fixed all i guess?
sahuang wrote:Mod here.
00:13:734 (1) - This is "okay" but generally, edgy and curvy sliders are not recommended in easier diffs like Normal. It is very easy for newbies to misread and have many issues with it.
00:25:734 (4,5) - The flow is not ideal imo, and the feel that 00:24:934 (3,5) - almost overlap is awkward. Suggest that you move 00:26:534 (5) - up above tail of 4 and adjust some spacings.
01:11:727 (3,4) - please improve blanket
01:12:310 (4,5) - same and there are many places the aesthetics is kinda bad, try to make them look good!
01:31:242 (4) - 1/2 slider seems better as it can represent all strong beats
02:07:649 (1,2) - Try not to do this in Normal. The anti-flow and spacing will be misleading for new players.
Also i'd say use 1/1 slider 02:09:105 - instead is much better.
01:51:339 (1,2) - incorrect DS
So I think it's ok but needs more aesthetics. Plus, since almost all of your rhythm is 1/2 and 1/1 spam, I would personally suggest that you rename it to easy and remove the lowest diff which is unnecessary. Easy is also messy and needs a lot of reword. It is missing many beats and thus feel uncomfortable.
00:49:883 (7,1) - 00:51:193 (4,1) - 00:53:523 (4,1) - etc. better to swap NC
00:54:834 (4) - NC
Not gonna mention those NC stuff
01:13:184 - it seems weird to have this downbeat as reverse sound
01:26:582 (2) - judging from music you could map it as 1/2 slider + 2 circles
00:15:534 (4,5,6) - this distance is uncomfortable and try to make intro DS consistent, maybe use 00:16:334 (6,1) - ds
01:05:320 (4) - rhythm is bad as you are not following music at all.01:05:756 - etc shouldnt be emphasised while 01:05:902 - should. Try
imo those empty parts at the beginning can be mapped a bit cuz rn it sounds too empty for me lol
00:44:350 (6) - why not use curve slider as before?
Seems ok overall, just need more polish on object aesthetics
Use more NCs as the combo is so big now lol
01:21:630 - 01:21:921 - these should be downbeats but you are using them as stacking, which plays weird
I think you need to improve a lot on aesthetics. While the map has no unrankable issue, it has a lot of random spacing jumps as well as messy slider/circle combinations.
e.g. 00:54:252 (8,9,10,11) - i feel the spacing is suddenly increasing too fast and it's not expected
00:57:747 (4,5) - try similar shape
00:55:125 (2,4) - 01:09:397 (3,6) - etc kind of random overlaps
01:26:582 (9,10) - judging from music its better to sue circles instead of sliders cuz downbeats
01:59:639 (9,10) - messy
Basically i agree with mardius that you can have a lot of improvements because of the aesthetics issues. Still not bad as a new mapper map but yeah, keep improving xd