1. where's the cute little "Mapset by Nifty" you usually have

1. 02:23:659 - unnecessary timing point, please remove or change to be organized
   
   more of this

   02:24:034 - ^
   Muzukashii
   02:24:034 - unnecessary timing point, please remove or change to be organized
   Oni
   01:28:815 - unnecessary timing point, please remove or change to be organized
   Inner
   01:01:784 - unnecessary timing point, please remove or change to be organized
   01:07:534 - ^
   01:28:815 - ^
   02:10:784 - ^
2. 01:18:409 (37,38,39) - / 01:19:534 (41,42,43) - I disagree with using the same kdk pattern to represent both of these rhythms. They are clearly different and should be mapped as such. Doing this would also, coincidentally, result in a more enjoyable kiai. You can choose to invert one to dkd, or map as ddk to make a build-up. Mix through these options and that's good variety.
3. 02:31:909 (52,53) - Why are the breaks in the second kiai section more forgiving than the breaks in the first kiai section? A map generally starts easier and and gets a little harder, eg. adding a few more notes to avoid total repetition, but it seems that you've made it easier in this section. You need to make the first sections more difficult, and the second sections less difficult in each difficulty.

1. 00:52:534 (34) - d for kick?
2. 00:52:721 (35,36,37) - kkk for snare?
3. 02:30:409 (69) - k since the pattern you've been following the whole time is k for duh duh noise (02:36:409 (99) - never mind it must be intentional unless this is copy/paste)
4. 02:37:440 - inconsistent triplet... ? you're making the second kiai easier again
5. 03:08:284 (242) - d emphasizes the bass better if that's what you're up to

1. 00:37:440 - this seems inconsistent with the rest of the section (also with this 01:46:440 - )
2. 00:52:534 - / 00:58:159 - is it intentional that some of the patterns here don't fully follow the kicks and snares?
3. 01:31:534 (140) - k for the duh duh noise
4. 01:58:909 (24,) the snare mapped as d here sounds a little strange, please make it a k

Jonawaga wrote:

well I was late ; w ;
here's what I had...

NM here
remember that you need 12 stars for an icon, and 20 is preferred
this means I can't even give you a star icon until you get more mods or shoot more stars!
[General]

1. where's the cute little "Mapset by Nifty" you usually have right there in the banner uwu

[Futsuu]

1. 02:23:659 - unnecessary timing point, please remove or change to be organized oh shit the lawn patrol is here
   
   more of this

   02:24:034 - ^
   Muzukashii
   02:24:034 - unnecessary timing point, please remove or change to be organized necessary D:
   Oni
   01:28:815 - unnecessary timing point, please remove or change to be organized necessary D:
   Inner
   01:01:784 - unnecessary timing point, please remove or change to be organized
   01:07:534 - ^
   01:28:815 - ^
   02:10:784 - ^
2. 01:18:409 (37,38,39) - / 01:19:534 (41,42,43) - I disagree with using the same kdk pattern to represent both of these rhythms. They are clearly different and should be mapped as such. Doing this would also, coincidentally, result in a more enjoyable kiai. You can choose to invert one to dkd, or map as ddk to make a build-up. Mix through these options and that's good variety. The k's are meant to emphasize the hard synths in the pattern, which repeat from the beginning right 00:10:534 (3,4) - here, but I see your point in it getting boring. Added a few notes addressing the next points with the breaks, and changed the patterns to a kdk d ddk pattern.
3. 02:31:909 (52,53) - Why are the breaks in the second kiai section more forgiving than the breaks in the first kiai section? A map generally starts easier and and gets a little harder, eg. adding a few more notes to avoid total repetition, but it seems that you've made it easier in this section. You need to make the first sections more difficult, and the second sections less difficult in each difficulty. ye fixed

cont.
[Muzu]

1. 00:52:534 (34) - d for kick?
2. 00:52:721 (35,36,37) - kkk for snare?
3. 02:30:409 (69) - k since the pattern you've been following the whole time is k for duh duh noise (02:36:409 (99) - never mind it must be intentional unless this is copy/paste) you'll never know now >:)
4. 02:37:440 - inconsistent triplet... ? you're making the second kiai easier again
5. 03:08:284 (242) - d emphasizes the bass better if that's what you're up to

[Oni]

1. 00:37:440 - this seems inconsistent with the rest of the section (also with this 01:46:440 - )
2. 00:52:534 - / 00:58:159 - is it intentional that some of the patterns here don't fully follow the kicks and snares? my main focus here it to map k on 2 and 4 with that wacky offbeat synth thing represented by the patterns around them
3. 01:31:534 (140) - k for the duh duh noise
4. 01:58:909 (24,) the snare mapped as d here sounds a little strange, please make it a k

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Nifty wrote:

Now with 100% more consistency and 2/1 breaks!

Stefan wrote:

[Muzukashii/Futsuu]
01:12:034 - 01:18:034 - the section looks too similar between the two difficulties. While I think it works ideally for Futsuu, Muzukashii may have triplets since longer combos probably won't be your decision.
02:24:034 - 02:30:034 - ^ Added some triplets that make more sense being there

[Oni/Muzukashii]
00:46:534 - You want to move the line to 00:46:440 - because hitting 00:46:534 (1) - one ms too early causes the note to be inaudible due the previous green line.
01:55:534 - ^ I'm usually aware of that, guess I missed this one
01:09:034 - that looks silly to me that Muzukashii is technically denser than Oni in this part. https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/1ZNdZL8B.png I'd highly suggest to switch that idea.
02:18:034 - same applies here. Switched xd

[Oni/Muzukashii/Futsuu]
00:46:534 - So Kantan uses a D note here - naturally to emphasize the first note of the more intense part of the song. But why does no other difficulty includes that? Inner Oni had a good reason because it's dk here while Dk is silly. I think it's because of the spinner, fixed

call me back

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Disqualified as confirmed with map creator to fix the misplaced note in Futsuu.

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Disqualified as confirmed with map creator to fix the misplaced note in Futsuu.

strickluke wrote:

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Disqualified as confirmed with map creator to fix the misplaced note in Futsuu.

go backwards

Kondou-Shinichi wrote:

note unsnapped on 5* diff dq pls

Surono wrote:

woah yu lik dah

Nifty wrote:

Kondou-Shinichi wrote:

note unsnapped on 5* diff dq pls

I had a dream nightmare yesterday this map got dq again

Joe Castle wrote:

stupid question, but why there is "jazz" in tags?

Joe Castle wrote:

stupid question, but why there is "jazz" in tags?

maybe because the song is jazz for the soul?