UNDEAD CORPORATION - Setsugetsu Ouka no Kuni

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Rhyth8
Hey, I love this map, so I'll shoot the star at this map! You're welcome in advance.
Mombei
Hi, from my modding queue :)

[Easy]
  1. 00:34:485 (3,4,5,6) - This rhythm structure is very different from what you used so far and I believe it's not fitting as much as the other patterns. I believe something like 00:22:485 (3,1) - or 00:08:303 (1,2) - would work much better
  2. 00:48:667 (2,3) - You should even out the spacing. Time-distance equality suggests you do. The slowing down doesn't happen until after the slider is actually clicked


This is a very simplistic map so I can't give very in-depth advice, I'm sorry

[Twin Normal]
  1. I believe this map is fundamentally flawed. You see, I feel like there's no criteria behind whether a piano sound gets a click or not. The rhythm structure isn't consistent. The only advice I can give you is to think up some criteria to take as reference and remap. If I said anything else it wouldn't make any sense after you changed everything. spacing was fine so you don't need to worry about that I guess.


[Complexion]
  1. 00:13:212 (1,2,1,2) - Here you change circular motion from the first 2 to the second 1, and then again on the second 2. This makes the emphasis on the first 1 much weaker. I suggest you use comfortable movement for the second 2. Of course, adjust the following patterns aswell.
  2. 00:51:940 (3) - for the "highest" diff in the set, you could map this sound more thoroughly



This map seems mostly fine, it might be a little controvertial because of the spread, but something like this has happened already so I don't think it will cause you too many problems.

I hope I could help.

Thanks for using my queue! :)
Topic Starter
Nyantiaz

Mombei wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue :)

[Easy]
  1. 00:34:485 (3,4,5,6) - This rhythm structure is very different from what you used so far and I believe it's not fitting as much as the other patterns. I believe something like 00:22:485 (3,1) - or 00:08:303 (1,2) - would work much better fixed
  2. 00:48:667 (2,3) - You should even out the spacing. Time-distance equality suggests you do. The slowing down doesn't happen until after the slider is actually clicked fixed


This is a very simplistic map so I can't give very in-depth advice, I'm sorry that's fine anything is appreciated!

[Twin Normal]
  1. I believe this map is fundamentally flawed. You see, I feel like there's no criteria behind whether a piano sound gets a click or not. The rhythm structure isn't consistent. The only advice I can give you is to think up some criteria to take as reference and remap. If I said anything else it wouldn't make any sense after you changed everything. spacing was fine so you don't need to worry about that I guess. i haven't really had anyone else come to me about problems, plus i think it's fine, but if more people come and say it's unrankable i'm go with my friend for a remap due to criteria


[Complexion]
  1. 00:13:212 (1,2,1,2) - Here you change circular motion from the first 2 to the second 1, and then again on the second 2. This makes the emphasis on the first 1 much weaker. I suggest you use comfortable movement for the second 2. Of course, adjust the following patterns aswell. i don't understand...
  2. 00:51:940 (3) - for the "highest" diff in the set, you could map this sound more thoroughly maybe.. but the hitsounds are okay so i'll keep them



This map seems mostly fine, it might be a little controvertial because of the spread, but something like this has happened already so I don't think it will cause you too many problems. :D

I hope I could help. you did!

Thanks for using my queue! :)no problem, and thank YOU for the mod!
seselis1
Hello there from #modreqs quick check
To begin with I think there are too many NCs, imao you should lower the amount of them so I'll try to explain this as much as I can, so try not to get confused:
00:01:758 (1) - let's say this is the most important sound so new combo only these sounds in the rest of the map. To be more precise new combo every third such an important sound like:
00:05:031 (3) - remove NC
00:08:303 (1) - good, that's the first important sound so leave NC
00:11:576 (4) - good, that's the second important sound so leave it not NC

00:13:212 (1) - not so important sound, remove NC
00:19:758 (1) - remove NC bc there's no important sound there
00:21:394 (2) - THIS is important sound so NC this instead
00:23:031 (1) - remove NC bc it's only the second important sound (I said every third not every important sound)
00:26:849 (1) - remove NC and 00:27:940 (2) - NC instead
00:32:849 (1) - remove NC
00:34:485 (3) - NC
00:37:758 (1) - again you should skip this and remove NC
00:41:031 (1) - and leave there NC
00:45:940 (1) - remove NC

Let's move on
00:09:940 (2) - it needs to be a blanket bc it looks bad in a visual way, ik it's hard bc of the ds but imao this should be fine https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8458903
if not, then remap this part
00:49:212 (3) - due to a slider velocity change there ds is ruined I suggest you to make it 1.00 instead of 0.75 bc Manipulating slider velocity is discouraged and then make it with normal ds again (in higher diffs it'd be fine tho)
GL! :)
Topic Starter
Nyantiaz

Rhyth8 wrote:

Hey, I love this map, so I'll shoot the star at this map! You're welcome in advance.
okay, your thank you is in this box
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Topic Starter
Nyantiaz

seselis1 wrote:

Hello there from #modreqs quick check waahoo
To begin with I think there are too many NCs, imao you should lower the amount of them so I'll try to explain this as much as I can, so try not to get confused: i get confused easy but i'll try lol
00:01:758 (1) - let's say this is the most important sound so new combo only these sounds in the rest of the map. To be more precise new combo every third such an important sound like:
00:05:031 (3) - remove NC fixed
00:08:303 (1) - good, that's the first important sound so leave NC
00:11:576 (4) - good, that's the second important sound so leave it not NC[/color] fixeddd
00:13:212 (1) - not so important sound, remove NC fixedddd
00:19:758 (1) - remove NC bc there's no important sound there fixeddddd
00:21:394 (2) - THIS is important sound so NC this instead fixedddddd
00:23:031 (1) - remove NC bc it's only the second important sound (I said every third not every important sound) fixeddddddd
00:26:849 (1) - remove NC and 00:27:940 (2) - NC instead fixedddddddd
00:32:849 (1) - remove NC fixeddddddddd
00:34:485 (3) - NC fixedddddddddd
00:37:758 (1) - again you should skip this and remove NC fixeddddddddddd
00:41:031 (1) - and leave there NC fixedddddddddd
00:45:940 (1) - remove NC fixeddddddddddddddddd

Let's move on yay :D
00:09:940 (2) - it needs to be a blanket bc it looks bad in a visual way, ik it's hard bc of the ds but imao this should be fine https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8458903
if not, then remap this part i think it fixed this is so frustrating because over a million people tell me this D:
00:49:212 (3) - due to a slider velocity change there ds is ruined I suggest you to make it 1.00 instead of 0.75 bc Manipulating slider velocity is discouraged and then make it with normal ds again (in higher diffs it'd be fine tho) other people told me leave the SV in .75 so if i get more complaints i'll do it
GL! :)THANKS! :)
Kurai
[General]
- Since ByBy didn't directly participate in the set, you shouldn't have her name in the tags.
- 00:41:576 - is it normal that the storyboard gets all black here? It looks like it isn't finished yet.
- can you explain to me why you choose to name the last difficulty "Complexion", please?

[Twin Normal]
00:01:758 (2) - For the sake of consistency with the other difficulties, I think you should have a NC here and remove the NC on 00:03:394 (1) - .
Topic Starter
Nyantiaz

Kurai wrote:

[General]
- Since ByBy didn't directly participate in the set, you shouldn't have her name in the tags. I took mainly the mp3 and stuff from byby i feel like a bad person not including her in tags xd
- 00:41:576 - is it normal that the storyboard gets all black here? It looks like it isn't finished yet. yeah it's normal ;w;
- can you explain to me why you choose to name the last difficulty "Complexion", please? i wanted to choose a unique last difficulty name,
this is the one i liked the most


[Twin Normal]
00:01:758 (2) - For the sake of consistency with the other difficulties, I think you should have a NC here and remove the NC on 00:03:394 (1) - . fixed

Thanks!!
CutEddie
changed some slider shapes but tbh didn't remember about the hitsounds and idk how they were :<

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TitleUnicode:雪月桜花の国
Artist:UNDEAD CORPORATION
ArtistUnicode:UNDEAD CORPORATION
Creator:Nyantiaz
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Source:東方Project
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meii18
from my q

pale -suggestion
bold - should be considered

[general]
*shouldnt't the bg be touhou related? o_o
*totally agree with Kurai the sb looks like isn't finished yet
*uhm i did not even contributed to this map so better remove me from tags xD
*normal-sliderwhistle21.wav is unused actually you don't need to have it just select a slider's path and then add the hitwhistle that's all // SB\.DS_Store is unused and SB\circle.png is missing
*00:26:849 - please decrease the volume back to 30% having the volume raised to 40% sounds pretty ridiculous xd

[easy]
* the spacing in easy looks a bit...weird as the hitobjects are overlapping for no reason and it looks pretty sloopy tbh use 1.1x distance in this way they won't overlap themselves anymore
*00:00:667 (1,1) - the flow suddenly gets broken because the next hitobject was placed randomly which gave a pretty weird flow for improving the flow just move 00:01:758 (1) - to 229|85 so the cursor won't act so weird imo
*00:08:303 (1,2) - spacing uguuu
*00:09:940 (2) - add hitwhistle // 00:10:485 (3) - add hitwhistle on tail // 00:13:758 (2) - same on its tail and so on
*00:10:485 (3) - remove hitwhistle from its head // 00:36:122 (5) - remove hitclap from its tail // 00:47:576 (1) - remove hitwhistle from its head and add hitfinish etc.
*00:19:758 (1) - the new stanza isn't here tbh so remove the NC from this one and add it on 00:21:394 (2) - instead where the stanza is // 00:23:031 (1,2) - same and so on // 00:45:940 (1) - remove NC
*00:49:212 (3,4,5) - here you must add a NC as the timing is changing here so the NC would show you that the timing has just got changed
*00:51:940 (5) - add hitfinish since this is the final cymbal and don't forget to remove the hitclap afterwards

needs more work on aesthetics

[twin normal]
*AR: 3
*00:05:031 (4) - seems like its snapping is bugged better get rid of it
*00:09:940 (4,5) - the blanket looks pretty off in order to fix it just move 00:10:485 (5) - to 96|231
*00:21:394 (3) - remove hitfinish from its tail // 00:27:940 (2) - same
*00:24:667 (4) - tbh a kind of slider like this one does not even fit with the song itself it just got randomly mapped without making connection to the music a curved slider would make connection with the song much better than the current slider
*00:46:485 (2) - add hitwhistle on its head
*00:48:667 (1,2) - the NC isn't supposed to be here as the new stanza isn't here and it's on the next hitobjects so you have to swap the NCs
*00:49:212 (2) - imo would split this one into 2 circles so it would be easy for newbie players to click them even if the timing is getting changed here // 00:50:775 (1) - same and no hitfinish on 00:51:940 - ? ;w;

[complexion]
*AR: at least 4 or 5 if it's supposed to be a Hard diff
*00:50:775 (2,3) - put NC on these hitobjects as the player would be able to see that the timing has just got changed

sorry for my poor mod needs more work on hitsounds and a bit on aesthetics before pushing it forwards so it wouldn't hurt if you'll get more mods before rank
gl!
CutEddie

ByBy wrote:

from my q

[twin normal]
*AR: 3 lol I didn't notice Easy was AR2 too xd. Fixed
*00:05:031 (4) - seems like its snapping is bugged better get rid of it It used to be a 2/1 slider. Fixed
*00:09:940 (4,5) - the blanket looks pretty off in order to fix it just move 00:10:485 (5) - to 96|231 Fixed
*00:21:394 (3) - remove hitfinish from its tail // 00:27:940 (2) - same Both done
*00:24:667 (4) - tbh a kind of slider like this one does not even fit with the song itself it just got randomly mapped without making connection to the music a curved slider would make connection with the song much better than the current slider It wouldn't be like that if Nyan updated lol ¬¬. Already had people complaining about it and I changed it in my previous post, but apparently it wasn't updated yet lol. Changed
*00:46:485 (2) - add hitwhistle on its head Done
*00:48:667 (1,2) - the NC isn't supposed to be here as the new stanza isn't here and it's on the next hitobjects so you have to swap the NCs nice, didn't though of that. Done
*00:49:212 (2) - imo would split this one into 2 circles so it would be easy for newbie players to click them even if the timing is getting changed here // 00:50:775 (1) - same and no hitfinish on 00:51:940 - ? ;w; Applied the hitfinish but gonna keep the last slider as it is.

sorry for my poor mod needs more work on hitsounds and a bit on aesthetics before pushing it forwards so it wouldn't hurt if you'll get more mods before rank
gl!
It was helpful anyway! Thank you c:


osu file format v14

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Title:Setsugetsu Ouka no Kuni
TitleUnicode:雪月桜花の国
Artist:UNDEAD CORPORATION
ArtistUnicode:UNDEAD CORPORATION
Creator:Nyantiaz
Version:Twin Normal
Source:東方Project
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CircleSize:3.3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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F,0,1758,1894,1
S,0,1758,1894,0.2565482,0.284603
F,0,1894,2031,1
S,0,1894,2031,0.284603,0.333699
F,0,2031,2167,1,0
S,0,2031,2167,0.333699,0.3968222
F,0,2167,2303,0
S,0,2167,2303,0.3968222,0.424877
F,0,2303,2440,0
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F,0,5031,5167,1,0.9859726
S,0,5031,5167,0.2355069,0.4599454
F,0,5167,5303,0.9859726,0.4143561
S,0,5167,5303,0.4599454,0.6493149
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S,0,5303,5440,0.6493149
F,0,5440,5576,0.01106842,0.0286026
F,0,5576,5712,0.0286026,0.2074521
F,0,5712,5849,0.2074521,0.2109592
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2303,-100,3,1,21,15,0,0
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51940,1090.90909090909,3,1,21,15,1,0
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Combo1 : 255,192,0
Combo2 : 0,202,0
Combo3 : 18,124,255
Combo4 : 242,24,57

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120,112,3394,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Nyantiaz

ByBy wrote:

from my q k

pale -suggestion pale - me after seeing a bn lul
bold - should be considered alright! :D

[general]
*shouldnt't the bg be touhou related? o_o i mean this looks good to me owo
*totally agree with Kurai the sb looks like isn't finished yet i have to contact sidetail then ;w;
*uhm i did not even contributed to this map so better remove me from tags xD well i mean i used your timing and mp3 but i'll remove
*normal-sliderwhistle21.wav is unused actually you don't need to have it just select a slider's path and then add the hitwhistle that's all // SB\.DS_Store is unused and SB\circle.png is missing about the SB there was a little glitch i don't know how to fix D: and about the sliderwhistle like you said i don't really have to have it.. i think the hitsounds are good now ;w;
*00:26:849 - please decrease the volume back to 30% having the volume raised to 40% sounds pretty ridiculous xd i did 35 i just thought it could maybe use a volume increase since it's the preview time area

[easy]
* the spacing in easy looks a bit...weird as the hitobjects are overlapping for no reason and it looks pretty sloopy tbh use 1.1x distance in this way they won't overlap themselves anymore fixed?
*00:00:667 (1,1) - the flow suddenly gets broken because the next hitobject was placed randomly which gave a pretty weird flow for improving the flow just move 00:01:758 (1) - to 229|85 so the cursor won't act so weird imo i'm sorry i don't understand..
*00:08:303 (1,2) - spacing uguuu fixed in the first thing you said :D
*00:09:940 (2) - add hitwhistle // 00:10:485 (3) - add hitwhistle on tail // 00:13:758 (2) - same on its tail and so on fixed
*00:10:485 (3) - remove hitwhistle from its head // 00:36:122 (5) - remove hitclap from its tail // 00:47:576 (1) - remove hitwhistle from its head and add hitfinish etc. fixed
*00:19:758 (1) - the new stanza isn't here tbh so remove the NC from this one and add it on 00:21:394 (2) - instead where the stanza is // 00:23:031 (1,2) - same and so on // 00:45:940 (1) - remove NC fixed
*00:49:212 (3,4,5) - here you must add a NC as the timing is changing here so the NC would show you that the timing has just got changed fixed
*00:51:940 (5) - add hitfinish since this is the final cymbal and don't forget to remove the hitclap afterwards i don't know what you mean about the hitclap but the hitfinish fixed

[complexion]
*AR: at least 4 or 5 if it's supposed to be a Hard diff its not xd
*00:50:775 (2,3) - put NC on these hitobjects as the player would be able to see that the timing has just got changed fixed

sorry for my poor mod needs more work on hitsounds and a bit on aesthetics before pushing it forwards so it wouldn't hurt if you'll get more mods before rank
gl! thanks!
Namki
bub
21:13 Nyantiaz: hey Namki do you do v1 checks by any chance?
21:14 Namki: yes
21:14 Nyantiaz: are you open for one atm?
21:14 Namki: check = mod?
21:14 Nyantiaz: i dont know the word
21:14 Nyantiaz: like
21:15 Nyantiaz: when a bn checks the map and if it's good they bubble it
21:15 Nyantiaz: or they have to mod it
21:15 Nyantiaz: isn't that called a check?
21:15 Namki: ofc they have to
21:15 *Nyantiaz is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1312252 UNDEAD CORPORATION - Setsugetsu Ouka no Kuni]
21:15 Nyantiaz: xd
21:16 Namki: clicking sound do not fit at all
21:16 Namki: does not*, pardon
21:16 Nyantiaz: what the hitsounds?
21:16 Nyantiaz: i'm not the grammar nazi don't worry lol
21:16 Namki: I suppose
21:16 Namki: the hitnormal
21:16 Nyantiaz: oh
21:17 Nyantiaz: are the other hitsounds okay though?
21:17 Namki: just use soft hitnormal
21:17 Namki: like, name it "normal-hitnormal21"
21:17 Namki: and it would be much better
21:18 Nyantiaz: the default softhitnormal?
21:18 Namki: yea
21:18 Nyantiaz: ok one second :p
21:18 Nyantiaz: any other issues besides hitsounds?
21:20 Nyantiaz: you might have to REDL
21:20 Nyantiaz: alright, fixed the hitsounds
21:22 Namki: normal-sliderwhistle21.wav is unused
21:23 Namki: what is that hs
21:23 Namki: lo
21:23 Nyantiaz: i never even noticed sliderwhistle was there
21:23 Nyantiaz: i don't use sliderwhistles in hitsound what the heck
21:23 Nyantiaz: i think
21:23 Namki: also, entire sb folder seems to be unused
21:23 Nyantiaz: oh yeah i removed it recently, forgot to remove the folder
21:23 Nyantiaz: let me fix that holdup
21:24 Namki: 00:07:212 - pretty prominent sound
21:24 Namki: whistle or clap_
21:24 Namki: ?
21:24 Namki: finish or clap*
21:24 Nyantiaz: i put a clap instead
21:25 Nyantiaz: are you in medium or basic?
21:25 Nyantiaz: or is this just for general
21:25 Namki: general
21:25 Nyantiaz: alright, fixed that
21:25 Namki: 00:33:394 - same
21:26 Namki: also delete that finish from 00:52:212 (1) -
21:26 Namki: there's literally nothing
21:26 Namki: 00:57:394 - here
21:26 Namki: is the song
21:26 Nyantiaz: alright fixed that :D
21:26 Namki: what about kurai tho
21:26 Nyantiaz: was it only hitsound issues?
21:26 Nyantiaz: if so then i need to work on hitsounding lol
21:27 Namki: I'll bubble right now lo
21:27 Nyantiaz: i have a question btw
21:27 Nyantiaz: when i update does it remove the bubble? i know it's dumb but
21:27 Nyantiaz: i need to be safe lol
21:27 Namki: it does
21:28 Nyantiaz: ok let me update first
21:28 Namki: but you don't have to wait 24 hrs if changes were minor
21:28 Nyantiaz: i'm updating
21:28 Nyantiaz: wait what's this about 24 hours? lol i'm sorry
21:28 Namki: well
21:28 Namki: it must be 24 hrs between bubble and heart
21:28 *Nyantiaz is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1312253 UNDEAD CORPORATION - Setsugetsu Ouka no Kuni]
21:28 Nyantiaz: updated!
21:29 Nyantiaz: oh really? i never knew LOL
Topic Starter
Nyantiaz
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salchow
congratz with bub!!
sds_merlin
Congratz hope it gets ranked!
Topic Starter
Nyantiaz
thank you all! :D
edit: sorry cuteddie, i had to remove our diff due to some problems, and people if you want it download here
Gabe
rebubbled!

15:22 Nyantiaz: Hey Gabe are you free/open atm?
15:24 Gabe: yeah
15:24 Nyantiaz: i have a bubbled map (moddingv1)
15:24 *Nyantiaz is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1312253 UNDEAD CORPORATION - Setsugetsu Ouka no Kuni]
15:24 Nyantiaz: can you check if it's ready for qualify? and (maybe qualify coughcough)
15:25 Nyantiaz: xd
15:25 Gabe: lmao
15:25 Gabe: yeah I will check
15:25 Nyantiaz: ok thanks! :D
15:27 Gabe: my only concern with Basic is the new combos
15:27 Gabe: they are inconsistent
15:27 Nyantiaz: are they? o_o
15:27 Gabe: yeah lol
15:27 Nyantiaz: oh shoot i THINK i see what you mean
15:28 Gabe: 00:00:667 (1,1) - check moments like these
15:28 Nyantiaz: dangit i should've checked before talking with namki
15:28 Nyantiaz: i'm irresponible i_i
15:28 Gabe: then the consistency breaks on 00:26:849 (1,2) -
15:28 Gabe: lmao
15:28 Nyantiaz: well at the beginning it was just because the map just started
15:28 Nyantiaz: 00:26:849 (1,2) - this wasn't really intended for that same pattern
15:28 Gabe: yeah, I understood that
15:29 Gabe: if we follow what you did at first,
15:29 Nyantiaz: it can't be overlooked?;w;
15:29 Gabe: 00:11:576 (4) - this could be a new combo
15:30 Gabe: 00:13:212 (1) - and you delete the combo here
15:30 Gabe: 00:18:122 (4) - new combo
15:31 Gabe: 00:23:031 (1) - delete the nc
15:31 Nyantiaz: i see what you're saying...
15:31 Nyantiaz: so it can't be overlooked?
15:31 Nyantiaz: if so i can fix it and maybe you can bubble after? xd
15:31 Gabe: actually
15:31 Gabe: it's so minor I can qualify after
15:31 Gabe: so worries lmao
15:31 Nyantiaz: but if i update
15:31 Nyantiaz: won't the bubble pop?
15:31 Gabe: yeah<
15:31 Gabe: but it's okay
15:31 Gabe: that's the perks of mv1
15:31 Nyantiaz: oh ok so it's just NC issues in basic?
15:32 Gabe: yup
15:32 Nyantiaz: so i'll fix those
15:32 Nyantiaz: then you'll rebub and qualify?
15:32 Gabe: if you had unrankable issues, then I would need to rebubble
15:32 Gabe: which is not the case
15:32 Nyantiaz: ooooooooh
15:32 Nyantiaz: i understand now
15:32 Gabe: yeh :p
15:32 Nyantiaz: let me fix the NC issues quick gimme a sec lol
15:32 Gabe: alright!
15:32 Gabe: tell me when you're done
15:32 Gabe: I'll check the other diff
15:33 Nyantiaz: done XD
15:33 Nyantiaz: it was only 2/3 things lol
15:33 Gabe: okay, update so we see the changes
15:33 Gabe: :D
15:33 Nyantiaz: alright :D
15:34 Nyantiaz: updated! :D
15:34 *Nyantiaz is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1312252 UNDEAD CORPORATION - Setsugetsu Ouka no Kuni]
15:35 Nyantiaz: everything good?
15:35 Gabe: uh
15:35 Gabe: it's not really fixed
15:35 Gabe: lemme check again
15:36 Gabe: (I wasn't done pointing out ncs :p)
15:36 Nyantiaz: i fixed the few issues you sent xd
15:36 Nyantiaz: OH
15:36 Nyantiaz: i'm dumb lol
15:36 Gabe: you type so fast LMAO
15:36 Nyantiaz: yeah
15:36 Nyantiaz: i dont know why i do
15:36 Gabe: it's ok
15:36 Nyantiaz: or how XD
15:37 Nyantiaz: some people find me annoying cuz of how much i message/type ;p
15:37 Gabe: oh rip
15:37 Gabe: 00:24:667 (4) - nc
15:37 Gabe: 00:26:849 (1) - delete nc
15:37 Gabe: 00:27:940 (2) - nc
15:37 Gabe: 00:31:212 (4) - nc
15:37 Gabe: 00:32:849 (1) - delete nc
15:38 Gabe: 00:34:485 (3) - nc
15:38 Nyantiaz: this is in basic right
15:38 Nyantiaz: xd
15:38 Gabe: 00:44:303 (4) - nc
15:38 Gabe: yes
15:38 Nyantiaz: ok i did everything as you went along lol
15:38 Gabe: 00:49:212 (1) - this is an exeption to the nc because of the slowdown
15:38 Gabe: so that's good after
15:39 Nyantiaz: ok :D
15:39 Nyantiaz: any in Medium?
15:39 Gabe: checking that
15:39 Nyantiaz: k :p
15:41 *Gabe is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1312253 UNDEAD CORPORATION - Setsugetsu Ouka no Kuni [Medium]]
15:41 Gabe: 00:24:667 (5) - nc
15:41 Gabe: 00:26:849 (1) - delete nc
15:41 Gabe: 00:27:940 (3) - nc
15:42 Gabe: 00:50:775 (1) - you could move this circle two grids left
15:42 Gabe: looks a bit too close from the previous slider
15:42 Nyantiaz: ah
15:42 Nyantiaz: ok i did everything you said above
15:42 Nyantiaz: update?
15:43 Gabe: yup
15:43 Nyantiaz: alright, updated! :D
15:43 *Nyantiaz is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1312253 UNDEAD CORPORATION - Setsugetsu Ouka no Kuni]
15:44 Nyantiaz: sorry sorry sorry
15:44 Nyantiaz: accidentally closed osu
15:44 Nyantiaz: pretend that never happened lol
15:45 Gabe: lmao
15:45 Gabe: all good
15:45 Gabe: didn't see it
15:45 Nyantiaz: oh xd
15:45 Gabe: I'm just checking out settings
15:45 Nyantiaz: basically i was trying to click my chrome
15:45 Nyantiaz: and i ended up clicking the x at the top right of osu
15:45 Gabe: rip
15:45 Gabe: I do that too
15:46 Nyantiaz: lol
15:46 Nyantiaz: we all make mistakes :D
15:49 *Gabe is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1312252 UNDEAD CORPORATION - Setsugetsu Ouka no Kuni [Basic]]
15:49 Gabe: 00:36:122 (3,4) - if you are looking for consistent spacing, you can move these around
15:50 Nyantiaz: move it by how much :p
15:50 Nyantiaz: fun fact: i use default skin to edit lol
15:50 Gabe: same
15:50 Gabe: but like
15:50 Gabe: https://gabe.s-ul.eu/FMndQhN5
15:50 Gabe: just check out the coordinates
15:50 Gabe: it tells you how far the spacing is from the previous and the next
15:50 Gabe: objects
15:51 Nyantiaz: is it the prev next thing
15:51 Gabe: yeah
15:51 Gabe: the next object is at 1,15x
15:51 Gabe: while it is consistent on 1,08x most times
15:51 Nyantiaz: for me it's 1.14x
15:51 Gabe: if you click on (4), yes
15:51 Gabe: click on (3)
15:52 Nyantiaz: oh oops
15:52 Nyantiaz: what should the coordinates be at then?
15:53 Gabe: you can make it to whatever you want, actually.. just make the spacing consistent c:
15:54 Nyantiaz: how does Prev: 1.13x Next: 1.12x work?
15:55 Gabe: 00:36:122 (3) - x:364 y:88
15:55 Nyantiaz: actually changed Prev to 1.12x
15:56 Nyantiaz: oh ok
15:56 Gabe: 00:37:212 (4) - x:484 y:160
15:56 Gabe: 00:37:758 (1) - x:448 y:240
15:57 Nyantiaz: fixed that
15:57 Nyantiaz: oooooooh
15:57 Nyantiaz: i see what you mean now
15:57 Nyantiaz: sorry XD
15:57 Gabe: no problem :p
15:58 Nyantiaz: any other issues like that? ;w;
15:59 Gabe: nah
15:59 Nyantiaz: alright so update again? xd
15:59 Gabe: not yet, I need your opinion on settings
15:59 Nyantiaz: settings?
15:59 Gabe: yeah
15:59 Nyantiaz: ok lol
15:59 Gabe: like OD, AR
15:59 Nyantiaz: alright
16:00 Gabe: okay so, the song doesn't give much options to make variety of difficulties
16:00 Nyantiaz: definitely lol
16:00 Gabe: I saw the CS was 3.5 on basic and 3 on medium
16:00 Nyantiaz: it's the other way around
16:00 Nyantiaz: lol
16:00 Gabe: oops
16:00 Gabe: lol
16:00 Nyantiaz: XD
16:01 Gabe: true lol
16:01 Gabe: so like
16:01 Gabe: what do u think of making medium cs4?
16:01 Gabe: would it be too small to you?
16:01 Nyantiaz: uh
16:01 Nyantiaz: i wouldn't mind it
16:01 Nyantiaz: but it's technically kind of a normal
16:01 Nyantiaz: i'm up for it though
16:01 Gabe: yeah
16:02 Nyantiaz: alright so in medium i'll change to cs4
16:02 Gabe: perf
16:02 Nyantiaz: that's it for settings?
16:02 Gabe: tbh yeah
16:02 Nyantiaz: alright gonna update hold up

Mostly new combo stuffs and spacing consistency. Also made the CS smaller on Medium.
Topic Starter
Nyantiaz
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! IT'S HAPPENING!
nevermind afdsfsdf
Gabe
We will need to disqualify this shortly. I overlooked the files and I didn't see there was a storyboard line in the Medium difficulty.

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