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Topic Starter
zhu

CucumberCuc wrote:

Hi
you wanted me to do the mod to your "neverland" complexity, well, okay

[Neverland]
I think that the sound of bells at the beginning are too loud, maybe lower it to better fit the song?
00:04:934 (3) I think this slider can be made more open so it does not overlap the slider to 00:08:534 (3)
00:55:871 (1,3) overlap
01:05:920 (6) i think this circle can move down for better flow and distance
01:22:959 (1) move down for better flow or can stack with 01:21:794 (2)
01:39:833 (3,4,5,6,7) look into how you decided to do here, 3 and 4 you have a block stronger than the next circles
01:43:329 (2,3) - 01:44:785 (3,4) do far for the some distance?
01:47:844 (1) move slightly up
01:48:863 (2) i think you can move down for better flow and to make it look more like the letter "Z"
01:52:504 (1,4,6) strange overlap
01:57:746 (3) move left for better flow
02:06:848 (3,4) fix stack
02:09:397 (4,5) i think it's far
02:27:892 (5) move slightly down and right for better overlap
02:43:766 (2) move right for distance
02:56:289 - 1,2 and 3,4 different range
for Insane and Neverland - why on 01:51:047 not have slider/circles? if at 04:00:075 is the same beginning voice and sound?
thanks for the mod!
epes2001 773
Hello m4m here , sorry for taking way too long

One thing , the second bpm offset is a bit odd , should be 40862 instead of 40872

Cordi's Easy

. 00:16:934 (1,2) - Make a hole in between them to look nicer
. 00:34:134 (2) - The slider should be parallel to the previous slider like this

. 01:55:999 (1,2,3) - These should be either 4 circles or 2 slider to follow the song
02:05:319 (1,2,3) - ^ same
03:11:435 (1,2,3) - ^ same
03:20:755 (1,2,3) - ^ same
04:05:027 (1,2,3) - ^ same
04:14:347 (1,2,3) - ^ same

Normal

01:55:999 (1,2,3) - ^ same
. 02:11:144 (2) - Lower the head of the slider like this

. 02:12:309 (1) - Match the circle to the end of the previous slider like this

. 03:40:270 - Need a circle here
. 04:05:026 (1,2,3) - These doesn't seems to follow the song , maybe replace it with something else?

Hard

. 01:53:376 (6) - Lower the circle to balance out the distance with 01:52:940 (5) and 01:53:522 (7)
. 02:11:580 (6) - Move the circle to the right to balance out the distance with 02:11:144 (5) and 02:11:727 (7)
. 02:35:609 (8) - This circle is a bit far away
. 03:25:415 (1) - Blanket
. 04:00:075 - Change the slider velocity to 1x

Insane

. 01:21:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These circles doesn't really follow the song , something like this would be better

. 02:14:712 (1) - Remove the spinner and map the gap because it feels like something is cutted out of here
. 02:46:969 (3) - Remove this circle
. 02:59:202 (2,3) - These two looks weird , something like this would be better


Neverland

. 00:44:075 (8) - Push the note a bit to the left like this

. 00:44:949 (5,6,7,8,9) - These looks a bit weird , something like this would be better


Overall the map is really good and actually rankable , good luck with that! :D
Cordie

epes2001 773 wrote:

Hello m4m here , sorry for taking way too long

Cordi's Easy

. 00:16:934 (1,2) - Make a hole in between them to look nicer - done
. 00:34:134 (2) - The slider should be parallel to the previous slider like this - done

. 01:55:999 (1,2,3) - These should be either 4 circles or 2 slider to follow the song - 2 sliders would be redundant here. 4 circles would boost the star rating too much. Will keep in mind
02:05:319 (1,2,3) - ^ same
03:11:435 (1,2,3) - ^ same
03:20:755 (1,2,3) - ^ same
04:05:027 (1,2,3) - ^ same
04:14:347 (1,2,3) - ^ same
Thanks for modding!
Topic Starter
zhu

epes2001 773 wrote:

Hello m4m here , sorry for taking way too long

One thing , the second bpm offset is a bit odd , should be 40862 instead of 40872

Cordi's Easy

. 00:16:934 (1,2) - Make a hole in between them to look nicer
. 00:34:134 (2) - The slider should be parallel to the previous slider like this

. 01:55:999 (1,2,3) - These should be either 4 circles or 2 slider to follow the song
02:05:319 (1,2,3) - ^ same
03:11:435 (1,2,3) - ^ same
03:20:755 (1,2,3) - ^ same
04:05:027 (1,2,3) - ^ same
04:14:347 (1,2,3) - ^ same

Normal

01:55:999 (1,2,3) - ^ same
. 02:11:144 (2) - Lower the head of the slider like this

. 02:12:309 (1) - Match the circle to the end of the previous slider like this

. 03:40:270 - Need a circle here
. 04:05:026 (1,2,3) - These doesn't seems to follow the song , maybe replace it with something else?

Hard

. 01:53:376 (6) - Lower the circle to balance out the distance with 01:52:940 (5) and 01:53:522 (7)
. 02:11:580 (6) - Move the circle to the right to balance out the distance with 02:11:144 (5) and 02:11:727 (7)
. 02:35:609 (8) - This circle is a bit far away
. 03:25:415 (1) - Blanket
. 04:00:075 - Change the slider velocity to 1x

Insane

. 01:21:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These circles doesn't really follow the song , something like this would be better

. 02:14:712 (1) - Remove the spinner and map the gap because it feels like something is cutted out of here
. 02:46:969 (3) - Remove this circle
. 02:59:202 (2,3) - These two looks weird , something like this would be better


Neverland

. 00:44:075 (8) - Push the note a bit to the left like this

. 00:44:949 (5,6,7,8,9) - These looks a bit weird , something like this would be better


Overall the map is really good and actually rankable , good luck with that! :D
no time to reply ive made few changes based on your opinion ill mod your map in 5days
victorfernando
i started to make hard
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
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Countdown: 0
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Title:Nevereverland
TitleUnicode:Nevereverland
Artist:Nano
ArtistUnicode:ナノ
Creator:zhu
Version:Victor's Hard
Source:
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Topic Starter
zhu

victorfernando wrote:

i started to make hard
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Alright i uploaded it seems pretty well made :)
victorfernando
Pls help me (do the parts i left)
osu file format v14

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56,264,251726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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184,376,252454,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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Starset
[redemption]
-00:04:134 - i rly think this cymbal should be clickable, try this maybe http://puu.sh/xDDoi/71ec5a7e7f.jpg
-00:05:334 - same with this note its clearly stronger than other piano notes should be emphasized
-00:08:934 - this reverse is overmapped nothing i can hear on that one
-00:16:134 - missing note?
-00:20:134 (4) - try this http://puu.sh/xDDvj/c5fc43e530.jpg
-00:21:934 (3,5) - just a suggestion but these should be jumps like u did on 00:12:334 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
-00:28:534 (4,5,6) - make it so its doesnt overlap and tbh 3 stacked notes is a little boring maybe move the slider somwhere else
-00:32:934 (4) - new combo for velocity change
-00:34:734 (3) - ctrl+g?
-00:58:056 (4) - convert to circles since the rythm u following isnt quite correct here the red tick should be clickable
-01:03:590 (7) - split into 2 1/2 sliders is more wise imo
-01:06:794 (3,4) - ctrl+g rythm wise
-01:12:619 (6) - ctrl+j asthetics wise
-03:57:818 - mute this slider end
-01:51:047 - u ignored vocals here, but here u didnt 04:00:076 (1) - so either ignore it or map it both for the sake of consistency

rest is fine, gl
Electoz
Did an irc mod with the mapper, top diff
22:47 zhu: allo
00:44 Electoz: hi
00:44 Electoz: sorry didn't see the chat lol
00:45 zhu: umm
00:45 zhu: do you have any free time
00:45 Electoz: ?
00:46 zhu: if you have can you brief mod 1 dif of my map
00:46 Electoz: oh
00:47 Electoz: now I remembered you
00:47 Electoz: sure I think
00:47 Electoz: though I don't find things much from a quick look
00:47 zhu: give me a min
00:47 zhu: yo upload
00:47 zhu: my changes
00:52 zhu: aighy
00:52 zhu: done
00:52 *zhu is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1394515 Nano - Nevereverland]
00:54 Electoz: what diff
00:54 Electoz: the highest?
00:55 zhu: yeaj
00:55 zhu: yeah*
00:56 Electoz: gimme
00:56 Electoz: a few mins
00:56 zhu: okay
01:09 Electoz: mm
01:09 Electoz: 02:23:960 (1,2,3) - could use a lower volume or something
01:09 Electoz: since the intensity changes already
01:10 Electoz: 02:05:319 (1,2,3) - 02:06:193 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't see any reason to make these differently
01:10 Electoz: considering you did 03:20:755 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this kind of thing in the same way, in other placeas
01:10 Electoz: *places
01:11 Electoz: sometimes you didn't seem to care random overlaps much
01:11 Electoz: but at some point they made the map looks unpolished/untidy
01:11 Electoz: or whatever
01:11 Electoz: like
01:11 Electoz: 00:13:334 (6,1) -
01:11 Electoz: 01:56:581 (5,5) -
01:11 Electoz: etc
01:12 Electoz: like, when doing overlaps
01:12 Electoz: you should have a reason or logic for doing so
01:12 Electoz: could be aesthetics, patterning, etc
01:12 Electoz: e.g. 03:10:561 (3,5) - this kind of thing is fine
01:13 Electoz: 03:30:221 (1,2,3) - this is also okayish since the overlap is for patterning purpose
01:13 Electoz: oh wait are you afk
01:13 zhu: im here
01:13 Electoz: ok
01:14 Electoz: also one of the important things here is that
01:14 Electoz: your repeat slider usage
01:14 Electoz: generally we don't use 1/2 repeat sliders in intense sections
01:14 Electoz: aka when the song is not calm
01:14 Electoz: cuz intense sections tend to have a higher SV
01:15 Electoz: and repeat sliders generally force you to go back and forth
01:15 Electoz: which most people found them uncomfortable
01:15 zhu: oh
01:15 zhu: any examples
01:15 Electoz: stuff like
01:15 Electoz: 01:11:600 (2) -
01:15 Electoz: for example
01:15 Electoz: other reason is that
01:16 Electoz: repeat sliders at least involve 2 passive beats
01:16 Electoz: which ruins the intensity
01:16 Electoz: passive beats = anything that's not clickable, repeat, slidertails, or whatever
01:16 Electoz: like for example
01:16 Electoz: 01:57:746 (6) -
01:16 Electoz: for intense sections, like kiai for example
01:17 Electoz: you want objects to be clickable more than any other section
01:17 zhu: so
01:17 Electoz: beause that way represent the gameplay that hey the things are harder to play when the intensity of the song increases
01:17 zhu: i reokace them with
01:17 zhu: replace
01:18 zhu: i see
01:18 Electoz: so
01:18 Electoz: for
01:18 Electoz: 01:57:746 (6) -
01:18 Electoz: you could use slider + circle, cicle + slider, or 3 circles
01:18 Electoz: according to
01:18 Electoz: the rhythm you're following
01:18 Electoz: use as you see fit
01:18 zhu: okay
01:18 Electoz: because repeat sliders don't really force you to jump right
01:19 zhu: yes
01:19 Electoz: if it were 2 separated objects
01:19 Electoz: at least the intensity can be somewhat reflected by the jump
01:20 Electoz: 02:00:368 (5,6,1) - hmm I wish you could do this kind of stuff more
01:20 Electoz: instead of
01:20 Electoz: long ass streams like
01:20 Electoz: 03:15:513 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 03:28:327 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) -
01:20 Electoz: just my
01:20 Electoz: presonal preference
01:20 Electoz: but
01:21 Electoz: generally 1/4 sliders involve more speed in gameplay
01:21 Electoz: compared to stream
01:21 Electoz: while stream needs more tapping than 1/4 sliders
01:21 Electoz: these are gameplay differences between them
01:22 zhu: kick sliders?
01:22 Electoz: 02:13:183 (7) - 03:28:619 (7,8,9,10) - should use the same rhythm between these btw
01:22 Electoz: I think?
01:22 Electoz: I'm trying not to call that
01:22 Electoz: beacuse there are 2 definitions
01:22 Electoz: for the term "kickslider"
01:22 Electoz: and it's confusing
01:23 zhu: can you explain it
01:24 Electoz: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/470582/start=0&view=viewpoll
01:24 Electoz: should be easier with that link
01:25 zhu: hold down slider?
01:26 Electoz: I
01:26 Electoz: honestly don't know how to explain that
01:26 Electoz: the link I gave you
01:26 Electoz: is the most straightforward way to explain it
01:26 Electoz: there are two definitions of it, left and right
01:26 Electoz: for each definition
01:27 Electoz: "single 1/4 slider jumps without repeats." vs "1/4 sliders with repeats."
01:27 zhu: first one is kick slider and second one is hold down slider right?
01:29 Electoz: depends on what you want to call it
01:29 Electoz: if you're calling the thing on the left as "kick slider"
01:29 Electoz: then fine I'll use that term today
01:29 Electoz: so it's easier to understand
01:29 zhu: okay
01:29 Electoz: to answer your previous question
01:30 Electoz: 02:00:368 (5,6) - yes these are what you're referring as "kick sliders"
01:30 Electoz: because they involve jumps as well as 1/4 rhythms
01:30 Electoz: so you will need to move your cursor faster than a stream in gameplay
01:31 Electoz: your rhythms are sometimes questionable though
01:31 Electoz: like
01:31 Electoz: 01:52:940 - is not clickable
01:32 Electoz: yet 03:08:376 - is
01:32 Electoz: aka you should be more consistent on what rhythm you're prioritizing
01:32 Electoz: be it vocals, drums, or whatever
01:33 zhu: cant i prioritize other things in other parts
01:33 Electoz: let's see
01:33 Electoz: depends
01:33 Electoz: for example
01:33 Electoz: if
01:33 Electoz: those parts
01:33 Electoz: are musically the same
01:33 Electoz: then you shouldn't
01:34 Electoz: because the rhythms should be consistent, in order to consistently reflect the song throughout the map
01:34 Electoz: also players can't play intuitively if you focused rhythms differently when the parts are the same
01:34 zhu: oh
01:35 Electoz: most of your placements
01:35 Electoz: can be a lot more polished
01:35 Electoz: by making visual spacings consistent
01:35 Electoz: for example 02:18:135 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - these are nice
01:36 Electoz: like you can see the visual spacing between each circle are consistently spaced
01:36 Electoz: even though they're jumps on almost every one of them
01:36 Electoz: I'm not saying that
01:36 Electoz: you must space things visually consistent all the time
01:37 zhu: its like monstrata hexagon
01:37 Electoz: but it's more like a thing to make your map cleaner in some if not most occasions
01:37 Electoz: uh
01:37 Electoz: yeah
01:37 Electoz: kinda
01:37 Electoz: monstrata can be an example of this
01:37 zhu: i felt like using it
01:37 zhu: his maps are so clean
01:37 zhu: i like his style
01:37 Electoz: it's depends on mappers' style also
01:38 Electoz: honestly about aesthetics though
01:38 Electoz: there's no way of it being completely right or wrong
01:38 Electoz: (unless it really sucks)
01:38 Electoz: but it's more like
01:38 Electoz: something you'll figure out by yourself sooner or later
01:38 Electoz: as long as you map more
01:38 Electoz: sometimes getting mods can help
01:38 zhu: imma make this map more clean
01:39 Electoz: because there will be some modders who give comments/feedbacks on aesthetics
01:39 Electoz: in their opinion
01:39 Electoz: 02:41:436 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - yeah could be cleaner here too
01:39 Electoz: like
01:39 Electoz: this thing look unclean because
01:39 Electoz: 02:41:581 (2,6) - there's an overlap
01:39 Electoz: and there's no such thing anywhere else in this pattern or whatever
01:40 Electoz: so the placements look kinda random
01:40 zhu: i dont even remember what i was thinking
01:40 zhu: lol
01:40 Electoz: zz
01:41 Electoz: 03:02:988 (3) - lol what
01:41 zhu: like this
01:41 zhu: 01:03:881 (8,2) -
01:41 Electoz: what do you mean by 01:03:881 (8,2) -
01:41 zhu: i didnt fixed that after velocity multiplier it seems
01:42 zhu: 01:03:881 (8,2) - these are overlapped
01:42 zhu: should i place 01:04:609 (2) - this on
01:42 zhu: x144 y72
01:43 zhu: and fix
01:43 zhu: 01:04:755 (3) - this ones spacing
01:43 zhu: ?
01:43 Electoz: depends
01:43 Electoz: but for me it's cleaner
01:43 Electoz: with the thing stacked
01:43 Electoz: overlapping a circle under a sliderbody is
01:43 Electoz: unclean + ruins readability
01:44 zhu: okay
01:44 Electoz: 01:06:357 (1,2) - could swap NC if you care about downbeat stuff
01:45 zhu: roger
01:46 Electoz: actually I'm sleepy now so
01:46 Electoz: probably one last thing
01:46 Electoz: 02:09:979 (1,2,3,4) -
01:46 Electoz: when you're making a pattern
01:46 Electoz: or something
01:46 Electoz: make sure that it represents the song, according to your interpretation
01:47 Electoz: let's see
01:47 Electoz: for example
01:47 Electoz: 01:55:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - you did this
01:47 Electoz: because it reflects vocal right?
01:47 Electoz: and you do that whenever the same vocal happens on other places
01:47 zhu: yeah i suppose
01:47 Electoz: so
01:47 Electoz: that one
01:47 Electoz: reflects vocal
01:47 Electoz: and what about 02:09:979 (1,2,3,4) - then?
01:48 Electoz: do they reflect vocals? drums? or other rhythms?
01:48 Electoz: if you can't answer that question to yourself
01:48 Electoz: then yea you got a problem
01:48 zhu: drums
01:48 zhu: i think
01:48 Electoz: so
01:48 Electoz: assuming you know what you're doing
01:48 Electoz: the next thing to consider is
01:49 Electoz: whether you do that kind of pattern consistently
01:49 Electoz: in this case
01:49 Electoz: 02:09:979 (1,2,3,4) - is a pattern
01:49 Electoz: 03:25:415 (1,2,3,4,5) - is not I assume?
01:50 Electoz: if some things are musically the same
01:50 zhu: oh
01:50 Electoz: then they should be reflected by similar patterns
01:50 Electoz: in mapping
01:50 Electoz: that's the very core point
01:50 Electoz: of it
01:50 zhu: okay ill fix that
01:50 zhu: i just couldnt notice that
01:50 zhu: do you think this map will be ranked in near future
01:51 Electoz: probably needs quite a bunch of mods at the very least
01:51 Electoz: to me the biggest issue I have here
01:51 Electoz: *issues
01:51 Electoz: are the way you used 1/2 repeat sliders and random overlaps which made the map untidy
01:51 Electoz: which I already mention those
01:52 zhu: i see
01:52 zhu: ill try my best
01:52 zhu: to dix them
01:52 zhu: fix*
01:52 Electoz: aa
01:52 Electoz: alright
01:52 Electoz: guess I'll sleep now
01:52 Electoz: 1:52 am
01:52 Electoz: zzz
01:53 Electoz: oh
01:53 Electoz: yeah
01:53 Electoz: one more thing
01:53 Electoz: generally for extra diffs
01:53 zhu: its 3am here imma sleep aswel
01:53 Electoz: OD generally is 8 or more
01:53 Electoz: OD depends on the complexity of rhythms in the map
01:53 Electoz: and BPM
01:53 Electoz: higher BPM = chances of higher OD
01:53 Electoz: vice versa happens too when the BPM is low
01:54 zhu: 8is good i suppose?
01:54 Electoz: 8 should be fine
01:54 zhu: okay
01:54 Electoz: ok for real I'm gonna sleep
01:54 Electoz: you don't mind if I post the logs for kds right
- e - v - b-
Hey there, could you map your own version of the song for your top diff? considering that you literally copy and pasted my map? (talking about [Redemption] diff btw)
Topic Starter
zhu
repost
Rousseau
За мод рекүэст oWo !!! Хэлсэнээр чинь экстра дээр чинь л мод хийсэн шүү.
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Extra
Increase SV to 2.2 2.3 or more 1.8 is too low for extra also feels kind a off for kiai parts
00:47:261 (3,4,5,6) - 00:43:038 (1) - 00:43:329 (2) - 00:44:349 (2) - 00:45:805 (3,7) - 00:48:572 (4,5) - add CLAP
00:54:852 (1,4,1,2,1,1) - fix blanket
01:07:959 (1,2,3) - use rotating
01:11:163 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - fix blanket
01:13:493 (1,2,3) - is this intentional or just ugly ?
за тэгээд ер нь СВ ээ ихэсгээд янзалчвал дажгүй л юм байншд ккк goodluck 8-)
Topic Starter
zhu

Fukada Eriko wrote:

За мод рекүэст oWo !!! Хэлсэнээр чинь экстра дээр чинь л мод хийсэн шүү.
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Extra
Increase SV to 2.2 2.3 or more 1.8 is too low for extra also feels kind a off for kiai parts
00:47:261 (3,4,5,6) - 00:43:038 (1) - 00:43:329 (2) - 00:44:349 (2) - 00:45:805 (3,7) - 00:48:572 (4,5) - add CLAP
00:54:852 (1,4,1,2,1,1) - fix blanket
01:07:959 (1,2,3) - use rotating
01:11:163 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - fix blanket
01:13:493 (1,2,3) - is this intentional or just ugly ?
за тэгээд ер нь СВ ээ ихэсгээд янзалчвал дажгүй л юм байншд ккк goodluck 8-)
Fixed all thanks <3
Topic Starter
zhu
Removed Extra changed Redemption name into extra instead.
Topic Starter
zhu
Added 3 taiko difficulties including
Nifty's Inner Oni (4.15 stars, 748 notes)
Nifty's Muzukashii (3.3 stars, 622 notes)
Nifty's Oni (3.77 stars, 664 notes)
Topic Starter
zhu
Added 2 std guest difficulties including :
Cordi's Easy (1.19 stars, 83 notes)
Victor's Hard (3 stars, 291 notes)
Topic Starter
zhu
Added Starset's Extra (5.9 stars, 515 notes)
bob80905
00:09:734 (3) - There seems to be a missing note here. There's a sound right before it. Maybe try a short slider?
00:26:134 (7,8,1) - Me being picky, but these aren't evenly spaced
00:07:334 (1,2) - Using this for reference, you establish an aesthetic of perfectly overlapping sliders. But these 00:32:934 (1,2) - 00:35:134 (3,1) - break that pattern. Just fyi.
00:42:310 (2) - I'd make this slider angled more vertically, makes for a better transition for previous and next note.
00:46:824 (2,3,4,5,6) - I'd make these more spaced, you're representing the same sounds with less space. The sounds right before this were spaced, so either make those smaller or make these larger ds.
01:02:698 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is just one example, but I'm not getting the pattern of when you choose to stack and when you choose to space just a little bit and overlap. From here on you seem to put hit circles always directly over slider tails, but other object combinations aren't always stacked which makes it feel kinda weird. imo. Like 01:17:553 (4,5,6) - or 01:26:727 (4,6) - 01:28:475 (6,2) - 01:00:368 (4,1) or - 01:03:572 (5,6) -
01:40:853 (1,2) - Are you not stacking these cause the spacing is 1/1? That might be a good reason, otherwise, it breaks your pattern fyi.
01:47:261 (1,2) - This one definitely breaks the pattern you've seem to have set between 1:10 and 1:30
01:47:844 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Something I personally like to do with jumps like these is leave 4 in the same exact position as 1 will be for the next set. This gives a sense of stop for time and also feels really good to play. consider it. It might give more structure to the jumps as well.
01:54:397 (4) - Maybe if you mean to follow the pattern you set for slightly offset hit circle positions, move 4 a bit to the bottom right so it compliments the previous 2 circles?
02:03:718 (4) - Same with this one, what if you do it with the next 1 circle? 02:04:300 (1) -
02:06:630 (2) - I think if you moved this under the slider in stead of making a super wide jump it'd be smoother to play and more intuitive
00:20:134 (1) - This slider should probably be similar to the very first slider in the map. So, maybe make this slider curved, or make the first slider in the map similar to this.
00:29:534 (1,2,3) - Seems to me like these should be more separate from the previous note, like how you spaced 6 from 5 with the note change. here you're entering a new segment. What if you try horizontally flipping this and moving it to x=400 y=128? I like this feel better.
00:32:534 (8,1) - Something about these sliders doesnt feel "right" to play. Like, going from a slider leading upwards, I'm not used to then hitting a curved slider that starts going upwards. So, I'd vertically flip 1. See what's that like, change if you like it more.
00:44:932 (1) - Lots of people have a not so good relationship with 3 reverse slider. I'd recommend you just make this and the next note a 5 stream. Hitting the next note is not intuitive and is also rather far away for the amount of time given to hit it.
00:56:874 (8,9) - The positions of these notes in relation to later notes in the song are not flattering, they aren't perfect, and the patter they're in isn't revolutionary. I'd say try coming up with a pattern so that 6789 compliment the upcoming notes and dont partially overlap with anything. or maybe you could just move 8 and 9 (8 overlaps with 00:58:039 (4) - and 9 overlaps with 00:57:748 (3) -)
01:07:505 (6) - This slider isn't optimally positioned. Try rotating it -30 degrees and bringing it down so it doesn't overlap with anything.
01:14:350 (6) - What if you moved 6 down and made a cool diamond shape? where it is now may be hard to read. 01:14:932 (8) - and then move this down a little
01:19:592 (6) - Why not move this more to the left on the left side of the slider? Needless overlap.
01:24:543 (7,1) - Ehhhh, you could just separate these.... its easier on the eyes.
01:29:495 (2) - Is there some way you can move this so it doesnt overlap with anything? Like, 01:08:524 (9,10,2) - This is an okay overlap cause each end looks like it overlaps the same area with the other. But this overlap doesn't work... Maybe move the square pattern further to the left and try to play with how you position the sliders?
01:48:717 (1,2) - This is a rhythmical inconsistency. You just did 2 circles and a slider for the 4 intense notes. So try copying that. and the next set, shouldn't it be 2 circles and then a slider, not the other way around?
02:05:901 (5) - I think the concavity of this slider is incorrect. This pattern establishes a clockwise flow, and you break that with this slider. You should just ctrlH this slider and place it right back where it was
Good luck on the map, I like the music :)
Starset

bob80905 wrote:

00:09:734 (3) - There seems to be a missing note here. There's a sound right before it. Maybe try a short slider? //i decide to ignore that note since its very quiet and its on a blue tick
00:26:134 (7,8,1) - Me being picky, but these aren't evenly spaced //its meant to be like that
00:07:334 (1,2) - Using this for reference, you establish an aesthetic of perfectly overlapping sliders. But these 00:32:934 (1,2) - 00:35:134 (3,1) - break that pattern. Just fyi.//yes, because they are not using the same timelines
00:42:310 (2) - I'd make this slider angled more vertically, makes for a better transition for previous and next note. //nah i like this flow
00:46:824 (2,3,4,5,6) - I'd make these more spaced, you're representing the same sounds with less space. The sounds right before this were spaced, so either make those smaller or make these larger ds. //they are spaced depending on the instruments used, tahs why claps get more space than others
01:02:698 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is just one example, but I'm not getting the pattern of when you choose to stack and when you choose to space just a little bit and overlap. From here on you seem to put hit circles always directly over slider tails, but other object combinations aren't always stacked which makes it feel kinda weird. imo. Like 01:17:553 (4,5,6) - or 01:26:727 (4,6) - 01:28:475 (6,2) - 01:00:368 (4,1) or - 01:03:572 (5,6) - //overlap when its back and forth movement
01:40:853 (1,2) - Are you not stacking these cause the spacing is 1/1? That might be a good reason, otherwise, it breaks your pattern fyi. //ye
01:47:261 (1,2) - This one definitely breaks the pattern you've seem to have set between 1:10 and 1:30 //changed
01:47:844 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Something I personally like to do with jumps like these is leave 4 in the same exact position as 1 will be for the next set. This gives a sense of stop for time and also feels really good to play. consider it. It might give more structure to the jumps as well. //i know, i just like changin a bit from the normal
01:54:397 (4) - Maybe if you mean to follow the pattern you set for slightly offset hit circle positions, move 4 a bit to the bottom right so it compliments the previous 2 circles? //no need for that honestly, player wont tell the diffrence anyway, so stacking it and thats it
02:03:718 (4) - Same with this one, what if you do it with the next 1 circle? 02:04:300 (1) - //would be too much spaced for the next note
02:06:630 (2) - I think if you moved this under the slider in stead of making a super wide jump it'd be smoother to play and more intuitive //which slider
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Topic Starter
zhu
00:20:134 (1) - This slider should probably be similar to the very first slider in the map. So, maybe make this slider curved, or make the first slider in the map similar to this.
00:29:534 (1,2,3) - Seems to me like these should be more separate from the previous note, like how you spaced 6 from 5 with the note change. here you're entering a new segment. What if you try horizontally flipping this and moving it to x=400 y=128? I like this feel better.
00:32:534 (8,1) - Something about these sliders doesnt feel "right" to play. Like, going from a slider leading upwards, I'm not used to then hitting a curved slider that starts going upwards. So, I'd vertically flip 1. See what's that like, change if you like it more.
00:44:932 (1) - Lots of people have a not so good relationship with 3 reverse slider. I'd recommend you just make this and the next note a 5 stream. Hitting the next note is not intuitive and is also rather far away for the amount of time given to hit it.
00:56:874 (8,9) - The positions of these notes in relation to later notes in the song are not flattering, they aren't perfect, and the patter they're in isn't revolutionary. I'd say try coming up with a pattern so that 6789 compliment the upcoming notes and dont partially overlap with anything. or maybe you could just move 8 and 9 (8 overlaps with 00:58:039 (4) - and 9 overlaps with 00:57:748 (3) -)
01:07:505 (6) - This slider isn't optimally positioned. Try rotating it -30 degrees and bringing it down so it doesn't overlap with anything.
01:14:350 (6) - What if you moved 6 down and made a cool diamond shape? where it is now may be hard to read. 01:14:932 (8) - and then move this down a little
01:19:592 (6) - Why not move this more to the left on the left side of the slider? Needless overlap.
01:24:543 (7,1) - Ehhhh, you could just separate these.... its easier on the eyes.
01:29:495 (2) - Is there some way you can move this so it doesnt overlap with anything? Like, 01:08:524 (9,10,2) - This is an okay overlap cause each end looks like it overlaps the same area with the other. But this overlap doesn't work... Maybe move the square pattern further to the left and try to play with how you position the sliders?
01:48:717 (1,2) - This is a rhythmical inconsistency. You just did 2 circles and a slider for the 4 intense notes. So try copying that. and the next set, shouldn't it be 2 circles and then a slider, not the other way around?
02:05:901 (5) - I think the concavity of this slider is incorrect. This pattern establishes a clockwise flow, and you break that with this slider. You should just ctrlH this slider and place it right back where it was
applied some didnt apply some kinda busy atm will mod your map in 2days
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