R3 Music Box - Zen Zen Zense [CatchTheBeat] · forum

Dapulezatos

Joined March 2016

Dapulezatos 2017-06-25T04:47:08+00:00

Myle wrote:
here I am, wew, didn't think I could do req from my queue that fast :thinking:

[Skycreeper's Platter]
00:07:762 (1) - This curve suck to be honest, so just make simple curve for better catching this after hdashing to it. Here is the example for what I mean Changed with the simple curve you were talking about
00:27:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - AAA WHAT ARE THESE HITSOUNDS FOR??? Also it's blatant overmapping, suggesting removing (2) and (4) Removed hitsounds. Removed circle number (2) and (4)
if that's your first map then I'm impressed. good luck with ranking!

Thanks for mod

Skycreeper's Platter

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-Hex-

362 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-06-26T03:55:25+00:00

Myle wrote:
here I am, wew, didn't think I could do req from my queue that fast :thinking: :thinking: That was fast xD
[Salad]
00:16:626 (1,2) - Pretty ambiguous spacing. Reduce it or increase, but I think you didn't mean to place a dash here, so I think it's better to reduce the distance a little bit
00:19:353 (3,4,5) - Imo the distance doesn't deserve such high spacing. there's no high pitches, so I suggest to move (4) somewhere to ~x216
00:23:444 (2,3) - I am suggesting to be consistent with 00:21:398 (1,2,3) - and so I think it's good to move (2) right and CTRL H (3) and move it to left. Here is the pic for you for better understanding what I mean
00:25:262 (2,3) - Imo there's no high pitch sounds so this dash is necessary Did you forget to type "not necessary"? . If yes, I'm gonna keep this because (3) is high pitch sound also for consistency with 00:32:535 (2,3) -
if that's your first map then I'm impressed. good luck with ranking! . <3

Rest were fixed.
Thanks and Updated !

Unlucky_w

312 posts

Joined August 2014

Unlucky_w 2017-06-30T14:58:50+00:00

Heeeeere comes the mod as requested from queue!

Cup

00:21:398 (2,3,4,5,6) - Shift these to x:248, it's too close to (1), because the distance-time gap is big.
00:22:762 (7) - NC
00:31:853 (3) - Move closer to (2)/(4)
00:35:099 (2) - Move closer to (1), as the bpm is getting slower, 'would rather make the distance smaller (like x:320)
00:36:752 (1) - The spinner should be a little earlier.. like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8472251 (then add an extension to white tick)

Salad

00:05:489 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:06:171 (2) - This shouldn't have a dash for it, because there is no high pitch around.
00:12:762 (3) - Feel like this should not have a dash, but at least a decent distance without it, like x:384.
00:35:718 (3) - Now move this to x:264, closer to (2) this time, because bpm is getting slower. Almost same as Cup diff.

Platter

00:05:944 (1) - Remove nc and add to 00:07:080 (2) - .
00:09:353 (10,1) - This sound is similar to 00:07:535 (4,5) - , so maybe make a hdash here.
00:11:171 (1) - Anti-flow, also remove nc.
00:20:717 (6) - Weird looking slider, simple curve is enough https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8475719
00:31:853 (1) - I don't think we need hdash here because of the sound. Just a dash is enough.

Good luck

-Hex-

362 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-06-30T15:29:42+00:00

FastYoshi wrote:
Heeeeere comes the mod as requested from queue!

Cup
00:21:398 (2,3,4,5,6) - Shift these to x:248, it's too close to (1), because the distance-time gap is big Ok
00:22:762 (7) - NC Ok
00:31:853 (3) - Move closer to (2)/(4) Reduced it a bit
00:35:099 (2) - Move closer to (1), as the bpm is getting slower, 'would rather make the distance smaller (like x:320) Keep this, to give some movement also it really suits for the ending
00:36:752 (1) - The spinner should be a little earlier.. like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8472251 (then add an extension to white tick) Moved

Salad
00:05:489 (1) - Remove new combo. Damn
00:06:171 (2) - This shouldn't have a dash for it, because there is no high pitch around. I think that's okay and really suits to end the combo
00:12:762 (3) - Feel like this should not have a dash, but at least a decent distance without it, like x:384. IMO (3) is a high pitch sound, so this dash is fine.
00:35:718 (3) - Now move this to x:264, closer to (2) this time, because bpm is getting slower. Almost same as Cup diff. Reduced a bit because it's too large.

Good luck

Thanks for the Mods !

wwwww

Beatmap Nominator

103 posts

Joined May 2016

wwwww 2017-06-30T21:30:06+00:00

Here ya go bro! my first ever mod i hope it helps your out!

Cup

Alright so you updated your beat map today and that helped it out a lot! it became way better but i still have a few things to say about it
00:13:217 (3) - right here you don't need to make that a slider since there is no end beat after it so i say just make it a hit circle unless you do something like what you did with that here 00:19:353 (3) - you added a beat after that so it sticks with the rhythm and has a sound after it.
00:36:395 (1) - i also say make this spinner longer. This is not really a must but it just seems short and like it needs to be extended
00:08:217 (1,2,3) - During this whole combo i feel you could add another slider or circle to it. It doesn't make it extra difficult but it just makes it sound nicer (example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8477920 )
00:07:307 (3) - The last thing i can say is make this slider shorter so that it matches the beat to it make the slider the length to 00:07:080 (2) - here
That's all i really have this map is Great and i hope it becomes ranked but i really love how you slowed it down at the end with this combo 00:34:528 (1,2,3) - other than that's all i have to say for cup

Salad

This map is already really good so i actually don't have a lot to say about it but ill try my best to point out noticeable things
00:26:398 (1) - make this slider a little bit shorter because it doesn't match the beat (example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8478418 )
00:21:398 (1) - same thing for this one but add another circle so it stays in beat (example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8478427 )
00:36:395 (1) - once again i say make the spinner longer. its just a little short and just needs to be a little bit longer. but once again that may be just me

Skycreeper's Platter

Alright here we go!
00:00:717 (1,2,3) - i say make that a slider without the reveres arrow it doesn't fit the rhythm and since that will make a delay move the 3rd circle to make it fit (example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8478499 )
00:07:080 (2,3,4) - move 4 to where its right below 2 this looks better while your playing it (example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8478530 )
00:35:718 (4,5,6) - Move 4 and 6 closer to 5. this isn't really a problem but i feel like it just looks better that way.
00:36:395 (1) - Finally you know how i feel about the spinners just make it tad bit longer with more bananas cause the world could use more banana's

I am sorry if this diff's mod wasn't that helpful but this map is pretty good already as it is and i don't have to much to say about it.

Something i didn't point out but that you did well on was the hit sounding. I turned off music and only listened to the hit sounding and i could already tell what song it was so Great job on that! I'm excited that i was able to help you thank you for the request i was not expecting to get one so quickly. Keep in mind this is my first mod i have ever done so i'm not the most experienced but i hope this helps your map become ranked! Best of luck to you and this map becoming ranked!
-xXShockwaveXx

Mamat

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Mamat 2017-07-01T13:41:46+00:00

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Dapulezatos

317 posts

Joined March 2016

Dapulezatos 2017-07-01T16:29:21+00:00

FastYoshi wrote:
Heeeeere comes the mod as requested from queue!
Skycreeper's Platter
00:05:944 (1) - Remove nc and add to 00:07:080 (2) - . ✔ Ok
00:09:353 (10,1) - This sound is similar to 00:07:535 (4,5) - , so maybe make a hdash here. ✔ Added
00:11:171 (1) - Anti-flow, also remove nc. ✔
00:20:717 (6) - Weird looking slider, simple curve is enough https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8475719 ✔ My bad xd
00:31:853 (1) - I don't think we need hdash here because of the sound. Just a dash is enough. ✔ Sorry for that
Good luck

xXShockwaveXx wrote:
Skycreeper's Platter | Alright here we go!
00:00:717 (1,2,3) - i say make that a slider without the reveres arrow it doesn't fit the rhythm and since that will make a delay move the 3rd circle to make it fit (example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8478499 ) ✔ It sounds better with the slider
00:07:080 (2,3,4) - move 4 to where its right below 2 this looks better while your playing it (example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8478530 ) ✔ Sure
00:35:718 (4,5,6) - Move 4 and 6 closer to 5. this isn't really a problem but i feel like it just looks better that way. I'll keep this. Because I want a little dash right there before the song is end to make it a bit challenging.
00:36:395 (1) - Finally you know how i feel about the spinners just make it tad bit longer with more bananas cause the world could use more banana's ✔ Made it longer xdd
I am sorry if this diff's mod wasn't that helpful but this map is pretty good already as it is and i don't have to much to say about it.

Both Mods were applied. Thank you ^^

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-Hex-

362 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-07-04T06:47:55+00:00

xXShockwaveXx wrote:
Here ya go bro! my first ever mod i hope it helps your out!
Cup
Alright so you updated your beat map today and that helped it out a lot! it became way better but i still have a few things to say about it
00:13:217 (3) - right here you don't need to make that a slider since there is no end beat after it so i say just make it a hit circle unless you do something like what you did with that here 00:19:353 (3) - you added a beat after that so it sticks with the rhythm and has a sound after it. I put slider on 00:13:217 (3) - to following the faded sound, I think that's okay also 00:19:353 (3) - on here is different rhythm .
00:36:395 (1) - i also say make this spinner longer. This is not really a must but it just seems short and like it needs to be extended Extended
00:08:217 (1,2,3) - During this whole combo i feel you could add another slider or circle to it. It doesn't make it extra difficult but it just makes it sound nicer (example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8477920 ) Good. It was little bit empty on that part.
00:07:307 (3) - The last thing i can say is make this slider shorter so that it matches the beat to it make the slider the length to 00:07:080 (2) - here Same answer like 00:13:217 (3) -
That's all i really have this map is Great and i hope it becomes ranked but i really love how you slowed it down at the end with this combo 00:34:528 (1,2,3) - other than that's all i have to say for cup
Salad
This map is already really good so i actually don't have a lot to say about it but ill try my best to point out noticeable things
00:26:398 (1) - make this slider a little bit shorter because it doesn't match the beat (example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8478418 ) Made it short
00:21:398 (1) - same thing for this one but add another circle so it stays in beat (example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8478427 ) Seems weird to place 3 circles, so I keep this
00:36:395 (1) - once again i say make the spinner longer. its just a little short and just needs to be a little bit longer. but once again that may be just me Extended

Something i didn't point out but that you did well on was the hit sounding. I turned off music and only listened to the hit sounding and i could already tell what song it was so Great job on that! I'm excited that i was able to help you thank you for the request i was not expecting to get one so quickly. Keep in mind this is my first mod i have ever done so i'm not the most experienced but i hope this helps your map become ranked! Best of luck to you and this map becoming ranked!
-xXShockwaveXx

Thanks for the mod . You did a great job (:
Updated ! . We're ready to go !!

Last edited by -Hex- 2017-07-05T07:11:55+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

ZX123456

57 posts

Joined September 2010

ZX123456 2017-07-04T19:05:20+00:00

hello
my english is not good so you may need google translation

　
hope to help you

cup

00:16:626 (2) - change the end of the slider to 00:17:307 - it sounds better
00:20:944 (5) - there seems to be no sound here. maybe you can delete 00:20:489 (4,5) - ,and add some object at 00:20:717 - and 00:21:171 -

salad

00:06:171 (4) - it sounds strange here,try to delete this note or add a note at 00:06:626 -
00:20:489 (5) - elongate the slider to 00:21:171 -
00:26:398 (1) - Shorten the slider to 00:26:626 -

Skycreeper's Platter

i think this diff seems too hard for the beginner maybe
00:13:217 (3,4) - delete 00:13:217 (3) - and move the starting point of 00:13:444 (4) - to 00:13:217 -
00:20:489 (5,6) - similar to the previous one
00:28:444 - 00:34:250 - the two green lines seem to have no effect? if they are not used, delete them

-Hex-

362 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-07-05T07:10:11+00:00

ZX123456 wrote:
hello
my english is not good so you may need google translation Me too xD
hope to help you

cup
00:16:626 (2) - change the end of the slider to 00:17:307 - it sounds better Keep this
00:20:944 (5) - there seems to be no sound here. maybe you can delete 00:20:489 (4,5) - ,and add some object at 00:20:717 - and 00:21:171 - Added and adjusted a bit.
salad
00:06:171 (4) - it sounds strange here,try to delete this note or add a note at 00:06:626 - Added a circle
00:20:489 (5) - elongate the slider to 00:21:171 - No
00:26:398 (1) - Shorten the slider to 00:26:626 - Because too much players asked to shorten this slider, so I shortened it.

Thanks for the mods !

Dapulezatos

317 posts

Joined March 2016

Dapulezatos 2017-07-06T16:04:18+00:00

ZX123456 wrote:
hello
my english is not good so you may need google translation 　
hope to help you

Skycreeper's Platter
i think this diff seems too hard for the beginner maybe
00:13:217 (3,4) - delete 00:13:217 (3) - and move the starting point of 00:13:444 (4) - to 00:13:217 - I'm not gonna delete this. But, I changed it to easier pattern
00:20:489 (5,6) - similar to the previous one Same
00:28:444 - 00:34:250 - the two green lines seem to have no effect? if they are not used, delete them Sure

Thanks for the Mod. I changed some pattern to make it easier to play

Skycreeper's Platter

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-Hex-

362 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-07-09T06:02:22+00:00

Updated !

Sanyi

236 posts

Joined November 2015

Sanyi 2017-07-13T12:53:44+00:00

Modding this because I kinda offered it to you in #ctb xD

kudosu only when the mod was helpful!

Cup

00:06:853 (1,2,3) - The two changes in direction from 1-2 and 2-3 are pretty hard for a beginner and this pattern doesn't really match the difficulty of the other patterns that you used either. I'd consider moving 00:07:080 (2) - to x:24 to make the pattern easier.
00:10:035 (1) - the flow of that slider into the next two notes is not that good for a Cup diff. I'd use ctrl+h and ctrl+g as well as moving it to x:296 to create a better flow while keeping the distances from before.
00:21:398 (1,2,3,4,5) - Tbh I think a slider with more simple movement matches the rest of the map much better. Maybe something like this. If you want to have more variety you can also do something like this

Salad

00:00:717 (2,3) - The distance is a bit confusing since it looks like it is walkable (and it is walkable) but it isn't that easy to walk that distance. Not so experienced players might fail here because they don't know if they should dash or not. I'd consider to reduce the distance to a 1,35x distance to make it clearly walkable. Same goes for 00:15:262 (2,3) -
00:05:489 (3,4) - 4 is a pretty weak sound, I think a dash doesn't matches the song here.
00:10:035 (1) - I would suggest a slider shape which leads to more movement because of the frequent sounds here (you also did that later in your map). The same goes for 00:21:398 (1) - and 00:22:762 (1) -
00:25:944 (3,1) - The 1 is hard to catch for new players after dashing to the 3. I'd make a lower distance here (like 1,35x). The same goes for 00:33:243 (3,4) -

Skycreeper's Platter

General thing: You used sometimes a change in direction after a hyperdash. To avoid "antiflow" (everyone defines flow and antiflow differently, so some might consider your current patterns as antiflow), I'd reduce the distance after a hyperdash to an easy-walkable distance. A good example where you already did that is 00:15:035 (2,3,4) - the distance from 3 to 4 is already low enough. Spots where you should take a look at are:

00:18:217 (1,2,3) -
00:22:080 (3,4,1) - 4 to 1 is definetly too high here!
00:28:671 (2,3,4) -
00:30:035 (5,6,1) -
00:32:989 (4,5,1) -

Other Thing:
00:10:944 (5) - move to x:328 for consistency (then you've got the same distance between 00:10:262 (2,3) - and 00:10:717 (4,5) - )

I think the mapset has a good chance to get ranked, so keep up the good work!

-Hex-

362 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-07-14T01:40:47+00:00

Sanyi wrote:
Modding this because I kinda offered it to you in #ctb xD

kudosu only when the mod was helpful!

Cup
00:06:853 (1,2,3) - The two changes in direction from 1-2 and 2-3 are pretty hard for a beginner and this pattern doesn't really match the difficulty of the other patterns that you used either. I'd consider moving 00:07:080 (2) - to x:24 to make the pattern easier. Ok
00:10:035 (1) - the flow of that slider into the next two notes is not that good for a Cup diff. I'd use ctrl+h and ctrl+g as well as moving it to x:296 to create a better flow while keeping the distances from before. I think that's okay to give a variety
00:21:398 (1,2,3,4,5) - Tbh I think a slider with more simple movement matches the rest of the map much better. Maybe something like this. If you want to have more variety you can also do something like this I think circles are fits for that so keep this.

Salad
00:00:717 (2,3) - The distance is a bit confusing since it looks like it is walkable (and it is walkable) but it isn't that easy to walk that distance. Not so experienced players might fail here because they don't know if they should dash or not. I'd consider to reduce the distance to a 1,35x distance to make it clearly walkable. Same goes for 00:15:262 (2,3) - It's not that confusing, since new salad players will dash that pattern and it's not that hard to pass that pattern (even new salad players can pass that pattern on first try) so I keep this
00:05:489 (3,4) - 4 is a pretty weak sound, I think a dash doesn't matches the song here.Okay, since modders keep talking to reduce the distance so it's fine.
00:10:035 (1) - I would suggest a slider shape which leads to more movement because of the frequent sounds here (you also did that later in your map). The same goes for 00:21:398 (1) - and 00:22:762 (1) - Did that for the first two, but not for 00:22:762 (1) -
00:25:944 (3,1) - The 1 is hard to catch for new players after dashing to the 3. I'd make a lower distance here (like 1,35x). The same goes for 00:33:243 (3,4) - Reduced a bit but not that much.

I think the mapset has a good chance to get ranked, so keep up the good work! <3

Thanks for the Mod !

Dapulezatos

317 posts

Joined March 2016

Dapulezatos 2017-07-14T17:52:48+00:00

Sanyi wrote:
Modding this because I kinda offered it to you in #ctb xD

kudosu only when the mod was helpful!

Skycreeper's Platter
General thing: You used sometimes a change in direction after a hyperdash. To avoid "antiflow" (everyone defines flow and antiflow differently, so some might consider your current patterns as antiflow), I'd reduce the distance after a hyperdash to an easy-walkable distance. A good example where you already did that is 00:15:035 (2,3,4) - the distance from 3 to 4 is already low enough. Spots where you should take a look at are:
00:18:217 (1,2,3) -
00:22:080 (3,4,1) - 4 to 1 is definetly too high here!
00:28:671 (2,3,4) -
00:30:035 (5,6,1) -
00:32:989 (4,5,1) -

Other Thing:
00:10:944 (5) - move to x:328 for consistency (then you've got the same distance between 00:10:262 (2,3) - and 00:10:717 (4,5) - )

I think the mapset has a good chance to get ranked, so keep up the good work!

Since there were many mods talking about my platter that I've put many "Antiflow" patterns. So I decided to remap it. Anyway thanks for the mod. Much appreciated

Skycreeper's Platter

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-Hex-

362 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-07-15T08:10:51+00:00

Updated !

/me Summon BN.

Jemzuu

Beatmap Nominator

600 posts

Joined February 2016

Jemzuu 2017-07-16T11:21:53+00:00

yoo im from #ctb hehe just wanted to help this map get ranked so imma try modding it uwu here it goes ;w;

Cup

00:10:035 (1,2,3) - i would ctrl g these notes if i were u, cus 00:11:626 (3) - will have a covered note next to 00:12:762 (2) - so aesthetically, this would look better imo.
00:14:580 (1) - fix overlap
00:16:171 (1) - stack this to 00:15:262 (2) - ?
00:21:853 (3,4) - a ctrl g would fit here imo
00:22:307 (5) - move this to x:224
00:28:444 (1) - ctrl g?
00:35:718 (3) - maybe adjust this slider to the left a bit above 00:35:718 (3) -

Salad

00:35:718 (3) - u could increase the spacing of this a bit try x:120
00:06:626 (5) - fix overlap like what u did on 00:06:853 (1,3) -
00:09:353 (3) - move this slider a bit like what u did on 00:10:717 (2,3) -
00:16:171 (4) - stack this to 00:15:262 (2) - ? or just adjust it a bit
00:30:035 (1) - ctrl g?
00:31:171 (3) - ^
00:35:718 (3) - move to x:112 like on cup diff

hope my mod helps!

As for platter, i didn't really find anything. really great diff gj sky
i know this will be ranked just believe~! <3
here take my star ^^

Dapulezatos

317 posts

Joined March 2016

Dapulezatos 2017-07-16T18:03:46+00:00

AJamez wrote:
As for platter, i didn't really find anything. really great diff gj sky
i know this will be ranked just believe~! <3
here take my star ^^

Woahh, Really? Thanks a lot <3

-Hex-

362 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-07-17T07:39:24+00:00

AJamez

AJamez wrote:
yoo im from #ctb hehe just wanted to help this map get ranked so imma try modding it uwu here it goes ;w; UwU

Cup
00:10:035 (1,2,3) - i would ctrl g these notes if i were u, cus 00:11:626 (3) - will have a covered note next to 00:12:762 (2) - so aesthetically, this would look better imo. Yes it looks aesthetic, but I want to give variety for this diff so I think it's fine.
00:14:580 (1) - fix overlap That's intentional.
00:16:171 (1) - stack this to 00:15:262 (2) - ? Reduced a bit
00:21:853 (3,4) - a ctrl g would fit here imo I think no :/
00:22:307 (5) - move this to x:224 ^
00:28:444 (1) - ctrl g? ^
00:35:718 (3) - maybe adjust this slider to the left a bit above 00:35:718 (3) - Okay
Salad
00:35:718 (3) - u could increase the spacing of this a bit try x:120 x:136
00:06:626 (5) - fix overlap like what u did on 00:06:853 (1,3) - That's intentional
00:09:353 (3) - move this slider a bit like what u did on 00:10:717 (2,3) - Damn your eyes is too good xD
00:16:171 (4) - stack this to 00:15:262 (2) - ? or just adjust it a bit Leave this, cuz I want more movement
00:30:035 (1) - ctrl g? If I do that, my diff become easy then :/
00:31:171 (3) - ^ ^
00:35:718 (3) - move to x:112 like on cup diff Already did that

hope my mod helps!

As for platter, i didn't really find anything. really great diff gj sky
i know this will be ranked just believe~! <3
here take my star <3

Thanks for the mod and star <3

Kimitakari

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Kimitakari 2017-07-19T10:05:07+00:00

From my Modding Queue help i suck modding lower diffs

Cup

00:35:718 (3) - You can make a simple triple

Skycreeper's Platter

00:05:489 (5) - Make a horizontal slider and move it to x:504
00:16:171 (4) - x:104? A little buff

Honestly for me this map looks ready for ranking. No kudosu please because I have no other thoughts of something change, well, you know. Good luck with ranking!

-Hex-

362 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-07-19T10:37:54+00:00

Nelly wrote:
From my Modding Queue help i suck modding lower diffs Sorry ;w;

Cup
00:35:718 (3) - You can make a simple triple Sure, but with different pattern.
Honestly for me this map looks ready for ranking. No kudosu please because I have no other thoughts of something change, well, you know. Good luck with ranking!

Thanks for the Mod Nelly !

Dapulezatos

317 posts

Joined March 2016

Dapulezatos 2017-07-20T02:48:06+00:00

Nelly wrote:
From my Modding Queue help i suck modding lower diffs

Skycreeper's Platter
00:05:489 (5) - Make a horizontal slider and move it to x:504
00:16:171 (4) - x:104? A little buff
Honestly for me this map looks ready for ranking. No kudosu please because I have no other thoughts of something change, well, you know. Good luck with ranking!

All applied. Thanks

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Poii

1,438 posts

Joined February 2016

Poii 2017-07-21T10:45:44+00:00

GL

Last edited by Poii 2017-07-21T10:52:55+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

-Hex-

362 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-07-21T10:51:23+00:00

PoPoii wrote:
GL

~~Oh damn. Why you edited that post ?~~
~~Gonna ask someone to deny that kudosu.~~

Smh.

PoPoii wrote:
gk usah dikudos juga sih, cuma kerikil

Walaupun kerikil tapi itu fatal. Hadeh, lupa ane cek.

Last edited by -Hex- 2017-07-21T10:55:24+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Poii

1,438 posts

Joined February 2016

Poii 2017-07-21T10:53:16+00:00

-Hex- wrote:
PoPoii wrote:
GL
~~Oh damn. Why you edited that post ?~~
Gonna ask someone to deny that kudosu.

kepencet xxDD

gk usah dikudos juga sih, cuma kerikil

salchow

508 posts

Joined February 2017

salchow 2017-07-23T18:53:36+00:00

Cup

Pretty much Flawless

Salad

00:16:626 (1,2) - I dont think you should have this pattern, becouse it doesn't repeat it self any where in the map. 00:02:080 (1,2,3,4) you could use this pattern, becouse the part sounds kinda similar.

00:21:398 (1,2,3) - I would peffer if you (ctrl + H) it

Skycrepper's platter

00:04:580 (3) - Would be better if you replaced it with a horizontal slider instead.

00:10:035 (1) - flip it horozontaly.

00:11:626 (1) - This is to hard to catch.

00:14:580 (1) - You could move this x:364 cause it's also hard to catch.

-Hex-

362 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-07-24T07:07:20+00:00

salchow wrote:
Cup
Pretty much Flawless <3

Salad
00:16:626 (1,2) - I dont think you should have this pattern, becouse it doesn't repeat it self any where in the map. 00:02:080 (1,2,3,4) you could use this pattern, becouse the part sounds kinda similar. Yup, but I want to give variety on that notes. I think that's fine

00:21:398 (1,2,3) - I would peffer if you (ctrl + H) it Didn't Ctrl+H it but, I reduced the distance to make it easier

Thanks for the mod and Star <3

Dapulezatos

317 posts

Joined March 2016

Dapulezatos 2017-07-29T08:23:07+00:00

salchow wrote:
Skycrepper's platter
00:04:580 (3) - Would be better if you replaced it with a horizontal slider instead.

00:10:035 (1) - flip it horozontaly.

00:11:626 (1) - This is to hard to catch.

00:14:580 (1) - You could move this x:364 cause it's also hard to catch.

All Applied. Phew. Sry late reply xdd

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-Hex-

362 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-07-29T08:30:02+00:00

Updated ! ~

MBomb

MBomb 2017-08-12T08:18:38+00:00

Really sorry for taking so long, had no motivation for anything recently, but I'm hopefully back now!

[General]

Really not sure of the point of that last timing point? It's not in the ranked set and doesn't add anything to the song in my opinion, think it's better to just remove it.
Maybe move preview point to 00:00:035 - ? It just seems really odd to not have it snapped to that note. Not unrankable or anything, just feels and sounds slightly better to me.

[Cup]

00:00:717 (1) - I think the note where the tick is in this slider is quite prominent and is strange to be ignored under a slider to me. Maybe do a 1/1 repeat slider instead?
00:02:535 (3) - Hmm, I think a 3/2 slider would be nice here instead, to aim to follow the main rhythm of the music box in this difficulty. Maybe also move it a bit more to the left, like x:88, I feel the note is stronger than 2, and so deserves slightly more distancing.
00:04:353 (1,2,3) - Maybe move this section a bit to the left, to get 1 a bit more emphasis, and then give 2 slightly less as 1 is definitely a stronger note than 2, yet 2 has higher distance right now. Try 1 on x:64, and then 2 on x:336 and 3 on x:296.
00:10:035 (1) - Not sure about this uncomfortable type of flow here with the song. I think it'd be a lot neater to just ctrl+H and move it to x:296.
00:13:217 (3) - Maybe use a slightly lower distance to this, it's one of the highest distances in the map right now and really not that strong of a note compared to some others. Try Ctrl+G and then move it to x:288 maybe?
00:16:626 (2,3) - For consistency with the earlier timeline, maybe do a circle followed by a 3/2 slider here?
00:19:353 (3,4) - Timeline is very strange here considering previous rhythms you've followed. A timeline like this fits the rest of the map better.
00:21:398 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, this type of timeline is a bit inconsistent with what you did earlier, try something similar to 00:06:853 (1,2,3) - , or change that to be similar to this.
00:22:762 (1) - Very inconsistent with previous timelines, and just feels kinda boring to play here, I would recommend a more interesting timeline, maybe similar to what you did earlier.
00:24:580 (2) - And again with this.
00:31:853 (3) - Also with this, it just seems very strange that the ending of the song, which should be more intense, is instead just long sliders which don't follow much.

[Salad]

00:01:171 (3) - Since it's after the first dash in the map, maybe make movement slightly easier to recover from? x:192 would be nice.
00:04:353 (2) - This type of slider doesn't really suit the song very well here, and is actually simpler than the timeline you used in the cup. Try using two 1/2 sliders, like you did in the cup, I think it fits well here. Whilst changing this, I'd also recommend starting the pattern at x:400, to ensure the player knows to dash here.
00:08:217 (1) - Distancing to this feels a little awkward as it is now. Try moving it to x:376 and then using a shape like this.
00:10:944 (3,1,2) - 1 here is definitely one of the strongest notes in the song, yet right now you have a very weak movement to it, when it definitely deserves a dash. Try Ctrl+H on 3 and moving it to x:336, and then move 1 to x:64 and 2 to x:128.
00:12:762 (3) - This really isn't a strong note at all, I don't understand why there's a dash to this. Maybe move it a bit to the left, try something like x:312.
00:14:580 (1,2,3,4,1) - Hmm, distancing to 00:14:580 (1) - is very strong here, for a note which really doesn't deserve a dash. I found a good fix, but it requires a bit of rearanging. move 00:14:580 (1) - to x:344, 2 to x:128, 3 to x:368, 4 to x:176, and then move the start of 00:16:626 (1) - to x:424.
00:18:898 (2) - Very slight reduction to x:72 would play nicer in my eyes.
00:20:489 (5) - Just about possible without dashing to a degree where I feel it could get confusing for a player. Maybe increase very slightly to x:456, avoiding it going off screen with a shape like this?
00:21:398 (1,2,3) - Hmm, I think the slider shape here plays weird with antiflow, so maybe it'd be better to just ctrl+H and move back to x:232? Feels a bit more natural with your other patterns.
00:23:671 (3) - Would be nice to have a tiny bit more distance to this, feels a bit uncomfortable with so little distance considering the sound is stronger than 2. Try x:288.
00:26:398 (1) - Current distance to this is very difficult after the dash for a salad player. Try x:280 on it instead, should be a lot more comfortable for a lower skill level player.
00:28:444 (1) - Distancing to this right now could be too strong for a non-dash for a salad player, reducing to like x:152 would be nice. Moving 2 to x:496 would be nice after that, and then maybe ctrl+G 00:30:035 (1) - and move it to x:320?
00:31:171 (3) - Try x:72 on this to ensure that a salad player knows to dash to it.
00:33:735 (4) - I would reduce this a bit to like x:240, kinda uncomfortable after the dash right now.

[Platter]

00:02:080 (5,6) - Not sure about this type of timeline here, doesn't really feel very nice to me. Maybe try timeline like this?
00:04:580 (3) - Since the first HDash in the map just happened, I think it'd be best to keep normal flow after, to get the player used to the mechanic. Try ctrl+H and moving it to x:32?
00:09:580 (4) - Current movement to this feels quite uncomfortable in my eyes, I think that a dash to the right would feel nicer to play here, and would avoid the pattern feeling too repetitive. Try x:448.
00:17:307 (6) - A bit of a strong dash, especially considering it's followed by another strong dash in the opposite direction. x:96 would feel a little more comfortable.
00:21:398 (1) - Hmm, this movement right now currently requires a weird slowdown, followed by a speedup into the slider, when the movement through the slider should be the slowdown to follow better flow. Try moving 1 to x:192 to fix this?
00:27:080 (1) - Pretty weak sound overall, don't think it's really fitting of a dash, try x:264 on this instead?
00:29:580 (4) - HDash here for consistency would be nice, try x:80?
00:31:853 (1,2) - Maybe Ctrl+H this section and move it to x:280, to make a HDash to the next note for consistency.
00:33:973 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hmm, I don't think this slowdown section really calls for much dashes, other than to 7, which you actually don't have one in right now. I think a nice pattern would be 2 on x:184, 3 on x:464, 4 on x:200, 5 on x:496, 6 on x:408 and 7 on x:256.

Alright, done!

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-08-12T10:15:07+00:00

mbomb requested help
aaa need to check everything I say bc some will be redundant with mbomb's mod

General
Remove sliderslide.wav lol, it's unused in CtB
00:36:395 (1) - Silence this spinner end

Platter
Can I suggest to change NC so that you always NC on a large white tick? Some patterns are longer than others or are inconsistent between sections. Doing that makes it really easy to quickly fix, and you already do it in some sections.

Other NC stuff

don't worry these are really easy to do

00:02:080 (5) - Add
00:03:671 (1) - Remove
00:04:353 (2) - Add (This combo is 12 objects long so there's a lot of fruit on plate, doing this reduces.)
00:14:580 (1) - Remove
00:15:262 (2) - Add
00:16:626 (5) - Add
00:18:217 (1) - remove
00:18:898 (2) - add
00:35:718 (5) - add

00:03:671 (1) - This is mapping the sound in middle of the slider, but 00:00:035 (1) - doesn't. Suggest to use slider to circle pattern so you can map that sound. (for reference, vocal syllables are identical "kimi no/wo", but it's music box so lol)
00:14:580 (1) - ^
00:02:080 (6) - Same thing, main melody is mapped 90% of the time so doesn't make sense not to map it here. Use same pattern as before
00:08:217 (1,2) - Reduce distances here so it's a little more walkable.
00:09:580 (4) - Not a requirement for normal dashes, but moving this to x16 means youre less likely to crash into the wall when catching.
00:13:217 (4,1) - imo doesn't need a dash but your choice
00:27:080 (1) - remove dash here
00:31:853 (1) - If you ctrl-g this + move the next couple patterns left, it will increase distance from 00:31:398 (4) - . Flows better as stacking 1/1 directly on top of each other is uncommon.
00:33:735 (1,2) - Compare to 00:26:398 (5) - , this one has a lot more movement. Reduce spacing between these

Salad
Tick rate 2 would probably work well, check with MBomb on that first.
00:06:171 (4) - Using a slider here might be better. Circles are slightly stronger than sliders for melody, so using a slider on background noises can be better here.
00:07:080 (2,3) - Rhythm choice would be better if ctrl-g. Using sliders to map strong sounds on the tail reduces emphasis. You could probably make the pattern work after removing 00:06:171 (4) -
Then again imo just remove it, it's not really mapped elsewhere. eg. 00:13:217 (4) - 00:20:489 (5) -
00:20:035 (4,5) - Same thing mbomb mentioned. Just to help fix, if you rotate 00:19:353 (3) - 90 degrees + move 4 left, you have a bit more space to work with while fixing
00:21:398 (1,2,3) - Timeline a little inconsistent with 00:23:444 (2,3) - , second one is a bit denser. Change a bit to be similar
00:30:035 (1) - 00:31:853 (1) - timeline inconsistencies again,
00:35:718 (3) - Rotate this by 70-80 degrees for nice and calm ending, same on cup

aaaaa so many redundant things had to remove

Cup
00:10:035 (4) - NC
00:06:853 (1) - https://puu.sh/x89eI/a948f6bc80.png use this pattern, you normally prioritise music when it changes pitch, larger change is unmapped here
Alternately, could do something like 00:08:898 (2,3) - since they are the same pattern
00:10:035 (4) - Stronger note is on white tick, suggesting to shorten to 2/1 to map it
00:13:217 (3) - There's no sound on the slider tail, extend or shorten it by 1/2
00:34:528 (1,2) - Reduce distance here, not that strong a note.

-Hex-

362 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-08-12T11:28:35+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
Really sorry for taking so long, had no motivation for anything recently, but I'm hopefully back now! Welcome back \o/

[General]

Really not sure of the point of that last timing point? It's not in the ranked set and doesn't add anything to the song in my opinion, think it's better to just remove it. // In the ranked set, the map has timing point on 00:36:038 - this timeline. Correct me If I'm wrong

My map
Ranked set
Maybe move preview point to 00:00:035 - ? It just seems really odd to not have it snapped to that note. Not unrankable or anything, just feels and sounds slightly better to me. // I think it's fine to leave this as it's match for preview time

[Cup]

00:00:717 (1) - I think the note where the tick is in this slider is quite prominent and is strange to be ignored under a slider to me. Maybe do a 1/1 repeat slider instead? // Yup, changed to 1/1 repeat slider.
00:02:535 (3) - Hmm, I think a 3/2 slider would be nice here instead, to aim to follow the main rhythm of the music box in this difficulty. Maybe also move it a bit more to the left, like x:88, I feel the note is stronger than 2, and so deserves slightly more distancing. // Fair enough. The sound ends on 3/2 tick. Also moved (3) to x : 88 for better emphasize.
00:04:353 (1,2,3) - Maybe move this section a bit to the left, to get 1 a bit more emphasis, and then give 2 slightly less as 1 is definitely a stronger note than 2, yet 2 has higher distance right now. Try 1 on x:64, and then 2 on x:336 and 3 on x:296. // Did that for (1) but I moved (2) to x:344 and (3) to x:304 because I think that's good.
00:10:035 (1) - Not sure about this uncomfortable type of flow here with the song. I think it'd be a lot neater to just ctrl+H and move it to x:296. // Okay since modders keep asking to change this. I flipped it and moved (2) to the left.
00:13:217 (3) - Maybe use a slightly lower distance to this, it's one of the highest distances in the map right now and really not that strong of a note compared to some others. Try Ctrl+G and then move it to x:288 maybe? Moved to x:296 it sounds better for me.
00:16:626 (2,3) - For consistency with the earlier timeline, maybe do a circle followed by a 3/2 slider here? Okay
00:19:353 (3,4) - Timeline is very strange here considering previous rhythms you've followed. A timeline like this fits the rest of the map better. Changed to that timeline and added a circle on 00:20:717 - to give emphasize on the white tick.
00:21:398 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, this type of timeline is a bit inconsistent with what you did earlier, try something similar to 00:06:853 (1,2,3) - , or change that to be similar to this. Okay. Changed for consistency
00:22:762 (1) - Very inconsistent with previous timelines, and just feels kinda boring to play here, I would recommend a more interesting timeline, maybe similar to what you did earlier. Remapped
00:24:580 (2) - And again with this. ^
00:31:853 (3) - Also with this, it just seems very strange that the ending of the song, which should be more intense, is instead just long sliders which don't follow much. ^

Sinnoh wrote:
mbomb requested help
aaa need to check everything I say bc some will be redundant with mbomb's mod

General
Remove sliderslide.wav lol, it's unused in CtB Oh damn.
00:36:395 (1) - Silence this spinner end I hope I made it correct.

Cup
00:10:035 (4) - NC Already did that.
00:06:853 (1) - https://puu.sh/x89eI/a948f6bc80.png use this pattern, you normally prioritise music when it changes pitch, larger change is unmapped here
Alternately, could do something like 00:08:898 (2,3) - since they are the same pattern I think it sounds better with my current placement. Keep this
00:10:035 (4) - Stronger note is on white tick, suggesting to shorten to 2/1 to map it I think sound starts on 00:10:035 - as I don't want to leave that important sound.
00:13:217 (3) - There's no sound on the slider tail, extend or shorten it by 1/2 Yeah, there is no sound on that slider tail. Make it shorter.
00:34:528 (1,2) - Reduce distance here, not that strong a note. Okay.

Thanks guys for your mods . That was really helpful (Although I'm not really sure about my change).
Updated Cup for now and will apply mods for Salad tomorrow. I will add HS to the re-mapped part tommorow.

Last edited by -Hex- 2017-08-12T13:06:25+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Dapulezatos

317 posts

Joined March 2016

Dapulezatos 2017-08-12T12:39:03+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
Really sorry for taking so long, had no motivation for anything recently, but I'm hopefully back now!

[Platter]

00:02:080 (5,6) - Not sure about this type of timeline here, doesn't really feel very nice to me. Maybe try timeline like this?
00:04:580 (3) - Since the first HDash in the map just happened, I think it'd be best to keep normal flow after, to get the player used to the mechanic. Try ctrl+H and moving it to x:32?
00:09:580 (4) - Current movement to this feels quite uncomfortable in my eyes, I think that a dash to the right would feel nicer to play here, and would avoid the pattern feeling too repetitive. Try x:448.
00:17:307 (6) - A bit of a strong dash, especially considering it's followed by another strong dash in the opposite direction. x:96 would feel a little more comfortable.
00:21:398 (1) - Hmm, this movement right now currently requires a weird slowdown, followed by a speedup into the slider, when the movement through the slider should be the slowdown to follow better flow. Try moving 1 to x:192 to fix this?
00:27:080 (1) - Pretty weak sound overall, don't think it's really fitting of a dash, try x:264 on this instead?
00:29:580 (4) - HDash here for consistency would be nice, try x:80?
00:31:853 (1,2) - Maybe Ctrl+H this section and move it to x:280, to make a HDash to the next note for consistency.
00:33:973 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hmm, I don't think this slowdown section really calls for much dashes, other than to 7, which you actually don't have one in right now. I think a nice pattern would be 2 on x:184, 3 on x:464, 4 on x:200, 5 on x:496, 6 on x:408 and 7 on x:256.

Alright, done!

All Applied. Thank you <3

Sinnoh wrote:
mbomb requested help
aaa need to check everything I say bc some will be redundant with mbomb's mod

Platter
Can I suggest to change NC so that you always NC on a large white tick? Some patterns are longer than others or are inconsistent between sections. Doing that makes it really easy to quickly fix, and you already do it in some sections. All Applied owo
Other NC stuff
don't worry these are really easy to do

00:02:080 (5) - Add
00:03:671 (1) - Remove
00:04:353 (2) - Add (This combo is 12 objects long so there's a lot of fruit on plate, doing this reduces.)
00:14:580 (1) - Remove
00:15:262 (2) - Add
00:16:626 (5) - Add
00:18:217 (1) - remove
00:18:898 (2) - add
00:35:718 (5) - add
00:03:671 (1) - This is mapping the sound in middle of the slider, but 00:00:035 (1) - doesn't. Suggest to use slider to circle pattern so you can map that sound. (for reference, vocal syllables are identical "kimi no/wo", but it's music box so lol) Throw the old slider. Replace with the reversed slider
00:14:580 (1) - ^ ^
00:02:080 (6) - Same thing, main melody is mapped 90% of the time so doesn't make sense not to map it here. Use same pattern as before I changed this to Mbomb's Mod. Sorry for late response on thread :/
00:08:217 (1,2) - Reduce distances here so it's a little more walkable. Pushed (2) to the left
00:09:580 (4) - Not a requirement for normal dashes, but moving this to x16 means youre less likely to crash into the wall when catching. *Buldozer coming. Jsszzzz
00:13:217 (4,1) - imo doesn't need a dash but your choice You can catch it by walking now
00:27:080 (1) - remove dash here Changed it already compared to Mbomb's Mod
00:31:853 (1) - If you ctrl-g this + move the next couple patterns left, it will increase distance from 00:31:398 (4) - . Flows better as stacking 1/1 directly on top of each other is uncommon. Walking is fine there Imo. I'll keep this :/
00:33:735 (1,2) - Compare to 00:26:398 (5) - , this one has a lot more movement. Reduce spacing between these He's already fixed it wohoo

Thanks for the mods. Uwu i love you guys <3

Skycreeper's Platter

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[General]
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PreviewTime: 0
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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Title:Zen Zen Zense
TitleUnicode:前前前世
Artist:R3 Music Box
ArtistUnicode:R3 Music Box
Creator:-Hex-
Version:Skycreeper's Platter
Source:君の名は。
Tags:kimi no na wa ha radwimps your name cover skycreeper
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[Difficulty]
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-Hex-

362 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-08-13T11:08:32+00:00

Let's continue this.

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
[Salad]

00:01:171 (3) - Since it's after the first dash in the map, maybe make movement slightly easier to recover from? x:192 would be nice. Moved to x:176 as 192 little bit closer in my opinion.
00:04:353 (2) - This type of slider doesn't really suit the song very well here, and is actually simpler than the timeline you used in the cup. Try using two 1/2 sliders, like you did in the cup, I think it fits well here. Whilst changing this, I'd also recommend starting the pattern at x:400, to ensure the player knows to dash here. Changed with my pattern.
00:08:217 (1) - Distancing to this feels a little awkward as it is now. Try moving it to x:376 and then using a shape like this. Changed and moved to x : 384
00:10:944 (3,1,2) - 1 here is definitely one of the strongest notes in the song, yet right now you have a very weak movement to it, when it definitely deserves a dash. Try Ctrl+H on 3 and moving it to x:336, and then move 1 to x:64 and 2 to x:128. Okay. Changed to that position.
00:12:762 (3) - This really isn't a strong note at all, I don't understand why there's a dash to this. Maybe move it a bit to the left, try something like x:312. Okay.
00:14:580 (1,2,3,4,1) - Hmm, distancing to 00:14:580 (1) - is very strong here, for a note which really doesn't deserve a dash. I found a good fix, but it requires a bit of rearanging. move 00:14:580 (1) - to x:344, 2 to x:128, 3 to x:368, 4 to x:176, and then move the start of 00:16:626 (1) - to x:424. Changed to that position.
00:18:898 (2) - Very slight reduction to x:72 would play nicer in my eyes. Moved to x: 80 to keep it consistent
00:20:489 (5) - Just about possible without dashing to a degree where I feel it could get confusing for a player. Maybe increase very slightly to x:456, avoiding it going off screen with a shape like this? Moved to x:440 as I don't want to hit the wall.
00:21:398 (1,2,3) - Hmm, I think the slider shape here plays weird with antiflow, so maybe it'd be better to just ctrl+H and move back to x:232? Feels a bit more natural with your other patterns. Okay
00:23:671 (3) - Would be nice to have a tiny bit more distance to this, feels a bit uncomfortable with so little distance considering the sound is stronger than 2. Try x:288. Doesn't give big difference in my opinion because the pattern is still walkable. I will try x : 280
00:26:398 (1) - Current distance to this is very difficult after the dash for a salad player. Try x:280 on it instead, should be a lot more comfortable for a lower skill level player. Moved to x:296 as I want to give challenge part on that pattern.
00:28:444 (1) - Distancing to this right now could be too strong for a non-dash for a salad player, reducing to like x:152 would be nice. Moving 2 to x:496 would be nice after that, and then maybe ctrl+G 00:30:035 (1) - and move it to x:320? Did for (1) But not for (2) as It's too far from (1) where new salad player will be confused to dash. Also for 00:30:035 (1) - place that note on the same place with previous note isn't a good idea I think. I will keep this
00:31:171 (3) - Try x:72 on this to ensure that a salad player knows to dash to it. Moved to x:112 to keep it consistent with 00:28:444 (1,2) -
00:33:735 (4) - I would reduce this a bit to like x:240, kinda uncomfortable after the dash right now. Moved to x:248 to make it consistent with 00:25:944 (3,1) -

Sinnoh wrote:
Salad
Tick rate 2 would probably work well, check with MBomb on that first. I will discuss about this.
00:06:171 (4) - Using a slider here might be better. Circles are slightly stronger than sliders for melody, so using a slider on background noises can be better here. I'm little bit confused on this as on here 00:06:626 - there is a sound here. I will think again about this to find the best solution.
00:07:080 (2,3) - Rhythm choice would be better if ctrl-g. Using sliders to map strong sounds on the tail reduces emphasis. You could probably make the pattern work after removing 00:06:171 (4) - For me it will be better to keep this timeline, as it's good to end that timeline with repeat slider
Then again imo just remove it, it's not really mapped elsewhere. eg. 00:13:217 (4) - 00:20:489 (5) - There is a sound on that tick. Ignore that sound make this map weird, I will keep this and also you can hear sound on that
00:20:035 (4,5) - Same thing mbomb mentioned. Just to help fix, if you rotate 00:19:353 (3) - 90 degrees + move 4 left, you have a bit more space to work with while fixing Fixed with moved to x:440 and then changed the slider's shape.
00:21:398 (1,2,3) - Timeline a little inconsistent with 00:23:444 (2,3) - , second one is a bit denser. Change a bit to be similar I disagree here even the timeline a little consistent it still plays well and don't ruin the flow of the map. Also it's get little bit boring if the pattern same thorough the map.
00:30:035 (1) - 00:31:853 (1) - timeline inconsistencies again, Both of them are different I think, also I want to make simple movement on that timeline
00:35:718 (3) - Rotate this by 70-80 degrees for nice and calm ending, same on cup Make it same like Cup.

aaaaa so many redundant things had to remove What ?

It's finish . If you have any comment, you can post on here as I'm not really sure with my change.
Thanks guys.

Absolute Zero

595 posts

Joined August 2014

Absolute Zero 2017-08-21T16:19:18+00:00

00:34:528 (1,2,3,4,5) - Timing points here should be really, really soft. All I can hear are the hitsounds, which is not good.

[Cup]
Still needs some fine-tuning. I’ll go through what I think needs work, and give a few examples.

Rhythm
You follow the melody precisely in weird places, so it sounds like the beats themselves are a little unstable while playing. Sometimes, you omit strange notes, like this:
00:06:171 - I would add a hitcircle here. You’ve followed the note on 00:05:944 (3), which isn’t as strong as this one.
Other times, you cover notes:
00:10:035 (1) - This slider covers a lot of music notes that you’ve hit before. For example, 00:10:26, 00:10:489, and 00:10:717 are all very clear beats.
Sometimes you sacrifice the main beat for a weaker beat, like at the slider at
00:16:626 (2) - Masking 00:17:080 with the slider makes both a weird tick and a strange sound at the end of the slider.
Finally, there are sections where I think you shouldn’t map every note, like at
00:24:580 (1,2,3) - This is a little dense for a cup. I would make this more 1/1 slider.

Placement is fine, but I'd strongly reconsider your rhythm choices for now.

[Salad]
In my personal preference, it would have been nice to also follow some of the base rhythms, but seeing that it's already decently dense, I wouldn't change most of following the melody.
00:08:217 (1) - Timeline would look better like below in terms of rhythm.

Ticker is on 00:08:217

00:10:035 (1) - I think this timeline would look better with a pattern like such that follows the music.

Ticker is on 00:10:376

00:20:035 (4,5) - Unnecessary dash here. I think the music doesn't support it--lower distancing.
00:25:262 (2) - This is probably better represented as two 1/2 sliders instead.
00:27:080 (2) - I think you can lower the spacing here at least a tiny bit--they're very soft beats and constant movement isn't justified (I think).
00:29:353 (2) - I would flip this slider, since it's a little challenging to play, especially for a salad player.

[Skycreeper's Platter]
00:02:535 (2,3) - Flip (2) around its head to make the dash more manageable--right now it's a strong dash from antiflow.
00:05:944 (5) - Personal preference: why not curve this more? The straight slider you've had is a little awkward to play right now.
00:12:080 (2,3) - I would have this be a lower distance than 00:11:626 (1,2).
00:23:444 (3) - Could you flip (3) around its head? Antiflow's a bit hard to play.
00:27:535 (2,3) - Woah, lower distance! Pretty questionable dash here.
00:28:444 (1,2) - Make this a reverse 1/2 slider instead. Not that much pitch difference.
00:29:353 (3) - I don't really think the music calls for a hyper here.

Still could use some work in my eyes.

Dapulezatos

317 posts

Joined March 2016

Dapulezatos 2017-08-21T16:44:06+00:00

Absolute Zero wrote:
[Skycreeper's Platter]
00:02:535 (2,3) - Flip (2) around its head to make the dash more manageable--right now it's a strong dash from antiflow.
00:05:944 (5) - Personal preference: why not curve this more? The straight slider you've had is a little awkward to play right now.
00:12:080 (2,3) - I would have this be a lower distance than 00:11:626 (1,2).
00:23:444 (3) - Could you flip (3) around its head? Antiflow's a bit hard to play.
00:27:535 (2,3) - Woah, lower distance! Pretty questionable dash here.
00:28:444 (1,2) - Make this a reverse 1/2 slider instead. Not that much pitch difference.
00:29:353 (3) - I don't really think the music calls for a hyper here.

Still could use some work in my eyes.

Thank you. That was good >w<

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-Hex-

362 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-08-22T09:12:32+00:00

Absolute Zero wrote:
00:34:528 (1,2,3,4,5) - Timing points here should be really, really soft. All I can hear are the hitsounds, which is not good. Lowered

[Cup]
Still needs some fine-tuning. I’ll go through what I think needs work, and give a few examples.

Rhythm
You follow the melody precisely in weird places, so it sounds like the beats themselves are a little unstable while playing. Sometimes, you omit strange notes, like this:
00:06:171 - I would add a hitcircle here. You’ve followed the note on 00:05:944 (3), which isn’t as strong as this one.
Other times, you cover notes: Added
00:10:035 (1) - This slider covers a lot of music notes that you’ve hit before. For example, 00:10:26, 00:10:489, and 00:10:717 are all very clear beats. Changed
Sometimes you sacrifice the main beat for a weaker beat, like at the slider at
00:16:626 (2) - Masking 00:17:080 with the slider makes both a weird tick and a strange sound at the end of the slider. Okay, changed
Finally, there are sections where I think you shouldn’t map every note, like at
00:24:580 (1,2,3) - This is a little dense for a cup. I would make this more 1/1 slider. I disagree here, even though It's Cup. Better to map the strong beat like this one to make it sounds good as you said earlier also it's a simple movement so it's not really hard to catch. I will keep this.

Placement is fine, but I'd strongly reconsider your rhythm choices for now.

[Salad]
In my personal preference, it would have been nice to also follow some of the base rhythms, but seeing that it's already decently dense, I wouldn't change most of following the melody.
00:08:217 (1) - Timeline would look better like below in terms of rhythm. Changed
Ticker is on 00:08:217
00:10:035 (1) - I think this timeline would look better with a pattern like such that follows the music. Okay
Ticker is on 00:10:376

00:20:035 (4,5) - Unnecessary dash here. I think the music doesn't support it--lower distancing. I think it's okay as the previous note has weak sound compared with those notes. It deserves to get big spacing.
00:25:262 (2) - This is probably better represented as two 1/2 sliders instead. It sounds weird for me
00:27:080 (2) - I think you can lower the spacing here at least a tiny bit--they're very soft beats and constant movement isn't justified (I think). Moved 2 grids closer.
00:29:353 (2) - I would flip this slider, since it's a little challenging to play, especially for a salad player. Didn't flip it but I moved 2 grids closer and then tilt the slider a bit to nerf that pattern.

Thank you AZ for the mod !

Sanyi

236 posts

Joined November 2015

Sanyi 2017-08-28T11:00:58+00:00

no kudosu

General:

The guidline says that the diffs should all end at the same spot (the spinner on Skycreeper's Platter ends a bit later than on Cup and Salad). Even though it is because of a gd I think having the same ending spot for every diff is better

Cup:

00:35:718 (3,4,5) - is currently a 1/4 pattern which is breaking the guideline. Making it a slider instead would fix that
00:36:395 (1) - according to the rc you need to have atleast 1/2 bar between the end of the previous pattern and the start of the spinner. Currently it is 1/4 (blame the low bpm but a rule is a rule). You can put the start of the spinner to 00:36:752 -

-Hex-

362 posts

Joined June 2016

Topic Starter

-Hex- 2017-08-29T10:11:50+00:00

Sanyi wrote:
no kudosu

General:
The guidline says that the diffs should all end at the same spot (the spinner on Skycreeper's Platter ends a bit later than on Cup and Salad). Even though it is because of a gd I think having the same ending spot for every diff is better // Make it same.
Cup:
00:35:718 (3,4,5) - is currently a 1/4 pattern which is breaking the guideline. Making it a slider instead would fix that It's only simple movement and even it's 1/4 pattern, it should be easy to catch.
00:36:395 (1) - according to the rc you need to have atleast 1/2 bar between the end of the previous pattern and the start of the spinner. Currently it is 1/4 (blame the low bpm but a rule is a rule). You can put the start of the spinner to 00:36:752 - Well, there is a gap between those notes and spinner so players won't get confused with the spinner

Thanks again Sanyi \o/

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JBHyperion 2017-09-02T13:35:06+00:00

You asked my opinion on this a few days ago and I was just looking for stuff to mod so here's a thing I guess

General

Nothing to report

Cup

00:10:035 (1,2,3,4) - Minor suggestion, but I feel these would look nicer if the sliders were slanted slightly. The repetition of vertical sliders creates a stop/start movement which goes against the calm, flowing nature of the music imo
00:26:398 (4,1,2) - Spacing is a little high compared to what you had before this point, which might catch some players out since the music isn't particularly strong. (1) at x-272 or so would be a bit more comfortable

Salad

00:07:307 (3,1) - Would be a good idea to reduce this walk distance a tiny bit, in order to account for the direction changes at (3). If players go too far to the left on (3)'s tail, it can be very ambiguous whether dash is needed or not to reach (1) which could result in misses
00:10:944 (3,1) - Making (1) a curved slider (vertical at the start, curving to the right) would make the antiflow on this dash just a bit more lenient. At the moment it's quite easy for a new player to overshoot and miss a few droplets
00:20:035 (4,5) - Could be increased a little to make the dash more clear, something like 2.2x DS would be nice
00:21:398 (1) - Can be curved more for prettier slider droplet formation and better flow, looks a bit squashed at the moment
00:28:444 (1,2) - 00:30:717 (2,3) - These could also be increased a little for more clear dash and to help build emphasis towards the end of the song

Platter

00:07:307 (2,3) - Could be increased a little for clearer dash, easy to overshoot as it is right now. 00:06:853 (1,2) - could probably be moved to the right slightly to make room
00:12:080 (2,3) - Making this a horizontal slider with antiflow emphasises the increased intensity and pitch change. Perhaps try something like this?
00:28:444 (1,2) - Low distance here looks a bit weird and creates a flowstop in play which you didn't use anywhere else. Ctrl+H 00:29:353 (2,3) - and moving to x-176 maintains spacing and flow

Really nice set, these were mostly just some picky style suggestions but I hope they helped regardless.

Good luck! (:

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