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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年12月11日 at 23:00:58

Artist: ave;new feat. Saori Sakura
Title: Vanille Rouge
Source: Fossette - Cafe au Le Ciel Bleu -
Tags: Kono Aozora ni Yakusoku wo Chocolat Parufue Parfait JauiPlaY GIGA siriru ruru bakaru S i R i R u
BPM: 117
Filesize: 23558kb
Play Time: 02:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.96 stars, 440 notes)
  2. JauiPlaY's Easy (1.22 stars, 102 notes)
  3. Normal (3.06 stars, 177 notes)
  4. S i R i R u's Hard (4.41 stars, 216 notes)


Download: ave;new feat. Saori Sakura - Vanille Rouge
Download: ave;new feat. Saori Sakura - Vanille Rouge (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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24th beatmap.

FOSSETTE Opening~

~Staff~
Easy: JauiPlaY
Normal: xier
Hard: S i R i R u
Insane: xier
Skin: sherrie__fay
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BPM killed my finger rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

(ノ◣д◢)ノ ┫:・'.::・┻┻:・'.::・
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音效的音色没有问题

finish切入太重大量使用的话听起来闷,把开头修饰了下……
clap感觉偏低,改了下音高

http://puu.sh/4zvS

edit:我刚发现现在一个kds一个star 囧
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Sandpig wrote:

音效的音色没有问题

finish切入太重大量使用的话听起来闷,把开头修饰了下……
clap感觉偏低,改了下音高

http://puu.sh/4zvS

edit:我刚发现现在一个kds一个star 囧
哇 多谢:3
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Editing (´゚ェ゚)                             

Edit : Maybe I'll little late 2-3 days >.< cuz busy with something     
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(´゚ェ゚)                   

EDIT: that's OK :3                
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名字改成JauiPlaY's Easy就好
到最后還是覺得顏色統一比較好,所以我沒用自己的顏色
不過我還是比較喜歡這個配色,有興趣的話試試看? :lol:
Combo1 : 128,64,100
Combo2 : 255,155,255
Combo3 : 213,0,0
Combo4 : 255,234,142
加油!
Have my star~

Download: ave;new feat. Saori Sakura - Vanille Rouge (xierbaliti) [OTL].osu
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uploaded!                             
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ave;new <3
Short ver?I'm looking forward to completed. :D

Sorry I forgot one opinion.
Add tags:GIGA (GIGA made fossette)
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flatps wrote:

ave;new <3
Short ver?I'm looking forward to completed. :D

Sorry I forgot one opinion.
Add tags:GIGA (GIGA made fossette)
thanks. added!
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sakura's voice makes me nnnnnghh
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新手mod 還不成熟 請見諒>_<
JauiPlaY's Easy:
00:21:531 (3) - 結尾clap去掉
00:42:557 (1) - 開頭clap?
00:44:608 (2) - ^
00:46:659 (3) - ^
00:49:223 (1) - 結尾clap?
00:51:275 (1) - ^
00:53:326 (1) - ^
00:55:378 (1) - ^
01:03:582 (1) - ^
01:05:634 (3) - clap去掉
01:09:736 (1) - 開頭的clap去掉
01:11:787 (2) - 結尾clap?
01:27:941 (2) - 結尾clap去掉
01:31:275 (1) - clap
01:31:787 (2) - 去掉clap
01:32:300 (1) - 結尾clap
01:34:351 (1) - 結尾clap
01:38:454 (1) - 結尾clap?
01:40:505 (1) - ^
02:06:146 (2) - 結尾clap去掉

Normal:
00:49:736 (1) - whistle
00:52:300 (4) - 開頭whistle
01:23:582 (4) - 加whistle
01:25:634 (4) - ^
01:56:916 (1) - 結尾加whistle?
01:58:967 (3) - ^
02:01:018 (5) - ^

S i R i R u's Hard:
00:07:172 (5) - 中間跟結尾加whistle?
00:13:582 (2) - 結尾加whistle
00:14:095 (3) - whistle
00:15:377 (6) - 結尾加whistle
00:16:146 (1) - 開頭加whistle
00:16:787 (2) - whistle
00:17:428 (4) - 結尾加whistle
00:17:941 (5) - 全部whistle
00:18:326 (X) - 加個note吧
01:14:608 (2) - 中間加clap
01:17:428 (6) - clap
01:20:505 (5) - clap
01:21:275 (7) - 結尾加clap
01:21:787 (8) - clap
這難度沒kiai time沒關係嘛?>_<

Hard:
00:04:095 (1) - 結尾whistle
00:06:146 (1) - ^
00:08:197 (1) - ^
00:49:736 (1) - whistle
01:05:633 (3) - 結尾whistle
一些建議 : 這難度的一些連打可以改成很多小slider連打 不然整場都是一個樣有點無趣>_<


Great map!! 祝早日Ranked!!
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star for 喜老大>w</

對了喜兒...好像感覺offset有點晚耶...:O 試試看-13(現在的-6ms)或許會好點?xD
嘛...不過只是我覺得而已啦...lol 覺得不好的話就無視這個吧><
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ave;new~~~~
I love your map. :)
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Mod request via Mini Maya Queue ~

[General]
-> S i R i R u's and JauiPlaY's diff both start at a same place but with different audio lead-in. I think, it's better to let both has 0 seconds lead-in
-> On the skin, I think you added somewhat too much space between the numbers. I see combo number 11 as 1 1 rather than 11 ><

[JauiPlaY's Easy]
01:59:987 (1,2) - This stack is quite surprising for beginners imo, because this is the only stack on the map

[Normal]
00:03:833 (1) - AIMOD says this note is too early after a spinner ><
00:10:243 (2,3,4) - The stack looks very weird in play mode, maybe try something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/164780 ?
00:17:422 (2) - Try to put the whistle on the repeat, would be cuter imo
00:25:628 (5,6,7,) - Repeating slider flows better imo. Also, add clap on (6)?
00:34:858 (7) - Add whistle on repeat also?
00:59:474 (2,3) - My intuition first says it is actually 1/2, but I think most players will understand the rhythm after playing it once
01:07:935 (2,3,4) - Arrange like this perhaps : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/164782 so it would form a better pentagon?
01:41:525 (7) - Add clap on repeat?

[S i R i R u's Hard]
00:22:551 (5) - I can barely hear it's a finish. Increase the volume here maybe?
01:08:961 (8,9,10) - Repeating slider better imo, because I think the stacks kill the flow ><
01:35:115 (2) - Drag the third waypoint 1 grid right?
01:54:345 (3) - Uh, the slider's shape... Standard elbow slider looks better imo ><

[Hard]
00:03:191 (4) - I think, a 1/4 repeating slider on 03:063 follows the music more
00:19:730 (3,1) - I think, hitsound whistle here sounds better rather than on 00:19:474 (1)
00:21:012 (1,1) - I don't think you need those New Combos, 00:39:474 (2,3) also uses the same pattern but readable enough without the NC
00:33:320 (3) - Why finish? Clap/whistle better imo ><
00:49:730 (1) - Make this note in the center of the previous (3,4,5) ?
00:50:499 (3) - Put the whistle on this slider's start rather than on the previous slider's end?
01:05:371 (2) - Spacing's quite shocking >< But easy to read though
01:57:422 (2) - I don't think you need finish again here, clap better imo
02:08:320 (2) - Drag a bit to the right, to get more flow?

It's been a long time since I modded an Easy diff this flawless ><
Good luck, nice map ~
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thanks for modding, fixed my diffs.
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from my que

[General]
add kiai time in S i R i R u's Hard plz
the 2rd kiai time in JauiPlaY's Easy start at 01:30:243 , witch is different from other diffs
reduce video's size plz , the osz file is 23558kb

[skin]
hit0.png ~ hit300g.png's size is 200x200 ? I think 256x256 is better , not sure about this..

[JauiPlaY's Easy]
00:22:422 (1) - start at 00:22:551 , it is too sudden that spinner 1/4 after a sldier
00:58:448 (2,3) - line up ?
01:02:038 (2,3) - ^
01:28:320 (1) - start at 01:28:448
01:47:679 (3) - ctrl + j and move to x:256 y:244 , fot better flow
01:48:576 (1) - start at 01:48:704
02:07:038 (1) - start at 02:07:166 end at 02:09:217
02:09:217 (1) - start at 02:09:474 if you fixed ^ , sound much better imo if you do this

[Normal]
00:06:140 (3,1) - overlap.. looks not so good imo..
01:12:551 (6,7) - do this ? http://puu.sh/7l8o I think to follow vocal here is better
01:28:576 (5,6) - I suggest change this to slider , this rhyme is too hard fot newbies to play , especially this circles are after some tick sliders
01:50:756 (1,2,3) - this may makes some people think they are following the music not the vocal and click them too early.. maybe change 1 and 2 to a slider?
02:07:166 (1,1) - same as Easy

[S i R i R u's Hard]
lead in=0 plz , no need to add some lead-in in this diff
00:18:833 (2,3) - oh , this is really ugly.. do this plz http://puu.sh/7la4
01:13:833 (1) - http://puu.sh/7laB
400,184,73833,6,0,B|400:108|400:108|392:56|340:40,1,160,4|0
02:09:474 - add a spinner here , like other diffs ?

[Hard]
rename it to Insane plz...orz
OD-1 ?
I suggest change some pattern to spinner.. to make the spread better
01:35:115 (3) - end at 01:35:628 to follow vocal here ? sound better

nothing found..
good luck
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My 1st requested mod ?
居然是神触+神mapper..
[stress]


JauiPlaY's Easy
-AudioLeadIn: 0 second? other diff uses 2000
00:22:551 (1) - spinner在 00:22:551 开始
01:48:576 (1) - ^ 白线开始?
02:07:038 (1) - ^


Normal
-有些地方图有点难读(?).. 比如:
01:32:294 (4,5) - 1/2 1/4混一起了 还有堆叠..= =
01:45:628 (3) - 换成一个不折返的slider?
01:50:756 (1,2,3,4) - 和之前还有后面的节奏一样? 把(2)放蓝线上 (3)改成slider同样放蓝线上

00:03:833 (1) - Kinda soon after a spinner for an Normal.


S i R i R u's Hard
-No Kiai time?
00:55:371 (5) - New combo


Hard
--Hard为啥不叫Insane 那么难..o.o
00:49:730 (1) - 很容易抢拍T.T x 1.2放在(2)的右上一点?
01:57:422 (2) - 去掉这个note?
02:01:525 (2) - ^
02:03:576 (5) - 把这个放到02:03:704然后和6堆一起怎么样..


想star却发现0 available..T.T (反正很快就rank的 xD) 赚到KD了,补上star~
加油..!
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wcx19911123 wrote:

from my que

[General]
add kiai time in S i R i R u's Hard plz 抱歉
the 2rd kiai time in JauiPlaY's Easy start at 01:30:243 , witch is different from other diffs 这个改了
reduce video's size plz , the osz file is 23558kb 我没超过24m啊._.

[skin]
hit0.png ~ hit300g.png's size is 200x200 ? I think 256x256 is better , not sure about this.. 这是可以的 毫无问题

[Normal]
00:06:140 (3,1) - overlap.. looks not so good imo.. 看起来没啥问题._.
01:12:551 (6,7) - do this ? http://puu.sh/7l8o I think to follow vocal here is better 这几个全是一样的节奏 不改.
01:28:576 (5,6) - I suggest change this to slider , this rhyme is too hard fot newbies to play , especially this circles are after some tick sliders 不改
01:50:756 (1,2,3) - this may makes some people think they are following the music not the vocal and click them too early.. maybe change 1 and 2 to a slider? 没这感觉._.... 但是考虑再三 改成了和前后一样的节奏
02:07:166 (1,1) - same as Easy 不改

[S i R i R u's Hard]
lead in=0 plz , no need to add some lead-in in this diff
00:18:833 (2,3) - oh , this is really ugly.. do this plz http://puu.sh/7la4
01:13:833 (1) - http://puu.sh/7laB
400,184,73833,6,0,B|400:108|400:108|392:56|340:40,1,160,4|0
02:09:474 - add a spinner here , like other diffs ?

等ruru来看._.

[Hard]
rename it to Insane plz...orz 这个可以考虑._.
OD-1 ? 我想7够低了
I suggest change some pattern to spinner.. to make the spread better
01:35:115 (3) - end at 01:35:628 to follow vocal here ? sound better 不是很想动这里

nothing found..
good luck
感谢mod

S h i o n wrote:

My 1st requested mod ?
居然是神触+神mapper.. 哇自重
[stress]

Normal
-有些地方图有点难读(?).. 比如:
01:32:294 (4,5) - 1/2 1/4混一起了 还有堆叠..= = 放了几个new combo 看起来应该是能好多了
01:45:628 (3) - 换成一个不折返的slider?
01:50:756 (1,2,3,4) - 和之前还有后面的节奏一样? 把(2)放蓝线上 (3)改成slider同样放蓝线上 改成了和前后一样的节奏

00:03:833 (1) - Kinda soon after a spinner for an Normal. 去掉了


S i R i R u's Hard
-No Kiai time?
00:55:371 (5) - New combo


Hard
--Hard为啥不叫Insane 那么难..o.o
00:49:730 (1) - 很容易抢拍T.T x 1.2放在(2)的右上一点? 保持了和前面一样的式样
01:57:422 (2) - 去掉这个note?
02:01:525 (2) - ^ ^
02:03:576 (5) - 把这个放到02:03:704然后和6堆一起怎么样.. 没啥感觉 还是不改._.


想star却发现0 available..T.T (反正很快就rank的 xD) 赚到KD了,补上star~
加油..!
谢谢!


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