As promised I really miss Jaemin..
General
General
- Korean Song, 2017, and Ulfani Rahmi should be removed from the tags as Korean song is already identified as K-pop, 2017 doesn't really have anything to do with the song other than the fact that it was released this year, but still makes no sense, and Ulfani Rahmi is your name which is already in the creator.
- 00:00:888 (1) - Slider's red anchor seems a bit too close to slider end which could lead to beginners having trouble reading such sliders, moving the red anchor to the middle of the slider would work.
- 00:04:221 (5) - Minor, but would be nice to give this a different shape as there's a weird sound here, and you tend to emphasise uncommon sounds in the song with a different slider shape instead of using a curvey slider.
- 00:03:110 - Should probably be clickable as the entire part in here have clickable downbeats, but this is a slider end which seemed rhythmically inconsistent.
- 00:14:776 (2,3) - How about moving (3) a bit to the middle of (2)'s slider shape? Would look visually better.
- 00:17:554 - I know that you want to emphasise the vocal after, but this is still from the previous part which emphasised beats mostly, so it's kinda of questionable skipping this even though you want to emphasise the vocals. How about giving this rhythm a shot?
- 00:42:276 - You seem to emphasise both vocals and beats in here.. the "woo" sound here sounds fairly strong, so this being a slider body puts me on tilt. How about making this a slider end and then put a note afterwards?
- 00:46:721 - If you fixed the previous point I just mentioned, then better do it here too for consistency.
- 00:48:665 (2) - What I said in the first point except it's a slider head.
- 01:18:665 (1,2,3) - Okay, I get that you're emphasising the rap here. But here at 01:20:054 - vocal starts here, and it was emphasised at 00:17:832 - while the two of them are the same, it's questionable how the two of them are emphasised differently (IMO the two of them should be emphasised in the same away since the two of them are the start of a new section). I'd go with this rhythm to emphasise both rap and vocals.
- 01:23:943 - The reverse here is kinda of awkward as people could not be aware that there's a low drum sound here, they could think that you're trying to emphasise a vocal. Spliting the two into 1/1 sliders would work better.
- 01:36:443 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm inconsistency here. At a previous part like this (Haechan's part to avoid confusion) the first two circles are emphasised by a slider, but these two here are two circles, so to make it easier it'd be better to make the first two circles into a 1/1 slider.
- 01:38:665 (5) - Again, at Haechan's part, the slider ends on where he ends his high note, but here you extended it.
- From this part 00:36:443 - You seem to emphasise beats more than vocals, but from this part 01:38:665 - You emphasise vocals more than beats. Could be an issue for an easy diff as there're inconsistent rhythms despite the fact that the two parts are identical, so would be better to rework on rhythm here.
- 02:11:999 (1,1) - There should at least be a gap between spinner and slider in easy diffs, 1 or 2 white ticks gaps I'd say.
- 02:20:888 (5) - The reverse here doesn't really emphasise something.. the "ya" sound doesn't even land on that blue tick, and there's a strong beat on the white tick after the reverse and it's skipped. Either just make this a 1/1 slider because like I said before, the reverse doesn't seem to emphasise anything at all.
- 02:34:221 (4) - Kinda questionable why is this a long slider while the rest of the rap parts were emphasised properly..
- 02:47:554 (1,1) - Like I said about the spinner thing, you can just remove this spinner, that IMO would be better.
- 02:52:554 (3) - Pretty much what I said about rhythm inconsistency, this part here was emphasised by a 1/1 slider and a circle, and this one is emphasised by a long slider.
- 03:16:443 (4) - Avoid clickable objects with 5% volume, especially in easy diffs.
- Some rhythm inconsistency just like I mentioned in Easy. And you should make both Easy and Normal rhythmitcally same (not exactly same, but there should at least be some similarities) as the two diffs are made by you, same goes with Hard.
- 00:00:888 (1,2) - DS issue.
- 00:14:221 (1,2) - Could aesthetically be better if you ctrl C + V (1) into (2) and then ctrl+H+J+G (2).
- 00:19:499 - Accidental clap?
- 00:21:999 (2) - Reverse doesn't really land on anything, clap is on the white tick if you wanted to emphasise that.
- 00:23:110 (3) - Slider end is clickable on Easy but this is a slider end on Normal, while I believe that this should be clickable on Normal since the clap sound sounds strong, and Easy is easier than Normal so it makes no sense that this is not clickable on Normal.
- 00:32:832 - Probably an accidental clap here.
- 00:33:665 - Same issue here.
- Well further more, there're some strong beats that end as a slider end while on Easy they're clickable objects, it's really questionable since 1. Easy is easier than Normal, yet the strong beats are clickable 2. Normal is a bit harder than Easy and the strong beats are slider ends / and since the two diffs are made by you this is a rhythm problem as there should be some consistency in rhythms.
- 00:37:832 - What I said in Easy. 00:46:721 - this too.
- 00:46:443 (2) - This one is very questionable as the slider end of this slider ends on nothing, and there's a strong clap sound on the white tick but it's emphasised as a slider body when that sound is stronger and where currently the slider end ends on nothing.
- 01:05:054 - You seem to emphasise vocals more on kiai, so why not emphasise this vocal here since it sounds quite strong.
- 01:08:665 (3,4) - Minor, but would ctrl+G (4) for a smoother flow.
- 01:24:221 (3,4) - This overlap could be a bit random as there're no such overlaps throughout the diff.
- 01:27:554 (1) - I think you should not put a reverse on the blue tick to emphasise vocals. As the rest of the vocals mainly continue on the blue tick, it'd be weird not to emphasise those but emphasise the one.
- 01:29:776 (4,5) - A very small overlap here.
- 01:47:832 (1) - Why add a spinner here when in Easy there wasn't any?
- 01:51:999 (1,2) - These look way too identical as straight sliders, people would probably read these as straight sliders and realize that there's a red anchor, so why not just remove it?
- 02:28:943 - He continues his rap from this part, so better start a slider here.
- 02:31:165 - Same.
- 02:56:443 (5,6) - Slider end and start are a bit too close from each other, and could possibly cause readablity issues, making these straight or curvey sliders would just work fine.
- 03:14:638 (2,3,4) - The sounds here were emphasised in a simpler way, why would you suddenly make it hard here?