TWICE - I'm gonna be a star · forum

Tae

1,070 posts

Joined June 2015

Tae 2017-06-04T15:11:53+00:00

Firetruck wrote:
Tae wrote:
what the heck
what the STAR

LITERALLY I GO AWAY FOR LIKE 10 MINUTES AND YOU HAVE 120 SP LITERALLY WHAT

anyway
remap pls
kd

Lune

258 posts

Joined September 2015

Lune 2017-06-04T15:14:10+00:00

loli noods in there v

jk u stupido bakari

]

Seolv

847 posts

Joined March 2016

Seolv 2017-06-05T09:33:57+00:00

can i gd

[ M I N A K O ] wrote:
loli noods in there v who needs lolis when you've got sana

Lune

258 posts

Joined September 2015

Lune 2017-06-05T10:44:15+00:00

[ L u k a s ] wrote:
[ M I N A K O ] wrote:
loli noods in there v who needs lolis when you've got sana

i want both ty

Nuolong

1,032 posts

Joined August 2014

Nuolong 2017-06-05T22:58:36+00:00

BAKARI WAT IS GUD WIT U DUFUQ
100 $T@RZ OMG U CRAY CRAY BIHHH

cosmic

641 posts

Joined February 2017

cosmic 2017-06-05T23:53:11+00:00

woaw u better get this meme ranked truck

Last edited by cosmic 2017-06-14T02:00:42+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Firetruck 2017-06-06T13:44:23+00:00

cosmiccc wrote:
woaw u better get this ranked truck

ofc

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2017-06-07T03:58:53+00:00

https://puu.sh/wd3b8/70111281bb.txt

here it's pretty much done D: I won't get to map for a few days because of stuff so I'll send you the next update soon

bakari you're a madman

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Firetruck 2017-06-07T16:13:29+00:00

Ora wrote:
https://puu.sh/wd3b8/70111281bb.txt

here it's pretty much done D: I won't get to map for a few days because of stuff so I'll send you the next update soon

bakari you're a madman

woooooooooo

Pulse

257 posts

Joined April 2015

Pulse 2017-06-07T23:48:54+00:00

[General]

5% Vol. everywhere. Not sure if it was intended, but it really hurts the playing experience. Consider audible clicks + hitsounding;
엔터테인먼트 on tags;
Tags conflict with Ora's GD;
Kiai on Easy and Normal ):

[Easy]
00:30:296 (9) - I get that Jungyeon still singing but isn't combo too big? Consider NC.

[Normal]
There's two sounds at 01:15:178 and 01:15:296. The first one breaks the rhythm, but the second one could be good with a hitsound to finish the section (or a slider starting from 01:14:827 (4)). Think about it ~~TWICE~~. Same on 02:17:171 (but not a slider);
NC on 02:34:046 (5), 02:35:921 (7), 02:37:796 (11), maybe?

[Collab Hard]
01:53:733 (5) - NC
02:15:999 (6) - NC?
02:49:749 (1) - ^

[Ora's Insane]
02:16:233 (3) - NC
02:38:733 (9) - I'm not sure if these reverses fit. Sliderart, maybe?

I apologize if the mod turned out bad, it's my first time.

~~Who thought this song would be a good idea?~~

Good luck!

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Firetruck 2017-06-08T13:47:31+00:00

@Pulse fixed the ncs at easy and normal, fixed tags and added kiai! It's still 5% because i haven't hitsounded it yet lmao, i gotta do that

There's two sounds at 01:15:178 and 01:15:296. The first one breaks the rhythm, but the second one could be good with a hitsound to finish the section (or a slider starting from 01:14:827 (4)). Think about it TWICE. Same on 02:17:171 (but not a slider); It's intentipnal, the first one is because i only wanna emphisize the ''up'' and the second one is because i feel like its weird to put a circle there if it's gonna be a break anyways

And we only nc on downbeats in hard

thanks for modding!!

_Crow

126 posts

Joined October 2014

_Crow 2017-06-08T20:47:50+00:00

Hi! Mod from my queue

[Easy]
Very well done diff, I don't have much to say except for some aesthetics things
00:24:671 (3) - Imo it would look better if you curve the end just a bit like this, same thing with 00:52:796 (1) - and 01:56:546 (3) -
00:28:421 (3) - Blanket?
00:41:546 (1) - Move it down a bit so that its curvature points at 00:42:952 (2) -, it should be good around x:390 y:60

[Normal]
00:30:296 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think these sliders follow the rhythm well, in fact you can hear that the drums are on white ticks, and the singer emphasizes white ticks as well, therefore slider heads should be on white ticks. This applies also at other sections like 00:34:046 (1,2,3,4,5) - or 02:58:421 (1,2,3,4,5) -, be sure to check them all
01:00:296 (1,2) - 01:02:171 (1,2) - There sliders are a bit weird, they may confuse new players ~~but who cares about them lol~~

[Hard]
00:47:522 (2,3) - Mantain the same distance snap here, like you do right after with 00:50:335 (7,8) -
01:30:764 (2) - Rotate it about 20° anti-clockwise to make it look like more progressive (?), you'll need to change some placements a bit but it's worth it imo. Same goes for 01:32:639 (2) -
01:35:921 (6) - NC here would fit well
03:00:530 (2) - I think it's better if you flip it and then move 03:01:467 (3,4) - along with it, like this
03:11:546 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think it'll be easy to read for the hard players, also it can be frustrating getting a combo break like this at the end of the map. Maybe make it a bit more readable? It's not that much of an issue tho

That's all, sorry for short mod but I'm still not that confident with modding ><

- Pika

160 posts

Joined March 2017

- Pika 2017-06-08T23:06:29+00:00

Azzy approves this beatmap!

Heya! Mods are in from Azzy!

To be honest, the only thing that bugged me the most was the breaks. Why not put a slow slider tick, and then add some notes and sliders?

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2017-06-09T07:38:51+00:00

-AsrieLx- wrote:
Azzy approves this beatmap!

Heya! Mods are in from Azzy!

To be honest, the only thing that bugged me the most was the breaks. Why not put a slow slider tick, and then add some notes and sliders?

What's wrong with adding breaks, though? That part fits a break more than adding slow sliders.

EDIT:

walter85 wrote:
[Hard]
01:30:764 (2) - Rotate it about 20° anti-clockwise to make it look like more progressive (?), you'll need to change some placements a bit but it's worth it imo. Same goes for 01:32:639 (2) - I'll keep it because I want to emphasise "go" with the same slider angle but different positions. I think that'll emphasise "go" better.
01:35:921 (6) - NC here would fit well Oops, added.

Thank you for modding!

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 75184
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22796,45296,75296,99671,114671,137171,159671,174671,197171
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.5

[Metadata]
Title:I'm gonna be a star
TitleUnicode:I'm gonna be a star
Artist:TWICE
ArtistUnicode:TWICE
Creator:Firetruck
Version:Collab Hard
Source:
Tags:K-Pop Kpop JYP Entertainment 엔터테인먼트 Girl Group 나연 정연 모모 사나 지효 미나 다현 채영 쯔위 Nayeon Jeongyeon Momo Sana Jihyo Mina Dahyun Chaeyeong Tzuyu PAGE TWO Lapis Aoki Ora Sixteen
BeatmapID:1312008
BeatmapSetID:622305

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"asasasaSAASFSDF.png",0,0
//Break Periods
2,75496,89546
2,137371,151421
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
7796,468.75,4,2,0,5,1,0
98264,-166.666666666667,4,2,0,5,0,0
99671,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0
114671,-83.3333333333333,4,2,0,5,0,1
129671,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0
159671,-83.3333333333333,4,2,0,5,0,1
174671,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 186,150,216
Combo4 : 232,96,130
Combo5 : 105,198,203
Combo6 : 255,128,64

[HitObjects]
61,81,7796,5,0,0:0:0:0:
151,146,8030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,146,8147,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,146,8264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,84,8499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,168,8733,2,0,L|400:161,1,80
290,245,9202,2,0,L|207:252,1,80
99,272,9671,5,0,0:0:0:0:
141,168,9905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,168,10022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,168,10139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,70,10374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,70,10608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,168,10842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,168,10960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,168,11077,2,0,P|135:213|146:251,1,80
201,342,11546,5,0,0:0:0:0:
281,264,11780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,264,11897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,264,12014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,342,12249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,239,12483,2,0,B|412:204|412:204|400:144,1,80
323,56,12952,2,0,B|315:91|315:91|327:151,1,80
240,209,13421,5,0,0:0:0:0:
147,146,13655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,146,13772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,146,13889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,206,14124,2,0,L|5:206,2,40
133,283,14592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,283,14710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,283,14827,2,0,P|170:290|217:284,1,80
319,254,15296,5,0,0:0:0:0:
257,160,15530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,160,15647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,160,15764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,72,15999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,56,16233,2,0,L|116:54,1,80
35,138,16702,2,0,L|135:140,1,80
189,223,17171,5,0,0:0:0:0:
278,156,17405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,156,17522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,156,17639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,264,17874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,339,18108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,231,18342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,231,18460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,231,18577,2,0,P|150:237|113:231,1,80
35,152,19046,5,0,0:0:0:0:
93,56,19280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
93,56,19397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
93,56,19514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,130,19749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,149,19983,2,0,P|293:198|280:243,1,80
209,335,20452,2,0,P|202:286|215:241,1,80
208,256,20803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,256,20921,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,164,21155,2,0,L|101:163,2,40
230,92,21624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,92,21741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,92,21858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,167,22092,2,0,L|355:166,2,40
231,244,22561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,244,22678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,244,22796,6,0,L|152:244,1,80
56,244,23264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,160,23499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,244,23733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
103,328,23968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,324,24202,2,0,L|280:324,1,80
376,320,24671,5,0,0:0:0:0:
463,360,24905,2,0,P|437:250|325:238,1,240
376,320,25842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,308,26077,2,0,P|248:268|240:236,1,80
248,88,26546,6,0,P|275:118|288:156,1,80
193,169,27014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,169,27249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,34,27483,2,0,P|335:67|369:177,1,160
304,248,28186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,340,28421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,320,28655,2,0,B|124:284|124:356|0:320,1,240
64,244,29592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,176,29827,2,0,L|132:92,1,80
268,48,30296,6,0,L|268:132,1,80
264,224,30764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,320,30999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,268,31233,2,0,P|392:260|428:268,1,80
424,168,31702,2,0,P|376:176|340:168,1,80
382,80,32171,1,0,0:0:0:0:
382,80,32405,6,0,P|308:80|264:224,1,240
192,284,33342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,220,33577,2,0,P|128:164|116:136,1,80
32,256,34046,6,0,P|22:294|32:332,1,80
128,352,34514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,352,34749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,332,34983,2,0,L|312:332,1,80
440,252,35452,2,0,L|360:252,1,80
264,252,35921,5,0,0:0:0:0:
264,252,36038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,252,36155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,252,36389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,164,36624,2,0,L|204:124,1,40
172,92,36858,2,0,L|120:84,1,40
92,112,37092,2,0,L|74:190,1,80
40,280,37561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,280,37678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,280,37796,6,0,L|92:280,1,40
128,280,38030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,280,38147,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,280,38264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,348,38499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,276,38733,2,0,P|304:268|344:268,1,80
372,176,39202,2,0,P|416:168|456:168,1,80
336,80,39671,5,0,0:0:0:0:
336,80,39788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,80,39905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,140,40139,2,0,P|224:139|184:131,1,80
140,216,40608,2,0,P|100:215|60:207,1,80
44,304,41077,2,0,P|83:304|123:312,1,80
212,276,41546,6,0,L|292:276,1,80
376,228,42014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,132,42249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,132,42366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,132,42483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,180,42717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,84,42952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,48,43421,6,0,L|188:48,1,80
116,112,43889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,132,44006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,152,44124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,248,44358,2,0,L|64:256,3,40
56,300,44827,2,0,L|8:308,3,40
5,353,45296,6,0,L|114:349,1,80
188,348,45764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,348,45881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,348,45999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,260,46233,2,0,L|232:160,1,80
282,98,46702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,173,46936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,173,47053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,173,47171,6,0,L|356:275,1,80
356,300,47522,2,0,P|314:295|265:304,1,80
276,300,47874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,254,48108,2,0,P|151:258|108:254,1,80
227,181,48577,2,0,P|267:177|310:181,1,80
381,120,49046,6,0,L|440:115,1,40
468,114,49280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
477,209,49514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
477,209,49631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
477,209,49749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
415,282,49983,2,0,L|322:282,1,80
294,255,50335,2,0,P|298:297|291:338,1,80
262,371,50686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,318,50921,5,0,0:0:0:0:
142,306,51038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
102,308,51155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
65,322,51272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
34,346,51389,2,0,L|35:283,1,40
40,266,51624,2,0,L|41:203,1,40
27,188,51858,2,0,L|127:188,1,80
216,112,52327,2,0,L|116:112,1,80
56,57,52796,5,0,0:0:0:0:
7,139,53030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,197,53264,2,0,L|75:294,1,80
141,347,53733,2,0,P|181:341|227:346,1,80
265,361,54085,2,0,L|269:300,1,40
274,225,54436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,155,54671,5,0,0:0:0:0:
414,216,54905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
414,216,55022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
414,216,55139,2,0,B|418:283,1,40
428,302,55374,2,0,B|429:355,1,40
459,378,55608,2,0,L|344:368,1,80
331,379,55960,2,0,B|337:329|337:329|321:253,1,120
302,166,56546,5,0,0:0:0:0:
215,207,56780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,207,56897,2,0,P|208:169|221:115,1,80
236,85,57249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,82,57483,2,0,L|48:83,1,80
22,52,57835,2,0,P|26:93|14:146,1,80
7,177,58186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
85,232,58421,6,0,L|171:228,1,80
207,250,58772,2,0,L|299:245,1,80
335,245,59124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,156,59358,2,0,L|213:160,1,80
177,138,59709,2,0,L|85:143,1,80
49,143,60061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,233,60296,5,0,0:0:0:0:
16,233,60413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,233,60530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,302,60764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,302,60881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,302,60999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,232,61233,2,0,L|203:229,2,40
118,140,61702,2,0,L|173:137,2,40
49,68,62171,5,0,0:0:0:0:
49,68,62288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
49,68,62405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
21,159,62639,2,0,L|10:219,2,40
115,138,63108,1,0,3:0:0:0:
133,147,63226,1,0,3:0:0:0:
150,157,63343,1,0,3:0:0:0:
220,221,63577,2,0,P|225:262|218:309,1,80
137,349,64046,5,0,0:0:0:0:
137,349,64163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
137,349,64280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
87,267,64514,2,0,L|88:206,1,40
105,182,64749,2,0,L|106:121,1,40
79,101,64983,2,0,L|195:87,1,80
194,59,65335,2,0,P|197:102|217:153,1,80
208,136,65686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,136,65803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,136,65921,6,0,L|315:131,1,80
383,122,66389,2,0,P|391:166|385:206,1,80
401,246,66741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
401,246,66858,2,0,L|309:239,1,80
277,260,67210,2,0,P|284:221|277:177,1,80
270,134,67561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,53,67796,5,0,0:0:0:0:
155,127,68030,2,0,P|150:173|158:209,1,80
205,288,68499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,288,68616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,288,68733,2,0,L|314:284,1,80
332,295,69085,2,0,L|441:299,1,80
459,301,69436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
485,208,69671,5,0,0:0:0:0:
485,208,69788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
485,208,69905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,149,70139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,149,70256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,149,70374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,199,70608,2,0,B|294:204|294:204|248:200,1,80
201,215,70960,2,0,B|168:210|168:210|122:214,1,80
76,231,71311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,326,71546,6,0,L|152:328,1,80
185,298,71897,2,0,P|183:337|193:380,1,80
240,369,72249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,308,72483,2,0,P|303:253|324:193,1,120
353,155,72952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,84,73186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,139,73421,6,0,L|65:126,1,120
56,92,73889,2,0,P|61:150|44:209,1,120
16,248,74358,2,0,L|115:254,1,80
142,240,74710,2,0,P|137:277|145:318,1,80
166,361,75061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
166,361,75178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
166,361,75296,5,0,0:0:0:0:
204,160,90296,6,0,P|220:128|216:72,1,80
126,104,90764,2,0,P|142:72|138:16,1,80
47,47,91233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
47,47,91467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,196,91702,2,0,P|144:236|228:248,1,120
260,244,92171,6,0,P|244:276|248:332,1,80
338,300,92639,2,0,P|322:332|326:388,1,80
417,357,93108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
417,357,93342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,208,93577,2,0,P|320:168|236:156,1,120
208,172,94046,5,0,0:0:0:0:
72,36,94514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,220,94983,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,124,95217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,256,95452,2,0,P|154:298|95:299,1,120
56,276,95921,6,0,P|36:248|32:240,3,40
36,196,96389,2,0,P|16:168|12:160,3,40
16,116,96858,2,0,P|-4:88|-4:88,6,20
16,68,97327,2,0,P|-4:40|-4:40,6,20
216,180,98264,6,0,B|242:181|264:168|264:168|280:184|308:188|308:188|328:168|336:124|336:124|352:136|364:152,1,191.999994140625
231,327,99671,5,0,0:0:0:0:
133,272,99905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,272,100022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,272,100139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
39,334,100374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
37,222,100608,2,0,P|32:188|39:140,1,80
117,37,101077,2,0,P|122:71|115:119,1,80
200,189,101546,5,0,0:0:0:0:
302,117,101780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,117,101897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,117,102014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,224,102249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,295,102483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,189,102717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,189,102835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,189,102952,2,0,L|99:186,1,80
8,176,103421,5,0,0:0:0:0:
75,86,103655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,86,103772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,86,103889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,186,104124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
171,285,104358,2,0,L|259:281,1,80
354,197,104827,2,0,L|266:201,1,80
203,113,105296,5,0,0:0:0:0:
120,186,105530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,186,105647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,186,105764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,104,105999,2,0,L|0:104,2,40
134,41,106467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,41,106585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,41,106702,2,0,P|175:35|221:40,1,80
306,100,107171,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,202,107405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,202,107522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,202,107639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
333,286,107874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
425,222,108108,2,0,B|430:173|430:173|424:122,1,80
339,43,108577,2,0,B|334:92|334:92|340:143,1,80
260,202,109046,5,0,0:0:0:0:
172,136,109280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,136,109397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,136,109514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,239,109749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,304,109983,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,206,110217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,206,110335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,206,110452,2,0,L|365:204,1,80
464,203,110921,5,0,0:0:0:0:
408,105,111155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,105,111272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,105,111389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
351,204,111624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
277,119,111858,2,0,P|223:126|191:120,1,80
302,39,112327,2,0,P|356:32|388:38,1,80
380,36,112678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,36,112796,5,0,0:0:0:0:
457,116,113030,2,0,L|505:116,2,40
376,193,113499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,193,113616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,193,113733,2,0,L|321:194,3,40
289,225,114202,2,0,L|234:226,3,40
236,272,114671,6,0,L|136:276,1,95.9999970703126
44,280,115139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,184,115374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,92,115608,2,0,L|103:88,1,95.9999970703126
208,208,116077,2,0,P|188:160|204:84,1,95.9999970703126
228,88,116428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,88,116546,6,0,L|284:84,1,47.9999985351563
304,48,116780,2,0,L|368:44,1,47.9999985351563
400,40,117014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,136,117249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
425,222,117483,2,0,P|361:230|325:210,1,95.9999970703126
188,316,117952,2,0,L|292:308,1,95.9999970703126
328,324,118303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,324,118421,6,0,P|392:316|428:336,1,95.9999970703126
436,236,118889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,140,119124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,44,119358,2,0,P|384:40|344:44,1,95.9999970703126
168,108,119827,2,0,P|232:104|272:108,1,95.9999970703126
300,136,120178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,136,120296,6,0,P|304:172|304:192,1,47.9999985351563
332,220,120530,2,0,P|336:256|336:276,1,47.9999985351563
332,316,120764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,340,120999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,320,121233,2,0,L|48:312,1,95.9999970703126
8,176,121702,2,0,P|56:176|96:152,1,95.9999970703126
116,108,122053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,108,122171,6,0,L|211:115,1,95.9999970703126
292,64,122639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,160,122874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,256,123108,2,0,L|296:356,1,95.9999970703126
432,252,123577,2,0,P|444:200|444:152,1,95.9999970703126
428,112,123928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,112,124046,6,0,P|380:116|364:116,1,47.9999985351563
340,88,124280,2,0,P|292:92|276:92,1,47.9999985351563
244,96,124514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,72,124749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,164,124983,2,0,P|177:211|188:258,1,95.9999970703126
320,316,125452,2,0,L|440:320,1,95.9999970703126
452,288,125803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,288,125921,6,0,L|456:172,1,95.9999970703126
400,112,126389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,176,126624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,84,126858,2,0,P|252:64|228:24,1,95.9999970703126
184,172,127327,2,0,P|192:232|192:280,1,95.9999970703126
176,312,127678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,312,127796,6,0,P|128:296|112:296,1,47.9999985351563
104,256,128030,2,0,P|56:240|40:240,1,47.9999985351563
16,260,128264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,164,128499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,164,128616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,164,128733,2,0,P|28:108|28:64,1,95.9999970703126
116,32,129202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,68,129436,2,0,P|264:60|272:60,1,47.9999985351563
296,76,129671,6,0,L|388:80,1,80
424,84,130022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,84,130139,2,0,L|416:184,1,80
384,200,130491,2,0,L|392:300,1,80
396,328,130842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,312,131077,2,0,L|236:316,1,40
172,200,131546,5,0,0:0:0:0:
172,200,131663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,200,131780,2,0,L|180:140,1,40
204,120,132014,2,0,P|260:116|296:120,1,80
328,136,132366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,136,132483,2,0,P|384:140|400:140,1,40
404,108,132717,2,0,P|460:112|476:112,1,40
480,76,132952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,76,133069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,76,133186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,228,133421,6,0,L|388:320,1,80
296,336,133889,2,0,P|236:328|196:328,1,80
172,244,134358,2,0,P|211:241|251:235,1,80
288,148,134827,2,0,L|284:68,1,80
192,36,135296,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,36,135413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,36,135530,2,0,L|132:40,1,40
104,44,135764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,44,135881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,44,135999,2,0,L|104:96,1,40
136,120,136233,2,0,L|136:172,3,40
176,188,136702,2,0,L|176:240,3,40
178,276,137171,5,0,0:0:0:0:
137,96,152171,6,0,L|221:86,1,80
311,95,152639,2,0,L|395:85,1,80
215,86,153108,2,0,P|217:140|245:193,1,80
244,208,153460,2,0,L|169:212,1,40
109,197,153811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
67,286,154046,6,0,P|62:334|72:369,1,80
165,364,154514,2,0,P|170:316|160:281,1,80
266,194,154983,2,0,L|368:191,1,80
391,207,155335,2,0,L|437:206,1,40
473,291,155686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,349,155921,6,0,L|298:342,1,80
230,300,156389,2,0,L|132:293,1,80
316,343,156858,2,0,P|320:291|311:255,1,80
299,218,157210,2,0,L|363:209,1,40
433,198,157561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
381,116,157796,6,0,L|336:108,3,40
300,84,158264,2,0,L|255:76,3,40
213,68,158733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,68,159671,6,0,L|224:176,1,95.9999970703126
180,248,160139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,332,160374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,248,160608,2,0,P|336:248|372:256,1,95.9999970703126
140,324,161077,2,0,P|92:332|45:331,1,95.9999970703126
28,236,161546,6,0,L|24:132,1,95.9999970703126
36,44,162014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,80,162249,2,0,L|200:72,1,47.9999985351563
216,92,162483,2,0,L|292:84,1,47.9999985351563
312,80,162717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,80,162835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,80,162952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,176,163186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,176,163303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,176,163421,6,0,P|280:228|276:272,1,95.9999970703126
344,336,163889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,296,164124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,200,164358,2,0,P|410:152|396:106,1,95.9999970703126
236,52,164827,2,0,P|221:97|216:145,1,95.9999970703126
168,228,165296,6,0,L|72:232,1,95.9999970703126
28,316,165764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,316,165999,2,0,L|171:313,1,47.9999985351563
216,332,166233,2,0,L|263:329,1,47.9999985351563
312,328,166467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,328,166585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,328,166702,2,0,B|360:332|360:332|408:312,1,95.9999970703126
444,284,167053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,284,167171,6,0,P|432:216|436:176,1,95.9999970703126
468,100,167639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,36,167874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,124,168108,2,0,L|260:128,1,95.9999970703126
112,196,168577,2,0,L|207:199,1,95.9999970703126
287,254,169046,6,0,P|260:278|239:291,1,47.9999985351563
240,332,169280,2,0,P|205:343|181:347,1,47.9999985351563
148,340,169514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,268,169749,2,0,L|96:200,1,47.9999985351563
76,176,169983,2,0,L|88:108,1,47.9999985351563
96,80,170217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,80,170335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,80,170452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,36,170686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,36,170803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,36,170921,6,0,P|236:48|288:48,1,95.9999970703126
372,28,171389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,120,171624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,216,171858,2,0,L|356:312,1,95.9999970703126
196,240,172327,2,0,L|204:144,1,95.9999970703126
208,96,172678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,96,172796,6,0,B|168:100|168:100|100:84,1,95.9999970703126
40,148,173264,2,0,L|48:244,1,95.9999970703126
56,292,173616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,292,173733,2,0,P|112:276|156:280,1,95.9999970703126
236,316,174202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,280,174436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,280,174553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,280,174671,6,0,L|328:184,1,80
329,104,175139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,151,175374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
166,206,175608,2,0,P|159:254|168:298,1,80
245,151,176077,2,0,P|252:103|243:59,1,80
161,114,176546,5,0,0:0:0:0:
78,64,176780,2,0,P|75:152|128:203,1,160
199,257,177483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
283,211,177717,2,0,L|380:211,1,80
255,134,178186,2,0,L|158:134,1,80
93,185,178655,5,0,0:0:0:0:
89,89,178889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,134,179124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
93,185,179358,2,0,B|86:219|86:219|98:271,1,80
175,134,179827,2,0,B|182:100|182:100|170:48,1,80
84,95,180296,5,0,0:0:0:0:
175,134,180530,2,0,B|305:102|283:164|419:128,1,240
454,215,181467,2,0,P|461:259|450:308,1,80
411,129,181936,2,0,P|404:85|415:36,1,80
314,62,182405,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,124,182639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
174,53,182874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,142,183108,2,0,L|141:247,1,80
217,330,183577,2,0,L|215:225,1,80
215,153,184046,5,0,0:0:0:0:
297,201,184280,2,0,P|363:244|450:121,1,240
362,129,185217,2,0,B|367:83|367:83|360:37,1,80
297,201,185686,2,0,B|292:247|292:247|299:293,1,80
224,342,186155,5,0,0:0:0:0:
130,361,186389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
83,276,186624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
177,262,186858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,342,187092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,264,187327,1,0,0:0:0:0:
229,182,187561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
275,97,187796,6,0,L|380:93,1,80
450,89,188264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,183,188499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,187,188733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,93,188967,2,0,L|346:4,1,80
256,45,189436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
146,18,189671,5,0,0:0:0:0:
60,68,189905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,68,190022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,68,190139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,180,190374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
155,231,190608,2,0,P|192:227|238:231,1,80
124,303,191077,2,0,P|87:307|41:303,1,80
155,231,191546,6,0,P|192:227|238:231,1,80
124,303,192014,2,0,P|87:307|41:303,1,80
155,231,192483,2,0,P|192:227|238:231,1,80
124,303,192952,2,0,P|87:307|41:303,1,80
9,196,193421,5,0,0:0:0:0:
67,100,193655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
67,100,193772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
67,100,193889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,183,194124,2,0,L|211:176,2,40
90,282,194592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
90,282,194710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
90,282,194827,2,0,L|88:372,1,80
193,323,195296,5,0,0:0:0:0:
294,370,195530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,370,195647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,370,195764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
273,259,195999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
249,149,196233,2,0,L|197:149,3,40
162,180,196702,2,0,L|110:180,3,40
256,192,197171,12,0,199983,0:0:0:0:

Lune

258 posts

Joined September 2015

Lune 2017-06-09T16:47:42+00:00

i'm bored so i prefer to give you love instead bbytrook ♥

Easy
00:28:421 (3,4) - blanket
02:39:202 (4) - I suggest to delete that so it does a kind of pause before the kiai and it's cool
02:42:483 (4,1) - blanket
03:06:858 (2,3) - ^
03:16:233 - maybe make this clickable :v

Normal
00:36:858 (3) - reverse on 00:37:092 - ?
00:45:296 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - feels empty.. how about https://prnt.sc/fhvrqv or something that looks like that
01:05:217 (4) - my opinion but 01:05:335 - vocals there and 01:05:452 - beat there.. maybe change something
02:15:296 (1,2) - hard for normal players, let's put a slider on 02:15:530 (2) - to 02:15:999 (3) -

Collab Hard
hi lapisu ily
01:15:061 (5,6,1) - i dont hear any instrument like this behind, maybe delete that the diff is already filled with those xd
ohh i have an idea 01:31:585 - 'up' maybe put sliders' start there it could be cool
01:38:264 (1) - cool slider as cool as you gurls
02:15:296 - try a patter like https://prnt.sc/fhvwa7 no need to overmap this
03:04:280 (2,3) - blanket
03:10:608 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - must be kind of boring even if it's a cool idea

Ora's Insane
cool map so idk what to say erm
02:53:733 (3) - maybe you should try something else than just a slider

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Firetruck 2017-06-09T18:12:47+00:00

walter85 wrote:
Hi! Mod from my queue

[Easy]
Very well done diff, I don't have much to say except for some aesthetics things
00:24:671 (3) - Imo it would look better if you curve the end just a bit like this, same thing with 00:52:796 (1) - and 01:56:546 (3) - yup
00:28:421 (3) - Blanket? yes
00:41:546 (1) - Move it down a bit so that its curvature points at 00:42:952 (2) -, it should be good around x:390 y:60 yus

[Normal]
00:30:296 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think these sliders follow the rhythm well, in fact you can hear that the drums are on white ticks, and the singer emphasizes white ticks as well, therefore slider heads should be on white ticks. This applies also at other sections like 00:34:046 (1,2,3,4,5) - or 02:58:421 (1,2,3,4,5) -, be sure to check them all they follow the vocals though, she clearly starts singing at the red tick here 00:30:530 (2) - so i followed it up by placing the other sliders at the red tick to make it alot more comfortable to play
01:00:296 (1,2) - 01:02:171 (1,2) - There sliders are a bit weird, they may confuse new players ~~but who cares about them lol~~ i think they're fine lol

[Hard]
00:47:522 (2,3) - Mantain the same distance snap here, like you do right after with 00:50:335 (7,8) - it's not the same though, the other one is being followed up by a slider while this is a circle only, i wanna stack the circles to make it more interesting to play
03:00:530 (2) - I think it's better if you flip it and then move 03:01:467 (3,4) - along with it, like this
03:11:546 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think it'll be easy to read for the hard players, also it can be frustrating getting a combo break like this at the end of the map. Maybe make it a bit more readable? It's not that much of an issue tho
it seemed easy when 2 of my friends testplayed it (they play hard diffs) but i'll get more opinions on this, i thought it was pretty cool since it was so repetitive i wanted to make the pattern repetitive as well
That's all, sorry for short mod but I'm still not that confident with modding ><

thanks for modding!

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2017-06-10T10:58:25+00:00

[ M I N A K O ] wrote:
Collab Hard
hi lapisu ily I love you too ♥
01:15:061 (5,6,1) - i dont hear any instrument like this behind, maybe delete that the diff is already filled with those xd If you listen closely, there's a finish.
ohh i have an idea 01:31:585 - 'up' maybe put sliders' start there it could be cool Rearranged this part.
01:38:264 (1) - cool slider as cool as you gurls
02:15:296 - try a patter like https://prnt.sc/fhvwa7 no need to overmap this Fixed.

Thank you for modding!
https://puu.sh/wg36c.osu

Shiratori

525 posts

Joined April 2015

Shiratori 2017-06-10T12:29:16+00:00

wtf is the sp
I will mod tomorrow

Nuolong

1,032 posts

Joined August 2014

Nuolong 2017-06-11T00:28:58+00:00

ZhongRen wrote:
wtf is the sp
I will mod tomorrow

sp is UR FAce!~!!!!! haHAHAHA GOT U!!1

Lune

258 posts

Joined September 2015

Lune 2017-06-12T14:29:22+00:00

Nuolong wrote:
ZhongRen wrote:
wtf is the sp
I will mod tomorrow
sp is UR FAce!~!!!!! haHAHAHA GOT U!!1

WE SAID NO MEME

Neptunee

137 posts

Joined May 2016

Neptunee 2017-06-13T01:02:31+00:00

W H Y I S T H E R E 1 0 0 + S T A R S

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2017-06-13T09:02:33+00:00

SO JUNGYEON CAN BE THE STAR SHE WANTED TO BE

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2017-06-13T09:03:48+00:00

Neptunee wrote:
W H Y I S T H E R E 1 0 0 + S T A R S

~~bakari~~ bastari

Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2017-06-14T07:30:37+00:00

Q

[General]
00:22:796 - 00:37:796 - add red line here?

[Easy]
00:20:921 (3,4,1) - how about set triangle?
01:04:983 (2,3) - flow looks weird
02:42:483 (4,1) - blanket

[Normal]
00:15:296 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - for me, this looks really boring, Just same pattern and same rhyrthm is repeating, in my suggestion, 00:17:171 (1,2,3) - can make consiistency with 00:09:671 (1,2,3) - .
01:00:296 (1,2) - what is this wiggle
01:53:733 (3) - you can make this as repeat slider since this part can be emphasized.
02:17:171 - start break at here

가사가 하나밖에 없네ㅋㅋㅋ GL

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Firetruck 2017-06-18T12:18:27+00:00

Neoskylove wrote:
Q

[General]
00:22:796 - 00:37:796 - add red line here? why tho?

[Easy]
00:20:921 (3,4,1) - how about set triangle?
01:04:983 (2,3) - flow looks weird i think it flows well
02:42:483 (4,1) - blanket

[Normal]
00:15:296 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - for me, this looks really boring, Just same pattern and same rhyrthm is repeating, in my suggestion, 00:17:171 (1,2,3) - can make consiistency with 00:09:671 (1,2,3) - . yeha, that's it's intentional, since the song is doing the same LOL
01:00:296 (1,2) - what is this wiggle emhpisizing her fast rapping
01:53:733 (3) - you can make this as repeat slider since this part can be emphasized. emphasizing drums here
02:17:171 - start break at here

가사가 하나밖에 없네ㅋㅋㅋ GL

thanks for modding!! no reply = fixed

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2017-06-19T11:12:08+00:00

i love firetruck shes the best literally like omg shes such a queen sLAY yaAASAS

Lune

258 posts

Joined September 2015

Lune 2017-07-01T18:52:31+00:00

Xiaolin wrote:
i love firetruck shes the best literally like omg shes such a queen sLAY yaAASAS

me @ you all ♥

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

DeRandom Otaku 2017-07-02T17:23:34+00:00

tf have you done bakari

Izzywing

osu! Alumni

2,248 posts

Joined March 2016

Izzywing 2017-07-05T06:27:20+00:00

placeholder
7/11 edit - lol 6 day placeholder, ill do this tommorow
7/13 edit - alright nvm ill just mod it whenever i mod it

Last edited by Izzywing 2017-07-13T08:45:18+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Firetruck 2017-07-06T12:58:44+00:00

yoooo nayeons dream might come true

Izzywing

osu! Alumni

2,248 posts

Joined March 2016

Izzywing 2017-07-17T22:23:22+00:00

Modding this because of my boy Bakari's kds sacrifice

[general]

check tags for a slight inconsistency

[Easy]

Up until the first break there's no gaps in the rhythm anywhere, you can remove a circle somewhere to give the player some downtime

^This applies to the entire map, lol. Add gaps in the rhythm to give osu babies some downtime

01:35:921 (3) - I feel like this would be way better as a spinner that ends on 01:37:796; the recovery is there and a spinner really fits with this "drop" effect
03:15:296 (3) - Line up the red nodes with the slider ticks so the slider shape matches the music!
Altho I think 03:16:233 - should be a separate object considering the drums.

Good diff. This isn't a big issue, but I found it odd that some horizontal sliders were perfectly flat and some (like 02:04:046 (3) - ) are very very slightly tilted lol

[Normal]

00:07:796 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - See you how you differentiated the rhythms here for the different vocals? I think you should do that for 00:15:296 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this part as well. You can make 00:18:108 (3) - a 1/2 repeat slider for example.
I saw above that you put the wiggles in 01:00:296 (1,2), but that doesn't make much sense because other instances of 'fast rapping' don't get such an effect, like 00:50:921 (1,2) - for example
01:05:217 (4) - This doesnt feel right, because you're not really clicking on anything important. Consider doing a blue tick rhythm that maps the strong vocal on 01:05:335 - you can use 3/4 reverse sliders for example.
01:34:046 (1) - DS is smaller than usual
01:36:858 (3) - consider making this a reverse so that your'e mapping until the actual stopping point of the music (01:37:796 - )
01:47:171 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - See the first point. And for 02:49:046 (1,2,3) -
02:17:171 - why not map this?

I think diff should get a few more mods to iron out the rhythm in spots. You did a pretty good job, but it needs a bit more.

[Collab Hard]

The intro section has a bit too much active 1/4 I think. Make some of those triplets reverse sliders, so that you can properly introduce the idea of triplets without going overboard in the first 20 seconds of the map. Like, maybe make the first triplet in each measure (such as 00:08:030 (2,3,4)) a 1/4 reverse instead.

00:35:921 (1,2,3) - dont really think this needs to be a triplet
00:37:561 (8,9,1,2,3,4) - a bit too hard to read for hard players, they aren't good at 1/4 slider mechanics just yet, so it can be hard to read how to hit this.
00:43:421 (1,2,3,4) - I'd put the circle on 00:43:772, because thats how you usually map this vocal. It feels weird to play as is.
00:45:647 - unmapped, 00:47:522 - mapped. be consistent with this
00:50:921 (1,2,3,4) - dont think a 5 note stream is good for this level of difficulty / for the spread.
01:00:296 (1) - again too much active 1/4 in this section. You have to remember that this is the first diff in the spread with 1/4 so using a lot of it in such a short time goes against the idea of linear progression when the diff before this is entirely 1/2 rhythms
01:05:335 (7,8,9,1) - hard to read, usually players switch fingers when playing 1/4 in a hard so when you have this kind of stack, they start 01:05:921 (1) - with their non primary tapping finger which can throw them off quite a bit.

Yeah these concerns pretty much repeat.

I do think this diff is pretty solid, so consider mapping an advanced or something between the normal and hard that introduces 1/4 rhythms but doesn't use them nearly as excessively as this one does. Alternatively, reduce the amount of active 1/4 in this diff as I described in my mod.

[Ora]

00:25:608 (4,5,6,7,1) - Considering the uniqueness of the vocals 00:25:842 (5,6,7,1) - here, you should pattern them separately from 00:25:608 (4). As it is now, 4 feels included in the pattern visually and it makes what you're doing stand out less. This applies to all of these
00:53:733 (5,6,7) - why'd the rhythm randomly change up to not include the vocal at 00:54:085 - when you mapped it in the previous measures
00:55:960 - same for this
00:57:835 - again here
00:58:421 (1,2,3,4) - and for here too
I like the blue tick vocal rhythms, but its weird that you randomly changed to ignore them after following them previously
01:04:983 (1,2,3) - this removes emphasis on the vocal on 01:05:100, I think a double rhythm like this would be more appropriate - http://puu.sh/wMc6v/5bbabb5483.jpg
01:09:085 - :C
01:37:092 (2) - you can split this into 3 reverse sliders with clickables on the white and red ticks
01:54:671 (1) - This section I think could follow the song better. The music has interesting blue tick rhythms (with vocals at points like 01:55:022 - and 01:55:960 - ) but you mapped it like you would the other sections, with 1/2 sliders and triplets.
02:38:733 (9) - the repeating drums on the music stop at like 02:39:202 - so extending this reverse slider past that sounds weird
00:24:671 (1,2,3,4) - vs 02:56:546 (1,2), why the big difference in density? Musics the same

Mainly looking for a response regarding the ignored blue tick vocals and inconsistencies in that. Another diff I think could use a few more mods.

---

Overall this set has potential for sure. Get a few more mods and respond to my point regarding the spread between the normal and hard (which entails either mapping an advanced or significantly nerfing the hard). You're free to call me when you think the set is ready at that point and I'll take another look.

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2017-07-18T10:51:57+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
[Ora]
If it's not here I changed it, but here are my concerns for these other mods you made

00:25:608 (4,5,6,7,1) - Considering the uniqueness of the vocals 00:25:842 (5,6,7,1) - here, you should pattern them separately from 00:25:608 (4). As it is now, 4 feels included in the pattern visually and it makes what you're doing stand out less. This applies to all of these I understand what you're saying but I don't 100% agree and I still feel like it plays naturally. I don't really know how else to argue this part but I don't think it's that big of a deal. You still make a good point but I think it can be mapped either way.

00:58:421 (1,2,3,4) - and for here too I don't agree with this one because it's a break at the middle of this rap section where the music is pretty intense. idk

01:54:671 (1) - This section I think could follow the song better. The music has interesting blue tick rhythms (with vocals at points like 01:55:022 - and 01:55:960 - ) but you mapped it like you would the other sections, with 1/2 sliders and triplets. the main focus of this part for me was to emphasize the intense music with spacing as you can see in the streams and most of the jumps: 01:56:546 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - . There really isn't that many blue tick vocals to map to in this section tbh except when she says "thang" (then the rhythm could be mapped like this I guess: http://puu.sh/wMCWE/5d17c4e9f3.jpg)... IDK! I just felt like mapping the music for some reason and it was really intense...

Mainly looking for a response regarding the ignored blue tick vocals and inconsistencies in that. Another diff I think could use a few more mods.

---

Yeah so i totally f'ed up on that rap part with a lot of blue tick vocals. Rhythm has been a struggle for me in pretty much all of my maps and I keep making the same stupid mistakes. btw there was 1 more blue tick vocal you didn't mention that I found at 01:06:858 - so I did something similar with what you told me to do at 01:04:983 -

oh yeah and for 01:37:092 (2) -, I split the reverse slider into 3 but idk how well it plays and it might be too much for a low insane.

update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 75184
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22796,45296,75296,99671,114671,137171,159671,174671,197171
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.5

[Metadata]
Title:I'm gonna be a star
TitleUnicode:I'm gonna be a star
Artist:TWICE
ArtistUnicode:TWICE
Creator:Firetruck
Version:Ora's Insane
Source:
Tags:K-Pop Kpop JYP Entertainment Girl Group ÃƒÂ«Ã¢â‚¬Å¡Ã‹Å“ÃƒÂ¬Ã¢â‚¬â€Ã‚Â° ÃƒÂ¬ Ã¢â‚¬Â¢ÃƒÂ¬Ã¢â‚¬â€Ã‚Â° ÃƒÂ«Ã‚ÂªÃ‚Â¨ÃƒÂ«Ã‚ÂªÃ‚Â¨ ÃƒÂ¬Ã¢â‚¬Å¡Ã‚Â¬ÃƒÂ«Ã¢â‚¬Å¡Ã‹Å“ ÃƒÂ¬Ã‚Â§Ã¢â€šÂ¬ÃƒÂÃ…Â¡Ã‚Â¨ ÃƒÂ«Ã‚Â¯Ã‚Â¸ÃƒÂ«Ã¢â‚¬Å¡Ã‹Å“ ÃƒÂ«Ã¢â‚¬Â¹Ã‚Â¤ÃƒÂÃ‹Å“Ã¢â‚¬Å¾ ÃƒÂ¬Ã‚Â±Ã¢â‚¬Å¾ÃƒÂ¬Ã‹Å“Ã‚Â ÃƒÂ¬Ã‚Â¯Ã¢â‚¬ÂÃƒÂ¬Ã…â€œÃ¢â‚¬Å¾ Nayeon Jeongyeon Momo Sana Jihyo Mina Dahyun Chaeyeong Tzuyu PAGE TWO Lapis Aoki Sixteen
BeatmapID:1314648
BeatmapSetID:622305

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"asasasaSAASFSDF.png",0,0
//Break Periods
2,75496,85796
2,137370,147671
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
7796,468.75,4,2,0,70,1,0
37796,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
41546,-100,4,2,0,65,0,0
45296,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
90296,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
94046,-100,4,2,0,65,0,0
98264,-166.666666666667,4,2,0,20,0,0
99671,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
114671,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,70,0,1
129671,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
152171,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
155921,-100,4,2,0,65,0,0
159671,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,70,0,1
174671,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
190139,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
193421,-100,4,2,0,65,0,0
197171,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
197639,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
198108,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
198577,-100,4,2,0,20,0,0
199046,-100,4,2,0,10,0,0
199514,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 186,150,216
Combo4 : 232,96,130
Combo5 : 105,198,203
Combo6 : 255,128,64

[HitObjects]
305,143,7796,5,4,0:0:0:0:
202,256,8030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,256,8147,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,256,8264,2,0,L|109:250,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,241,8733,2,0,P|310:283|311:334,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,143,9202,2,0,P|201:100|201:50,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,7,9671,5,4,3:0:0:0:
288,162,9905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,162,10022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,162,10140,1,0,1:0:0:0:
440,81,10374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,57,10609,1,4,3:0:0:0:
393,177,10842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,177,10960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,177,11077,2,0,B|403:227|403:227|384:309,1,127.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,333,11546,5,4,3:0:0:0:
225,291,11780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,291,11897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,291,12014,2,0,B|179:283|179:283|127:292,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,208,12483,2,0,P|58:219|110:205,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,70,12952,2,0,P|200:112|214:164,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,290,13421,5,4,3:0:0:0:
466,234,13655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
466,234,13772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
466,234,13889,1,0,1:0:0:0:
297,210,14124,2,0,L|256:182,2,42.5,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
435,308,14592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
435,308,14710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
435,308,14827,2,0,P|392:264|411:177,1,127.5,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,174,15296,5,4,0:0:0:0:
306,290,15530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,290,15647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,290,15764,2,0,P|262:299|219:291,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,141,16233,2,0,L|137:244,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
39,364,16702,2,0,L|43:279,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,141,17171,5,4,3:0:0:0:
285,195,17405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,195,17522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,195,17639,1,0,1:0:0:0:
117,225,17874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,125,18108,1,4,3:0:0:0:
214,276,18342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,276,18460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,276,18577,2,0,P|266:301|349:290,1,127.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,282,19046,5,4,3:0:0:0:
461,163,19280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
461,163,19397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
461,163,19514,2,0,P|460:209|469:262,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
501,80,19983,2,0,P|459:72|414:79,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,183,20452,2,0,P|303:188|261:180,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,166,20803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,166,20921,5,4,3:0:0:0:
107,125,21155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
107,125,21272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
107,125,21389,1,0,1:0:0:0:
56,287,21624,2,0,L|41:334,2,42.5,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
215,344,22092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,344,22209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,344,22327,2,0,B|265:354|265:354|339:337,1,127.5,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
372,327,22796,5,4,0:0:0:0:
329,179,23030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
485,248,23264,2,0,P|444:249|397:240,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,103,23733,2,0,P|314:138|330:183,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,341,24202,2,0,P|282:304|313:268,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
485,248,24671,5,4,3:0:0:0:
329,179,24905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
435,69,25139,2,0,L|426:163,1,85
408,316,25608,1,4,3:0:0:0:
248,342,25842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,268,26077,1,0,1:0:0:0:
192,294,26311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,220,26546,5,4,3:0:0:0:
248,342,26780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,246,27014,2,0,L|70:188,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,61,27483,2,0,L|166:147,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,112,27952,2,0,L|83:83,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,79,28421,5,4,3:0:0:0:
166,144,28655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,303,28889,2,0,L|254:209,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,73,29358,1,4,3:0:0:0:
362,99,29592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,142,29827,1,0,1:0:0:0:
401,168,30061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,211,30296,5,4,3:0:0:0:
362,99,30530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,142,30764,2,0,P|208:182|204:229,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
167,380,31233,2,0,P|200:340|204:293,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,172,31702,1,0,1:0:0:0:
128,311,31936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,222,32171,5,4,3:0:0:0:
20,262,32405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
86,88,32639,2,0,L|103:177,1,85
128,311,33108,1,4,3:0:0:0:
288,285,33342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
167,242,33577,1,0,1:0:0:0:
327,216,33811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
206,173,34046,5,4,3:0:0:0:
288,285,34280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,117,34514,2,0,P|220:96|177:98,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,135,34983,2,0,P|347:88|323:51,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,220,35452,2,0,P|417:194|436:155,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,286,35921,6,0,P|340:303|365:314,3,42.5,4|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,220,36389,1,0,1:0:0:0:
233,167,36624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
173,307,36858,2,0,L|179:357,3,42.5,4|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,279,37327,2,0,L|97:329,3,42.5,0|0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
9,251,37796,5,4,0:0:0:0:
145,147,38030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
145,147,38147,1,0,0:0:0:0:
145,147,38264,2,0,L|138:58,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,224,38733,2,0,P|147:236|106:226,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,159,39202,2,0,P|364:147|405:157,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
223,124,39671,6,0,P|212:84|227:32,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,260,40140,2,0,P|300:300|285:352,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,251,40608,2,0,L|220:243,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,133,41077,2,0,L|292:125,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,101,41546,5,4,0:0:0:0:
118,251,41780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
118,251,41897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
118,251,42014,2,0,L|126:353,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,369,42366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
129,369,42483,1,4,3:0:0:0:
281,382,42717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,382,42835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,382,42952,2,0,L|274:297,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,43421,5,4,3:0:0:0:
337,142,43655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
337,142,43772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
337,142,43889,1,2,0:0:0:0:
195,235,44124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
265,99,44358,1,4,3:0:0:0:
296,69,44475,1,0,3:0:0:0:
337,58,44592,1,8,3:0:0:0:
377,67,44709,1,0,3:0:0:0:
408,96,44826,1,8,3:0:0:0:
420,135,44943,1,0,0:0:0:0:
413,177,45061,1,8,3:0:0:0:
385,209,45178,1,0,3:0:0:0:
347,226,45296,6,0,P|332:184|343:135,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,177,45647,2,0,P|442:143|489:128,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
490,213,45999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
401,337,46233,1,4,3:0:0:0:
401,337,46350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
401,337,46467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
490,213,46702,1,0,1:0:0:0:
347,226,46936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
347,226,47053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
347,226,47171,6,0,P|305:211|256:222,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,292,47522,2,0,P|264:321|249:368,1,85
334,369,47874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,271,48108,1,4,3:0:0:0:
153,262,48225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
111,268,48342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
74,288,48459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
46,319,48577,2,0,L|34:218,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,128,49046,5,4,3:0:0:0:
153,262,49280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
117,104,49514,1,0,1:0:0:0:
141,69,49631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,53,49748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
221,59,49865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,85,49983,2,0,P|301:93|344:83,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,86,50335,2,0,P|373:78|330:88,1,85
296,10,50686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
378,161,50921,6,0,L|373:212,3,42.5,4|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,182,51389,2,0,L|286:233,3,42.5,0|0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,206,51858,2,0,L|196:295,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,154,52327,2,0,L|100:243,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,77,52796,5,4,3:0:0:0:
60,58,53030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
99,238,53264,1,0,1:0:0:0:
60,58,53499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
185,181,53733,2,0,P|202:229|199:264,1,85
152,328,54085,2,0,P|92:342|23:309,1,127.5
82,163,54671,5,4,3:0:0:0:
212,271,54905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,286,55022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
293,286,55139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
333,270,55256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,253,55373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
414,251,55490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
453,267,55608,2,0,B|463:314|463:314|454:357,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,368,55960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
313,130,56311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
313,130,56428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
313,130,56546,6,0,P|358:138|400:128,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,49,56897,2,0,P|349:41|307:51,1,85
238,86,57249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,227,57483,6,0,L|194:313,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,373,57835,2,0,P|183:348|271:367,1,127.5
178,227,58421,6,0,P|167:184|162:141,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,301,58889,2,0,P|266:257|277:215,1,85
166,324,59358,2,0,P|117:331|79:321,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,217,59827,2,0,P|324:209|362:219,1,85
205,111,60296,5,4,0:0:0:0:
205,111,60413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,111,60530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
78,274,60764,2,0,L|30:287,2,42.5,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,217,61234,5,4,3:0:0:0:
276,217,61350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,217,61467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,147,61702,2,0,L|56:108,2,42.5,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,317,62171,5,4,3:0:0:0:
197,317,62288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,317,62405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,111,62639,2,0,L|236:68,2,42.5,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,274,63108,6,0,P|35:263|1:227,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,317,63577,2,0,P|240:328|274:364,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,359,64046,5,4,3:0:0:0:
115,359,64163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
115,359,64280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
78,190,64514,2,0,L|128:204,1,42.5
201,224,64749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,72,64983,5,4,3:0:0:0:
183,72,65100,2,0,L|166:134,1,42.5
238,150,65335,2,0,P|276:187|283:232,1,85
254,287,65686,2,0,P|234:300|206:307,1,42.5
201,224,65921,5,4,3:0:0:0:
355,166,66155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,168,66272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
434,188,66389,1,0,1:0:0:0:
458,223,66506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
465,264,66623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
453,305,66740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
425,336,66858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
425,336,66975,2,0,L|365:332,1,42.5,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,358,67210,2,0,L|178:350,1,127.5
241,168,67796,5,4,0:0:0:0:
382,235,68030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,70,68264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
291,250,68499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
291,250,68616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
291,250,68733,2,0,L|301:345,1,85
224,364,69085,2,0,L|210:217,1,127.5
204,160,69671,5,4,3:0:0:0:
4,200,69905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,338,70139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
134,338,70256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,338,70374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,160,70608,1,4,3:0:0:0:
240,139,70725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
282,131,70842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,138,70959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
361,158,71077,2,0,P|406:168|451:151,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
469,135,71428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,135,71546,6,0,P|459:182|475:239,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,270,71897,2,0,P|414:317|398:374,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,319,72249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
337,319,72483,2,0,P|275:339|209:332,1,127.5,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,321,72952,1,4,3:0:0:0:
90,192,73186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
242,177,73421,6,0,P|261:169|291:144,3,42.5,4|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,144,73889,2,0,P|340:124|327:106,3,42.5,0|0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,37,74358,2,0,P|297:44|267:69,3,42.5,4|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,71,74827,2,0,P|217:90|230:108,3,42.5,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,177,75296,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86546,12,0,89827,0:0:0:0:
436,240,90296,5,4,3:0:0:0:
432,265,90764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,290,91233,2,0,P|385:296|340:291,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,283,91585,1,2,3:0:0:0:
76,144,92171,5,4,3:0:0:0:
80,119,92639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,94,93108,2,0,P|127:88|172:93,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,101,93460,1,2,3:0:0:0:
142,348,94046,6,0,L|129:260,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,181,94514,2,0,L|216:269,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,320,94983,2,0,L|308:232,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,145,95451,2,0,L|410:233,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,82,95921,5,4,3:0:0:0:
425,64,96038,1,0,3:0:0:0:
392,59,96155,1,4,3:0:0:0:
359,68,96272,1,0,3:0:0:0:
328,96,96389,1,4,3:0:0:0:
291,116,96506,1,0,3:0:0:0:
249,116,96623,1,4,3:0:0:0:
212,95,96740,1,0,3:0:0:0:
190,57,96858,6,0,L|197:13,1,42.5,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
122,123,97092,2,0,L|126:103,2,21.25,8|0|8,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
158,209,97327,2,0,L|162:189,2,21.25,8|0|8,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
89,272,97561,2,0,L|93:252,2,21.25,8|0|8,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
129,357,97796,1,0,0:0:0:0:
129,127,99671,5,4,0:0:0:0:
219,250,99905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,250,100022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,250,100139,2,0,B|260:255|260:255|308:246,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,203,100608,2,0,P|139:247|145:299,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,288,101077,2,0,P|375:245|376:203,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,81,101546,5,4,0:0:0:0:
295,228,101780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,228,101897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,228,102014,1,4,3:0:0:0:
183,108,102249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,200,102483,1,4,3:0:0:0:
192,189,102717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,189,102835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,189,102952,2,0,P|150:181|118:154,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,323,103421,5,4,0:0:0:0:
309,353,103655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
309,353,103772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
309,353,103889,2,0,L|301:262,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,78,104358,2,0,P|429:71|472:83,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,150,104827,2,0,P|262:157|219:145,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,28,105296,5,4,0:0:0:0:
267,79,105530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,79,105647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,79,105764,1,4,3:0:0:0:
236,229,105999,2,0,L|226:287,2,42.5,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
134,114,106467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,114,106585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,113,106702,2,0,P|96:109|49:126,1,85,4|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,41,107171,5,4,0:0:0:0:
101,190,107405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
101,190,107522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
101,190,107639,2,0,L|107:285,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,336,108108,2,0,P|219:328|176:337,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
23,273,108577,2,0,P|69:281|112:272,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,170,109046,5,4,0:0:0:0:
181,334,109280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,334,109397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,334,109514,1,4,3:0:0:0:
139,186,109749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,245,109983,1,4,3:0:0:0:
181,334,110217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,334,110335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,334,110452,2,0,P|199:288|211:241,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,85,110921,5,4,0:0:0:0:
341,114,111155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,114,111272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,114,111389,2,0,P|383:99|426:102,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,209,111858,2,0,P|259:180|240:141,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,204,112327,2,0,P|391:247|367:283,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,302,112678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,302,112796,6,0,L|352:358,3,42.5,4|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,290,113264,2,0,L|266:346,3,42.5,4|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,265,113733,1,8,3:0:0:0:
149,235,113850,1,0,3:0:0:0:
108,228,113967,1,8,3:0:0:0:
70,245,114084,1,0,3:0:0:0:
48,281,114201,1,8,3:0:0:0:
50,323,114318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,356,114436,1,8,3:0:0:0:
114,370,114553,1,0,3:0:0:0:
155,359,114671,6,0,P|199:349|246:356,1,93.5000028533936,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,259,115139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
259,282,115374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
410,354,115608,1,4,3:0:0:0:
410,354,115725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
410,354,115842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,208,116077,6,0,P|261:196|215:205,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,267,116546,1,4,3:0:0:0:
92,91,116780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,264,117014,2,0,P|161:313|152:362,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,356,117483,1,4,3:0:0:0:
311,310,117600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,264,117717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
333,221,117834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,185,117952,2,0,P|415:194|460:182,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,82,118421,6,0,P|246:73|201:85,1,93.5000028533936,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,185,118889,1,0,1:0:0:0:
455,43,119124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,82,119358,1,4,3:0:0:0:
297,82,119475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,82,119592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,170,119827,1,0,1:0:0:0:
346,320,120061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,320,120178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,320,120296,6,0,P|296:317|250:310,1,93.5000028533936,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,166,120764,1,0,1:0:0:0:
123,314,120999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,181,121233,2,0,P|185:123|153:86,1,93.5000028533936,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,299,121702,2,0,P|43:357|75:394,1,93.5000028533936,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,376,122171,5,4,0:0:0:0:
123,314,122405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,265,122639,1,0,1:0:0:0:
202,298,122873,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,122,123108,1,4,3:0:0:0:
307,122,123225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,122,123342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,230,123577,2,0,L|223:128,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,9,124046,5,4,3:0:0:0:
351,185,124280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,32,124514,1,0,1:0:0:0:
457,54,124748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
351,185,124983,1,4,3:0:0:0:
306,173,125100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,179,125217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,202,125334,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,239,125452,2,0,P|126:263|46:225,1,140.25000428009,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
34,214,125921,5,4,0:0:0:0:
154,356,126155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,152,126389,1,0,1:0:0:0:
46,342,126624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,239,126858,1,4,3:0:0:0:
191,239,126975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,239,127092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
34,214,127327,1,0,1:0:0:0:
210,152,127561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
210,152,127678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
210,152,127796,6,0,P|258:142|310:155,1,93.5000028533936,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,364,128264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,207,128499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,207,128616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,207,128733,2,0,P|369:255|356:307,1,93.5000028533936,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,301,129201,2,0,P|145:253|158:201,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,73,129671,5,4,0:0:0:0:
13,150,130139,1,2,0:0:0:0:
497,308,131077,1,2,3:0:0:0:
231,294,131546,6,0,L|173:305,2,42.5,4|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,148,132014,2,0,L|190:189,2,42.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,141,132483,2,0,L|294:148,2,42.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,294,132952,2,0,L|335:252,2,42.5,2|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,301,133421,5,4,3:0:0:0:
335,252,133655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
153,208,133889,1,4,3:0:0:0:
153,208,134006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
153,208,134124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,321,134358,1,4,3:0:0:0:
299,159,134592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,159,134709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,159,134827,2,0,P|346:164|386:154,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,42,135296,6,0,L|238:97,2,42.5,4|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,85,135764,2,0,L|118:140,2,42.5,4|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,261,136233,1,8,3:0:0:0:
85,240,136350,1,0,3:0:0:0:
126,231,136467,1,8,3:0:0:0:
168,236,136584,1,0,3:0:0:0:
207,253,136701,1,8,3:0:0:0:
244,274,136818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,286,136936,1,8,3:0:0:0:
326,287,137053,1,0,3:0:0:0:
366,273,137170,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,148421,12,0,151702,0:0:0:0:
140,284,152171,5,4,3:0:0:0:
118,297,152639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,310,153108,2,0,B|82:268|82:268|89:213,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,194,153460,1,2,3:0:0:0:
372,100,154046,5,4,3:0:0:0:
394,87,154514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,74,154983,2,0,B|430:116|430:116|423:171,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,190,155335,1,2,3:0:0:0:
75,362,155921,6,0,L|159:352,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,259,156389,2,0,L|136:268,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,182,156858,2,0,L|139:172,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,63,157326,2,0,L|121:72,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,9,157796,5,4,3:0:0:0:
296,47,157913,1,0,3:0:0:0:
293,89,158030,1,4,3:0:0:0:
271,126,158147,1,0,3:0:0:0:
232,143,158264,1,4,3:0:0:0:
271,126,158381,1,0,3:0:0:0:
313,129,158498,1,4,3:0:0:0:
349,151,158615,1,0,3:0:0:0:
365,190,158733,2,0,L|373:219,8,21.25,8|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,210,159671,5,4,0:0:0:0:
226,307,159905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,307,160022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,307,160139,2,0,L|331:294,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,323,160608,2,0,P|485:279|497:215,1,93.5000028533936,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,62,161077,2,0,P|422:106|410:170,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,295,161546,5,4,3:0:0:0:
340,120,161780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,120,161897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,120,162014,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,274,162249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
265,198,162484,1,4,3:0:0:0:
437,166,162718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
437,166,162835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
437,165,162952,2,0,P|444:97|408:38,1,140.25000428009,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
375,19,163421,5,4,3:0:0:0:
227,99,163655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,99,163772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,99,163889,2,0,B|178:107|178:107|129:99,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
7,237,164358,2,0,L|-2:138,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,297,164827,2,0,L|115:198,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,347,165296,5,4,3:0:0:0:
173,152,165530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
173,152,165647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
173,152,165764,1,0,1:0:0:0:
360,129,165999,2,0,L|408:102,2,46.7500014266968,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
204,226,166467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,226,166585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,226,166702,2,0,P|247:182|226:92,1,140.25000428009,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,82,167171,5,4,0:0:0:0:
351,209,167405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
351,209,167522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
351,209,167639,2,0,P|397:220|444:210,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,46,168108,2,0,P|395:93|395:145,1,93.5000028533936,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,303,168577,2,0,P|441:256|441:204,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,84,169046,5,4,3:0:0:0:
361,261,169280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
361,261,169397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
361,261,169514,1,0,1:0:0:0:
376,60,169749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,284,169983,1,4,3:0:0:0:
442,181,170217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
442,181,170335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
442,181,170452,2,0,B|393:164|393:164|295:177,1,140.25000428009,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
268,183,170921,5,4,0:0:0:0:
191,332,171155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,332,171272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,332,171389,2,0,P|202:288|189:225,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,91,171858,2,0,P|261:135|274:198,1,93.5000028533936,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,336,172327,2,0,P|421:329|477:325,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
503,325,172678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
503,325,172796,6,0,L|507:265,3,46.7500014266968,4|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,223,173264,2,0,L|446:163,3,46.7500014266968,0|0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
501,113,173733,2,0,B|455:139|411:117|411:117|365:93|320:112,1,187.000005706787,4|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
321,111,174671,5,4,0:0:0:0:
451,51,174905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
362,196,175139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
368,42,175374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
498,124,175608,1,4,3:0:0:0:
498,124,175725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
498,124,175842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
362,196,176077,2,0,P|313:201|276:190,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,75,176546,5,4,3:0:0:0:
324,121,176780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,232,177014,2,0,L|212:143,1,85
237,9,177483,1,4,3:0:0:0:
397,35,177717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,78,177952,1,0,1:0:0:0:
421,104,178186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,147,178421,5,4,3:0:0:0:
397,35,178655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
377,203,178889,2,0,P|336:225|295:227,1,85
159,127,179358,2,0,P|198:151|220:186,1,85
203,354,179827,2,0,P|204:307|223:270,1,85
315,147,180296,5,0,0:0:0:0:
475,202,180530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
394,43,180764,2,0,L|400:133,1,85
411,297,181233,1,4,3:0:0:0:
250,313,181467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,240,181702,1,0,1:0:0:0:
209,253,181936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,184,182171,5,4,3:0:0:0:
250,313,182405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,239,182639,2,0,P|172:245|214:254,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,235,183108,1,0,3:0:0:0:
47,235,183225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
47,235,183342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,100,183577,1,0,1:0:0:0:
125,239,183811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,150,184046,5,4,3:0:0:0:
233,190,184280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,322,184514,2,0,L|126:229,1,85
151,100,184983,1,4,3:0:0:0:
311,126,185217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,169,185452,1,0,1:0:0:0:
350,195,185686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
229,238,185921,5,4,0:0:0:0:
311,126,186155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,293,186389,2,0,P|244:314|194:309,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,195,186858,2,0,P|391:174|441:179,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,238,187327,1,0,1:0:0:0:
406,250,187561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
249,163,187796,6,0,P|231:146|211:116,3,42.5,4|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,99,188264,2,0,P|294:74|310:42,3,42.5,0|0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,103,188733,1,4,3:0:0:0:
404,98,188850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,113,188967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
470,146,189084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
479,187,189202,2,0,P|475:232|468:271,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,355,189671,5,4,0:0:0:0:
215,211,189905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,211,190022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,211,190139,2,0,L|300:204,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,355,190608,2,0,L|221:362,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,373,191077,2,0,P|63:322|50:286,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,145,191546,6,0,L|85:152,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,168,192015,2,0,P|251:117|264:81,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,250,192483,2,0,P|177:278|139:284,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,239,192952,2,0,P|354:261|379:291,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,168,193421,5,4,3:0:0:0:
387,92,193655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
387,92,193772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
387,92,193889,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,99,194124,2,0,L|161:77,2,42.5,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,165,194592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,165,194709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,165,194827,2,0,L|458:161,1,85,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,74,195296,5,4,3:0:0:0:
276,227,195530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,227,195647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,227,195764,1,2,3:0:0:0:
369,85,195999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,155,196233,1,8,3:0:0:0:
203,186,196350,1,0,3:0:0:0:
192,227,196467,1,8,3:0:0:0:
201,267,196584,1,0,3:0:0:0:
230,298,196701,1,8,3:0:0:0:
269,310,196818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
311,303,196936,1,8,3:0:0:0:
343,275,197053,1,0,3:0:0:0:
356,234,197171,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,197229,12,0,200452,0:0:0:0:

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2017-07-19T18:46:23+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
00:35:921 (1,2,3) - dont really think this needs to be a triplet Adjusted
00:37:561 (8,9,1,2,3,4) - a bit too hard to read for hard players, they aren't good at 1/4 slider mechanics just yet, so it can be hard to read how to hit this. I will see about this, but to be honest this rhythm fits
00:43:421 (1,2,3,4) - I'd put the circle on 00:43:772, because thats how you usually map this vocal. It feels weird to play as is. Sure
00:45:647 - unmapped, 00:47:522 - mapped. be consistent with this I mapped the first part and Firetruck mapped the second one, so I guess it's no problem

Thank you for modding!

http://puu.sh/wNMP5.osu

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2017-08-02T12:27:10+00:00

trookie trookie!

General

Tags seem to be broken, probably has something to do with the unicode thing.

Easy

00:28:421 (3,4) - if this is meant to be a blanket, than this does not blanket perfectly. If not, then it's all cool.
00:52:796 (1,2) - I'd say that two 1/1 sliders would do better here in terms of following the vocals and the music itself.
Note: 01:56:546 (3) - same here.02:02:171 (1,3) - and here, it's the repeated thing that probably should be mapped in the same way
01:07:327 (4) - overlaps with the HP Bar. Probably it shouldn't.
02:55:139 - I'm a little upset you decided not to highlight the vocals here in any way, Are you sure about that?

My biggest concern would be that it just lacks creativity a little. While the 1/1 rhythm feels just fine to me, the fact that sliders like 00:58:421 (3,4) -01:13:421 (3,4) - not actually going up in any way is sort of bothering me. It'd be great if you could play around with patterns to add a bit more visual variety.

Normal

01:00:296 (1,2) - it'd be cool if you could get a low-skill player to confirm that these are indeed readable for players of the target skill level.

Plese do look into the things mentioned in the previous mod. I really don't feel like there is much to add since I loved pretty much everything apart from the things mentioned.

Hard

00:26:077 (4,1) - these two follow the same "okay" line, yet ony (1) gets a jump, wouldn't it be better to focus more on the vocals while building jumps for the part and give (4) a jump as well?
Note: 00:33:577 (3,1) - same.
03:11:546 (1,2,3,4) - and I would probably give these an extra check to see if players find those readable. In any case, unstacking (3,4) and moving them just a pixel higher/lower would be good, I believe

Plus the stuff from the previous mod feels quite reasaonble. I don't really have much to point out, but you can just PM me if you need any help with nerfing the stuff or making an Advanced.

Ora's Insane

00:35:921 (1,2) - try placing (2) in such a way that it'd give an extra hint on the second reverse of the slider. Example, so, the whole pattern is a bit easier to read.
01:06:858 (8,9) - the 1/4 stack right after the stream can be a bit confusing and is hard to read. A new combo on it or unstack would probably help.
01:37:796 (5) - since this does not really belong to the previous 1/8 thing adding a new combo to it to make it stand out should be a good idea.

Great patterning, love this difficulty so much!

Can I be a star too?

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2017-08-05T13:21:09+00:00

Added jumps on that part. Thanks for the mod!

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 75184
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22796,45296,75296,99671,114671,137171,159671,174671,197171
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.5

[Metadata]
Title:I'm gonna be a star
TitleUnicode:I'm gonna be a star
Artist:TWICE
ArtistUnicode:TWICE
Creator:Firetruck
Version:Collab Hard
Source:
Tags:K-Pop Kpop JYP Entertainment ì—”í„°í…Œì¸ë¨¼íŠ¸ Girl Group ë‚˜ì—° ì •ì—° ëª¨ëª¨ ì‚¬ë‚˜ ì§€íš¨ ë¯¸ë‚˜ ë‹¤í˜„ ì±„ì˜ ì¯”ìœ„ Nayeon Jeongyeon Momo Sana Jihyo Mina Dahyun Chaeyeong Tzuyu PAGE TWO Lapis Aoki Ora Sixteen
BeatmapID:1312008
BeatmapSetID:622305

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"asasasaSAASFSDF.png",0,0
//Break Periods
2,75496,89546
2,137371,151421
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
7796,468.75,4,2,0,70,1,0
37796,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
41546,-100,4,2,0,65,0,0
45296,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
90296,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
94046,-100,4,2,0,65,0,0
98264,-166.666666666667,4,2,0,20,0,0
99671,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
114671,-83.3333333333333,4,2,0,70,0,1
129671,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
152171,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
155921,-100,4,2,0,65,0,0
159671,-83.3333333333333,4,2,0,70,0,1
174671,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
190139,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
193421,-100,4,2,0,65,0,0
197171,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
197639,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
198108,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
198577,-100,4,2,0,20,0,0
199046,-100,4,2,0,10,0,0
199514,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 186,150,216
Combo4 : 232,96,130
Combo5 : 105,198,203
Combo6 : 255,128,64

[HitObjects]
61,81,7796,5,4,0:0:0:0:
151,146,8030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,146,8147,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,146,8264,1,0,1:0:0:0:
244,84,8499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,168,8733,2,0,L|400:161,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,245,9202,2,0,L|207:252,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,272,9671,5,4,3:0:0:0:
141,168,9905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,168,10022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,168,10139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
84,70,10374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,70,10608,1,4,3:0:0:0:
141,168,10842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,168,10960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,168,11077,2,0,P|135:213|146:251,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,342,11546,5,4,3:0:0:0:
281,264,11780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,264,11897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,264,12014,1,0,1:0:0:0:
360,342,12249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,239,12483,2,0,B|412:204|412:204|400:144,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,56,12952,2,0,B|315:91|315:91|327:151,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,209,13421,5,4,3:0:0:0:
147,146,13655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,146,13772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,146,13889,1,0,1:0:0:0:
52,206,14124,2,0,L|5:206,2,40,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
133,283,14592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,283,14710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,283,14827,2,0,P|170:290|217:284,1,80,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,254,15296,5,4,0:0:0:0:
257,160,15530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,160,15647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,160,15764,1,0,1:0:0:0:
327,72,15999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,56,16233,2,0,L|116:54,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
35,138,16702,2,0,L|135:140,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,223,17171,5,4,3:0:0:0:
278,156,17405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,156,17522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,156,17639,1,0,1:0:0:0:
308,264,17874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,339,18108,1,4,3:0:0:0:
194,231,18342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,231,18460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,231,18577,2,0,P|150:237|113:231,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
35,152,19046,5,4,3:0:0:0:
93,56,19280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
93,56,19397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
93,56,19514,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,130,19749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,149,19983,2,0,P|293:198|280:243,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,335,20452,2,0,P|202:286|215:241,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,256,20803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,256,20921,5,4,3:0:0:0:
144,164,21155,2,0,L|101:163,2,40,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
230,92,21624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,92,21741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,92,21858,1,4,3:0:0:0:
312,167,22092,2,0,L|355:166,2,40,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
231,244,22561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,244,22678,1,0,3:0:0:0:
231,244,22796,6,0,L|152:244,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,244,23264,1,0,1:0:0:0:
104,160,23499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,244,23733,1,4,3:0:0:0:
103,328,23968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,324,24202,2,0,L|280:324,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,320,24671,5,4,3:0:0:0:
463,360,24905,2,0,P|437:250|325:238,1,240,0|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
376,320,25842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,240,26077,2,0,P|253:278|280:308,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,88,26546,6,0,P|275:118|288:156,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,169,27014,1,0,1:0:0:0:
193,169,27249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,34,27483,2,0,P|335:67|369:177,1,160,4|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
304,248,28186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,340,28421,1,4,3:0:0:0:
244,320,28655,2,0,B|124:284|124:356|0:320,1,240,0|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
64,244,29592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,96,29827,2,0,L|132:176,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,48,30296,6,0,L|268:132,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,224,30764,1,0,1:0:0:0:
264,320,30999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,268,31233,2,0,P|392:260|428:268,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,168,31702,2,0,P|376:176|340:168,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,80,32171,1,4,3:0:0:0:
382,80,32405,6,0,P|308:80|264:224,1,240,0|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
192,284,33342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,143,33577,2,0,P|129:181|120:219,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
31,102,34046,6,0,P|21:140|32:179,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,272,34514,1,0,1:0:0:0:
116,340,34749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,332,34983,2,0,L|300:332,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,252,35452,2,0,L|360:252,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,236,35921,5,4,3:0:0:0:
264,236,36155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,252,36389,1,0,1:0:0:0:
196,160,36624,2,0,L|188:120,1,40
164,80,36858,2,0,L|112:72,1,40,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,108,37092,2,0,L|74:186,1,80,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
40,276,37561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,276,37678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,276,37796,6,0,L|92:276,1,40,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,280,38030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,280,38147,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,280,38264,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,348,38499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,276,38733,2,0,P|304:268|344:268,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,176,39202,2,0,P|416:168|456:168,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,80,39671,5,4,3:0:0:0:
336,80,39788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,80,39905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,140,40139,2,0,P|224:139|184:131,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,216,40608,2,0,P|100:215|60:207,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,304,41077,2,0,P|83:304|123:312,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,276,41546,6,0,L|292:276,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,228,42014,1,4,3:0:0:0:
376,132,42249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,132,42366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,132,42483,1,4,3:0:0:0:
460,180,42717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,84,42952,1,4,3:0:0:0:
264,56,43421,6,0,L|184:56,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,56,43772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,56,43889,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,56,44006,2,0,L|132:112,1,40
120,192,44358,2,0,L|72:200,3,40,4|0|8|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
64,244,44827,2,0,L|16:252,3,40,8|0|8|0,3:0|0:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
16,300,45296,6,0,L|125:296,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,344,45764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,344,45881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,344,45999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,260,46233,2,0,L|233:160,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,98,46702,1,0,1:0:0:0:
356,173,46936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,173,47053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,173,47171,6,0,L|356:275,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,300,47522,2,0,P|314:295|265:304,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,300,47874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,254,48108,2,0,P|151:258|108:254,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,181,48577,2,0,P|267:177|310:181,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,120,49046,6,0,L|440:115,1,40,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,114,49280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
477,209,49514,1,0,1:0:0:0:
477,209,49631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
477,209,49749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
415,282,49983,2,0,L|322:282,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,255,50335,2,0,P|298:297|291:338,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,371,50686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,318,50921,5,4,3:0:0:0:
142,306,51038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
102,308,51155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
65,322,51272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
34,346,51389,2,0,L|35:283,1,40,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,266,51624,2,0,L|41:203,1,40,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
27,188,51858,2,0,L|127:188,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,112,52327,2,0,L|116:112,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,57,52796,5,4,3:0:0:0:
7,139,53030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,197,53264,2,0,L|75:294,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,347,53733,2,0,P|181:341|227:346,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,361,54085,2,0,L|269:300,1,40,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
274,225,54436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,155,54671,5,4,3:0:0:0:
414,216,54905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
414,216,55022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
414,216,55139,2,0,B|418:283,1,40,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,302,55374,2,0,B|429:355,1,40,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,378,55608,2,0,L|344:368,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,379,55960,2,0,B|337:329|337:329|321:253,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,166,56546,5,4,3:0:0:0:
215,207,56780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,207,56897,2,0,P|208:169|221:115,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,85,57249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,82,57483,2,0,L|48:83,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
22,52,57835,2,0,P|26:93|14:146,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
7,177,58186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
85,232,58421,6,0,L|171:228,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,250,58772,2,0,L|299:245,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,245,59124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,156,59358,2,0,L|213:160,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,138,59709,2,0,L|85:143,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
49,143,60061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,233,60296,5,4,0:0:0:0:
16,233,60413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,233,60530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,302,60764,1,0,1:0:0:0:
82,302,60881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,302,60999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,232,61233,2,0,L|203:229,2,40,4|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,140,61702,2,0,L|173:137,2,40,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
49,68,62171,5,4,3:0:0:0:
49,68,62288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
49,68,62405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
21,159,62639,2,0,L|10:219,2,40,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,138,63108,1,4,3:0:0:0:
133,147,63226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,157,63343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,221,63577,2,0,P|225:262|218:309,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,349,64046,5,4,3:0:0:0:
137,349,64163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
137,349,64280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
87,267,64514,2,0,L|88:206,1,40,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,182,64749,2,0,L|106:121,1,40,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
79,101,64983,2,0,L|195:87,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,59,65335,2,0,P|197:102|217:153,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,136,65686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,136,65803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,136,65921,6,0,L|315:131,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,122,66389,2,0,P|391:166|385:206,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,246,66741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
401,246,66858,2,0,L|309:239,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,260,67210,2,0,P|284:221|277:177,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
270,134,67561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,53,67796,5,4,0:0:0:0:
155,127,68030,2,0,P|150:173|158:209,1,80,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
205,288,68499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,288,68616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,288,68733,2,0,L|314:284,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,295,69085,2,0,L|441:299,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,301,69436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
485,208,69671,5,4,3:0:0:0:
485,208,69788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
485,208,69905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,149,70139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
409,149,70256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,149,70374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,199,70608,2,0,B|294:204|294:204|248:200,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,215,70960,2,0,B|168:210|168:210|122:214,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,231,71311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,326,71546,6,0,L|152:328,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,298,71897,2,0,P|183:337|193:380,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,369,72249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,308,72483,2,0,P|303:253|324:193,1,120,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,155,72952,1,4,3:0:0:0:
287,84,73186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,139,73421,6,0,L|65:126,1,120,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,92,73889,2,0,P|61:150|44:209,1,120,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,248,74358,2,0,L|115:254,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,240,74710,2,0,P|137:277|145:318,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,361,75061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
166,361,75178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
166,361,75296,5,4,0:0:0:0:
204,160,90296,6,0,P|220:128|216:72,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,104,90764,2,0,P|142:72|138:16,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,120,91233,2,0,P|16:152|20:208,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,232,91585,2,0,P|80:228|92:228,1,40,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,300,91936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,232,92171,6,0,P|244:264|248:320,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,288,92639,2,0,P|322:320|326:376,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,272,93108,2,0,P|448:240|444:184,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,160,93460,2,0,P|384:164|372:164,1,40,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,92,93811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,172,94046,5,4,3:0:0:0:
72,36,94514,1,4,3:0:0:0:
120,220,94983,1,4,3:0:0:0:
124,124,95217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,124,95335,2,0,P|162:133|175:138,1,40,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,276,95686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,276,95921,6,0,P|36:248|32:240,3,40,4|0|4|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
36,196,96389,2,0,P|16:168|12:160,3,40,4|0|4|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
16,116,96858,2,0,P|-4:88|-4:88,6,20,8|0|0|0|8|0|8,3:0|0:0|3:0|0:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
16,68,97327,2,0,P|-4:40|-4:40,6,20,8|0|8|0|8|0|8,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
216,180,98264,6,0,B|242:181|264:168|264:168|280:184|308:188|308:188|328:168|336:124|336:124|352:136|364:152,1,191.999994140625,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,327,99671,5,4,0:0:0:0:
133,272,99905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,272,100022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,272,100139,1,4,3:0:0:0:
39,334,100374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
37,222,100608,2,0,P|32:188|39:140,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,37,101077,2,0,P|122:71|115:119,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,189,101546,5,4,0:0:0:0:
302,117,101780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,117,101897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,117,102014,1,4,3:0:0:0:
335,224,102249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,295,102483,1,4,3:0:0:0:
200,189,102717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,189,102835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,189,102952,2,0,L|99:186,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,176,103421,5,4,0:0:0:0:
75,86,103655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,86,103772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,86,103889,1,4,3:0:0:0:
120,186,104124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
171,285,104358,2,0,L|259:281,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,197,104827,2,0,L|266:201,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,113,105296,5,4,0:0:0:0:
120,186,105530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,186,105647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,186,105764,1,4,3:0:0:0:
42,104,105999,2,0,L|0:104,2,40,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
134,41,106467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,41,106585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,41,106702,2,0,P|175:35|221:40,1,80,4|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,100,107171,5,4,0:0:0:0:
260,202,107405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,202,107522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,202,107639,1,4,3:0:0:0:
333,286,107874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
425,222,108108,2,0,B|430:173|430:173|424:122,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,43,108577,2,0,B|334:92|334:92|340:143,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,202,109046,5,4,0:0:0:0:
172,136,109280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,136,109397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,136,109514,1,4,3:0:0:0:
128,239,109749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,304,109983,1,4,3:0:0:0:
272,206,110217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,206,110335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,206,110452,2,0,L|365:204,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,203,110921,5,4,0:0:0:0:
408,105,111155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,105,111272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,105,111389,1,4,3:0:0:0:
351,204,111624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
277,119,111858,2,0,P|223:126|191:120,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,39,112327,2,0,P|356:32|388:38,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,36,112678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,36,112796,5,4,0:0:0:0:
457,116,113030,2,0,L|505:116,2,40,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
376,193,113499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,193,113616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,193,113733,2,0,L|321:194,3,40,8|0|8|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
289,225,114202,2,0,L|234:226,3,40,8|0|8|0,3:0|0:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
236,272,114671,6,0,L|136:276,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,280,115139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
28,184,115374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,92,115608,2,0,L|103:88,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,208,116077,2,0,P|188:160|204:84,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,88,116428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,88,116546,6,0,L|284:84,1,47.9999985351563,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,48,116780,2,0,L|368:44,1,47.9999985351563,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,40,117014,1,0,1:0:0:0:
384,136,117249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
425,222,117483,2,0,P|361:230|325:210,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,316,117952,2,0,L|292:308,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,324,118303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,324,118421,6,0,P|392:316|428:336,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,236,118889,1,0,1:0:0:0:
444,140,119124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,44,119358,2,0,P|384:40|344:44,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,108,119827,2,0,P|232:104|272:108,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,136,120178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,136,120296,6,0,P|304:172|304:192,1,47.9999985351563,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,220,120530,2,0,P|336:256|336:276,1,47.9999985351563,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,316,120764,1,0,1:0:0:0:
240,340,120999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,320,121233,2,0,L|48:312,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,176,121702,2,0,P|56:176|96:152,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,108,122053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,108,122171,6,0,L|211:115,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,64,122639,1,0,1:0:0:0:
300,160,122874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,256,123108,2,0,L|296:356,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,252,123577,2,0,P|444:200|444:152,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,112,123928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,112,124046,6,0,P|380:116|364:116,1,47.9999985351563,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,88,124280,2,0,P|292:92|276:92,1,47.9999985351563,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,96,124514,1,0,1:0:0:0:
152,72,124749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,164,124983,2,0,P|177:211|188:258,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,316,125452,2,0,L|440:320,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,288,125803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,288,125921,6,0,L|456:172,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,126389,1,0,1:0:0:0:
328,176,126624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,84,126858,2,0,P|252:64|228:24,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,172,127327,2,0,P|192:232|192:280,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,312,127678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,312,127796,6,0,P|128:296|112:296,1,47.9999985351563,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,256,128030,2,0,P|56:240|40:240,1,47.9999985351563,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,260,128264,1,0,1:0:0:0:
20,164,128499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,164,128616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,164,128733,2,0,P|28:108|28:64,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,32,129202,1,0,1:0:0:0:
204,68,129436,2,0,P|264:60|272:60,1,47.9999985351563,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,76,129671,6,0,L|388:80,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,84,130022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,84,130139,2,0,L|416:184,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,200,130491,2,0,L|392:300,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,328,130842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,312,131077,2,0,L|236:316,1,40,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,200,131546,5,4,3:0:0:0:
172,200,131663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,200,131780,2,0,L|180:140,1,40,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,120,132014,2,0,P|260:116|296:120,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,136,132366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,136,132483,2,0,P|384:140|400:140,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,108,132717,2,0,P|460:112|476:112,1,40
480,76,132952,1,2,3:0:0:0:
480,76,133069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,76,133186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,228,133421,6,0,L|388:320,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,336,133889,2,0,P|236:328|196:328,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,244,134358,2,0,P|211:241|251:235,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,148,134827,2,0,L|284:68,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,36,135296,5,4,3:0:0:0:
192,36,135530,2,0,P|127:36|99:32,1,80,0|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
40,100,135999,2,0,L|40:152,1,40,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,176,136233,2,0,L|72:228,3,40,8|0|8|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
112,244,136702,2,0,L|112:296,3,40,8|0|8|0,3:0|0:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
114,332,137171,5,4,0:0:0:0:
137,96,152171,6,0,L|221:86,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,95,152639,2,0,L|395:85,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,86,153108,2,0,P|217:140|245:193,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,208,153460,2,0,L|169:212,1,40,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,197,153811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
67,286,154046,6,0,P|62:334|72:369,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,364,154514,2,0,P|170:316|160:281,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,194,154983,2,0,L|368:191,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,207,155335,2,0,L|437:206,1,40,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
473,291,155686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,349,155921,6,0,L|298:342,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,300,156389,2,0,L|132:293,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,343,156858,2,0,P|320:291|311:255,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,218,157210,2,0,L|363:209,1,40,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,198,157561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
381,116,157796,6,0,L|336:108,3,40,4|0|4|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
300,84,158264,2,0,L|255:76,3,40,4|0|4|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
213,68,158733,1,8,3:0:0:0:
212,68,159671,6,0,L|224:176,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,248,160139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
228,332,160374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,248,160608,2,0,P|336:248|372:256,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,324,161077,2,0,P|92:332|45:331,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,236,161546,6,0,L|24:132,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,44,162014,1,0,1:0:0:0:
124,80,162249,2,0,L|200:72,1,47.9999985351563,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,92,162483,2,0,L|292:84,1,47.9999985351563,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,80,162717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,80,162835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,80,162952,1,0,1:0:0:0:
296,176,163186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,176,163303,1,0,3:0:0:0:
296,176,163421,6,0,P|280:228|276:272,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,336,163889,1,0,1:0:0:0:
432,296,164124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,200,164358,2,0,P|410:152|396:106,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,52,164827,2,0,P|221:97|216:145,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,228,165296,6,0,L|72:232,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,316,165764,1,0,1:0:0:0:
124,316,165999,2,0,L|171:313,1,47.9999985351563,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,332,166233,2,0,L|263:329,1,47.9999985351563,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,328,166467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,328,166585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,328,166702,2,0,B|360:332|360:332|408:312,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,284,167053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,284,167171,6,0,P|432:216|436:176,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,100,167639,1,0,1:0:0:0:
396,36,167874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,124,168108,2,0,L|260:128,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,196,168577,2,0,L|207:199,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,254,169046,6,0,P|260:278|239:291,1,47.9999985351563,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,332,169280,2,0,P|205:343|181:347,1,47.9999985351563,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,340,169514,1,0,1:0:0:0:
84,268,169749,2,0,L|96:200,1,47.9999985351563,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,176,169983,2,0,L|88:108,1,47.9999985351563,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,80,170217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,80,170335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,80,170452,1,0,1:0:0:0:
184,36,170686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,36,170803,1,0,3:0:0:0:
184,36,170921,6,0,P|236:48|288:48,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,28,171389,1,0,1:0:0:0:
344,120,171624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,216,171858,2,0,L|356:312,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,240,172327,2,0,L|204:144,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,96,172678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,96,172796,6,0,B|168:100|168:100|100:84,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,148,173264,2,0,L|48:244,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,292,173616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,292,173733,2,0,P|112:276|156:280,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,316,174202,1,0,1:0:0:0:
324,280,174436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,280,174553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,280,174671,6,0,L|328:184,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,104,175139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
245,151,175374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
166,206,175608,2,0,P|159:254|168:298,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,151,176077,2,0,P|252:103|243:59,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,114,176546,5,4,3:0:0:0:
78,64,176780,2,0,P|75:152|128:203,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,257,177483,1,4,3:0:0:0:
283,211,177717,2,0,L|380:211,1,80,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
255,134,178186,2,0,L|158:134,1,80,0|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
93,185,178655,5,0,0:0:0:0:
89,89,178889,1,0,1:0:0:0:
175,134,179124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
93,185,179358,2,0,B|86:219|86:219|98:271,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,134,179827,2,0,B|182:100|182:100|170:48,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,97,180296,5,4,3:0:0:0:
175,134,180530,2,0,B|305:166|283:104|419:140,1,240,0|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
456,222,181467,2,0,P|463:266|452:315,1,80,0|4,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
411,138,181936,2,0,P|404:94|415:45,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,59,182405,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,124,182639,1,0,1:0:0:0:
174,53,182874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,142,183108,2,0,L|141:247,1,80,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,330,183577,2,0,L|215:225,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,153,184046,5,4,3:0:0:0:
297,201,184280,2,0,P|363:244|450:121,1,240,0|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
362,129,185217,2,0,B|367:83|367:83|360:37,1,80,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
297,201,185686,2,0,B|292:247|292:247|299:293,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,342,186155,5,0,0:0:0:0:
130,361,186389,1,0,1:0:0:0:
83,276,186624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
177,262,186858,1,4,3:0:0:0:
224,342,187092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,264,187327,1,0,1:0:0:0:
229,182,187561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
275,97,187796,6,0,L|380:93,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
450,89,188264,1,0,1:0:0:0:
469,183,188499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,187,188733,1,4,3:0:0:0:
354,93,188967,2,0,L|346:4,1,80,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,45,189436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
146,18,189671,5,4,0:0:0:0:
60,68,189905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,68,190022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,68,190139,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,180,190374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
155,231,190608,2,0,P|192:227|238:231,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,303,191077,2,0,P|87:307|41:303,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,231,191546,6,0,P|192:227|238:231,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,303,192014,2,0,P|87:307|41:303,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,231,192483,2,0,P|192:227|238:231,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,303,192952,2,0,P|87:307|41:303,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
9,196,193421,5,4,3:0:0:0:
67,100,193655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
67,100,193772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
67,100,193889,1,2,0:0:0:0:
141,183,194124,2,0,L|211:176,2,40,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,282,194592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
90,282,194710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
90,282,194827,2,0,L|88:372,1,80,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,323,195296,5,4,3:0:0:0:
294,370,195530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,370,195647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,370,195764,1,2,3:0:0:0:
273,259,195999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
249,149,196233,2,0,L|197:149,3,40,8|0|8|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
162,180,196702,2,0,L|110:180,3,40,8|0|8|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,197171,12,0,199983,0:0:0:0:

mits

36 posts

Joined April 2015

mits 2017-08-12T04:52:02+00:00

Small mod/nitpicks. Really new to the modding scene so I hope I don't sound too ridiculous haha

Ora's Insane
02:10:069 (2,3) - pretty big/awkward gap between notes here.

Normal
01:00:210 (1,2,3) - can prob use a tad more spacing. looks really mashed together compared to other sliders in this diff.
01:02:105 (1,2,3) - here too.

General
would def like to see more wiggles and waves as sliders. they'd be really fun to play paired with a song like this.

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Firetruck 2017-08-14T11:16:59+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
Modding this because of my boy Bakari's kds sacrifice

[general]

check tags for a slight inconsistency

[Easy]

Up until the first break there's no gaps in the rhythm anywhere, you can remove a circle somewhere to give the player some downtime

^This applies to the entire map, lol. Add gaps in the rhythm to give osu babies some downtime is it a big problem? honestly i like it like it is +
its not really that high bpm :^) if u can point out some places i can remove circles on pls do!! i dont want to undermap it and make it play awkwardly

01:35:921 (3) - I feel like this would be way better as a spinner that ends on 01:37:796; the recovery is there and a spinner really fits with this "drop" effect
03:15:296 (3) - Line up the red nodes with the slider ticks so the slider shape matches the music! added a spinner but ended it earlier w the drums :^)
Altho I think 03:16:233 - should be a separate object considering the drums. mapped the slider to the vocals but did the slidershape so it would fit in w the drums^

Good diff. This isn't a big issue, but I found it odd that some horizontal sliders were perfectly flat and some (like 02:04:046 (3) - ) are very very slightly tilted lol o its on purpose i like them LOL

[Normal]

00:07:796 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - See you how you differentiated the rhythms here for the different vocals? I think you should do that for 00:15:296 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this part as well. You can make 00:18:108 (3) - a 1/2 repeat slider for example.
I saw above that you put the wiggles in 01:00:296 (1,2), but that doesn't make much sense because other instances of 'fast rapping' don't get such an effect, like 00:50:921 (1,2) - for example added wiggles to that part too!
01:05:217 (4) - This doesnt feel right, because you're not really clicking on anything important. Consider doing a blue tick rhythm that maps the strong vocal on 01:05:335 - you can use 3/4 reverse sliders for example. 3/4 reverse slider doesnt really fit in imo D: have no idea wat to do here, help pls
01:34:046 (1) - DS is smaller than usual
01:36:858 (3) - consider making this a reverse so that your'e mapping until the actual stopping point of the music (01:37:796 - )
01:47:171 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - See the first point. And for 02:49:046 (1,2,3) -
02:17:171 - why not map this? since thats where the break starts so it would feel weird to put a circle there or something and then not map the rest D:

I think diff should get a few more mods to iron out the rhythm in spots. You did a pretty good job, but it needs a bit more.

[Collab Hard]

The intro section has a bit too much active 1/4 I think. Make some of those triplets reverse sliders, so that you can properly introduce the idea of triplets without going overboard in the first 20 seconds of the map. Like, maybe make the first triplet in each measure (such as 00:08:030 (2,3,4)) a 1/4 reverse instead.

00:35:921 (1,2,3) - dont really think this needs to be a triplet
00:37:561 (8,9,1,2,3,4) - a bit too hard to read for hard players, they aren't good at 1/4 slider mechanics just yet, so it can be hard to read how to hit this.
00:43:421 (1,2,3,4) - I'd put the circle on 00:43:772, because thats how you usually map this vocal. It feels weird to play as is.
00:45:647 - unmapped, 00:47:522 - mapped. be consistent with this
00:50:921 (1,2,3,4) - dont think a 5 note stream is good for this level of difficulty / for the spread.
01:00:296 (1) - again too much active 1/4 in this section. You have to remember that this is the first diff in the spread with 1/4 so using a lot of it in such a short time goes against the idea of linear progression when the diff before this is entirely 1/2 rhythms
01:05:335 (7,8,9,1) - hard to read, usually players switch fingers when playing 1/4 in a hard so when you have this kind of stack, they start 01:05:921 (1) - with their non primary tapping finger which can throw them off quite a bit.

Yeah these concerns pretty much repeat.

I do think this diff is pretty solid, so consider mapping an advanced or something between the normal and hard that introduces 1/4 rhythms but doesn't use them nearly as excessively as this one does. Alternatively, reduce the amount of active 1/4 in this diff as I described in my mod.

---

Overall this set has potential for sure. Get a few more mods and respond to my point regarding the spread between the normal and hard (which entails either mapping an advanced or significantly nerfing the hard). You're free to call me when you think the set is ready at that point and I'll take another look.

Bakari wrote:
trookie trookie!

General
Tags seem to be broken, probably has something to do with the unicode thing.
Easy
00:28:421 (3,4) - if this is meant to be a blanket, than this does not blanket perfectly. If not, then it's all cool.
00:52:796 (1,2) - I'd say that two 1/1 sliders would do better here in terms of following the vocals and the music itself.
Note: 01:56:546 (3) - same here.02:02:171 (1,3) - and here, it's the repeated thing that probably should be mapped in the same way i wanted to make variety so it wont be boring D: on the thang part
01:07:327 (4) - overlaps with the HP Bar. Probably it shouldn't.
02:55:139 - I'm a little upset you decided not to highlight the vocals here in any way, Are you sure about that?

My biggest concern would be that it just lacks creativity a little. While the 1/1 rhythm feels just fine to me, the fact that sliders like 00:58:421 (3,4) -01:13:421 (3,4) - not actually going up in any way is sort of bothering me. It'd be great if you could play around with patterns to add a bit more visual variety. tfw ur not creative LO
Normal
01:00:296 (1,2) - it'd be cool if you could get a low-skill player to confirm that these are indeed readable for players of the target skill level.

Plese do look into the things mentioned in the previous mod. I really don't feel like there is much to add since I loved pretty much everything apart from the things mentioned.
Hard
00:26:077 (4,1) - these two follow the same "okay" line, yet ony (1) gets a jump, wouldn't it be better to focus more on the vocals while building jumps for the part and give (4) a jump as well?
Note: 00:33:577 (3,1) - same.
03:11:546 (1,2,3,4) - and I would probably give these an extra check to see if players find those readable. In any case, unstacking (3,4) and moving them just a pixel higher/lower would be good, I believe

Plus the stuff from the previous mod feels quite reasaonble. I don't really have much to point out, but you can just PM me if you need any help with nerfing the stuff or making an Advanced.

Can I be a star too?

Mits wrote:
Small mod/nitpicks. Really new to the modding scene so I hope I don't sound too ridiculous haha

Normal
01:00:210 (1,2,3) - can prob use a tad more spacing. looks really mashed together compared to other sliders in this diff.
01:02:105 (1,2,3) - here too. theyre different on purpose to emphisize the fast rapping

General
would def like to see more wiggles and waves as sliders. they'd be really fun to play paired with a song like this.

thanks for modding guys <3 no reply = fixed

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2017-08-15T02:33:59+00:00

Mits wrote:
Small mod/nitpicks. Really new to the modding scene so I hope I don't sound too ridiculous haha

Ora's Insane
02:10:069 (2,3) - pretty big/awkward gap between notes here. I'm gonna keep because it fits with the symmetrical patterns that I made in this pattern so it's recognizable. Plus the space is 2/1 so there's a lot of time to reach it

Everything on Bakari's mod accepted ! Bakari you've always been a star you don't have to ask

we're gonna be a star

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 75184
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22796,45296,75296,99671,114671,137171,159671,174671,197171
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.5

[Metadata]
Title:I'm gonna be a star
TitleUnicode:I'm gonna be a star
Artist:TWICE
ArtistUnicode:íŠ¸ì™€ì´ìŠ¤
Creator:Firetruck
Version:Ora's Insane
Source:
Tags:K-Pop Kpop JYP Entertainment ì—”í„°í…Œì¸ë¨¼íŠ¸ Girl Group ë‚˜ì—° ì •ì—° ëª¨ëª¨ ì‚¬ë‚˜ ì§€íš¨ ë¯¸ë‚˜ ë‹¤í˜„ ì±„ì˜ ì¯”ìœ„  Nayeon Jeongyeon Momo Sana Jihyo Mina Dahyun Chaeyeong Tzuyu PAGE TWO Lapis Aoki Xiaolin Ora Sixteen Theme Song Im
BeatmapID:1314648
BeatmapSetID:622305

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"asasasaSAASFSDF.png",0,0
//Break Periods
2,75496,85796
2,137370,147671
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
7796,468.75,4,2,0,70,1,0
37796,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
41546,-100,4,2,0,65,0,0
45296,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
90296,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
94046,-100,4,2,0,65,0,0
98264,-166.666666666667,4,2,0,20,0,0
99671,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
114671,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,70,0,1
129671,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
152171,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
155921,-100,4,2,0,65,0,0
159671,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,70,0,1
174671,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
190139,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
193421,-100,4,2,0,65,0,0
197171,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
197639,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
198108,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
198577,-100,4,2,0,20,0,0
199046,-100,4,2,0,10,0,0
199514,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 186,150,216
Combo4 : 232,96,130
Combo5 : 105,198,203
Combo6 : 255,128,64

[HitObjects]
305,143,7796,5,4,0:0:0:0:
202,256,8030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,256,8147,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,256,8264,2,0,L|109:250,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,241,8733,2,0,P|310:283|311:334,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,143,9202,2,0,P|201:100|201:50,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,7,9671,5,4,3:0:0:0:
288,162,9905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,162,10022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,162,10140,1,0,1:0:0:0:
440,81,10374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,57,10609,1,4,3:0:0:0:
393,177,10842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,177,10960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,177,11077,2,0,B|403:227|403:227|384:309,1,127.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,333,11546,5,4,3:0:0:0:
225,291,11780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,291,11897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,291,12014,2,0,B|179:283|179:283|127:292,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,208,12483,2,0,P|58:219|110:205,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,70,12952,2,0,P|200:112|214:164,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,290,13421,5,4,3:0:0:0:
466,234,13655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
466,234,13772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
466,234,13889,1,0,1:0:0:0:
297,210,14124,2,0,L|256:182,2,42.5,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
435,308,14592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
435,308,14710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
435,308,14827,2,0,P|392:264|411:177,1,127.5,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,174,15296,5,4,0:0:0:0:
306,290,15530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,290,15647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,290,15764,2,0,P|262:299|219:291,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,141,16233,2,0,L|137:244,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
39,364,16702,2,0,L|43:279,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,141,17171,5,4,3:0:0:0:
285,195,17405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,195,17522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,195,17639,1,0,1:0:0:0:
117,225,17874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,125,18108,1,4,3:0:0:0:
214,276,18342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,276,18460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,276,18577,2,0,P|266:301|349:290,1,127.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,282,19046,5,4,3:0:0:0:
461,163,19280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
461,163,19397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
461,163,19514,2,0,P|460:209|469:262,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
501,80,19983,2,0,P|459:72|414:79,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,183,20452,2,0,P|303:188|261:180,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,166,20803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,166,20921,5,4,3:0:0:0:
107,125,21155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
107,125,21272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
107,125,21389,1,0,1:0:0:0:
56,287,21624,2,0,L|41:334,2,42.5,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
215,344,22092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,344,22209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,344,22327,2,0,B|265:354|265:354|339:337,1,127.5,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
372,327,22796,5,4,0:0:0:0:
329,179,23030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
485,248,23264,2,0,P|444:249|397:240,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,103,23733,2,0,P|314:138|330:183,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,341,24202,2,0,P|282:304|313:268,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
485,248,24671,5,4,3:0:0:0:
329,179,24905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
435,69,25139,2,0,L|426:163,1,85
408,316,25608,1,4,3:0:0:0:
248,342,25842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,268,26077,1,0,1:0:0:0:
192,294,26311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,220,26546,5,4,3:0:0:0:
248,342,26780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,246,27014,2,0,L|70:188,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,61,27483,2,0,L|166:147,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,112,27952,2,0,L|83:83,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,79,28421,5,4,3:0:0:0:
166,144,28655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,303,28889,2,0,L|254:209,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,73,29358,1,4,3:0:0:0:
362,99,29592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,142,29827,1,0,1:0:0:0:
401,168,30061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,211,30296,5,4,3:0:0:0:
362,99,30530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,142,30764,2,0,P|208:182|204:229,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
167,380,31233,2,0,P|200:340|204:293,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,172,31702,1,0,1:0:0:0:
128,311,31936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,222,32171,5,4,3:0:0:0:
20,262,32405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
86,88,32639,2,0,L|103:177,1,85
128,311,33108,1,4,3:0:0:0:
288,285,33342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
167,242,33577,1,0,1:0:0:0:
327,216,33811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
206,173,34046,5,4,3:0:0:0:
288,285,34280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,117,34514,2,0,P|220:96|177:98,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,135,34983,2,0,P|347:88|323:51,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,220,35452,2,0,P|417:194|436:155,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,286,35921,6,0,P|340:303|365:314,3,42.5,4|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,285,36389,1,0,1:0:0:0:
293,202,36624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,318,36858,2,0,L|200:368,3,42.5,4|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,290,37327,2,0,L|118:340,3,42.5,0|0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
30,262,37796,5,4,0:0:0:0:
145,147,38030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
145,147,38147,1,0,0:0:0:0:
145,147,38264,2,0,L|138:58,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,224,38733,2,0,P|147:236|106:226,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,159,39202,2,0,P|364:147|405:157,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
223,124,39671,6,0,P|212:84|227:32,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,260,40140,2,0,P|300:300|285:352,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,251,40608,2,0,L|220:243,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,133,41077,2,0,L|292:125,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,101,41546,5,4,0:0:0:0:
118,251,41780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
118,251,41897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
118,251,42014,2,0,L|126:353,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,369,42366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
129,369,42483,1,4,3:0:0:0:
281,382,42717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,382,42835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,382,42952,2,0,L|274:297,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,43421,5,4,3:0:0:0:
337,142,43655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
337,142,43772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
337,142,43889,1,2,0:0:0:0:
195,235,44124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
265,99,44358,1,4,3:0:0:0:
296,69,44475,1,0,3:0:0:0:
337,58,44592,1,8,3:0:0:0:
377,67,44709,1,0,3:0:0:0:
408,96,44826,1,8,3:0:0:0:
420,135,44943,1,0,0:0:0:0:
413,177,45061,1,8,3:0:0:0:
385,209,45178,1,0,3:0:0:0:
347,226,45296,6,0,P|332:184|343:135,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,177,45647,2,0,P|442:143|489:128,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
490,213,45999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
401,337,46233,1,4,3:0:0:0:
401,337,46350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
401,337,46467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
490,213,46702,1,0,1:0:0:0:
347,226,46936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
347,226,47053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
347,226,47171,6,0,P|305:211|256:222,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,292,47522,2,0,P|264:321|249:368,1,85
334,369,47874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,271,48108,1,4,3:0:0:0:
153,262,48225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
111,268,48342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
74,288,48459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
46,319,48577,2,0,L|34:218,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,128,49046,5,4,3:0:0:0:
153,262,49280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
117,104,49514,1,0,1:0:0:0:
141,69,49631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,53,49748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
221,59,49865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,85,49983,2,0,P|301:93|344:83,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,86,50335,2,0,P|373:78|330:88,1,85
296,10,50686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
378,161,50921,6,0,L|373:212,3,42.5,4|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,182,51389,2,0,L|286:233,3,42.5,0|0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,206,51858,2,0,L|196:295,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,154,52327,2,0,L|100:243,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,77,52796,5,4,3:0:0:0:
60,58,53030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
99,238,53264,1,0,1:0:0:0:
60,58,53499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
185,181,53733,2,0,P|202:229|199:264,1,85
152,328,54085,2,0,P|92:342|23:309,1,127.5
82,163,54671,5,4,3:0:0:0:
212,271,54905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,286,55022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
293,286,55139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
333,270,55256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,253,55373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
414,251,55490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
453,267,55608,2,0,B|463:314|463:314|454:357,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,368,55960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
313,130,56311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
313,130,56428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
313,130,56546,6,0,P|358:138|400:128,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,49,56897,2,0,P|349:41|307:51,1,85
238,86,57249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,227,57483,6,0,L|194:313,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,373,57835,2,0,P|183:348|271:367,1,127.5
178,227,58421,6,0,P|167:184|162:141,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,301,58889,2,0,P|266:257|277:215,1,85
166,324,59358,2,0,P|117:331|79:321,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,217,59827,2,0,P|324:209|362:219,1,85
205,111,60296,5,4,0:0:0:0:
205,111,60413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,111,60530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
78,274,60764,2,0,L|30:287,2,42.5,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,217,61234,5,4,3:0:0:0:
276,217,61350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,217,61467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,147,61702,2,0,L|56:108,2,42.5,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,317,62171,5,4,3:0:0:0:
197,317,62288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,317,62405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,111,62639,2,0,L|236:68,2,42.5,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,274,63108,6,0,P|35:263|1:227,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,317,63577,2,0,P|240:328|274:364,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,359,64046,5,4,3:0:0:0:
115,359,64163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
115,359,64280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
78,190,64514,2,0,L|128:204,1,42.5
201,224,64749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,72,64983,5,4,3:0:0:0:
183,72,65100,2,0,L|166:134,1,42.5
238,150,65335,2,0,P|276:187|283:232,1,85
254,287,65686,2,0,P|234:300|206:307,1,42.5
201,224,65921,5,4,3:0:0:0:
355,166,66155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,168,66272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
434,188,66389,1,0,1:0:0:0:
458,223,66506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
465,264,66623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
453,305,66740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
425,336,66858,5,0,0:0:0:0:
425,336,66975,2,0,L|365:332,1,42.5,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,358,67210,2,0,L|178:350,1,127.5
241,168,67796,5,4,0:0:0:0:
382,235,68030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,70,68264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
291,250,68499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
291,250,68616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
291,250,68733,2,0,L|301:345,1,85
224,364,69085,2,0,L|210:217,1,127.5
204,160,69671,5,4,3:0:0:0:
4,200,69905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,338,70139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
134,338,70256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,338,70374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,160,70608,1,4,3:0:0:0:
240,139,70725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
282,131,70842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,138,70959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
361,158,71077,2,0,P|406:168|451:151,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
469,135,71428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,135,71546,6,0,P|459:182|475:239,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,270,71897,2,0,P|414:317|398:374,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,319,72249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
337,319,72483,2,0,P|275:339|209:332,1,127.5,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,321,72952,1,4,3:0:0:0:
90,192,73186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
242,177,73421,6,0,P|261:169|291:144,3,42.5,4|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,144,73889,2,0,P|340:124|327:106,3,42.5,0|0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,37,74358,2,0,P|297:44|267:69,3,42.5,4|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,71,74827,2,0,P|217:90|230:108,3,42.5,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,177,75296,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86546,12,0,89827,0:0:0:0:
436,240,90296,5,4,3:0:0:0:
432,265,90764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,290,91233,2,0,P|385:296|340:291,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,283,91585,1,2,3:0:0:0:
76,144,92171,5,4,3:0:0:0:
80,119,92639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,94,93108,2,0,P|127:88|172:93,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,101,93460,1,2,3:0:0:0:
142,348,94046,6,0,L|129:260,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,181,94514,2,0,L|216:269,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,320,94983,2,0,L|308:232,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,145,95451,2,0,L|410:233,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,82,95921,5,4,3:0:0:0:
425,64,96038,1,0,3:0:0:0:
392,59,96155,1,4,3:0:0:0:
359,68,96272,1,0,3:0:0:0:
328,96,96389,1,4,3:0:0:0:
291,116,96506,1,0,3:0:0:0:
249,116,96623,1,4,3:0:0:0:
212,95,96740,1,0,3:0:0:0:
190,57,96858,6,0,L|197:13,1,42.5,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
122,123,97092,2,0,L|126:103,2,21.25,8|0|8,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
164,207,97327,2,0,L|168:187,2,21.25,8|0|8,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
91,265,97561,2,0,L|95:245,2,21.25,8|0|8,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
130,350,97796,5,0,0:0:0:0:
129,127,99671,5,4,0:0:0:0:
219,250,99905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,250,100022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,250,100139,2,0,B|260:255|260:255|308:246,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,203,100608,2,0,P|139:247|145:299,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,288,101077,2,0,P|375:245|376:203,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,81,101546,5,4,0:0:0:0:
295,228,101780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,228,101897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,228,102014,1,4,3:0:0:0:
183,108,102249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,200,102483,1,4,3:0:0:0:
192,189,102717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,189,102835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,189,102952,2,0,P|150:181|118:154,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,323,103421,5,4,0:0:0:0:
309,353,103655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
309,353,103772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
309,353,103889,2,0,L|301:262,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,78,104358,2,0,P|429:71|472:83,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,150,104827,2,0,P|262:157|219:145,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,28,105296,5,4,0:0:0:0:
267,79,105530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,79,105647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,79,105764,1,4,3:0:0:0:
236,229,105999,2,0,L|226:287,2,42.5,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
134,114,106467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,114,106585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,113,106702,2,0,P|96:109|49:126,1,85,4|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,41,107171,5,4,0:0:0:0:
101,190,107405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
101,190,107522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
101,190,107639,2,0,L|107:285,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,336,108108,2,0,P|219:328|176:337,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
23,273,108577,2,0,P|69:281|112:272,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,170,109046,5,4,0:0:0:0:
181,334,109280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,334,109397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,334,109514,1,4,3:0:0:0:
139,186,109749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,245,109983,1,4,3:0:0:0:
181,334,110217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,334,110335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,334,110452,2,0,P|199:288|211:241,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,85,110921,5,4,0:0:0:0:
341,114,111155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,114,111272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,114,111389,2,0,P|383:99|426:102,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,209,111858,2,0,P|259:180|240:141,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,204,112327,2,0,P|391:247|367:283,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,302,112678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,302,112796,6,0,L|352:358,3,42.5,4|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,290,113264,2,0,L|266:346,3,42.5,4|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,265,113733,1,8,3:0:0:0:
149,235,113850,1,0,3:0:0:0:
108,228,113967,1,8,3:0:0:0:
70,245,114084,1,0,3:0:0:0:
48,281,114201,1,8,3:0:0:0:
50,323,114318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,356,114436,1,8,3:0:0:0:
114,370,114553,1,0,3:0:0:0:
155,359,114671,6,0,P|199:349|246:356,1,93.5000028533936,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,259,115139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
259,282,115374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
410,354,115608,1,4,3:0:0:0:
410,354,115725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
410,354,115842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,208,116077,6,0,P|261:196|215:205,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,267,116546,1,4,3:0:0:0:
92,91,116780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,264,117014,2,0,P|161:313|152:362,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,356,117483,1,4,3:0:0:0:
311,310,117600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,264,117717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
333,221,117834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,185,117952,2,0,P|415:194|460:182,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,82,118421,6,0,P|246:73|201:85,1,93.5000028533936,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,185,118889,1,0,1:0:0:0:
455,43,119124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,82,119358,1,4,3:0:0:0:
297,82,119475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,82,119592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,170,119827,1,0,1:0:0:0:
346,320,120061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,320,120178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,320,120296,6,0,P|296:317|250:310,1,93.5000028533936,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,166,120764,1,0,1:0:0:0:
123,314,120999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,181,121233,2,0,P|185:123|153:86,1,93.5000028533936,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,299,121702,2,0,P|43:357|75:394,1,93.5000028533936,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,376,122171,5,4,0:0:0:0:
123,314,122405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,265,122639,1,0,1:0:0:0:
202,298,122873,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,122,123108,1,4,3:0:0:0:
307,122,123225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,122,123342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,230,123577,2,0,L|223:128,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,9,124046,5,4,3:0:0:0:
351,185,124280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,32,124514,1,0,1:0:0:0:
457,54,124748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
351,185,124983,1,4,3:0:0:0:
306,173,125100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,179,125217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,202,125334,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,239,125452,2,0,P|126:263|46:225,1,140.25000428009,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
34,214,125921,5,4,0:0:0:0:
154,356,126155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,152,126389,1,0,1:0:0:0:
46,342,126624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,239,126858,1,4,3:0:0:0:
191,239,126975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,239,127092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
34,214,127327,1,0,1:0:0:0:
210,152,127561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
210,152,127678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
210,152,127796,6,0,P|258:142|310:155,1,93.5000028533936,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,364,128264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,207,128499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,207,128616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,207,128733,2,0,P|369:255|356:307,1,93.5000028533936,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,301,129201,2,0,P|145:253|158:201,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,73,129671,5,4,0:0:0:0:
13,150,130139,1,2,0:0:0:0:
497,308,131077,1,2,3:0:0:0:
231,294,131546,6,0,L|173:305,2,42.5,4|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,148,132014,2,0,L|190:189,2,42.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,141,132483,2,0,L|294:148,2,42.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,294,132952,2,0,L|335:252,2,42.5,2|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,301,133421,5,4,3:0:0:0:
335,252,133655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
153,208,133889,1,4,3:0:0:0:
153,208,134006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
153,208,134124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,321,134358,1,4,3:0:0:0:
299,159,134592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,159,134709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,159,134827,2,0,P|346:164|386:154,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,42,135296,6,0,L|238:97,2,42.5,4|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,85,135764,2,0,L|118:140,2,42.5,4|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,261,136233,1,8,3:0:0:0:
85,240,136350,1,0,3:0:0:0:
126,231,136467,1,8,3:0:0:0:
168,236,136584,1,0,3:0:0:0:
207,253,136701,1,8,3:0:0:0:
244,274,136818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,286,136936,1,8,3:0:0:0:
326,287,137053,1,0,3:0:0:0:
366,273,137170,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,148421,12,0,151702,0:0:0:0:
140,284,152171,5,4,3:0:0:0:
118,297,152639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,310,153108,2,0,B|82:268|82:268|89:213,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,194,153460,1,2,3:0:0:0:
372,100,154046,5,4,3:0:0:0:
394,87,154514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,74,154983,2,0,B|430:116|430:116|423:171,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,190,155335,1,2,3:0:0:0:
75,362,155921,6,0,L|159:352,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,259,156389,2,0,L|136:268,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,182,156858,2,0,L|139:172,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,63,157326,2,0,L|121:72,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,9,157796,5,4,3:0:0:0:
296,47,157913,1,0,3:0:0:0:
293,89,158030,1,4,3:0:0:0:
271,126,158147,1,0,3:0:0:0:
232,143,158264,1,4,3:0:0:0:
271,126,158381,1,0,3:0:0:0:
313,129,158498,1,4,3:0:0:0:
349,151,158615,1,0,3:0:0:0:
365,190,158733,2,0,L|373:219,8,21.25,8|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,210,159671,5,4,0:0:0:0:
226,307,159905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,307,160022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,307,160139,2,0,L|331:294,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,323,160608,2,0,P|485:279|497:215,1,93.5000028533936,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,62,161077,2,0,P|422:106|410:170,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,295,161546,5,4,3:0:0:0:
340,120,161780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,120,161897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,120,162014,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,274,162249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
265,198,162484,1,4,3:0:0:0:
437,166,162718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
437,166,162835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
437,165,162952,2,0,P|444:97|408:38,1,140.25000428009,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
375,19,163421,5,4,3:0:0:0:
227,99,163655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,99,163772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,99,163889,2,0,B|178:107|178:107|129:99,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
7,237,164358,2,0,L|-2:138,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,297,164827,2,0,L|115:198,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,347,165296,5,4,3:0:0:0:
173,152,165530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
173,152,165647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
173,152,165764,1,0,1:0:0:0:
360,129,165999,2,0,L|408:102,2,46.7500014266968,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
204,226,166467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,226,166585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,226,166702,2,0,P|247:182|226:92,1,140.25000428009,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,82,167171,5,4,0:0:0:0:
351,209,167405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
351,209,167522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
351,209,167639,2,0,P|397:220|444:210,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,46,168108,2,0,P|395:93|395:145,1,93.5000028533936,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,303,168577,2,0,P|441:256|441:204,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,97,169046,5,4,3:0:0:0:
361,261,169280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
361,261,169397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
361,261,169514,1,0,1:0:0:0:
376,60,169749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,284,169983,1,4,3:0:0:0:
442,181,170217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
442,181,170335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
442,181,170452,2,0,B|393:164|393:164|295:177,1,140.25000428009,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
268,183,170921,5,4,0:0:0:0:
191,332,171155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,332,171272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,332,171389,2,0,P|202:288|189:225,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,91,171858,2,0,P|261:135|274:198,1,93.5000028533936,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,336,172327,2,0,P|421:329|477:325,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
503,325,172678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
503,325,172796,6,0,L|507:265,3,46.7500014266968,4|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,223,173264,2,0,L|446:163,3,46.7500014266968,0|0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
501,113,173733,2,0,B|455:139|411:117|411:117|365:93|320:112,1,187.000005706787,4|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
321,111,174671,5,4,0:0:0:0:
451,51,174905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
362,196,175139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
368,42,175374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
498,124,175608,1,4,3:0:0:0:
498,124,175725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
498,124,175842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
362,196,176077,2,0,P|313:201|276:190,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,75,176546,5,4,3:0:0:0:
324,121,176780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
206,243,177014,2,0,P|204:194|207:152,1,85
237,9,177483,1,4,3:0:0:0:
397,35,177717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,78,177952,1,0,1:0:0:0:
421,104,178186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,147,178421,5,4,3:0:0:0:
397,35,178655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
377,203,178889,2,0,P|336:225|295:227,1,85
159,127,179358,2,0,P|198:151|220:186,1,85
203,354,179827,2,0,P|204:307|223:270,1,85
315,147,180296,5,0,0:0:0:0:
475,202,180530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
394,43,180764,2,0,L|400:133,1,85
411,297,181233,1,4,3:0:0:0:
250,313,181467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,240,181702,1,0,1:0:0:0:
209,253,181936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,184,182171,5,4,3:0:0:0:
250,313,182405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,239,182639,2,0,P|172:245|214:254,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,235,183108,1,0,3:0:0:0:
47,235,183225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
47,235,183342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,100,183577,1,0,1:0:0:0:
125,239,183811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,150,184046,5,4,3:0:0:0:
233,190,184280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,322,184514,2,0,L|126:229,1,85
151,100,184983,1,4,3:0:0:0:
311,126,185217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,169,185452,1,0,1:0:0:0:
350,195,185686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
229,238,185921,5,4,0:0:0:0:
311,126,186155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,293,186389,2,0,P|244:314|194:309,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,195,186858,2,0,P|391:174|441:179,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,238,187327,1,0,1:0:0:0:
406,250,187561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
249,163,187796,6,0,P|231:146|211:116,3,42.5,4|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,99,188264,2,0,P|294:74|310:42,3,42.5,0|0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,103,188733,1,4,3:0:0:0:
404,98,188850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,113,188967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
470,146,189084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
479,187,189202,2,0,P|475:232|468:271,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,355,189671,5,4,0:0:0:0:
215,211,189905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,211,190022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,211,190139,2,0,L|300:204,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,355,190608,2,0,L|221:362,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,373,191077,2,0,P|63:322|50:286,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,145,191546,6,0,L|85:152,1,85,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,168,192015,2,0,P|251:117|264:81,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,250,192483,2,0,P|177:278|139:284,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,239,192952,2,0,P|354:261|379:291,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,168,193421,5,4,3:0:0:0:
387,92,193655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
387,92,193772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
387,92,193889,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,99,194124,2,0,L|161:77,2,42.5,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,165,194592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,165,194709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,165,194827,2,0,P|415:163|449:137,1,85,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,43,195296,5,4,3:0:0:0:
255,195,195530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,195,195647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,195,195764,1,2,3:0:0:0:
360,61,195999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,119,196233,1,8,3:0:0:0:
186,148,196350,1,0,3:0:0:0:
171,187,196467,1,8,3:0:0:0:
177,228,196584,1,0,3:0:0:0:
203,261,196701,1,8,3:0:0:0:
241,277,196818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
283,273,196936,1,8,3:0:0:0:
318,248,197053,1,0,3:0:0:0:
334,209,197171,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,197229,12,0,200452,0:0:0:0:

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Lilyanna 2017-08-15T18:12:47+00:00

best quality mod incoming hi

General
02:39:671 - since this a kiai why this is not kiai style too 01:39:671 - they both chorus

easy

02:09:671 - can drag the break there like u did 01:15:296 - and so on
02:34:046 (3) - the way copy it is wrong try ctrl h than ctrl g that way will look better on top of the slider

Normal

00:33:577 (3) - small ds inconsistency
00:58:421 (4) - nc
01:40:374 (2,3) - smth wrong with the stack here
02:15:530 (2) - its be better if this 1/2 slider it fits more

collab hard

01:15:061 (5,6) - these feel little overmapped since there is no audible sounds i suggest u remove them
03:10:608 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - isnt like rankable thing where the object should fate before the one apear if so then move them to keep the completely stacked its confusing

ora's insane

00:44:358 (6) - maybe nc here i think its little too long
02:38:264 (5,6,7,8,9) - try avoid stacking the stream its little tricky
02:38:733 (9) - i dont hear 1/8 here or just me if so then map vocals

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Firetruck 2017-08-15T20:12:25+00:00

Lilyanna wrote:
best quality mod incoming hi

General
02:39:671 - since this a kiai why this is not kiai style too 01:39:671 - they both chorus other has more intense music

easy

02:09:671 - can drag the break there like u did 01:15:296 - and so on
02:34:046 (3) - the way copy it is wrong try ctrl h than ctrl g that way will look better on top of the slider

Normal

00:33:577 (3) - small ds inconsistency
00:58:421 (4) - nc
01:40:374 (2,3) - smth wrong with the stack here
02:15:530 (2) - its be better if this 1/2 slider it fits more

collab hard

01:15:061 (5,6) - these feel little overmapped since there is no audible sounds i suggest u remove them wait wut theres obvious sound there xD
03:10:608 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - isnt like rankable thing where the object should fate before the one apear if so then move them to keep the completely stacked its confusing im p sure its oki + i wanted to do a repetitive pattern cuz STAR STAR STAR STAR STAR STAR STAR STAR STAR but im gonna get testplays from hard players n see if they can pass it

ty!! no reply = fixed

TWICE - I'm gonna be a star

Sign In To Proceed

Don't have an account?

TWICE - I'm gonna be a star

Firetruck wrote:

Tae wrote:

[ M I N A K O ] wrote:

[ L u k a s ] wrote:

[ M I N A K O ] wrote:

cosmiccc wrote:

Ora wrote:

-AsrieLx- wrote:

walter85 wrote:

walter85 wrote:

[ M I N A K O ] wrote:

ZhongRen wrote:

Nuolong wrote:

ZhongRen wrote:

Neptunee wrote:

Neoskylove wrote:

Xiaolin wrote:

Hobbes2 wrote:

Hobbes2 wrote:

Hobbes2 wrote:

Bakari wrote:

Mits wrote:

Mits wrote:

Lilyanna wrote:

New reply