connection between sliders, 03:23:140 (1,2,3) - but there is i dont really think there is no connection with the sliders (it isnt just so obvious): -all slider going in the same direction, - all are curved, - if you put 2 and 3 together -> it has the same shape as slider 1
03:45:231 (1) - bad shape, try to make it better visually fixed (still ugly tho lmao)00:16:595 (4) - I suggest you can make reverse sliders stand out as they have very specific sound on them, also most of the sliders at the map trying to express the song, so why don't change make this slider more special? Example
00:19:868 (4) - ^ why not - i like my curves
00:32:959 (4) - vocal pulls itself, maybe change it to the slider? i put in filler rythm there
00:34:595 (2,3) - there were no overlaps in a beginning at all, it does not look pretty for the whole map changed it
00:35:413 (1,2,3) - ^ now with new intensity coming i let them be with rising intensity
00:40:322 (1,2,3,4) - here sliders are making connection between each other, but here don't 00:43:595 (1,2,3,4) why? uhh i wanted to connect them a bit - but i failed- ill made it better
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01:43:050 (3,2,3) - bad overlaps
01:50:686 (1,2) - fix blanket plz
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02:29:686 (5,6,1) - very uncomfortable movement for the Hard difficulty, most of the map not breaking flow so hard as this part, is just naturally hard to play well - its a triangle rotation 110 bpm singletap with following slider what even at first flows with the motion - i dont see really a problem there (i know where you getting at but i dont see this as a problem)
02:46:322 (1) - weird shape not my best one i need to admit - if i feel like it and/or another person is pointing that out ill ramke that slider ~Other difficulties generically looks fine for me, gl
