Hobbes2 wrote:

00:18:021 - guitars in this section can be hitsounded somehow, whistle maybe?

[Easy]

00:11:869 (5) - this ends on nothing, you can end it on 00:12:375 for vocal? the break after makes it okay
00:18:274 - could be mapped, distinct sound here i dont really too much complex rhythm in easy
00:18:442 - for this section i think you can map guitar with red tick rhythms to follow the song more. its ok like this too, but consider it. imo following 00:29:398 (1) - 00:29:398 (1) - etc. is better
00:29:398 (1) - better if you end this on 00:30:577 - and start mapping on 00:32:094 - instead. not good to start the verse on a spinner tbh
00:36:139 (3,1) - can look nicer, use more slider nodes https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8481411
00:42:881 - prefer this clickable, and if you do so nc it. if you dont do this, at least nc 2 or 3.
00:49:622 (3) - clicking on nothing here. rhythm like this instead? - imo current one will be more naturehttps://puu.sh/wyKRT/c93ae4ab49.jpg
01:18:780 - can be mapped, not sure why you skip it too much rhythm x_x
01:06:813 (4) - NC?
01:23:667 (1) - dont like this spinner, better if you map it out. just feels like you're mapping normal music to a spinner which i dont like

ok after the first kiai you copy pasted the earlier section and just rotated. please change it for variety, this isn't acceptable lol. Same for second kiai

03:03:274 (1) - end this on 03:04:285 - and start mapping from 03:05:802. Consistent with 01:01:757 (1) -

Diff is okay, but the copy paste is not acceptable for me.

[Normal]

00:18:442 - i think you should make this and 00:21:139 - clickables. Consider what you did for 00:23:836 (1) and 00:26:532 (1) - . It sounds much better like that.
01:06:308 (4) - skipped vocal on 01:06:645 - ? maybe do similar to 01:17:094 (4) -

Overall this diff is actually pretty alright, in terms of visuals and patterning and stuff. The kiai is a bit weak in terms of density overall relative to the rest of the map and could be buffed a bit, but it should be okay as is.

[Hard]

00:07:824 (1) - SV feels fast here for how calm the song is, could be lowered until 00:13:218 (1) - where its fine i want consistent with inssane
00:18:442 - one of the only unclickable guitars here this point 00:18:274 - is more storng and interesting
00:30:577 - based on rhythm you're following so far, something like this would follow the music better - but i will like to follow the drum on white linehttp://puu.sh/wyLy8/6531ea7e62.jpg
01:58:386 (1,2,3) - sudden spike in density here but the music doesnt really support it, 1/2 sliders would be better imo
02:25:184 (1,2,3,4,5) - in this measure, if you're following the instruments then both 02:25:858 - and 02:26:195 - should be clickable. Something like this would be appropriate - isnt 02:25:184 - 02:25:858 - 02:26:532 - should be a group of clickable here?http://puu.sh/wyLHn/c54fc2b533.jpg

good diff, I like it.

kinda tired so I'll stop here, good luck~

Hobbes2 wrote:

Btw preview seems messed up on the website not sure whats happening

Shad0w1and wrote:

png有9层压缩，你完全没怎么压啊。。。给你锐化了一下压了一下

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insane
00:48:274 - normal或者加addition
00:57:712 - normal或者加addition
01:01:757 - normal sampleset加soft addition更好，之前貌似也有类似的，一起改吧
02:02:937 - normal或者加addition
02:05:128 - normal或者加addition
02:09:173 - normal sampleset加soft addition更好，后略
02:18:442 -

normal
00:26:532 - 加音效
00:34:791 -
00:36:139 -
00:38:836 -
等等等等等，全部自查吧:/

ez
00:14:229 - 倾向于

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感覺不太好 其他改了
。。。感觉ez太水了算了不摸

Regraz wrote:

简单看下
[Easy]
I am a bit worried about the equivocal rhythm out of the non-existence of 1/2 gap between notes.
Try OD2 instead?

00:29:398 (1) - I do not think this spinner suits its current position. Even if it might be higher than the required minimum length of spinners in Easy, it is still extraordinarily short. Moreover there are various beats need to be mapped out but got humbly ignored because of the spinner. deleted the spinner
01:01:757 (1) - ^ changed rhythm
01:06:813 (1) - This rhythm sounds pretty weird because a strong cymbal is arranged onto a reverse point and I don't believe a nice start of a stanza deserves that. its fine imo
01:24:847 (3) - Why not replace this with a single circle and add a slider at 01:25:184 to follow the long vocal? i want slider head and tail cover with vocal
02:02:431 (3,1,2) - Consider making these three the same shape? ok

节奏有点难啊

[Hard]
00:18:274 (2) - It plays a bit weird. Try splitting this into one 1/2 slider and a circle at the long whiteline? its fine imo

[Insane]
00:40:184 (6,1) - Stack them will be great! stack了會把aim壓得有點不舒服
00:53:499 (5) - 事实上拆成1/4滑条加上一个圈感觉更好 还可以做跳突出 改了
01:01:757 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以适当放开间距 感覺現在夠開了
02:40:184 (1,2) - 感觉有点不是很好看 滑条尾巴挨得太近了 改了

smallboat wrote:

稍微摸一下

[Easy]

01:13:218 (2) - 這個slider應該要簡化一下，Normal只放成一拍呢，建議對調一下吧 改了
01:16:589 (2) - (Maybe) 尾端放紅線會比較play得順 (搭配01:17:768 (3) - 開頭的重音紅線) 感覺不太好imo
02:20:633 (2) - 同 01:13:218
02:24:004 (2) - 同 01:16:589
02:46:926 (3) - 好像忘了MC
03:07:151 (1) - 同 01:16:589

[Normal]

02:35:633 (5) - 前面有個白線鼓點是不是漏加了一個note 應該沒 原本就是想這樣的

[Insane]

01:20:296 (6,7) - (Maybe) 聽音樂感覺是要來個三連串，可以在6.7間加一個note，然後01:20:549 (8) - 去掉note看看? 聽音樂像在現有地方
02:27:712 (6,7) - 同01:20:296
03:10:858 (7,8) - 同01:20:296

1. could convert the bgs to jpg, png files are too large compared to jpg

1. comboing is kinda weird lol sometimes you use ncs like 01:08:330 - 03:04:285 - (which isn't a bad thing per se) but i think it would be better if you make them consistent
2. 00:12:881 (1,2,3,4) - distance looks kinda weird with stacking enabled, maybe space it a bit more?
3. 02:59:735 - i think a rhythm like this fits better, the clap coming later when you already clicked the slider doesn't feel too good in my opinion
4. 03:09:004 (4) - i think the shape would look cleaner if you stretch it more so that it combines with 03:08:330 (2) - visual design

Kagetsu wrote:

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