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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年12月21日 at 14:41:21

Artist: Izumi Hashima(CV.Chinatsu Akasaki)
Title: 365 Shoku Palette
Source: 冴えない彼女の育てかた♭
Tags: Saenai Heroine no Sodatekata Saekano anime Character Song kawaiwkyik
BPM: 178
Filesize: 9347kb
Play Time: 03:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.4 stars, 165 notes)
  2. Hard (3.25 stars, 491 notes)
  3. Insane (4.9 stars, 707 notes)
  4. Normal (2.21 stars, 304 notes)


Download: Izumi Hashima(CV.Chinatsu Akasaki) - 365 Shoku Palette
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rizia.exe
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StarrStyx wrote:

rizia.exe
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felt and chiwa voice actress <3

Kisses wrote:

StarrStyx wrote:

rizia.exe
rizialie
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these felt weird to me while playing xd
00:20:802 (4,5) - 00:23:499 (5,6) - 00:26:195 (5) - you map the same hype sound in different ways which is kinda weird i'd say.. second instance is the best
02:37:319 (1) - there's the same tone in head and tail, 1/2 silder+circle sounds better, unlike 02:40:184 (1) - which sounds good as 1/1
03:20:802 (1,2) - shouldnt this be slider just like 03:20:465 (2) - ? they're mapping the same so

fun
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:eyes: i like to keep 00:26:195 (5) - cuz it will be more nature here but i changed 00:20:802 (4,5) -
02:37:319 (1) - i think 1/2 1/1 both are fine
03:20:802 (1,2) - similar reason with first one

thx
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Insane

00:09:173 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这边既然whistle下的频率不低,那前面那段00:07:824 (1,2,3,4,5) - 应该也多加两个,而且00:10:353 (1) - 这个滑条中间那根大白线漏了个你前面一直加的drum-whistle,事实上我感觉这段整体音效偏乱,还是建议重新搞一搞
而且这边你整段是跟vocal的,00:07:824 (1) - 但是这个开头前面一根红线还有一个VOCAL声

00:21:139 (1,3) - 这俩换个NC?和后面00:23:836 (7,8,1,2) - 保持一致,毕竟这里没有什么读图难度,还是一致性比较重要。

00:47:600 (5) - 这滑条可以考虑做2个圈,后面节奏一下子就降下来了,这里可以适当多点click节奏。

00:55:016 (1,2) - 这俩贴这么近看起来还行,但实际没啥意义,毕竟整图不是做遮的,没有其余的类似读图点来营造出这种特色,00:54:173 (1,2) - 而且前面已经有这种1/4的间距了,就很尴尬。
02:02:431 (1,2) - ^

02:42:375 (6) - 这个根据音乐来看是不是也应该做成kick slider?

02:43:555 (4,5) - 补成3连?

03:04:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这段跟vocal没下好

03:16:420 (6,7,1,1) - 这段很莫名... 因为无论是vocal还是音乐都是从03:16:420 (6) - 就开始放缓,这样下了2个note再补2个spinner很怪,然后03:19:959 (2) - 和03:18:105 (1) - 结尾在原曲里是有一个相同的音效,你这边是不一样的,不知道是有意为之还是无意漏了,03:20:465 (2,1,3) - 包括这几个。

00:54:173 (1) - 02:01:589 (1) - 这个slider尾下的normal sampleset怪怪的,我觉得去掉比较好听。

低难度都没啥问题。

gl :)
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00:18:021 - guitars in this section can be hitsounded somehow, whistle maybe?

[Easy]

00:11:869 (5) - this ends on nothing, you can end it on 00:12:375 for vocal? the break after makes it okay
00:18:274 - could be mapped, distinct sound here
00:18:442 - for this section i think you can map guitar with red tick rhythms to follow the song more. its ok like this too, but consider it.
00:29:398 (1) - better if you end this on 00:30:577 - and start mapping on 00:32:094 - instead. not good to start the verse on a spinner tbh
00:36:139 (3,1) - can look nicer, use more slider nodes https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8481411
00:42:881 - prefer this clickable, and if you do so nc it. if you dont do this, at least nc 2 or 3.
00:49:622 (3) - clicking on nothing here. rhythm like this instead? - https://puu.sh/wyKRT/c93ae4ab49.jpg
01:18:780 - can be mapped, not sure why you skip it
01:06:813 (4) - NC?
01:23:667 (1) - dont like this spinner, better if you map it out. just feels like you're mapping normal music to a spinner which i dont like

ok after the first kiai you copy pasted the earlier section and just rotated. please change it for variety, this isn't acceptable lol. Same for second kiai

03:03:274 (1) - end this on 03:04:285 - and start mapping from 03:05:802. Consistent with 01:01:757 (1) -

Diff is okay, but the copy paste is not acceptable for me.

[Normal]

00:18:442 - i think you should make this and 00:21:139 - clickables. Consider what you did for 00:23:836 (1) and 00:26:532 (1) - . It sounds much better like that.
01:06:308 (4) - skipped vocal on 01:06:645 - ? maybe do similar to 01:17:094 (4) -

Overall this diff is actually pretty alright, in terms of visuals and patterning and stuff. The kiai is a bit weak in terms of density overall relative to the rest of the map and could be buffed a bit, but it should be okay as is.

[Hard]

00:07:824 (1) - SV feels fast here for how calm the song is, could be lowered until 00:13:218 (1) - where its fine
00:18:442 - one of the only unclickable guitars here
00:30:577 - based on rhythm you're following so far, something like this would follow the music better - http://puu.sh/wyLy8/6531ea7e62.jpg
01:58:386 (1,2,3) - sudden spike in density here but the music doesnt really support it, 1/2 sliders would be better imo
02:25:184 (1,2,3,4,5) - in this measure, if you're following the instruments then both 02:25:858 - and 02:26:195 - should be clickable. Something like this would be appropriate - http://puu.sh/wyLHn/c54fc2b533.jpg

good diff, I like it.

kinda tired so I'll stop here, good luck~
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Shouldn't "パレット" be romanized as Palette instead of Paretto?

cool map btw
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Hobbes2 wrote:

00:18:021 - guitars in this section can be hitsounded somehow, whistle maybe?

[Easy]

00:11:869 (5) - this ends on nothing, you can end it on 00:12:375 for vocal? the break after makes it okay
00:18:274 - could be mapped, distinct sound here i dont really too much complex rhythm in easy
00:18:442 - for this section i think you can map guitar with red tick rhythms to follow the song more. its ok like this too, but consider it. imo following 00:29:398 (1) - 00:29:398 (1) - etc. is better
00:29:398 (1) - better if you end this on 00:30:577 - and start mapping on 00:32:094 - instead. not good to start the verse on a spinner tbh
00:36:139 (3,1) - can look nicer, use more slider nodes https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8481411
00:42:881 - prefer this clickable, and if you do so nc it. if you dont do this, at least nc 2 or 3.
00:49:622 (3) - clicking on nothing here. rhythm like this instead? - imo current one will be more naturehttps://puu.sh/wyKRT/c93ae4ab49.jpg
01:18:780 - can be mapped, not sure why you skip it too much rhythm x_x
01:06:813 (4) - NC?
01:23:667 (1) - dont like this spinner, better if you map it out. just feels like you're mapping normal music to a spinner which i dont like

ok after the first kiai you copy pasted the earlier section and just rotated. please change it for variety, this isn't acceptable lol. Same for second kiai

03:03:274 (1) - end this on 03:04:285 - and start mapping from 03:05:802. Consistent with 01:01:757 (1) -

Diff is okay, but the copy paste is not acceptable for me.

[Normal]

00:18:442 - i think you should make this and 00:21:139 - clickables. Consider what you did for 00:23:836 (1) and 00:26:532 (1) - . It sounds much better like that.
01:06:308 (4) - skipped vocal on 01:06:645 - ? maybe do similar to 01:17:094 (4) -

Overall this diff is actually pretty alright, in terms of visuals and patterning and stuff. The kiai is a bit weak in terms of density overall relative to the rest of the map and could be buffed a bit, but it should be okay as is.

[Hard]

00:07:824 (1) - SV feels fast here for how calm the song is, could be lowered until 00:13:218 (1) - where its fine i want consistent with inssane
00:18:442 - one of the only unclickable guitars here this point 00:18:274 - is more storng and interesting
00:30:577 - based on rhythm you're following so far, something like this would follow the music better - but i will like to follow the drum on white linehttp://puu.sh/wyLy8/6531ea7e62.jpg
01:58:386 (1,2,3) - sudden spike in density here but the music doesnt really support it, 1/2 sliders would be better imo
02:25:184 (1,2,3,4,5) - in this measure, if you're following the instruments then both 02:25:858 - and 02:26:195 - should be clickable. Something like this would be appropriate - isnt 02:25:184 - 02:25:858 - 02:26:532 - should be a group of clickable here?http://puu.sh/wyLHn/c54fc2b533.jpg

good diff, I like it.

kinda tired so I'll stop here, good luck~
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chloe:
00:47:600 (5) - 这滑条可以考虑做2个圈,后面节奏一下子就降下来了,这里可以适当多点click节奏。 後面是降下來的話我這邊是想有一個地方可以讓玩家慢慢放下來
02:42:375 (6) - 这个根据音乐来看是不是也应该做成kick slider? 我覺得前面沒後面強所以不加kick
02:43:555 (4,5) - 补成3连? 有點激霸 不了

Underforest:
idk too much about romanized, i will ask some help from qat etc.

thanks for mod!
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Btw preview seems messed up on the website not sure whats happening
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Hobbes2 wrote:

Btw preview seems messed up on the website not sure whats happening
i dont really know what happen lol
problem already been a long time since first upload
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png有9层压缩,你完全没怎么压啊。。。给你锐化了一下压了一下


insane
00:48:274 - normal或者加addition
00:57:712 - normal或者加addition
01:01:757 - normal sampleset加soft addition更好,之前貌似也有类似的,一起改吧
02:02:937 - normal或者加addition
02:05:128 - normal或者加addition
02:09:173 - normal sampleset加soft addition更好,后略
02:18:442 -

normal
00:26:532 - 加音效
00:34:791 -
00:36:139 -
00:38:836 -
等等等等等,全部自查吧:/

ez
00:14:229 - 倾向于
。。。感觉ez太水了算了不摸
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简单看下
[Easy]
I am a bit worried about the equivocal rhythm out of the non-existence of 1/2 gap between notes.
Try OD2 instead?

00:29:398 (1) - I do not think this spinner suits its current position. Even if it might be higher than the required minimum length of spinners in Easy, it is still extraordinarily short. Moreover there are various beats need to be mapped out but got humbly ignored because of the spinner.
01:01:757 (1) - ^
01:06:813 (1) - This rhythm sounds pretty weird because a strong cymbal is arranged onto a reverse point and I don't believe a nice start of a stanza deserves that.
01:24:847 (3) - Why not replace this with a single circle and add a slider at 01:25:184 to follow the long vocal?
02:02:431 (3,1,2) - Consider making these three the same shape?

节奏有点难啊

[Hard]
00:18:274 (2) - It plays a bit weird. Try splitting this into one 1/2 slider and a circle at the long whiteline?

[Insane]
00:40:184 (6,1) - Stack them will be great!
00:53:499 (5) - 事实上拆成1/4滑条加上一个圈感觉更好 还可以做跳突出
01:01:757 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以适当放开间距
02:40:184 (1,2) - 感觉有点不是很好看 滑条尾巴挨得太近了
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稍微摸一下

[Easy]

01:13:218 (2) - 這個slider應該要簡化一下,Normal只放成一拍呢,建議對調一下吧
01:16:589 (2) - (Maybe) 尾端放紅線會比較play得順 (搭配01:17:768 (3) - 開頭的重音紅線)
02:20:633 (2) - 同 01:13:218
02:24:004 (2) - 同 01:16:589
02:46:926 (3) - 好像忘了MC
03:07:151 (1) - 同 01:16:589

[Normal]

02:35:633 (5) - 前面有個白線鼓點是不是漏加了一個note

[Insane]

01:20:296 (6,7) - (Maybe) 聽音樂感覺是要來個三連串,可以在6.7間加一個note,然後01:20:549 (8) - 去掉note看看?
02:27:712 (6,7) - 同01:20:296
03:10:858 (7,8) - 同01:20:296
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Shad0w1and wrote:

png有9层压缩,你完全没怎么压啊。。。给你锐化了一下压了一下


insane
00:48:274 - normal或者加addition
00:57:712 - normal或者加addition
01:01:757 - normal sampleset加soft addition更好,之前貌似也有类似的,一起改吧
02:02:937 - normal或者加addition
02:05:128 - normal或者加addition
02:09:173 - normal sampleset加soft addition更好,后略
02:18:442 -

normal
00:26:532 - 加音效
00:34:791 -
00:36:139 -
00:38:836 -
等等等等等,全部自查吧:/

ez
00:14:229 - 倾向于 感覺不太好 其他改了
。。。感觉ez太水了算了不摸

Regraz wrote:

简单看下
[Easy]
I am a bit worried about the equivocal rhythm out of the non-existence of 1/2 gap between notes.
Try OD2 instead?

00:29:398 (1) - I do not think this spinner suits its current position. Even if it might be higher than the required minimum length of spinners in Easy, it is still extraordinarily short. Moreover there are various beats need to be mapped out but got humbly ignored because of the spinner. deleted the spinner
01:01:757 (1) - ^ changed rhythm
01:06:813 (1) - This rhythm sounds pretty weird because a strong cymbal is arranged onto a reverse point and I don't believe a nice start of a stanza deserves that. its fine imo
01:24:847 (3) - Why not replace this with a single circle and add a slider at 01:25:184 to follow the long vocal? i want slider head and tail cover with vocal
02:02:431 (3,1,2) - Consider making these three the same shape? ok

节奏有点难啊

[Hard]
00:18:274 (2) - It plays a bit weird. Try splitting this into one 1/2 slider and a circle at the long whiteline? its fine imo

[Insane]
00:40:184 (6,1) - Stack them will be great! stack了會把aim壓得有點不舒服
00:53:499 (5) - 事实上拆成1/4滑条加上一个圈感觉更好 还可以做跳突出 改了
01:01:757 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以适当放开间距 感覺現在夠開了
02:40:184 (1,2) - 感觉有点不是很好看 滑条尾巴挨得太近了 改了

smallboat wrote:

稍微摸一下

[Easy]

01:13:218 (2) - 這個slider應該要簡化一下,Normal只放成一拍呢,建議對調一下吧 改了
01:16:589 (2) - (Maybe) 尾端放紅線會比較play得順 (搭配01:17:768 (3) - 開頭的重音紅線) 感覺不太好imo
02:20:633 (2) - 同 01:13:218
02:24:004 (2) - 同 01:16:589
02:46:926 (3) - 好像忘了MC
03:07:151 (1) - 同 01:16:589

[Normal]

02:35:633 (5) - 前面有個白線鼓點是不是漏加了一個note 應該沒 原本就是想這樣的

[Insane]

01:20:296 (6,7) - (Maybe) 聽音樂感覺是要來個三連串,可以在6.7間加一個note,然後01:20:549 (8) - 去掉note看看? 聽音樂像在現有地方
02:27:712 (6,7) - 同01:20:296
03:10:858 (7,8) - 同01:20:296
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No kudosu

[General]

[Insane]
00:31:420 (6,7) - 突然这么近有点不太适应 音也挺重的不如放远点
03:02:768 (4) -

[Normal]
AR5?AR5-AR8不至于太大
02:02:431 (3) - 调整一下中心锚点的位置,做成轴对称的?
02:21:982 (4,2) - 避免擦边
02:28:049 (1,3) - 这个重叠感觉不太好
02:38:499 (5,6,1) - 连着按三次,觉得有些太难了
03:16:757 (1,1) - 不建议连着放spinner 有些新手着实反应不过来

[Easy]
02:14:229 (1) - 还是感觉这个节奏可以修改一下,把1拆成一个note加一个1/1滑条,这样也好把原来折返位置上的cymbal体现出来


Hard再做难一点吧 加点1/4 到 3.5左右
call ma back
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insane的 現在擺法舒適度挺好 不太想改
hard我改到現在結構能接受到的最難了
其他改了
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Bubbled! 不好意思给忘了
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can i rank this
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