General- Storyboard/Soundeffects are cool
- Generally it seems a bit too random, but that's my opinion. Maybe for some things, ask other people if they can see the same issues.
Normal- For a normal and your easiest diff, i think too much stuff is going on and the difficulty seems inconsistent (like an Easy-Normal-Hard mix), with those spacing changes and some fast notes. Try to make parts more consistent and use inherit timing sections rather than just spacing adjustments.
- Check AI-Mod for things like "Note exists 600ms after spinner (less than 1200ms)", seems a bit too hard.
00:20:651 (3,4,5) - some people might complain about 200bpm 1/2 in a normal but i don't see any problem no sir
I do:
00:20:801 (4) - delete, too fast for normal
00:20:951 (5,6) - jump? I don't know...
00:36:851 (3,4,5,6) - hm i think it's too fast. make the slider longer, to the next white tick, and place following cirlces one white tick apart
01:06:701 (6) - delete
01:23:651 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - for your easiest diff i don't know if this space isn't too far, it's nice and all, but maybe not suitable for the easiest diff
01:50:051 - why did the spacing turns to 0.7 suddenly? feels weird
02:30:251 - with a 0.5 spacing from here on, playing the sliders and then going to the next note feels kind of weird, cause the slider is fast and the distance is short, this may confuse beginners. It would be better to leave the distance to 0.8 or 1.0, then adjust the speed by an inherit timing section.
Hard00:09:251 (5) - 1 grid right
00:39:251 (5) - try to use more sliderpoints and make it rounder
http://puu.sh/cUTr01:00:251 (3) - the end point of this slider should to be 1 grid down to be consistent with the next one
01:14:351 (2) - something more eye-appealing?
01:21:251 (1,2,3,4,1) - this and the next few pentagons doesn't look the same, I think you should make one and then copy-paste it
01:50:651 (2) - copy-paste the last one
01:51:701 (4,5) - ^
liked it :3
Insane- A bit too random and unsorted in my opinion (and no distance snap at all? You should use it for some parts.)
- As Shiirn said, most sliders don't look so good.
00:05:041 (2,3,4) - copy-paste 'n flip
00:40:741 (2) -
http://puu.sh/cUXO00:50:041 (9) - something more eye-appealing?
01:17:641 (1,2,3,4,5) - you should make at least that symmetric, with the same spacing between all of the circles and such
01:32:341 (2) - the body is covered by the previous hitburst, this doesn't look to good. The slider could be shaped a bit better too.
01:33:541 (2) - ^ same about the hitburst. Maybe make it like this
http://puu.sh/cUZV or this
http://puu.sh/cV04 also copy-paste the previous slider please...
01:34:441 (1,3) - 1 grid right
02:06:091 (4,1) - spacing (see below v)
02:10:741 (2,3,1) - they touch each other? I would space them like 02:05:941 (3,4) so that they have a little space between them, looks nicer. If you do so, change the spacing of the next elements as well.
02:37:141 (6) - copy-paste the last one
02:36:091 (5,1,3,4) - some symmetric copy-paste 'n flip pattern of those sliders would be very nice at this part
Still needs some work imo, so ask for more mods. Take a star for your efford.