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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017년 7월 16일 일요일 at 오후 3:21:46

Artist: Buta-Otome
Title: Towa no Maigo
Source: 東方Project
Tags: コンプ Comp 少女煉獄 Girl Purgatory ランコ Ranko 東方永夜抄 ~ Imperishable Night Kamishirasawa Keine Stage 3 Boss Theme プレインエイジア Plain Asia Touhou Eternal Lost Child of Eternity PatZar Genocide
BPM: 180
Filesize: 3124kb
Play Time: 02:52
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.29 stars, 379 notes)
  2. Gen's Muzukashii (3.25 stars, 666 notes)
  3. Inner Oni (6.89 stars, 1148 notes)
  4. Kantan (1.63 stars, 222 notes)
  5. Oni (4.03 stars, 928 notes)


Download: Buta-Otome - Towa no Maigo
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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For rank

kantan 100%
Futsuu 100%
Gen's Muzukashii 100% by PatZar
Oni 100%
Inner Oni 100%
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Wow first mod xD let's try to help you! :3

[General]
  1. Only thing that I can point it's about volumes:
    1. 00:11:526 - using ascendant one cuz of the song?
    2. Kiai is clearly higher than rest of the song imo, so rest could be 80 and 90 on kiai or something like that :p
  2. 02:14:859 - this break is fine. Making a personal suggest I think you could map here on all diff (I mean personal cuz I'm not a fan of using breaks on Taiko) just easy considering it's really slow part (for example using kat on sounds like 02:15:526 - )
  3. 00:14:860 - Are you sure using this redline is neccesary? I mean I'm not perfect at timing but only +1 offset is... strange to see o.o
    Not anything else. Good job at this!

    EDIT:
  4. was using same OD and HP on Muzu and Oni on purpose? I think you could make it different


Comments:
Skipping from 01:28:193 to 01:53:526: - because my suggestions repeat!
Skipping from 02:25:526 to 02:49:526: - for same reason as above. Not lazy but I feel useless to make same comments xD

[Kantan]
  1. Well I'm not a fan about repeating notes but I think you should make 00:19:193 (9) - this don because consistency and it sounds pretty similar to the first one
  2. Overall Kantan seems great talking about notes placement but I think it's a little dense and overmapped somewheres:
  3. 00:22:860 - there's not any 4/1 break on this section, it makes feels it a little dense imo :c
  4. Also using copy paste on 00:22:859 - 00:33:526 - isn't bad but I think you could make something different through them to don't make it repetitive. For example making this 00:24:859 (20) - don could help (also it can give a great abekobe about 00:26:859 (23,24,25) -
  5. I think you should delete notes like 00:44:526 (53) - 00:47:193 (59) - 00:49:859 (63) - so that makes an emphasis about next triple (where is the strongest sound)
  6. 00:47:193 (59) - This break a lot the consistency that was going great on this part :c, I would prefer a triple here
  7. Kiai is way fine... but dense aswell D:
  8. 01:12:193 (97,98,99,100,101,102,103) - this is hard D: even harder than Kiai. You should delete some notes here (01:12:526 (98,100) - for example). This is more for Futsuu even Muzu
  9. 01:20:859 (115,120) - I think they should be kat to have consistency with 01:18:193 (110) -
  10. Skipping from 01:28:193 - to 01:53:526 - because my suggestions repeat!
  11. 01:53:526 - I think you should remap this section. It's really hard for a Kantan difficulty... usage of long chains of 1/1 notes are difficult for Kantan (even not that good on Futsuu imo xD)
  12. 02:52:026 (41) - D instead? The kick is on 02:51:859 - imo


[Futsuu]
  1. Since you're following vocals (according to where you used 2/1 break) on this section I think you should use 00:22:859 (24,25,26,27) - k d k d instead d k d k since higher pitch is on first tick (applies through the whole section :3)
  2. Tbh I don't want to get influence on your mapping style, but I think from 00:22:859 - you could use some 1/1 notes, break then 1/2 instead long chains on 1/1. They're not bad, just saying they could be better ^^
  3. 00:54:859 - you should add a D here and could make a great 4/1 break right before Kiai :p
  4. 00:57:693 (108) - probably kat according to vocals (since it's different than 01:03:026 (126,127,128,129) - )
  5. 00:59:526 (114,115,116) kdk?
  6. 01:12:193 (146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155) - this breaks the consistency a lot (00:14:860 -, 00:17:526 -, 01:09:526 - )
  7. 01:53:526 - this one is better but just a little hard. I don't mean it's bad, I just feel it hard :c (if you don't change it is fine I think xD)


[Oni]
  1. What about deleting notes like 00:25:359 (64) - to make some breaks on this section? It's way dense ;;
  2. This applies through the whole section (just suggesting tho)
  3. 00:43:026 (188,189,190) - this one fills better as ddk cuz ascendant rhythm
  4. 00:52:193 (252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259) - this one could be better by deleting some notes, it's way overmapped aswell o:
  5. 01:36:193 (264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271) - ^
    Well I think current diff is really good, but you could delete some notes to make some little breaks :p
  6. 01:54:859 (95,96,97,98,99) - kkddk fills better according to rhythm
  7. 01:57:526 (116,117,118,119,120) - using this ddkdk almost three times in a row is a little strange imo... you could make it a little different
  8. 02:05:526 (175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187) - 2hard4Oni? D:
  9. Maybe nerf ^ and add 02:06:693 - don here
  10. 02:51:859 (163,164) - k D maybe :p


That's all for me for now... I'm sorry about not modding Inner so I can make it another day :p. Hope this can help you and best of luck! Love this song!
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http://puu.sh/wjGIa/05fa159cef.rar done lol

i dont have idea what should i map at 01:53:526 (435) -
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xfraczynho wrote:

Wow first mod xD let's try to help you! :3

[General]
  1. Only thing that I can point it's about volumes:
    1. 00:11:526 - using ascendant one cuz of the song?
      >i don't like the change of hitsound, so keep now.
    2. Kiai is clearly higher than rest of the song imo, so rest could be 80 and 90 on kiai or something like that :p
      >kiai 90 fixed
  2. 02:14:859 - this break is fine. Making a personal suggest I think you could map here on all diff (I mean personal cuz I'm not a fan of using breaks on Taiko) just easy considering it's really slow part (for example using kat on sounds like 02:15:526 - )
    > i considered this many time, but keep cause this part is REALLY small sound.
  3. 00:14:860 - Are you sure using this redline is neccesary? I mean I'm not perfect at timing but only +1 offset is... strange to see o.o
    >this red line is take a role that start from right beat.
    Not anything else. Good job at this!

    EDIT:
  4. was using same OD and HP on Muzu and Oni on purpose? I think you could make it different
    >oh missed that not uploaded. hp 4 od 5.5 fixed~


Comments:
Skipping from 01:28:193 to 01:53:526: - because my suggestions repeat!
Skipping from 02:25:526 to 02:49:526: - for same reason as above. Not lazy but I feel useless to make same comments xD

[Kantan]
  1. Well I'm not a fan about repeating notes but I think you should make 00:19:193 (9) - this don because consistency and it sounds pretty similar to the first one
    >cause don't wanna repeat like you, and fit to the music imo, keep now
  2. Overall Kantan seems great talking about notes placement but I think it's a little dense and overmapped somewheres:
    >that's my worried, so now i consider it. thanks :)
  3. 00:22:860 - there's not any 4/1 break on this section, it makes feels it a little dense imo :c
  4. Also using copy paste on 00:22:859 - 00:33:526 - isn't bad but I think you could make something different through them to don't make it repetitive. For example making this 00:24:859 (20) - don could help (also it can give a great abekobe about 00:26:859 (23,24,25) -
    >cause i wanna point the next thing that 00:38:859 (45,46,47,48,49,50,51) and 00:28:193 (26,27,28,29,30,31) , keep now.
  5. I think you should delete notes like 00:44:526 (53) - 00:47:193 (59) - 00:49:859 (63) - so that makes an emphasis about next triple (where is the strongest sound)
    >great. fixed
  6. 00:47:193 (59) - This break a lot the consistency that was going great on this part :c, I would prefer a triple here
    >little don't know to me. keep now.
  7. Kiai is way fine... but dense aswell D:
  8. 01:12:193 (97,98,99,100,101,102,103) - this is hard D: even harder than Kiai. You should delete some notes here (01:12:526 (98,100) - for example). This is more for Futsuu even Muzu
    >fixed
  9. 01:20:859 (115,120) - I think they should be kat to have consistency with 01:18:193 (110) -
    >cause don't wanna repetitive pattern like before, keep
  10. Skipping from 01:28:193 - to 01:53:526 - because my suggestions repeat!
  11. 01:53:526 - I think you should remap this section. It's really hard for a Kantan difficulty... usage of long chains of 1/1 notes are difficult for Kantan (even not that good on Futsuu imo xD)
    >um... wanna express continuing piano but agree that very very hard im kantan. remapped.
  12. 02:52:026 (41) - D instead? The kick is on 02:51:859 - imo
    >same opinion with oni


[Futsuu]
  1. Since you're following vocals (according to where you used 2/1 break) on this section I think you should use 00:22:859 (24,25,26,27) - k d k d instead d k d k since higher pitch is on first tick (applies through the whole section :3)
    >it's right but i don't wanna confuse futsuu player with differently listened drum and pattern. keep it now.
  2. Tbh I don't want to get influence on your mapping style, but I think from 00:22:859 - you could use some 1/1 notes, break then 1/2 instead long chains on 1/1. They're not bad, just saying they could be better ^^
    >prevent same pattern with kantan. sorry
  3. 00:54:859 - you should add a D here and could make a great 4/1 break right before Kiai :p
    >fixed
  4. 00:57:693 (108) - probably kat according to vocals (since it's different than 01:03:026 (126,127,128,129) - )
    >kddk seems very hard @p@. keep
  5. 00:59:526 (114,115,116) kdk?
    >wanna them to play more easy the next 5 stream
  6. 01:12:193 (146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155) - this breaks the consistency a lot (00:14:860 -, 00:17:526 -, 01:09:526 - )
    >fixed
  7. 01:53:526 - this one is better but just a little hard. I don't mean it's bad, I just feel it hard :c (if you don't change it is fine I think xD)
    >i wanna express the continuing piano sound in here. that's right that overmapped part, but wanna express piano sound.


[Oni]
  1. What about deleting notes like 00:25:359 (64) - to make some breaks on this section? It's way dense ;;
    >cause this is ONI diff, want to express more thing. keep now.
  2. This applies through the whole section (just suggesting tho)
  3. 00:43:026 (188,189,190) - this one fills better as ddk cuz ascendant rhythm
    >fixed
  4. 00:52:193 (252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259) - this one could be better by deleting some notes, it's way overmapped aswell o:
    >cause this is 1/2 beat, even this is mix of finisher and non, keep now.
  5. 01:36:193 (264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271) - ^
    Well I think current diff is really good, but you could delete some notes to make some little breaks :p
  6. 01:54:859 (95,96,97,98,99) - kkddk fills better according to rhythm
    >melodt do si do mi, so i decide to divide dd kk.
  7. 01:57:526 (116,117,118,119,120) - using this ddkdk almost three times in a row is a little strange imo... you could make it a little different
    >fixed ddkkk
  8. 02:05:526 (175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187) - 2hard4Oni? D:
    >lol delete some part.
  9. Maybe nerf ^ and add 02:06:693 - don here
    >^
  10. 02:51:859 (163,164) - k D maybe :p
    > want to express finish, keep


That's all for me for now... I'm sorry about not modding Inner so I can make it another day :p. Hope this can help you and best of luck! Love this song!
really thanks for first modding xDD
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and yes, i didn't tell you, input Genocide into tag Column, that's my old nickname
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PatZar wrote:

and yes, i didn't tell you, input Genocide into tag Column, that's my old nickname
oops,
updated~
posted
Placeholder for mod
Sorry for delay :o
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Hello again! , 404 AccNotFound. :)
Accidentally , while I'm modding your map and typing in the forum. Almost to finish it but my computer turns off cause the electricity in my area have been turn off for a while without any warning or announcement. And I can't recovery my modding. Sorry for late. ;;w;;

I'll put everything in to a box, It's very long. XD

Let's see! :D

[General]
- Widescreen support should be disable in Kantan , Futsuu and Oni
- How about change OD on Inner Oni to 6.5 or 7? This map is almost 7* so maybe it's better to use higher OD.


[Kantan]
Overall changed suggestion : Didn't mean to rude to your mapping style. But I think that this Kantan is too hard for the beginner since some parts are fit to 1/2 well. So how about we delete some note like 00:56:859 / 01:04:859 to give a free time for a beginner to be ready to push the next note?
I'm afraid that this will be too hard for beginner player. But you can object this suggestion. Maybe this will be rude your mapping style. ;;w;;

00:48:526 / 00:48:859 - How about add d here? Since you've follow the vocal here too. 00:45:859 (55,56)
01:12:526 / 01:13:193 - This part will be great on Muzukashii or Futsuu. Maybe it's too hard on Kantan. I prefer to delete these one.
01:59:193 - How about emphasize the pitch here by using k?
02:12:193 (195,197) - Change to d , to emphasize the high pitch on this 02:14:193 and in order to match Futsuu.
02:46:193 - Change to d , maybe it'll be fitter.
02:49:526 - Add d , To emphasize the vocal here and it'll not make this part too blank.


[Futsuu]
Overall changed suggestion : Too much note for Futsuu especially 01:53:526 ~ 02:08:859. Maybe delete some note for the ease while playing of beginner player like 02:08:693. It's fit to the music well but maybe it's too hard on Futsuu. Maybe this should be on Muzukashii.
And please consider to delete some 5 notes-pattern like to kkddk to kkd k. This Futsuu have too much 5 notes-pattern which it should be on Muzukashii.

00:14:860 until 00:19:526 - How about this, this is only my suggestion. XD

00:20:693 / 00:21:359 / 01:15:359 / 01:16:026 - Delete might be better , it's fit to place note here but it might be too hard on Kantan / Futsuu.
00:31:359 - Delete? , in order to emphasize the vocal.
01:55:359 / 01:58:026 - Consider to delete it please, even this is fit to the rhythm but maybe it's too hard on Futsuu.
01:58:859 / 01:59:193 - How about change this to k? , to emphasize the piano sounds here.
01:59:693 - How about d? , same reason above.
02:00:193 (271,272,273,274,275) - How about ddkdk , to emphasize the piano sound.
02:07:026 - How about d? , to emphasize 02:07:193 pitch.
02:39:859 / 02:42:526 / 02:45:193 - Consider to delete these in case to prevent Futsuu not hard too much. But I think that 02:47:859 is ok to place the note because it's almost the last part of the song. We can make this harder than usual part.


[Gen's Muzukashii]
Overall change suggestion : Consider to make this part again 02:41:193 ~ 02:48:193. I can't understand the rhythm here. For me, it feel weird here. ;;w;;
00:14:859 until 00:20:193 and all similar part like 01:09:526 - Just only my suggestion here, how about this one, for the consistency of the rhythm here.

But you can ignore this one, it's only my feeling here, and your patterns here is good too! But please consider this too.
00:22:943 - How about we delete this note, I understand that it have a vocal here, but for the consistency of the pattern here.
00:28:859 - Change to k , to emphasize the vocal here.
00:33:693 / 01:28:359 - How about we delete this note to let the player rest here to ready to tap the next note? Because the next one is too hard if we have a note here.
00:35:859 - Add note here might be good, like something you've do before 00:25:193
00:38:526 - ^
00:43:359 - Consider to delete this note please, to let player have a time to think about next finisher, to add note here it's almost like Oni ;;w;;
00:53:526 - Delete , to match something like 01:37:526
01:06:526 (235,236) / 01:50:526 (425,426) - Ctrl+G ?
01:09:193 - How about we delete this note to emphasize the music sound? , or maybe we have an example on Oni that blank this too. Because music starts here 01:09:526
01:26:026 - Change to k , in my opinion.
01:37:026 - How about delete this one? , same reason that you blank here too 01:36:359. And in this part, I feel that you emphasize the vocal here, so delete this note might be better.
01:37:693 - Add k here , as I've say, this part you emphasize the vocal, this point have a vocal too. Or at least, I think that it's same reason that you add note here 00:53:693
01:44:026 - Delete , to make this part not too hard. Or consider to delete some, maybe it's too merciless for Muzukashii player (Or maybe not XD)
01:47:693 - Delete , emphasize only vocal here might be better.
01:59:859 (468,469) - Ctrl+G ? , to emphasize the pitch here.
02:01:026 moves to 02:00:859 - Maybe better?
02:03:026 / 02:03:359 - Change to K , this pitch is strong.
02:06:026 moves to 02:05:859 - Maybe better, to make 02:06:193 (505,506,507) as triplets which it's easier to understand the rhythm.
02:07:359 / 02:07:443 - Change to d , this pitch is going down.
02:12:193 - From my sense, this part isn't fit to the spinner. Maybe place a note here instead. Like this one.

02:26:943 moves to 02:27:109 - In order to emphasize the vocal here.
02:28:359 - Add d , you can make final kiai become harder.
02:32:026 - How about k ? , this vocal is high.
02:33:526 moves to 02:33:693 - To emphasize the vocal here.
02:35:859 - This part, consider to change to kkkkd or kkddk or kkk K , in order to emphasize 02:36:193


[Oni]
00:20:026 / 01:14:693 - How about add d here for the inner while playing? (And if my ear isn't wrong, it still have a little pitch here.)
00:23:443 - How about add d here? , to emphasize the vocal and prevent this part is too bored from tapping only 1/2 rhythm?
00:25:109 / 00:27:776 / 01:19:776 / 01:22:443 - How about add d here? , in my opinion.
00:43:026 (177,178,179) - How about ddk ? , to emphasize 00:43:193 which it have a high pitch.
00:48:693 - Change to [color =#0000FF]k[/color] , might be fitter.
01:06:526 - Change to d , to make a difference between this note and 01:06:359 (78,79) which it have a different sound.
01:13:526 - Change to k , to emphasize this pitch by using the difference between this note and 01:13:359
01:27:193 / 01:27:526 / 01:27:859 - Add a note here might be good , as you haven't ignore the pitch here 00:43:526
01:29:943 - Add d , to match somethings you've place like 01:32:609
01:32:526 (227,228) - How about k ?
01:33:026 (232,233) - How about d ? , since the pitch is going down here.
01:33:359 (235,236) - Ctrl+G ? , to emphasize the vocal here.
02:02:859 - Delete notes here. To give a rest like 01:58:693
02:14:276 moves to 02:14:443 - In my opinion.
02:30:526 - How about d here?


[Inner Oni]
00:27:776 / 00:38:443 - How about add d here? for the variety pattern on this map, maybe only triplets pattern will cause bored to the player on this part.
00:32:859 - Change to d , to make a difference between this note and 00:32:693
00:53:693 - How about k ? , to emphasize the vocal here.
01:06:859 - How about D ? , to make a difference to 01:06:693
01:12:193 / 01:12:276 - Change to k ?
01:13:526 / 01:13:609 - ^
01:14:276 - Change to d ? , my sense.
01:14:609 - Change to k might be fitter. :3
01:27:193 / 01:27:526 / 01:27:859 - Add k d k here might be better. As this Inner Oni is almost reach SR7, maybe we shouldn't ignore any pitch.
01:33:526 - Change to k to emphasize the vocal here, and to make a difference between this one and 01:33:359
01:53:526 - No, didn't mean to change anything. I want to say that I love this part so much! XD
02:02:696 - How about k ? , to make a difference between piano sound here and a little drum sound on 02:02:859
02:09:526 - Very strong sounds here, how about D? and delete 02:09:109 to make this finisher become rankable.
02:30:609 (52,53) - Ctrl+G ? , imo.

To be honest, I love this difficulty so much!!! <3333


Love this map so much!, make this ranked please. XD
Good luck! :D
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Hi 404 :3 NM request from my queue~

Kantan

  1. 00:51:193 (63) - k for more easy uwu
  2. 01:00:526 (77) - Same
  3. 01:04:026 (84) - Delete this and 01:04:526 (85) - Move this to here: 01:04:193 -
  4. 01:12:526 (95) - You can delete this, more space for kantan players >3<)/
  5. 01:21:859 (113) - k
  6. 01:35:193 (134) - k not is bad repeat the pattern in kantan diffs uwu
  7. 01:48:026 (155,156,157,158) - Remember this part? Like this > 01:04:026 (84) - Delete this and 01:04:526 (85) - Move this to here: 01:04:193 -

Futsuu

  1. 00:57:859 (110) - Delete this
  2. 01:00:359 (119) - Same
  3. 01:03:193 (128) - Same
  4. 01:44:359 (228) - ^
  5. Try delete these notes: 01:55:193 (255) - 01:57:859 (266) - 02:00:526 (277) - 02:01:859 (282) - 02:05:859 (297) - 02:08:526 (308) -

Gen's Muzukashii

  1. 00:34:527 (91) - I recommend doing the triplets of a single color so as not to confuse
  2. 00:36:526 (100) - ^
  3. 00:43:193 (132,133,134,135,136,137,138) - That with the bigs is very difficult, that is done from the Onis, it is best to remove these: 00:43:359 (133,135,137) - And add finish in this note: 00:43:193 (132) -
  4. 01:50:526 (431) - k
  5. 01:53:526 (435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475,476,477,478,479,480,481,482,483,484,485,486,487,488,489,490,491,492,493,494,495,496,497,498,499,500,501,502,503,504,505,506,507,508,509,510,511,512,513,514,515,516,517,518,519,520,521,522,523,524,525,526,527,528,529,530,531,532,533,534,535,536,537,538,539,540,541,542,543,544,545,546) - Personally I recommend you remap or adjust this part, it has too many segments of 1/4 (triplets and streams) and it is too confusing for Muzu players

Oni

  1. Try move this: 00:16:943 (17) - to here: 00:16:610 -
  2. 00:19:276 - add d here
  3. 01:53:859 (85) - change to k and 01:54:026 (86,87) - ctrl + g

Inner Oni

  1. 00:24:359 (62,63) - ctrl + g
  2. 00:27:026 (82,83) - ^
  3. 00:35:026 (138,139) - 00:37:693 (158,159) - ^

    Amazing Diff! ! ! ! :)

GL!
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Tyistiana wrote:

Hello again! , 404 AccNotFound. :)
Accidentally , while I'm modding your map and typing in the forum. Almost to finish it but my computer turns off cause the electricity in my area have been turn off for a while without any warning or announcement. And I can't recovery my modding. Sorry for late. ;;w;;

Will mod another difficulties soon, right now I don't have a time too much due to the mid-term test and I have a camp which it's make me unable to use computer. Will come back as soon as possible to mod others difficulty. If I have to approximate the time, maybe next week I'll free to mod your map. (or faster, I'll try! XD)

Let's see! :D

[General]
- Widescreen support should be disable in Kantan , Futsuu and Oni
>ok!
- How about change OD on Inner Oni to 6.5 or 7? This map is almost 7* so maybe it's better to use higher OD.
>6.5 fixed

[Kantan]
Overall changed suggestion : Didn't mean to rude to your mapping style. But I think that this Kantan is too hard for the beginner since some parts are fit to 1/2 well. So how about we delete some note like 00:56:859 / 01:04:859 to give a free time for a beginner to be ready to push the next note?
I'm afraid that this will be too hard for beginner player. But you can object this suggestion. Maybe this will be rude your mapping style. ;;w;;
>nice idea to remove it! thanks xD

00:48:526 / 00:48:859 - How about add d here? Since you've follow the vocal here too. 00:45:859 (55,56)
>it's right but i think the rest time is more important, so keep now.
01:12:526 / 01:13:193 - This part will be great on Muzukashii or Futsuu. Maybe it's too hard on Kantan. I prefer to delete these one.
>hard time on music and my map. wanna keep some hard pattern at overall diff in this point.
01:59:193 - How about emphasize the pitch here by using k?
>good. also changed 02:00:526 (159) - d.
02:12:193 (195,197) - Change to d , to emphasize the high pitch on this 02:14:193 and in order to match Futsuu.
>for more easy than futsuu, cause i think offbeat is too hard in kantan, even other color.
02:46:193 - Change to d , maybe it'll be fitter.
>fixed
02:49:526 - Add d , To emphasize the vocal here and it'll not make this part too blank.

[Futsuu]
Overall changed suggestion : Too much note for Futsuu especially 01:53:526 ~ 02:08:859. Maybe delete some note for the ease while playing of beginner player like 02:08:693. It's fit to the music well but maybe it's too hard on Futsuu. Maybe this should be on Muzukashii.
And please consider to delete some 5 notes-pattern like to kkddk to kkd k. This Futsuu have too much 5 notes-pattern which it should be on Muzukashii.
>right and intended. overall of this mapset's diffs has some more hard pattern at this point, cause i wanna express the song more exact. little nerf on that part, thanks ~



00:14:860 until 00:19:526 - How about this, this is only my suggestion. XD

>this looks great, but i'd wanna keep my style. sorry ;w;
00:20:693 / 00:21:359 / 01:15:359 / 01:16:026 - Delete might be better , it's fit to place note here but it might be too hard on Kantan / Futsuu.
>fixed
00:31:359 - Delete? , in order to emphasize the vocal.
>no any circle in here lol
01:55:359 / 01:58:026 - Consider to delete it please, even this is fit to the rhythm but maybe it's too hard on Futsuu.
>same color 5 stream will help them to experience some muzukashii pattern and same reason at above my oponion.
01:58:859 / 01:59:193 - How about change this to k? , to emphasize the piano sounds here.
>awesome, but no more hard in this T T.
01:59:693 - How about d? , same reason above.
>deleted
02:00:193 (271,272,273,274,275) - How about ddkdk , to emphasize the piano sound.
>wanna use only ddddd kkkkk ddkkd in futsuu cause of difficulty.
02:07:026 - How about d? , to emphasize 02:07:193 pitch.
>same reason.
02:39:859 / 02:42:526 / 02:45:193 - Consider to delete these in case to prevent Futsuu not hard too much. But I think that 02:47:859 is ok to place the note because it's almost the last part of the song. We can make this harder than usual part.
>they are 1/1 and 7 stream, and i think it has enough value.

[Inner Oni]
00:27:776 / 00:38:443 - How about add d here? for the variety pattern on this map, maybe only triplets pattern will cause bored to the player on this part.
>wanna express staccato overall part. sorry
00:32:859 - Change to d , to make a difference between this note and 00:32:693
>both has high pitch and drum also high than 00:33:193 (126) - . keep now.
00:53:693 - How about k ? , to emphasize the vocal here.
>fixed
01:06:859 - How about D ? , to make a difference to 01:06:693
>same reason at 00:32:859
01:12:193 / 01:12:276 - Change to k ?
01:13:526 / 01:13:609 - ^
01:14:276 - Change to d ? , my sense.
01:14:609 - Change to k might be fitter. :3
>all long stream remaked to refer your opinion :3
01:27:193 / 01:27:526 / 01:27:859 - Add k d k here might be better. As this Inner Oni is almost reach SR7, maybe we shouldn't ignore any pitch.
01:33:526 - Change to k to emphasize the vocal here, and to make a difference between this one and 01:33:359
>nice idea but i don't wanna ignore even beat. sorry
01:53:526 - No, didn't mean to change anything. I want to say that I love this part so much! XD
>wowowowowowow wthanks xDDDDDDD
02:02:696 - How about k ? , to make a difference between piano sound here and a little drum sound on 02:02:859
>fixed
02:09:526 - Very strong sounds here, how about D? and delete 02:09:109 to make this finisher become rankable.
>good idea but i wanna let players do with more concentrate at this part, no anything else, only stream.
02:30:609 (52,53) - Ctrl+G ? , imo.
>keep now for the stream consistency.
02:49:526 - Add d to follow the vocal, or are you miss this on purpose?
>same with other diff.

Hope this will be useful even a little. =w=
Love this song so much!, make this ranked please. XD
Good luck! :D
Thanks to say so xDDDDD
also thanks modding and kudosu!!!
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JessiChan wrote:

Hi 404 :3 NM request from my queue~

Kantan

  1. 00:51:193 (63) - k for more easy uwu
    >fixed uwu
  2. 01:00:526 (77) - Same
    >keep it cause i can't ignore the pitch of melody of here cause has big differency.
  3. 01:04:026 (84) - Delete this and 01:04:526 (85) - Move this to here: 01:04:193 -
    >fixed~
  4. 01:12:526 (95) - You can delete this, more space for kantan players >3<)/
    >fixed >o</
  5. 01:21:859 (113) - k
    >keep now cause here has drum kicking sound and low pitch with overall.
  6. 01:35:193 (134) - k not is bad repeat the pattern in kantan diffs uwu
    >wow really? fixed and thanks nice advice xD
  7. 01:48:026 (155,156,157,158) - Remember this part? Like this > 01:04:026 (84) - Delete this and 01:04:526 (85) - Move this to here: 01:04:193 -
    >remember!

Futsuu

  1. 00:57:859 (110) - Delete this
  2. 01:00:359 (119) - Same
  3. 01:03:193 (128) - Same
  4. 01:44:359 (228) - ^
    >all fixed
  5. Try delete these notes: 01:55:193 (255) - 01:57:859 (266) - 02:00:526 (277) - 02:01:859 (282) - 02:05:859 (297) - 02:08:526 (308) -
    >refer this, fix some part~

Oni

  1. Try move this: 00:16:943 (17) - to here: 00:16:610 -
    >00:17:109 (19) - add here k to make 5stream for both consistency and prevent boring.
  2. 00:19:276 - add d here
    >nice but keep it cause Inner Oni use it so wanna some gap between two diff xp
  3. 01:53:859 (85) - change to k and 01:54:026 (86,87) - ctrl + g
    >ddkdk fixed

Inner Oni

  1. 00:24:359 (62,63) - ctrl + g
  2. 00:27:026 (82,83) - ^
  3. 00:35:026 (138,139) - 00:37:693 (158,159) - ^
    >keep cause wanna follow the drum beat in here. sorry

    Amazing Diff! ! ! ! :)
    >OMG THANKS DJikxKIFJR3WEIyrt3895hi35I4T4 xDDDDDDD

GL!
Thanks for modding jessi~
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