Easy:
00:08:303 (1) - According to the ranking criteria you should avoid 1/1 sliders with multiple reverses
Storyboard:
The blacked intro and outro could need a bit stretching, because it would look better with a fully filled screen and a bit smoother transition could be needed, because new players could get suprisied. Also the frost and greyscale image need a bit adaption.
All in all it looked fine for me but it's also my first mod, hope I could help.
00:08:303 (1) - According to the ranking criteria you should avoid 1/1 sliders with multiple reverses
Storyboard:
The blacked intro and outro could need a bit stretching, because it would look better with a fully filled screen and a bit smoother transition could be needed, because new players could get suprisied. Also the frost and greyscale image need a bit adaption.
All in all it looked fine for me but it's also my first mod, hope I could help.