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DragonForce - WAR!

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Topic Starter
fieryrage
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, February 27, 2018 at 4:09:26 PM

Artist: DragonForce
Title: WAR!
Tags: marathon df marc hudson herman li speedmetal powermetal power speed metal reaching into infinity idke
BPM: 120
Filesize: 9525kb
Play Time: 05:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. Legend (7.01 stars, 1960 notes)
Download: DragonForce - WAR!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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collab with idke
(i mapped evens, he mapped odds)

welcome to cry thunder, part 2














7ambda
wheres the AR 8
Topic Starter
fieryrage
no
wilup
furries mapping cs5 dragonforce again?
zigizigiefe
Hey fiery, firstly thanks for letting me use your timing so I can map this epic song. But I must tell that title name must be WAR! according as written in official website.
Topic Starter
fieryrage
upvoted
Kilabarus
Wow, this is pretty nice map and nice Dragonforce's song as well!
Pls finish it :)

or else I will map it >:)
Topic Starter
fieryrage
its been finished tho
Kilabarus
oh shi my mistake, gj!

Tho r u planning rank it?
Topic Starter
fieryrage
if we get enough mods probably
zigizigiefe
Forgot to say, pls add "marc hudson" to tags cuz he is kawaii .w. (runs)
Swiftrax
holy jump streams
my_love4
please get this ranked pls
mxp
Wow, really enjoyed the song so I've decided to mod!


Texats
yeasss ! badass songs loveit [m/

lets goooOOo
Kastellan
I know you told me on Skype that I need to be AT LEAST 3 digit to mod this map... But honestly I don't think it should matter that much when there are so manny great mappers out there that don't even play the game. Anyway here's a couple bones I have to pick with this map.

03:01:104 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I really like this pattern.

03:29:104 (1) - People might say this is unrankable (you can't really follow it that well) but I really like this slider.

03:37:104 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Nagasaki Kanon got a lot of hate for doing these... quit mapping altogether too. Anyways I really like this pattern.

00:00:351 (1) - This is a really weird position to start the map. Especially with a mouse. Anyways I like it.

02:41:797 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Ctrl+G these notes

I really like the map. If this were the new site I would also put hype on it but I don't know how to do that here (or what that even does. did they change it??) What does hype even do. Anyways +1 hype.
zigizigiefe
Although I am a Taiko mapper, I would love to see it in ranked section, so here is my opinions, no kudosu.

  1. Don't forget to add "marc hudson" and "herman li" on tags, sometimes I look for DragonForce songs by using those keywords, so must the others.
  2. 00:40:489 - ~ 00:46:643 - You didn't represent any 1/6 snare sound but 00:46:027 (1) -. It looks inconsistent and there's no point in representing those 1/6 snares as single circles doing that well.
  3. 03:21:720 - ~ 03:22:873 - When the density goes same as the kiai time, it goes down suddenly at 03:22:950 -. It's exactly weird, even for a Taiko mapper who isn't that experienced in STD mapping such as me lolol
  4. 03:47:566 - I just want to point out, the guitar turns to 1/3. It's still up to you what to use.
  5. 04:32:489 - The only thing I heard is low drum sound. After all, the song is pretty crazy, but, don't you think it's a bit harsh to have the streams that spaced?
That's it to me, good luck on ranking!
Foxy Grandpa
fieryrage - Today at 5:55 PM
@FoxyGrandpa
Hey
FoxyGrandpa - Today at 5:55 PM
FUCK
fieryrage - Today at 5:55 PM
black guy: hey

  • [Legend]
  1. 01:11:258 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Okay this like doesnt reflect the guitar sounds at all, since on 01:11:566 - the pitch is higher than 01:11:258 - but u have it as lower spacing
  2. 02:15:258 (1,2,1,2) - Tbh u;'d prolly be better off having these as like 1/2 sliders or jumps since how they are now it kinda skips over the guitar sounds and drums
  3. 02:22:643 - So for this part u sometimes map the triplet thats on the guitar like 02:26:335 (1,2) - and dont map it 02:25:720 (3) - I'd say like make this consistent cuz rn it seems kinnda random
  4. 02:32:489 - ^
  5. 03:29:104 (1) - This might be considered buriai? idk not sure
  6. 03:34:797 (5,6,7) - Why the stack on such a high intensity guitar sound
  7. 04:05:258 (3) - bRO what the fuck hello mr tail wyd

rank guilty all the same
idke

Kastellann wrote:

I know you told me on Skype that I need to be AT LEAST 3 digit to mod this map... But honestly I don't think it should matter that much when there are so manny great mappers out there that don't even play the game. Anyway here's a couple bones I have to pick with this map.

03:01:104 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I really like this pattern.
hoyl shite thansk!!!! very much aperciated..
03:29:104 (1) - People might say this is unrankable (you can't really follow it that well) but I really like this slider.
turn on slider ends
00:00:351 (1) - This is a really weird position to start the map. Especially with a mouse. Anyways I like it.
everywhere is a weird place to start subjectively

I really like the map. If this were the new site I would also put hype on it but I don't know how to do that here (or what that even does. did they change it??) What does hype even do. Anyways +1 hype.
why did fiery say only 3 digits allowed wtf ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

FoxyGrandpa wrote:

01:11:258 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Okay this like doesnt reflect the guitar sounds at all, since on 01:11:566 - the pitch is higher than 01:11:258 - but u have it as lower spacing
the spacing of the jumps is what reflects the guitar not the spacing of the notes ur gya lol
02:15:258 (1,2,1,2) - Tbh u;'d prolly be better off having these as like 1/2 sliders or jumps since how they are now it kinda skips over the guitar sounds and drums
wtf dont u hear that annoying guitar in the background
03:29:104 (1) - This might be considered buriai? idk not sure
turn on slider ends then it wont be
03:34:797 (5,6,7) - Why the stack on such a high intensity guitar sound
this is fierys part but hes retarded lo lo lo lo lo lolo aosd load olaslod i always complain about this in every map to him
04:05:258 (3) - bRO what the fuck hello mr tail wyd
epic moments on osu?
holy shit!!! thansk for ur mods but i will unfortunately be denying everuything except for compliments because i think i am a perfect mapper and if u decide to bash on the map say hi to a block LOL! XD! anywayz heres some kudopsu frum fiery_rage_osu because hes a DICKhead..

honestly this map fucking sucks tho lol
Topic Starter
fieryrage
kastell

Kastellann wrote:

I know you told me on Skype that I need to be AT LEAST 3 digit to mod this map... But honestly I don't think it should matter that much when there are so manny great mappers out there that don't even play the game. Anyway here's a couple bones I have to pick with this map.

03:29:104 (1) - People might say this is unrankable (you can't really follow it that well) but I really like this slider. there's really nothing unrankable about this slider, it's in a similar boat to bonfire's curvy slider

03:37:104 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Nagasaki Kanon got a lot of hate for doing these... quit mapping altogether too. Anyways I really like this pattern. issue with his was it was at 225 bpm, this is a lot more bearable on 195

02:41:797 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Ctrl+G these notes uh i'd rather not increase the SR by 0.1

I really like the map. If this were the new site I would also put hype on it but I don't know how to do that here (or what that even does. did they change it??) What does hype even do. Anyways +1 hype. ty!

zig

zigizigiefe wrote:

Although I am a Taiko mapper, I would love to see it in ranked section, so here is my opinions, no kudosu.

  1. Don't forget to add "marc hudson" and "herman li" on tags, sometimes I look for DragonForce songs by using those keywords, so must the others. eeeeeeeeeeeeeee i dont really find it necessary but sure
  2. 00:40:489 - ~ 00:46:643 - You didn't represent any 1/6 snare sound but 00:46:027 (1) -. It looks inconsistent and there's no point in representing those 1/6 snares as single circles doing that well. i forgot the beginning had these oops, fixed where i found applicable
  3. 03:21:720 - ~ 03:22:873 - When the density goes same as the kiai time, it goes down suddenly at 03:22:950 -. It's exactly weird, even for a Taiko mapper who isn't that experienced in STD mapping such as me lolol it's to introduce the new rhythm slowly so the player doesn't randomly see it and accidentally overtap
  4. 03:47:566 - I just want to point out, the guitar turns to 1/3. It's still up to you what to use. following the guitar here gives me ass cancer (also the hitsounds are following the drums and i'm not really sure how to make this intuitive in that regard so uhh)
  5. 04:32:489 - The only thing I heard is low drum sound. After all, the song is pretty crazy, but, don't you think it's a bit harsh to have the streams that spaced? 04:32:797 (5,6,7,8) - at this part i'd agree, but i prefer keeping the stream spacing consistent in bunches of 4 to 8 notes, and 8 notes makes more sense here imo
That's it to me, good luck on ranking! ty!

fox

FoxyGrandpa wrote:

fieryrage - Today at 5:55 PM
@FoxyGrandpa
Hey
FoxyGrandpa - Today at 5:55 PM
FUCK
fieryrage - Today at 5:55 PM
black guy: hey

  • [Legend]
  1. 02:22:643 - So for this part u sometimes map the triplet thats on the guitar like 02:26:335 (1,2) - and dont map it 02:25:720 (3) - I'd say like make this consistent cuz rn it seems kinnda random it's for intensity reasons
  2. 03:29:104 (1) - This might be considered buriai? idk not sure explained in the first mod
  3. 03:34:797 (5,6,7) - Why the stack on such a high intensity guitar sound lo l lets make it a triple instead

rank guilty all the same suick my nut

ty all! waiting for idkes response o/ nice response
Aoiyuuki-
00:53:873 (3,2) - this overlap doesn't read well; consider offsetting the stream a bit to the right
01:34:335 (3) - ctrl+g this, otherwise it completely breaks the flow of the section
01:46:950 (1,2,3,4,5) - this burst doesn't curve correctly compared to the bursts around it (it's too linear). mostly an aesthetic consistency problem; I recommend fixing it but feel free to ignore this if it was intentional
03:05:566 (7) - this overlap doesn't read well; consider moving this circle up
03:08:027 (3,2) - this overlap doesn't read well; consider moving the stream (and maybe the kicksliders too) a bit to the right
03:26:950 (2,3,4) - this overlap doesn't read well; consider moving the triple+kickslider away from the slider that's overlapping it. the direction change of the triple also doesn't read well; consider ctrl+J'ing the triple
05:05:720 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this doesn't fit at all, especially considering how you used sliders to represent this part of the song every other time. change this to sliders like the rest of the map
05:11:873 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - nice choke stream!
zigizigiefe
quick reminder: 05:13:710 - you forgot 1/6 snares over here
i love you btw
Dashyy-
fiery requested mod

diffffff:
00:12:351 (1,2,1,2) - visually these would look better as straight sliders like you did 00:08:351 (1,2,1,2) - and 00:02:351 (1,2) - . same goes for the whole section
01:15:720 (3) - tbh i think u should start 01:15:873 (1,2,3,4) - here instead, since the guitar is louder here

for the first chorus, you really need to differentiate the spacing of 1/4 and 1/2 gaps. 01:48:797 (1,2) - the 1/4 gap here for example, is bigger than 01:49:412 (1,2) - , a pattern that comes right after it, this could cause misreads easily. i would suggest you try to lower the spacing of the 1/4 gaps (something like this), or use a certain pattern to indicate a 1/4 jump (like making 1/4 jump sliders sharp or smth idk). same goes for the second chorus zzzz

02:10:335 (1,2,1,2) - what foxy said about these 1/8 sliders is still a valid point lol. the guitar in the bg doesn't even have 1/8 sounds, and there are much better ways of representing the guitar, like doing the same thing u did here 02:09:104 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
03:05:104 (5,6,7) - ik the rule's gone but it still would be better if you uncovered 6's slider end cuz rn it looks like the slider is much longer than it actually is
03:29:104 (1) - you gotta consider the fact that a lot of people dont play with sliderends on. as such, the player could easily misread this. would suggest placing the end somewhere more seeable, like so
03:32:797 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - dont get the spaced gap cuz u it wasn't that spaced 03:31:566 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - here and they're both representing the same sound
03:38:950 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - u could've done some cool things with this stream like u did the entire map, why not do it here?
03:58:643 (1,2,3,4,5) - again, why the sudden change in spacing? 03:56:181 (1,2,3,4,5) - is doing the same thing so why not just keep consistent lol

wait did u literally just copy paste and flip the first prechorus onto the second prechorus nice

other than that looks ok for the most part

for idke: you have some cool patterns and concepts, but u gotta present them better and be more consistent with them. players need to be introduced certain concepts slowly, not just thrown in there and hope that they know what they're doing. hope i helped!
Topic Starter
fieryrage

Dashyy- wrote:

fiery requested mod

diffffff:
03:05:104 (5,6,7) - ik the rule's gone but it still would be better if you uncovered 6's slider end cuz rn it looks like the slider is much longer than it actually is bro ur clicking 5 before 6 even appears on screen im pretty sure this is perfectly readable
03:29:104 (1) - you gotta consider the fact that a lot of people dont play with sliderends on. as such, the player could easily misread this. would suggest placing the end somewhere more seeable, like so have replied to this before but it's similar to other ranked sliders so there should be no issue (besides no one's gonna read the thing going the opposite fuckin way lets be real here)
03:32:797 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - dont get the spaced gap cuz u it wasn't that spaced 03:31:566 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - here and they're both representing the same sound it's to keep consistency with the first solo-ish part 1 minute in where there's cut streams everywhere, i have to at least put some zz
03:38:950 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - u could've done some cool things with this stream like u did the entire map, why not do it here? 03:39:412 (7,8,1) - i can only really do it here and that'd be kinda pointless
03:58:643 (1,2,3,4,5) - again, why the sudden change in spacing? 03:56:181 (1,2,3,4,5) - is doing the same thing so why not just keep consistent lol it's more for dramatic effect + it leads into the more intense kiai in terms of spacing

wait did u literally just copy paste and flip the first prechorus onto the second prechorus nice L

other than that looks ok for the most part
ty!
also added the other 1/6s zig mentioned

edit: oops i forgot habib also known as aoiyuuki thanks for the Ghost Post Habibers

Aoiyuuki- wrote:

01:34:335 (3) - ctrl+g this, otherwise it completely breaks the flow of the section this shouldn't be a problem I don't think :s it doesn't really break flow since you can just consider it a hold slider in any case
01:46:950 (1,2,3,4,5) - this burst doesn't curve correctly compared to the bursts around it (it's too linear). mostly an aesthetic consistency problem; I recommend fixing it but feel free to ignore this if it was intentional tbh I don't know what your point is here, it looks curved like the others to me lo l

00:53:873 (3,2) - this overlap doesn't read well; consider offsetting the stream a bit to the right
03:05:566 (7) - this overlap doesn't read well; consider moving this circle up
03:08:027 (3,2) - this overlap doesn't read well; consider moving the stream (and maybe the kicksliders too) a bit to the right these overlaps are stuff i do frequently throughout the song, so i think it should be ok readability wise

03:26:950 (2,3,4) - this overlap doesn't read well; consider moving the triple+kickslider away from the slider that's overlapping it. the direction change of the triple also doesn't read well; consider ctrl+J'ing the triple I just moved the triple up, the way it was placed was kind of ew anyway, might change it back later though
ty!

pishi also modded so posting his discord mod here for keepsake

idke

Aoiyuuki- wrote:

05:05:720 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this doesn't fit at all, especially considering how you used sliders to represent this part of the song every other time. change this to sliders like the rest of the map
it fits but isnt consistent with the rest of the map but i dont see why i need to so ill leave it as is for now
05:11:873 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - nice choke stream!
every pp farm map has a diff spike in the end and this isnt even the hardest part so

Dashyy- wrote:

diffffff:
00:12:351 (1,2,1,2) - visually these would look better as straight sliders like you did 00:08:351 (1,2,1,2) - and 00:02:351 (1,2) - . same goes for the whole section
too much of one thing is ugly and unappreciative
01:15:720 (3) - tbh i think u should start 01:15:873 (1,2,3,4) - here instead, since the guitar is louder here
completely goes against what i did there which is 8 low spaced notes and 8 high spaced notes alternating
for the first chorus, you really need to differentiate the spacing of 1/4 and 1/2 gaps. 01:48:797 (1,2) - the 1/4 gap here for example, is bigger than 01:49:412 (1,2) - , a pattern that comes right after it, this could cause misreads easily. i would suggest you try to lower the spacing of the 1/4 gaps (something like this), or use a certain pattern to indicate a 1/4 jump (like making 1/4 jump sliders sharp or smth idk). same goes for the second chorus zzzz
ok for first chorus no for second chorus because second chorus actually has spacing differentiation so
02:10:335 (1,2,1,2) - what foxy said about these 1/8 sliders is still a valid point lol. the guitar in the bg doesn't even have 1/8 sounds, and there are much better ways of representing the guitar, like doing the same thing u did here 02:09:104 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
guitar doesnt even go with 1/2 1/4 or 1/8 but i chose to represent the sound wiht 1/8 and also your example doesnt make sense because its not the same sound anyways
03:29:104 (1) - you gotta consider the fact that a lot of people dont play with sliderends on. as such, the player could easily misread this. would suggest placing the end somewhere more seeable, like so
ur example goes against what i did which is make a perfect circle and also i never misread it without sliderends so yeah plus there are much more worse culprits of this overlap in other songs that got ranked so i dont see a need to change it

fishyfat wrote:

something about big spacing at the cutstream section
ya
something about the 1/2 and 1/4 spacing
ok fuck this completely ruins that structure fuckfuckfuckfuck
thankz all xD!!!
Topic Starter
fieryrage
upda3ted
LowAccuracySS
placeholder (im literally modding after i post this lolz) nvm had to eat ill do it tommorow LOL I love when I forget to do things >_>
Feb
i tho this is mv2 as well fuck

04:05:258 (3) - offscreen in 4:3 aspect ratios
03:29:104 (1) - not offscreen, but almost. Better move it a bit down to be safe.

00:52:643 - rhythm changes here even though the whole part prioritizes the guitar with it being clickable the whole time but this doesn't have it clickable.
01:37:720 - this does sound like 1/4 to me not 1/3. Vocals also don't land on 1/3 for me.
02:09:720 (1) - this stream and 02:10:027 (1) - should be mapped the same as the 02:09:104 (1) - double tapping stream thingy, since it features similar sounds.
02:13:950 (4,1) - not sure, but this jumpstream kinda looks really huge compared to the other stream jumps.
02:18:335 (2,1) - would have liked the kind of spacing you did at the beginning, I think it might even make sense to give this more spacing than the other, since well its in the middle of the song. If you don't know what I mean with beginning: 00:42:335 (2,1) -
02:46:027 (1) - should be nc'd for consistency. For refernce look at the other part, also you follow 4 full beats as ncing.
03:05:104 (5,6,7) - to me it seems better to avoid this pattern until after the kiai were you do it quite frequently. There it just seems not fitting to the more linear cursor movement on the other objects.
03:29:104 (1) - this slider is visually confusing. It can either go upwards or downwards into the slderend, so I think it might be better to make the ending clearer. Not sure if I explained it good enough if not -> picture
04:22:950 (1) - uhm I think that's quite a lot of distance that got added compared to the other streams if we take into account that this does not sound much more intense than the streams prior.

04:23:643 (4,6) - I think you should be more consistent in this part. 6 in this case is mapped as slider, when its mapped as triplet 04:26:335 (5) - right after, so basically the rhythm is swapped here, even tho its repeating in rhythm.
04:31:258 (1) - same thing just here it is not mapped at all but 04:28:797 (1) - here it is mapped as triplet
^
this two thingys actually happen already at 00:59:566 - 01:19:258 - all those similar parts. I know its a collab and all, so I guess that can happen, but at least those guitars would be cool if they are followed consistently.

04:33:027 (8,1) - minor thing, but spacing error probably
04:56:489 (3) - missing nc for this one. Prior kiais had it.
05:05:720 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - super hard imo to predict the streamshape at this point when it never happened before even remotely close to that.

Didn't say anything about the stream parts cuz this whole song has random snappings for the main guitar.

Fine map imo good luck.
Topic Starter
fieryrage
seems like ur version was outdated cuz most of the things you listed were already fixed and updated by the time you modded, i'll go over the stuff not fixed though

Feb wrote:

00:52:643 - rhythm changes here even though the whole part prioritizes the guitar with it being clickable the whole time but this doesn't have it clickable. fixed

01:37:720 - this does sound like 1/4 to me not 1/3. Vocals also don't land on 1/3 for me. this is 1/3, it's noticeably delayed on 1/4

02:46:027 (1) - should be nc'd for consistency. For refernce look at the other part, also you follow 4 full beats as ncing. done

03:05:104 (5,6,7) - to me it seems better to avoid this pattern until after the kiai were you do it quite frequently. There it just seems not fitting to the more linear cursor movement on the other objects. it's better to introduce this pattern earlier rather than later imo

04:22:950 (1) - uhm I think that's quite a lot of distance that got added compared to the other streams if we take into account that this does not sound much more intense than the streams prior. will have to ask idke about this, but i think it's fine the way it is rn, it flows into the next section nicely

04:23:643 (4,6) - I think you should be more consistent in this part. 6 in this case is mapped as slider, when its mapped as triplet 04:26:335 (5) - right after, so basically the rhythm is swapped here, even tho its repeating in rhythm. in general i worked with hobbes to make this more consistent so hopefully it should be better across the song now

04:33:027 (8,1) - minor thing, but spacing error probably oops

04:56:489 (3) - missing nc for this one. Prior kiais had it. done

05:05:720 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - super hard imo to predict the streamshape at this point when it never happened before even remotely close to that. honestly this is probably one of the easier streams to hit considering the cutstreams lol, i think it plays fine
ty!
Feb
Damn, was thinking about goin online lol and check if its updated. Shud have done it, my bad.
Ultima Fox
v1 lol

[Legend]

I problem I noticed with this map is there are parts where the focus of the rhythm switches back and forth from vocals to instruments, and while normally this wouldn't be too much of a problem this causes some parts where prominent drum sounds are ignored to be a little weird to play. For example, 02:42:335 (1,2,3,4,5,6) when the drums are being followed 100% to 02:43:566 (1,2) and 02:47:258 (1) where these drums are pushed off to the sidelines in favor of slow vocals that mess with the pace of the map. This really only applies to parts like 01:28:489 to 01:48:181 and 02:42:335 to 03:02:027 so perhaps take a look and see if you can incorporate the vocals without drastically changing the pace like I mentioned above.

00:06:851 (2,1) - why are these so close together right after the large spacing just before
00:39:566 (2,3) - this should probably be consistent and just be a repeat slider because there is nothing really warranting this change to 2 kicks
02:09:720 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - the back and forth doubles are okay, but these are really awkward and uncomfortable to play so i strongly suggest changing them
02:11:566 (1) - why overlap like this, i kinda makes it look unnecessarily ugly
02:14:027 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this pattern is super confusing, originally i thought that 02:14:335 (1,2,3,4) was the other way around (like ctrl g or smth), so i suggest trying to make this easier to read and play
02:15:258 (1,2,1) - don't know if it's just me but these first 3 feel like they could be split up in halves because of the guitar (which is what i assume they are following)
02:25:720 (3,4) - why was the 1/4 ignored here but no where else
02:28:797 (1) - this slider isn't visible at all, separate it from the stream
02:42:335 (1,2) - this is confusing, and it's hard to tell that's a 1/4 gap in between so i suggest altering the pattern for it to be easier to read
03:09:412 (1,2,3,4) - here, 1 and 2 are 1/2 apart and 3 and 4 are 1/4 apard which can really catch the player off guard so try to make the change more obvious
03:26:950 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - this is a good example of what i explained at the beginning, the map suddenly switches from following the 1/4 drums to 1/2 which doesn't even really follow the vocals. what i would suggest is actually changing the 1/4 part here because before that a similar 1/2 ish pattern was being followed and it would make this part a lot more consistent.
03:49:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - why is this stream combo so long lol, all the other ones were like 8
04:15:104 (3,4,1) - this should be on the end of the slider i feel, because this just seems a little extreme when there really isnt a need ot be
04:50:643 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i feel like this should be emphasized a lot more than 04:51:566 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) because of how much more intense it is

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Topic Starter
fieryrage

Ultima Fox wrote:

v1 lol

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I problem I noticed with this map is there are parts where the focus of the rhythm switches back and forth from vocals to instruments, and while normally this wouldn't be too much of a problem this causes some parts where prominent drum sounds are ignored to be a little weird to play. For example, 02:42:335 (1,2,3,4,5,6) when the drums are being followed 100% to 02:43:566 (1,2) and 02:47:258 (1) where these drums are pushed off to the sidelines in favor of slow vocals that mess with the pace of the map. This really only applies to parts like 01:28:489 to 01:48:181 and 02:42:335 to 03:02:027 so perhaps take a look and see if you can incorporate the vocals without drastically changing the pace like I mentioned above. I don't find this to be a problem considering the slider ticks are mapped to the snares anyway, plus the vocals are a lot more prominent in the calmer sections instead of the chorus

02:25:720 (3,4) - why was the 1/4 ignored here but no where else hey what sup
02:28:797 (1) - this slider isn't visible at all, separate it from the stream I feel like at this difficulty this wouldn't be that big of an issue,
although I'm definitely willing to change it, I just feel like as it stands right now it'd contrast heavily with the rest of the song's mapping if I made it horizontal or something similar

03:09:412 (1,2,3,4) - here, 1 and 2 are 1/2 apart and 3 and 4 are 1/4 apard which can really catch the player off guard so try to make the change more obvious Okay!
03:26:950 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - this is a good example of what i explained at the beginning, the map suddenly switches from following the 1/4 drums to 1/2 which doesn't even really follow the vocals. what i would suggest is actually changing the 1/4 part here because before that a similar 1/2 ish pattern was being followed and it would make this part a lot more consistent. ok ur right on this one though, changed to follow vocals here
03:49:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - why is this stream combo so long lol, all the other ones were like 8 the nc pattern follows the guitar here, so even tho it's kind of out of place it does have purpose (especially considering it's just one stream pattern)
04:50:643 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i feel like this should be emphasized a lot more than 04:51:566 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) because of how much more intense it is I don't really see how this part is more intense tbh, the part that's more spaced currently feels a lot more intense lol. Even then, I like the buildup effect going into the kiai here as it is rn

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  1. 00:37:027 - , 00:38:258 - , 00:39:489 - would be cool if you stacked a circle on the blue tick of the sliderheads, it adds to a more interesting rhythm
  2. 00:39:566 (2,3) - why 1/4 sliders but previously reverses 00:37:104 (2,3) - .
  3. 00:41:950 - how about a stacked stream with hitcircles on the sliderheads since the song has picked up in intensity? it's a bit odd that you ignore the same rhythm you mapped just a second ago. suggestion also applies to this 02:17:950 -
  4. 01:04:027 (2,3,4) - could space this a bit more, atm it's not on par with the rest of the patterns like 01:06:489 (2,3,4) -
  5. 00:56:489 (1) - stack this on the sliderend of 00:55:258 (1) - maybe? it's a bit too much rn
  6. 01:08:797 - in this section you are clearly mapping the guitar but, you decide to leave this 01:10:335 - guitar beat unclickable which makes it awkward, you could try 1/4 repeats here 01:10:027 - and here 01:10:335 - . 01:10:643 (2) - this is good tho!
  7. 01:50:950 (2,4) - you should 1/4 sliders instead. the white and red ticks are a lot more intense than the blue ticks because of the vocals. o wait you did it here 01:55:873 (2,3) - nice. but oh wait you didn't do it here 02:00:797 (2,3,4,5) - . uhh but yea you should look into this inconsitency issue, i highly recommend those 1/4 sliders instead
  8. 02:13:950 (4,1) - this should have more spacing than this 02:14:258 (4,1) - kinda like this 02:14:566 (4,1) -
  9. 02:17:412 (5) - pitch changes, sharp turn tbh
  10. 02:18:335 (2,1) - the spacing between the slider and the circle is too small now. what happened to this 00:42:335 (2,1) - ? : /
  11. 02:27:258 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this pattern focuses too much in one place. it's essentialy back and forth movement, but other parts like 02:32:335 (6,1,2,3,4) - aren't so it's not a gimmick specific section, try to use more of the mapping grid
  12. 02:47:258 (1) - yes i know you're following vocals but it really isn't good imo. you can do like 02:47:258 - 1/2 slider here, triple here 02:47:566 - then 02:47:720 - 1/1 slider here. feels much better to play while still following vocals
  13. 03:14:643 (2,3) - i haven't seen this mapped with 1/2s anywhere else in the song, it's always 1/4 sliders or stream. oh and something else i noticed; 01:55:566 (1,2) - you extend the slider to 3/4 here, but you use 1/2 here 03:14:335 (1) - which is also inconsistent
  14. 03:29:104 (1) - umm, stream?
  15. 03:36:489 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this is the same sound but mapped with different rhythm not rly sure about this, should stick to 1 of them idk
  16. 04:11:258 - the drums pick up here and the rhythm changes, notice how there are kicks on every 1/2 white beat compared to the previous part, should be mapped differently, with higher density and and less reverse sliders
  17. 04:18:335 (1) - cool slider but you shouldn't do that, that's not what the song is doing, you really should map it with hitcircles and sliders as the climax of the section. (it's even a kiai section but it's a slider!!!!!) even if you're following the vocals on that slider then these 04:15:873 (1,1,1,1) - should have been 1/2 sliders too
  18. 04:55:873 (2) - reverse and sliderend should be clickable, it's the most intense part of the song. it's mapped exactly like it 5 seconds later 05:00:797 (1,2,3) - which fits better
  19. 05:12:797 (3) - double repeat on this is weird. could potentially cause a sliderbreak?
i also want to add to the long sliders discussion from above, to me they feel weird and out of place because they are inconsistent with other parts of the song and because they ignore the song's main rhythm. when vocals become the main instrument for a long slider in parts where drums go hard it should be expected that many or even all other sections do the same.

there are so many parts of the song where if you followed the vocals as the main instrument and made them sliders, honestly it would be filled with them.
for example why is this 03:29:104 (1) - a slider, which is (arguably) a more intense part than this 04:40:489 (1,2,3,4) - but this is not a slider? i don't think that the vocals is more prominent than the drums to have a whole measure length slider. i could link so many other examples where the vocal is drawn out and it's mapped normally but you get the point.

at this difficulty, i feel like the map would benefit much more with normal rhythm instead of those sliders and make it more enjoyable. good luck
Nathan
03:05:104 (5,6) - the stacking here really makes this stand out amongst the other variations of this rhythm, but there's nothing particularly special about this case over the others; either space it normally like 03:10:027 (3,4,5) - or make it more consistent

03:12:720 (2,1) - err same thing as above

04:10:950 - I feel like you used too many repeats for this section.. it's more upbeat than the previous section of the song but you mapped it in a way that's rhythmically less dense

03:37:104 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - grouping in pairs doesn't sound/feel right to me, the strong points are at 03:37:104 - and 03:37:412 - and this part of the solo doesn't feel much more intense over others anyways
actually I'd probably swap its placements with 03:37:720 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - lol
squirrelpascals
hey i'm here

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• 00:14:851 (3) - 00:15:851 (3) - dont you usually use some sort of spacing gimmick here? maybe you can ctrl+g 00:14:851 (3,4) - or add something

• 01:11:489 (4,1) - 01:11:797 (4,1) - this is a pretty mean angle for a stream jump.. I know thats like the theme of this map but it should still play pretty fluently. With that being said i would suggest moving these more to the left and upwards so that they aren't as much of a pain in the ass to hit https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/AelXjyf.png (i see that you might run out of room here, but i think considering this is more important)

• 01:14:566 (4,1) - Same here, pretty sharp change in direction. Maube move 01:14:643 (1,2,3,4) - upward

• 02:28:797 (1) - Making this more obvious that this is an overlapping slider woul make this pattern a lot less frusturating. Offset this up and to the right?

• 02:58:873 (4) - This really isnt a strong note compared to most triples. Delete?

• 03:04:489 (1,2) - WOah BrO this looke pretty overspaced. like x4 or x5 distance snap in b/t these would be optimal. fun suggestion pls use

• 03:50:027 (1) - Would suggest making this a kickslider, because it covers similar sounds with 03:50:181 (2) - and would cover this guitar note 03:50:104 -

• 04:16:950 (4) - Would suggest moving this a bit down and to the left, or increasing the spacing at 04:16:950 (4,1) - A small jump like this in the midst of all these big jumps feels offputting

• 04:21:027 (4,1) - 04:21:334 (4,1) - consider decreasing the spacing here. the players are going to keep their cursor pretty still because these streams aren't spaced much, so it will feel like a quick 1/4 jump. Plus, nothing else but drums are playing in this part, and the notes youre jumping to 04:21:104 (1) - 04:21:412 (1) - arent as strong either cuz theyre not on a snare lol. picture

• 04:29:566 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why did you stop using jumps here? After all the jump sections and the continued 1/2 emphasis on vocals, using this stream feels weird

•05:00:027 (3,4) - This is like the only time in the map that you dont use a kickslider here? Would suggest adding one

• 05:12:797 (3,1) - Even for the end part of this map, this is also pretty mean spacing, reducing to between like x4 and x5 ds b/t these notes would do it

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Topic Starter
fieryrage
What the fuck squirel ur like 10000000 hours late.

responding to mods, idke is remapping his "now this is war" part/maybe the part before it
idke
riven
01:04:027 (2,3,4) - could space this a bit more, atm it's not on par with the rest of the patterns like 01:06:489 (2,3,4) -
ok

01:08:797 - in this section you are clearly mapping the guitar but, you decide to leave this 01:10:335 - guitar beat unclickable which makes it awkward, you could try 1/4 repeats here 01:10:027 - and here 01:10:335 - . 01:10:643 (2) - this is good tho!
i hear the guitar being played with one stroke, so hence one slider, though i did add the red anchors there on purpose to try to also emphasize the rift in the middle of it

01:50:950 (2,4) - you should 1/4 sliders instead. the white and red ticks are a lot more intense than the blue ticks because of the vocals. o wait you did it here 01:55:873 (2,3) - nice. but oh wait you didn't do it here 02:00:797 (2,3,4,5) - . uhh but yea you should look into this inconsitency issue, i highly recommend those 1/4 sliders instead
meant to alternate because the kick sliders on the the lyrics are purposely there as its way louder than the other, changed the 4th part to keep consistency with the alternation between streams and kicksliders

02:13:950 (4,1) - this should have more spacing than this 02:14:258 (4,1) - kinda like this 02:14:566 (4,1) -
ctrl gd the kicksliders

02:17:412 (5) - pitch changes, sharp turn tbh
yea

02:18:335 (2,1) - the spacing between the slider and the circle is too small now. what happened to this 00:42:335 (2,1) - ? : /
fixed

02:47:258 (1) - yes i know you're following vocals but it really isn't good imo. you can do like 02:47:258 - 1/2 slider here, triple here 02:47:566 - then
02:47:720 - 1/1 slider here. feels much better to play while still following vocals
fixed said above

04:11:258 - the drums pick up here and the rhythm changes, notice how there are kicks on every 1/2 white beat compared to the previous part, should be mapped differently, with higher density and and less reverse sliders
04:18:335 (1) - cool slider but you shouldn't do that, that's not what the song is doing, you really should map it with hitcircles and sliders as the climax of the section. (it's even a kiai section but it's a slider!!!!!) even if you're following the vocals on that slider then these 04:15:873 (1,1,1,1) - should have been 1/2 sliders too
remapped entire section

04:55:873 (2) - reverse and sliderend should be clickable, it's the most intense part of the song. it's mapped exactly like it 5 seconds later 05:00:797 (1,2,3) - which fits better
yea



zukinathan
04:10:950 - I feel like you used too many repeats for this section.. it's more upbeat than the previous section of the song but you mapped it in a way that's rhythmically less dense
yea remapped to remove like every single repeat

squirrelpascal
• 00:14:851 (3) - 00:15:851 (3) - dont you usually use some sort of spacing gimmick here? maybe you can ctrl+g 00:14:851 (3,4) - or add something
changed

• 01:11:489 (4,1) - 01:11:797 (4,1) - this is a pretty mean angle for a stream jump.. I know thats like the theme of this map but it should still play pretty fluently. With that being said i would suggest moving these more to the left and upwards so that they aren't as much of a pain in the ass to hit https://i.imgur.com/AelXjyf.png (i see that you might run out of room here, but i think considering this is more important)
wot the fuc nop its hard either way


• 01:14:566 (4,1) - Same here, pretty sharp change in direction. Maube move 01:14:643 (1,2,3,4) - upward
yea moved it a bit upwards cus admittingly i actually have never even fcd this pattern before so it needs a slight nerf

• 02:58:873 (4) - This really isnt a strong note compared to most triples. Delete?
changed in previous mod

• 04:16:950 (4) - Would suggest moving this a bit down and to the left, or increasing the spacing at 04:16:950 (4,1) - A small jump like this in the midst of all these big jumps feels offputting
oh yea didnt see that fixewd

• 04:21:027 (4,1) - 04:21:334 (4,1) - consider decreasing the spacing here. the players are going to keep their cursor pretty still because these streams aren't spaced much, so it will feel like a quick 1/4 jump. Plus, nothing else but drums are playing in this part, and the notes youre jumping to 04:21:104 (1) - 04:21:412 (1) - arent as strong either cuz theyre not on a snare lol. picture
what the fuck


•05:00:027 (3,4) - This is like the only time in the map that you dont use a kickslider here? Would suggest adding one
fixed
Topic Starter
fieryrage
riv

Riven wrote:

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  1. 00:37:027 - , 00:38:258 - , 00:39:489 - would be cool if you stacked a circle on the blue tick of the sliderheads, it adds to a more interesting rhythm eeehh, would kinda make this harder to read imo if i did that, besides there's nothing really going on in the song at this point
  2. 00:39:566 (2,3) - why 1/4 sliders but previously reverses 00:37:104 (2,3) - . d
  3. 00:41:950 - how about a stacked stream with hitcircles on the sliderheads since the song has picked up in intensity? it's a bit odd that you ignore the same rhythm you mapped just a second ago. suggestion also applies to this 02:17:950 - the thing is here since the drums are a lot more potent here i'd rather just follow them exclusively, the only reason i was following the guitar originally was because there was nothing else to map there xd
  4. 00:56:489 (1) - stack this on the sliderend of 00:55:258 (1) - maybe? it's a bit too much rn reduced it differently by stacking 00:56:489 (1,1) - these two
  5. 02:27:258 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this pattern focuses too much in one place. it's essentialy back and forth movement, but other parts like 02:32:335 (6,1,2,3,4) - aren't so it's not a gimmick specific section, try to use more of the mapping grid not really sure how to fix this considering i do this kinda stuff all over the map :s i think it's fine as is
  6. 03:14:643 (2,3) - i haven't seen this mapped with 1/2s anywhere else in the song, it's always 1/4 sliders or stream. oh and something else i noticed; 01:55:566 (1,2) - you extend the slider to 3/4 here, but you use 1/2 here 03:14:335 (1) - which is also inconsistent the latter point is mostly just due to the different collab parts, but i think 1/2 fits fine here as a little break between the streams
  7. 03:29:104 (1) - umm, stream? vocal fits a lot better here imo
  8. 03:36:489 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this is the same sound but mapped with different rhythm not rly sure about this, should stick to 1 of them idk seems fine to me, the rhythm doesn't really change drastically anyways
  9. 05:12:797 (3) - double repeat on this is weird. could potentially cause a sliderbreak? seems like the blue tick note isn't really that emphasized so sure, why not

nath

Nathan wrote:

03:05:104 (5,6) - the stacking here really makes this stand out amongst the other variations of this rhythm, but there's nothing particularly special about this case over the others; either space it normally like 03:10:027 (3,4,5) - or make it more consistent

03:12:720 (2,1) - err same thing as above for these two i basically just stack everything so i don't really think it's 'special' by being stacked xd

03:37:104 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - grouping in pairs doesn't sound/feel right to me, the strong points are at 03:37:104 - and 03:37:412 - and this part of the solo doesn't feel much more intense over others anyways
actually I'd probably swap its placements with 03:37:720 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - lol i think it fits fine both ways tbh

squirrel

squirrelpascals wrote:

hey i'm here

• 02:28:797 (1) - Making this more obvious that this is an overlapping slider woul make this pattern a lot less frusturating. Offset this up and to the right? there's like no chance in hell you can break on this, the worst thing that'll happen is you get a missed sliderend for assuming it's a 1/2 gap,
and even then that probably won't happen -- i think this is good as is


• 03:04:489 (1,2) - WOah BrO this looke pretty overspaced. like x4 or x5 distance snap in b/t these would be optimal. fun suggestion pls use it's mostly spaced like this to keep the momentum from 03:04:335 (3,1) - this stuff, would be up for nerfing if that explanation doesnt float ur boat tho

• 03:50:027 (1) - Would suggest making this a kickslider, because it covers similar sounds with 03:50:181 (2) - and would cover this guitar note 03:50:104 - there's also a snare hit there too who woulda thought

• 04:29:566 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why did you stop using jumps here? After all the jump sections and the continued 1/2 emphasis on vocals, using this stream feels weird guitar has a lot more emphasis here than the vocals, im trying to imitate stuff like 02:36:489 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this earlier as well

• 05:12:797 (3,1) - Even for the end part of this map, this is also pretty mean spacing, reducing to between like x4 and x5 ds b/t these notes would do it fixed via rivens mod

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00:51:104 (3,3) - I don't really think the way you arranged these fit to the style you're mapping; they're way too gimmick for it. Instead of almost stacking the sliderend to the circles, you can move them a bit like this. Would fit a lot more and wouldn't be that inconsistent.

01:18:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I'd try spacing these a bit more, as you're changing the DS according to the song's intensity and 01:17:412 (1,2,3,4) - isn't as intense as this one but you still used the same spacing.

02:42:335 (1,2) - Transiction here might be a bit unexpected due to the streams + slider pointing to the opposite direction. Would be much better if you could move it to somewhere near x:296 y:124.

02:56:258 (5,6) - You usually don't leave 2 stacked circles like this, usually they're stacked to a slider or something like that. Consistency would improve a bit if you stack them to (4) instead of leaving them there.

03:04:489 (1,2) - Now the jump here seems a bit too big, don't you think? There's nothing really strong in the instrumental/vocal on that beat that may demand a big jump like this one. Might consider moving to x:208 y:68 so there will be still a jump but not that big.

03:08:027 (3,1,2) - These 3 won't play really well because when you hit (3) you won't really be expecting a circle to be stacked to the previous slider and even if you do, you have to go back and forth, then hit a stream that's not pointing to the same direction as the previous circle intended to point to. My suggestion to fix this would be to move (1) to x:448 y:60 and maybe unstack the stream to improve flow, but that wouldn't really be necessary. (i hope you could understand me there lmao)

03:14:335 (1) - Ctrl + G to improve the flow? There's no much reason to change the flow there :c

03:19:873 (4) - Not much of an issue but you were following these vocals with 3/4 sliders, this is the only part where you added a 3/4 with repeat.

03:50:873 (4,1) - Maybe space (1) from (4) to emphasize the strong beat and make a cool streamjump? o w o

03:54:181 - Insert a break here so this sudden stop will be as cool as the previous one!!!

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Topic Starter
fieryrage

Kuron-kun wrote:

fiery is cute no

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00:51:104 (3,3) - I don't really think the way you arranged these fit to the style you're mapping; they're way too gimmick for it. Instead of almost stacking the sliderend to the circles, you can move them a bit like this. Would fit a lot more and wouldn't be that inconsistent. I do it 02:28:720 (9,1) - throughout the map as seen here as well, so I don't really find it inconsistent considering it appears throughout the map; besides, most players are gonna be playing these as triples and 90% of the time won't get an 100 because of timing leniency with sliderends, I feel like it's fine as is

03:04:489 (1,2) - Now the jump here seems a bit too big, don't you think? There's nothing really strong in the instrumental/vocal on that beat that may demand a big jump like this one. Might consider moving to x:208 y:68 so there will be still a jump but not that big. ok some1 else pointed this out so looks like i gotta do it now

03:08:027 (3,1,2) - These 3 won't play really well because when you hit (3) you won't really be expecting a circle to be stacked to the previous slider and even if you do, you have to go back and forth, then hit a stream that's not pointing to the same direction as the previous circle intended to point to. My suggestion to fix this would be to move (1) to x:448 y:60 and maybe unstack the stream to improve flow, but that wouldn't really be necessary. (i hope you could understand me there lmao) I understand but your opinion is wrong Rofl (it flows fine considering i do that overlap all the time throughout the map, albeit to a less extreme degree i.e. 00:55:489 (2,3,1) - here and 02:40:797 (6,2) - here, don't really think it's that bad tbh)

03:14:335 (1) - Ctrl + G to improve the flow? There's no much reason to change the flow there :c don't really see an issue with this one either, flow isn't really broken that much and the downbeat has a bit more emphasis as it should imo

03:19:873 (4) - Not much of an issue but you were following these vocals with 3/4 sliders, this is the only part where you added a 3/4 with repeat. rofl i forgot to change this one L moments

03:50:873 (4,1) - Maybe space (1) from (4) to emphasize the strong beat and make a cool streamjump? o w o ehh I mean I don't do it 03:49:950 (12,1) - here or anywhere else so it'd be kinda out of place imo

03:54:181 - Insert a break here so this sudden stop will be as cool as the previous one!!! I can't because extending the pause to 03:54:489 where the guitar starts kills the break. sad!

meow
also deleted sliderslide hitsound because lol unrankable so goo dthing thats sorted
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