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David Guetta Ft. Kid Cudi - Memories

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mancuso_JM_
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mancuso_JM_
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on miércoles, 28 de septiembre de 2011 at 1:01:30

Artist: David Guetta Ft. Kid Cudi
Title: Memories
Source: One Love
Tags: pausaloco Backfire
BPM: 130
Filesize: 4961kb
Play Time: 03:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Backfire's Taiko Oni (4,65 stars, 793 notes)
  2. Easy (1,69 stars, 196 notes)
  3. Hard (4,33 stars, 409 notes)
  4. Normal (2,73 stars, 258 notes)
Download: David Guetta Ft. Kid Cudi - Memories
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
This is my fisrst beatmap.
Special Thanks to pausaloco for his background and Backfire for the Taiko difficulty.
I need an Insane difficulty
Mapset:
Easy: Done! Ready 4 Mods
Normal: Done! Ready 4 Mods
Hard: Done!Ready 4 Mods
Backfire's Taiko Oni: Done
Well let's go!! moved to pending... Bump!!
Last edited by mancuso_JM_ , edited 22 times in total.
Lucy-Kaede
435 posts
Joined April 2011
Lucy-Kaede
* Random noob mod inc!

Sliders Guide! <<VERY HELPFUL!!!!

- Before you change anything 'Test' the map


[General]
Your songs bitrate is 320kbps, to be 'ranked' its required to be 192-128kbps, if possible I would convert your mp3 to a bitrate within that limit. (192kbps is fine)
Currently the offset is making every 1/2 beat a 'normal' beat, so you've placed the notes correctly, however the offset is wrong. :P
Offset: 1777 - This will change it so your current 1/1 beat and 1/2 beat swap places, so.. the white and red ticks will essentially swap places.

[Normal]
* Because of new offset you'll need to re-snap alot of notes on your timeline.
0:01:315 - Open 'timing panel' click 'timing panel setup' select the red dot (should say 0:01:545, 130, 4/4, N, 100%) when your on 0:01:315 on the timeline, click that red dot to highlight it and click the 'Use current time' button. - This will change where osu thinks your first beat starts, because of the change in the offset.
0:01:315 - (1) Start your first slider on this tick.
0:17:930 - (1) Move to this full white tick.
0:18:161 - (2) Move to here.
0:18:392 - (3) Move to here.
0:18:853 - (4) Move to here.
0:19:315 - (1) Move to here.
0:19:777 - (2) Move to here.
0:20:238 - (3) Move to here.
0:20:700 - (4-6) Keep the same time spacing, but start 4 here, which means (6) ends on 0:21:161.
0:21:622 - (1) Move to here.
0:23:007 - (2) Move to here.
0:23:930 - (3) Move to here.
0:24:853 - (4) Move to here.
0:25:315 - (5) Move to here.
* This is going to take a while, so what we'll do is on the timeline, click and drag to highlight all notes from
0:25:776 - (6) All the way to 0:41:238 - (3), then scroll back to (6) and move it the the correct time (<<overthere/on the white tick, and everything will follow).
0:41:468 - (4) Move to here, but go into 'Edit>Scale By' and scale it by 'x1.1'
* Basically from here, you need to move just about everything up half a beat, to sit on a white tick.
* ^ Move alot up to the white tick.
0:56:930 - (3) This slider looks funny, have a go at changing its shape. I'll put a link in the top of this post to look at.
1:08:930 - (1) ^ This one too.
* Heaps more to change and fix, but I think it'll be better for you to change the offset and make the changes above aswell as moving everything to the right tick on the timeline before I say everything about the whole song. :P

* After you've done all the above - Test play your map again!

EDIT: OH, forgot.. I can't mod taiko :twisted:

Well, see how you go pretty good for a first beatmap, just that offset timing got you hard xP.
mancuso_JM_
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4,615 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
mancuso_JM_

Lucy-Kaede wrote:

* Random noob mod inc!

Sliders Guide! <<VERY HELPFUL!!!!

- Before you change anything 'Test' the map


[General]
Your songs bitrate is 320kbps, to be 'ranked' its required to be 192-128kbps, if possible I would convert your mp3 to a bitrate within that limit. (192kbps is fine)
Currently the offset is making every 1/2 beat a 'normal' beat, so you've placed the notes correctly, however the offset is wrong. :P
Offset: 1777 - This will change it so your current 1/1 beat and 1/2 beat swap places, so.. the white and red ticks will essentially swap places.

[Normal]
* Because of new offset you'll need to re-snap alot of notes on your timeline.
0:01:315 - Open 'timing panel' click 'timing panel setup' select the red dot (should say 0:01:545, 130, 4/4, N, 100%) when your on 0:01:315 on the timeline, click that red dot to highlight it and click the 'Use current time' button. - This will change where osu thinks your first beat starts, because of the change in the offset.
0:01:315 - (1) Start your first slider on this tick.
0:17:930 - (1) Move to this full white tick.
0:18:161 - (2) Move to here.
0:18:392 - (3) Move to here.
0:18:853 - (4) Move to here.
0:19:315 - (1) Move to here.
0:19:777 - (2) Move to here.
0:20:238 - (3) Move to here.
0:20:700 - (4-6) Keep the same time spacing, but start 4 here, which means (6) ends on 0:21:161.
0:21:622 - (1) Move to here.
0:23:007 - (2) Move to here.
0:23:930 - (3) Move to here.
0:24:853 - (4) Move to here.
0:25:315 - (5) Move to here.
* This is going to take a while, so what we'll do is on the timeline, click and drag to highlight all notes from
0:25:776 - (6) All the way to 0:41:238 - (3), then scroll back to (6) and move it the the correct time (<<overthere/on the white tick, and everything will follow).
0:41:468 - (4) Move to here, but go into 'Edit>Scale By' and scale it by 'x1.1'
* Basically from here, you need to move just about everything up half a beat, to sit on a white tick.
* ^ Move alot up to the white tick.
0:56:930 - (3) This slider looks funny, have a go at changing its shape. I'll put a link in the top of this post to look at.
1:08:930 - (1) ^ This one too.
* Heaps more to change and fix, but I think it'll be better for you to change the offset and make the changes above aswell as moving everything to the right tick on the timeline before I say everything about the whole song. :P

* After you've done all the above - Test play your map again!

EDIT: OH, forgot.. I can't mod taiko :twisted:

Well, see how you go pretty good for a first beatmap, just that offset timing got you hard xP.
Thanks for your mod, I am not good with this difficults, I think that my taiko diff is better than normal xD.
I think your offset is wrong too, I changed but I am going to ask a person who know about this.
After that I am going to change the sliders, but I coudn't read the slider guides.
Well, again thanks a lot for your mod
PS: If you can change my MP3 would be fantastic :D
Lucy-Kaede
435 posts
Joined April 2011
Lucy-Kaede

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

PS: If you can change my MP3 would be fantastic :D
Sorry for the late reply, i've been busy with an essay:

Actually, it (offset) does seem wrong ._.
- Using the timing panel to start at 0:00:853 where your first slider starts, and auto giving a offset of 853 might be better.. But..
Ask here. <- Thats where I asked ^_^
And you can try this mp3, its 192kbps.
http://puu.sh/4E97
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Selee
BPM is fine. but the metronome is wrong, try offset 380 instead
mancuso_JM_
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mancuso_JM_

Lucy-Kaede wrote:

And you can try this mp3, its 192kbps.
http://puu.sh/4E97
Thanks for the MP3 ;)

Selee wrote:

BPM is fine. but the metronome is wrong, try offset 380 instead
Thanks a lot ;) Fixed
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei
Hola! Mi mod, como lo pediste. Es bien vago eh e.e ..

Hard

Usa distance snap al mappear. Puedes variar el espacio entre las notas de vez en cuando pero no puedes ubicarlas la mayoría sin distance snap.
Te recomendaría bajarle el volumen a los samples.. suenan muy alto. Probá bajarlos a 60 de volumen.

00:05:918 (2,3,4,4) - Y si los pones así? http://puu.sh/4Sjz
00:09:150 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:11:918 (1) - Quitar combo.
00:19:303 (5) - NC.
00:20:687 (1) - Quitar combo.
00:21:610 (3) - Talvez new combo?
00:37:764 (4) - NC.
00:39:149 (1) - Quitar combo.
00:40:533 (6) - Talvez new combo?
00:51:149 (1) - Quitar combo.
00:55:764 (1) - Quitar combo y nuevo combo en el siguiente slider.
01:04:995 (3) - Intenta hacer mejor este slider. Se superpone al final un poco x_x te doy una idea: http://puu.sh/4Sl1

Y cosas asi siguien >.> Arregla combos segun lo que te puse. Soy muy vaga para seguir n___n''
Trata de hacer sliders curvos para que no se vea tan "cuadrado" el map, y intenta tambien hacer formas con los circulos, como el rombo que te puse de imagen de ejemplo y no todo recto. Los samples suenan raros y algo random .u. es como que no siguen una regla.
Hay muchos problemas de spacing. El distance snap ubica las notas en la pantalla acorde a su ubicacion en la linea de tiempo. Podés variarlo cada tanto pero tampoco poner las notas en cualquier lado x_x
No moddeo Taiko, no se nada de Taiko.
Eso es todo. Fin de mi mod vago. Suerte con tu map!
mancuso_JM_
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Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
mancuso_JM_

Keilara wrote:

Hola! Mi mod, como lo pediste. Es bien vago eh e.e ..

Hard

Usa distance snap al mappear. Puedes variar el espacio entre las notas de vez en cuando pero no puedes ubicarlas la mayoría sin distance snap.
Te recomendaría bajarle el volumen a los samples.. suenan muy alto. Probá bajarlos a 60 de volumen.

00:05:918 (2,3,4,4) - Y si los pones así? http://puu.sh/4Sjz
00:09:150 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:11:918 (1) - Quitar combo.
00:19:303 (5) - NC.
00:20:687 (1) - Quitar combo.
00:21:610 (3) - Talvez new combo?
00:37:764 (4) - NC.
00:39:149 (1) - Quitar combo.
00:40:533 (6) - Talvez new combo?
00:51:149 (1) - Quitar combo.
00:55:764 (1) - Quitar combo y nuevo combo en el siguiente slider.
01:04:995 (3) - Intenta hacer mejor este slider. Se superpone al final un poco x_x te doy una idea: http://puu.sh/4Sl1

Y cosas asi siguien >.> Arregla combos segun lo que te puse. Soy muy vaga para seguir n___n''
Trata de hacer sliders curvos para que no se vea tan "cuadrado" el map, y intenta tambien hacer formas con los circulos, como el rombo que te puse de imagen de ejemplo y no todo recto. Los samples suenan raros y algo random .u. es como que no siguen una regla.
Hay muchos problemas de spacing. El distance snap ubica las notas en la pantalla acorde a su ubicacion en la linea de tiempo. Podés variarlo cada tanto pero tampoco poner las notas en cualquier lado x_x
No moddeo Taiko, no se nada de Taiko.
Eso es todo. Fin de mi mod vago. Suerte con tu map!
Voy a intentar arreglar lo que me dijistes, usar el distance snap y todo eso xD.
Ya te dije que soy malo en esto pero ta algun dia voy a aprender. Las primeras recomendaciones ya cambie todo menos lo del new combo en 00:21:610, creo que esta bien sin el new combo. Con el tema del taiko esta bien poca gente sabe modearlo, por ahora n encontre a nadie que lo modee.
En fin gracias por tu mod bago o vago no se es igual jajaj.
P:S: Te felicito por tu mapa esta muy bueno ;)
Backfire
3,204 posts
Joined February 2010
Backfire
General Taiko Mod -
Set all of your things to 5. The slowness of the map makes it painful to get SS with OD 7 on.
You used WAY too simple patterns.
Dont even bother using the speed ups or slow downs in this map. They dont make sense.
00:00:380 - Please start mapping here
Add a lead in time by about 2 seconds.
Map more of the drums.

I'd say this needs a full remap or you should hit up Lepi or MMzz. Hell I could even map you a taiko. But as it is now, you mapped the vocals and it is flawed. Not too terrible, really. I've seen worse, but you havent figured out that sexy taiko rhythm you need to make maps.
mancuso_JM_
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Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
mancuso_JM_

Backfire wrote:

General Taiko Mod -
Set all of your things to 5. The slowness of the map makes it painful to get SS with OD 7 on.
You used WAY too simple patterns.
Dont even bother using the speed ups or slow downs in this map. They dont make sense.
00:00:380 - Please start mapping here
Add a lead in time by about 2 seconds.
Map more of the drums.

I'd say this needs a full remap or you should hit up Lepi or MMzz. Hell I could even map you a taiko. But as it is now, you mapped the vocals and it is flawed. Not too terrible, really. I've seen worse, but you havent figured out that sexy taiko rhythm you need to make maps.
Ok. I think that I'll delete my taiko difficult and after this I'll borrow a new difficult,can you make me another taiko diffxD??because I am horrible :(
Backfire
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Joined February 2010
Backfire
I can make another one but I can't promise it would be any time soon ^^;
mancuso_JM_
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Ok I'll wait for you!! No problem :)


Your message is too short. Bla Bla Bla
Backfire
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Joined February 2010
Backfire
Right, im working on it right now. Im gonna take use of a couple of tricks to make it fun. Its really slow but the song progression is amazing. Its like calm, awesome, calm, sex, omg, awesome, calm, sex, calm, awesome. Yeah. Anyways. I'll post it here when im done. heh.

You can rename it Backfire's Taiko Oni if you want.

I decided to make it as authentic and fun as possible. I hope you like it.

Download: David Guetta Ft. Kid Cudi - Memories (mancusojuanmattos) [Taiko Oni].osu
mancuso_JM_
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4,615 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
mancuso_JM_

Backfire wrote:

Right, im working on it right now. Im gonna take use of a couple of tricks to make it fun. Its really slow but the song progression is amazing. Its like calm, awesome, calm, sex, omg, awesome, calm, sex, calm, awesome. Yeah. Anyways. I'll post it here when im done. heh.

You can rename it Backfire's Taiko Oni if you want.

I decided to make it as authentic and fun as possible. I hope you like it.
Oh, thank you very much, it is fantastic added ;)
pausaloco
3 posts
Joined September 2010
pausaloco
Juan suerte con el mapa
Vamos arribaaa!!!!!!!!! 8-)
Que es eso de qe el mensaje es corto :P
mancuso_JM_
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mancuso_JM_

pausaloco wrote:

Juan suerte con el mapa
Vamos arribaaa!!!!!!!!! 8-)
Que es eso de qe el mensaje es corto :P
Gracias pausa te voy a dejar una kudos por las pequeñas cosas que me dijistes antes de empezar con este map ;)
jajajaj y lo del mensaje corto no lo entiende nadie
aabc271
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2009
aabc271
Hi ~
Here is my Taiko mod ~
Mod request by Wmfchris

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[Backfire's Taiko Oni]

00:44:572 - ( 118 ~ 119 ) The BPM multiplier change is misleading. Players may think it is 1/2 rather than 1/4. I suggest changing the timing point to 44688 ( 1 ms later ) so that 119 won't accelerate ~

The diff has too many " o o o {ooooo} " patterns, which is quite boring ...?

02:42:841 - ( 264 ~ 332 ) All repeating patterns Orz

... And so on.

The diff is OK, but the patterns repeat too many times ...?

To be honest, the overall feeling of the map is boring because the patterns are too similar.

Suggestions : Make more different note placements and hitsound arrangements ?

Rating : 7/10

Star and good luck ~ ;)
Backfire
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Joined February 2010
Backfire
aabc - This is an experiment to intentionally undermap and such so I can change it as I see fit. While I do appreciate that you rated it and all, it might have been a wasted time =w= Please dont judge me on this map! >.<
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined October 2010
Pereira006
Hello~~

Mod4Mod

IMO -> my opinions

General

you all diff 5 combo color i suggest you should use 3 combo because this is fit more

Music track audio leadin put 3 all diff

Disable countdowm all diff

all diff all timing are not snapped look this http://puu.sh/6cO7 shoud fix resnapp all timing green on all diff like this http://puu.sh/6cOd pleasse resnap all timing on all diff

Some suggestions
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[easy]

HP -1
AR +1
OD -1

I can see lot randoms spacing

00:00:841 (1,2) - incosiente spacing and why? Hold ALT (don't leave) look Beat snap divisor change to Distance spacing what you use? is 0.80x right? that mean you spacing is original now click at 00:00:841 (1) and look this http://puu.sh/6cGL the next combo (2) is 0.62x that mean 00:00:841 (1,2) - incosiente spacing you should fix this
Because Normal and Easy never make random spacing or jump and never make stream i just you konw it ok because you are new mapper
00:03:610 (2,1) - incosiente spacing
00:07:303 (3,1) - incosiente spacing
00:14:687 (7,1) - This combo is not fit so 00:14:918 (1) - remove new combo
00:15:610 (1,2) - incosiente spacing if you fix this fix too spacing at 00:17:456 (3,4,5)
00:16:995 (2) - if you see white tick long that add finish and remove clap because white tick long have drums strong or men voice high but some no strong drums or men you have listen music carefully
00:17:456 (3) - remove clap
00:21:610 (1) - http://puu.sh/6cHM I suggest get another place
00:23:918 (3,4) - incosiente spacing
01:10:533 (2) - Clap is not remove add finish
01:29:456 (1,2,3,4,5) - clap clap clap clap clap is so many 01:30:380 (2) - remove clap 01:31:303 (3) - only the start slider remove clap and 01:32:226 (4) - remove clap that consciendy hitsound like " clap none clap none clap" that is better IMO
01:43:303 (5) - remove only start slider finish how is working? simple click one time slider you will see http://puu.sh/6cKq now click 2 time the start slider then slider is now red look this http://puu.sh/6cKx see the red now remove finish and end slider will stay because is fit more and done i just you know it ok
01:47:456 (5) - remove clap and add finish
03:01:303 (5,1) - incosiente spacing

I can't mod this complete because 5 combo color so much very weird pleasse suggest 3 combo is fit
I suggest check all spacing because i can see lot random spacing
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Normal

HP-2
OD-2

00:17:918 (3) - the 2nd point need 3 grid dowm like this http://puu.sh/6cLL that should better symentrical slider curve
00:24:841 (3) - weird curve try this http://puu.sh/6cMg if you change fix spacing at 00:26:687 (1,2)
00:48:841 (3,4,5) - Incosiente spacing
00:55:764 (5) - get another place you konw i mean because HP drain
01:11:226 (1) - the end slider is hirtburst with HP drain get another place or make curve
02:06:610 (2) - ^

again random spacing pleasse check all remenbe normal and easy never make
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[hard]

HP -2
OD -1

nothing wrong here
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
i can't mod complete this because 5 combo color i can't
and you slider need bit more improve
and you style need idea
I suggest you study this
Mapping Techniques
Making Delicious Sliders: A Guide
I wish good luck and questions? ask me in-game

sorry my very very poor english

anyway here my map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37072
mancuso_JM_
osu! Alumni
4,615 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
mancuso_JM_

Pereira006 wrote:

Hello~~

Mod4Mod

IMO -> my opinions

General

you all diff 5 combo color i suggest you should use 3 combo because this is fit more

Music track audio leadin put 3 all diff

Disable countdowm all diff

all diff all timing are not snapped look this http://puu.sh/6cO7 shoud fix resnapp all timing green on all diff like this http://puu.sh/6cOd pleasse resnap all timing on all diff

Some suggestions
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[easy]

HP -1
AR +1
OD -1

I can see lot randoms spacing

00:00:841 (1,2) - incosiente spacing and why? Hold ALT (don't leave) look Beat snap divisor change to Distance spacing what you use? is 0.80x right? that mean you spacing is original now click at 00:00:841 (1) and look this http://puu.sh/6cGL the next combo (2) is 0.62x that mean 00:00:841 (1,2) - incosiente spacing you should fix this
Because Normal and Easy never make random spacing or jump and never make stream i just you konw it ok because you are new mapper
00:03:610 (2,1) - incosiente spacing
00:07:303 (3,1) - incosiente spacing
00:14:687 (7,1) - This combo is not fit so 00:14:918 (1) - remove new combo
00:15:610 (1,2) - incosiente spacing if you fix this fix too spacing at 00:17:456 (3,4,5)
00:16:995 (2) - if you see white tick long that add finish and remove clap because white tick long have drums strong or men voice high but some no strong drums or men you have listen music carefully
00:17:456 (3) - remove clap
00:21:610 (1) - http://puu.sh/6cHM I suggest get another place
00:23:918 (3,4) - incosiente spacing
01:10:533 (2) - Clap is not remove add finish
01:29:456 (1,2,3,4,5) - clap clap clap clap clap is so many 01:30:380 (2) - remove clap 01:31:303 (3) - only the start slider remove clap and 01:32:226 (4) - remove clap that consciendy hitsound like " clap none clap none clap" that is better IMO
01:43:303 (5) - remove only start slider finish how is working? simple click one time slider you will see http://puu.sh/6cKq now click 2 time the start slider then slider is now red look this http://puu.sh/6cKx see the red now remove finish and end slider will stay because is fit more and done i just you know it ok
01:47:456 (5) - remove clap and add finish
03:01:303 (5,1) - incosiente spacing

I can't mod this complete because 5 combo color so much very weird pleasse suggest 3 combo is fit
I suggest check all spacing because i can see lot random spacing
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Normal

HP-2
OD-2

00:17:918 (3) - the 2nd point need 3 grid dowm like this http://puu.sh/6cLL that should better symentrical slider curve
00:24:841 (3) - weird curve try this http://puu.sh/6cMg if you change fix spacing at 00:26:687 (1,2)
00:48:841 (3,4,5) - Incosiente spacing
00:55:764 (5) - get another place you konw i mean because HP drain
01:11:226 (1) - the end slider is hirtburst with HP drain get another place or make curve
02:06:610 (2) - ^

again random spacing pleasse check all remenbe normal and easy never make
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[hard]

HP -2
OD -1

nothing wrong here
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
i can't mod complete this because 5 combo color i can't
and you slider need bit more improve
and you style need idea
I suggest you study this
Mapping Techniques
Making Delicious Sliders: A Guide
I wish good luck and questions? ask me in-game

sorry my very very poor english

anyway here my map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37072
Thank you very much All fixed but I saw four combo colors I'll try to mod your beatmap soon :D
OzzyOzrock
5,185 posts
Joined August 2010
OzzyOzrock
[Backfire's Taiko Oni]
00:10:995 (28) - katu
00:21:149 (58) - no slider here. why the hell?
00:25:303 (74) - no slider here either.

00:30:380 - this speed-down really sucks.
00:44:687 - this speed-up REALLY sucks

00:49:533 (137) - really, don't use sliders.
00:53:226 (152) - ...
00:56:918 (168) - makes
01:00:611 (183) - no
01:04:303 (199) - sense
01:07:996 (214) - damn
01:11:688 (230) - it
SPINNERS would make more sense than sliders.

01:14:341 - i guess this speed-down is ok, but still ugly.

look, how about instead of these stupidly bad unfitting and just why sliders, why don'y you actually map the stupid hey heys and y6eah yeahs crap with big notes or whatever.

02:28:072 - what the hell, now this speed-down is NOT ok.
more god damn sliders, seriously, it's not really fitting to add so damn many, or add them at all.

yes please do that and this map will be halfway acceptable
sorry for being harsh but seesaefasfgfdhfjhgkj
eldnl
Former osu!catch Champion: 2013
2,930 posts
Joined March 2010
eldnl
[General]

- El kiai time esta mal ubicado en todas las dificultades. Aquí te dejo entre que tiempos deberían ir:
Kiai Time
1st 00:44:687 ~ 01:14:226
2nd 01:58:533 ~ 02:28:072
3rd 02:57:610 ~ 03:25:303
Asegurate de corregirlo en todas las dificultades.
- Los combo-colour 3 y 4 son iguales (En la dificultad facil y hard), esto no es rankeable y es muy confuso, te sugiero que solo elimines uno, con 4 colores esta mas que bien. Ademas debes usar los mismos colores y en el mismo orden en todas las dificultades. (La excepcion puede ser taiko)
- Desactiva "Letterbox during breaks" ya que en los breaks esto tapa las palabras en el BG. Recuerda hacerlo en todas las dificultades.
- La cancion tarda mucho en comenzar, esto es algo aburrido, te sugiero cambiar el Audio lead-in a 1500, para ser preciso debes editar el .osu en el block de notas, recuerda cambiarlo en todas las dificultades.
- "One love" es el album de la cancion, no debería ir en Source, si no en tags, ahi vez tu si lo cambias.
- El background que estas usando es algo pequeño para mi, devido a que actualmente la gente tiene mejores PC's y juega a resoluciones mas altas, estos lucen algo raros, te sugiero cambiarlo por uno de 1024x768.

[Easy]

AR2 Funciona mucho mejor.
00:04:533 (1,2) La distancia entre estas notas esta mal, deberias usar el Distance Snap.
00:11:918 (4) Necesitas un nuevo combo aquí ~
00:14:687 (7,8) Se vé un poco dificil para una dificultad fácil, que tal si haces algo como esto?: http://puu.sh/6lch (No olvides mover todas las notas que siguen, para evitar errores de spacing)
00:21:610 (1) Los sliders así son muy dificiles de leer, el jugador no sabe cuando va a acabar, te sugiero cambiarlo por un slider 1/2, haz algo como esto: http://puu.sh/6lcA queda mucho mejor.
00:29:918 (6,1) El nuevo combo debería ir en (6) y no en la siguiente nota.
00:37:764 (4) Nuevo combo, este slider esta muy distanciado de la nota anterior.
00:44:687 - No te recomiendo comenzar el kiai con un spinner, se siente raro, además tampoco es bueno cambiar la velocidad de los sliders en la dificultad mas facil, deberias dejar una velocidad continua.
01:01:303 (1) Al igual que antes, este slider es dificil de leer, te doy la misma sugerencia que di antes, pero esta vez hazlo asi: http://puu.sh/6lcZ
01:07:533 - El estar usando solo notas en 1/1 (En los ticks blancos) y luego pasar a un tick rojo es algo dificil de leer, en las dificultades faciles es mejor seguir un ritmo continuo, como el del instrumental por ejemplo. http://puu.sh/6ldf
01:08:687 (1) Otro slider dificil de leer, usa la misma sugerencia que te dí antes.
01:31:303 (3) El final de este slider esta mal snappeado, extiendelo hasta el proximo tick blanco.
01:35:918 (4) ^ Lo mismo, no olvides que cuando hagas esto, debes reacomodar las siguientes notas.
01:40:533 (1) Otro slider dificil de leer, se hace aun mas dificil cuando tienen distinto numero de repeticiones que los anteriores.
01:44:226 (1,2,3) Se siente muy extraño el espacio entre estas notas, intenta moviendo (3)
01:53:918 - Extiende este slider hasta el siguiente tick, haz lo mismo con los slider que siguen (Que sean igual a este obvio).
02:22:533 (1) Slider dificil de leer otra vez.
03:03:149 (3) ^ Denuevo, pero esta vez es impresionante la cantidad de repeticiones que tiene, debes cambiarlo.
03:06:841 (1) El whistle en este slider se siente algo vacio, la idea de los whistles es seguir un patrón y ritmo consistentes, pero este es un whistle solo, te sugiero quitarlo o seguir un patron de whistles.
03:10:533 (1,2) Slider con demasiadas repeticiones otra vez, pero este tiene una dificultad extra, la siguiente nota se encuentra semi-escondida y ademas en una posicion contraria a el, MUY dificil de leer para los principiantes.
03:25:303 - Creo que un finish no se siente bien, no sigue la musica, creo que es mejor si lo dejas sin hitsound y bajas mas el volumen.

[Normal]

AR4 ya que se siente muy rapido a comparacion de la dificultad mas facil.
00:09:610 (5) Para ser consistente necesitas un nuevo combo aqui.
00:44:687 (4) El nuevo combo debería ir aqui y no en el slider siguiente.
00:52:072 (2,3) Se me hizo algo dificil predecir este ritmo, (el pasar de tick blancos a rojos) te recomiendo que para estas partes hagas algo así: http://puu.sh/6mGJ
01:08:687 (2) Creo que los sliders así estan bien para esta dificultad, pero porfavor trata de que todos tengan la misma cantidad de repeticiones, para evitar confusion.
01:40:533 (1,2,3,4,5) Los pequeños errores de spacing (como los que hay entre estas notas) no se ven muy bien, te recomiendo revisar bien y arreglarlos todos.
01:53:918 (6) Este slider suena mucho mejor si lo terminas en el tick rojo, se siente fuera de ritmo como está.
01:56:226 (5) ^ Lo mismo con este slider, aunque aqui suena mejor si lo extiendes al siguiente tick blanco.
01:55:303 - No pongas patrones como estos, son algo confusos, si vas a apilar notas trata que sean todas, lo mismo si no las apilas.
01:58:995 - Este spinner debería terminar el tick blanco grande, no lo mencione en la dificultad mas facil porque solo seguias un patron de claps, pero aqui no y se siente muy raro.
02:48:380 (5) Un slider 1/1 funcionaria mucho mejor, ya que como está no sigue ningun ritmo: http://puu.sh/6mFg
02:58:072 - Al igual como dije anteriormente, es mejor si lo terminas en el tick grande blanco.
03:06:841 (2) Usa una misma cantidad de repeticiones para todos los sliders asi por favor.
03:10:533 (1) Este slider ya tiene demasiadas repeticiones, ademas de ser confuso se vuelve aburrido.
03:17:918 (1) ^ Lo mismo, ademas trata de poner el slider en otra direccion, para que no se sobreponga a la nota siguiente.

[Hard]

Hay muchos pequeños errores de spacing entre las notas, para arreglarlo usa Grid level 4 (View > Grid Level > 4) no afectará mucho ya que no usas patrones simetricos.
00:00:380 - Se siente extraño que en comiences a mapear en una parte diferente a las otras dificultades, por favor comienza donde mismo.
00:01:533 - No entiendo la razon de tantos new combos aqui, ademas no es consistente con lo que sigue, intenta corregirlo quitando los new combos y haciendo algo consistente.
00:14:687 (1) Quita el nuevo combo para ser consistente. Además el nuevo combo debería ir en (4) y deberías quitarlo en la nota siguiente.
00:22:533 (6) Si quitas el clap en esta nota suena 100% mejor.
00:26:226 (4,5,1) El spacing entre estas notas es diferente siendo que estan a la misma distancia de tiempo, evita estos errores a menos que sean a proposito (Como en jumps o patrones que lo necesiten)
00:48:380 (4,1) Los claps en esta parte suenan mal, quitalo en (4) y al final de (1), ademas agrega un clap en (2), ahi si suena bien.
01:03:841 (1) Este slider se encuentra muy cerca del anterior, deberías moverlo.
01:08:456 - Es algo impredesible que uses un ritmo diferente aqui, se siente que el (2) esta sobrando, ya que los patrones anteriores no lo tienen.
01:13:072 (1,2) Un jump aquí no se siente bien, usa la distancia normal.
01:21:149 (2,3,4) Estas notas estan muy separadas, se nota muy poco el cambio de distancia entre estas y las siguientes.
01:59:341 - Comienza el spin en el tick rojo anterior. Para seguir la voz.
02:23:456 (7,8,9) Espacio inconsistente, aumenta el espacio entre (7,8).
02:46:533 (1,2,3) El espacio entre estas notas se ve muy feo, usa un espacio consistente.
03:25:303 - Finaliza el spin en el tick blanco grande al igual que en las dificultades anteriores.

[Taiko]

9 Unsnapped notes.
00:10:995 (28) Clap? to be consistent, it's a bit weird when you're playing.
~

Creo que eso es todo, buena suerte :)
HellDawn
1,035 posts
Joined April 2010
HellDawn
Easy
03:05:456- spacing cuz too far
01:54:841- spacing too close *-*
00:46:072- why kiai here ?
02:00:380- ^
01:35:918- I cant see finish so resnap all notes please

Normal
03:09:149- spacing too far
03:10:072- ^
03:21:610- ^
Backfire
3,204 posts
Joined February 2010
Backfire
Lol, this map does not need a taiko at all. =w= Please delete it. Hell, I'd like to erase it from my memories. OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHkajfsdfjsdjfsdjfsdf
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