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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017년 6월 29일 목요일 at 오전 1:42:29

Artist: Minase Inori
Title: harmony ribbon
Tags: marathon
BPM: 137
Filesize: 9680kb
Play Time: 06:10
Difficulties Available:
  1. HarmOni (3.74 stars, 1634 notes)


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02:23 Akemi_Homura: 안녕하세용
02:24 404 AccNotFound: 안녕하세요~
02:24 Akemi_Homura: 404님 혹시 시간되시면 맵텟가능하신가용
02:25 404 AccNotFound: 네 당연하죠!!
02:25 Akemi_Homura: :D
02:25 Akemi_Homura: 감사합니다
02:25 *Akemi_Homura is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1312077 Minase Inori - harmony ribbon]
02:31 404 AccNotFound: 귀정화
02:32 404 AccNotFound: 최고에요
02:32 Akemi_Homura: :)
02:32 Akemi_Homura: 감사합니다
02:32 404 AccNotFound: 05:37:151 (1) -
02:32 404 AccNotFound: 이부분 초록선 힛사 사운드
02:32 Akemi_Homura: 네네
02:32 404 AccNotFound: 너무 낮지 않아요?
02:33 Akemi_Homura: 40인데 좀 올릴까용
02:33 404 AccNotFound: 05:50:728 (2) - 이부분이 50% 인데 아무래도 여기보다는 조금 더 강하게 하면 좋을거같아서
02:33 404 AccNotFound: 저에게는 감자기 힛사사운드가 팍 죽어서 조금 어색했어요
02:34 Akemi_Homura: 그렇네용
02:34 Akemi_Homura: 60으로 바꿔서 뒷부분보다는 크게 바꿨습니다
02:34 404 AccNotFound: 00:09:341 (15) -
02:34 404 AccNotFound: 얘는 사운드에는 맞는데
02:34 404 AccNotFound: 아무래도 조금 어색한 감이 있었어요
02:35 Akemi_Homura: 중간에 큰노트가 섞여있어서 저도 뭔가 좀 어색하더라구용
02:35 404 AccNotFound: 00:09:122 (14,15,16,17,18,19) -
02:36 404 AccNotFound: 이부분을 차라리
02:36 404 AccNotFound: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8272142
02:36 404 AccNotFound: 이런식으로 짜서
02:36 404 AccNotFound: 하면 어떨까요?
02:36 404 AccNotFound: 떨어져있으니 조금 더 어색한거같아서...
02:37 Akemi_Homura: 오
02:37 Akemi_Homura: 괜찮은 것 같아요
02:37 404 AccNotFound: 00:17:881 (47,48,49,50,51,52,53) -
02:37 404 AccNotFound: 여기는
02:38 404 AccNotFound: 아무래도 00:17:881 (47) - 여기부터 드럼이 kdkdkdkd 이런식으로 치고있어서
02:38 404 AccNotFound: 피아노음에 맞추었다고해도 드럼소리가 너무 커서 조금 안맞는 감이있는거같아요
02:39 Akemi_Homura: 음
02:39 404 AccNotFound: 00:18:976 (50,51,52,53) -
02:39 Akemi_Homura: 드럼에 맞춰서 패턴좀 바꿔야 겠네용
02:39 404 AccNotFound: 이부분을 dkdk로 하면 어떄요?
02:41 Akemi_Homura: 넵넵
02:41 Akemi_Homura: dkdk가 더 좋은 것 같아요~
02:41 404 AccNotFound: 00:21:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
02:41 404 AccNotFound: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8272184
02:41 404 AccNotFound: 여기는 확답이 안서서
02:42 404 AccNotFound: 저라면 이렇게 했을거같아요! 같은 느낌이에요
02:42 404 AccNotFound: 01:13:064 (8,9) -
02:42 404 AccNotFound: 피시셔나 색깔로 차이를 주면 어떨까요?
02:44 Akemi_Homura: (8)번이 좀 더 낮은 음 같으니 d로 바꾸면 될까요?
02:44 Akemi_Homura: (9)번에는 피니셔 넣고..
02:44 404 AccNotFound: 네 그게 좋을거같아요
02:44 404 AccNotFound: 근데 여기는 조금더 연구를 해서
02:44 404 AccNotFound: 더 좋은 패턴이 있다면 바꾸었으면 좋겠어요
02:44 404 AccNotFound: 무책임해서 죄송합니다 ㅠㅠ
02:45 404 AccNotFound: 01:46:348 - 여기 노트 더해보는건 어떄요?
02:46 Akemi_Homura: k 추가 했어용~
02:46 Akemi_Homura: 01:13:064
02:46 Akemi_Homura: 여기는 좀더 연구해봐야 겠네용
02:46 404 AccNotFound: 02:04:304 (111,112) - d K 는 어떨까요
02:47 404 AccNotFound: 02:04:304 (111) - 보컬의 레 음보다 02:04:742 (112) - 이쪽 미 음이 더 높은거두 있고
02:47 404 AccNotFound: 드럼에도 더 잘맞는거같아요
02:47 404 AccNotFound: 쪼끔 애매하긴 하네요
02:48 404 AccNotFound: 02:32:553 (231,232) - 매핑할때 이런부분 진짜 싫죠 ㅠㅠ
02:49 Akemi_Homura: 넵넵 ;-;
02:49 404 AccNotFound: 왜 드럼에 맞춰 부르지 않을까요 가서 작곡가 꿀밤때려주고싶어요
02:49 Akemi_Homura: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
02:50 Akemi_Homura: 일단 02:04:304는 d K로 바꿨어용
02:51 404 AccNotFound: 03:36:056 (8) -
02:51 404 AccNotFound: 음... 삭제?
02:51 Akemi_Homura: 넵~
02:52 404 AccNotFound: 03:34:961 (1) - 여기부터
02:52 404 AccNotFound: 03:42:845 (39) -
02:52 404 AccNotFound: 여기까지
02:52 404 AccNotFound: 쪼끔 지저분한 감이 있는거같아요
02:52 404 AccNotFound: 피니셔 들어가는 곳은 다 맞는데
02:53 404 AccNotFound: 너무 많아서 조금 줄여도 될거같아요
02:54 404 AccNotFound: 03:48:319 (10) - 피니셔! 제취향이지만 피니셔!는 어때요!!!
02:55 Akemi_Homura: 피니셔 추가했습니다~
02:55 Akemi_Homura: 위에서 말하신 부분은 고민해봐야겠네요
02:55 404 AccNotFound: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8272297
02:55 404 AccNotFound: 03:47:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 이부분 기차가 너무 kkddkkdd만 반복되서
02:55 404 AccNotFound: 쪼끔 변화를 줘도 좋을거같아요
02:57 404 AccNotFound: 04:25:764 (40) - 저에게는 드럼 보컬 모두 d 인거같아요
02:57 Akemi_Homura: 올려주신 예로 수정했는데 지금보다 더 좋은것 같아요
02:57 Akemi_Homura: 수정했습니다~
02:59 404 AccNotFound: 05:49:852 (1,2,1,2) - D K K D?
03:00 Akemi_Homura: 수정했습니다~
03:00 404 AccNotFound: 난이도명 Minase InOni가 좋은거같아요
03:00 404 AccNotFound: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
03:01 Akemi_Homura: ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
03:01 Akemi_Homura: 인오니
03:01 Akemi_Homura: ㅋㅋㅋ
03:01 404 AccNotFound: 끝!
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Hello Akemi, from my modding queue.

  • d=Don
    D=Big Don
    k=Katsu
    K=Big Katsu


[General]

  1. All seems okay.


[HarmOni]
  1. 00:05:180 - it feels a bit weird ignoring this sound as you followed in 00:04:085 - , i suggest adding a k in 00:05:180 - ,change 00:05:399 - to k and
  2. 00:05:618 - to d? it fits good imo and makes a mirror pattern?
  3. 00:07:589 - same as ^ add notes in 00:07:589 - and 00:07:808 - as you did in 00:05:180 - , if you add the notes, how about k d d d or k d k d?
  4. 00:10:436 - swap this note with 00:10:874 - ? K D fits better imo as 00:10:436 - has a higher pitch. (also it makes a bit of consistency with 00:14:377 - )
  5. 00:18:319 - swap with 00:18:538 - ? k d fits better with the instrumental.
  6. 00:22:808 - personal suggestion here, change this note to d? i think ddkdkkk fits very well there.
  7. 00:26:202 (19,20,21,22,23,24) - change to d d k k d k? it fits good if you want to follow the vocals as you did in 00:28:830 - .
  8. 00:50:180 - add a d here? ddkkd fits really good with the vocals there.
  9. 00:51:823 - this is actually 1/4 but fits good as 1/6 xD (same thing i did in my loveless world with a ddk before the kiai).
  10. 00:53:794 - if you want to follow the vocals more accurately i suggest moving this note to 00:54:012 - .
  11. 01:10:436 (7,8,9,10,11) - this part is too calm and doesn't provide any sound, i suggest deleting this 5plet.
  12. 01:23:137 - change this note and 01:24:122 - to k? (kdd k d kkd) fits very well with the vocals imo.
  13. 01:41:750 - add a inherit with x0.95 of sv, it creates a better transition with the slowdown.
  14. 01:51:385 - add a d here? i think fits good with the vocals.
  15. 01:55:874 - delete this note and change 01:55:983 - to finisher? it gives a good impact.
  16. 01:56:202 - as you did at the start of the map, for a better follow of the piano add a d in 01:56:202 - 01:56:421 - and change 01:56:640 - to k.
  17. 01:57:735 - same here, add a d in 01:57:735 - 01:57:954 - and change 01:57:516 - to k for the piano?
  18. 02:06:275 - to 02:07:151 - make d k k d k? fits better with the vocals.
  19. 02:11:312 - change to k, is the same as 02:10:874 - . (and probably these two k fits good with finisher)
  20. 02:13:502 - change this note to k and 02:13:721 - to d? follows better the vocals imo.
  21. 02:29:702 - change this d k d to k d k? fits better with the instrumental and the vocal.
  22. 02:36:275 - as i suggested before, delete this 5plet (kkddk) as it doesn't provide any sound and it's a calm part.
  23. 02:46:129 - delete this note and make it doublets and consistent as you did in the first kiai 01:20:071 - .
  24. 02:49:085 - made it like 01:23:137 - ? then will be more consistent.
  25. 03:07:589 - as suggested in the first kiai, add a inherit point here with x0.95 of sv for a better transition.
  26. 03:33:538 - add a k here? kkddk fits good imo.
  27. 04:04:961 - make this kdd a kkk? since this part is too calm i think fits good.
  28. 04:10:217 (7,8) - swap these notes? k k d k fits better.
  29. 04:19:195 - change this note to K like i suggested in 00:10:436 - ? if applied change 04:19:633 - to D too.
  30. 04:40:436 - for a better transition like other kiais, add a inherit point with x0.95 of sv in 04:40:436 - , x0.96 in 04:40:326 - , x0.97 in 04:40:217 - , x0.98 in 04:40:107 - and x0.99 04:39:998 - .
  31. 04:49:633 (163,164,165,1) - i think fits better as a k d d k.
  32. 04:47:443 - inherit with x0.95 of sv here for a good transition.

Good luck~
posted

Hanjamon wrote:

Hello Akemi, from my modding queue.

  • d=Don
    D=Big Don
    k=Katsu
    K=Big Katsu


[General]

  1. All seems okay.


[HarmOni]
  1. 00:05:180 - it feels a bit weird ignoring this sound as you followed in 00:04:085 - , i suggest adding a k in 00:05:180 - ,change 00:05:399 - to k and
  2. 00:05:618 - to d? it fits good imo and makes a mirror pattern? it's really nice. :3 fixed.
  3. 00:07:589 - same as ^ add notes in 00:07:589 - and 00:07:808 - as you did in 00:05:180 - , if you add the notes, how about k d d d or k d k d? fixed too. changed to 'k d k d'.
  4. 00:10:436 - swap this note with 00:10:874 - ? K D fits better imo as 00:10:436 - has a higher pitch. (also it makes a bit of consistency with 00:14:377 - ) fixed.
  5. 00:18:319 - swap with 00:18:538 - ? k d fits better with the instrumental. I used d k for emphasize strong piano sound, but It's better follow drum imo. so change to k d.
  6. 00:22:808 - personal suggestion here, change this note to d? i think ddkdkkk fits very well there. hmm.. okay~ lol
  7. 00:26:202 (19,20,21,22,23,24) - change to d d k k d k? it fits good if you want to follow the vocals as you did in 00:28:830 - . Thank you~ fixed.
  8. 00:50:180 - add a d here? ddkkd fits really good with the vocals there. okay~
  9. 00:51:823 - this is actually 1/4 but fits good as 1/6 xD (same thing i did in my loveless world with a ddk before the kiai). Thank you~ lol I love your lovelive map.
  10. 00:53:794 - if you want to follow the vocals more accurately i suggest moving this note to 00:54:012 - . your suggestion is nice, but I hope this mixed style(vocal + drum).
  11. 01:10:436 (7,8,9,10,11) - this part is too calm and doesn't provide any sound, i suggest deleting this 5plet. I feel accompaniment vary in this part, so used kkddk. but your suggestion is good for me. I think this hugh break is better.
  12. 01:23:137 - change this note and 01:24:122 - to k? (kdd k d kkd) fits very well with the vocals imo. okay~
  13. 01:41:750 - add a inherit with x0.95 of sv, it creates a better transition with the slowdown. fixed. Thanks~!
  14. 01:51:385 - add a d here? i think fits good with the vocals. okay~
  15. 01:55:874 - delete this note and change 01:55:983 - to finisher? it gives a good impact. fixed.
  16. 01:56:202 - as you did at the start of the map, for a better follow of the piano add a d in 01:56:202 - 01:56:421 - and change 01:56:640 - to k. I hope give a break because we changed previous note - K. I want to this break for emphasize previous finisher. so just changed 01:56:640 - k.
  17. 01:57:735 - same here, add a d in 01:57:735 - 01:57:954 - and change 01:57:516 - to k for the piano? fixed.
  18. 02:06:275 - to 02:07:151 - make d k k d k? fits better with the vocals. fixed.
  19. 02:11:312 - change to k, is the same as 02:10:874 - . (and probably these two k fits good with finisher) fixed. It's nice.
  20. 02:13:502 - change this note to k and 02:13:721 - to d? follows better the vocals imo. fixed.
  21. 02:29:702 - change this d k d to k d k? fits better with the instrumental and the vocal. I focused on piano this d k d, but follow drum is better. so changed.
  22. 02:36:275 - as i suggested before, delete this 5plet (kkddk) as it doesn't provide any sound and it's a calm part. fixed.
  23. 02:46:129 - delete this note and make it doublets and consistent as you did in the first kiai 01:20:071 - . fixed.
  24. 02:49:085 - made it like 01:23:137 - ? then will be more consistent. no change this part for diversity of pattern. :3
  25. 03:07:589 - as suggested in the first kiai, add a inherit point here with x0.95 of sv for a better transition. fixed.
  26. 03:33:538 - add a k here? kkddk fits good imo. fixed.
  27. 04:04:961 - make this kdd a kkk? since this part is too calm i think fits good. fixed.
  28. 04:10:217 (7,8) - swap these notes? k k d k fits better. fixed.
  29. 04:19:195 - change this note to K like i suggested in 00:10:436 - ? if applied change 04:19:633 - to D too. fixed.
  30. 04:40:436 - for a better transition like other kiais, add a inherit point with x0.95 of sv in 04:40:436 - , x0.96 in 04:40:326 - , x0.97 in 04:40:217 - , x0.98 in 04:40:107 - and x0.99 04:39:998 - . very nice. Thank you~ :3
  31. 04:49:633 (163,164,165,1) - i think fits better as a k d d k. fixed.
  32. 04:47:443 - inherit with x0.95 of sv here for a good transition. fixed.

Good luck~


Thank you Hanja~ :D
It's really helpful modding.

and Thank you for giving a star for me. Charlotte san~ ><
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Hi NM as asked here
the map is already so good so I will try to mention some notes that imo could sound better in a different way
00:23:137 - change to d (?)
00:48:319 (99,100) - control g (?)
00:55:764 - change to d
01:17:443 (29,30,31,32,33) - what about change to k d k k d ?
02:21:166 (177,178,179) - change to k k d (?)
02:27:078 - change to d
02:45:910 (299,300,301,302) - what acout cchange to d k k d k ?
02:48:100 - change to d(?)
03:25:326 - change to d
03:34:961 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - no mistakes here, i just whanted to say that i like this point particularly, gg ;D
03:48:100 - d is better but I think that k would give a better ouch-feeling
03:55:326 (42,43,44,45) - what about change from d d k d to d k k d ?
05:01:458 (35,36) - control + g
05:08:027 (2,3,4,5,6) - here imo d k k k d would fit better

btw really nice song! Good luck for rank!! ;D
posted

Kith190 wrote:

Hi NM as asked here
the map is already so good so I will try to mention some notes that imo could sound better in a different way
00:23:137 - change to d (?) fixed.
00:48:319 (99,100) - control g (?) fixed.
00:55:764 - change to d fixed.
01:17:443 (29,30,31,32,33) - what about change to k d k k d ? (29), (33) has drum sound. so I want to make them k. :3 so no change.
02:21:166 (177,178,179) - change to k k d (?) fixed.
02:27:078 - change to d fixed.
02:45:910 (299,300,301,302) - what acout cchange to d k k d k ? no change for now, because of consistency with 1st kiai part.
02:48:100 - change to d(?) fixed.
03:25:326 - change to d fixed.
03:34:961 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - no mistakes here, i just whanted to say that i like this point particularly, gg ;D Thank you~ ><
03:48:100 - d is better but I think that k would give a better ouch-feeling I don't like this consecutive k. :3 I hope maintain this d for better flow k-d-k.
03:55:326 (42,43,44,45) - what about change from d d k d to d k k d ? changed previous pattern kkd myself. so no same pattern now.
05:01:458 (35,36) - control + g no change for consistency with similar part. and it's almost same burst used. so I hope make them all K.
05:08:027 (2,3,4,5,6) - here imo d k k k d would fit better hmm.. (4),(6) has high bell sound. so I want to make them k. so changed ddkkk. I hope it's better.

btw really nice song! Good luck for rank!! ;D


Thank you for great modding~ :3
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Hello there M4M.
Sorry if i try to nerf it too much, just tell me to piss off if i do. ;)

[HarmOni]

00:29:706 (32,33) - Kind of want to Ctrl-g these for the vocal pitch rise to come at ~30:00.
00:33:429 (43) - Sounds better as a k to me ?
00:47:662 (97) - Consider deleting this and making the next note d to keep following the strong melody only.
00:58:173 (31,50) - We could add a few more breaks in this slower section by deleting these, (32) should be k then though.
01:20:071 (1,2,3,4) - I like it, but it kind of stands out as the sole 2/2. I would probably just add d to 01:20:290
02:01:020 - I feel this is too many notes for this quiet part, I would go as far as deleting all (100,101,103,106,107)
02:11:093 - add d
02:22:480 (185) - Could delete for consistent breaks, 02:23:137 (190) - is k then though.
02:23:794 (193) - Maybe k again for the vocal ?
02:24:560 (196) - Would delete this to emphasize the violin coming
02:32:334 (234,235) - I'd prefere Ctrl-g to keep the snare flowing, 02:32:772 (236) - K , 02:32:991 (237) - Delete.
02:46:129 - add d, if you applied 01:20:290
02:58:064 (365) - Delete to stay consistant and emphasize the strong vocal.
03:15:472 (459) - k
03:26:531 - 03:29:925 (47) - You could keep the earlier doubles going for this part ?
03:43:173 - 03:46:677 - Definately could keep them going here at least ?
03:39:122 - Are you sure you want to ignore a sound this strong ?
04:11:750 (9,10,11) - Its dkd everywhere else.
04:34:633 (85) - I want to delete this and make 04:34:742 - onward a kdddkdk
05:45:253 - 05:47:881 - Could add d's


Nice song, great map already. Good Luck bud!
posted

Karee Pan wrote:

Hello there M4M.
Sorry if i try to nerf it too much, just tell me to piss off if i do. ;)lol

[HarmOni]

00:29:706 (32,33) - Kind of want to Ctrl-g these for the vocal pitch rise to come at ~30:00. I feel vocal pitch gap is not big. so I think it's better to use k for drum. :3
00:33:429 (43) - Sounds better as a k to me ? fix.
00:47:662 (97) - Consider deleting this and making the next note d to keep following the strong melody only. add d 00:33:648 instead for consistency.
00:58:173 (31,50) - We could add a few more breaks in this slower section by deleting these, (32) should be k then though. hmm.. I think break-time is enough now. but considering that. thank you for suggestion. anyway, change to (31) - d, (32) - k.
01:20:071 (1,2,3,4) - I like it, but it kind of stands out as the sole 2/2. I would probably just add d to 01:20:290 okay~
02:01:020 - I feel this is too many notes for this quiet part, I would go as far as deleting all (100,101,103,106,107) I feel that sound need stream. lol.. so maintain for now.
02:11:093 - add d okay~
02:22:480 (185) - Could delete for consistent breaks, 02:23:137 (190) - is k then though. we can hear vocal that point. so just change to (190) - k.
02:23:794 (193) - Maybe k again for the vocal ? fixed.
02:24:560 (196) - Would delete this to emphasize the violin coming fixed.
02:32:334 (234,235) - I'd prefere Ctrl-g to keep the snare flowing, 02:32:772 (236) - K , 02:32:991 (237) - Delete. (237) - has bell sound. so I hope to keep that. other things fixed.
02:46:129 - add d, if you applied 01:20:290 sure~
02:58:064 (365) - Delete to stay consistant and emphasize the strong vocal. fixed.
03:15:472 (459) - k no change for emphasize (458) - vocal & drum.
03:26:531 - 03:29:925 (47) - You could keep the earlier doubles going for this part ? previous doublet has vocal, but next part is not. so I think doublet is not fit here.
03:43:173 - 03:46:677 - Definately could keep them going here at least ? add note 03:46:677, because we can hear weak drum sound. rest is not maybe. :3
03:39:122 - Are you sure you want to ignore a sound this strong ? hmm.. okay add note there.
04:11:750 (9,10,11) - Its dkd everywhere else. change this part. for follow bell-sound.
04:34:633 (85) - I want to delete this and make 04:34:742 - onward a kdddkdk Thank you for your suggestion. I concern about this. I'll change this part maybe soon.
05:45:253 - 05:47:881 - Could add d's add them~


Nice song, great map already. Good Luck bud!

Thank you for great modding~ :3
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possible to mod (again) XD
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xtrem3x wrote:

possible to mod (again) XD
Thanks again~!! :D
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