00:53:873 (3,2) - this overlap doesn't read well; consider offsetting the stream a bit to the right
01:34:335 (3) - ctrl+g this, otherwise it completely breaks the flow of the section
01:46:950 (1,2,3,4,5) - this burst doesn't curve correctly compared to the bursts around it (it's too linear). mostly an aesthetic consistency problem; I recommend fixing it but feel free to ignore this if it was intentional
03:05:566 (7) - this overlap doesn't read well; consider moving this circle up
03:08:027 (3,2) - this overlap doesn't read well; consider moving the stream (and maybe the kicksliders too) a bit to the right
03:26:950 (2,3,4) - this overlap doesn't read well; consider moving the triple+kickslider away from the slider that's overlapping it. the direction change of the triple also doesn't read well; consider ctrl+J'ing the triple
05:05:720 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this doesn't fit at all, especially considering how you used sliders to represent this part of the song every other time. change this to sliders like the rest of the map
05:11:873 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - nice choke stream!
01:34:335 (3) - ctrl+g this, otherwise it completely breaks the flow of the section
01:46:950 (1,2,3,4,5) - this burst doesn't curve correctly compared to the bursts around it (it's too linear). mostly an aesthetic consistency problem; I recommend fixing it but feel free to ignore this if it was intentional
03:05:566 (7) - this overlap doesn't read well; consider moving this circle up
03:08:027 (3,2) - this overlap doesn't read well; consider moving the stream (and maybe the kicksliders too) a bit to the right
03:26:950 (2,3,4) - this overlap doesn't read well; consider moving the triple+kickslider away from the slider that's overlapping it. the direction change of the triple also doesn't read well; consider ctrl+J'ing the triple
05:05:720 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this doesn't fit at all, especially considering how you used sliders to represent this part of the song every other time. change this to sliders like the rest of the map
05:11:873 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - nice choke stream!