00:08:303 (1) - According to the ranking criteria you should avoid 1/1 sliders with multiple reverses fixed (i think)
The blacked intro and outro could need a bit stretching, because it would look better with a fully filled screen and a bit smoother transition could be needed, because new players could get suprisied. Also the frost and greyscale image need a bit adaption. i don't understand what you mean D: as for the black however i think it is fullscreen
All in all it looked fine for me but it's also my first mod, hope I could help. you did. thanks!