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Feint - Words (feat. Laura Brehm)

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suraimu-
54 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
suraimu-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on viernes, 30 de junio de 2017 at 22:52:49

Artist: Feint
Title: Words (feat. Laura Brehm)
BPM: 175
Filesize: 4309kb
Play Time: 01:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. Blank (5,64 stars, 480 notes)
  2. Easy (1,9 stars, 51 notes)
Download: Feint - Words (feat. Laura Brehm)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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- Words -

Easy Diff (Work In Progress) - suraimu-
Blank Diff (100%) - suraimu-

Needs Moding (Blank Diff), thx!

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Last edited by suraimu- , edited 6 times in total.
inhe
43 posts
Joined July 2016
inhe
Blank --

Ar 9.5 would work better some parts are hard to read.

Please open AI mod, it points out some problems and would help you out on later projects.

The intro part of the song at around 20 seconds of the song has a repeating part with little to no variation and I've noticed that you make the jumps smaller and bigger, not a huge problem but i'd try match the song more.

I've also noticed that you got hit sounds which is a nice addition, but the volume just stays at 100% even at the start/intro which should be lowered around 40-50% which would make more sense.

There is a lot of full beat gaps which you could replace with sliders so the map isn't I guess akward?

00:09:625 (3,3,3) - Maybe stack this on top of eachother? look messy.
00:12:710 (2,2,1) - Same with these ^^
(i'll stop pointing out these but you should fix a lot of them)

00:44:768 (3) - Maybe add a new combo here? a may be a bit confusing with the full beat gap.
01:06:025 (9) - Add a new combo here to, looks to messy.
01:07:396 (1) - This kiai time should be snapped, which it isn't.
01:51:282 (1) - Also the kiai time doesn't have an end point, which should be here.

Pretty much all sorry if not a good mod I'm a noob at modding.
suraimu-
54 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
suraimu-

Geospeople wrote:

Blank --

Ar 9.5 would work better some parts are hard to read.

Please open AI mod, it points out some problems and would help you out on later projects.

The intro part of the song at around 20 seconds of the song has a repeating part with little to no variation and I've noticed that you make the jumps smaller and bigger, not a huge problem but i'd try match the song more.

I've also noticed that you got hit sounds which is a nice addition, but the volume just stays at 100% even at the start/intro which should be lowered around 40-50% which would make more sense.

There is a lot of full beat gaps which you could replace with sliders so the map isn't I guess akward?

00:09:625 (3,3,3) - Maybe stack this on top of eachother? look messy.
00:12:710 (2,2,1) - Same with these ^^
(i'll stop pointing out these but you should fix a lot of them)

00:44:768 (3) - Maybe add a new combo here? a may be a bit confusing with the full beat gap.
01:06:025 (9) - Add a new combo here to, looks to messy.
01:07:396 (1) - This kiai time should be snapped, which it isn't.
01:51:282 (1) - Also the kiai time doesn't have an end point, which should be here.

Pretty much all sorry if not a good mod I'm a noob at modding.
Thx for the mod!
Albatross
11 posts
Joined November 2015
Albatross
I love this song and your beatmap is very good! Well timed and good snapping

Some "tips" (You definitly don't have to do that, just some hints or things I recognized):
00:01:568 (1,2,3) - 00:23:510 (8)
It's a very good beginning, but the circles and sliders are always the same. That doesn't mean it's bad, definitly not, but you can try to be creative there. You don't have to of course, it's a good timed and spaced intro.
00:25:053 (4,5,6) - I am not a fan of those 1/2 snapped following circles. That's not bad, but you can try something like 01:01:910 (1,2,1) but with lower spacing
00:27:637 (3,4,5) - Spacing looks a bit weird
00:33:453 (6,7) - Try more spacing there
01:06:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Very nice stream, good placement and following route, but maybe do another combo at circle number 9
The Kiai part looks good, also with the jumps. Many of them have big spacing, I think that's why the difficulty is at 5.64* (doesn't mean it's bad)
01:26:596 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,10) - When you do those square jumps try to make them to a good square and not placed by hand. You can use the "Create Polygon Circles" (CTRL+Shift+D) or at the menu "Compose", so you can do perfect squares like this one 01:31:739 (1,2,3,4)

All in all, the map looks very good and it's a great song. Keep it up and maybe go for ranked
suraimu-
54 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
suraimu-

Albatross wrote:

00:01:568 (1,2,3) - 00:23:510 (8)
It's a very good beginning, but the circles and sliders are always the same. That doesn't mean it's bad, definitly not, but you can try to be creative there. You don't have to of course, it's a good timed and spaced intro.
- In fact that is how I wanted to make that part, following the rythm changes with equal spacing, anyway I consider that suggestion

Albatross wrote:

00:25:053 (4,5,6) - I am not a fan of those 1/2 snapped following circles. That's not bad, but you can try something like 01:01:910 (1,2,1) but with lower spacing
- will try something like that

Albatross wrote:

00:27:637 (3,4,5) - Spacing looks a bit weird
- centered a bit?

Albatross wrote:

00:33:453 (6,7) - Try more spacing there
- fixed, also added a new combo

Albatross wrote:

01:06:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Very nice stream, good placement and following route, but maybe do another combo at circle number 9
- okay, it is probably better that way

Albatross wrote:

The Kiai part looks good, also with the jumps. Many of them have big spacing, I think that's why the difficulty is at 5.64* (doesn't mean it's bad)
01:26:596 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,10) - When you do those square jumps try to make them to a good square and not placed by hand. You can use the "Create Polygon Circles" (CTRL+Shift+D) or at the menu "Compose", so you can do perfect squares like this one 01:31:739 (1,2,3,4)
- just fixed that part, nice suggestion

Thx for the mod, pretty useful in my opinion, have your well deserved kudos!
Albatross
11 posts
Joined November 2015
Albatross

suraimu- wrote:

Albatross wrote:

00:01:568 (1,2,3) - 00:23:510 (8)
It's a very good beginning, but the circles and sliders are always the same. That doesn't mean it's bad, definitly not, but you can try to be creative there. You don't have to of course, it's a good timed and spaced intro.
- In fact that is how I wanted to make that part, following the rythm changes with equal spacing, anyway I consider that suggestion

Albatross wrote:

00:25:053 (4,5,6) - I am not a fan of those 1/2 snapped following circles. That's not bad, but you can try something like 01:01:910 (1,2,1) but with lower spacing
- will try something like that

Albatross wrote:

00:27:637 (3,4,5) - Spacing looks a bit weird
- centered a bit?

Albatross wrote:

00:33:453 (6,7) - Try more spacing there
- fixed, also added a new combo

Albatross wrote:

01:06:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Very nice stream, good placement and following route, but maybe do another combo at circle number 9
- okay, it is probably better that way

Albatross wrote:

The Kiai part looks good, also with the jumps. Many of them have big spacing, I think that's why the difficulty is at 5.64* (doesn't mean it's bad)
01:26:596 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,10) - When you do those square jumps try to make them to a good square and not placed by hand. You can use the "Create Polygon Circles" (CTRL+Shift+D) or at the menu "Compose", so you can do perfect squares like this one 01:31:739 (1,2,3,4)
- just fixed that part, nice suggestion

Thx for the mod, pretty useful in my opinion, have your well deserved kudos!
Wow that's a very friendly answer from you, thanks :3
Do you maybe need a gd for your mapset? If you wan't to, I can maybe try
suraimu-
54 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
suraimu-
Wow that's a very friendly answer from you, thanks :3
Do you maybe need a gd for your mapset? If you wan't to, I can maybe try
Would be nice, ty!
Moreon
60 posts
Joined November 2014
Moreon
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00:09:453 (2,3) - This circles are very weird to me.Try to move the 2 to the right and maybe closer to the bottom
00:25:739 (8) - you should make this jump more like an triangle not back and forth cause imo this is too hard to read
00:31:053 (5,6,7,8) - maybe jumps? This stacks are very weird to play right after jumps..i think some patterns would be better
00:42:025 (7,8,9) - ^
01:36:882 (3) - those back and forth's are hard to read for me
01:37:910 (1) - jumps after too

that's it :D
suraimu-
54 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
suraimu-

Moreon wrote:

00:09:453 (2,3) - This circles are very weird to me.Try to move the 2 to the right and maybe closer to the bottom
Changed it a bit.

Moreon wrote:

00:25:739 (8) - you should make this jump more like an triangle not back and forth cause imo this is too hard to read
Well, I consider it like a different part of the song and that kind of pattern seems right to me according to the diff.

Moreon wrote:

00:31:053 (5,6,7,8) - maybe jumps? This stacks are very weird to play right after jumps..i think some patterns would be better
I put it like that because it would get too repetitive that way and it fits the song in a way.

Moreon wrote:

01:36:882 (3) - those back and forth's are hard to read for me
01:37:910 (1) - jumps after too
This is a map which requires reading skills, that's why it is 5.6*, I think its good this way.

Thanks for the mod, besides the few changes I've made, it's always nice to receive this help. :D
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