xfraczynho wrote:

Hey! Mod as requested on my queue t/579972/. Sorry for taking more long that expected since I was traveling but I hope this can help you ^^

[General]

1. 01:03:248 - Why not using this as preview point? imho, the guitar riffs at the start are the highlights of the song. Even some who don't watch anime might thought it is cool too
2. You should just use 00:00:749 - as redline and delete 00:06:463 - . Using 168 bpm on that since there's not bpm change; only snap divisor usage change. FIXED made it a fixed 168 bpm
3. I'm 90% sure this BG dimension isn't allowed for ranked. You should find for some 1920x1200 or 1366x768 that are more common maybe? FIXED Resize it to 1920x1080
4. Using lot of finishers (on almost all notes) is kinda weird. You should reserve them for a real strong sounds to don't overuse and make them more interesting at section changes. Try to rework at hitsounds :p

FIXED will recheck all hitsound effects. maybe forgot to remove some finishes on slider body/end


[Easy]

1. SliderMultiplier:0.849999999999999 0.85 (Also I suggest using 0.9 instead since it's low bpm song :p) FIXED used 0.9
2. It's a little personal but why CS 2,4 since you're using standard metadata on other stuff (HP, OD and AR). I suggest using 2 instead that's more usual FIXED made it cs 2
3. 00:08:605 (3,1) - try to avoid using these kind of overlaps, flows strange and breaks the current flow :p FIXED
4. 00:14:320 (3,4) - this follow weird aswell, maybe use the reverse at something like idk :p FIXED
5. 00:17:177 (1) - simply don't lol, it overlaps a lot and is just... ugly (sorry to say this ;;) FIXED dont worry any suggetion helps me XD
6. 00:26:462 (4) - this is giant compared to other sliders and there's even a section change (with lot of rhythm sounds) so I suggest you to change it :p FIXED made it 2 part
7. 00:29:677 (1,2) - avoid overlaps :p FIXED
8. 00:31:462 (3) - avoid short reverse sliders FIXED thought it was acceptable lol
   Well like a general comment avoid to finish on big white lines aswell since they mark a section start so if there's not any sound starting it doesn't note at all.
   I think you should rework a bit more on this diff tbh, using https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Standard_Ranking_Criteria as reference could help a lot specially at spacing, slider work and usage of reverse/circles :3 will try to fixed and rework the map if i have time. maybe this saturday

[Normal]

1. Using 1.05 as SV isn't bad but it's a little unusual. So what about using 1.1 because bpm isn't that high? i think 1.05 is good enough imo (just lazy to resnap all notes XD)
2. Using CS 3.5 on Normal is currently a little exagerated so I suggest using 3 is enough since I think you don't want to make it really hard :p FIXED
3. 00:12:177 (1,2,3) - this pattern feels really strange specially at http://puu.sh/wns7H/4a0b52b8ab.jpg. Overlapping these kind of notes with tail isn't highly recommended for normals aswell FIXED
4. 00:17:177 (1) - no NC
5. 00:17:891 (2) - NC
   Well take a relook about NC usage (try to focus them on white lines because... I've explain that xD) FIXED
6. 00:26:820 (2,3) - this is a little strange to follow, try using some circle idk
   You should add some circles through the song too, using full of sliders isn't not allowed but just... strange at all
7. 00:40:748 (6) - finish here
8. 00:46:462 (1,2,3) - don't do this, is really hard to get it on a sightread for Normal players. They're just familiarizing with reverse sliders tho 00:46:463 (1) -
   Well kind of same as Easy. Take a overall review specially at NC and some reverse sliders. Flow is kinda better here :3

[Hard]

1. Hmmm is a little strange you're mapping 00:00:749 - on this and Alice and not on Easy and Normal. I don't mean is bad, it's just about having a good spread about diffs :p. Think of it as unlocking more parts of the song as you progress diff. also note density
2. Using 1.7 as SV is a giant increase compared to Normal one. Maybe you can try to use 1.5 and let ~2 for Alice This is reasonable FIXED
3. 00:01:998 (4) - I highly recommend to don't do these kind of sliders. Rest flow and doesn't seem beauti at all D: FIXED made them circles
4. Focus on NC again!
5. Remember you can use triples here instead lot of little reverse sliders (00:08:963 (7,7) - for example) FIXED
6. 00:09:320 (1,6,2) - these sliders are fine about playability but just look a little disordered overall (specially at testplaying DT). It's your mapping style so I'll try to don't fuck it at all :p
   FIXED made them a little disordered.
7. 00:17:534 (2) - triple instead. It breaks a lot the flow while finishing above :p FIXED
8. 00:26:105 (6) - ^ FIXED
9. 00:47:177 (2,3,4,5,6) - this doesn't seem good at all, it's a little random according to how you came mapping FIXED Changed all
   Tbh I feel this better talking about flow and stuff. Try to focus on NC and some triple instead reverse usage to don't break the flow at all ^^

[Alice]

1. You will get a lot of mods here so I'll skip xD

yehp really need help on the other diffs so thanks alot

That's all for now for me :3 I hope this can help you and I'm sorry if I feel a little aggressive while commenting :c. Best of lucks! its okay and Thank you again

Nightsky wrote:

From my modding queue.

Alice

- 00:10:570 (1) - 00:21:998 (1) - 00:24:855 (7) - 00:27:712 (1) - Probably a good idea to restructurate this slider, the sliderhead is inside the slider. they are note shapes sliders, thay are difficult to "remove" the slider heads inside the slider without fcking up the shape so yea ill leave them be
- 00:19:141 (4) - Weird slider, a simple curve slider is enough. FIXED made it stack with (2)
- 00:45:927 (1) - Place this slider in the previous red tick. FIXED
- 00:40:570 (4) - NC FIXED
- 00:55:034 (10) - ^ FIXED
- 00:55:391 (1) - Remove NC FIXED
- 00:57:891 (10) - NC FIXED
- 00:58:248 (1) - Remove NC FIXED
- 01:00:748 (3) - NC FIXED
- 01:18:427 (6) - This slider breaks the flow, Crtl+J, rotate it by 60º and place it where it wasFIXED
- 01:18:962 (8) - Place this note closer to 01:18:784 (7) FIXED also changed flow to a zigzag pattern
- 01:19:141 (9) - Ctrl+G FIXED

That's pretty much it.
Good luck! Thanks!

Saika- wrote:

fck, i modded this by accident lmao but take it anyway since i already made it Thanks!

Alice

00:03:606 (5,6) - equal spacing FIXED made it a little closer to (4)
00:07:534 (3,4) - i think those should be emphasized with some spacing FIXED
00:10:391 (3,1) - ^ FIXED
00:13:962 (5) - equal spacing FIXED
00:44:498 (4,5) - ctrl+g to make this flow better FIXED also change other notes surrounding it to make flow even better
00:35:391 (1,2,3) - this jumps are sudden because of drastic different of spacing compared with other notes that surround these so maybe you could scale it down a bit FIXED scale them a little
00:48:427 (2,3,4) - ^ or maybe its because its wide angeled they are just wide angled, all those jump notes have a fix DS
00:58:248 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ FIXED not sure what you meant by here tho so i just made them a little closer
01:03:605 - preview point should be set here not 00:05:748 - i have a reason for that tho. imho, the guitar riffs at the start are the highlights of the song. Even some who don't watch anime might thought it is cool too
01:14:498 (4) - NC FIXED
01:16:998 (6) - ^ FIXED
01:17:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern is quite different from 01:06:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 01:11:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - but its sound is the same its the last pattern so i made it different
01:20:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this could be a star (make a 5 point symmetrical shape and align the notes up in the timeline and you will get a perfect star) HOLY SHIT made the map even better!
01:21:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this would have been perfect star ^

overall this map has some complex pattern imo but mostly only flows in counter-clockwise

good luck! Thanks!

Rose Melody wrote:

Hi .. Mod from Queue ..

General :

* You should respect DS in your map .. learn about it more .. to fix your errors in all diff .. and fix the blanket in this map as i mentiond below ..
* In Easy , Normal and Hard .. untick the widescreen support .. from design in song setup .. just like Alice one .. since you don't have a SB on this map ..


Easy :

1. 00:06:463 (1) - Make this slider curvy to be more beautiful like this http://i.imgur.com/lZdAKwV.png .. FIXED
2. 00:06:463 (1,2) - DS these two notes since you start this slider here 00:07:713 - .. it should be the same DS in this diff .. to be easy for the player .. FIXED
3. 00:08:605 (3,4) - How about if you changed this pattern to this .. http://i.imgur.com/zkiEtQU.png .. it will be more fun to play FIXED
4. 00:15:034 (4) - Make this slider like this http://i.imgur.com/1WtvHAu.png .. instead of make it line .. it will be more nicer .. FIXED
5. 00:17:177 (1) - I think here you should make distance between two ends .. cause it's quite hard to follow it from the start .. So , the best way to solve it is to blanket it with the next slider .. that would be great .. http://i.imgur.com/R8NoMIc.png .. FIXED
6. 00:22:891 (3,1) - Fix blanket .. just move the tail down a bit of slider no.1 .. FIXED
7. 00:26:462 (4) - I suggest here to change this shape of this slider .. doesn't have any creative or anything .. and it quite looks off .. just make a good shape of it .. and make the reverse section here 00:27:712 - it will follow the rhythm .. And add note here 00:29:320 - .. Just changed them from a recent mod post by xfrac so it should be better now
8. 00:29:677 (1,2) - Avoid stackes in this diff .. ^
9. 00:30:034 (2) - Make this slider to two 1/1 sliders .. like this http://i.imgur.com/A3LWz04.png ..^
10. 00:32:534 (5) - Same ^ just because there is really strong beats that you ignored it .. and should not be ignored .. and you will follow the drum like that .. ^
11. 00:35:391 - From this part i remapped it .. like this http://i.imgur.com/XihwhOR.png .. cause it sounds really off the way you did .. .. 00:35:748 - here is will follow the "chi" sound .. FIXED i dont get the "chi" sound that you mentioned tho XD
12. 00:41:105 (2) - This slider took a lot of beats behind it .. please make it something like this http://i.imgur.com/HqDb1oN.png .. FIXED although cant see the link tho
13. 00:43:962 (6) - NC here .. FIXED
14. 00:46:105 (9) - Again avoid stacks in Easy diff .. FIXED from last mod post
15. 00:46:462 (1) - Try another shape .. You can learn and get ideas from here -> t/37194 .. but like this it's so weird FIXED im really bad at doing slider arts like this... so im just gonna follow the blanket method on the link
16. 00:52:534 (1) - Make the reverse here 00:53:070 - and add not here 00:53:962 - to follow the vocal .. FIXED
17. 00:55:391 (1) - Same ^ .. and note too after it .. ^
18. 00:57:177 (3) - This slider reverse no need for it .. how about if you make it like this http://i.imgur.com/lnYCMXZ.png .. a circle and then a slider 1/1 .. FIXED also changed the following notes
19. 00:58:248 (1,2) - Ctrl + G .. it will follow the vocal .. FIXED
20. 01:00:748 (4,5) - No this part too hard for the beginners to play .. i suggest for you to delete slider 4 and replace it with a circle with NC .. I see FIXED
21. 01:01:998 (3) - This slider should end here 01:03:248 - and the next white line add circle .. FIXED
22. 01:03:962 (1) - You should remap this part .. you ignored soo many good beats .. and like that it looks really boring ..
23. 01:09:320 (1) - Same ^
24. 01:14:677 (1) - ^ Remapped. looks and sound better now
25. 01:26:462 (1) - you need to change this circle position .. it appears really fast beneath the previous slider .. and would be not clear .. so just change it to another position .. FIXED

Normal :

* Check Aimod on this diff please .. to make your DS consistence ..
* I can see in this diff you didn't make one DS between the notes and it's quite hard to play it for the player and it's a normal diff too .. so keep mind to make it the same .. like x0.8 is good .. i'm not going to mention the distance cause you need to fix the whole map .. I'm really sorry about that .. beside DS helps to keep your map organized .. that's why ..
* And you need to fix the blanket between the notes too ..

Made it all a fix 1.0 ds on all notes. some are not just for the case of aethetics. there are overlaps tho so idk if its okay

1. 00:06:998 (2,3) - Fix blanket .. FIXED
2. 00:15:034 (2) - This slider should ends here 00:15:927 - and add a circle on the next white line .. cause you can't just ignore the strong beat here 00:15:927 - .. FIXED
3. 00:20:034 (1,2) - Fix blanket .. FIXED
4. 00:27:355 (3) - The reverse is sound a bit off .. remove it and make the spinner start from here 00:27:712 - FIXED from a previous mod post
5. 00:36:462 (7) - Remove the reverse section of this slider .. no need for it .. FIXED
6. 00:41:105 (1) - Are you sure you are going to ignore this beat 00:41:462 - .. if not then make it like this http://i.imgur.com/8qhoVK5.png .. FIXED
7. 00:43:248 (4) - Move this slider to here 00:43:070 - to follow the vocal .. FIXED
8. 00:45:034 (5) - Make this like http://i.imgur.com/qW6Zdf6.png .. it would be more fun to play .. FIXED tho image not found/expired. tried to change to be better
9. 00:46:462 (1,2,3) - These repeating sliders look like a hard diff .. you should remap this part .. FIXED
10. 00:57:177 (4) - Remover the reverse slider and add circle here 00:57:177 - and let the slider (1/1) start from here 00:57:534 - .. FIXED
11. 01:01:820 (1) - The spinner should start here 01:01:998 - .. cause the way you put it .. it follows nothing .. FIXED
12. 01:14:320 (1) - I feel like this is not really easy to read .. for my opinion i think you should make it 1/1 slider with one reverse .. FIXED
13. 01:20:391 (1) - and 01:22:177 (3) - Please remap this part .. one slider is just boring .. and it really not necessary to put it .. so just put notes to make it more fun to play .. FIXED

Hard :

1. 00:05:213 (2,3) - Why there is a big distance between this two notes .. and i can't hear any strong beat here .. please make it like 00:04:856 (1,2) - FIXED

* I can't mod this diff .. cause there is so many errors .. just make the DS consistent and no need to make the SV high .. make it lower .. cause the whole map is just big sliders .. which its not that good in hard diff .. look at the hard diff in rank maps and you will get my point ( hopefully) .. and beside you need to fix blanket in this diff .. Tbh this diff looks like insane diff .. you need to make the maps organized and when you hear a strong beat you can increase the DS a bit to give more impact ..
There is a lot of things you need to fix it if you want to rank this map .. slightly changed the hard map from a previous mod post. sv is now lower. ds is now consistent. some flow are better

* In Alice diff .. you increased the DS really too much at the end .. make it low that suit the song ..
FIXED
Thant's all ..
Good luck Thanks!

Blan_C wrote:

Hello, NM from my queue

Alice

1. There is one very important thing you forgot: Slider velocity changes. You should make it faster in parts with higher intensity. Look: song from 00:06:463 - have a lot of heavy beats + guitar and from 00:29:498 - song is calm so slider velocity should be lower, and then we have part from 00:46:463 - which is loud again. Also you can put bigger SV on kiai part. FIXED slowed down sv from 00:29:498 to 00:46:463. also reconstruct some sliders because of change
2. 00:01:284 (2,3) - Make blanket from these - you can see how bad it is now here 00:02:088 - FIXED
3. 00:02:713 (4,5) - Same thing FIXED
4. Why 00:05:034 (1,2,3,4) - is spaced the same as 00:05:748 (1,2,3,4) - ? 00:05:748 (1,2,3,4) - This shall be more spaced than 00:05:034 (1,2,3,4) - because of heavy guitars.FIXED also reconstruct jump patterns
   00:04:141 (6,1) - Really close to each other - try placing objects with somehow bigger spacing to increase quality. FIXED
5. 00:16:284 (3,2) - to close to slider FIXED
6. 00:19:141 (4) - Shape of this slider is weird to me as well as 00:21:998 (1) - I dont know in what way it represents guitar. (its shape does not fit to song you map, but this is my personal thought) imo, It fits the theme of the anime tho.
7. 00:29:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - i kinda dont understand what are you mapping here - vocal or instruments? FIXED Vocals, my bad
8. 00:46:998 - There is vocal "wa" sound here. Its quiet but still you shall map it. End slider here or put circle FIXED placed a circle
9. 00:49:498 (2,4,7) - Avoid random overlaps like that. Mostly its not visible during play but sometimes its visible and looks ugly. FIXED Thanks for noticing that

In overall your map lacks some construction - objects lack justified placing in some aspects.
Still, not bad Good luck!

Manu028 wrote:

Modding by request ^^

[Alice]

1. 00:05:034 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this spacing breaks the flow, try reducing the spacing of 00:05:034 (1,2,3,4) - and leave 00:05:748 (1,2,3,4) - like it is now FIXED from a prev mod post
2. 00:07:713 (4,1) - these 2 sliders should be swapped, because in the other sections you used the "note" slider in the first 4/1 interval I don't get what you meant by here but i just notice that 00:07:713 should also be a "note" shaped slider like the rest of those kind/length
3. 00:21:998 (1) - it feels a lot unnatural, use a slider like 00:16:284 (3) - Keeping the "note" shaped and improved flow instead,
4. 00:24:856 (4) - i don't really enjoy this sliderart (Including ALL the single note-sliders), the circles are "ugly" to watch, but it's just my opinion. Try to make circles more "perfect" I REALLY tried alot but the current is the best that i can do...
5. 00:27:713 (1) - same as above ^^[/b]
6. 01:02:356 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern overlaps with the burst and it's not a good thing to see, try to move the 4 to another position (without killing the flow) FIXED Reconstruct jump patterns for better flow, moving 4 isn't good enough
7. 01:22:177 (4,5,6) - i think these 3 object should be spaced just a little more considering the high note taken by the singerFIXED spaced it a little and nerf the prev pattern

That's all. Hope to be helpful ^-^
It's not a bad map overall, good luck with it

Yugu wrote:

From my queue

Alice
00:08:963 (3,4,5) - I think this triplet should close to 00:08:606 (2) - and far from 00:09:320 (1) - cuz 00:09:320 - is stress FIXED
00:10:570 (1,3) - nazi overlap is not good FIXED lol'ed at the term nazi overlap XD
00:13:963 (5) - i think this flow is better FIXED i think it is too
00:20:748 (1,3) - stack? FIXED
00:29:677 (1,3) - ^ FIXED
00:32:177 (5,6) - ctrl g flow is better i think Either position, reversed or not is fine by me. these two circles also starts the "clockwise" flow of the next notes.so ill just leave it as is.
00:35:034 (5,3) - stack? FIXED
00:41:106 (1,2) - make them farther,this 1/1's ds is similar to 00:40:570 (2,3) - 1/2 Leave it as is
00:41:463 (2,3) - and make them closer FIXED
00:41:641 (3,6) - stack? should be fix now as i move the 00:41:641 (3) - slider
00:47:356 (2,4,2,2) - so chaos...... FIXED thats what im aiming for tho, but made it less chaotic
00:55:034 (1,2,3,4) - blanket? FIXED
01:01:998 (5,1,2) - ^^^^^ Not sure what you meant here, i assumed its the ds of these 3 notes. i just stack the 5 to slider 4 tail
01:05:213 (7,8) - stack? FIXED

hard
00:08:963 (7,8,9) - stack ? FIXED
00:21:998 (4,6) - nazi overlap FIXED
00:35:391 (6) - NC FIXED
00:55:570 (2,3) - nazi overlap FIXED
00:59:141 (3,1) - stack FIXED now im amaze at how you can see unstacked objects that appear stack XD
01:01:998 (1,2) - switch NC FIXED

gl! Thanks

Franklin_DeJavu wrote:

From Team Frontline Modding Queue

All diff are looking good. Just set object placement to looking better

Little modding
Hard diff:
00:05:570 (3) - change this to circle, and this 00:05:927 (4) - change to 1/1 and put at 00:05:748 - FIXED. instead, added a circle at 00:04:856, two 1/2 sliders at 00:05:034 and 00:05:391 and added the 1/1 at 00:05:748. better than what you suggest.
00:14:498 (5) - delete FIXED
00:14:320 - 1/2 slider FIXED
00:35:391 (6) - Current NC is better imo
00:37:177 (1) - remove NC ^^
00:38:248 (9) - NC FIXED
00:39:141 (1) - remove NC FIXED

01:10:927 (8) - change to 1/2 FIXED
01:11:284 - add slider, end slider at red line 01:11:641 - FIXED made it circles tho as it is better i think. Also did this at 01:04:856 and 01:16:284
01:14:498 (2) - this repeat slider change to 1/2 and add 2 circles at 01:14:856 - & 01:14:945 - FIXED
01:16:641 (6) - delete, add slider at 01:16:998 - , end slider at 01:17:356 - . and then add 2 circles at 01:16:641 - & 01:16:820 - FIXED from what i said earlier
01:17:534 (1) - so move this object near previous object FIXED rotated and flip the whole combo. still plays good

still learning at modding too xD sorry if it was bad Its okay, your mod made my map better and you can still improve!
pm me if you need more input im currently satisfied right now about your mod

Zxozmo wrote:

From my modding Queue

General

-Try to make easy, well, have lower stars, because it's sitting on normal not easy btw (easy should be 1.50* below) FIXED adjusted some ds snapping. now its 1.5*


Easy
00:00:749 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - the spacing should be different for each, most new players dont even look at the approach circle and go straight for the distance
eg.00:03:606 (1,2) - 1 beat apart, 00:04:498 (2,3) - 1and 1/2 beat apart, but same spacing FIXED

Other than that there are no other problems i can spot

Normal
00:17:891 (2,4) - this overlaps unintentionally i think, and it looks bad if it's unintentional FIXED made sliderhead 4 stack with sliderhead 2
00:38:962 (3,1) - ^ FIXED
00:40:034 (2,1) - try not to do this, new players will immediately click on this if they get a chance, most new players follow distance, not the approach circle FIXED made 1 snap farther
01:03:606 (1,2,3) - isn't this a bit too advanced for normal diff? i guess so. reworked kiai time
01:26:462 (1) - remove nc the different nc signals the end and a spinner. i have it in all diffs so nah.

Basically the kiai time looks hard and is intimidating(?) to new players, but other than this no problems at all

Hard

Nothing Wrong here

Alice

00:19:141 (4) - try to use other slider shapes instead of copy pasting the same thing (or rotate them) FIXED rotating them is enough, i spent alot of time on those slider "notes" to change it
other than that i see nothing else wrong



That's all folks~

If youre interested in giving a M4M instead of a NM

Go back to my queue and mod my map~

(Also, DT FC'ing this map was fun, until alice of course)

Electoz wrote:

Hello you requested in my queue like 48741567418 months ago so here I am lol

[Easy]

1. 00:17:891 (2,4) - Doing overlaps in Easy is like aaa not really friendly for your target audience (overlaps in Easy can be done but in a way that they're readable aka don't overlap too much) FIXED
   00:35:391 (1,2,1) - This suddenly gets tricky while nothing in the song calls for it (aka do gimmicks when the song actually does something in order to properly reflect it) FIXED learned something
2. 00:46:463 (3) - NC is supposed to be here tho FIXED
3. 01:23:606 (2,3) - Don't overlap the repeat arrow lol FIXED i thought it would be readable before
4. Overall aesthetics are kinda a mess, so lemme list some conceptual stuff:
   
   1. 00:08:606 (3,1) - So this is the only place where you broke DS for the sake of visually linking 00:08:606 (3,1) which is inconsistent with whatever you do with the rest of the map cuz you never broke DS blablabla FIXED
   2. 00:08:606 (3,1,4,2) - One thing to take note when mapping with DS is that you never force yourself into a corner of the screen without any way out, you forced 00:20:748 (1) into a small corner so now you can't get out of there unless you overlap things lol which looks aeshtetically bad. FIXED learned something again. will take note of that

You also seem to use circular movements a lot to the point where it feels so repetitive, also try to pay more attention on which way of the flow you're going and whether you're doing them for too long (in most cases with DS mapping ppl tend to go around clockwise/counter-clockwise for too long and ended up making their maps repetitive so yea
Not gonna mention other stuff for now cuz I consider what I wrote above as major stuff and you should prioritize them first
Also don't do drastic SV changes in Easy lol it's a general thumb rule

changed the sv to .7 and the first part to X0.75. also look at some parts where i can change some circular flow. circular flow is easy to read for new players i think so i used them in this diff.

[Normal]

1. 00:21:284 (3,4) - Looks bad lol, try moving 00:20:748 (2,3) - up a bit so you get more space to handle with 00:21:998 (4) . FIXED
2. 00:55:391 (1,3) - Don't do this kind of back and forth stack in lower diffs lol cuz the readability of it really sucks with low AR. FIXED
3. 01:04:498 (1,2) - woops aimod pls ohh...
4. 00:03:427 (3,1,2,3,4) - 00:49:320 (1,2,3,1,2) - etc you seem to do this kind of thing a lot where you force players to click consecutive objects while moving the cursor which is pretty hard to do in Normal lol (actually barely anyone does this kind of thing nowadays cuz aesthetics will be super hard to handle when you chain objects together in lower diffs) ,so for the solution of this would be try using less dense rhythm (aka have 1/1 rhythm gap more often) made more 1/1 rhythm gaps and used 1/2 if the song suggest so.

aaa if you want me to go on on Hard and Insane you can ask me in game and I'll mod it there, you can ask me anyways if I worded things too complicated
good luck!